lovhin456 wrote:

Hello

Song's Info:
- Source: It isn't "Vocaloid" it is the composer of the song, maybe you have seen the other ranked vocaloid maps, they have the composer at source
- Tags: Remove "Nico nico douga" also you have to put together "vocaloid" and "2" so it is "vocaloid2" and add "vocaloid"

General:
- Just a suggestion, try these colors ? They fit better imo

Combo1 : 225,28,33 
Combo2 : 111,131,227 
Combo3 : 89,208,104 
Combo4 : 235,92,160

Star's Easy:
- 00:04:830 >> New combo
- 01:09:630 (3,4) >> Stacks may be hard to play for novice players so consider unstacking these
- 02:01:830 >> Add finish
- 02:09:630 >> New combo
- 02:12:030 (1,2)(3,4)(5,6) >> Stacks may be hard for novice players, consider unstacking
- 02:20:430 >> New combo
- 02:21:630 >> End the spinner at 02:23:430 also make it decrease its volume gradually use the soft sample at the end with volume 10%
- 02:26:430 >> Finish at start
- 02:28:830 >> New combo
- 02:54:830 >> ^
- 02:42:030 >> ^
- 02:43:230 (1,2) >> Consider unstacking for previous reasons mentioned
- 02:48:030 >> New combo
- 02:50:430 (1,3,4) >> Finish to (1,3) and (4)s end, default soft finish is really good in these
- 03:07:230 >> Finish at start
- 03:12:630 (2,3,4,5) >> These sould have soft sample set instead of normal set, also replace the claps with whistles
- 03:14:430 >> New combo

Normal:
- 00:15:630 >> Umm, I think that mapping these in the middle of what a perfect place for a break is doesn't make much sense, consider deleting these 3
- 00:22:830 (4,5) >> Spacing ?
- 00:25:530 (3,4) >> ^
- 00:26:730 >> Here I guess is the opposite, because you have already started mapping and well it doesn't make much sense to leave this tiny part without mapping right ? Try mapping it
- 00:38:430 (1,2,3) >> Spacing ?
- 00:49:230 (3,4) >> Spacing ?
- 01:01:830 >> Finish
- 01:30:630 >> End the spinner and also gradually lower the volume until 10% soft sample
- 01:58:830 (2,3) >> Spacing ?
- 02:15:330 >> It really feels empty without a note here
- 02:21:330 >> Add a note ?
- 02:23:430 >> End the spinner here
- 02:26:430 >> Finish at start
- 03:12:630 ~ 03:15:330 >> Soft hitsound set fits more in this part, also replace the claps and finishes with whistles

Shura:
- Oh ... those speed ups are too much seriously ... this is supposed to be a diff between normal and Ashura and in my opinion it shouldn't have any speed ups, is already hard to play song that use 1/3 or 1/6 snap divisors
- 00:15:630 >> Again doesn't make much sense to place notes in the middle of a perfect spot for a break
- 00:26:730 >> Map this please
- 00:42:330 (5,6) >> Ok, the spacing is obviously not the same as (4,5) so please fix
- 01:30:630 >> End the spinner here and silence the end
- 02:23:430 >> ^
- 03:12:230 ~ 03:15:530 >> Use soft hitsound set it suits better, also replace any finish or clap with whistles
- 03:15:530 >> New combo

Ashura:
- AR -1 ?
- 00:52:230 >> Remove clap from end
- 01:30:930 >> Remove finish and silence the end
- 01:44:430 >> New combo ?
- 01:46:530 >> ^
- 01:49:230 >> ^
- 01:58:830 >> ^
- 02:03:330 >> ^
- 02:05:130 >> ^
- 02:08:130 >> ^
- 02:17:730 >> ^
- 02:21:030 >> ^
- 02:30:630 >> ^
- 02:33:930 >> ^
- 02:44:430 >> ^
- 03:06:030 >> ^
- 03:08:430 >> ^
- 03:10:830 >> ^
- 03:13:230 >> ^
- 03:15:630 >> ^

* Needs more more work