I LOVE IT!
You don't need do it, there's only my suggesion.

[Normal]
In some parts, like 00:18:397~00:28:754 too many claps.
00:12:326 (return) - Add clap.
00:13:755 (return) - Add clap.
00:16:076 (3) - Add another return.
01:03:040 (x) - Add note.
01:03:397 (x) - Add note.

[Hard]
Too many finish hitsounds.


[Insane]
00:10:540 (6) - Left 4 grid. (On lvl 4 grid)

Starred.

After looking at Hard, I didn't think it could get much harder~
Anyways

Insane~

1. Redo both breaks. (They'll lengthen some ways)
2. 01:24:11 (4,5,6) - Move a tick up.

Unreachable~
Wow lol

A lot of tips and other stars can make the ranking of this map a reachable target...
Let's see what I can do...

Easy
[00:17:139] this slider is too long! end it here and try something else...
[00:24:156] clap here and remove the next clap
[00:25:870] finish or whistle on 2nd and 4th red beats; same thing on the next slider's end!
[00:28:269] this slider looks nonsense... slice it into 2 beats (clap on 1st, nothing or whistle on the 2nd)
[00:50:184] normalize this beat or clap it: choose!
[01:01:217] whistle here and on the 5th beat (maybe a finish sound at the end of the yellow slider...)

Hard
[00:49:739] finish on 2nd and 4th beats
[00:52:956] other finish on the next 3 beats (or only on the last orange beat)
[00:58:768] clap on the next 3 beats
[General] this isn't Insane yet (luckly...), so make the 1st section easier (not too much, though...)

Insane (Now I'm only afraid about the final difficulty...)
[01:00:334] finish on 1st, 2nd, 3rd beats; clap on 4th, 6th, 8th and 10th beats
[01:22:668] try to set soft sounds with whistles from now to 01:33:025
[01:45:240] Finish with a finish! (What a terrible joke...)

Unreachable distance (... no comment ...)
[01:08:817] let the 3rd beat disappear and start here a little slider ending about 01:09:307

Whew, at least I've tried it...

[Hard]
00:59:46 (5) - Align with 3

(can't find anything...must be good then lol)

[Insane]
00:44:29 (1) - Fit entirely on 00:43:04 (2) ( take out grid snap if you have to )
01:06:61 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Confusing D=

[Normal]
00:55:18 (1) - Boring...lol

So far so good~!

Starred~!

Hmm I tried mapping a similiar song once...mind if I make a difficulty? Its short so I should be able to manage.

weeeeee, hitsound mod~

Insane-
00:26:07 (1) - remove the finish
00:30:54 (6) - I heard a clap in the music, lol, i thought it was your's~ enhance it with clap on first half?
00:34:64 (2,3,4,5,6) - Normal-Finish spam~ DIEE
00:35:71 (10,1) - I'd say move the finish to end of 10 instead
00:43:93 (6,7) - up a tick
00:45:71 (9,10) - I don't like how it ends with a double click (before break), make it a triplet?
00:50:54 (7) - have end directly under 3?
01:00:36 (1) - remove this finish only
01:08:75 (1) - end in middle too~
01:39:11 (5) - remove finish here?
Not much hitsounds to mod~ since you kept it simple with the normal-normalhit~ Some places could use more hitsounds, but not really
In other words, nicely done

Hard-
00:23:39 (1,2,3,4,1) - a "gap" with no hitsounds?
00:25:89 (2,3,4) - get rid of one or two finishes here
00:28:39 (1,2,3,4,5) - get rid finishes here?
00:45:71 (9,10) - same as insane, and remove hitsounds here?
00:53:04 (2,3,4) - remove finish?
01:03:04 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^?
01:04:46 (2,3,4) - ^?
01:06:61 (1,2,3,4) - ^ or just 1,2,3's and add finish to 4 in next combo?
I don't like so many finish hitsounds...
Redo break

Normal-
00:10:71 (7) - like Insane and hard, this is better without whistle
00:14:46 (1) - either remove clap or add clap to... I'd say 00:15:54 and 00:16:96
00:19:11 (3) - I say remove clap here so next combo sounds better
00:24:82 (1) - remove one clap from either side, and curve better?
00:26:96 (1) - ^
00:37:32 (1,2,3,4) - I don't like how the claps stopped then just re-appeared here randomly
00:50:18 (3) - ^
00:54:46 (4,1) - ^
01:01:61 (4) - down a tick~
I like Insane's more simple hitsounds better
MOST of those are hardly noticable during play, so its fine

I prefer they all end in the same place as Insane and Unreachable, or at least for Hard
Unreachable looked awesome (+ impossible)~ no hitsounds to mod here, but lots of nazi clean up can be seen~
Redo Breaks~
imo, Hard is insane, and Insane is "Lunatic" diff cuz bpm 168 1/4 streams are quite difficult to click, but thats just how it is for a mouse player >_<

Star~~

Heres my difficulty~!

Download: Silver Forest - Eternally Unreachable Distance (blissfulyoshi) [animasks Hard].osu

animask's hard:
00:13:57 (8) - spacing
00:13:93 (2) - spacing
00:19:82 (4) - spacing
00:36:07 (4) - spacing

If you feel the mods are too minor, you can ignore them.

On another note, unreachable distance has no plans to be finished. If you want to play the hardest version of the song, here it is. The map is a little messy and does not have hitsounds, but it is quite fun. Try it.
If anyone wants to pick up the beatmap and finish it themselves, go ahead.

Edit:
Also here is the semi-tag verison I made

Download: Silver Forest - Eternally Unreachable Distance (blissfulyoshi) [Unreachable distance].osu

Download: Silver Forest - Eternally Unreachable Distance (blissfulyoshi) [Unreachable distance (Tag)].osu

[Normal]
00:17:50() - i don't get why here is nothing

[Hard]
01:00:89 (4,5,6,7) - maybe make them all new combos? (more fun in tag :] )

[animasks's Hard]
00:10:54 (6) - this repeat sliuder ends one tick to early
00:46:61() - maybe start here again?
00:50:89 (9) - maybe one more repeat?

[Insane]
00:46:61() - maybe start here again?
01:44:46 (7,8,9,10,11) - maybe all of them new combo?

wow that a pretty flawless map.
Awesome!

+star

Why don't map til the end of song? :<

~Normal~

00:17:058 - (↻)
Sounds weird.

~Hard~

01:00:897 - (4)
Add new combo

01:02:862 - (8),(1)
Too high imo.

~Insane~

01:22:415 - (4)
This circle is not sync to anything.

01:44:469 - (7)
Add new combo

~animasks Hard~

00:16:254 - (7) or 00:16:969 - (10)
Add new combo.

00:41:254 - (1)
Move 1/4 backward.


+Star

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Fucking hate those sliders.

Not gonna mod, not gonna star.

Sorry.

</raged>

Okay maybe a star.

[Normal]
00:16:07 (3) - The repeat of the slider sounds really weird
00:36:790 (x) - Fill this hole ?

[Hard]
00:18:93 (6,7,8) - improve symetry

[Animask]
Fine~

[Insane]
Fine~


I don't really like the song, but the map is nice. Star.

Normal:
00:14:46 (1) - Remove clap.
00:14:82 (2) - Add clap on start.

Hard:
00:43:93 (6,7) - Don't like the way these are placed. Think of a different pattern?

animask's Hard:
00:11:25 (7) - Whistle on both ends?
00:15:54 (4) - New combo.
00:16:25 (7) - ^
00:16:96 (10) - ^

I don't like how this difficulty is not that fun. No offense D:<!

Insane:
01:22:68 (1) to 01:27:50 (3) - I don't hear this matching the beat or sounding good on its own. Change the pattern?

Good map & starred!

Nexy wrote:

Normal:

Insane:
01:22:68 (1) to 01:27:50 (3) - I don't hear this matching the beat or sounding good on its own. Change the pattern?

Good map & starred!

I am not sure what I should do for this section because besides a few notes 01:22:68 (1) to 01:42:14 (6) follow the exact same pattern to mapping and follow the music similarly. I do want to remap 20s if I don't have to, so I will wait for a second opinion on this.

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: Silver Forest - Eternally Unreachable Distance (blissfulyoshi) [animasks Hard].osu

Animask:
00:40:71 (2) - might want to make parallel to 3 and 4
00:58:39 (1) - move 2 notches down (3) to make 1,2,3 all the same distance from the origin

@Doomsday93
Insane: I am going to keep the sliders the way they are for now because I like the difficulty they provide, but if more ppl feel it is annoying , I will remap it.

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Animask:
00:40:71 (2) - might want to make parallel to 3 and 4 I'm not going for parallel though...
00:58:39 (1) - move 2 notches down (3) to make 1,2,3 all the same distance from the origin ...confusing way to say it but I know what you mean

Download: Silver Forest - Eternally Unreachable Distance (blissfulyoshi) [animasks Hard].osu

[Normal]
00:14:46 (1) - if youre trying to follow a pattern of claps, this one is in the wrong place; it should be at the start of 2
00:22:32 (1) - finish the end
00:25:89 (2) - the whistle sounds bad
hit volume is a tad low
00:35:71 (3) - whistle the start (and maybe the track)
00:38:75 (1) - finish
00:48:04 (3) - clap the start
00:52:32 (1,2,3,4) - where have all the hitsounds gone?


[Hard]
00:11:61 (1) - hitsound
00:14:11 (6,7,8) - whistles sound weird
00:20:54 (2) - clap?
00:45:80 (10) - finish


[animask]
00:52:32 (1) - why whistle the slidertrack and nothing else? its barely audible


[Insane]
00:25:54 (8) - hitsound this?
00:37:32 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - whistlespam
01:08:39 (1,1) - very confusing overlap - i cant tell which is the start and which is the end of the bottom slider

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[animask]
00:52:32 (1) - why whistle the slidertrack and nothing else? its barely audible
lies...theres no whistle there...

But I fixed some things that I found.

Download: Silver Forest - Eternally Unreachable Distance (blissfulyoshi) [animasks Hard].osu

[Normal]
looks good


[animask Hard]
cool :3


[Hard]
awesome


[Insane]
here just have a bubble

Offset: 8,770 ms.

Rebubbled.

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The beatmap is excellent, but the absolutely revolting music quality puts me off from playing the song excessively.

So, I solved your dilemma and found you a high quality mp3 variant. Here's hoping you can do something with it.

http://www.esnips.com/doc/e20c5ee5-abce ... D%E9%9B%A2

If you cannot get the link from that, try this instead:

http://www.esnips.com/nsdoc/e20c5ee5-ab ... on=forceDL

You may need to register.

Sadly since this is ranked already, I can't change the mp3 on the beatmap. The only thing you can do is rename the better mp3 so it works with the map and set the offset yourself.

Thanks for finding a better quality mp3 though.

WOAH, is this mp3 actually 8kbps?? I didn't even know you could get quality that low...

0_o wrote:

WOAH, is this mp3 actually 8kbps?? I didn't even know you could get quality that low...

no its 144

also edit that new mp3 is awesome quality

weird, it says 8 here =/

I'll have a whinge to peppy, see if there's something that can be done about it.

The offset for the better quality mp3 in the above mentioned site is 8590ms (it's just about precisely 1/2 beat away from your previous mp3).

I hope you will take action on this file to update the mp3. The higher quality one sounds much better.

Thanks james039 for providing the offset for me.
With the new offset and mp3, I created a new .osz file that I want to use to replace the current one, but I am at a lost at how I should ask a BAT to look at the new .osz file and get that one ranked.

May someone pls advise me on how I should get BATs to check the new offset and mp3?

adding a new offset will delete all the old scores i belive, so i dont think you can change the mp3 now.

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Hey, thoughts on your map, it is decent, But I think the Insane map should be more Insane... I found it too easy.

good!