OMG my favorite Inuyasha ending theme *o*
Please remember that some of theese errors are suggestions, not directions, feel free to take or leave any or edit as you see fit.
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[General]
No tags? you could put Ending as a tag for example or names of Inuyasha characters (not really but many ppl seem to do it anyways)
Pure white color is blinding, also this and gray can cause confusion on tag mode in multi.
[Hard]00:08:200 (1,2,3,4) - I recommend you make something different with theese, for example an equilateral triangle pattern with (1,2,3) and putting (4) in the moddle
00:17:179 (2) - Try to make this slider more symmetric? for example:
00:39:625 (5) - Could look better, you should try to make some nice curves with sliders rather than something that looks like something between a curve and a line
00:40:570 (6) - I think you can remove this note, plays awkward because apparently you are following the lyrics on this combo.
00:41:515 (9) - ^ or make into a separate combo from those 2 combos.
01:23:336 (4) - Stack below (2)?
01:33:496 (4) - Same comment as 00:39:625 (5)
02:44:142 (4) - New combo because you are switching musical pattern.
[Normal]This doesnt play easy enough to be the easiest diff of this mapset, you'll still need an Easier diff for this to be ranked.
00:13:871 (3) - Nazi: Try to not leave any sharp corners on the slider form, something like this looks better:
00:58:527 (5) - Semi curvy slider, try to make it more curve like:
[Overall]
The patterns seem kinda random, i suggest you work more on your patterns
Edit:
Dont bother asking me for a recheck