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Frostmourne
mod from request~


Easy
01:30:037 (2) - just suggestion, copy this note 01:05:959 (2) - then ctrl+r and ctrl+< then drag to same place as 01:26:880 (3) - and ctrl shift + r and selection centre 10 this will be fit to last slider and look tidy. also you can manage your (3) (4) for better position

this : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/276438

Normal
00:14:643 (4) - ctrl shift + r selection centre -6 will be better to cross this 00:12:669 (1) -
00:24:906 (5) - new combo here and remove this 00:25:301 (1) - and new combo 00:26:090 (1) - I think it's better for me :3
00:31:222 (6) - sorry for nazi , move up 1 grid look better much :D
00:37:537 (4,5,1) - spacing (I compare it from this 01:01:222 (3,4,1) - )
01:05:959 (2) - ctrl shift+r and use 5 selection centre it's better imo xD
01:07:143 (1,2) - move these 2 notes 2 grid down if you did ^ for saving distance
01:26:880 (3) - encirclement is not completed , ctrl shift+r and use selection centre 3 make it better circle
01:33:195 (x) - add note at x:484 y:324 please , I think starting spin at this point is not fit to this song :<



Hard
00:17:406 (1) - remove new combo and add the next note instead
00:34:182 (4) - feel weird at last slider has no sound -_-''
00:37:932 (1) - remove new combo and add next note instead :3
01:10:301 (3) - in my opinion , http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/276444 like this make it better (ctrl+<) 1 time and move it to this position



Insane
00:18:590 (1) - remove new combo and add the next note instead
00:37:340 (5) - new combo fit to these sound that seem to be lower
01:00:630 (1) - new combo this for these jump :D
01:06:353 (1,2,3) - sorry for nazi , move down 1 grid and move 01:07:537 (2) - to x:340 y:93
01:09:314 (8) - you should add new combo this and remove next note
01:27:866 (4) - new combo this then remove this 01:28:459 (1) - then add new here 01:28:656 (1) - you will get a perfect diamond :D


ok, I will full fill your star to 20+

good luck :)
DarknessAngel
I'm sorry about I'm so busy that I can not mod your map
I quickly check this map and I feel it is a good map
so give you a star ~ ★
good luck

and sorry... :(
Love

shikyu wrote:

[Love's Taiko]
around 00:13:064 - 00:37:735 there're so much pattern dkdkd or something like that, it's kinda boring D: dun care, drums
and these notes sounds weird --> 01:29:051 (13,14,15) - suggested pattern : kkd nope
no changes
Topic Starter
Sonico Makaron
okay, remaping insane and applied mod thanks :oops:
Kirino Kousaka
Hello!~ Here's my mod~ sorry for being very late... >< (In-game PM request)

[Easy]
00:01:814 (2) - Remove "whistle".
00:04:972 (2) - ^

[Normal]
00:00:038 (1) - Remove "whistle" on end.
00:01:814 (3) - Remove "whistle".
00:01:814 (3) - Remove "whistle" on end.
00:04:972 (3) - Remove "whistle".
00:07:143 (3) - Replace "finish" with "clap" at the end.
00:08:722 (3) - Remove "finish" on start.
00:10:695 (4) - Remove "finish" and "whistle" on this circle then put a "clap".
00:16:024 (2) - Remove "whistle".
00:20:366 (3) - ^
00:22:735 (2) - ^
00:44:051 (3) - ^
00:47:209 (3) - ^
00:56:090 (2) - Remove "finish" on end. Sounds really weird. Replace it with a "clap".
00:59:643 (3) - Replace "finish" with "clap".
01:02:801 (2) - ^
01:09:116 (5) - ^
01:12:274 (2) - ^
01:15:432 (3) - ^
01:18:590 (2) - ^
01:28:064 (4) - ^
01:32:011 (2) - ^
01:32:406 (3) - Remove "finish".

[Love's Taiko]
01:07:735 - Add timing point here, without kiai.
01:07:932 - ^ but with kiai.
(do this to be consistent with the other diffs)

[Hard]
00:06:945 (2) - Remove "whistle"
00:07:143 (3) - Replace "finish" with "clap" at the end.
00:07:932 (1) - Remove "finish" on end.
00:09:511 (1,2,3) - Remove the claps on the reverse arrows and ends of these sliders.
00:16:024 (2) - Remove "whistle"

[Insane]
00:00:038 (1) - Remove "whistle" on end.
00:01:814 (3) - Remove "whistle".
00:03:788 (2) - Remove "whistle" on start.
00:04:972 (3) - ^

That's all!~
I don't see anything wrong with the map's design, it's already perfect or close to it imo.
What I saw is some hitsound issues, I really don't like some parts wherein "finish" is being misused.
Since I like the map's design, and the flow goes very well, I'll give this a star~ :D
Love

Kirino Kousaka wrote:

[Love's Taiko]
01:07:735 - Add timing point here, without kiai.
01:07:932 - ^ but with kiai.
(do this to be consistent with the other diffs)
no, not having a kiai flash
Raging Bull
Nothing much.

General:
I'm not sure...but I think it might be unrankable to silence all slider ticks or something. I don't remember. Try to get someone who can answer that.

Normal:
00:45:827 (1) - I prefer you remap or just move this slider so it doesn't overlap with the previous slider. Doesn't look too appealing imo.

No kds.
-Nanase-
Mum,don't know why to spectat me yesterday ,i'm sorry :(
i should be tested when spectated
good beatmap! :D
like sonic too XD hava a top
(English is boot ORZ)
Topic Starter
Sonico Makaron
sorry not fix thanks for mod ;3
grumd
ыддыды
[Insane]
00:21:748 (6) - может продлить слайдер до 00:22:044 ?
01:25:301 (1,2) - советую подальше их отодвинуть друг от друга

[Hard]
00:47:209 - слайдер лучше закончить тут, а на нынешнем конце слайдера ставить круг
01:18:590 (3) - я бы сделал по вокалу

[Normal]
начало в два раза медленнее продолжения, может раздвинешь круги на первых секундах песни на большее расстояние?
00:19:774 (2,3,4) - три ноты подряд должны начинаться на 00:19:972 (согласно музыке), а не на 00:20:169, как сейчас

[Easy]
AR+1 или +2, слишком оно сейчас медленно для такой скорости слайдеров
01:31:616 (3) - отрази симметрично (4) (и вертикально, и горизонтально), финальная симметрия смотрелась бы лучше

ну типа всё
Ulysses
From Mod Queue

Black=Just suggestion,you can fix it if you like.You may not fix it or ignore it if you don't agree with me.
Blue =I think it's a important thing(IMO,you have better to fix it.(Still the same,ignore it if you don't agree.)
Red=Unrankable issue.(You should fix it,otherwise you can't get a rank or app.)


[Insane]

01:02:209 (2,3,4) - Make this stream be stright looks better Like that o.0 :


01:14:840 (3,4,5) - This cruve is ...mh~Chnage it like this? :

01:34:182 (1) - Use 5% volume :P?It's spin bonus is noisy in that soft part :<

Nothing can complain in styff.~

Rating : 7/10 :D


[Hard]

00:05:564 (3,4) - Their x-axises are near,but not the same,is it deliberate?

01:33:393 (1) - Slience it okay?It's spin bonus are noisy :<~

[Normal]

I think the spacing in this diff is huge for a normal,please don't do that in the coming days.

01:33:195 (1) - The same :P Slience it~

Nothing wrong in this diff.

[Easy]

01:33:195 (1) - Use 5% volume :P?It's spin bonus is noisy in that soft part :<

SsSsorry,I can't find any stuff in this map,not bad :P~
Topic Starter
Sonico Makaron
not applied mod thanks ;3
grumd
Может матов поищешь, не? :D
Topic Starter
Sonico Makaron

grumd wrote:

Может матов поищешь, не? :D
ну поидее Мат должен промодить :D я в рекью угадал :D
Elysee
good map :)
Elysee

Elysee wrote:

good map :)
Topic Starter
Sonico Makaron
oh thank you ;3
Meltyuki
good ;)
Topic Starter
Sonico Makaron
lol thank you :oops:
Suzully
From my modding queue.

[General]

  • In the last part of all diffs, I feel the volume is too low. Turn all ones up by 10%?
    And about KIAI, overall the volume is low too except Insane. You seem to use 70% on Insane, so turn the volume up to 70% in KIAI on other diffs too?
[Easy]

  • Fine.
[Normal]
  1. 00:48:985 (3) - It's better to avoid overlapping with 00:47:406 (1) because this is normal diff.
  2. 00:56:090 (2) - The finish sound doesn't fit here.
  3. 00:59:643 (3) - ^
  4. 01:02:801 (2) - ^ same suggestions in the latter part of KIAI.
[Hard]

  • There are three spinners and two are very long...this is hard diff and TV Size so you should map at least while one after KIAI.
  1. 00:56:485 (4) - The finish sound doesn't fit here.
  2. 00:59:643 (5) - ^
  3. 01:02:801 (6) - ^ same suggestions in the latter part of KIAI.
[Insane]

  • As some advices about the formation. You often stack a note with the end of slider. It's not a bad pattern, but sometimes it makes the flow stop. If making a map with considering about the flow more, your map will be much better!
  1. 00:08:722 (T) - Remove this green line.
  2. 00:40:498 (3,4,1) - This pattern is too confusing. I know (3,4) follow the vocal and (1) follows the music, but player cannot know it when playing because of the random spacing. I recommend you to change the pattern, or at least add new combo to (4) then remove new combo from (1).
  3. 00:43:656 (5,6,1) - ^
  4. 00:46:814 (5,6,1) - ^
  5. 01:00:235 (2) - Try Ctrl+R on this. The flow will be better imo.
  6. 01:20:465 (2,3,1,2,1,2,3) - Inconsistent pattern of new combos. Try to set as well as 01:22:932 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5).
That's it!
You seem to love Sonico :3
sviel
good map
Topic Starter
Sonico Makaron
okay thanks for mod
Topic Starter
Sonico Makaron
You seem to love Sonico :3
yea i am love :oops:

good map
thanks
MileiyHrmirlt
Insane
01:20:564 ~ 01:25:103
Little by little increase the spacing?

Hard
01:14:248 finish
Really necessary?

All difficulty
KIAI Time
I want a little more hit sound volume up
DarkRingSystem
:)
It seemed complete for rank ,so only little mod
[Insane]
00:43:656 (5) - stack with 00:43:261 (4) feel so good. btw the space mislead me here lol
00:46:814 (5) - ^

[Hard]
01:19:577 (1) - end here and map 01:20:959~01:26:090 . It only has 1:30 playtime don't spinner so much long orz~
01:30:037 (1) - emm maybe it begins so early ..

[Narmal]&[Easy]
Fine

that's all GL~~~
Fumika
Ahhhh ,don't have anything to mod ; w ;
sorry for my delay orz
Pokie
Hello~


General


  • Easy
    [list:171c0]
00:40:301 (3) - Kinda confusing to me, since it's overlaps under (1) XD Little suggestion here: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/284988 But yea D: You should fix the following spacing too.
01:07:735 - Unused timing section



Normal
  • 00:10:695 (4) - Aww~ can you lower the volume on this note >_<? (Around 50%)
    00:16:024 (2) - Whistle is useless here, imo.
    00:19:774 (2,3,4) - From (2) slider's tail: whistle|clap - none - whistle|finish (Similar to the previous line)
    00:41:090 - Suggest to use this rhythm: http://puu.sh/ok3U
    00:44:248 - If you change the previous line, do the same thing here too: http://puu.sh/ok5h
    00:47:406 - ^



    Hard
    [list:171c0]
00:23:130 - Feel like missing a beat here, add a note?
00:28:064 (4,1,2) - From (4) slider's tail: whistle - finish - whistle
00:34:182 (4) - Whistle at slider's head seems acceptable imo.
00:50:169 (5) - Clap at slider's head
00:52:340 (2) - Whistle?
00:52:735 (4) - ^ at slider's tail
00:53:722 (1) - ^
00:54:709 (6) - Actually you should delete one repeat. Beats stopped at 00:54:807 - obviously.
01:08:919 (3) - Whistle?
01:18:590 (3) - This would be better imo, though it's not a big different between my suggestion and your current settings. But a substance note is necessary here: http://puu.sh/ok9m



Insane
[list:171c0]00:17:406 (1) - eh, how about place like this? http://puu.sh/okap
00:21:156 (2,3,4,5) - Kinda...ki..kinda...no, it's really confusing >_< Can you try not to overlap them? Since it's now like this...: http://puu.sh/oke1
00:34:577 (1) - Like what I said in Hard, suggest to whistle at slider's head too.
00:49:774 (1) - Hard to read this note while playing, suggest to move it a bit to centre: http://puu.sh/okeJ
00:52:143 (1) - Missing a whistle?
00:53:722 (3) - Leave finish only
00:54:906 (7) - Delete, same reason as Hard.
01:16:616 (3) - Feel like a whistle could be added at slider's tail, though
01:19:380 (2,3,4) - Move them in a line: http://puu.sh/okd4


Pretty nice >_<
Topic Starter
Sonico Makaron
little fix thanks for mod
Yasora
hi there

Easy
  1. Difficulty Setting: AR +1? Seems too slow imo
  2. 00:35:564 (2) - add finish sound in here? I think the sound same with 00:33:985 (4)
Normal
  1. Difficulty Setting: AR +1? Same reason with Easy
  2. 00:07:143 (3) - why add finish in the slider's end?? I think more fit if adding clap in there since the drum sound is heard
  3. 00:08:722 (3) - change the finish sound using S:C1?? the finish sound in here really strange to hear for me
  4. 00:10:695 (4) - again, why add finish and whistle in here but the drum sound is heard?? so, change them with clap :3
  5. 00:59:643 (3) - change this finish with the clap for following the drum sound
  6. 01:02:801 (2) - same as above
  7. 01:05:959 (2) - same as 00:07:143 (3), but in here in the slider's beginning
  8. 01:09:116 (5) - same as 0:59:643 (3)
  9. 01:12:274 (2) - ^
  10. 01:15:432 (3) - ^
  11. 01:15:827 (1,2,3,4) - umm, I don't know why I felt these pattern is weird. I suggest to make them like this just move (3) and (4) a bit
  12. 01:18:590 (2) - same as 0:59:643 (3)
  13. 01:18:985 (3) - remove the finish, that isn't fit with the backsound
  14. 01:28:064 (4) - same as 0:59:643 (3)
  15. 01:30:037 (1) - remove the finish in slider's beginning?
  16. 01:31:616 (1) - same as 0:59:643 (3)
Hard
  1. 00:08:722 (3,4) - I think more give better effect for the backsound with some finish sound in here. use default or S:C2 in 00:08:919. Here the step: remove finish in (3) slider's end, then add finish in (4). don't forget to add green point again to back to S:C1 for other notes
  2. 00:10:695 (4) - change the finish sound in beginning with clap for following the drum sound. honestly, finish in here is strange to heard for me
  3. 00:37:340 (6) - hmm.. add new combo in here? since this stacked is make a bit confused imo. this will easier to read if add an new combo in here
  4. 00:41:880 (2) - this slider is really weird to look by combination with (1,3). maybe, change it like this
  5. 00:59:643 (5) - same as 00:10:695 (4)
  6. 01:02:801 (6) - change it into clap for following the drum sound
  7. 01:09:116 (4) - ^
  8. 01:12:274 (4) - same as 00:10:695 (4)
  9. 01:13:459 (4) - ^
  10. 01:13:853 (5) - remove the finish??
Insane
  1. Difficulty Setting: HP +1??
  2. 00:09:116 (5) - use S:C2 or default for this circle?? and add finish of course :3 give better effect imo~
  3. 00:59:643 (6) - same as 01:02:801 (6) in Hard diff
  4. 01:02:801 (6) - ^
Nice map :3
Good luck~
Topic Starter
Sonico Makaron
thanks for mod
K i R a
K i R a's mod request

[General]
The offset is ok, but the perfect offset is 46, I know you made a lot of timing points, that is hard to move so you dont need to move the offset.

Nothing to mod, your song is FINISHED

That's my mod (not kudosu, I didnt help)
Topic Starter
Sonico Makaron
thanks for help :D
El1as
star~ :)

ganbatte
Topic Starter
Sonico Makaron
thanks for star >~<
Nichiyouki
Hi, AcceleratorRUS

From my modding queue

[Easy]

00:35:564 (2) - It overlap with (2), players may surprise here.

[Normal]

01:32:801 (4) - Move to x:480 y:180

[Hard]

00:05:564 (3) - Move left 1 grid
00:51:156 (2) - Move to x:88 y:164?

[Insane]

I don't find the problem.

That's all, that I can find them.
nice map, give a star ;)

Good luck~
Topic Starter
Sonico Makaron
fix thanks for mod and star :3
taka1235
GOOD!
Topic Starter
Sonico Makaron
oh thank you :D
NoHitter
As you requested.

[General]
Is the soft hitfinish really meant to sound like that? It seems to cancel out the finish hitsounds in some parts.

[Easy]
00:07:143 (2) - You can flip this horizontally, so 00:12:669 (1) won't look as repetitive.

[Normal]
00:47:406 (1) - The overlap with 00:45:827 (1) looks ugly IMO.
01:18:985 (3) - This sounds awkward. I suggest replacing it with a slider from 01:18:985 to 01:19:380.

[Hard]
00:42:274 (3) - Could you rearrange the pattern here? The overlaps make the pattern look not nice.
00:44:643 (1,2,3,4) - Change the pattern? It plays awkwardly.
00:54:314 (2,3,4,5,6) - Since there's an Insane anyway, why not make this into a repeat slider instead. Reserve the streams for the harder diff.
01:18:590 (3) - This doesn't seem to match the music. IMO delete then add notes at 01:18:590 | 01:18:787, and 01:18:985 instead.
01:30:037 (1) - Seems like an awkward place to add a spinner. Maybe delete and add notes instead?

[Love's Taiko]
00:53:722 (54,55) - IMO still make this part at 0.5x and only make it 1.0x starting from the chorus.

[Insane]
Looks fine.
Topic Starter
Sonico Makaron
thanks for mod
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