[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

General

1. osb里指向了俩SB图片 但文件夹里没有
2. offest 10729 用的别人图改的, offset应该还好啊

core

00:10:974 (2) - 其实这clap听不到(我是HD380 PRO) whistle的频率也太稀疏 以后这里都换成whistle ..? 这里都用的原版CLAP 应该可以的

LKs wrote:

offest: 我错了 offest是 10744, win7系统误差太大 怎么说 这图的offest很明显早了太多 不管是谁之前做的 现在结果就是这样
。。我打得还好啊, backfire的taiko map, 他userpage里有

我自己打standard diff 打出来1ms early

clap: 正因为原版clap相比这歌太弱所以才会听不见 后面非kiai的某些地方音量提高+osu本身的解码原因和混合音效后的发声效果平衡下能听见了 但毕竟软弱无力 你的目标是把clap调到和whistle一样显眼 不然就不平衡 lol其实我想突出whistle的

Philippines wrote:

XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXxXXXXXxXXXXGENERAL

SPOILER

1. Remove lolicore in Tags. http://osu.ppy.sh/s/24388
   
   
2. Your 3rd Kiai should start on 01:40:591. hmmmm
   
   
3. I guess you focused more on [Lolicore]. Please give more attention to Standard cause I think you just put random notes everywhere on that diff. lol Random how 0.0 but honestly I didn't pay much to hitsounds, only 3clap all lol

XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXxXXXXXXXXXSTANDARD

SPOILER

1. OD +1
   
   
2. AR -2 / -1
   
   
3. 00:09:442 (1) - I hope you are aware that this slider is not symmetrical. o.o that should be 1/3, somehow snapped wrong

wmfchris wrote:

聽不下去 饒了我

Kurisuchianu wrote:

I must say, why the SB is in there BUT, the image files are gone?
02:05:101 - Here is beter kai
okay, just saying.

l1106188 wrote:

Request from M4M
以下只是建議~不喜歡可以略過 OAO

[Gerneral]
藍線沒用處的話可以把他刪了 (雖然沒影響)
design裡有兩個文件 可是資料夾裡卻沒有

[Standard]
01:32:421 (3) - NC?
02:21:442 (5) - ^

[Lolicore]
01:26:293 (4) - NC
02:07:016 (3) - ^
00:44:932 (3) - ctrl+R?(自己感覺這樣比較順?!)
00:44:932 (3) - ^ (若上面有換的話 沒換請忽略這個)

圖...完美到沒找到很多可以建議的
若沒幫助 對不起 QAQ~
Good song and map~
重頭看過5,6次之後我發現
我耳朵快不行了
Star for [Lolicore]可怕難度,and 訓練我的耳朵XD
good map and song

Backfire wrote:

Mmk.
It is completo~!

Bobo wrote:

Those custom hitsounds are amazing :O

Jacob wrote:

Can I make a hard-ish difficulty?

Gasaiyuno-chan wrote:

現在暫時没有hitsound。。。。不久會有的

Backfire wrote:

Fixed some errors and shit.

Jacob wrote:

a better quality mp3 can be found at http://www.last.fm/music/goreshit/_/Satori+De+Pon! (manually copy and paste this into your browser, the "!" doesn't work with links for some reason)

just click "free mp3" and it'll begin to download. (it's a safe website)
also, add "Hyperhappyhardcore" into the tags, it's the album name. i also think you should add "Dance Corps 2" because that's the group that compiled the album. Satori De Pon! isn't in any specific goreshit album i believe.

source - http://www.last.fm/music/Various+Artist ... pyhardcore

Jacob wrote:

double post

why is the whistle so quiet in the custom sounds? could you make it louder? ;_; it's for my diff

Bobo wrote:

Are any of these to your liking Backfire?

:3

:3

CoinCihaya wrote:

This map is very happy

Fight!!

Aeonnen wrote:

Modding request from my queue ^^

Standard:
00:47:484 (1,2) - Align

Hardcore:
00:31:527 (2,3) - Align
02:19:399 (1) - remove new combo

Lolicore:
00:14:612 (6,7) - don't stack them
Oh my god can anyone do this!? That's crazy~

All suggestions, even though there isn't much.

popner wrote:

Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

Just suggestions:

[General]

太鼓的Kiai没有在重音上 咱不了解太鼓0.0 红线都不一样 再看看吧0.0

[Standard]

00:16:336 (2) - 换成不折返的？ fixed
01:32:421 -同Hardcore

[Hardcore]

00:38:676 (7) - nazi - 往左一格 (grid 4) fixed
01:28:208 (5,1) - nazi - 往右一格 (grid 4)
01:32:421 - 这里不要break，和前面的break很近，从音乐上来说也没有break的必要 因为重复了嘛... = =就是没必要map这里 我觉得

[Lolicore]

什么都看不出来 0.0
01:32:421 -同Hardcore

That's all I can find. GL~

Gasaiyuno-chan wrote:

能否考虑下找人帮我的难度的音效填了。。。实在无力

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

Gasaiyuno-chan wrote:

能否考虑下找人帮我的难度的音效填了。。。实在无力

0.0 咱也不会taiko啊...

eikkaleyd wrote:

Satori~!

[Standard]
01:05:867 (1,2,3) - 往左上移动（特别是往左）让1和前一句的123看起来好看 这个还好吧...
01:31:910 (2,3) - 不好看，最好把2改弧度一点，这样和3连一起好看些 移了一段距离
01:53:867 (3) - 右移一格让123变等腰三角 好
02:04:080 (3) - 下面那半段拉出弧度来吧……不用长得完全和1一样 就是不好看啊...
02:15:314 (2) - 下来一格 好

[Hardcore]
00:15:953 (5) - 减少一次反弹，放到后面那根白线上去（00:16:080） 好
00:19:272 (2) - 放在3上面出现读图失误，请放到1尾部和3头部中间的位置 故意的jump
00:20:548 (7) - ^ （后面很多地方这样就可以不改了，因为第一次知道了人就不会犯第二次错……当然要不要改随你吧）
01:04:591 (6) - 这后面也加一个note
01:26:165 (5) - 往右一格 好
01:47:740 (6,7) - 推荐你6多一次反弹，7放到后面那根白线上去 好

[Taikocalypse X]
虽然这么鬼畜没什么好MOD的了……
KIAI不同也许可以的……移到前一根蓝线的clap上去好了？

[Lolicore]
よ!このロリコンどもめ!
你们这些萝莉控^ ^
00:54:123 (4) - 看不见这个Note了，放到3的尾部和5之间某个位置比较好（往返跳是可以的，但是slider之后跳回去不舒服也没见过也难读……） 改成slider了 (找不到好点啊T.T)
01:28:336 (3,4,1,2,1,2,1) - 这里肿么能这么简单，又不是距离超近的anti-jump，快改成跳（原地按两下，跳到远处，再按两下的那种）休息一下嘛... 全程230多累 0108也有减速段不是
01:41:229 (5) - slider减短，这里加个circle，slider放到后面白线上 ^
01:46:591 (3) - ^，此处因为出现了一个1/4空拍，可以加2个circle[/color] 加上不好听啊0w0

好，random mod完毕，看在觉大人这么萌份上给个star 下次排列要再用心点，还不是很好看 thanks ~

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

yes, for rank

TheNutritiousGuy wrote:

I just poke the fucking room of to fucking read this:

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

yes, for rank

Star for this brashness.

Regou wrote:

Mod...
[Lolicore]
AR+1? 因為這個圖真的很快就是了 說笑的,AR10太難了 嗯
00:25:655 (5,6) - 建議這兩個note不要搭在一起... 没地方放0.0
00:28:336 (7) - clap 好
00:34:463 (7,8) - 不要搭在一起 感觉还好...
00:55:655 (1,2) - ^
01:41:229 (5) - 聽起來有點怪怪的... fixed
01:46:591 (3) - ^ fixed
01:54:761 (2) - ^
02:04:718 (11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - 啊這好難!!! 嗯。。。
02:17:101 (4,5,6) - 這個弄成跳吧... 结尾不想这样了...

[Hardcore]
00:47:484 - 加一個note在這裡 不想..
01:03:570 (1) - ??? fixed
01:15:059 (5) - 太吵了... fixed
01:31:399 (6) - ^

[Standard]
00:42:378 (3) - 怪怪的 还好吧...
01:15:059 (3) - 略醜 ...

Copter-kun wrote:

It kind of feels like you placed in effort on Lolicore, but not on Hardcore and Standard. Good luck on it anyways.

GamerX4life wrote:

"who wants to try my new map
it's very hard"

sooo..

My first Mod:

General:
- mp3 Quality is really bad can't find better one lol

Standard:
- Everything is fine

Hardcore:
- 00:22:463 (5) - Delete the Slider and try this: http://puu.sh/oloQ fixed
- 00:32:548 - Add Note don't like
- 00:42:378 (3) - cut Slider to 00:42:889 and add Note at 00:43:016 , 00:43:144 , 00:43:272 uhm don't wanna add too much notes here

Lolicore:
- 00:14:676 (7) - Don't stack no
- 01:28:846 (1) - Delete new Combo
- 01:29:357 (1) - Delete new Combo nc for antijump

That's all

haha5957 wrote:

I would've stared if i had enough kudos.. but sorry, i only got some few not ;-;

[Standard]


[Hardcore]

01:56:676 (8,9) - I don't think this is good idea.. eitehr stack 8 to 7, or 9 to next 1? o.o why? it's perfectly readable

[Lolicore]

00:10:123 (5,6,1) - i don't think this is good idea.. hmm thst's 1/3
00:13:527 (4) - this kind of beat ( http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/286260 ) ? (triple - triple => single - x5 stream) good
00:14:804 (x) - add anything here O.O? intentional empty..
00:45:442 (5) - I think its better when stacked to 4's end no...
00:55:655 (1) - unstacking this from next circle-slider(s), felt better for me i like this pattern lol
02:05:357 (2) - ^, since this is end of the stream ok

nice map~

K i R a wrote:

I think this map is really hard to mod but I will try, it is for approved no? for rank because high score is lower than 18m and for example this map is ranked

[Lolicore]
I will say you first the parts I think are weird:

00:10:123 (5,6,1) - This is weird and I dont know if it is rankeable (when I mean rankeable it means for approved too) it's just 1/3
00:21:570 (7,8) - So high difficult to understand including if you are pro. ..???
00:22:208 (11) - Stack and same ^ not hard to read imo..
00:34:463 (7,8,9,10) - Em... that's really hard to understand at this speed. umm..why? what do you mean "understand" I think it's totally readable
01:07:399 (8,9,1) - Stack fix
01:27:825 (4) - ^ fix
01:28:080 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - That is like random spacing, that is only readable for peole who don't play using the eyes, it is basically unreadable. come on it's the easiest part in this map
01:46:080 (8) - Stack fix
02:00:123 (4,5,6,7) - Basically most of the people will fail it. I tried it's possible.. and, I think, most people (if passed here) will fail next part lol
02:04:080 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - It is imposible to complete, because that is 1/8, 1/8 from 235 bpm, that is like 470 bpm stream, I know that are sliders, but anyway... it's possible, just click it like 1/4 note stream a little faster than 235

[Hardcore]
Try with approach on 8. it's just hard diff =_=" people now all play too much high AR
01:48:761 - bad kiai time D: it starts at 01:40:591 what o.o it's different from 40:xx-48:xx
02:16:846 (3,4) - hard to read. um but even if fail to read it's just slider end miss, won't break combo, it's ok I think.

Nothing more, good luck in your song, it is awesome owo.

• Found the applause-hitsound a little overused.
  00:14:293 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 0.6x spacing fits better there imo
  00:22:463 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
  00:46:974 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
  01:30:378 (1) - NC since you use 2-circle-combos before

• 00:14:293 (5,6,7,8) - many 1/2s in a row at that BPM are too fast for a hard-diff imo
  00:18:378 (5,6,7,8) - ^
  00:48:761 (6) - NC
  00:56:931 (6) - ^
  01:04:846 (7) - ^
  01:51:825 (4,5,6,7) - again, quite many 1/2s in a row for that BPM and diff o3o

Wishy22 wrote:

This MP3 is complete crap, sound quality is horrible, get the MP3 from this YT link:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cPXhcrlcQa8

I don't know how to get an MP3 from YouTube, guess it can be done, it's not hard to notice the sound quality from that YT link is about a trillion times better than this map's MP3, dunno why Zapy used such a bad MP3.

No_Gu wrote:

request from my queue
sorry for being late/

normal-hitfinish.mp3吓死我了

[Standard]
00:39:314 (1) - 这个repeat对的位置总感觉听起来不舒服
00:55:655 (1,2,3) - 看前面都蛮简单的感觉这里会略难
01:53:867 (3) - 这个还是2/1slider舒服
02:01:016 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 还是突然一串很难。
02:21:442 (5) - finish

[Hardcore]
fine

[Taiko Oni]
01:43:282 (7) - ...

[Lolicore]
00:30:633 (9) - 默认whistle
00:34:846 (10) - ^
02:03:314 (3) - 分个NC好了毕竟是1/8
02:13:272 我看别的难度这里都是N。。

吗的终于看完了。鬼畜再见

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

Wishy22 wrote:

This MP3 is complete crap, sound quality is horrible, get the MP3 from this YT link:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cPXhcrlcQa8

I don't know how to get an MP3 from YouTube, guess it can be done, it's not hard to notice the sound quality from that YT link is about a trillion times better than this map's MP3, dunno why Zapy used such a bad MP3.

0.0 can someone convert the mp3 format for me...

7odoa wrote:

Try this MP3,It is high quality!

• Hi hi~ request from my queue~
  　

1. 紅 : 是我覺得一並要改的
2. 藍 : 建議 但個人認為要改的
3. 黑 : 就單純建議
   　
   [ General ]
   　
4. 關於Lead-In的秒數 請把他改成0 ( 除了Taikocalypse X難度 ) 不是從剛開始3秒左右開始 不需要Lead-In
5. 加個Red Timing Section吧 Offset : 160 BPM : 90 我知道這裡沒有擺東西 但是如果要讓節奏有在音樂上 就必須加這個Timing

6. rules wrote:

   You must use hitsounds. Without these, things get way too monotonous as you are throwing away one of the main elements of variation present in mapping. You don't need to place them on every note (and are discouraged from doing so), but they must at least be frequently heard when playing.

   ^^^不看下不? 雖然有音效 但是好像才幾個finish而已>_< 最簡單的兩個難度
   　
   [ Standard ]
   　
7. 01:13:062 (1) - NC沒什麼用處
   　
   [ Hardcore ]
   　
8. 01:56:850 (9) - 這放到下個slider的開頭上打起來比較舒服
   　
   [ Lolicore ]
   　
9. 鬼畜啊.. 我不會mod有App向的難度 >_<
   
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bossandy wrote:

• Hi hi~ request from my queue~
  　

1. 紅 : 是我覺得一並要改的
2. 藍 : 建議 但個人認為要改的
3. 黑 : 就單純建議
   　
   [ General ]
   　
4. 關於Lead-In的秒數 請把他改成0 ( 除了Taikocalypse X難度 ) 不是從剛開始3秒左右開始 不需要Lead-In 改了
5. 加個Red Timing Section吧 Offset : 160 BPM : 90 我知道這裡沒有擺東西 但是如果要讓節奏有在音樂上 就必須加這個Timing 嗯, 加了。不过前奏貌似是235的1/3拍。。taikocalypse难度里有。。

6. rules wrote:

   You must use hitsounds. Without these, things get way too monotonous as you are throwing away one of the main elements of variation present in mapping. You don't need to place them on every note (and are discouraged from doing so), but they must at least be frequently heard when playing.

   ^^^不看下不? 雖然有音效 但是好像才幾個finish而已>_< 最簡單的兩個難度 hard我觉得有很多了啊... easy就是第三白线clap下去的...
   　
   [ Standard ]
   　
7. 01:13:062 (1) - NC沒什麼用處 fixed
   　
   [ Hardcore ]
   　
8. 01:56:850 (9) - 這放到下個slider的開頭上打起來比較舒服 fixed
   　
   [ Lolicore ]
   　
9. 鬼畜啊.. 我不會mod有App向的難度 >_<
   
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BPM235 這太鬼畜了 我能做BPM差不多160或以下的歌 >_< 嗯
Good Luck :3

1. Song folder - SatoriDePonTaikoBG233.jpg - i think this is not a character related to the song. ( maybe character of the mirai nikki ? ) Can you look for other BG? If not found, there is no need to change.
2. Song folder - soft-sliderslide,slidertick.wav - Both silence are unrankable. Please delete either
   
   This is the Rule

   Hitsounds from hitcircles and sliders must be audible. These provide feedback for the player, and having them silent in a rhythm game doesn't make much sense. If you don't like the default sounds, then find replacements rather than silencing notes. You can use hitsounds from the Custom Hitsound Library or easily find others online. Lowering the volume of a few notes to provide a dampened effect is usually fine, but complete silence is always unacceptable. The end of a spinner (or even the entire spinner) the sliding sound of a slider, and the end of a slider can be silent, but only do it if it makes sense. Finally, you cannot silence both slider ticks and slider slides together.
3. Song folder - soft-hitclap2 - This is not used as far as I looked. Please delete the file not to use
4. Song Setup - Storyboarding - Display epilepsy warning - Only Taiko Oni is different. Please remove the check. If you do not want to use the SB, there is no need to check
5. KIAI TIME - 01:48:807~02:05:147 - 01:48:807start⇒change to 01:40:637. because 01:40:637~ and 01:48:807~ , are the same rhythm and tension.

1. AR -1 or -2 ( i think too fast )
2. 00:56:467 (2,3) - grid move to 2:x392,y120 , 3:x336,y88. it is better to flow ? ( use grid size 4 tiny )
3. 01:13:062 (3) - add NC and 01:15:105 (3) - add NC is better imo
   
   there is no problem to map but since you are not using only clap, it seems a little lonely hitsound to me

1. 00:32:211 (4,5) - 00:31:190 (1,2,3) - i think this has better same pattern. 00:31:573 (2) - remove or 00:32:594 - add note.
2. 01:03:616 (1) - remove NC and 01:03:871 (2) - add NC ? ( same as 01:11:403 (7,1) ? )
3. 01:58:764 (7) - add NC and 01:59:403 (1) - remove NC ( same as others NC)
4. 02:04:126 (7) - 02:05:147 (1) - remove note. and 02:04:126 (7) - end 02:05:147 is better imo. because i think a sound continues to there
5. 02:12:296 (5) - same as ^
   
   When you use the jump, you are using a DS about 2.0x. And this distance is the same when using the DS1.0x 1/1rhythm , I think confusing when play for the first time.
   for ex: 00:37:318 (3,4) , 00:46:509 (4,5) , 01:06:935 (5,6) etc

1. 00:42:935 (2) - add NC ( 00:42:935 (1,2) - hard jump to me >< )
2. 01:07:445 (8,9,1) - Is very difficult to read too much overlap Can you not take some distance?
3. 01:11:403 (4,5,1) - ^
4. 01:31:509 (3) - add note ? sound continues from here to 01:31:573 ?
5. 02:17:467 (1,1) - you can use the double spinner here. 02:17:467 (1) - end 02:20:403 , 02:20:722 (1) - end 02:20:467

kosiga wrote:

hi~ CSGA Ar3sgice

from m4m queue ~

here my mod and sorry, for late

[General]

1. Song folder - SatoriDePonTaikoBG233.jpg - i think this is not a character related to the song. ( maybe character of the mirai nikki ? ) Can you look for other BG? If not found, there is no need to change. it's the mapper~
2. Song folder - soft-sliderslide,slidertick.wav - Both silence are unrankable. Please delete either fixed ~
3. Song folder - soft-hitclap2 - This is not used as far as I looked. Please delete the file not to use ok ~
4. Song Setup - Storyboarding - Display epilepsy warning - Only Taiko Oni is different. Please remove the check. If you do not want to use the SB, there is no need to check uncheck ~
5. KIAI TIME - 01:48:807~02:05:147 - 01:48:807start⇒change to 01:40:637. because 01:40:637~ and 01:48:807~ , are the same rhythm and tension. no..

[Standard]

1. AR -1 or -2 ( i think too fast ) ok
2. 00:56:467 (2,3) - grid move to 2:x392,y120 , 3:x336,y88. it is better to flow ? ( use grid size 4 tiny ) ok
3. 01:13:062 (3) - add NC and 01:15:105 (3) - add NC is better imo
   
   there is no problem to map but since you are not using only clap, it seems a little lonely hitsound to me making easy diff is very hard.. >_>

[Hardcore]

1. 00:32:211 (4,5) - 00:31:190 (1,2,3) - i think this has better same pattern. 00:31:573 (2) - remove or 00:32:594 - add note. it is easier to play with diferent patterns I think~
2. 01:03:616 (1) - remove NC and 01:03:871 (2) - add NC ? ( same as 01:11:403 (7,1) ? ) ok ~
3. 01:58:764 (7) - add NC and 01:59:403 (1) - remove NC ( same as others NC) no I think this is fine ~
4. 02:04:126 (7) - 02:05:147 (1) - remove note. and 02:04:126 (7) - end 02:05:147 is better imo. because i think a sound continues to there don't want to make it too long ~
5. 02:12:296 (5) - same as ^
   
   When you use the jump, you are using a DS about 2.0x. And this distance is the same when using the DS1.0x 1/1rhythm , I think confusing when play for the first time.
   for ex: 00:37:318 (3,4) , 00:46:509 (4,5) , 01:06:935 (5,6) etc I like this kind of slider end jumps

[Lolicore]

1. 00:42:935 (2) - add NC ( 00:42:935 (1,2) - hard jump to me >< ) no
2. 01:07:445 (8,9,1) - Is very difficult to read too much overlap Can you not take some distance? ok, fixed~
3. 01:11:403 (4,5,1) - ^ this has stack~
4. 01:31:509 (3) - add note ? sound continues from here to 01:31:573 ? no 0.0
5. 02:17:467 (1,1) - you can use the double spinner here. 02:17:467 (1) - end 02:20:403 , 02:20:722 (1) - end 02:20:467 I like this way, no change~

Good luck ~

• General
  01:32:977 (Break) I don't think you need it, one break should be enough. Ignore if you no like.
  00:09:488 (1) - You got a bpm for this part for a reason, you should use it. I don't think having unsnapped notes is rankable as well, especially one you can see so clearly. It's done on purpose, but I really dislike it. Its hard for a player to catch out first thing in the song and its quite unprofessional to do this for a map for rank. Use Timing --> Resnap and Timing --> Recalculate Slider Length. That's why we need those options
  
  Standard
  00:26:594 - No new combo
  00:27:105 - New combo here. If you hear it is just as the part at 00:31:190, which you did place new combo at.
  00:28:126 - No new combo.
  00:29:147 - New combo.
  00:34:764 (4) - 2 grids to the right, so that it is on the same x as (3) ends at, that looks better. Distance snap the fallowing notes.
  01:56:467 - No new combo. New combo at (2). Look at how u done it previously, 1:03:871, you didn't start this slider with a new combo, so don't do it with this one.
  02:11:275 (1) - 1 grid down
  02:11:786 (2) - 1 grid to the left.
  
  Hardcore
  Have to say, its a shame you didn't just made faster slider by changing slider velocity, because it would totally suit the beatmap to have speedy sliders as well as higher spacing, as it is a bit overmapped. A song does not need to be overmapped to make it hard though, a higher slider velocity and bigger spacing could make up for it, that's why you could have had less notes to press but it still would be hard as the spacing would be bigger. Beatmaps which too many notes but small slider velo and spacing most of the time end up being impossible for mouse players. You might like to think about it, but I understand it is a lot of work so I won't nag you. Take caution with your next beatmap..?
  Oh, and also... Higher the HP Drain Rate as all the little sliders such as at 01:15:105 can make a player go from nearly drained HP bar to fully regenerated one, lol. Make it 7 or 8?
  00:30:552 (5) - Try not to cover sliders with sliders, put this slider a bit further from (4) so that they don't go over each other.
  00:47:530 - I suggest placing a beat here as tall white slider ticks are the most important ticks as far as I am concerned, as they are the first tick you hear in a set of 4.
  01:14:339 (2,4) - Make it exciting just before the break - Don't snap 2 together with 1 or 4 together with 3. I would jumps here personally.
  01:26:339 (1) - 3 grids up?
  01:53:275 - Maybe remove (2), move the slider after forward to where it was and repeat? I think it sounds better.
  
  Lolicore
  00:23:275 (2) - Symmetry here. (2) should be the same as (1) turned horizontaly + verticaly.
  00:23:786 (4) - Again symmetry. (4) = (3) turned horizontaly + vertically.
  00:34:892 (1) - 2 grids up and one grid to the left.Should then make a diagonal slider lane, so the 2nd gray circle should be a bit higher than it is currently.
  00:36:424 (6,7) - Should be placed directly under (5), if it doesn't fit then put (5) a bit higher. (7) should be a straight slider as well I think...
  02:04:764 (?) - I'm certain that it is unrankable, as you can't see that those are sliders.
  02:07:062 - New combo

Jebok wrote:

OK, finally got to modding this! Sorry for the lateness, had an essay to do... good luck on that

• General
  01:32:977 (Break) I don't think you need it, one break should be enough. Ignore if you no like.
  00:09:488 (1) - You got a bpm for this part for a reason, you should use it. I don't think having unsnapped notes is rankable as well, especially one you can see so clearly. It's done on purpose, but I really dislike it. Its hard for a player to catch out first thing in the song and its quite unprofessional to do this for a map for rank. Use Timing --> Resnap and Timing --> Recalculate Slider Length. That's why we need those options this is just 1/3, not unsnap
  
  Standard
  00:26:594 - No new combo
  00:27:105 - New combo here. If you hear it is just as the part at 00:31:190, which you did place new combo at.
  00:28:126 - No new combo.
  00:29:147 - New combo. fixed
  00:34:764 (4) - 2 grids to the right, so that it is on the same x as (3) ends at, that looks better. Distance snap the fallowing notes. don't like 0.0
  01:56:467 - No new combo. New combo at (2). Look at how u done it previously, 1:03:871, you didn't start this slider with a new combo, so don't do it with this one.
  02:11:275 (1) - 1 grid down
  02:11:786 (2) - 1 grid to the left. no..
  
  Hardcore
  Have to say, its a shame you didn't just made faster slider by changing slider velocity, because it would totally suit the beatmap to have speedy sliders as well as higher spacing, as it is a bit overmapped. A song does not need to be overmapped to make it hard though, a higher slider velocity and bigger spacing could make up for it, that's why you could have had less notes to press but it still would be hard as the spacing would be bigger. Beatmaps which too many notes but small slider velo and spacing most of the time end up being impossible for mouse players. You might like to think about it, but I understand it is a lot of work so I won't nag you. Take caution with your next beatmap..? I think for a Hard diff this SV is fine, also I can play it with mouse, don't think that's a problem 0.0
  Oh, and also... Higher the HP Drain Rate as all the little sliders such as at 01:15:105 can make a player go from nearly drained HP bar to fully regenerated one, lol. Make it 7 or 8? no lol that would go over lolicore diff
  00:30:552 (5) - Try not to cover sliders with sliders, put this slider a bit further from (4) so that they don't go over each other. I like this style 0.0
  00:47:530 - I suggest placing a beat here as tall white slider ticks are the most important ticks as far as I am concerned, as they are the first tick you hear in a set of 4. 0.0 what no, have a rest.
  01:14:339 (2,4) - Make it exciting just before the break - Don't snap 2 together with 1 or 4 together with 3. I would jumps here personally.
  01:26:339 (1) - 3 grids up? don't like...
  01:53:275 - Maybe remove (2), move the slider after forward to where it was and repeat? I think it sounds better. ..
  
  Lolicore
  00:23:275 (2) - Symmetry here. (2) should be the same as (1) turned horizontaly + verticaly. i tried 0.0 doesn't work
  00:23:786 (4) - Again symmetry. (4) = (3) turned horizontaly + vertically.
  00:34:892 (1) - 2 grids up and one grid to the left.Should then make a diagonal slider lane, so the 2nd gray circle should be a bit higher than it is currently. I didn't use grids here 0.0 and what's gray circle
  00:36:424 (6,7) - Should be placed directly under (5), if it doesn't fit then put (5) a bit higher. (7) should be a straight slider as well I think...
  02:04:764 (?) - I'm certain that it is unrankable, as you can't see that those are sliders. that's just 1/8.. very easy to read for me.. slider = no approach circle, I think...
  02:07:062 - New combo ok

Leorda wrote:

Hi there

[General]
* Remove OSB files in your mapset


[Standard]
00:32:211 (2) - The tail slider is almost offscreen


[Lolicore]
02:20:722 (1) - Move to 02:20:530 and extend it for let players having enough time to complete the spinner


that's all I can find, sorry

yongtw123 wrote:

:o ooh my what kind of BPM is this...

[Standard]
00:32:211 (2) - a bit too close with (1) (this is nazi lol) fix
02:21:488 (5) - how about add a finish? ok

[Hardcore]
This is quite a difficulty jump from [Standard] I think it's ok because it's another jump to [Loli]
why not try some real claps like in [Lolicore]?
00:19:318 (2) - i'm not sure if this diff should have this kind of jump, IMO it's too hard though, highly suggest you to remove them (and if you do, please do so to the other similar jumps as well) it's ok for me..
01:12:041 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - why is there no hitsound for the first four and all claps on the last four? you could have well put claps on (2,4)? ok
02:01:062 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^ similar changed something

[Taiko Oni] & [Taikocalypse X]
can't mod taiko

[Lolicore]
Seriously, this level of difficulty is meant for Approved... but who knows :O I think the score is ok, who knows \:D/
00:14:722 (7) - why stack under (6)? close effect
01:26:850 (2,3) - too close; try to make (1,2,3) evenly spaced 1/1 randomspacing is fine foe this diff for me
01:47:403 (5,6,7,1,2,3) - i don't really get the rhythm here, it's not really following the song 3/3
01:47:850 (3) - are you sure the whistle is placed correctly? is

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This is a crazy mapset :O

Good luck!

ikari_kyon wrote:

even the rules says that approved status is only for long songs and more than 18kk score, some users says something like "approval style", but that doesnt exist, it dont care how hard a map is, if its under 18kk score and under 4 minutes is absolutelly rankable, oh Im here for your post on timing help, I just got +5 on second red timeline, if you think is unnecesary dont change it

ikari_kyon wrote:

oh yeah, maybe just maybe add this tags: breakcore (is music genre that goreshit is encompassed) and DCRPS018 (the album where this song was released with other artists Odaxelagnia, Akamushi and Reizoko CJ), also Dance Corps says something about Dancecore on release of this album, but Im not sure at all about this last, but you added lolicore and hardcore tags, so maybe
dont kds again
Edit: use a satori bg for the other taiko diff please >_<

wcx19911123 wrote:

from my queue

[General]
this song need 1 more red timing section at song's beginning ?????
Taikocalypse X diff's lead-in change to 2000 ok
taiko diff(Taikocalypse X) mustn't use kiai fountain ?
no kiai time in Taiko Oni?

[Standard]
OD+1, it's too low as a Normal diff imo no

[Hardcore]
00:18:935 (1,2,3) - this jump is really too hard to read, it makes people think 00:19:318 (2,3) - start at 00:19:445 - , this is confusing, better to change a pattern here no, I think it's easy to do.
00:20:594 (7,8) - ^
00:27:105 (1,2,3) - spacing.. fix
00:37:701 (4) - same as before
^, I ignore same suggestions from now
01:15:105 (5) - this should be 1/4 slider, if you want to keep 1/8, plz change to 1/8 slider from 01:15:743 - ok fix
01:31:445 (6) - ^
02:04:126 (7) - ^
^, I ignore same suggestions from now

[Taiko Oni]
just saying, are you sure the character in the BG is the right one? is mapper

[Lolicore]
00:43:062 (3) - this jump is too huge imo no, i can de this jump so it's not too large.
01:07:445 (8,9,1) - stack better plz, this is hard to read.. fixed some, it's because reverse arrow hides when jumping
02:00:935 (1) - jump too huge imo no, i can de this jump so it's not too large.

that's all
crazy map, but it need much more work atm imo ok~

eikkaleyd wrote:

这都是长喜好好的用英语mod的错（踹）

1. What logic in kiai? In the last one kiai must starts there - 01:40:637, buuut it's starts there - 01:48:807 D: May be you will add fountain there 01:40:637?
2. And what reason to remove letterbox? i think they're not interfere

1. 01:32:467 (3) - add finish

1. 00:09:488 - tooooo loud, 40% volume will be better
2. 00:19:445 (3,4) - wrong rythm, and hard to play it, i suggest you to remap better this combo, something like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:32:594 - missed note, add please
4. 01:26:211 (5) - remove it

1. Same thing with the volume
2. Wha what D: people screamin' D: it's kinda strange. This sound is too long and sounds bad
3. 01:31:573 (2,3,4,5) - this part must start there - 01:31:445

OnosakiHito wrote:

Okay, Taikosaki has been converted now. Thank you for accepting it!
Also you can find the - probably - right timing in my diff.. It's the first red-line.
Zapys SB is also included in my Taiko diff. Don't worry, I may use it.

07:21 <Backfire> : You removed storyboard I hope?
07:21 <[CSGA]Ar3sgice> : oh.. no
07:21 <Backfire> : You might want to :3
07:21 <[CSGA]Ar3sgice> : i think it's fine :3
07:21 <[CSGA]Ar3sgice> : ahahaha
07:21 <Backfire> : But
07:21 <Backfire> : You did not create it

OnosakiHito wrote:

Don't worry about the SB, as I said before, I may use it since I talked to Zapy allready.
Giving credit to him is also okay.

I will look later one more time through Backfires diff.. o/

Unrankable if in red and bold
Consider if in bold only
Suggested if in normal font

Megurine Luka wrote:

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