here u got nice white star from me

fun stuff right here i love how you made it fast in a slow song that takes skill.
STAR for you <3

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blue and white
the whole theme looks comfortable

the bpm very interesting, but seems fine

Nice beatmap and song

Very nice, quite enjoyable.
Have a nice shiny star.

* Easy = Perfectly fine, fun and easy.
* Hard = Really fun and challenging, nothing wrong with it. Good placement on notes and sliders.
* Normal = Perfectly fine also, good slider shapes, note positions, and spinners.
* Sir Minelli Style = Really frantic and tricky and at the same time really enjoyable, the stacks of notes are awesome and the overall placement of the notes and sliders fits well. I just suggest changing some jumps on the very close to the end.

adklsfj I love this <3 so much blue <3<3

*starstarstarstarstar*

ALL: This song uses compound timing. In other words, set your beatsnap divisor to 1/3 (or possibly 1/6 for harder difficulties) The red tick (1/2) does not fall on any actual beat of this song, therefore everything you have placed on a red tick should be moved to the next purple tick (in 1/3 snap) unless you really like it the way it sounds.


[Easy]

Now, looking at [Easy] I get the impression you knew intuitively that the red ticks didn't seem to fit the song, and you mostly avoided them. There's a couple of short sliders that bounce on red, but I think those are okay, so you probably don't need to change them, but you can if you want to.

01:33:26 (6) - I think this would sound better if it started on the (2/3) purple before white (not the 5/6 purple if you are on 1/6 snap).

[Normal]

Again, looks like you were avoiding red, but make sure you move any red ticks you find here to their next purple tick in (1/3) and it will sound *much* better.

[Hard]
*NOTE* I wish this were as easy as a 1/3 snap all notes, but sadly, it snaps to the wrong purple each time (each bar has two purple ticks)

00:08:25 (2) - Move later to next purple tick
00:09:48 (6) - Move later to next purple tick
00:11:56 (1,2,3) - All of these need to be extended to end on next purple tick.
00:15:32 (2) - next purple tick
00:15:64 (4) - next purple tick
00:16:42 (7) - next purple tick
00:16:81 (9) - next purple tick
00:18:37 (2) - next purple tick
00:18:75 (4) - next purple tick
00:20:31 (7) - next purple tick
.. in fact, as I continued down this list, they are ALL basically getting you to move hit circles falling on red ticks onto the immediately next purple tick.

Ok, actually the fastest way to fix this up, set to 1/3, and drag every single hitcircle falling on a red tick onto the immediately next purple tick. In 1/3 timing, 1/2 is not an even split. only 1/3, 2/3 and 3/3 are. You cannot have a single note falling on a red tick, or else it'll not actually fall on a beat (despite being exactly 1/2 way between each white).

If you have a slider that doesn't rebound, and ends on red, simply extend it a bit. Rebounding sliders may require a bit more creativity, but what sounded good to me was eliminating the rebound, extending to purple and adding a hit circle on the next white tick.

[Sir Minelli style]
because it's your style I leave it to you

but now that you know about 1/3 timing I bet you can fix it right up now.

I'll come back and star this once you fix the timing. It's a great song, and your map has good form to it. I'm confused by the dandelion fluffing though (Biidama is Japanese for marbles)

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While it's probably not necessary to change every instance of a red tick, the rhythm of the song is falling on purple ticks, which you have avoided every time. The 1/3 pattern carries the rhythm of the song so I feel it is important to use purple ticks regularly. Please change at least some of the recurring patterns so they hit when they are supposed to. I can't star this until you resolve this timing issue.

james039 wrote:

While it's probably not necessary to change every instance of a red tick, the rhythm of the song is falling on purple ticks, which you have avoided every time. The 1/3 pattern carries the rhythm of the song so I feel it is important to use purple ticks regularly. Please change at least some of the recurring patterns so they hit when they are supposed to. I can't star this until you resolve this timing issue.

I know what you mean, but i won't change anything unless a BAT asks so.
To me it is good as it is. it can be mapped rather in 1/3 - 1/4 or however you want to map it. Point is, it should sound/play ok, and it does.

Thanks for the opinion though.

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[Easy]
00:24:40 (1) - hitsound
00:54:74 (9) - try a different hitsound
02:12:94 (1) - try a finish on the end
02:16:06 (4) - try removing finish from end (lol)
03:53:34 (4) - end on red tick


[Normal]
02:16:06 (7) - remove finish from end
02:35:12 (1) - hitsound
03:29:20 (10) - finish?
maybe move the last inherit section earlier to silence the slider ticks? inno


[Hard]
00:15:06 (1,2,3,4,5) - hitsounds?
01:21:20 (1,2,3/4,5,6) - parallel hitsounds
02:35:12 (1) - hitsound?


[Insane]
02:03:61 (8) - try a finish
02:35:13 (1) - hitsound?

<Normal> <Hard>
03:18:31 (2) - i am not sure if it is ok

Very good hitsounds using
softfinish fits the song

only one suggestion
i think <insane> is a bit overmapped
but your hitsounds are good so the map sounds fine
Maybe use some jumps to replace streams

good job
star~

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Takuma wrote:

Looks fine to me. Except that I agree with Alace about Insane. I don't think this song deserves a lot of that 1/4 stuff. >w<
It's a nice, calm song. It's not my map anyway, so... ;P
Bubbled!

Thx for the ingame mod.

I like insane's style and i appreciate both yours and Alace comments. But if the map can get ranked as it is, then i wont change it. I think those stacks give that difficulty its own style.

[Easy]
00:16:23 (8) - finish?


[Normal]
00:11:56 (1) - ok the alignment on this keeps bugging me but its your choice
00:16:23 (1,2,3) - i dont like the finish mash
00:18:56 (4) - finish?
01:00:97 (2) - remove whistle
03:32:31 (1) - finish instead of clap


[Hard]
00:18:56 (3,4) - hitsound 3 instead of 4
00:33:73 (1) - o-o wtf anti-jump
02:25:78 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - hitsounds sound off in this section
03:32:31 (1) - finish
03:43:59 (1) - move the whistle to the other end

contact me as soon as you finish this set of suggestions

ok this map should be fully rankable now.

Edit: bubbled

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1 request.

please stop changing the diff names all the time D:
i'm redownloading now for the fifth time or so.

Slight nazi modding because this part really looks terrible, both in play and editor.

Normal:
01:01:75 (4) - Straighten this slider out, like 01:02:91 (5) is.
And before anyone tells me to actually PLAY the map, I did, and said "Ew."

oh if only updating didnt cause auto pop, i'd rank as soon as you fix'd. ill try and get this looked at asap.

Guess editing my post wont rebubble it? o.O

Ranked.