hi!!

Nice~MAP~:) (*´д｀*)

Thx suirenn05 ><

恩mod完了
這兩個難度很輕鬆
祝早日ranked啊 ~

DarknessAngel wrote:

Easy

1. 00:06:964 (3) - 這finish不符合音樂，刪掉它 Done
2. 00:17:797 (4) - 尾部放上whistle，感覺比較好 Done
3. 00:21:964 (3) - 比照你之前設定的方式，箭頭上加whistle Done
4. 00:43:631 (4) - 第一個箭頭上加whistle嗎 ? 這裡感覺有點空 Done
5. 00:48:631 (1) - ^ Done
6. 我現在才發現你的拉長條方式可以既簡單又漂亮，我也來學學...(我拉長條總是拉很久OAQ) 誇獎了>< 不過到Ins我就拉得很醜了~ 所以將來您給GD我接的話，我比較擅長接Easy

[/notice]

恩mod完了
這兩個難度很輕鬆
祝早日ranked啊 ~

謝謝modding~

Why is nold's difficulty called nlold's?

Anyways.
Taiko -
00:51:964 (3) - kat
00:53:631 (1) - finish
01:06:964 (2) - ^
01:13:631 (1) - ^
01:20:298 (1) - ^
You used way too much kkd ddk and such. Try using some more variety next time.
It was still good though. :X

Backfire wrote:

Why is nold's difficulty called nlold's?

Creator's requirement

Thank you for your modding.

>Backfire
Fix all of them :3
I'll pay attention next time.
Thanks for your modding!

>妹妹
offset有问题 打起来很差 Colin的那个offset还稍微好点 后面不行了，我还是喜欢自己的278.
反正也没改 后面有人吐槽再说吧。

Download: Misato Aki - Spread Wings. (TV Size) (ertyukjh010) [KS's Taiko].osu

KayeSara wrote:

>妹妹
offset有问题 打起来很差 Colin的那个offset还稍微好点 后面不行了，我还是喜欢自己的278.
反正也没改 后面有人吐槽再说吧。

這樣啊
我改天再找KPY和Kana測一下Timing看看

Timing:

1. 1. Offset: 5,284ms
   BPM: 144.00

OFFSET減少14ms

謝謝KPY ^^

Hi ~ ertyukjh010 ~

M4M here ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions




That's all ~

Good luck ~

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ ertyukjh010 ~

[General]

1. Remove video audio pls. 這個影片我放進我的軟件轉檔後，會加速一倍= =神奇啊。所以這個饒了我啦，因為都不是必要的
2. Using same KIAI time pls. 統一中....
3. Remove Letterbox during breaks,because have video. Done

謝謝日卡的mod

話說日卡是用甚麼轉影片程式，能介紹我嗎

From my mod~~

[General]
00:11:950 这的声音好像有点低了，70%或许更好些，结尾处音量最好也高些

[Easy]
00:15:284(1)- remove finish
00:21:950(3)- ^
00:26:950(3)- ^
00:30:284(5)- ^
后面的都如此....finish只在每段开始放一个就好~~(其实这个应该算在general里...)

[Barry's Normal]
00:24:450(5)- new combo

[Nlold's Wings]
00:48:617(1)- remove new combo

[Insane]
00:19:450(1)- remove new combo
01:05:284(1)- 后边的6个建议做成两个往返一次的slider，不然让人感觉很疑惑~~

[Saya]
00:10:700(8)- remove new combo and at 00:11:325 add it
nice!

很好的一张map,希望早日能RANK,good luck!

AstroniX wrote:

From my mod~~

[General]
00:11:950 这的声音好像有点低了，70%或许更好些，结尾处音量最好也高些 額，但是我的Easy是用80% 0.0

[Easy]
00:15:284(1)- remove finish Done
00:21:950(3)- ^ Done
00:26:950(3)- ^ Done
00:30:284(5)- ^ Done, 我還真的腦殘的放多了1倍的Finish www
后面的都如此....finish只在每段开始放一个就好~~(其实这个应该算在general里...) general其實是放一些地圖版面以外的東西:3 例如Timing、setup之類的

[Insane]
00:19:450(1)- remove new combo 不用，這個NC是必須的
01:05:284(1)- 后边的6个建议做成两个往返一次的slider，不然让人感觉很疑惑~~ 突然用Slider反然讓人不能適應Jump~雖然也有可能誤讀成1/4就是

謝謝modding

M4M~
以下只是建議~不喜歡可以略過 OAO

[General]
影片怎麼還有聲音...想辦法去除掉吧!!(找人幫忙去除都可以)

[Easy]
沒有我可以建議的了...QAQ

[Barry's Normal]
01:08:617 (3) - slider頭加個finish?!

[Nlold's Wings]
找不到可以建議的了 OTZ

[Insane]
同上...OTZ

[Saya]
01:18:617 - 這綠線是不是多了?!

只找到這些><"非常抱歉!!!
TK無能mod OTZ

Good song and map~
Star~

l1106188 wrote:

M4M~

[General]
影片怎麼還有聲音...想辦法去除掉吧!!(找人幫忙去除都可以) 我軟件無能~將這個影片轉檔不知道怎麼會自動加速一倍=口=不過反正影片有聲音也可以Rank，所以饒了我吧

只找到這些><"非常抱歉!!!
不要緊^^我主要是想找人充回覆數（被打）
因為要4、5頁 MAT才願意過來
TK無能mod OTZ

Good song and map~
Star~

謝謝modding ^^

No change

Hi

Easy:
I did not find anything, in my opinion is pretty good o.o

Barry's Normal:
00:50:908 (5) - And if you take away the repetition and end up where it ended? http://puu.sh/iS0B According to me, sounds better o.o
01:00:908 (2) - And if you remove the unnecessary slidertick? http://puu.sh/iS2B
01:14:867 (3) - (personal opinion) And if you start at 01:14:867 and end up in 01:15:284 ?

Nlold's Wings:
Why so short that the kiai? o.o
Some Inherited point are unsnapped D:
I feel this bad spacing... Although it is a "Hard"... This very uneven... imo
00:32:784 (4) - End slidertick 1 grid up

Insane:
Good diff :3
01:11:117 (1,2,3,4) - I feel that they are not symmetric o.o
01:17:783 (1) - 1 grid down
01:18:200 (3) - 1 grid up
01:19:034 (3) - 1 grid right
01:19:242 (4) - 2 grid right

Well, I'm not good at this, I did everything I could >_<
Sorry for my bad English D:
Good work, good luck

Fenya wrote:

Hi

Easy:
I did not find anything, in my opinion is pretty good o.o :3

Insane:
Good diff :3
01:11:117 (1,2,3,4) - I feel that they are not symmetric o.o Yes, It's not symmetric.
01:17:783 (1) - 1 grid down Good idea, Done
01:18:200 (3) - 1 grid up Done
01:19:034 (3) - 1 grid right Done
01:19:242 (4) - 2 grid right Done

Well, I'm not good at this, I did everything I could >_<
Sorry for my bad English D:
Good work, good luck

Thank you for your modding

Nlold's Wings:

00:06:950 (1,2,3,4) - mark these anti jumps with new combos or something, without I thought they were a stream at first.
00:10:075 (6) - stack this ontop of 00:10:284 (1)?
00:40:908 (1) - remove new combo
00:45:283 (1) - add a finisher to the start?
00:53:200 (1) - remove new combo

Insane:

OD 6 maybe?

00:23:409 (1) - remove new combo
00:24:450 (1) - ^
00:26:117 (1) - ^
00:27:784 (1) - ^ (Why all this new combo spam? When you didn't even do it again the 3rd time you used this pattern.)
00:55:908 (1) - ^

KS's Taiko:

HP Drain 6-7, OD 6. Never leave settings in the middle, makes things to easy.

Why does the BPM rate change? Keep it at a constant rate the whole song, x1.0 or x1.2, pick one. What you should do though is keep it x1.0 until the kiai, and let the whole kiai have a speed up. That's how speed up are formaly done and noticed in taiko. The points after the kiai should be a constant rate aswell.



Overveiw:

Didn't mod the other diffs because I thought they were fine. I like this set, you get a star.

MMzz wrote:

Insane:

OD 6 maybe? Yes but I have to wait and after consider "Saya" diff's score

00:23:409 (1) - remove new combo Done
00:24:450 (1) - ^ X
00:26:117 (1) - ^ X
00:27:784 (1) - ^ (Why all this new combo spam? When you didn't even do it again the 3rd time you used this pattern.) X
00:55:908 (1) - ^ X, 1 color 1 distance :3 This is to facilitate the player to read

Overveiw:

Didn't mod the other diffs because I thought they were fine. I like this set, you get a star. Thank your Star :3

Thank you for your modding

Saya

• 00:16:742 (1) - 這裡開始都是紅線NC，為何

Nlold's wings

• 00:53:200 (1) - 這個位置NC只是在使讀譜更困難

Barry's Normal

• 00:33:200 (3,4) -
  

That all

謝謝mod

已上傳

fixed some~
Thanks guys :>

Download: Misato Aki - Spread Wings. (TV Size) (ertyukjh010) [Barry's Normal].osu

已上傳

Heres my moddd :3

Easy
00:24:450 I think it sounds great if you use finish hitsound at the whole slider :3

Barry's Normal
Nothing special

Nllod's Wings
00:19:867 I think this part kinda looks odd :< Change it? C:
00:52:992 No new combo needed :3
01:14:034 Put some spacing here

Insane
00:59:450 Definitly way too huge spacing XD

Saya
01:02:575 Instead of stacking it onto the slider, why not put them between circle 3 and slider 5?

O_o XD

SkyDevil wrote:

Heres my moddd :3

Easy
00:24:450 I think it sounds great if you use finish hitsound at the whole slider :3 Done

Insane
00:59:450 Definitly way too huge spacing XD I will consider

Thank you

SkyDevil wrote:

Nllod's Wings
00:19:867 I think this part kinda looks odd :< Change it? C: My style is odd.
00:52:992 No new combo needed :3 New slider speed change,therefore put NC
01:14:034 Put some spacing here Still readable and good

NO Change

WUT?

General

• • Inconsistency in Kiai Times if you can see here:

Easy

• - 00:41:950 (3) - New combo to follow the music?
  - 00:50:284 (1) - Considered to move this spinner to 1/2 in my opinion,looks nice

Barry

• -- Looks great

Nlold

• -- Add a kiai here 00:53:617 for being consistent with the other diffs?

Taiko

• -- Looks nice but you have a unsnapped section here 00:53:623,resnap then

Insane

• - 00:27:784 (1) - Remove new combo like you did it here 00:29:450

Saya

• - 00:25:284 (4) - New combo to follow your pattern

So i'm done with this good luck

MoodyRPG wrote:

General

• • Inconsistency in Kiai Times if you can see here: Nold don't want to change :<

Easy

• - 00:41:950 (3) - New combo to follow the music? Done
  - 00:50:284 (1) - Considered to move this spinner to 1/2 in my opinion,looks nice X

Insane

• - 00:27:784 (1) - Remove new combo like you did it here 00:29:450 1 Distance 1 Color

Thank you for your modding

只做前兩個mod orz 明天交可以嗎orz..

Download: Misato Aki - Spread Wings. (TV Size) (ertyukjh010) [Saya].osu

已上傳:3

Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

Just suggestions & nazi mod:

[Normal]

01:07:575 (2) - 感觉最好这里有个note

[Nlold's Wings]

00:47:992 (5,6,7) - nazi -往右移一格
01:12:783 (2,3,4,5,1) - 五边形有点歪，(3)和两边都有重合，其他地方却没有

[Saya]

00:12:783 (2,3,4,5,1) - 排成正五边形？
01:00:700 (2,3,4) - 这个三连移到(1)的后面？

[Insane]

00:26:117 (1,2,3,4) - 不是正方形（只是提醒一下）
00:27:784 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:34:450 (2,3) - 我觉得平行比较好
00:56:742 (5,1) - 包围得不是很好
01:03:617 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 连着用同一个梗，并且附近都是circle的梗显得有些单调，我觉得重复2次足够了。
01:18:617 (1,2,3,4) - 故意不做成正方形的吗？
01:23:617 (1) - 变音量没必要吧。。直接消声就好了

GL~

popner wrote:

Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

Just suggestions & nazi mod:

[Insane]

00:26:117 (1,2,3,4) - 不是正方形（只是提醒一下） 已修正成正方形，謝謝指出:3
00:27:784 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^
00:34:450 (2,3) - 我觉得平行比较好 Done
00:56:742 (5,1) - 包围得不是很好 orz
01:03:617 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 连着用同一个梗，并且附近都是circle的梗显得有些单调，我觉得重复2次足够了。 Done
01:18:617 (1,2,3,4) - 故意不做成正方形的吗？ Done
01:23:617 (1) - 变音量没必要吧。。直接消声就好了 既然做了就沒差:3

GL~

謝謝mod

All fixed

MOD累積太多 我就不一一回覆了>< 感謝各位MOD 以上除了HP AR OD 等難度沒變 其他都照MOD的改了

Download: Misato Aki - Spread Wings. (TV Size) (ertyukjh010) [Saya].osu

已上傳

Hi ~ has per your requeue ~ only check Hard diff.

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions


That's all ~ fight go ranked ~

Insane

00:40:284 (1,2,3) - Follow this rhythm http://puu.sh/mfZO also add a note in 00:40:075 -
01:01:950 (1,2) - Those sliders doesn't make any sense with the rhythm

Saya

00:27:784 (1) - 1 grid right
X_X

Taiko
HP+1 or OD +1
01:23:513 (1) - Finish this spinner in 01:28:617 -

Easy, Normal and Hard are fine

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ has per your requeue ~ only check Hard diff.

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[Hard]

1. 00:41:534 - Add clap. Done
2. 00:43:200 - ^ Done
3. 00:44:867 - ^ Done
4. 01:05:908 (4,5,6,7,8) - Try like this rhythm,sound much better. 不想碰太多藍線，對於Hard
   

That's all ~ fight go ranked ~

謝謝日卡

Verdisphena wrote:

Insane

00:40:284 (1,2,3) - Follow this rhythm http://puu.sh/mfZO also add a note in 00:40:075 - Done
01:01:950 (1,2) - Those sliders doesn't make any sense with the rhythmDone

Easy, Normal and Hard are fine

Thank you for mod

suggestion ~
[Saya]
- 01:11:950 (5) - add whistle ewe"v

vwxcrossover wrote:

suggestion ~
[Saya]
- 01:11:950 (5) - add whistle ewe"v

Thank you for mod

幫你看了下~~

[Hard]

1. 00:06:325 - 加個圈?
2. 00:20:284 ~ 00:25:284 - 感覺在這邊clap就加2.4拍有點太早了>_< 在00:25:284以後加好些@w@
3. 00:37:784 (5) - 這邊感覺節奏有點怪.. 試試這樣的節奏:3 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/274189
   如果不要的話.. 那也希望能在00:38:409加個圈:3 不然感覺突然停了一下呢~
4. 00:50:596 - clap
5. 00:51:429 - ^
6. 00:52:367 (1,2,3) - 這邊anti-jump間距要不要在小一點試試看? 感覺有點大:3...小點比較有感覺lol 建議0.3~
7. 01:06:117 (5,6,7,8) - 試試看全加clap~~
8. 01:08:617 (1) - finish
9. 01:16:533 (4,5) - 我覺得排成這樣好些:3 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/274183
10. 01:23:200 (2) - 最後這個我覺得往外比較好:3 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/274192
11. 01:23:409 - finish

加油唄:3

12BARRY21 wrote:

幫你看了下~~

[Hard]

1. 00:06:325 - 加個圈? 空著來作為靜音部份吧:3
2. 00:20:284 ~ 00:25:284 - 感覺在這邊clap就加2.4拍有點太早了>_< 在00:25:284以後加好些@w@
3. 00:37:784 (5) - 這邊感覺節奏有點怪.. 試試這樣的節奏:3 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/274189 空著吧
   如果不要的話.. 那也希望能在00:38:409加個圈:3 不然感覺突然停了一下呢~ 漸入減速階段~
4. 00:50:596 - clap Done
5. 00:51:429 - ^ Done
6. 00:52:367 (1,2,3) - 這邊anti-jump間距要不要在小一點試試看? 感覺有點大:3...小點比較有感覺lol 建議0.3~ 嗯，我再後慮看看吧，因為前面是0.5x的說~；第一次做這種減速有點沒經驗:>
7. 01:06:117 (5,6,7,8) - 試試看全加clap~~ 太吵了XDD 評評評評!!!!
8. 01:08:617 (1) - finish 跟著第一段一樣沒Finish好了；因為不想太響（其實是以前我亂加Fibnish導致有恐懼症）
9. 01:16:533 (4,5) - 我覺得排成這樣好些:3 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/274183 Done
10. 01:23:200 (2) - 最後這個我覺得往外比較好:3 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/274192 Done,向左邊吧?上面都碰到生命線了XD
11. 01:23:409 - finish 真仔細++ Done

加油唄:3

謝謝Barry的Mod ><

[General]
are you sure there's a fullstop after wings?

[Insane]
00:48:617 (1) - slider略醜

[Saya]
00:48:825 (1,2,3,4) - 排列不太好看 orz 不過想不到別的方法

[Taiko]
00:53:617 - start kiai here
01:23:617 - leave 1/2 blank before spinner
* kiai之前一大段感覺overmap 也沒大必要一大堆3連 重複ddk kkd ddk也不太好
* 前面該finish的地方沒有finish
===========================
把[Normal], [Hard]的難度拉低一格吧

*在TWC final期間mod，結果呢個mod仲廢過隻豬 : <

wmfchris wrote:

[General]
are you sure there's a fullstop after wings?

再翻查了一下Wiki，有FullStop沒錯

wmfchris wrote:

[Insane]
00:48:617 (1) - slider略醜 換成對稱吧，這種Slider是我早期比較喜歡畫，現在也覺得很醜Orz

*在TWC final期間mod，結果呢個mod仲廢過隻豬 : < 這對我應該是有利啊:3

謝謝Wmf~
因為沒泡泡所以沒KD

哟 抱歉妹妹，最近事情多啊（好像我每次都是这个理由
反正不管那么多了这改了些

>wmf
改了一些重复性节奏和finish的增加，不过你的mod为什么越来越简单了....

Download: Misato Aki - Spread Wings. (TV Size) (ertyukjh010) [KS's Taiko].osu

姐姐大活躍

慢慢做就好了，我又不急Rank~

謝謝姐姐抽空上來改^^

Alright, let's see what I can find.
All suggestion.

[General]
Nothing

[Easy]
Good enough.

[Barry's Normal]
00:16:534(3) - Moving this slider a little up
so that the slider looks colinear with the previous one.
00:22:575(2) - ^
00:31:534(6) - ^
00:45:909(2) - The hitsound of the end point of slider sounds a little weird...

[Hard]
01:05:770(3,4,5,6,7) - Looks a bit confused.... for me.
Nothing else.

[Saya]
Good enough.

[Insane]
00:09:034(1,2,3,4,5) - Put these circles with consistent distance.
Am I the only one who thinks this diff looks easier than "Saya"?
Nothing else.

Alright... nothing much to be fixed from me.
Maybe it looks nonchalant.. but that's all. Your map is great.

Alright, thank you and good luck.

Jayel wrote:

[Hard]
01:05:770(3,4,5,6,7) - Looks a bit confused.... for me. :3
Nothing else.

[Insane]
00:09:034(1,2,3,4,5) - Put these circles with consistent distance. My mistake
Am I the only one who thinks this diff looks easier than "Saya"? I would like to define the same difficulty

Thank you for mod

[Taiko]
01:23:617 (1) - consider to draw it to 01:28:617 (x) - and silent the end like others'? or it is special for not doing it because it's Taiko?

others are fine.

Thank you abalee

abalee wrote:

[Taiko]
01:23:617 (1) - consider to draw it to 01:28:617 (x) - and silent the end like others'? or it is special for not doing it because it's Taiko? Fixed for KS
others are fine.

Thank you again

>abalee
Fixed by mapper
Thx for your modding :3
旧电脑把密码找回来了 囧rz

~Easy~
00:43:617 (2) - add clap at 00:44:034
00:48:617 (1) - add clap at the end
01:01:950 (2) - remove finish
01:05:283 (2) - ^
01:15:283 (2) - ^

~Barry's Normal~
00:15:908 (2) - start at 352:316, end at 248:324
00:43:200 (4) - start at 276:112, end at 172:128
00:45:908 (2) - remove clap
01:19:450 (5) - start at 200:280, end at 244:300
01:19:867 (6) - start at 288:316, end at 332:336

~Hard~
Fine

~Saya~
00:20:284 (3) - add clap at the end

~Insane~
00:20:284 (1) - remove whistle (compared to patterns around)
00:27:992 (2,3) - wrong clap
00:33:617 (1) - remove finish
00:35:284 (1) - ^
00:59:242 (4,5) - swap their positions

~KS's Taiko~
- I don't think speed changes are a good idea (just opinion)

DJPop wrote:

~Easy~
00:43:617 (2) - add clap at 00:44:034 done
00:48:617 (1) - add clap at the end done
01:01:950 (2) - remove finish done
01:05:283 (2) - ^ done
01:15:283 (2) - ^ done

~Barry's Normal~
00:15:908 (2) - start at 352:316, end at 248:324
00:43:200 (4) - start at 276:112, end at 172:128
00:45:908 (2) - remove clap
01:19:450 (5) - start at 200:280, end at 244:300
01:19:867 (6) - start at 288:316, end at 332:336

~Hard~
Fine

~Saya~
00:20:284 (3) - add clap at the end

~Insane~
00:20:284 (1) - remove whistle (compared to patterns around) done
00:27:992 (2,3) - wrong clap done. My mistake
00:33:617 (1) - remove finish done
00:35:284 (1) - ^ done
00:59:242 (4,5) - swap their positions done, Good job

~KS's Taiko~
- I don't think speed changes are a good idea (just opinion)

Thank you for the mod~

>DJPop
lol........keep it, and add a note to fit the rhythm.
Thanks for your modding :3

Download: Misato Aki - Spread Wings. (TV Size) (ertyukjh010) [KS's Taiko].osu

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Download: Misato Aki - Spread Wings. (TV Size) (ertyukjh010) [Saya].osu

兩個笨蛋的難度都上傳了

DJPop wrote:

~Barry's Normal~
00:15:908 (2) - start at 352:316, end at 248:324
00:43:200 (4) - start at 276:112, end at 172:128
00:45:908 (2) - remove clap fixed
01:19:450 (5) - start at 200:280, end at 244:300
01:19:867 (6) - start at 288:316, end at 332:336

Thx mod~~
Sorry I only fix this ><
Because I think the others are fine :>

Help to fix~

Thank very much

泡了好快快rank

我都來不及mod QAQ

You have audio in the video and Kiai is not snapped in KS's Taiko, please fix.

[Easy]
00:43:617 (2) - Not really recommended to use multiple repeats on short sliders like this in an easy.

[Normal]
00:26:117 (2) - Start this slider at 00:25:909 to match the vocals, much like you did here 00:21:950 (1,2) It fits much better imo and plays well for a normal~
00:27:784 (5) - Same thing as mentioned above
00:39:450 (2) - ^
00:42:367 (2,3,4) - I think you should just use 1/1 here. The use of redticks doesn't fit the music imo (doesn't follow anything that I can hear)

[Hard]
00:32:575 (2) - Can you please not stack this under the slider? usually stacks like this indicate 1/4 gaps in timing, so I end up hitting this note early.
Nice Hard~

okay I will fixed when Bat come

O3O坐等

popped for:

1.un-muted video
2.un-snapped KIAI section in Taiko diff.

suggestion：

add a blank normal-sliderslide.wav.

Colin Hou wrote:

popped for:

1.un-muted video 嘛，正在找人幫忙處理~
2.un-snapped KIAI section in Taiko diff. Fixed

suggestion：

add a blank normal-sliderslide.wav. Fixed

謝謝CH的mod

都處理再過來密您~

http://puu.sh/wv25
done～

EDIT:plz adjust Video offset by yourself

感謝AoiX

Colin Hou快泡

EDIT:還真泡了

returned

謝謝CH

Yo.

[General]
Tick rate 2 fits this song best (looking at the easy/normal here).

[Easy]
00:24:450 (3,1) - Might be a bit tough for an easy
00:43:617 (2) - I don't recommend having more than one repeat on short sliders for an easy diff.
00:50:075 (1) - Start this at 00:50:284 -
01:19:659 (2) - Hrm. I think it would be betterif you deleted 2 and added 1 repeat to 1 and add a note at 01:20:284 -

[Normal]
00:53:617 (1) - Way too soon after a spinner for a Normal.


[Hard]
00:10:284 (2) - Kind of lame to be on this long slider when the music has changed and has two strong beats while you're just sliding away. AND it ends half a beat late. :/ Change this please.
00:48:617 (1) - I don't understand why you did a slowdown here. You can't see the ticks either. If you -must- have a slowdown, just do .75x
00:52:783 (3) - Remove that extra anchor point please. It's made this into a burai slider.

[Taiko]
01:16:950 - The return to 1x is wierd since the intensity of the song doesn't really change here.

[Saya]
Not a fan of the 1/4 stack spam. A lot of them don't fit the song.
00:49:450 (4,5,6,7) - That's uh, some crazy spacing changes suddenly. Not realy feeling them at this point.
00:50:283 (1,2,3,4) - And why jumps here but not at 00:47:575 (2,3,4) - ? At 50: it's more of a descending phrase anyway - I don't understand why there are jumps.
01:19:450 (2) - This is fairly obscured by the spinner finish stuff.


[Insane]
Not a fan of the 1/4 stack spam. A lot of them don't fit the song.
00:48:617 (1) - Such a drastic slow down for zero change in pace in the music. Please don't. Especially since you follow it up with huge jumps.
01:14:867 (3,4,1,2,3,1) - This spacing sucks to play after all that larger spacing.

Garven wrote:

Yo. Hello ><

[General]
Tick rate 2 fits this song best (looking at the easy/normal here). Fixed in Easy and Normal

[Easy]
00:24:450 (3,1) - Might be a bit tough for an easy Fixed
00:43:617 (2) - I don't recommend having more than one repeat on short sliders for an easy diff. Fixed
00:50:075 (1) - Start this at 00:50:284 - Fixed
01:19:659 (2) - Hrm. I think it would be betterif you deleted 2 and added 1 repeat to 1 and add a note at 01:20:284 -
I think both are in compliance with the rhythm, so there is no change.

[Hard]
00:10:284 (2) - Kind of lame to be on this long slider when the music has changed and has two strong beats while you're just sliding away. AND it ends half a beat late. :/ Change this please. Fixed
00:48:617 (1) - I don't understand why you did a slowdown here. You can't see the ticks either. If you -must- have a slowdown, just do .75x Change to 0.75x
00:52:783 (3) - Remove that extra anchor point please. It's made this into a burai slider. My mistake, Fixed

[Insane]
Not a fan of the 1/4 stack spam. A lot of them don't fit the song. It was made when I'm new mapper. Sorry
00:48:617 (1) - Such a drastic slow down for zero change in pace in the music. Please don't. Especially since you follow it up with huge jumps. Spinner instead
01:14:867 (3,4,1,2,3,1) - This spacing sucks to play after all that larger spacing. Do not see a serious problem, I think that can keep

thank you garven
Just tell you in pm when the GD was fixed

>Mr Garven
Sorry, I haven't change it because I feel 01:16:950 (1) - is a new stage. And the reason why I slow down here is I want make a incremental effect 01:18:409 (1,1,1,1) -

Garven wrote:

[Normal]
00:53:617 (1) - Way too soon after a spinner for a Normal Sorry but I think it's okay. The spinner can turn 5000 X3

Thanks mod~

BARRY:

I'm talking about the note -after- the spinner. It comes too soon and doesn't offer enough recovery time for a player of that level to hit the note in time.

Edit:

Rebubbled~

Thank Garevn

[Easy]
looks good

[Barry]
looks good

[Hard]
looks good

[Taiko]
looks good

[Saya]
00:19:867 (5) - jump feels wrong
00:21:742 (1) - ^
00:48:825 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this pattern doesn't make sense
01:04:450 (7) - jump feels wrong
01:19:867 (3) - line this up better under or beside 2

[Insane]
looks good

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Easy]
looks good

[Barry]
looks good

[Hard]
looks good

[Taiko]
looks good

[Saya]
00:19:867 (5) - jump feels wrong
00:21:742 (1) - ^
00:48:825 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this pattern doesn't make sense
01:04:450 (7) - jump feels wrong
01:19:867 (3) - line this up better under or beside 2

[Insane]
looks good

All fixed in "Saya" diff.
Thank you Saturos-fangirl

Ok rebubbled then.

Thank Saturos-fangirl

hi你 點解最後又係我mod -____________-

[Saya]
00:10:075 (6) - You used soft whistle in the rest of the pattern corresponding to the whistle like sound in the background, so to maintain consistancy use soft whistle here
00:17:992 (1,2,3,4) - a bit nazi but according to the music the vocal ended during the slider so the spacing (5,1) should be larger than (1,2)
00:27:784 (4) - right 1 grid lv4
00:49:450 (1,2,3,4,1) - the anti-jump (3,4) is misleading. Also there's no need to stack hardly on notes long time ago, equal spacing can be made. Try sth like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/339319
01:13:617 (1) - whistle at the beginning like you've done before

other looks fine. find me when they're fixed

wmfchris wrote:

hi你 點解最後又係我mod -____________- 我比較想吐糟您點解又用英文=3=

All fixed

Thx Wmf

ertyukjh010 wrote:

wmfchris wrote:

hi你 點解最後又係我mod -____________- 我比較想吐糟您點解又用英文=3=

一般我都用英文架啦你唔明咪問囉

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Thank wmf

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It's official. i'm gonna continue this anime . congratz on the rank .

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