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Nakagawa-Kanon
General

delet "Opening" in tags


[Easy]
nothing to say

[Normal]
nothing to say

[wing]
00:23:631 (1) - delet new combo
00:24:048 (1) - same
00:23:631 (5) - add new combo
00:53:006 (1) - delet new combo
01:03:631 (4) - add new combo
01:14:047 (2) - too confuse.

[Insane]
AR-1? is better.

[Saya]
00:20:298 (3) - add normal hitsound end
00:50:297 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think it's not good jump. it very confusing jump.
Topic Starter
ertyukjh010

Nakagawa-Kanon wrote:

General

delet "Opening" in tags X

[Insane]
AR-1? is better. I think AR8 is okay.
no change but thank you for your modding :)
Shana Aisaka
Hi~ A request from Mod Queue ~ :D

Red - Fix it.
Pink - Suggestion.

[General]
Nothing to said.

[Easy]
Approach Rate + 1

[Barry's Normal]
Circle Size - 1

[KS's Taiko]
00:45:298 = add finish + clap?
00:48:631 = ^

00:53:631 = why there is no Kiai Time here?? add Kiai Tiime please ~

[Saya]
HP Drain + 2
Approach Rate + 1
Overall Difficult + 1

00:38:631(1) = add whistle?
00:45:298(2) = ^
00:53:631(3) = ^
00:56:964(6) = ^
01:00:298(1) = ^

01:06:443(2,3) = remove whistle and use clap
01:06:964(1) = add whistle
01:08:631(1) = add clap
01:19:881(6) = ^

01:23:423(4) = add finish

Okay ! That's all! :D
Good Luck! :)
Ulysses
Topic Starter
ertyukjh010

Shana Aisaka wrote:

Hi~ A request from Mod Queue ~ :D

[Easy]
Approach Rate + 1 for new players to get into more easy to play

Okay ! That's all! :D
Good Luck! :)
Thank you for your modding :)
safawu
嘛,那我发了哦....
SPOILER
[insane]
00:37:778 (3) - 这个slider改成直的?前后都是对称的,这个往左歪有点破坏对称?
00:48:611 (1) - 重新拉下?有点不大好看感觉
00:51:111 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 感觉还是排成一排整齐(DS适当减小点?)的比较好,这里note比较多,长的串左右间隔感觉不大美观
00:59:652 (6) - 往上移2格,后面2个note也跟着适当调整?

[Saya]
00:08:611 (5) - NC在这是不是比较好?
00:25:278 (4) - NC

[Nlold's Wings]
00:23:611 (1) - 就一个note的NC,还是去掉吧?
00:54:861 (4) - 这个难度定位是hard么?这样的DS大丈夫?
01:11:111 (3,4) - ^

时间有限,只看三个吧...(最近比较懒...

Good luck~

可恶写了一半家里停电了 :<

这回可以射星了吧:3
Topic Starter
ertyukjh010

safawu wrote:

[insane]
00:37:778 (3) - 这个slider改成直的?前后都是对称的,这个往左歪有点破坏对称? Done
00:48:611 (1) - 重新拉下?有点不大好看感觉 這種形狀我最喜歡QAQ
00:51:111 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 感觉还是排成一排整齐(DS适当减小点?)的比较好,这里note比较多,长的串左右间隔感觉不大美观 我再後慮一下怎樣改~直線有點單調的感覺
00:59:652 (6) - 往上移2格,后面2个note也跟着适当调整? 上移2格好像有點偏了~我再看看:3
謝謝Modding了 :)
DarknessAngel
M4M request from in-game ~ :)

Nlold's Wings

  1. 我是應010要求而來的,先做好被挑一堆音效的準備,你敢不改人家就不理你了 ~ ! (以上純屬賣萌)
  2. 00:03:631 (1) - 結束在[00:04:881]會有一種「開始了 ! 」的感覺喔 ~ :3
  3. 00:10:089 (6) - 很沒有必要的縮短距離,而且還會導致誤判(跟前面的1/2拍距離相同而太晚按),調回一般距離吧
  4. 00:11:964 - 從這裡開始的音效我不喜歡,白線上全填滿的結果就是 ─ 完全沒辦法使用clap的變化,只有呆板且固定的鼓聲
    跟隨歌曲
  5. 00:39:256 (2) - 尾部的whistle去掉,比較好聽
  6. 00:39:881 (3) - ^,唔,濫用了呢...
  7. 00:41:964 (1) - 頭和尾的clap很不好,頭部的clap讓前三個的(clap)的效果減低;尾部的(clap)完全是多餘的東西。於是都
    刪掉。這時頭部的音效感覺很空,放個whistle就解決了\-w-/
  8. 00:46:547 (3) - whistle刪掉,1/4拍連續三個很不好聽的
  9. 00:43:839 (3) - 多餘的whistle,這個讓這一段顯得有些吵雜
  10. 00:45:297 (1) - 頭部不要whistle啊,理由什麼的不想說了lol,去掉比較好聽就對了
  11. 00:47:381 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - 你憑良心說說看這些好不好聽...
  12. 00:50:714 (3) - whistle加錯地方了,改到[00:50:922 (4)]
  13. 00:52:589 (2) - 加new combo,去掉下一個NC,比較符合音樂
  14. 00:53:631 - 這個kai噴個煙火任務就結束 ? 不是吧...快把它設定地跟其他難度一樣吧
  15. 01:14:047 (2) - 強烈建議放在[01:13:631 (1)]的下面,完全重疊。請你想想看玩家提早按、combo斷、臥了個嘈的機率
  16. 01:16:339 (7) - 這slider完全不符合節奏了,反而是[01:15:922 (6)]的時間點要跟它互換
  17. 01:23:631 (1) - 這spinner上的綠線參照Insane的放法設定
  18. 令人費解的是 ─ 副歌之前,經過很長的時間才加一次NC;進副歌之後就變很短
  19. 音效艇多問題的呢...嘛,譜本身還是不錯的 ~

Insane

  1. 00:10:923 (5,6) - (5)頭上加clap,(6)尾部的clap移到頭上。這裡不用管「慣例的clap設法」,只要強調音樂中那兩個很重
    的聲音為主
  2. 00:37:798 (3) - 除了身體之外,clap全下下去吧。這樣能有個「進入緩慢區的轉折點(唔...這名詞用得不好)」,能更加豐富
    音效以及強化效果,可以的話加個60%音量的綠線在尾部以便區分後面的finish的存在
  3. 00:50:089 (1,2,3,4,5) - 考慮一下這樣的距離,距離過遠打起來不太舒服,而且(2)明顯歪了
  4. 01:03:631 (1,2,3,4) - 這不是一個跳的時機,沒有理由
  5. 01:09:256 (2,3) - 該跳的卻沒跳啊 ~ !
  6. 01:23:423 (11) - 缺了個finish
  7. 這音效是以安全為優先設定的吧 ? 我聽得好不爽lol,多加點什麼進去啊 ! T.T

Saya

  1. 00:10:714 (1) - new combo去掉移到[00:10:923 (2)]吧,你想強調音樂中的那兩個聲音就用徹底點,而且這樣設,3連和另一
    個note也能做明顯的區別,看得比較舒服
  2. 00:18:006 (4) - 加個new combo,去掉上一個的NC。在這裡加一個的目的是為了強調這漸寬的間距;去掉上一個是因為這樣的
    顏色分配較符合歌曲轉換點
  3. 00:23:423 (6) - 頭上加個clap ? 感覺比較能配合到前一個的以致於聽起來不會太違和
  4. 00:36:339 (6) - 往左和上各一格(grid level 4),有點歪了
  5. 00:37:798 (7) - 加new combo在這嗎 ? 這樣可以強調前面的跳躍,也增加美觀程度
  6. 00:51:131 (5) - 加new combo。既符合歌曲行進,也強調連打本身的存在(讓人明顯感覺到這裡有一串連打),而且也比較漂亮
    (不管是顏色,還是數字)
  7. 01:09:464 (5) - 這裡NC會不會比較好呢 ? 讓人容易分辨這裡有個跳,對玩家的讀譜也有幫助
  8. 01:22:798 (3,5) - 如果不想太大聲幹嘛還用normal的音效呢 ? (3)的頭上和(5)加個soft-whistle不是挺好的嗎 ? :3
    話說,(5)那邊可以用滿大聲的normal-finish呢:O
  9. 01:23:631 (1) - 這spinner上的綠線參照Insane的放法設定
  10. 這難度比前一個稍簡單了點,而且兩個diff的難度太相近,總覺得有阻礙到難度的遞進性

剩下的明天再說
總覺得這m4m不公平啊lol


話說
我第一次聽到這首歌
讓我想到AIR的鳥之詩
Topic Starter
ertyukjh010

DarknessAngel wrote:

Insane

  1. 00:10:923 (5,6) - (5)頭上加clap,(6)尾部的clap移到頭上。這裡不用管「慣例的clap設法」,只要強調音樂中那兩個很重
    的聲音為主 Done
  2. 00:37:798 (3) - 除了身體之外,clap全下下去吧。這樣能有個「進入緩慢區的轉折點(唔...這名詞用得不好)」,能更加豐富
    音效以及強化效果,可以的話加個60%音量的綠線在尾部以便區分後面的finish的存在 Done
  3. 00:50:089 (1,2,3,4,5) - 考慮一下這樣的距離,距離過遠打起來不太舒服,而且(2)明顯歪了 我眼殘了lol 不過我挺喜歡這星星=3=我再後慮會不會縮小圖案
  4. 01:03:631 (1,2,3,4) - 這不是一個跳的時機,沒有理由 純粹是無意義正方形跳(炸
  5. 01:09:256 (2,3) - 該跳的卻沒跳啊 ~ ! 整體上有減速感覺,雖然這裡的確適合做跳~
  6. 01:23:423 (11) - 缺了個finish Done
  7. 這音效是以安全為優先設定的吧 ? 我聽得好不爽lol,多加點什麼進去啊 ! T.T 我音效白痴QAQ
剩下的明天再說
總覺得這m4m不公平啊lol 笨蛋,現在才發現被騙~

話說
我第一次聽到這首歌
讓我想到AIR的鳥之詩 喔,鳥之詩鏡音版好像我有打過~
謝謝專業的音效modding :)
KayeSara

Shana Aisaka wrote:

[KS's Taiko]
00:45:298 = add finish + clap?
00:48:631 = ^

00:53:631 = why there is no Kiai Time here?? add Kiai Tiime please ~
Sure

Download: Misato Aki - Spread Wings. (TV Size) (ertyukjh010) [KS's Taiko].osu
Topic Starter
ertyukjh010
Done~
Ulysses
Topic Starter
ertyukjh010
Done~
-s u i r e n-
hi!!

Nice~MAP~:) (*´д`*)
Topic Starter
ertyukjh010
Thx suirenn05 ><
DarknessAngel

Barry's Normal

  1. 01:19:464 (5) - 如果是我,我會把尾部的clap去掉,感覺比較有起伏變化
  2. 根本沒啥好挑的,great job ~

Easy

  1. 00:06:964 (3) - 這finish不符合音樂,刪掉它
  2. 00:17:797 (4) - 尾部放上whistle,感覺比較好
  3. 00:21:964 (3) - 比照你之前設定的方式,箭頭上加whistle
  4. 00:43:631 (4) - 第一個箭頭上加whistle嗎 ? 這裡感覺有點空
  5. 00:48:631 (1) - ^
  6. 我現在才發現你的拉長條方式可以既簡單又漂亮,我也來學學...(我拉長條總是拉很久OAQ)



恩mod完了
這兩個難度很輕鬆
祝早日ranked啊 ~ :)
Topic Starter
ertyukjh010

DarknessAngel wrote:

Easy

  1. 00:06:964 (3) - 這finish不符合音樂,刪掉它 Done
  2. 00:17:797 (4) - 尾部放上whistle,感覺比較好 Done
  3. 00:21:964 (3) - 比照你之前設定的方式,箭頭上加whistle Done
  4. 00:43:631 (4) - 第一個箭頭上加whistle嗎 ? 這裡感覺有點空 Done
  5. 00:48:631 (1) - ^ Done
  6. 我現在才發現你的拉長條方式可以既簡單又漂亮,我也來學學...(我拉長條總是拉很久OAQ) 誇獎了>< 不過到Ins我就拉得很醜了~ 所以將來您給GD我接的話,我比較擅長接Easy :P
[/notice]

恩mod完了
這兩個難度很輕鬆
祝早日ranked啊 ~ :)
謝謝modding~ :)
Backfire
Why is nold's difficulty called nlold's?

Anyways.
Taiko -
00:51:964 (3) - kat
00:53:631 (1) - finish
01:06:964 (2) - ^
01:13:631 (1) - ^
01:20:298 (1) - ^
You used way too much kkd ddk and such. Try using some more variety next time.
It was still good though. :X
Topic Starter
ertyukjh010

Backfire wrote:

Why is nold's difficulty called nlold's?
Creator's requirement :)

Thank you for your modding.
KayeSara
>Backfire
Fix all of them :3
I'll pay attention next time.
Thanks for your modding!

>妹妹
offset有问题 打起来很差 Colin的那个offset还稍微好点 后面不行了,我还是喜欢自己的278.
反正也没改 后面有人吐槽再说吧。

Download: Misato Aki - Spread Wings. (TV Size) (ertyukjh010) [KS's Taiko].osu
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ertyukjh010

KayeSara wrote:

>妹妹
offset有问题 打起来很差 Colin的那个offset还稍微好点 后面不行了,我还是喜欢自己的278.
反正也没改 后面有人吐槽再说吧。
這樣啊
我改天再找KPY和Kana測一下Timing看看
kanpakyin
Timing:

  1. 1. Offset: 5,284ms
    BPM: 144.00
Topic Starter
ertyukjh010
OFFSET減少14ms

謝謝KPY ^^
Kawayi Rika
Hi ~ ertyukjh010 ~ :)

M4M here ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]


  1. Remove video audio pls.
  2. Using same KIAI time pls.
  3. Remove Letterbox during breaks,because have video.

[Saya]


  1. 00:10:909 (2) - Add new combo to here,vocal start to here,and Remove 00:10:700 (1).
  2. 00:18:617 (7) - ^,00:18:825 (1).
  3. 00:25:284 (4) - ^
  4. 00:51:117 (5) - ^

[Nlold's Wings]


  1. 00:41:533 (3) - Ctrl+R flow much better.

That's all ~

Good luck ~ ;)
Topic Starter
ertyukjh010

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ ertyukjh010 ~ :)

[General]


  1. Remove video audio pls. 這個影片我放進我的軟件轉檔後,會加速一倍= =神奇啊。所以這個饒了我啦,因為都不是必要的
  2. Using same KIAI time pls. 統一中....
  3. Remove Letterbox during breaks,because have video. Done

謝謝日卡的mod :)

話說日卡是用甚麼轉影片程式,能介紹我嗎
AstroniX_old
From my mod~~

[General]
00:11:950 这的声音好像有点低了,70%或许更好些,结尾处音量最好也高些

[Easy]
00:15:284(1)- remove finish
00:21:950(3)- ^
00:26:950(3)- ^
00:30:284(5)- ^
后面的都如此....finish只在每段开始放一个就好~~(其实这个应该算在general里...)

[Barry's Normal]
00:24:450(5)- new combo

[Nlold's Wings]
00:48:617(1)- remove new combo

[Insane]
00:19:450(1)- remove new combo
01:05:284(1)- 后边的6个建议做成两个往返一次的slider,不然让人感觉很疑惑~~

[Saya]
00:10:700(8)- remove new combo and at 00:11:325 add it
nice!

很好的一张map,希望早日能RANK,good luck!
Topic Starter
ertyukjh010

AstroniX wrote:

From my mod~~

[General]
00:11:950 这的声音好像有点低了,70%或许更好些,结尾处音量最好也高些 額,但是我的Easy是用80% 0.0

[Easy]
00:15:284(1)- remove finish Done
00:21:950(3)- ^ Done
00:26:950(3)- ^ Done
00:30:284(5)- ^ Done, 我還真的腦殘的放多了1倍的Finish www
后面的都如此....finish只在每段开始放一个就好~~(其实这个应该算在general里...) general其實是放一些地圖版面以外的東西:3 例如Timing、setup之類的

[Insane]
00:19:450(1)- remove new combo 不用,這個NC是必須的
01:05:284(1)- 后边的6个建议做成两个往返一次的slider,不然让人感觉很疑惑~~ 突然用Slider反然讓人不能適應Jump~雖然也有可能誤讀成1/4就是
謝謝modding :)
Loneight
M4M~
以下只是建議~不喜歡可以略過 OAO

[General]
影片怎麼還有聲音...想辦法去除掉吧!!(找人幫忙去除都可以)

[Easy]
沒有我可以建議的了...QAQ

[Barry's Normal]
01:08:617 (3) - slider頭加個finish?!

[Nlold's Wings]
找不到可以建議的了 OTZ

[Insane]
同上...OTZ

[Saya]
01:18:617 - 這綠線是不是多了?!

只找到這些><"非常抱歉!!!
TK無能mod OTZ

Good song and map~
Star~
Topic Starter
ertyukjh010

l1106188 wrote:

M4M~

[General]
影片怎麼還有聲音...想辦法去除掉吧!!(找人幫忙去除都可以) 我軟件無能~將這個影片轉檔不知道怎麼會自動加速一倍=口=不過反正影片有聲音也可以Rank,所以饒了我吧

只找到這些><"非常抱歉!!!
不要緊^^我主要是想找人充回覆數(被打)
因為要4、5頁 MAT才願意過來

TK無能mod OTZ

Good song and map~
Star~
謝謝modding ^^
Ulysses
No change
Fenya
Hi :)

Easy:
I did not find anything, in my opinion is pretty good o.o

Barry's Normal:
00:50:908 (5) - And if you take away the repetition and end up where it ended? http://puu.sh/iS0B According to me, sounds better o.o
01:00:908 (2) - And if you remove the unnecessary slidertick? http://puu.sh/iS2B
01:14:867 (3) - (personal opinion) And if you start at 01:14:867 and end up in 01:15:284 ?

Nlold's Wings:
Why so short that the kiai? o.o
Some Inherited point are unsnapped D:
I feel this bad spacing... Although it is a "Hard"... This very uneven... imo
00:32:784 (4) - End slidertick 1 grid up

Insane:
Good diff :3
01:11:117 (1,2,3,4) - I feel that they are not symmetric o.o
01:17:783 (1) - 1 grid down
01:18:200 (3) - 1 grid up
01:19:034 (3) - 1 grid right
01:19:242 (4) - 2 grid right

Well, I'm not good at this, I did everything I could >_<
Sorry for my bad English D:
Good work, good luck :)
Topic Starter
ertyukjh010

Fenya wrote:

Hi :)

Easy:
I did not find anything, in my opinion is pretty good o.o :3

Insane:
Good diff :3
01:11:117 (1,2,3,4) - I feel that they are not symmetric o.o Yes, It's not symmetric.
01:17:783 (1) - 1 grid down Good idea, Done
01:18:200 (3) - 1 grid up Done
01:19:034 (3) - 1 grid right Done
01:19:242 (4) - 2 grid right Done

Well, I'm not good at this, I did everything I could >_<
Sorry for my bad English D:
Good work, good luck :)
Thank you for your modding :)
MMzz
Nlold's Wings:

00:06:950 (1,2,3,4) - mark these anti jumps with new combos or something, without I thought they were a stream at first.
00:10:075 (6) - stack this ontop of 00:10:284 (1)?
00:40:908 (1) - remove new combo
00:45:283 (1) - add a finisher to the start?
00:53:200 (1) - remove new combo

Insane:

OD 6 maybe?

00:23:409 (1) - remove new combo
00:24:450 (1) - ^
00:26:117 (1) - ^
00:27:784 (1) - ^ (Why all this new combo spam? When you didn't even do it again the 3rd time you used this pattern.)
00:55:908 (1) - ^

KS's Taiko:

HP Drain 6-7, OD 6. Never leave settings in the middle, makes things to easy.

Why does the BPM rate change? Keep it at a constant rate the whole song, x1.0 or x1.2, pick one. What you should do though is keep it x1.0 until the kiai, and let the whole kiai have a speed up. That's how speed up are formaly done and noticed in taiko. The points after the kiai should be a constant rate aswell.



Overveiw:

Didn't mod the other diffs because I thought they were fine. I like this set, you get a star.
Topic Starter
ertyukjh010

MMzz wrote:

Insane:

OD 6 maybe? Yes but I have to wait and after consider "Saya" diff's score

00:23:409 (1) - remove new combo Done
00:24:450 (1) - ^ X
00:26:117 (1) - ^ X
00:27:784 (1) - ^ (Why all this new combo spam? When you didn't even do it again the 3rd time you used this pattern.) X
00:55:908 (1) - ^ X, 1 color 1 distance :3 This is to facilitate the player to read

Overveiw:

Didn't mod the other diffs because I thought they were fine. I like this set, you get a star. Thank your Star :3
Thank you for your modding :)
AlphaXT_old
Saya

  • 00:16:742 (1) - 這裡開始都是紅線NC,為何
Nlold's wings

  • 00:53:200 (1) - 這個位置NC只是在使讀譜更困難
Barry's Normal

  • 00:33:200 (3,4) -
That all :)
Topic Starter
ertyukjh010
謝謝mod
Ulysses
Topic Starter
ertyukjh010
已上傳
Dino99
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ertyukjh010
已上傳
Shizuroh
Heres my moddd :3

Easy
00:24:450 I think it sounds great if you use finish hitsound at the whole slider :3

Barry's Normal
Nothing special

Nllod's Wings
00:19:867 I think this part kinda looks odd :< Change it? C:
00:52:992 No new combo needed :3
01:14:034 Put some spacing here

Insane
00:59:450 Definitly way too huge spacing XD

Saya
01:02:575 Instead of stacking it onto the slider, why not put them between circle 3 and slider 5?

O_o XD
Topic Starter
ertyukjh010

SkyDevil wrote:

Heres my moddd :3

Easy
00:24:450 I think it sounds great if you use finish hitsound at the whole slider :3 Done

Insane
00:59:450 Definitly way too huge spacing XD I will consider
Thank you :)
Ulysses

SkyDevil wrote:

Nllod's Wings
00:19:867 I think this part kinda looks odd :< Change it? C: :arrow: :D My style is odd.
00:52:992 No new combo needed :3 :arrow: New slider speed change,therefore put NC
01:14:034 Put some spacing here :arrow: Still readable and good
NO Change
MoodyRPG
WUT?

General
  • • Inconsistency in Kiai Times if you can see here:


Easy
  • - 00:41:950 (3) - New combo to follow the music?
    - 00:50:284 (1) - Considered to move this spinner to 1/2 in my opinion,looks nice
Barry
  • -- Looks great
Nlold
  • -- Add a kiai here 00:53:617 for being consistent with the other diffs?
Taiko
  • -- Looks nice but you have a unsnapped section here 00:53:623,resnap then
Insane
  • - 00:27:784 (1) - Remove new combo like you did it here 00:29:450
Saya
  • - 00:25:284 (4) - New combo to follow your pattern
So i'm done with this good luck
Topic Starter
ertyukjh010

MoodyRPG wrote:

General
  • • Inconsistency in Kiai Times if you can see here: Nold don't want to change :<
Easy
  • - 00:41:950 (3) - New combo to follow the music? Done
    - 00:50:284 (1) - Considered to move this spinner to 1/2 in my opinion,looks nice X
Insane
  • - 00:27:784 (1) - Remove new combo like you did it here 00:29:450 1 Distance 1 Color
Thank you for your modding
Ulysses
No Long Kiai Time In My Diffculty!
Saya-Honmei_old
只做前兩個mod orz 明天交可以嗎orz..

Download: Misato Aki - Spread Wings. (TV Size) (ertyukjh010) [Saya].osu
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ertyukjh010
已上傳:3
popner
Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

Just suggestions & nazi mod:

[Normal]

01:07:575 (2) - 感觉最好这里有个note

[Nlold's Wings]

00:47:992 (5,6,7) - nazi -往右移一格
01:12:783 (2,3,4,5,1) - 五边形有点歪,(3)和两边都有重合,其他地方却没有

[Saya]

00:12:783 (2,3,4,5,1) - 排成正五边形?
01:00:700 (2,3,4) - 这个三连移到(1)的后面?

[Insane]

00:26:117 (1,2,3,4) - 不是正方形(只是提醒一下)
00:27:784 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:34:450 (2,3) - 我觉得平行比较好
00:56:742 (5,1) - 包围得不是很好
01:03:617 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 连着用同一个梗,并且附近都是circle的梗显得有些单调,我觉得重复2次足够了。
01:18:617 (1,2,3,4) - 故意不做成正方形的吗?
01:23:617 (1) - 变音量没必要吧。。直接消声就好了

GL~
Topic Starter
ertyukjh010

popner wrote:

Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

Just suggestions & nazi mod:

[Insane]

00:26:117 (1,2,3,4) - 不是正方形(只是提醒一下) 已修正成正方形,謝謝指出:3
00:27:784 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^
00:34:450 (2,3) - 我觉得平行比较好 Done
00:56:742 (5,1) - 包围得不是很好 orz
01:03:617 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 连着用同一个梗,并且附近都是circle的梗显得有些单调,我觉得重复2次足够了。 Done
01:18:617 (1,2,3,4) - 故意不做成正方形的吗? Done
01:23:617 (1) - 变音量没必要吧。。直接消声就好了 既然做了就沒差:3

GL~
謝謝mod :)
Ulysses
All fixed
Saya-Honmei_old
MOD累積太多 我就不一一回覆了>< 感謝各位MOD 以上除了HP AR OD 等難度沒變 其他都照MOD的改了

Download: Misato Aki - Spread Wings. (TV Size) (ertyukjh010) [Saya].osu
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Kawayi Rika
Hi ~ has per your requeue ~ only check Hard diff.

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[Hard]


  1. 00:41:534 - Add clap.
  2. 00:43:200 - ^
  3. 00:44:867 - ^
  4. 01:05:908 (4,5,6,7,8) - Try like this rhythm,sound much better.

That's all ~ fight go ranked ~
Verdisphena
Insane

00:40:284 (1,2,3) - Follow this rhythm http://puu.sh/mfZO also add a note in 00:40:075 -
01:01:950 (1,2) - Those sliders doesn't make any sense with the rhythm

Saya

00:27:784 (1) - 1 grid right
X_X

Taiko
HP+1 or OD +1
01:23:513 (1) - Finish this spinner in 01:28:617 -

Easy, Normal and Hard are fine
Topic Starter
ertyukjh010

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ has per your requeue ~ only check Hard diff.

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[Hard]


  1. 00:41:534 - Add clap. Done
  2. 00:43:200 - ^ Done
  3. 00:44:867 - ^ Done
  4. 01:05:908 (4,5,6,7,8) - Try like this rhythm,sound much better. 不想碰太多藍線,對於Hard

That's all ~ fight go ranked ~
謝謝日卡 :)

Verdisphena wrote:

Insane

00:40:284 (1,2,3) - Follow this rhythm http://puu.sh/mfZO also add a note in 00:40:075 - Done
01:01:950 (1,2) - Those sliders doesn't make any sense with the rhythmDone

Easy, Normal and Hard are fine
Thank you for mod :)
10nya
suggestion ~
[Saya]
- 01:11:950 (5) - add whistle ewe"v
Topic Starter
ertyukjh010

vwxcrossover wrote:

suggestion ~
[Saya]
- 01:11:950 (5) - add whistle ewe"v
Thank you for mod :)
Dino99
幫你看了下~~

[Hard]
  1. 00:06:325 - 加個圈?
  2. 00:20:284 ~ 00:25:284 - 感覺在這邊clap就加2.4拍有點太早了>_< 在00:25:284以後加好些@w@
  3. 00:37:784 (5) - 這邊感覺節奏有點怪.. 試試這樣的節奏:3 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/274189
    如果不要的話.. 那也希望能在00:38:409加個圈:3 不然感覺突然停了一下呢~
  4. 00:50:596 - clap
  5. 00:51:429 - ^
  6. 00:52:367 (1,2,3) - 這邊anti-jump間距要不要在小一點試試看? 感覺有點大:3...小點比較有感覺lol 建議0.3~
  7. 01:06:117 (5,6,7,8) - 試試看全加clap~~
  8. 01:08:617 (1) - finish
  9. 01:16:533 (4,5) - 我覺得排成這樣好些:3 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/274183
  10. 01:23:200 (2) - 最後這個我覺得往外比較好:3 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/274192
  11. 01:23:409 - finish
加油唄:3
Topic Starter
ertyukjh010

12BARRY21 wrote:

幫你看了下~~

[Hard]
  1. 00:06:325 - 加個圈? 空著來作為靜音部份吧:3
  2. 00:20:284 ~ 00:25:284 - 感覺在這邊clap就加2.4拍有點太早了>_< 在00:25:284以後加好些@w@
  3. 00:37:784 (5) - 這邊感覺節奏有點怪.. 試試這樣的節奏:3 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/274189 空著吧
    如果不要的話.. 那也希望能在00:38:409加個圈:3 不然感覺突然停了一下呢~ 漸入減速階段~
  4. 00:50:596 - clap Done
  5. 00:51:429 - ^ Done
  6. 00:52:367 (1,2,3) - 這邊anti-jump間距要不要在小一點試試看? 感覺有點大:3...小點比較有感覺lol 建議0.3~ 嗯,我再後慮看看吧,因為前面是0.5x的說~;第一次做這種減速有點沒經驗:>
  7. 01:06:117 (5,6,7,8) - 試試看全加clap~~ 太吵了XDD 評評評評!!!!
  8. 01:08:617 (1) - finish 跟著第一段一樣沒Finish好了;因為不想太響(其實是以前我亂加Fibnish導致有恐懼症)
  9. 01:16:533 (4,5) - 我覺得排成這樣好些:3 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/274183 Done
  10. 01:23:200 (2) - 最後這個我覺得往外比較好:3 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/274192 Done,向左邊吧?上面都碰到生命線了XD
  11. 01:23:409 - finish 真仔細++ Done
加油唄:3
謝謝Barry的Mod ><
wmfchris
[General]
are you sure there's a fullstop after wings?

[Insane]
00:48:617 (1) - slider略醜

[Saya]
00:48:825 (1,2,3,4) - 排列不太好看 orz 不過想不到別的方法

[Taiko]
00:53:617 - start kiai here
01:23:617 - leave 1/2 blank before spinner
* kiai之前一大段感覺overmap 也沒大必要一大堆3連 重複ddk kkd ddk也不太好
* 前面該finish的地方沒有finish
===========================
把[Normal], [Hard]的難度拉低一格吧

*在TWC final期間mod,結果呢個mod仲廢過隻豬 : <
Topic Starter
ertyukjh010

wmfchris wrote:

[General]
are you sure there's a fullstop after wings?
再翻查了一下Wiki,有FullStop沒錯


wmfchris wrote:

[Insane]
00:48:617 (1) - slider略醜 換成對稱吧,這種Slider是我早期比較喜歡畫,現在也覺得很醜Orz

*在TWC final期間mod,結果呢個mod仲廢過隻豬 : < 這對我應該是有利啊:3
謝謝Wmf~ :)
因為沒泡泡所以沒KD
KayeSara
哟 抱歉妹妹,最近事情多啊(好像我每次都是这个理由
反正不管那么多了这改了些

>wmf
改了一些重复性节奏和finish的增加,不过你的mod为什么越来越简单了....

Download: Misato Aki - Spread Wings. (TV Size) (ertyukjh010) [KS's Taiko].osu
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ertyukjh010
姐姐大活躍

慢慢做就好了,我又不急Rank~

謝謝姐姐抽空上來改^^
Jayel
Alright, let's see what I can find.
All suggestion.

[General]
Nothing

[Easy]
Good enough.

[Barry's Normal]
00:16:534(3) - Moving this slider a little up
so that the slider looks colinear with the previous one.
00:22:575(2) - ^
00:31:534(6) - ^
00:45:909(2) - The hitsound of the end point of slider sounds a little weird...

[Hard]
01:05:770(3,4,5,6,7) - Looks a bit confused.... for me.
Nothing else.

[Saya]
Good enough.

[Insane]
00:09:034(1,2,3,4,5) - Put these circles with consistent distance.
Am I the only one who thinks this diff looks easier than "Saya"? :)
Nothing else.

Alright... nothing much to be fixed from me.
Maybe it looks nonchalant.. but that's all. Your map is great.

Alright, thank you and good luck.
Topic Starter
ertyukjh010

Jayel wrote:

[Hard]
01:05:770(3,4,5,6,7) - Looks a bit confused.... for me. :3
Nothing else.

[Insane]
00:09:034(1,2,3,4,5) - Put these circles with consistent distance. My mistake
Am I the only one who thinks this diff looks easier than "Saya"? :) I would like to define the same difficulty
Thank you for mod
abalee
[Taiko]
01:23:617 (1) - consider to draw it to 01:28:617 (x) - and silent the end like others'? or it is special for not doing it because it's Taiko? :?

others are fine.
Topic Starter
ertyukjh010
Thank you abalee :)

abalee wrote:

[Taiko]
01:23:617 (1) - consider to draw it to 01:28:617 (x) - and silent the end like others'? or it is special for not doing it because it's Taiko? :? Fixed for KS
others are fine.
Thank you again :)
KayeSara
>abalee
Fixed by mapper
Thx for your modding :3
旧电脑把密码找回来了 囧rz
DJPop
~Easy~
00:43:617 (2) - add clap at 00:44:034
00:48:617 (1) - add clap at the end
01:01:950 (2) - remove finish
01:05:283 (2) - ^
01:15:283 (2) - ^

~Barry's Normal~
00:15:908 (2) - start at 352:316, end at 248:324
00:43:200 (4) - start at 276:112, end at 172:128
00:45:908 (2) - remove clap
01:19:450 (5) - start at 200:280, end at 244:300
01:19:867 (6) - start at 288:316, end at 332:336

~Hard~
Fine

~Saya~
00:20:284 (3) - add clap at the end

~Insane~
00:20:284 (1) - remove whistle (compared to patterns around)
00:27:992 (2,3) - wrong clap
00:33:617 (1) - remove finish
00:35:284 (1) - ^
00:59:242 (4,5) - swap their positions

~KS's Taiko~
- I don't think speed changes are a good idea (just opinion)
Topic Starter
ertyukjh010

DJPop wrote:

~Easy~
00:43:617 (2) - add clap at 00:44:034 done
00:48:617 (1) - add clap at the end done
01:01:950 (2) - remove finish done
01:05:283 (2) - ^ done
01:15:283 (2) - ^ done

~Barry's Normal~
00:15:908 (2) - start at 352:316, end at 248:324
00:43:200 (4) - start at 276:112, end at 172:128
00:45:908 (2) - remove clap
01:19:450 (5) - start at 200:280, end at 244:300
01:19:867 (6) - start at 288:316, end at 332:336

~Hard~
Fine

~Saya~
00:20:284 (3) - add clap at the end

~Insane~
00:20:284 (1) - remove whistle (compared to patterns around) done
00:27:992 (2,3) - wrong clap done. My mistake
00:33:617 (1) - remove finish done
00:35:284 (1) - ^ done
00:59:242 (4,5) - swap their positions done, Good job

~KS's Taiko~
- I don't think speed changes are a good idea (just opinion)
Thank you for the mod~ :)
KayeSara
>DJPop
lol........keep it, and add a note to fit the rhythm.
Thanks for your modding :3

Download: Misato Aki - Spread Wings. (TV Size) (ertyukjh010) [KS's Taiko].osu
Saya-Honmei_old
Topic Starter
ertyukjh010
兩個笨蛋的難度都上傳了 :)
Dino99

DJPop wrote:

~Barry's Normal~
00:15:908 (2) - start at 352:316, end at 248:324
00:43:200 (4) - start at 276:112, end at 172:128
00:45:908 (2) - remove clap fixed
01:19:450 (5) - start at 200:280, end at 244:300
01:19:867 (6) - start at 288:316, end at 332:336
Thx mod~~
Sorry I only fix this ><
Because I think the others are fine :>
Topic Starter
ertyukjh010
Help to fix~
DJPop
Bubble
Topic Starter
ertyukjh010
Thank very much :)
Flask
泡了好快快rank

我都來不及mod QAQ
Makar
You have audio in the video and Kiai is not snapped in KS's Taiko, please fix.

[Easy]
00:43:617 (2) - Not really recommended to use multiple repeats on short sliders like this in an easy.

[Normal]
00:26:117 (2) - Start this slider at 00:25:909 to match the vocals, much like you did here 00:21:950 (1,2) It fits much better imo and plays well for a normal~
00:27:784 (5) - Same thing as mentioned above
00:39:450 (2) - ^
00:42:367 (2,3,4) - I think you should just use 1/1 here. The use of redticks doesn't fit the music imo (doesn't follow anything that I can hear)

[Hard]
00:32:575 (2) - Can you please not stack this under the slider? usually stacks like this indicate 1/4 gaps in timing, so I end up hitting this note early.
Nice Hard~
Topic Starter
ertyukjh010
okay I will fixed when Bat come
Megurine Luka
O3O坐等
Colin Hou
popped for:

1.un-muted video
2.un-snapped KIAI section in Taiko diff.

suggestion:

add a blank normal-sliderslide.wav.
Topic Starter
ertyukjh010

Colin Hou wrote:

popped for:

1.un-muted video 嘛,正在找人幫忙處理~
2.un-snapped KIAI section in Taiko diff. Fixed

suggestion:

add a blank normal-sliderslide.wav. Fixed
謝謝CH的mod

都處理再過來密您~
AoiX
http://puu.sh/wv25
done~

EDIT:plz adjust Video offset by yourself
Topic Starter
ertyukjh010
感謝AoiX
Flask
Colin Hou快泡

EDIT:還真泡了
Colin Hou
returned
Topic Starter
ertyukjh010
謝謝CH
Garven
Yo.

[General]
Tick rate 2 fits this song best (looking at the easy/normal here).

[Easy]
00:24:450 (3,1) - Might be a bit tough for an easy
00:43:617 (2) - I don't recommend having more than one repeat on short sliders for an easy diff.
00:50:075 (1) - Start this at 00:50:284 -
01:19:659 (2) - Hrm. I think it would be betterif you deleted 2 and added 1 repeat to 1 and add a note at 01:20:284 -

[Normal]
00:53:617 (1) - Way too soon after a spinner for a Normal.


[Hard]
00:10:284 (2) - Kind of lame to be on this long slider when the music has changed and has two strong beats while you're just sliding away. AND it ends half a beat late. :/ Change this please.
00:48:617 (1) - I don't understand why you did a slowdown here. You can't see the ticks either. If you -must- have a slowdown, just do .75x
00:52:783 (3) - Remove that extra anchor point please. It's made this into a burai slider.

[Taiko]
01:16:950 - The return to 1x is wierd since the intensity of the song doesn't really change here.

[Saya]
Not a fan of the 1/4 stack spam. A lot of them don't fit the song.
00:49:450 (4,5,6,7) - That's uh, some crazy spacing changes suddenly. Not realy feeling them at this point.
00:50:283 (1,2,3,4) - And why jumps here but not at 00:47:575 (2,3,4) - ? At 50: it's more of a descending phrase anyway - I don't understand why there are jumps.
01:19:450 (2) - This is fairly obscured by the spinner finish stuff.


[Insane]
Not a fan of the 1/4 stack spam. A lot of them don't fit the song.
00:48:617 (1) - Such a drastic slow down for zero change in pace in the music. Please don't. Especially since you follow it up with huge jumps.
01:14:867 (3,4,1,2,3,1) - This spacing sucks to play after all that larger spacing.
Topic Starter
ertyukjh010

Garven wrote:

Yo. Hello ><

[General]
Tick rate 2 fits this song best (looking at the easy/normal here). Fixed in Easy and Normal

[Easy]
00:24:450 (3,1) - Might be a bit tough for an easy Fixed
00:43:617 (2) - I don't recommend having more than one repeat on short sliders for an easy diff. Fixed
00:50:075 (1) - Start this at 00:50:284 - Fixed
01:19:659 (2) - Hrm. I think it would be betterif you deleted 2 and added 1 repeat to 1 and add a note at 01:20:284 -
I think both are in compliance with the rhythm, so there is no change.


[Hard]
00:10:284 (2) - Kind of lame to be on this long slider when the music has changed and has two strong beats while you're just sliding away. AND it ends half a beat late. :/ Change this please. Fixed
00:48:617 (1) - I don't understand why you did a slowdown here. You can't see the ticks either. If you -must- have a slowdown, just do .75x Change to 0.75x
00:52:783 (3) - Remove that extra anchor point please. It's made this into a burai slider. My mistake, Fixed

[Insane]
Not a fan of the 1/4 stack spam. A lot of them don't fit the song. It was made when I'm new mapper. Sorry :P
00:48:617 (1) - Such a drastic slow down for zero change in pace in the music. Please don't. Especially since you follow it up with huge jumps. Spinner instead
01:14:867 (3,4,1,2,3,1) - This spacing sucks to play after all that larger spacing. Do not see a serious problem, I think that can keep
thank you garven :)
Just tell you in pm when the GD was fixed
KayeSara
>Mr Garven
Sorry, I haven't change it because I feel 01:16:950 (1) - is a new stage. And the reason why I slow down here is I want make a incremental effect 01:18:409 (1,1,1,1) -
Dino99

Garven wrote:

[Normal]
00:53:617 (1) - Way too soon after a spinner for a Normal Sorry but I think it's okay. The spinner can turn 5000 X3
Thanks mod~
Garven
BARRY:

I'm talking about the note -after- the spinner. It comes too soon and doesn't offer enough recovery time for a player of that level to hit the note in time.

Edit:

Rebubbled~
Topic Starter
ertyukjh010
Thank Garevn
Yuukari-Banteki
[Easy]
looks good

[Barry]
looks good

[Hard]
looks good

[Taiko]
looks good

[Saya]
00:19:867 (5) - jump feels wrong
00:21:742 (1) - ^
00:48:825 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this pattern doesn't make sense
01:04:450 (7) - jump feels wrong
01:19:867 (3) - line this up better under or beside 2

[Insane]
looks good
Topic Starter
ertyukjh010

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Easy]
looks good

[Barry]
looks good

[Hard]
looks good

[Taiko]
looks good

[Saya]
00:19:867 (5) - jump feels wrong
00:21:742 (1) - ^
00:48:825 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this pattern doesn't make sense
01:04:450 (7) - jump feels wrong
01:19:867 (3) - line this up better under or beside 2

[Insane]
looks good
All fixed in "Saya" diff. :)
Thank you Saturos-fangirl
Yuukari-Banteki
Ok rebubbled then.
Topic Starter
ertyukjh010
Thank Saturos-fangirl
wmfchris
hi你 點解最後又係我mod -____________-

[Saya]
00:10:075 (6) - You used soft whistle in the rest of the pattern corresponding to the whistle like sound in the background, so to maintain consistancy use soft whistle here
00:17:992 (1,2,3,4) - a bit nazi but according to the music the vocal ended during the slider so the spacing (5,1) should be larger than (1,2)
00:27:784 (4) - right 1 grid lv4
00:49:450 (1,2,3,4,1) - the anti-jump (3,4) is misleading. Also there's no need to stack hardly on notes long time ago, equal spacing can be made. Try sth like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/339319
01:13:617 (1) - whistle at the beginning like you've done before

other looks fine. find me when they're fixed
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