1. 00:17:131 (1) - 拉好些吧~
2. 00:28:870 - whistle
3. 00:34:088 - ^
4. 00:45:827 (5) - ^
5. 01:19:740 (1) - 位置有點低了..往上和左移幾格
6. 01:41:914 (3) - whistle
7. 01:58:870 (3) - ^
8. 02:16:479 - 無用綠線..刪掉吧~
9. 02:23:001 - clap
10. 03:12:566 (2) - 去clap 加finish
11. 03:13:218 (3) - 去whistle 加finish
12. 04:17:131 (1) ~ 結束 - 這些finish都太大聲了:3 都改成whistle 或者是把音量降到25%左右
13. 04:35:555 (1) - 這轉盤縮到04:37:023我覺得好些~~

1. 00:19:088 (3) - 流線不好._. 打起來不順>< 換下方向? 像這樣 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/250550
2. 00:28:870 (1) - whistle
3. 00:34:088 (2) - ^
4. 00:45:827 (1) - 改whistle
5. 00:58:871 (1) ~ 01:02:784 (1) - 音量漸增~ 多設些綠線吧!!~~ 一次加10%就好
   (建議: 01:00:175 - 50% ---> 01:01:479 - 60% ---> 01:02:131 - 70% ---> 01:02:784 - 80%)
6. 01:15:827 (3,4,1) - 間距不一 (1)往左移一格好些:3
7. 01:24:142 - 加個圈
8. 01:41:914 (7) - whistle
9. 02:10:610 (3,4) - 排的跟(1)(2)一樣吧!!~~ 這樣~ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/250569
10. 02:11:914 (1) ~ 02:15:827 (5) - 同前面@@" 嘛....其實現在這樣也不錯:>
11. 02:31:479 (5,6,7,8) - 間距不一!!~~ 改改唄o.o
12. 02:34:088 (4,5,6) - 是錯覺嘛..lol? 間距!!~
13. 02:38:653 (2) - 頭尾對調? 額....其實沒差多少=v=
14. 02:39:957 (4) - ^ (改了的話(4)和(1)會有個跳 增加趣味性:3)
15. 03:12:566 (6) - finish
16. 03:13:218 (7) - ^
17. 03:26:262 (7,8,9,10) - 這四個圈換成一個silder? 不然都單圈挺單調的:o
18. 03:26:751 (10,11,12,13,14,1) - 間距太小~ 是故意的嗎?? 如果不是...改下間距吧:>
19. 03:46:153 (2) - 讓它疊在03:44:197(4)的上面吧!!~~ 我知道有點難.. 但這個改了美觀性大增!!!~~~ :>
20. 03:47:131 (1) - 往左一格後 再往上一格
21. 04:17:131 (1) ~ 結束 - 這些finish都太大聲了:3 都改成whistle 或者是把音量降到25%左右
22. 04:32:294 - 跟vocal吧@@" 加個圈~
23. 04:32:620 - ^
24. 04:32:784 (1,2,3,4) - 嘛...都最後了._. 這9個音可以排的更有創意些?? 建議間距愈來愈開~
25. 04:33:762 (2) - whistle
26. 04:34:088 (3) - 去whistle
27. 04:35:066 - whistle
28. 04:35:392 - 這finish...加是ok啦:3 但是你Normal沒加 lol 所以...fix it plz :>
29. 04:35:555 (1) - 這轉盤縮到04:37:023我覺得好些~~

12BARRY21 wrote:

Hi~

[Normal]

1. 00:17:131 (1) - 拉好些吧~ 其實我挺喜歡做這種圖案，不過每次都被人吐QAQ 這種圖案就是半個「0」：http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/250769
2. 00:28:870 - whistle Done
3. 00:34:088 - ^ Done
4. 00:45:827 (5) - ^ Done
5. 01:19:740 (1) - 位置有點低了..往上和左移幾格 Done
6. 01:41:914 (3) - whistle Done
7. 01:58:870 (3) - ^ Done
8. 02:16:479 - 無用綠線..刪掉吧~ 額，Hard遺留下來=w=
9. 02:23:001 - clap Done
10. 03:12:566 (2) - 去clap 加finish Done
11. 03:13:218 (3) - 去whistle 加finish Done
12. 04:17:131 (1) ~ 結束 - 這些finish都太大聲了:3 都改成whistle 或者是把音量降到25%左右 Done
13. 04:35:555 (1) - 這轉盤縮到04:37:023我覺得好些~~ Done

[Hard]

1. 00:19:088 (3) - 流線不好._. 打起來不順>< 換下方向? 像這樣 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/250550 Done
2. 00:28:870 (1) - whistle Done
3. 00:34:088 (2) - ^ Done
4. 00:45:827 (1) - 改whistle Done
5. 00:58:871 (1) ~ 01:02:784 (1) - 音量漸增~ 多設些綠線吧!!~~ 一次加10%就好 實在是很好的建議
   (建議: 01:00:175 - 50% ---> 01:01:479 - 60% ---> 01:02:131 - 70% ---> 01:02:784 - 80%)
6. 01:15:827 (3,4,1) - 間距不一 (1)往左移一格好些:3 Done
7. 01:24:142 - 加個圈 不用了
8. 01:41:914 (7) - whistle Done
9. 02:10:610 (3,4) - 排的跟(1)(2)一樣吧!!~~ 這樣~ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/250569 Done
10. 02:11:914 (1) ~ 02:15:827 (5) - 同前面@@" 嘛....其實現在這樣也不錯:> 同前面？？不懂
11. 02:31:479 (5,6,7,8) - 間距不一!!~~ 改改唄o.o 饒了我吧，要畫正七邊型就是要我算角度QAQ
12. 02:34:088 (4,5,6) - 是錯覺嘛..lol? 間距!!~ 曲線好難畫，我改直線好了
13. 02:38:653 (2) - 頭尾對調? 額....其實沒差多少=v= 順著去吧
14. 02:39:957 (4) - ^ (改了的話(4)和(1)會有個跳 增加趣味性:3)
15. 03:12:566 (6) - finish Done
16. 03:13:218 (7) - ^ Done
17. 03:26:262 (7,8,9,10) - 這四個圈換成一個silder? 不然都單圈挺單調的:o 全點吧，這關係到我能不能FC QAQ
18. 03:26:751 (10,11,12,13,14,1) - 間距太小~ 是故意的嗎?? 如果不是...改下間距吧:> 您沒說我沒發現=口=
19. 03:46:153 (2) - 讓它疊在03:44:197(4)的上面吧!!~~ 我知道有點難.. 但這個改了美觀性大增!!!~~~ :> 排了一下實在排不到
20. 03:47:131 (1) - 往左一格後 再往上一格 Done
21. 04:17:131 (1) ~ 結束 - 這些finish都太大聲了:3 都改成whistle 或者是把音量降到25%左右 Done
22. 04:32:294 - 跟vocal吧@@" 加個圈~ Done
23. 04:32:620 - ^ Done
24. 04:32:784 (1,2,3,4) - 嘛...都最後了._. 這9個音可以排的更有創意些?? 建議間距愈來愈開~ 難度太難了=3=
25. 04:33:762 (2) - whistle Done
26. 04:34:088 (3) - 去whistle Done
27. 04:35:066 - whistle Done
28. 04:35:392 - 這finish...加是ok啦:3 但是你Normal沒加 lol 所以...fix it plz :> Done
29. 04:35:555 (1) - 這轉盤縮到04:37:023我覺得好些~~ Done

That's all

好圖~ 加油唄!!

l1106188 wrote:

以下只是建議~不喜歡可以略過 OAO

[Normal]
03:39:305和03:56:262 的bookmark 是?! 不知道甚麼時候加進去，問過人才知道要按reset刪掉藍線
若沒做什麼 把它刪了吧?!

可以拉漂亮點的slider
01:17:131 (3,1),01:45:827 (3),02:35:392 (1),03:30:175 (3) 這是半個"0"的圖案，是我個人挺喜歡用，只是每次都被人吐這點QAQ

多餘的綠線?!
01:01:479 好眼力=w=b

01:45:827 (3) - 這是不是複製前面的01:17:131 (3) .要不要改一下?! . 同上，不想刪QAQ


[Hard]
01:01:479的綠線有兩個... 好仔細

03:39:305 的bookmark 是?! 額，刪掉刪掉

04:25:447 (7) - 好像沒對稱的感覺 . 嗯，我也有這樣的感覺，再調整了一下

剩下的我覺得沒什麼問題或建議了 XD...
只找到這些><"非常抱歉!!! 不是啊，您找到很多錯誤啊，謝謝您

Good song and map~

KayeSara wrote:

男主不好看，直接删掉。。。没有KD 所以star无能了 星星就不用了，我都喜歡慢慢存^^

对了，这Normal明显是easy，才80W的分数 第二个难度都1000W+了 会被要求做N的 不會吧=口=我不要再做Normal QAQ

TaikoBG

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ertyukjh010 wrote:

KayeSara wrote:

对了，这Normal明显是easy，才80W的分数 第二个难度都1000W+了 会被要求做N的 不會吧=口=我不要再做Normal QAQ

[General]
1024*768 size http://puu.sh/mzLk

[Pokie's Normal]
01:04:088 (1) - finish

[Hard]

00:57:240 (3) - how about this one ?


01:03:273,01:03:925 - (sug) add note

B2IN wrote:

[General]
1024*768 size http://puu.sh/mzLk WTX.....I made ​​serious mistakes, Thank you

[Hard]
00:57:240 (3) - how about this one ? Done
01:03:273,01:03:925 - (sug) add note I do not want to break the pattern :3

that's all 'v'

good luck

1. Why the SV is in 2.4... taiko diff are recommended to 1.4, all the taiko diff's are in 1.4

1. 00:01:968 (2) - Delete
2. 00:37:349 (1) - Katsu?
3. 01:37:349 (4) - ^
4. 01:42:566 (1) - ^
5. 01:46:479 (1) - ^

raririn wrote:

Hi
给点小建议w

[General]
Dios加到Tag？加到Source的话似乎怪了orz 了解~

[Hard]
[00:00:012-1,2,3]我觉得换成4个折返的两个比较好 不用了，4個1組的話會剩下1個圈圈:3
[00:05:229]^ 后面的都是
[00:31:968-5]完全对不上vocal 建议拉到后面的红线 然后把6拉到后面或者改成圈 嘛~這2個對不上是6吧，我看看怎樣改吧
[00:38:490]^ 囧这让完全按音乐打的人情何以堪 开了HD按照自己熟悉的感觉打各种combo break

先这样，总体上不错~GL~

1. 太长 吓尿了
2. bg.jpg is 1022x767 顺手改成1024X768
3. Tags 不一致
4. timing线不一致
5. Easy 00:24:631 有多余的timing线

LKs wrote:

From 【All requests posted here will be modded】 queue

General

1. 太长 吓尿了
2. bg.jpg is 1022x767 顺手改成1024X768 之前就被說過了QAQ證名LKS載完圖然後偷懶www
3. Tags 不一致 有嗎0.0
4. timing线不一致
5. Easy 00:24:631 有多余的timing线 我永遠都改不好的壞習慣Orz 話說這個會Unrank沒道理啊=3=

[Easy]

fine

[Pokie's Normal]

fine

[Hard]

01:24:305 (5) - 这里可以选择跟歌 維持這樣吧，想跟Normal一致,也是方便下音效
02:18:925 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - 这相当于一个转角+一条斜线 把弧度放大点 嘗試再調整吧lol 這種排法我平常很少用,不太懂:P

改了general后我不知道还有什么理由不泡 太快吧，直幾個mod QAQ

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ ertyukjh010 ~ 安安姐姐

打廣告了QAQ

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[Hard]

1. 唔~感觉OD太低了 建议+1. OD5好了，BPM低的歌很容易中100，雖然這歌節奏感很不錯就是
2. 00:26:751 (5,6) - 这个合成一个slier会更好. 的確，Done
3. 01:03:925 - 这里加个note 会不错. 影響排版不想改
4. 01:13:707 - ^ 同樣會要重排，不改了
5. 02:34:251 (5) - 删掉这个note,多余. 這裡我聽到有聲音喔
6. 03:26:262 (7) - 加个NC. 我後慮看看，感覺加和不加都差不多0.0

That's all ~ pretty nice mapset ~ thx

Good luck with rank ~

Hitomi May wrote:

Hi :3
I like piano part in this song :O lol

[Easy]

00:44:523 (4) - just copy previous slider and rotate Done
01:25:120 (1) - maybe move to 01:25:039? Done
02:45:827 (3) - curve a little Done
03:38:001 (1) - can make a linear? And place a higher Done
03:48:436 (1) - why not lie this? => X

SPOILER

03:58:870 (1) - Oo make symmetric Done
04:04:251 (1) - move to 04:04:169 Done
04:13:870 (3) - whistle? Done

[Hard]

Slider tick rate: 0.5 No, Why?

01:17:131 (1) - this plays badly :< I do not know what the problem.
01:25:120 (1) - to 01:25:039? nazy d: No. This should not be using 1/8, even though the song is very slow
04:04:251 (1) - you understand, yes?
04:35:555 (1) - ^

Good Luck with this! ^^

ertyukjh010 wrote:

Slider tick rate: 0.5 No, Why?

SPOILER

1. Difficulty Setting: I guess the HP Drain is too high for easy. so, my suggestion is -1 that.
2. 00:01:479 (1) - I think the finish sound is too noisy. then, the piano sound in the beginning more better if using whistle instead the finish. or if you won't, can you change the volume a bit lower?
3. 00:45:827 (5) - I'm very suggestion to don't stack this circle. that 1/1 as before, so I guess use normal spacing for this. of course for easier read.
4. 00:54:957 (3) - add whistle in the slider's beginning for following the piano sound like circle (1)?
5. 00:58:871 (1,3) - add whistle in here too? sure, about piano sound.
6. 01:04:088 (2) - add new combo in here for better effect when kiai time is begin?
7. 01:11:914 (3) - new combo for combo pattern like before? 1-2-1-2
8. 02:11:914 (1) - add whistle in slider's beginning? like the next note (2,3)
9. 03:36:697 (4) - add whistle for piano sound?
10. 03:39:305 (2) - add whistle in slider's beginning? I think the sound same with (1)

1. 00:52:023 (5) - I guess add whistle in slider's beginning is not bad too.. but whatever (:
2. 01:02:131 (3) - add clap in here more better instead the whistle imo, since I guess this is same with 00:58:871 (1,2)
3. 01:17:457 (2) - honestly, this whistle is not comfortable for me. so I guess delete this whistle. no reason why the whistle is heard in here.
4. 01:21:044 (3) - add whistle in the slider's beginning for consistency with (1)
5. 01:24:305 (5) - add clap in slider's beginning? I felt empty in here and beside that, the backsound is supporting clap imo.
6. 01:25:120 (1) - same as above. just adding clap in here.

Yasora-chan wrote:

hi there

Easy

1. Difficulty Setting: I guess the HP Drain is too high for easy. so, my suggestion is -1 that. Oh my mistake
2. 00:01:479 (1) - I think the finish sound is too noisy. then, the piano sound in the beginning more better if using whistle instead the finish. or if you won't, can you change the volume a bit lower? whistle instead
3. 00:45:827 (5) - I'm very suggestion to don't stack this circle. that 1/1 as before, so I guess use normal spacing for this. of course for easier read. I agree but It takes changes to the layout, trouble, I need to consider.
4. 00:54:957 (3) - add whistle in the slider's beginning for following the piano sound like circle (1)? Done
5. 00:58:871 (1,3) - add whistle in here too? sure, about piano sound. Done
6. 01:04:088 (2) - add new combo in here for better effect when kiai time is begin? X
7. 01:11:914 (3) - new combo for combo pattern like before? 1-2-1-2 Done
8. 02:11:914 (1) - add whistle in slider's beginning? like the next note (2,3) Done
9. 03:36:697 (4) - add whistle for piano sound? Done
10. 03:39:305 (2) - add whistle in slider's beginning? I think the sound same with (1) Done

Hard

1. 00:52:023 (5) - I guess add whistle in slider's beginning is not bad too.. but whatever (: Done
2. 01:02:131 (3) - add clap in here more better instead the whistle imo, since I guess this is same with 00:58:871 (1,2) Done
3. 01:17:457 (2) - honestly, this whistle is not comfortable for me. so I guess delete this whistle. no reason why the whistle is heard in here. You right and done
4. 01:21:044 (3) - add whistle in the slider's beginning for consistency with (1) Done
5. 01:24:305 (5) - add clap in slider's beginning? I felt empty in here and beside that, the backsound is supporting clap imo. Done
6. 01:25:120 (1) - same as above. just adding clap in here. Done

That's all
Good luck :3