1. Dunskin's Easy (1,46 stars, 90 notes)
2. Hard (4,75 stars, 291 notes)
3. Koko's Taiko (4,83 stars, 849 notes)
4. Normal (2,87 stars, 139 notes)

Rei_Fan49 wrote:

oi oi~
Easy-nya udah selese blom ? (kalo udah, itu...)
- spacing antara slider dengan slider yg lainnya kejauhan... [baru test HRFL doang]
- hmm... 1/2-stream like di belakang itu ga apa2 ? (ya untung lewat :3)
Hard-nya ga tau mau comment apa, tp itu mau di coba lusa..
Taiko preview aja lah.. (tapi lusa)

karena billing jadi modnya sedikit.. sorry ya~ (buru2 nih XD) [star!]

lufi10 wrote:

belum selesai gan kehabisan ide sih. mungkin bisa bantu?
tapi kayaknya jarak slidernya udah pas menurut gw. cuman 1/2 stream dibelakang itu kayaknya emang nggak bener yah?

Rei_Fan49 wrote:

hmmm wait... itu yang diff tes aku sengaja di pasang atw ngga ?

zeroclover wrote:

SPOILER

[test easy]
cuman bagian dari testkan?
00:40:615 (2) - slidernya panjang tapi menarik, coba bisa d pendekin

#BPMS:0.000=144.000,32.000=156.000,60.500=152.000,65.000=156.000,228.000=156.500,244.000=156.000,292.000=147.500,316.000=148.000,320.000=148.5;
#STOPS:32.000=0.360,161.000=0.400;

Nitori-n wrote:

[Easy]
01:17:603 - What a looooooong break! Cut it down to 20 seconds max. Never mind, I guess it's not complete yet. =P
01:06:769 - The hitsound volume should go back up here, not stay so quiet. ok, I will check when my map complete

[Normal]
00:21:922 (5) - Maybe it's just personal preference, but I would point this slider in the opposite direction so that when it finishes, it "leads into" the rest of the combo. You know what I mean? ok, I will check when my map complete

[Hard]
00:18:845 (6) - Start next combo here. ok
00:38:692 (1) - No new combo needed. Also, I don't think it has to be that quiet. Maybe 60% or even 65% ok
00:47:346 (1) - Add a whistle hitsound here, just on the beginning end. ok
00:48:884 (1) - ^ ok
01:10:615 (3) - ^ to the whole slider. I think just on the beginning is fine
02:20:340 (1-14) - Just a suggestion, but add gradually louder soft "standard" hitsounds.ok
-Add a break somewhere, too. Some 10-15 seconds would be fine.

I can't do Taiko because I don't play it. =(

Anyways, I hope that helped!

bbj0920 wrote:

[Hard]
Why normal sound.. it sounds.. very... strong..? is it really that loud? I think it's because I put so much whistle on it
00:10:202 (2) - 1.5 grid right (0.5 is 1grid in tiny) ok
00:13:535 (3) - Finish ok
00:28:308 (1), 00:29:846 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/269672 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/269674 I think they look better can you give me the coodinate please?
00:57:154 (3) - clap in start and softwhistle in end
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/269675 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/269676 Like this. I think just clap in start is ok
01:03:500 (4) - How about 1/6? um.. I think 1/4 is fine
01:45:807 (8) - it fits with 01:45:230 (7) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/269678 ok, that looks better
02:08:988 (1), 02:10:610 (2) - I think they look better http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/269684 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/269685 same as 00:28:308 (1), 00:29:846 (3)

and it only download hard
fiz it plz ah internet problem, will be fixed

DarkDunskin wrote:

Koko's Taiko:

Disclaimer: k = clap / d = no hitsound / K = clap + finish / D = finish

- 00:14:855 (48,49,50,51,52,53) - Please only use 4 1/6 beats in a row, using longer 1/6 parts is very very hard. DONE
- 00:15:961 (54) - add finish/remove clap. DONE
- 01:04:461 (360,361,362,363,364,365,366,367,368) - delete the last two notes here, change the rest to kddkddk
- 01:18:692 (452,453,454) - You may use 1/6 here if you want.
- 01:23:692 (487) - add finish here. DONE
- 01:31:288 (539,540) - delete 539, remove clap/ add finish on 540. (???
- 02:20:543 (1) - make the spinner longer to 02:22:570 - and add a finish Note at 02:22:772. DONE

DarkDunskin wrote:

Hard:
- 00:26:153 (4) - curve this slider like this. fixed
- 00:28:308 (1) - curve this slider more like this, copy&paste and ctrl+j/h it at 00:29:846 (3) - afterwards.
it should look this way at the end. fixed
- 00:49:846 (1) - move the sliderpoint a bit down so it looks like this fixed
- 00:50:807 (2) - That slider crosses the lifebar, please move it down somehow. fixed
- 01:23:500 (2,3) - These sliders don't look so well since you used curved sliders all the time before. fixed
- 01:25:231 (7) - ^ fixed
- 01:28:884 (9) - move it a bit down, it crosses lifebar a bit. fixed
- 01:32:922 (5) - curve this more properly, like the first one I mentioned fixed
- 01:45:807 (8) - This slider is not parallel to (7), switch to ->view -> Grid lvl 4 and move the sliderend one grid up :3 fixed
- 01:44:845 (5,6) - stack these with 01:46:384 (1,2) - looks better. fixed
- 01:49:845 (11) - curve it more properly. fixed
- 02:02:299 (2,4,6) - stack them more properly. I changed the pattern

Normal:
- 00:03:119 (2) - move it one grid down.fixed
- 00:32:923 (7) - move the sliderpoint in the middle one grid up.fixed
- 00:34:461 (1,2) - curve these slider more properly please.fixed
- 00:51:384 (5) - ^fixed

1867,416.666666666667,4,1,0,100,1,0
16033,387.096774193548,4,1,0,100,1,0
26033,387.096774193548,4,1,0,100,1,0
26081,389.61038961039,4,1,0,100,1,0
26129,392.156862745098,4,1,0,100,1,0
26178,394.736842105263,4,1,0,100,1,0
26227,397.350993377483,4,1,0,100,1,0
26276,400,4,1,0,100,1,0
26326,402.684563758389,4,1,0,100,1,0
26376,405.405405405405,4,1,0,100,1,0
26426,408.163265306122,4,1,0,100,1,0
26477,410.958904109589,4,1,0,100,1,0
26528,413.793103448276,4,1,0,100,1,0
26579,416.666666666667,4,1,0,100,1,0
26631,419.58041958042,4,1,0,100,1,0
26683,422.535211267606,4,1,0,100,1,0
26735,400,4,1,0,100,1,0
27138,387.096774193548,4,1,0,100,1,0
116267,405.405405405405,4,1,0,100,1,0
142719,387.096774193548,4,1,0,100,1,0

lufi10 wrote:

is it me or what
but since 16033, the beat is too far

1, Min:Sec:Frames=0:00:00, Tempo, tempo: 416667 [143.9999 beats per minute]
2, Min:Sec:Frames=0:15:00, Tempo, tempo: 387096 [155.0003 beats per minute]
3, Min:Sec:Frames=0:25:25, Tempo, tempo: 382165 [157.0002 beats per minute]
4, Min:Sec:Frames=0:25:25, Tempo, tempo: 387096 [155.0003 beats per minute]
5, Min:Sec:Frames=0:25:27, Tempo, tempo: 389610 [154.0002 beats per minute]
6, Min:Sec:Frames=0:26:00, Tempo, tempo: 392156 [153.0003 beats per minute]
7, Min:Sec:Frames=0:26:02, Tempo, tempo: 394736 [152.0003 beats per minute]
8, Min:Sec:Frames=0:26:03, Tempo, tempo: 397350 [151.0004 beats per minute]
9, Min:Sec:Frames=0:26:05, Tempo, tempo: 400000 [150 beats per minute]
10, Min:Sec:Frames=0:26:06, Tempo, tempo: 402684 [149.0002 beats per minute]
11, Min:Sec:Frames=0:26:07, Tempo, tempo: 405405 [148.0002 beats per minute]
12, Min:Sec:Frames=0:26:09, Tempo, tempo: 408163 [147.0001 beats per minute]
13, Min:Sec:Frames=0:26:11, Tempo, tempo: 410958 [146.0003 beats per minute]
14, Min:Sec:Frames=0:26:12, Tempo, tempo: 413793 [145 beats per minute]
15, Min:Sec:Frames=0:26:14, Tempo, tempo: 416666 [144.0002 beats per minute]
16, Min:Sec:Frames=0:26:16, Tempo, tempo: 419580 [143.0001 beats per minute]
17, Min:Sec:Frames=0:26:18, Tempo, tempo: 422535 [142.0001 beats per minute]
18, Min:Sec:Frames=0:26:19, Tempo, tempo: 400000 [150 beats per minute]
19, Min:Sec:Frames=0:27:01, Tempo, tempo: 387096 [155.0003 beats per minute]
20, Min:Sec:Frames=1:56:13, Tempo, tempo: 405405 [148.0002 beats per minute]

Rei_Fan49 wrote:

hmmm ... pokoknya 16033 tuh bagian stanza 8:0 dari (200ms offset, bukan 1867ms offset)...

Rei_Fan49 wrote:

lol sekarang modding mode *pichun!

[Easy - 1/2 problems]> 1/2 is annoying for newbie (especially EASY) looking for MAT or BAT if this acceptable

[Easy]> HP,AR,OD -1 ? umm...
> i hope there's a butterfly slider (i miss him) lol, since the grid is very small.. slider style is the important key.. mending gak usah
01:40:695 (4,5) - lol finish spam lol
02:07:381 (1,1) - i feel the spinner's end should be merged into slider.. (it means no spinner, i feel with that AR would do something like countdown to press lol) ho oh

[Normal]> mixed between hard and easy huh.. its ok..
> AR,HP+1 ? ok
01:29:883 (1) - change into something different ? I think spinner is fine
01:51:229 (5) - remove whistle ok

[Hard]> i like how this hard is made... it was nearly FCable for me.. poorly with dat stream
00:01:889 (1,2) - those centre point, nazi em to center by 1 grid... (1) - 1 to left , (2) - 1 to right done
00:26:225 (4) - doesn't feel right with 3rd whistle here... done
00:33:003 (3,4,5,6,1) - i love how this psuedo stack is made ^^ credit to OzzyOzrock
00:53:003 (4) - NC ok?
00:56:657 (2,3) - connect both slider end done
01:15:695 (2) - no whist done
01:15:887 (3) - slider start , add whist done
01:16:464 (4) - invert from whist to no whist and vice versa opo iki?
01:17:233 (6) - no whist done
01:17:426 (7) - slider start , add whist done
01:28:003 (6) - no whist done
01:28:195 (7) - slider start , add whist done
01:43:772 (3) - decrease the length by 1/4 done
01:54:541 (1,2,3,4) - slider start , add whist done
02:20:354 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - wtf is this ?? this is stream *you don't say*

[Taiko]
00:14:388 (43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52) - those beat on 1/8 zone.. and i know 1/8 is forbidden.. maybe 1/4 only or 1/6 only is better ... ? lol, (43,44,45,46,47,48) in on 1/4. (49,50,51,52) is on 1/6

00:26:369 (1,2,1,1,1) - this is offbeat because the timing is degrading per 1/8 beats (according to ZUN timing) yeah, I think timing for taiko is different with other standard diffs

1. Everything looks fine on the block. Let's go to the diffs.

1. I don't really like the 1/2 beat-spaced circles and sliders. For example, the ones at 00:18:869 (1,2). IMO, it's not good for an Easy beatmap to include the 1/2 beat-spaces.
2. 00:31:426 (2) - Even though the music gets somewhat... (heavier?) here, I don't think that Whistle really fits.
3. 00:37:580 (4) - ^
4. 00:43:734 (3) - ^
5. 00:49:888 (1,2) - ^
6. 01:28:344 (2) - ^
7. 01:40:652 (4,5) - Remove Whistle at the beginning?
8. 01:46:806 (1) - Same as 00:31:426 (2).
9. 02:21:778 - I... can't see the reason why is a timing point placed there.

1. 00:21:177 (4) - Remove Whistle?
2. 00:39:119 (5) - Add Whistle?
3. 01:14:113 (2) - I don't know if this is just me, but I tend to get >10ms mistimed hit on this circle (and sometimes a 100).

1. 00:50:849 (2) - Position the end of the slider to (280,16)?
2. 00:51:426 (3) - Move this to (352,56)? (Only do this if you're following the suggestion above.)
3. 01:04:498 (1,2,3) - Make a shorter jump? Don't really think jumps are fine here, actually.
4. 02:20:359 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - IMO, making a stream here isn't a good idea (and even more if it's silenced to 20%). Can't think of anything good for this, so I suppose I'll just let it as is.

Hinsvar wrote:

>Normal

1. 00:21:177 (4) - Remove Whistle? ok
2. 00:39:119 (5) - Add Whistle? ok
3. 01:14:113 (2) - I don't know if this is just me, but I tend to get >10ms mistimed hit on this circle (and sometimes a 100). removed

>Hard

1. 00:50:849 (2) - Position the end of the slider to (280,16)? ok
2. 00:51:426 (3) - Move this to (352,56)? (Only do this if you're following the suggestion above.) ok
3. 01:04:498 (1,2,3) - Make a shorter jump? Don't really think jumps are fine here, actually. ok
4. 02:20:359 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - IMO, making a stream here isn't a good idea (and even more if it's silenced to 20%). Can't think of anything good for this, so I suppose I'll just let it as is.

That's my mod. Pretty good thing you got here.

Good luck on the way

Rei_Fan49 wrote:

lol sekarang modding mode *pichun!

[Easy - 1/2 problems]> 1/2 is annoying for newbie (especially EASY)
00:18:875 (1,2) - wtf 1/2 ?!!! remove (1) -removed
00:21:952 (1,2) - ^ -removed
01:14:157 (2,3) - ^ -removed
01:26:464 (3,4) - ^ -removed
Ignored resulting spacing errors here, no one cares anyways o.0
01:51:080 (1) - convert into a circle at start of sliderconverted but not stacked

[Easy]> HP,AR,OD -1 ? -okay
> i hope there's a butterfly slider (i miss him) lol, since the grid is very small.. slider style is the important key..
01:40:695 (4,5) - lol finish spam -removed
02:07:381 (1,1) - i feel the spinner's end should be merged into slider.. (it means no spinner, i feel with that AR would do something like countdown to press lol) actually I like it more this way, no change

180,156,5222,2,2,B|136:208|40:208|0:156,2,200

256,40,127386,6,0,B|240:80,3,40
241,77,127791,2,0,B|255:119,3,40
254,114,128197,2,0,B|239:151,3,40
239,152,128602,2,0,B|256:192,3,40

nich95 wrote:

Hi, lufi10

from my modding queue

[Normal]

00:15:985 (1) - Add finish in slider begin ok
00:27:396 (2) - Move right 1 grid I moved both sliders, but no distance change
00:28:350 (3) - Add finish in slider begin ok
00:34:503 (1) - ^ ok
00:46:811 (1) - ^ ok
00:57:575 (1) - Spinner is too short auto mod gets 2000 bonus points, so I think it's fine
01:03:344 (3) - Add finish in slider end ok

[Hard]
00:33:926 (4,5,6,1) - move to overlap with (3), and add finish in slider begin of (1)
00:35:849 (2) - Move to x:128 y:168
00:36:042 (3) - Move left 2 grid
umm... no, because of stacking

That's all, that I can find them.
nice song.

Good luck~

SPOILER

SPOILER

224,216,28348,6,0,B|255:281|216:352|128:360|88:304,2,240,4|2|2

B2IN wrote:

[Normal]
00:05:222 (1) - left 1grid (second dot) ok
00:06:055 (2) - right 1grid (second dot) ok
00:06:889 (3) - left 1grid (second dot) ok
00:11:888 (3) - nc ok
01:11:998 (4) - how about this one ? no change, sorry

[Hard]
00:28:348 (1) - ok

01:59:075 (6,7,8) - change like 01:57:453 (8,1) but, I love 1/2 in this part

good luck

1. 00:13:138 (2,3) - add whistle?
2. 00:21:561 (4) - move 2nd slider point to (112,256) 3rd slider point to (208,328)
3. 00:27:947 (3,4) - move up 1 grid because it's stacked then looks bad in that slider
4. 00:44:694 (3) - move 2nd and 3rd slider points 1 grid left
5. 01:11:806 (6) - 2nd slider point 2 grids right
6. 01:15:844 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/285379 arrange like this
7. 01:23:536 (2) - http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot334-1.jpg
8. 01:24:113 (3) - ^
9. 01:31:421 (1) - last point -> (32,192)
10. 01:43:729 (3) - it's not perfect triangle 0.0
11. 01:52:959 (8) - ^
12. 02:21:759 (1) - don't use 5% on the head of slider, just at the end... silence slider head is unrankable i think

1. 00:18:100 (5) - move to 00:17:908 (5) -> add 1 repeat
2. 00:51:424 (5) - http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot335-0.jpg

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

Hard

1. 00:13:138 (2,3) - add whistle? added whistle on (1)
2. 00:21:561 (4) - move 2nd slider point to (112,256) 3rd slider point to (208,328) moved 2nd slider point to (104,256)
3. 00:27:947 (3,4) - move up 1 grid because it's stacked then looks bad in that slider but I like this blanket circle
4. 00:44:694 (3) - move 2nd and 3rd slider points 1 grid left ok
5. 01:11:806 (6) - 2nd slider point 2 grids right I know this slider looks ugly, but if I doing so, it will make (6) and (7) too far
6. 01:15:844 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/285379 arrange like this ok
7. 01:23:536 (2) - http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot334-1.jpg ok
8. 01:24:113 (3) - ^ ok
9. 01:31:421 (1) - last point -> (32,192) (48,192)
10. 01:43:729 (3) - it's not perfect triangle 0.0 ok
11. 01:52:959 (8) - ^ ^
12. 02:21:759 (1) - don't use 5% on the head of slider, just at the end... silence slider head is unrankable i think

29% is ok I think

Normal

1. 00:18:100 (5) - move to 00:17:908 (5) -> add 1 repeat deleted (4) and added 2 repeats
2. 00:51:424 (5) - http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot335-0.jpg

ok

easy is fine.

that's all

Good luck~

• 01:11:229 (2) It might be for beginners too difficult to hit this button because, it is not on the white Tick. Make a slider starting from 01:11:036 - 01:11:229, like this.

• 00:26:946 (1,2) - Snap the end of both sliders together.
  00:59:113 (1,2,3) - It doesn't fitcorrectly into the song. If you Ctrl+R 00:59:498 (2,3), it is way better, but you have to resnap them.
  My proposal: As i said, Ctrl+R 00:59:498 (2,3), then Ctrl+R 01:00:075 (3), and the Ctrl+shift+R 00:59:498 (2) by -60 degrees and put it like this.
  01:11:998 (4) - Make it maybe 1/4th longer.
  01:12:960 (1,2) - Both are 1/2th to long and destroy the flow. Shorten both by 1/2th and place a circle on 01:14:113 and place the second slider on 01:14:498. That's my idea Just an additive idea for 01:16:036 (5)

• 
  00:31:424 (1) - This Slider mustn't be hidden in any way by other slides. In this case 00:29:886 (3). Fix this.
  My proposal: Ctrl+Shift+R 00:31:424 (1,2,3) by 13 degrees and stack the end of 00:32:963 (3) on 00:33:924 (4) this way. Move 00:31:232 (4) one gridlength left on x:136 y:216 and all be good.
  00:43:732 (2) - Same Issue here. 00:42:194 (5) mustn't cover 00:43:732 (2).
  00:45:078 - Add a note and stack it on the slider 00:45:271 (5).
  
  02:21:759 (1) - I don't like this slider, but that is just my personal opinion.

1. 00:07:514 (4) - (optional) About this slider, how about creating a ?-shaped slider here, so it could encircle (1)'s start? Not that hard to do, but flows a lot better with (3) imo
2. 00:23:485 (2) - Hmm, is it intentional to curve the slider like this (without red waypoints)? With red waypoints, you could get the turning effect more imo...
3. 00:26:754 (2) - As this is an Easy diff, I think it would help beginners more if you stick to the previous rhythm (on the red line) - a short 1/2 slider on 00:26:754 will do, or even you can create a 1/1 slider as well. I just personally feel beginners will find its hard to time this circle perfectly because of the change of rhythm
4. 00:27:168 (1) - Why no finish here, to emphasize there's a new part from the song? I know you already had one on your previous circle, but adding another one here could drastically dramatize this part
5. 00:29:886 (2) - Not perfectly equal with 00:31:424 (2) if CTRL+H'ed (:
6. 00:36:040 (3,4) - Although straight sliders play fine here, but you definitely could go much more creative with slider shape here, as following: (this also gives more space between (4) and 00:40:655 (1))
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 00:46:809 (1) - Hmm, why no finish here (as you mostly did before)? I highly suggest to add one (as there's a splashing sound coming from the song)
8. 01:11:806 (3) - Clap on slider's start could really spice up this part (:
9. 01:16:036 (2) - (optional) Use a tilted slider wave here as well? Flows better than just a straight slider imo:
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 01:26:613 (4) - Finish on slider's start (you've done so on 01:14:306 (3) previously - just keep the hitsounding consistent as the song doesn't change much)
11. 01:34:498 (3,4) - I don't think stacking (4) under (3) is friendly enough for beginners, although it plays fine...
12. 01:35:459 (1) - The finish on slider's start is out of place. You shouldn't add finish on the red tick - instead, if you want to add one, it should belong in the downbeat
13. 01:44:498 (1) - (optional) I think by using two circles instead they can build a better post-spinner flow here (because there will be a followpoint accompanying), for example:
    
    SPOILER

    
14. 01:51:036 (1) - Hmm, missing clap here?
15. 01:54:883 (2,3) - (optional) Hmm, imo it would be nice if these two could be dragged more to the bottom-right to create a sharper angle, but it's purely optional
16. 02:18:737 (4) - Also with this one, the ending would be fancier imo if this slider is curved as well such as what you did on 02:13:062 (4)

1. 00:04:805 (4) - Is this placed too far from (3) by purpose? It's better to keep up with your 1.0x spacing here imo...
2. 00:05:222 (1) - Minor stuff, but move the endpoint one grid right to keep it parallel with (2) and (3)
3. 00:08:555 (1,2) - (optional) Because your previous (3) is a straight slider, I don't think you should suddenly go with bezier curve here, try to adapt with the linearity with this kind of slider:
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:11:888 (1,2) - Why the whistling pattern stops here? Would be much wiser to continue it imo. Also, that finish on (2) is definitely too strong for the intro
5. 00:17:715 (4) - Again here, although it's a 4x repeating 1/2 slider doesn't mean that you should stop your whistles - try to add some, at least one on the second repeat. This suggestion applies for next parts like this
6. 00:26:946 (1,2) - Definitely not intuitive, even for an Insane. It's not that hard to CTRL+R (2), furthermore you can arrange like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 00:27:947 (1,2,3) - Considering that you're using maximum stack leniency here, I don't think this stack will do good for players (although it plays fine)
8. 00:37:578 (3,4) - (optional) Here's one fancy thing you can do here :3
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 00:39:117 (5) - Feels really empty here. Extend this circle into a 3/2 slider instead?
10. 00:45:271 (7) - Not a time for a finish yet imo (finish should be on 00:46:809 (1)) - use whistle on slider's start?
11. 00:52:578 (6) - Although it's readable, this note is closer to (5) instead of (1). Is it intentional?
12. 00:54:113 (2,4) - It is highly recommended to keep your clapping consistent every 2/1 instead of 4/1 here - if you decide to do this, take a look for the next parts' clap positioning
13. 01:03:344 (3) - Compared to (2), definitely you're curving this too much :3 (moving the waypoint to the right a bit with grid snap off shouldn't be that hard)
14. 01:11:998 (4) - Add one more repeat. 01:12:575 bears the key note for this rhythm - leaving that unmapped feels incomplete
15. 01:14:306 (2,3) - Hold SHIFT while placing (2) to let it perfectly stand beside (3). Also, (optional) to keep symmetry, I think this will do good on (3):
    
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16. 01:22:190 (3) - Add finish as well on slider's end? There's a splashing sound from the song
17. 01:36:036 (4) - Here as well, whistle fits a lot on the slider's end
18. 01:47:383 (3,4) - Why (4) is so close to (3) @_@ - hmm, dragging it few grids down won't be that hard, plus you can curve this slightly upward if you don't wanna break the distance from (4) to (5)
19. 01:52:190 (1,2,3) - (optional) With your current (3)'s shape, I'd rather arrange (1)'s end, (2), and (3)'s start on a straight line, but it's up to you
20. 02:12:251 (1,2,3) - You know, you could just rotate (1) 120° to each (2) and (3)...
21. 02:15:494 (1,2,3,4) - The overlap on (2,4) is very discouraged - I'd prefer curve (1,2) like this instead to avoid such overlap:
    
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1. 00:08:555 (1,2) - I think you're too forcing symmetry here... Which resulting in an ugly overlap between (5) and (1). It's not that hard to move these two downward so you can get more freedom to curve these two :3
2. 00:13:139 (2,3) - Same as before, why don't just let them flow by creating a triangle pattern, for example (rather than forcing a symmetry by stacking them)?
3. 00:17:331 (3) - Put the sliderwhistle (whistle on slider's body) on? Fits a lot here
4. 00:22:138 (5) - Put the new combo here, instead of on 00:22:908 (1) - new combo plays a lot better in the downbeat instead on the standard white tick :3
5. 00:24:254 (5,6) - (optional) Arrange (6) in an antagonistic direction with (5)? Looks better imo: (also new combo on (6) due to the stack)
   
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6. 00:33:924 (4,5,6,1) - I do get the point here, but they're still not perfect - move them a bit to the upper-right without grid snap on
7. 00:35:847 (2,4) - Stack these two? Also, (optional) would be fancier imo if these two is moved to the left a bit (mine is x:169 y:176), so there will be a slight arc between (1,2,3)
8. 00:38:155 (6,7) - (optional) Would be nice imo if you can encircle (5) from the outside like this:
   
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9. 00:44:694 (3) - Is this altered into a 1/4 slider by accident? Should be 1/2 here
10. 00:49:886 (1) - Seeing this slider is placed slightly lower than (3), I think it will be much better to direct this slider to the upper-right with a curve downward - this will also give players a better sight on 00:51:424 (3)
11. 00:51:809 (1,3) - (optional) CTRL+R these two if you wish ^^
12. 00:59:690 (2,3,4) - Hmm, it's quite obvious that the spacing suddenly goes dense on (3,4) - is this intentional?
13. 01:06:806 (4) - Starting from this slider, I think you should start to re-increase the volume back to 60% (45% just feels to weak for this energetic part)
14. 01:17:959 (8,1,2,3,4) - If you're going to create an arc here, it would be much better if first you curve (8) downward instead of upward:
    
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15. 01:27:767 (5,6,7) - (optional) I personally dislike how these three is arranged in a straight line - it won't be that hard to move (6) upward so there will be a zig-zag formation here
16. 01:31:421 (1) - This post-spinner note is missing a New Combo - you must add one manually
17. 01:36:421 (6,2) - Is it intentional you place these two this close? Again, moving (2) upward a bit wouldn't be that hard...
18. 01:40:652 (6,8) - (optional) Judging from your (7)'s position, I'd rather keep a symmetry between these two here, but that's not something really necessary
19. 01:47:959 (5,6) - Switch these two's position. This is to avoid such overlap happens on 01:46:806 (3,5)
20. 01:54:498 (1,2,3,4) - (optional) Create this kind of jump? (With this, you can stack (10) and (2))
    
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21. 02:01:507 (4) - Move the whistle to (3)'s end to keep your previous whistling pattern consistent
22. 02:20:359 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,...) - Gradually increase their volume here? (the music did it, so why not follow it as well~)

Niva wrote:

Mod request via Forum PM ~

[General]

-> Your comboburst has an unperfect cut on the right side - it causes a portion of the image incomplete! fixed
-> Hmm, do you really need that extra timing section on 00:52:960? It does not reset the metronome's tick, and the BPM doesn't change as well... well, I got this timing from Leorda http://puu.sh/oyZQ
-> And finally, slider tick rate 2 fits a lot for this song (using 1 is fine imo, but don't use 0.5 - this song is perfect for those sliderticks) ok

[Normal]

-> I don't think you'll need OD 6 here, would be more balanced imo if you use HP Drain and OD 4 ok

[*]02:12:251 (1,2,3) - You know, you could just rotate (1) 120° to each (2) and (3)... I tried and it doesn't work
[Hard]
01:31:421 (1) - This post-spinner note is missing a New Combo - you must add one manually I really don't know what this mean
[*]01:36:421 (6,2) - Is it intentional you place these two this close? Again, moving (2) upward a bit wouldn't be that hard...

[*]01:54:498 (1,2,3,4) - (optional) Create this kind of jump? (With this, you can stack (10) and (2)) I like it, but no change , sorry

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imo, it would help much if you use grid lv4 while editing (considering your mapping style is mostly encircling something)
Good luck~

1. remove first short kiai time, it's unnecessary for taiko diff to have short kiai time
2. please make the hitsound volume consistent, it doesn't affect much on gameplay
3. don't use 0.5 slider tick rate, it's unrankable

[general]

1. slider can be more pretty

[Dunskin's Easy]

1. Useless blue line:(although no effect)
   00:01:452 -
   00:15:723 -
   00:28:114 -
   00:52:731 -
   01:06:000 -
   01:31:288 -
   01:43:596 -
   02:07:265 -
   
   
2. 00:05:222 (3) - NC
3. 00:11:888 (3) - ^
4. 00:36:040 (3) - ^
5. 00:37:578 (4,5) - spacing
6. 00:43:732 (3) - NC
7. 00:48:347 (3) - ^
8. 01:15:652 (1,2) - (1) remove NC and (2) NC
9. 01:22:190 (5) - NC
10. 01:24:113 (1,2) - (1) remove NC and (2) NC
11. 01:27:959 (1,2) - ^
12. 01:34:498 (3) - NC
13. 01:35:459 (1,2) - (1) remove NC and (2) NC
14. 01:40:652 (4) - NC
15. 01:49:883 (3) - ^
16. 01:51:036 (1,2) - (1) remove NC and (2) NC
17. 02:09:616 (1,2,3,4) - spacing
18. 02:12:251 (3) - NC
19. 02:14:480 (1,2) - (1) remove NC and (2) NC
20. 02:18:737 (4) - NC

[Normal]

1. 00:03:555 (3) - NC
2. 00:17:331 (3) - ^
3. 00:31:424 (3) - ^
4. 00:37:578 (3) - ^
5. 00:43:732 (5) - ^
6. 02:18:737 (3) - ^

[Hard]

1. Useless blue line:(although no effect)
   01:07:057 -
   
   
2. Useless green line:
   01:31:421 -
   
   
   
3. 00:32:963 (3,4,5,6,1) - let (4),(5),(6),(1) covered by (3) ?
4. 01:59:278 (7) - NC
5. 00:31:424 (3) - ^
6. 00:37:578 (3) - ^
7. 00:43:732 (5) - ^
8. 02:18:737 (3) - ^

NoHitter wrote:

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As your request.

[General]
Your comboburst exceeds the 388x767 limit. ok
Kind of unsure about the timing. Get someone to confirm it perhaps.
Hitsounds need some work IMO. More claps would be nice. I changed somethinf in normal

[Normal]
I highly suggest you make the first timing section soft sampleset. It fits the song better IMO. ok
01:11:806 () - Was really expecting a note here.
01:37:575 (5) - New combo? ok

[Hard]
I highly suggest you make the first timing section soft sampleset. It fits the song better IMO. ok
00:25:023 (4) - New combo. Fits the music better. ok
00:25:600 (1) - Remove new combo. ^ ok
02:20:359 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - I would say this part is already considered an Insane. I can't find better pattern for this

Gatyaa wrote:

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Random mod

[Normal]
01:06:806 (1) - Remove whistle at the reverse arrow and put it at the start of the slider instead, oh and add finish too at the start of the slider
01:08:344 (2) - ^
01:16:036 (3) - Add whistle at the start of the slider
01:19:113 (1) - Remove whistle at the reverse arrow and put it at the start of the slider instead, add finish too at the start of the slider
01:20:652 (2) - ^
01:22:190 (3) - Add whistle at the start of the slider
01:24:690 (1) - Add whistle at the reverse arrow
01:37:575 (5) - Add whistle
01:43:729 (3) - Clap at the reverse arrow
01:45:267 (3) - ^
01:46:806 (2) - Clap at the end of the slider
01:47:383 (3) - ^
01:47:959 (4) - ^
01:49:883 (3) - ^
01:50:652 (4) - ^
01:51:421 (6) - ^
01:52:190 (1) - ^
01:52:959 (3) - ^
01:53:536 (4) - ^
01:54:113 (5) - ^

[Hard]
02:01:102 (3) - Add whistle at the reverse arrow

Most all mods are about hitsounds

not changed everything, but I fixed something

wmfchris wrote:

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01:31:421 - ~ 01:56:035 - is another considerable kiai section, you may put a kiai flash at 02:22:772 - too.
and yeah, combobrust exceeds dimension limit, remember to use full submit. ok


[Hard]
00:39:117 (4) - whistle at the end? ok
00:46:424 (6) - try other sldier path because it blocks the coming (2) recently fixed
01:00:267 (3,4) - left 1 grid lv4 to refine spacing ok

[Normal]
00:12:722 (2) - remove whistle at the end ok
00:27:362 (2) - ^ ok
01:11:998 (4) - As the diff is quite easy try not to put such slider because weaker palyers can't determine when it ends (4 or 5 tick?) Also it feels empty at the 1 beat break after that, though adding one more tick makes it even more difficult. uh yeah, gonna find any better pattern for this

Not bad, but try to make difficulty spread even (some parts are significantly easier and some are harder); and make smooth flow (1/2 vs 1 beat notes/break) throughout the diff


good luck~

why did you edit your post

wmfchris wrote:

[Taiko]
- Remove flashing kiai
- Soften the sound a bit
00:39:886 - 臨尾個tone向上 所以似kkkkddk / kkddddk done!
nice!!

1. Kiai time: just a little thing, add green timing points at 02:23:025 for turn off the kiai time. seems unecessary kiai time until end but no notes in there.

1. Difficulty Setting: Increase all setting +1 (except Circle Size). seems too slow moving.
2. 00:05:222 (1) - can you remove whistle sound in the slider body? the sound was strange for me
3. 00:11:888 (1) - same as above
4. 00:18:869 (1) - add clap in the slider's end? the sound seems like before note imo, I'm sure adding clap in here is more comfortable.
5. 00:21:946 (1) - same as above
6. 00:23:485 (2) - this slider seems weird for me, I think just more curved this slider more sharp? like this
   

   56,223,23485,2,0,B|94:272|70:327|70:327|115:308|163:331,1,200

7. 01:09:883 (1,2) - remove all whistle in here, what reason you can add whistle in here? not fit with the backsound. beside that, the sound is still same with the before notes.
8. 01:11:806 (3) - add clap in the slider's beginning? the sound seems more comfortable for me.
9. 01:14:306 (2) - remove whistle in the slider's beginning
10. 01:16:036 (1,2) - same as 01:09:883
11. 01:38:344 (2) - add clap in the slider's end? I think the sound still similar with the beginning

1. [00:01:889 (1) - add finish in the slider's beginning? like easy did. also, for following the cymbal sounder too.
2. 00:06:889 (3) - why you change the consistent whistle with clap? remove clap in the end, then add whistle in there.
3. 00:32:963 (3) - add whistle in the end~
4. 00:40:655 (3) - add finish sound in the beginning. for following the cymbal sounder. the finish sound is give better effect when the cymbal sounder is heard :3
5. 00:43:732 (1,2,3) - uu, this pattern seems weird in some reason. the posisition isn't looked symmetry imo. I suggest to change them like this
   

   160,184,43732,6,0,B|128:232|160:293,1,110,0|2
   226,236,44501,2,0,B|251:176|223:124,1,110,0|2
   307,95,45271,2,0,B|339:175|299:279,2,165,2|0|0

   don't forget to fix spacing from (3) into (1).
6. 00:51:424 (5) - add finish sound in the slider's beginning. for same reason as I mentioned before.
7. 00:59:113 (1) - I know you following the rhythm, but the circle/note after spinner with 1/1, is too hard for normal (especially for newbie). delete this circle of course for the best way fix this. but, need you to know, if you do this, the rhythm still consistent (:
8. 01:16:036 (3) - add finish in the slider's beginning. same reason as I mentioned before. also, for consistent finish hitsounding like (1) and (2).
9. 01:19:113 (1) - ^
10. 01:31:421 (1) - same as I mentioned in 00:59:113, I suggest remove this slider, but longer the spinner in 01:29:883 (1) until the long white tick (01:31:421).
11. 01:37:575 (1) - remove all whistle in here. doesn't fit with the song = =
12. 01:40:652 (2) - add finish sound in the slider's beginning. for same reason as I mentioned before.
13. 02:22:772 (1) - this circle will overlap with the hitburst after spinner. consider to move into another place for visible by players.

1. 00:01:889 (1) - add finish in the slider's beginning? like easy did. also, for following the cymbal sounder too.
2. 00:45:271 (4,5) - I think these slider seems a bit messy and not good to look, do you want to try something like this ?
   

   284,175,45271,2,0,B|262:141|209:141|209:141|134:141,1,160
   70,178,45848,2,0,B|93:214|146:214|146:214|221:214,1,160

   but don't forget to fix spacing for another notes after doing this.
3. 00:47:963 (2) - ngg.. the slider's reverse is a bit overlap with (6). try to make it more visible to look?
4. 00:51:424 (3) - add finish in the slider's beginning, as I mentioned before about finish sound ;3
5. 00:52:960 (1) - same as above
6. 00:57:575 (1) - this spinner is too fast. really. (although auto can get bonuses >1000). I suggest to change this spinner into one slider instead the short spinner like this.
7. 01:03:536 (4) - add finish in the slider's end
8. 01:31:421 (1) - add finish in the slider's beginning more better instead the whistle sound imo.
9. 01:35:075 (4) - the slider's body is overlapped by (3)'s body. that's not good to look when gameplay. I think you should move to another place. the example like this maybe? then, still similar this, (5) can be move too -> picture
10. 01:52:959 (3) - same as 00:51:424
11. 02:07:791 (2,3,4) - the slider should be 1/6 for more following the song. I mean like this
12. 02:20:359 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - why the slider speed is changed? unecessary changed because no slider in here. use back 1.0x speed for this. well, the other suggestion for this, make the 1/6 slider like as 02:07:791

Star Stream wrote:

lufi10 - its timing is good now imo

Yasora wrote:

yo

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General

1. Kiai time: just a little thing, add green timing points at 02:23:025 for turn off the kiai time. seems unecessary kiai time until end but no notes in there.ok

Normal

1. [00:01:889 (1) - add finish in the slider's beginning? like easy did. also, for following the cymbal sounder too. ok
2. 00:06:889 (3) - why you change the consistent whistle with clap? remove clap in the end, then add whistle in there.ok
3. 00:32:963 (3) - add whistle in the end~ ok
4. 00:40:655 (3) - add finish sound in the beginning. for following the cymbal sounder. the finish sound is give better effect when the cymbal sounder is heard :3 ok
5. 00:43:732 (1,2,3) - uu, this pattern seems weird in some reason. the posisition isn't looked symmetry imo. I suggest to change them like this
   don't forget to fix spacing from (3) into (1). ok sip
6. 00:51:424 (5) - add finish sound in the slider's beginning. for same reason as I mentioned before.ok
7. 00:59:113 (1) - I know you following the rhythm, but the circle/note after spinner with 1/1, is too hard for normal (especially for newbie). delete this circle of course for the best way fix this. but, need you to know, if you do this, the rhythm still consistent (: I think the rhytm is weird
8. 01:16:036 (3) - add finish in the slider's beginning. same reason as I mentioned before. also, for consistent finish hitsounding like (1) and (2). ok
9. 01:19:113 (1) - ^ ok
10. 01:31:421 (1) - same as I mentioned in 00:59:113, I suggest remove this slider, but longer the spinner in 01:29:883 (1) until the long white tick (01:31:421). ok
11. 01:37:575 (1) - remove all whistle in here. doesn't fit with the song = = ok
12. 01:40:652 (2) - add finish sound in the slider's beginning. for same reason as I mentioned before. ok
13. 02:22:772 (1) - this circle will overlap with the hitburst after spinner. consider to move into another place for visible by players. ok

Hard

1. 00:01:889 (1) - add finish in the slider's beginning? like easy did. also, for following the cymbal sounder too. ok
2. 00:45:271 (4,5) - I think these slider seems a bit messy and not good to look, do you want to try something like this ?
   but don't forget to fix spacing for another notes after doing this. ok
3. 00:47:963 (2) - ngg.. the slider's reverse is a bit overlap with (6). try to make it more visible to look? ok
4. 00:51:424 (3) - add finish in the slider's beginning, as I mentioned before about finish sound ;3 ok
5. 00:52:960 (1) - same as above ok
6. 00:57:575 (1) - this spinner is too fast. really. (although auto can get bonuses >1000). I suggest to change this spinner into one slider instead the short spinner like this. I think it's fine, because it's hard diff
7. 01:03:536 (4) - add finish in the slider's end ok
8. 01:31:421 (1) - add finish in the slider's beginning more better instead the whistle sound imo. ok
9. 01:35:075 (4) - the slider's body is overlapped by (3)'s body. that's not good to look when gameplay. I think you should move to another place. the example like this maybe? then, still similar this, (5) can be move too -> picture but I like this overlapped sliders
10. 01:52:959 (3) - same as 00:51:424 ok
11. 02:07:791 (2,3,4) - the slider should be 1/6 for more following the song. I mean like this I don't want to make any snap above 1/4
12. 02:20:359 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - why the slider speed is changed? unecessary changed because no slider in here. use back 1.0x speed for this. well, the other suggestion for this, make the 1/6 slider like as 02:07:791 ^

That's all
Good luck :3

1. Hmm I'm not really sure about the long title. Isn't it suppose to be only "Border of Life" for the title?
2. The 2nd and 3rd combo color is very similar, please change one of them into another color (purple or maybe light blue)
3. It's recommended that the slider tick rate is the same through all diff, with that said, change the other two diff tick rate to 2 (and everyone have said that 0.5 slider tick rate is not allowed anymore, so why you no change it?)
4. I'm not sure about the sixth offset but that's because there aren't any fixed beat in that place. I suggest to ask more MAT/BAT that are more experience with timing as I'm not really great with it, oh but the other offset is fine so don't worry

1. Increase the OD and HP by 1. The current difficulty setting is very low compare to the normal diff

1. 01:11:998 (4,1) - I suggest to follow the music and add notes on 01:12:767. Here is my suggestion for this, of course you can use your own idea
   

1. 00:40:271 (1) - I don't understand why this have 0.7 distance snap, 1 DS is better
2. 00:43:732 (2) - The start of this slider is almost covered by the previous slider's end, and tbh it doesn't look good at all. I suggest to reposition the slider then make it a better blanket, something like this (here is the code if you're interested) you have to reposition the next sliders if you follow this
   

   168,268,43732,2,0,B|112:256|92:184|132:136,2,160,0|2|2

   
3. 00:47:963 (2) - This could be curved more better, try add 1 more anchor point so it'll be easier to make the slider have more neat curve (use grid level 4 for better precision)