1. Easy (1,21 stars, 172 notes)
2. Hard (4,31 stars, 353 notes)
3. Normal (2,77 stars, 253 notes)

kurohacker wrote:

Hi there!
I had a run with both of your maps, and here's what I think:

kurohacker's mod (^^)

[Easy]
I know it's weird, but I think this one feels more like a Normal than an Easy. Maybe you can change it? I think it's not so hard. Yes, it contains some 1/4 notes, but 69 BPM makes it much easier.

1:58:776 [1] - Shorten the slider and move it so that it starts at 1:59:993 instead.
2:12:689 [1] - Same case here. No. It's more like 1/8 shift here, but I like how it's now.^

[Hard]
This one feels like an Insane rather than a Hard, with the jumping and long combos. Maybe you can change this one too? I think it's not "insane" at all, because it's so slow and relaxing.


2:32:9056 [6] - Maybe add a finish at the end?
3:00:297 [4&5] - How about changing their hitsounds to whistles, to match the beats from earlier? no, sorry^
3:07:037 [4] - Move the circle 1 grid right (grid level 3). No, it has symmetry with 03:02:906 (3,4)

All in all, a very nice song, with very nice maps and very nice hitsounds.
A big, fat star for you~
All the best with your maps!

vivicat wrote:

Hi~ come from V.B.R.'s queue.

[General]
- Make the green lines a little early then the notes. they don't need it
- Some of your green lines is unnecessary,like this: 00:29:86 fixed

[Hard]
- Some hitsounds advice: Make the hitsounds more regular.For example: I like how it sounds now
the part of begin to 00:20:297:
00:16:382(4) - soft normal
00:19:862(3) - soft normal

03:07:254(5) - left one grid,down two grid (grid level 3)
03:07:689(6) - left one grid This jump is for symmetry with 03:00:297 (4,5). And it's cool, imho.

[Normal]
- open .osu file and find:
SliderMultiplier:1.99999990463257 It is created by osu editor (hard have 2.49999990463257), so I'm afraid to break something.
and change it to 2
00:57:689(4) - up 1 grid ok
02:35:950(4,1,2) - left one grid symmetry with 02:22:037 (3,1,2)
02:48:124(2) - left one grid no

star~good luck

Yomeiro wrote:

Hi there :3

Well I can't really say much about your maps....
Just found some things on Hard but not really that much

General

Maybe add a Normal diff to your mapset somehow. Well, I don't really want to make it now. Maybe later or somebody will make guest diff.
Point difference between Easy and Hard is pretty "high".

Hard

01:56:384 (3) - Move this one grid up.
02:10:297 (3) - Move this one grid down. ok^
03:08:993 (2,3,4) - Just adjust these slider through distance spacing (basically it's one grid of "wrong" spacing so nothing much, just needs adjustment to the right direct, so for the first slider it would be one grid to the right.)
03:22:906 (3,4,5) - ^ my distance snap tell that this spacing is alright (and I think so too)^

Maybe I'm wrong with these spacings since they're just minor, so they're not even really noticable...

Didn't found anything wrong with your mapset like I already mentioned.
Maybe add a Normal and you should be perfectly fine^^

Star~

Sandpig wrote:

hi Hello!

(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)


Hard

the arrangement looks not pretty...maybe just because it's too slow?

01:05:080 (1) - the sliderslide in normal-sample is too loud, add a timing setting to change the part of sliderbody into soft-sample.
01:08:558 (1) - ^
01:33:341 (10) - ^ so plz check all sliders and it seems better not to use normal-sample for sliderbody. OK, changed all except 02:32:906 (6) and 02:46:819 (6) - they don't "work" without normal-sliderslide
01:35:080 (3) - consider changing it into normal-sample because 01:35:297 (4) hears a little weird. no
01:35:297 (4) - remove clap ok
02:28:993 (1) - turn down a little. volume? reduced a bit.
03:18:558 (2) - new combo? ok.


Easy

go over your map and fix some loud sliders. yes, fixed.


I think the hitsounds can be more systematic. maybe, but I like how it is now

Hushu wrote:

Hello gyt! Here is what I think...

Easy:
0:48:341 - Put a slider 1/4 long and repeat twice or 3 times instead, the long one does not resemble the beat because it does not have the requied ticks. Another way you could sort it out is rise the tick rate so it is 1/4. I don't find "beat" here - only vocal
1:14:210 - This beat can be created by repeating the previous slider. It will make more sense as its quite the same sound I hear. ok
1:57:689 - 1/1 long.
1:58:776 - Move 1/4 back, make it 1/2 long.
2:11:602 - Should be as long as the previous slider. Otherwise it sounds like additionals were put in.
2:12:689 - Move 1/4 later, make it 1/2 long. sliders follow vocal here, so I don't change it^
2:42:906 (1,2) - Suprising sounds, keep with your song and change whistles to the sounds you used previously. they are ok for me

SPOILER

...And thats all I can mod because I cant stand looking at the smoking guy. Seriously bad habit, farewell~

sorry for image

mebins wrote:

source? album Relayted in tags
add kai to 01:51:602 and stop at 02:03:341 no
EASY
01:24:599(3) bring it closer to 4 fixed

01:38:341 (3) gett it closer to 3 fixed

02:04:459 (1,2) put 1 back to the the red tick and keep 2 where it is I change this completely

ill mod normal later but heres easy sorry for the wait/.

Soul-less wrote:

As per request from mod queue~

[General]
- Tags: I believe it's spelt "related", not "relayted". Even so, don't think that tag's needed, indie/soft-rock is enough for tags.this is the album name
- Check notes snapping since system prompt me to save after resnapping all notes. For all 3 difficulties. ok

[Easy]
- Nice and easy.

[Normal]
- Seems fine.

[Hard]
- 01:00:732 (3,4), 01:32:906 (9,10), 02:29:863 (3,4), 02:43:776 (3,4) - Seems irregular jumps to me. If it's intended then keep them. it's intended


Nice notes arrangement. Nothing much to mod as this being a slow pace one.no star? bad music or what?

rEdo wrote:

[Easy]
0:51:819 (1) - i'd start this spinner at 0:52:471, on a white tick I start it at 00:52:254 instead
nothing really, i just kinda dislike this hitsound usage. you might make it similar to [Hard], so it sounds better It is similar in many ways. I don't fully understand, what exactly you dislike I tried to make it more similar to [Hard], thanks

[Normal]
some of those hitclaps on softvolume might be replaced with hitnormal on normalvolume, f.e. 0:23:776 (5) this thing exist in all diffs, so..
2:16:384 (1) - starting it on the white tick sounds a lot better ok
nothing really, i just kinda dislike this hitsound usage, just like in [Easy]

[Hard]
1:05:080 (1) - delete new combo
1:22:906 (1) - ^ ok^
1:34:863 (2) - spacing, move the whole complex by one grid to the left (i'd suggest turning off the grid snap for a while for the best results)
1:36:602 (6) - ^ ok^


nothing really much found. pretty fun, relaxing map i wish osu! had more of songs like this, too...
starrin'

Ekaru wrote:

Hard:

00:16:819 (5) - Unbalanced slider
03:03:776 (5) - This slider looks weird.

Normal:

01:55:080 (1) - Unbalanced slider.

Easy:

Seems fine.

<3 star. all fixed

1. 02:53:776 (5) - cancel whistle? only suggestion
2. 03:06:384 (3,4,5) - spacing

Colin Hou wrote:

at the first glimpse I thought the artist is Gayness OTL, ps. the BG's name is 'gayngss.jpg' lol it's not a big error

[Hard]:

1. 02:53:776 (5) - cancel whistle? only suggestion why only (5) and only in hard? don't change it
2. 03:06:384 (3,4,5) - spacing I made it for symmetry with 03:00:297 (4,5). But if it's so awful... Fixed, I think.

star~

KuraiPettan wrote:

Easy
01:54:210 (5) - Clap ?
02:08:124 (5) - Clap ? ok^
02:42:471 (1) - Imo, Normal whistles are ugly for this song D: many people point to this, so I changed whistle
02:52:906 (3,1) - ^

Normal
01:33:341 (3) - Clap ? no

Hard
02:42:906 (1,2) - As I've already said in "Easy", Normal whistles sounds ugly imo
02:53:341 (4,5) - ^


Weird Music but the map is fine
Star~

1. For the countdown, set the countdown speed to Double. It's better than the normal countdown speed.

1. 00:40:743 (2)-Fix the spacing on this by using the distance snap?
2. 00:52:254 (1)-Place the start of that spinner on 00:52:471 and place the end of that spinner on 00:54:210.
3. 01:35:080 (4)-Put a new combo here?
4. 02:05:515 (1)-Fix the spacing on this by using the distance snap.

1. 00:26:230 (3)-Fix the spacing on this by using the distance snap?
2. 01:01:602 (3)-^
3. 01:16:819 (2)-^
4. 01:29:863 (5)-^
5. 01:31:602 (1)-^
6. 02:21:602 (5)-^
7. 02:31:167 (3)-^
8. 02:35:515 (5)-^
9. 02:45:080 (3)-^

1. 02:32:906 (6)-Add a finish or a whistle on the end of that slider?

Roddie wrote:

Hey there.

General:

1. For the countdown, set the countdown speed to Double. It's better than the normal countdown speed. ok

Easy:

1. 00:40:743 (2)-Fix the spacing on this by using the distance snap? 1.02x isn't a big problem
2. 00:52:254 (1)-Place the start of that spinner on 00:52:471 and place the end of that spinner on 00:54:210. ok
3. 01:35:080 (4)-Put a new combo here? ok
4. 02:05:515 (1)-Fix the spacing on this by using the distance snap. fixed

Normal:

1. 00:26:230 (3)-Fix the spacing on this by using the distance snap? oh, this is a bit nazi stuff, because all spacing "errors" like 1.04x, but I fixed some.
2. 01:01:602 (3)-^
3. 01:16:819 (2)-^
4. 01:29:863 (5)-^
5. 01:31:602 (1)-^
6. 02:21:602 (5)-^
7. 02:31:167 (3)-^
8. 02:35:515 (5)-^
9. 02:45:080 (3)-^

Hard:

1. 02:32:906 (6)-Add a finish or a whistle on the end of that slider? no

And that's it!

It's worth a Star~

Good luck, man! thanks for mod!

Katsuri wrote:

Hard
00:51:167 (7) - New Combo
00:51:819 (3) - Remove New combo
01:05:080 (5) - Add New Combo
01:06:384 (1) - Remove NC(new combo)
01:08:558 (7) - Add NC
01:27:254 (1) - let the last red dot white ok
01:33:341 (10) - Spacing(?)
01:33:341 (10) - Add a clap on the start.
01:35:080 (3) - Remove Whistle and add a clap
01:42:689 (6) - Horrible slider, try it changed in a bit other way

SPOILER

01:43:776 (7) - Add NC ok
02:50:732 (1) - Good Job! thank you!

Normal
00:43:776 (6) - Apply Simetry
00:47:254 (6) - ^ ok
Easy
Fine~
Comments
Good map, the music is really boring but the map is not bad!
Starred~

1. Why "Relayted" in tags ? It's the title of the album. Maybe add that to the map description.

1. 00:30:732 (4) - Don't silence the end of sliders like that. The hitsound is needed for the rhythm - silencing it makes the rhythm and spacing confusing.

Odaril wrote:

Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why. Remember these are all suggestions.
Also, if you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game

General

1. Why "Relayted" in tags ? It's the title of the album. Maybe add that to the map description. it's already in description

Easy
Seems fine.

Normal
I'd maybe reduce the AR and OD by 1, seeing it's a very calm song, and the rhythms used aren't simple and might be confusing for new players. reduced OD only

Hard

1. 00:30:732 (4) - Don't silence the end of sliders like that. The hitsound is needed for the rhythm - silencing it makes the rhythm and spacing confusing. changed volume to 30%

darck360 wrote:

Hello ~

[General]
For all diffs "Slider Tick Rate" in 2. I don't like how it sounds in some places (sliders on blue ticks for example). Yes, I can mute it here, but I don't want it.

[Easy]
00:52:471 : Very short for an easy. I don't think so
02:18:558 : Change the whistle for a finish added finish circle at 02:19:428
03:11:602 : Very short for an easy.

[Normal]
02:50:732 : That's better. changed a bit differently
02:57:689 : ^

[Hard]
00:51:167 : New Combo ok
02:50:732 : That's better. I like how it is now
02:57:689 : ^

Nice (: ~

1. change the N:C1 volume to 65% or 60%?

The 08 team_Bourdon wrote:

ello~ :3

Easy

1. change the N:C1 volume to 65% or 60%? why only on easy and N:C1? Made 60% on start for all N for now

other looks fine!

---
why dont ask MAT to mod your map?
i can't find any problem in your map oh, sorry, I made some changes lately and want another check. Thanks for your time, I will try to find a MAT then
and you got a Nice Mapset!
Good Luck~
shoot a little star for you

1. Offset 14238 (+27 from what you have now.)
2. ^ move all timing sections 27 ms forward as well, and resnap all notes.
3. Delete .osb file

GladiOol wrote:

[General]

1. Offset 14238 (+27 from what you have now.) fixed
2. ^ move all timing sections 27 ms forward as well, and resnap all notes.
3. Delete .osb file oh?

[Hard]

01:15:977 (1) - This jump is wayyy too sudden and random. Please decrease the spacing on this jump. not so sudden for me, but I decrease the spacing a bit
01:22:064 (1) - Remove new combo.
03:22:064 (2) - Add new combo. ok^


[Easy]

00:52:471 (1) - Increase the length of this spinner by 1/1.
00:55:950 (1) - ^ then delete this note. I think it's ok and it better connects with next patterns like 01:09:890 (1,2,3) [copy-paste] or 01:23:803 (1,2,3)
01:27:281 (5) - Add new combo. fixed

Lesjuh wrote:

General
Set the countdown speed to normal! ok
Use offset: 14230 (That's -8ms) ok, seems better

Hard
Use slider tick rate 2 Use it on all diffs, but this creates some problems (sliders on blue ticks for example). I mute some ticks with soft-slidertick2.wav, full-submited and think it's ok now

Normal
Use slider tick rate 2

Relaxing~ Fix and I'll bubble! thanks

1. Imo the countdown don't fit properly in this map because the song is too slow and with this you broke the calm of the instrumetal begin, really considers disable this.

1. 02:46:838 (1) - The new combo should be start at the end of this slider and therefore should be star here 02:48:143 (2), if you agree and you think in the previous combo is too lenght add new combo at 02:45:534 (4). http://puu.sh/gc9m
2. 02:53:795 (1) - Same as above, also don't matter the short combos. Remember, is just a suggestion.
3. 03:17:708 (1) - Delete here the new combo and put it at the next note.
4. 03:21:186 (1) - Same as above, imo this change follow best the flow of combos.

1. 01:08:577 (1) - Okay, this new combo is needless, remove it.
2. 02:04:447 (1,2) - Hmmm this combo is too short, maybe begin the combo here 02:02:056 (5).
3. 02:15:969 (1) - Same as above but here only remove the new combo.
4. 03:07:273 (1) - Remove the new combo here and put it at the next note.
5. 03:22:056 (2) - The new combo should be start here, like the others diffs.

1. 00:51:838 (1) - I think in this combo is needless, maybe remove it?
2. 01:02:056 (1) - Again the combos, remove here the new combo or remove to the nex slider (01:02:925 (1)) I prefer remove here.
3. 03:14:664 (1) - Ughuu this combo looks too short. Well anyhow
4. 03:17:925 (1) - Same as above u__u
5. 03:21:621 (1) - And again, maybe here you should delete the new combo here 03:22:056 (1).

Kenezz wrote:

Hey o/
from my queue
Kenezz's Bakamod~

General

1. Imo the countdown don't fit properly in this map because the song is too slow and with this you broke the calm of the instrumetal begin, really considers disable this.

yeah, countdown disabled

Okay only some combos suggestion.

Easy

1. 02:46:838 (1) - The new combo should be start at the end of this slider and therefore should be star here 02:48:143 (2), if you agree and you think in the previous combo is too lenght add new combo at 02:45:534 (4). http://puu.sh/gc9m
2. 02:53:795 (1) - Same as above, also don't matter the short combos. Remember, is just a suggestion. all fixed^
3. 03:17:708 (1) - Delete here the new combo and put it at the next note.
4. 03:21:186 (1) - Same as above, imo this change follow best the flow of combos. these two combos are for consistency with 03:00:316 (1), 03:03:795 (1), 03:07:273 (1) - but ok, I changed them

Normal

1. 01:08:577 (1) - Okay, this new combo is needless, remove it.
2. 02:04:447 (1,2) - Hmmm this combo is too short, maybe begin the combo here 02:02:056 (5).
3. 02:15:969 (1) - Same as above but here only remove the new combo.
4. 03:07:273 (1) - Remove the new combo here and put it at the next note.
5. 03:22:056 (2) - The new combo should be start here, like the others diffs. fixed all here^

Hard

1. 00:51:838 (1) - I think in this combo is needless, maybe remove it? I remove NC at 00:51:186 (7) instead of this [again it's for consistency with 00:48:360 (1)]
2. 01:02:056 (1) - Again the combos, remove here the new combo or remove to the nex slider (01:02:925 (1)) I prefer remove here.
3. 03:14:664 (1) - Ughuu this combo looks too short. Well anyhow
4. 03:17:925 (1) - Same as above u__u
5. 03:21:621 (1) - And again, maybe here you should delete the new combo here 03:22:056 (1). and I removed all these new combos^

Well nothing important to remark, nice mapset. I love the slow songs (: Thank you!
Okay, I hope to helps you, Good Luck~