popner wrote:

Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

只是建议:

[Normal]

00:22:834 (3,4) - 这样扭我觉得不太好看，让00:23:491 (4)往下弯怎么样 維持現在好了:3
00:44:732 (5) - 不要折返，在后面加一个note - 或者00:44:732一个note, 00:45:608一个note, 中间空着 要改就有3個地方轉換，後慮一下
00:53:491 (3,5) - (3)最好不要叠住(5) 搬出了一點
02:42:542 (6) - 加个clap更有感觉 Done in EZ/Nor/Insane

[Insane]

00:28:747 (2,3) - 不对称吗 額，手誤移開了
00:39:477 (3,4,5) - 我觉得既然00:38:601 (1,2)跟vocal了这里也应该跟vocal 兩個都跟著vocal有說不出的奇怪
01:16:265 (5,6,7,8,9) - 7连【增加01:16:156】或3连【删掉01:16:375 (6)】都比现在好，3连更好一些，我觉得 刪掉6
03:22:177 (4,5) - 时间轴上换一下位置比较好 Ctrl+R很怪0.0

GL~

1. 我想要吐槽一下BG 以前已經rank的所有版本的"深海少女"都是冷色調BG 這個BG帶一點淡淡溫暖開心幸福的感覺和"深海少女"這首歌不是非常搭配把PS成藍色的如何 note的顏色也是QAQ 不過這個不重要吧 =囧=
2. 02:20:207- 這裡開始就可以結束break加上點東西了吧 不然break有點長 不過這個也不重要- -

1. 01:16:703 (1,2) - 換成這樣的:
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:25:024 (2,3) - 換成這樣的節奏，排列不用看:
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:48:674 (1) - 這兩個滑條開頭加上finish
4. 02:17:579 (2,3,4) - 2和3的開始的finish取消 給4加上finish比較好吧
5. 02:49:988 (2,3) - 把2的開始加上finish，3的開始去掉finish，就會發現聽起來更悅耳
6. 03:09:258 (2) - 和前面統一的話就應該去掉這個滑條開始的finish或者換成whistle

1. 00:43:637 - 補上一個note 如果我的話還會加上一個finish音效
2. 01:13:418 (5) - ^
3. 01:12:980 (4) - 把這個空出來再在01:13:418補上一個note
4. 02:20:207 (2) - 不來個finish么

1. 00:28:966 (1,2,3,4,1) -砌成正五邊形會更好看一些

1. CS-1比較好呢 這個前面比Hard還容易些吧 反正這首歌肯定沒人會開HardRock 會有很多人開DoubleTime CS-1會容易讀圖很多 我感覺CS6就會特別的帶感 不過這個不重要
2. 00:43:856 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這個jump我喜歡 打起來超級帶感有沒有www
3. 02:19:331 (3,4,5,6) - 三分拍排成這樣好不好呢 不然SS黨要哭
   SPOILER

   

AngelEyE wrote:

喲 抱歉來晚了 您做的圖做的太好了 我實在挑不到什麽不妥的地方 QAQ 您不就挑了很多東西出來嗎><
[General] ← 直到現在我還不會串這隻生字QAQ

1. 我想要吐槽一下BG 以前已經rank的所有版本的"深海少女"都是冷色調BG 這個BG帶一點淡淡溫暖開心幸福的感覺和"深海少女"這首歌不是非常搭配把PS成藍色的如何 note的顏色也是QAQ 不過這個不重要吧 =囧= 您是第一個發現這個問題 !!!（難怪總覺得哪裡怪怪的）這頭痛啊，因為歌姬Ritsu的顏色是紅色，所以大部份BG都是紅色為主，而且她的同人圖很多都畫得不好看，用PS弄成藍色也很怪（夕陽變成月亮?）；我看看能不能找到更適合的BG吧orz
2. 02:20:207- 這裡開始就可以結束break加上點東西了吧 不然break有點長 不過這個也不重要- - 我的難度是14s Break勉強可以接受，不過Hard的話34s的確是長了

[Easy]

1. 01:16:703 (1,2) - 換成這樣的:不用了，因為歌詞在紅線開始，所以從前面NC也不會不順
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:25:024 (2,3) - 換成這樣的節奏，排列不用看:GJ，Done
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:48:674 (1) - 這兩個滑條開頭加上finish Done
4. 02:17:579 (2,3,4) - 2和3的開始的finish取消 給4加上finish比較好吧 Done
5. 02:49:988 (2,3) - 把2的開始加上finish，3的開始去掉finish，就會發現聽起來更悅耳 其實聲音太少我都聽不出有分別，不過既然說到就Done吧~
6. 03:09:258 (2) - 和前面統一的話就應該去掉這個滑條開始的finish或者換成whistle 您前面不就說了要兩個都放Finish嗎XD

[Normal]

1. 00:43:637 - 補上一個note 如果我的話還會加上一個finish音效 我是擔心這會有點困難，造成新手不會打
2. 01:13:418 (5) - ^ 用下一行的方法Done
3. 01:12:980 (4) - 把這個空出來再在01:13:418補上一個note Done
4. 02:20:207 (2) - 不來個finish么 個人覺得whistle比較好，進入靜音部份~

[Insane]

1. CS-1比較好呢 這個前面比Hard還容易些吧 反正這首歌肯定沒人會開HardRock 會有很多人開DoubleTime CS-1會容易讀圖很多 我感覺CS6就會特別的帶感 不過這個不重要 HR有啊，不就您嗎 ~ 習慣用中間偏左，用中間我會弄得很差QAQ 話說CS-1容易讀圖是因為您習慣打HR吧XD
2. 00:43:856 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這個jump我喜歡 打起來超級帶感有沒有www 唯一我覺得不夠對稱的Jump，話說超級帶感是甚麼意思0.0
3. 02:19:331 (3,4,5,6) - 三分拍排成這樣好不好呢 不然SS黨要哭 我嗎（炸 ~ 不過這樣排很好看，維持吧；反正受害者是我自己QAQ
   SPOILER

   

好了我找不出更多的地方了QAQ,您就海涵一下吧 您這個已經是內容很豐富的mod了><
快點rank了這圖吧 到時候我去刷個榜

AngelEyE wrote:

其實我說錯了 我想建議您cs+1的orz

Sun Rainbow wrote:

MOD Requete From IRC
EASY
00:03:564 (1) - 开头不要FINISH，因为开头很温柔来个这个来炸人啊 Done
其他也是。 Done
00:35:973 (2) - CLAP X
00:49:112 (2,1) - 这个形状太难看 Done
其他你自己看着办，我晚上再来MOD其他。 喔，您有空就mod吧

Kirito47 wrote:

[Insane]
00:40:791 SLIDER可參照00:38:966的重疉擺法? 聲音不同
01:01:375 SLIDER感覺SLOPE負d好 (自我感覺良好www 理解不能
01:07:725 加個note? 不用了，讓這部份靜音一點吧
03:07:506 SLIDER變成4分拍連點 (自我感覺良好~ 太多連點= =
03:21:521 這個SLIDER開始之後那句 e~~~la~~~ 變成2分拍連點好像很不錯 (不知你GET不GET到w 再次理解不能

第一次獻給你了ERT~ orz

1. 00:51:521 (1,2,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,1) - 这个stream连续性不强，如果是我的话会这样下
   k d kkk ddk
2. 02:01:265 (2) - 这蓝线踩的不大好，有点lag，建议还是普通的1/4排列
3. 02:58:747 (1,2,1,1,2,1,1) - 喂喂，别和你师傅乱学啊，这根本不是1/3啊
4. 03:04:878 - 加个note，蓝线突然断点很奇怪

• Fine

• Fine

• 00:05:316 (6) - 中間的點向上移動2格 (Grid Lv4)
  00:18:017 (2) - 向上移動1格 (Grid Lv4)；因為你的3跟4有分開
  00:19:550 (2) - 向右移動2格 (Grid Lv4)
  00:35:097 (1) - 尾巴沒重疊
  00:42:761 (3) - 向右移動2格 (Grid Lv4)；不要黏著
  00:44:294 (6) - 同樣不要黏著5
  00:54:367 (6) - 沒重疊
  01:21:521 (4) - 向左移動1格? (Grid Lv4)
  01:24:586 (2) - 向上移動1格 (Grid Lv4)
  01:27:652 (1,2) - Ctrl+R?
  01:36:411 (6) - 沒重疊
  02:09:805 ~ 02:20:207 (x) - 統一所有難度，這段不要留空；而且BreakTime太長
  02:47:798 (4) - 向下移動1格 (Grid Lv4)
  02:53:053 (4) - 感覺沒必要和前面重疊，會影響讀譜
  02:55:681 (8) - 沒重疊
  02:58:090 (2) - 開頭的Clap刪掉，折返點放Clap

• 01:34:221 (1) - 延長到之後的藍線
  01:41:229 (1) - ^

adi77715 wrote:

Insane

• 01:34:221 (1) - 延長到之後的藍線 Done
  01:41:229 (1) - ^ Done

GoodLuck

HellDawn wrote:

Easy

00:56:119 - finish ? X
01:16:703 - 1 grid down X
01:29:404 - finish X
03:00:499 (1,2) - 2 grid left Good ideo, Done

Normal

01:21:521 - This is not readable. X
01:41:667 - finish OIC~ Done
03:06:630 - NC ? X

1. 还好吧

1. 01:50:426 (3) - 第三点放到(456,256)

1. 前面那段减少一点clap吧.. 然后滑条拉好点。。

1. 00:39:586 (4,5,6) - http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot288-0.jpg这里节奏这样
2. 00:41:229 (4) - 这样调整一下这个slider http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot287-1.jpg
3. 00:44:513 (4) - 和5叠起来比较好吧

Revengexsoyah wrote:

Only Suggestions

[Easy]
00:08:820: whistle ? Done
00:30:718: finish ? X
01:41:229: THIS volume sound bad, plz delete (?) X
01:58:747: delete timing section (?) Done
02:09:039: ???? delete this sounds better without this X
02:44:294: clap ? Done
02:46:046: ^ Done
02:47:798: ^ Done
03:25:134: that spinner put in 03:25:243 and finish in the same section (its easy and its for noobs,they dont do this) X

[Normal]
00:13:199: whistle ? Done
00:13:856:^ Done
00:14:951: ^ Done
00:15:827: ^ Done
02:09:039: ?????????????? LOL delete this timing section, sound ugly with he X
02:46:046: clap ? X

[Insane]
01:45:389 (x): why not note here ? in the same position of after (4) X, Same with First part

Well nice map and i give star BYE

SkyDevil wrote:

Here's My mod :3 Shinkaiii Shoujo~~~~

In general: *Shouldn't you put hatsune miku in tags? Since she originally sung this song. Done
*The Source is YuuyuP not Yuuyu Same with other rankmap
*Im pretty sure the offset is 3563, Since the song actually starts then. Unimportant :3

Easy
Nothing special o_o

Normal
00:03:126 - Unused green line Done
00:13:637 - The slider is kinda oddly placed... Place it somewhere else... X
00:17:579 - Make this slider also curved like the next sliders Done
00:21:083 - ^ Done
00:52:615 - This Green line is unused, if you want to make more stars to pop up, you should stop kiai time first and then use it again. Done
02:46:046 - Clap here? No, It's shouldn't Clap, same with insane
03:25:024 - Unused green line Done

-Anyway, now im looking to it, you need to fix those unused green lines also at easy and insane

Insane
00:46:703 - Euh, I think this circle sounds kinda random :c Delete this and replace the other circles X
02:36:849 - Whistle X

Zzzz Good luck~

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

from my queue

为什么觉得以前mod过 咦是嗎；不過我後來重做過，就算mod過也是舊版的(?

Easy

1. 还好吧

Normal

1. 01:50:426 (3) - 第三点放到(456,256) Done

Insane

1. 00:39:586 (4,5,6) - http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot288-0.jpg这里节奏这样 聽得好仔細owo Done
2. 00:41:229 (4) - 这样调整一下这个slider http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot287-1.jpg Done,雖然刪掉那個參考之後有點難看orz
3. 00:44:513 (4) - 和5叠起来比较好吧 不用了

that's all

Good luck~

1. Everything's fine, I guess. To the maps.

1. 01:15:389 (3) - Remove NC?
2. 02:35:535 - Is the green line used? If it isn't, please delete this.
3. 02:44:732 (3) - Finish at the end of the slider?
4. 03:28:528 (1) - Replace the spinner here with some notes? Spinner is easier for newcomers (as majority of the Easy diff players), but I guess some notes won't hurt. I made a pattern (sort of) here.
   

   176,192,208528,5,0
   336,192,209185,1,0
   256,64,209842,1,0
   336,192,210499,1,0
   176,192,211156,1,0
   256,320,211813,2,0,B|256:268,1,50.000000298023

1. 00:11:885 (4) - I dislike how the end of this slider is not pointing to the next object.
2. 00:13:637 (1) - ^
3. 00:19:331 (3) - ^
4. 00:23:491 (4) - ^ (And I'll stop here anyway, since it looks like this is your mapping style. Gotta respect it.)
5. 02:35:535 - Same as Easy.
6. 03:28:528 (1) - ^

1. 00:05:097 (1) - NC?
2. 00:24:367 (2,3) - Uh... I don't really like the circle and slider's position.
3. 00:31:484 (6,7) - Do a stack like (3,4,5), and maybe NC (6)?
4. 01:06:630 (1) - Adjust the end of this slider to (156,60)? Looks better.
5. 01:07:506 (3) - ^ (Middle point: 160,212; end point: 192,276)
6. 01:07:944 (4) - ^ (End point: 292,304)
7. 01:08:382 (1) - ^ (Start point: 228,296; middle point: 188,328; end point: 144,304)
8. 02:09:805 - 02:35:426 - ...A 25.6 seconds of break? This is... ridiculous.
9. 02:42:542 (1,2,3,4) - lol antijump
10. 03:28:528 (1) - Same as Easy, and since this is a Hard diff, it would be more reasonable.

1. AR-1?
2. 02:20:316 - Map this break? It can be mapped, and I believe the score won't break past 18 or 20 millions.
3. 03:28:528 (1) - Same as Easy. Maybe make a stream?

Hinsvar wrote:

Hi there. HI

Let's begin the mod now.

*Note: Gold ones are a must-do. Everything in red are things that look awkward to me (subjective suggestions; you can follow my lead here or not); everything else are rants and minor suggestions to make things look cooler.

>General

1. Everything's fine, I guess. To the maps.

>Easy

1. 01:15:389 (3) - Remove NC? Done
2. 02:35:535 - Is the green line used? If it isn't, please delete this. Done
3. 02:44:732 (3) - Finish at the end of the slider? Done
4. 03:28:528 (1) - Replace the spinner here with some notes? Spinner is easier for newcomers (as majority of the Easy diff players), but I guess some notes won't hurt. I made a pattern (sort of) here. No, thanks
   

   176,192,208528,5,0
   336,192,209185,1,0
   256,64,209842,1,0
   336,192,210499,1,0
   176,192,211156,1,0
   256,320,211813,2,0,B|256:268,1,50.000000298023

>Normal

1. 00:11:885 (4) - I dislike how the end of this slider is not pointing to the next object. OIC, sorry
2. 00:13:637 (1) - ^
3. 00:19:331 (3) - ^
4. 00:23:491 (4) - ^ (And I'll stop here anyway, since it looks like this is your mapping style. Gotta respect it.)
5. 02:35:535 - Same as Easy. Done
6. 03:28:528 (1) - ^ No

>Insane

1. AR-1? No
2. 02:20:316 - Map this break? It can be mapped, and I believe the score won't break past 18 or 20 millions. No
3. 03:28:528 (1) - Same as Easy. Maybe make a stream? No

Overall, it's pretty good. There are no major problems, just some minor ones.

Okay, that's it.

Good luck on the way

1. 00:16:703 (3) - 把這個改成slider+note吧，我覺得用repeat slider收尾來開一段主旋律總覺有些缺少打擊感。
2. 00:45:170 - 沒用的綠線
3. 00:52:615 - ^
4. 01:06:192 - ^
5. 01:16:703 (1) - 這裡也是建議改2個note
6. 01:18:893 (5,6) - 倒是這裡感覺用slider更好一點？
7. 01:55:681 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這個五邊形的形狀調好一些？

1. 實在沒啥可挑的, nice diff

1. 00:18:455 (3) - 去掉clap？
2. 00:23:272 (3,1,2,3,1,2) - 這個遮擋跳真心感覺有些難……而且一直到00:29:842 (1) - 一大段都在這1/4的區域內轉來轉去的，感覺note都擠在一起了……
3. 01:12:761 (5) - 感覺做成長slider會更舒服一些，而且這裡連續clap也不是很好聽
4. 01:47:579 (5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - 這這這。。這真是hard難度麼……
5. 02:48:236 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - ………………

1. 00:06:849 - 這裡來個Note?
2. 00:13:856 - 這麼明顯的節奏不要來個三連麼？

Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there~~mod from queue
and sorry for delay, 中文mod？

Easy:

1. 00:16:703 (3) - 把這個改成slider+note吧，我覺得用repeat slider收尾來開一段主旋律總覺有些缺少打擊感。 音在紅線開始，所以沒問題
2. 00:45:170 - 沒用的綠線 Done
3. 00:52:615 - ^ Done
4. 01:06:192 - ^ Done
5. 01:16:703 (1) - 這裡也是建議改2個note 音在紅線開始，所以沒問題
6. 01:18:893 (5,6) - 倒是這裡感覺用slider更好一點？ 懶得改形狀了=3=
7. 01:55:681 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這個五邊形的形狀調好一些？ 不用了~那裡很難砌5邊形

Normal:

1. 實在沒啥可挑的, nice diff

Insane:

1. 00:06:849 - 這裡來個Note?
2. 00:13:856 - 這麼明顯的節奏不要來個三連麼？ 這兩個靜音部份不想放太多東西lol

差不多就這些了，恩，加油&GL