多谢了 我会重改的!!
Byakugan249 wrote:
alright i'll help you out a bit. i can't do the whole mapset because i'm too tired.
General:
To insert a BG, go to design, click on insert background and put your BG
1 of the BG's dimensions is unrankable. resize that BG to 1024x768 like the other BGs. as you see i'm guessing this is for the easy diff. remember to do a full submission after you insert the BG's
You need to add hitsounds if you want to make this mapset rankable.
if you use hitsounds and you keep the volume at 100%, then it'll be loud and distracting to other players.
the mp3's bitrate is at 320. that's unrankable due to the filesize. take this file. i managed to re-enode it to 192.
also here is the re-sized BG with the proper dimensions.
Naryuga wrote:
Hi from #modreqs
red = you must fix
blue = you should consider to fix but still depending on your choice
black = only suggestions you can be free to ignore
- [General]
- You had better follow Byakugan249's post.
This map will much more awesome if you use them.
.......
多谢帮助 这幅Map我是有决心已定要Rank的!!yanguoke wrote:
Random mod from Baidu post bar(long long ago...
来看看能不能在音效方面给予些许帮助
关于节奏和排列方面说下大概的
节奏安排尚可,但是重复的段落有些多,这在排列方面也有明显体现,希望能更富于变化一些
适当增加滑条数,减少圈数
排列有些乱,相信会慢慢改善的,只要肯多下功夫
大概就是这些,再多加把劲,总会越做越好的,rank也指日可待。加油~~
题外:看到你还做过仙四的图,如果你有意让那张《织梦行云》从坟里出来并remap的话,我可以帮你做个guest diff,并尽我所能
帮助你rank这张图。决定权在你,不强求。(我很喜欢古风音乐~
Thanks for mod.Ch1ka wrote:
Hi, Urglance. This song in my top 15 favourite Touhou themes, so I'm here.
[General]
-Add Naryuga to tags, because he/she made a guest taiko. - mine is already set
-Set a Preview Point. "Timing - Set Current Position as Preview Point". - same as above
[Naryuga's Taiko Oni]
Just suggestions, I'd never mod taiko.
00:06:775 (1) - Maybe 1/8 stream? That would be so "Hardcore"! From 00:06:775 till 00:07:743. Disagree. I know 1/8 stream is unrankable and unplayable for ordinary people.
01:20:517 (2) - Maybe 1/4 stream? Too long for 1/8 and spinner is so booooring. umm... ok, changed but not all is stream. I hate very long stream.
That's all.
GL and bye!
Thank you so much~~Ch1ka wrote:
Hi, Urglance. This song in my top 15 favourite Touhou themes, so I'm here.
Thanks~~Naryuga wrote:
I changed something. Please update~
恩 恩 恩~~sherrie__fay wrote:
easy和normal开AImod看下:各有一处spacing问题
hard的AR调到7 或者8
lunatic...居然真的能打!!!很了不起←我认真的
一般新人前几张图的最高难度都鬼畜到打不了!!!
stream间距调小就更好了,在这么快的节奏下stream已经很难了 不要再加大连打的间距了 否则就有overmap的倾向了
lunatic的x x xxx x x xxx这种三连和hard节奏差不多 只是变了spacing而已嘛...换掉一些吧
然后所有难度,滑条形状修好一点
图摆放整体再注重美观一点
很棒 真的 努力的话 真的有望rank呢!!!
然后就是kiai time用得有点多了 酌量减点吧
I'll update it in a few days by your advice~~Thanks~PROGUY wrote:
Hi there. From #modreqs.
(I can't mod Taiko, so [Naryuga's Taiko Oni] is ignored here. Sorry.) You have help me a lot~thanks.
[General]
(Short Ver.) doesn't need to be in the title. Hiroari Shoots a Strange Bird ~ Till When alone is fine. I cut the mp3, It is a 5m long mp3 in the first, so i add (Short Ver.). Now I'll fix it soon~~
[Lunatic]
Your stream before the first kiai time makes the rest of the map inconsistent in terms of difficulty. Add more notes if possible. If you can't, then make jumps and decrease HP Drain Rate by 1.
OK, I know. I'll do my best to make the rest of the map more difficult.Thank for your advice~~
I hope this helps.
Scorpiour wrote:
Hi there~~mod from queue~~
似乎这图菲姐已经看过了呢,新人能让她点头蛮不容易的加油的说!
另外请回复这个帖子告诉我你哪里做了改动或者没有改动,如果可以的话最好附上相关的理由谢谢~~~这样也有助于我提升mod水平:)大致上就这些了~~~总之加油吧~~:)General:Easy:
- Audio Lead-in: 1000ms (1s)。保持首note在距离开始2-2.5s是个比较合适的区间。(已经更改所有DIff)
- 整体来说有个很严重的问题就是你的hitsounds音量实在太低了。我觉得soft hitsound就算100%都只是勉强够用,更不要说80%了。现在导致了你的图整个打起来感觉软绵绵的缺少打击感,特别是Lunatic难度这个问题更明显。我的建议是不如尝试70-80%音量的normal也许会比soft更好,能够突出这曲子本身的紧张感和压迫感。(正在尝试中)
- 有关Kiai time: Kiai在Map中的作用是用来突出副歌段而不是前奏和主旋段的,所以这个图我觉得既然你只截了主旋的部分,其实不下kiai都没问题的……(我将前面一段Kiai time去掉了,后面的保留了。。我这样子算不算是Kiai控......自己玩的时候感觉Kiai一出来我就燃了......)
Easy的基本已经改完了顺便把所有‘ugly’的Slider都改了一遍。校正了Hitsounds。
- 对于Easy/Normal难度,我个人的建议是打开DS保持一个固定的数值,现在这个diff的ds变化太多,可能对于新手来说会有一些困难。毕竟要考虑到Easy/Normal面对的玩家群体,所以不建议变化DS。因为是整体性的问题所以就不再在后面的单独说了。虽然我知道要考虑新手,
可能是人比较粗糙的原因???我会多调整几遍确保DS不变- 00:06:195 (3) - finish有些突兀,不是很好听。已经更正
- 00:06:775 - 这里我觉得没有理由空拍啊,音乐前面4个小节都没有变化,所以节奏上也应该和前面保持一致。已经更正
- 00:07:356 - ^,和上面一起的问题。(已经更正)
- 00:38:711 (1) - Slider的Tick point被分数挡住了,对于Easy来说尽量避免。恩,已经调整位置。
- 00:44:904 (1) - 这里音乐上有很明显finish的地方你倒是忘记用了finish....恩……自己多注意听听吧,finish一般是下在长白线(downbeat)上。做完后我会多听几遍调整
- 00:51:098 (1) - 这里在下finish的时候把后面的滚动音效似乎也给带出来了?
- 00:52:646 (3) - ^。我觉得你可以考虑加一个静音的sliderslide效果。做法是在文件夹里放一个静音的normal-sliderslide.wav文件么,然后在这里加一条绿线,然后在Audio里面选择Custom1?
- 00:57:291 (1) - 变速slider一样是不推荐在Easy/Normal中使用的,除非非常适合。。很显然这里并不是……而且这里变速之后导致note挤在一起密度又大反而加大了难度。已经更改
- 01:06:969 - 这个break比较无法理解……太突然了……我不会告诉你
这是暴风雨前的宁静...- 01:25:162 (1) - 试着把形状拉平滑一些?这个转的真心不太好看……已经更正
Normal:Hard:
- Genral的问题在Easy里都说了这里就不重复了,包括变速slider,break和音效什么的,其他diff同我就犯懒一下不来打字了XD
- 00:06:775 (8,1) - 这种位置在开easy模式的时候可能会导致note出现在屏幕外面所以不建议。已经更正
- 00:29:420 (1,2) - 这里节奏听着有点别扭,我觉得用前面的节奏没问题的。这里和前面的节奏是一样的...只不过把circle和slider换了一下。但是节奏是一样的
- 00:48:001 (1,2) - 这种slider的形状还是需要多调调。。确实不好看……我会调教好她们的
屁股的- 01:17:420 (5) - 我觉得这里可以开个NC,否则这个combo太长了已经更正
Insane:
- 00:40:066 (5) - 这clap感觉多余了
- 00:41:614 (10) - ^
- 00:44:711 (9) - ^,后面类似的clap不说了……总之感觉用固定的2/4clap会更舒服一点……这里听着果然别扭。。但是前面的挺顺耳了?
- 00:46:453 (9,10) - 这里用reverse slider会更贴合音乐一些吧?我一定要说,这个是从前面到这里对我最重要的了
(没有之一),看到这条我突然感觉我真的很粗糙。在Hard和Lunatic里面这样类似的地方我会多注意的!!- 01:22:453 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这两组白线三连感觉太生硬了,考虑换成红线的吧?还有其他一些的白线三连也是同样的建议。已经更正
- 白线三连的问题和Hard类似,除非非常特殊的情况否则不建议从白线起三连……正在查看所有白线三连,然后看情况更正!
- 00:01:550 - 到00:06:969 - ,开头这里的节奏听着有些混乱……虽然你下四连之类的想法是好的但是明显和音乐off了所以并不好听
我自己的话应该会把这段的旋律下成这样的吧。
简单来说,下连打之类的一定要记得并不是随意的,而是要适合音乐才可以,否则就会让人有“为了做难而故意下串”的感觉导致各种违和。更正好了,我会重新检查所有连打的!!- 然后后面那一大段连打……怎么说呢……不是不可以但是强烈不推荐放stream的时候还用1.0x的DS。。。。说句不好听的话就是你这故意坑人呢吧……我再三声明,注意!!这不是一个坑。注意!!这不是一个坑!!!
- 00:32:517 - 从这里开始又是节奏的问题……比如说
等等类似的……建议你把曲子的速度放慢,先反复仔细听一下音乐的节奏是什么样的,然后再跟着音乐去放节奏把。虽然并不是说不可以做自创的音轨,但是我觉得如果自己没能很好的把握音乐的感觉就硬塞节奏的话只能适得其反的。这正是我现在所想的!!!握手!!!
- 00:32:517 - 到 00:32:904 - 有个很明显的长音就被你用白线三连给做过去了使得节奏一下子变得零碎了……我会注意节奏来改的
- 00:33:291 (8,9,10) - 这里的音乐明明和后面一样是1/2的你却硬塞三连……很不好不好的东西就坚决要更正
- 00:38:130 - 这里有个很强的音就这么被你给扔掉了……放慢了一听,果然有。。真是罪过
- 00:38:711 - 00:39:098 一样是长音的问题放慢了听出来了
- 好吧我犯懒了因为后面的部分和前面基本要说的东西比较类似的说……所以就不废话了……
248,48,92904,2,0,B|368:32|472:80|488:168|480:248,1,340,2|201:39:291 - add note
456,128,99098,2,0,B|464:320|272:320,1,300,2|2
Thank you~~~Katty Pie wrote:
Hi^^Lunatic00:05:614 - remove this note I think delete it will make the rhythm is not coherent, but I'm not sure. I need sometime to think about it.
00:23:904 - i think this looks better http://puu.sh/pTul Yes~~it's better now
00:33:679(8) - note *5* very hides note *8* you should put stream in other place I change it now~
00:35:420 - add note I think mine is better
01:14:517 - ^
01:17:904 - remove this slider and put note on 01:18:001 It's looks strange before, but now looks better~~
01:32:904 - looks better I don't know what's wrong with it, but your code is exactly same as mine..but i still remake the shape of slider~~248,48,92904,2,0,B|368:32|472:80|488:168|480:248,1,340,2|201:39:291 - add noteI think it's better to keep here Blank~~Hard00:42:485 - remove this note I think it's better now
01:39:098 - i think this better I fix it now, yours is better than now~456,128,99098,2,0,B|464:320|272:320,1,300,2|2Normal00:38:324 - this note is to low you should put it in other place I fix it now
00:40:259 - maybe put this http://puu.sh/pTAH I fix it nowEasy00:15:485(2,3) - unstack this sliders (I'm so sorry but I really don't know what unstack means..sorry~~)
00:32:904 - looks better http://puu.sh/pTC2 I fix this
00:42:195 - make this http://puu.sh/pTCm I don't fix this because, this is just on the clap
00:54:582 - ^ this sounds better ^
01:06:969 - remove this break time you can understand this break is the warning that the most crazy time is coming~~
Good luck)
Urlangce wrote:
P.S. I like your signature~~
Thank you~~popner wrote:
Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.
[General]
Lunatic和Naryuga's Taiko Oni的stack leniency是2,应该是unrankable的。改成3吧已改
[Hard]
总之三连不要从白线开始,特别是你自己加的节奏(本来音乐中没有三连音,你加上三连增强节奏感)。(已经全部扫了一遍)
[Lunatic]
00:05:130 (2,3) - 对称是好,但是是白线三连啊,节奏不行了。我认为节奏要比排列重要(上次Sco的mod看了但是为了对称,有的白线三连没有改。。今天索性一起全部改了吧!)
00:06:775 (8,9,10) - 直接一个1/8折返?已改
00:34:162 (10,11) - 00:34:937 (13,14) - 白线三连,Sco的mod好好看啊
00:34:937 (13,14) - 距离排的整齐一些,可以调成grid level 4摆(已改)
01:06:291 (8) - 和前面5.37x的距离啊(我把8删了,其余位置和原来差不多。。。)
...总之就是好多白线三连啊!这样节奏就乱掉了
[Suggestion]
多看看新rank的那些图的节奏是怎么下的,特别是bpm与风格都相近的图,然后对比着自己的图,说不定会有些想法。(恩)
GL~
Thank you~~~~~ertyukjh010 wrote:
您好~
抱歉來遲了,因為優先幫婆婆mod圖
[Easy]
SliderMultiplier:0.999999999999999 > 1(这个是什么呢?我在.osu文件里找到这个了 上面显示的就是0.999999999999999,需要改成1吗?)
AR+1 OD-1
00:01:550 (1) - 做1次折返,刪掉後面的(2)(已改)
00:03:098 (3,1,3) - ^(已改)
00:13:937 (1) - 移動到X:460 Y:152 您可能需要用到Grid Lv4 (已改)
00:17:033 (3) - 這部份有點重疊0.0(已改)
[Normal]
00:06:775 (8) - 1/4對於新手來說太快了,刪掉(改成1/2了不要紧吧?)
[Hard]
01:49:937 (1) - 向右移動1格
01:50:517 (2) - 向左移動1格(已改,居然有这么小的一格你都发现了?我的狗眼啊~)
[Lunatic]
00:27:872 (14) - NC(已改)
01:06:291 (8) - 這距離太遠了....畢竟是1/4....(已改)
這張圖來說,排版方面感覺還需要努力喔,加油^^(最后这Map必定会Rank的!!)
That all
Scorpiour wrote:
看到你很认真的回了我的mod于是路过的时候偷偷再多提一点点建议:
有关slider和note:
00:29:420 (1,2) - 这里节奏听着有点别扭,我觉得用前面的节奏没问题的。这里和前面的节奏是一样的...只不过把circle和slider换了一下。但是节奏是一样的
简单来说:
同样的节奏下,note给人的感觉是跳跃的,而slider给人的感觉是连贯的。
比如:x x x x,这样四个1/2的节奏,如果做成4个notes,或者2个slider,感觉其实是完全不一样的。如果你要是看过乐谱的,那么slider对应的节奏应该是在乐谱上有"连音符/连贯符"的地方,也就是说音乐到这里要有连贯的感觉,突出的是首音而弱化尾音。Note使用时则刚好与之相反,要突出的跳跃感的重音。
说回来你Normal难度的这个位置 00:29:808 -
把音乐速度放到50%你就会听清这里有个很明显的重音,听起来的感觉就是向下很有力的打击感,所以用note要更合适。但实际上这里被你给空过去了,所以感觉很不好。果然是专业的。。。。这都能听出来。。。可是我放到25了之后才听到很轻的声音这里。。。难道我这么粗糙?
这个曲子因为没有vocal所以slider和note选取的问题还不会太明显,但是如果将来你做到有vocal的曲子时,对于slider和note的如何来搭配节奏可能就是会决定你的图是否值得泡或者可以rank的关键性因素。
大概就说这些,更多的自己去体会吧。因为只是随意的给些建议所以不需要给kds,总之加油:)虽然说还有很长的路要走,但是能坚持的话一定能迈过这道坎的。
以上,多谢了!!我会认真再次修改的!!直至Rank!!最近比较忙,更新会晚一些。
另外有关你的skin:
hit0.png是透明的,unrankable
cursortail.png也是透明的,这个可以删掉
hit300g.png的尺寸错误,应该是256x256(必须的)
sliderpoint30.png尺寸超标了,缩小到48x29
另外slider一套缺少sliderfollowcircle.png,这个要补上。
最后,skin部件如果是来自他人的话必须获得作者的授权才可以使用。
skin我会重新做的。里面就只有slider一套是别人的 我已经问过作者同意了。完全没问题的~~
最后,非常感谢!!!
Naryuga wrote:
I've come here for giving some suggestion ._.
- [skinning]
- Please delete "normal-slidertick.wav" since silent slidertick is unrankable. (OK~~)
- The file "cursortail.png" is missing I delete it because Scorpiour says that it's transparent and I can delete it.so I delete it~~
- [Normal]
- why SliderTickRate is 2 only in normal ?_?I t's hard to explain why..Maybe I change this in the beginning? Sorry I don't remember...Is the different slidertickrate in different diff is unrankable? Or that makes player hard? I'll change all slidertickrate to 2..I think it maybe help players in reading slider velocity changes?
- 00:10:066 (4) - touching HP bar (end).I usually play it in test-mode, that make me unknowingly overlooked some of the problems.....
- 01:42:195 (4) - missing clap (end). (I was careless.)
- [Lunatic]
Ah, do not give me kudosu as I've already get one from you.
- 00:07:356 (9,1) - plz stack them~ too hard to hit 300 on this for me ._.(Now you can see them. )
- 01:06:582 (1) - 1 grid to left~ looks much better for meI was careless..now looks better~~
And, I changed something in my Taiko diff~ please update with this
At last, thank you, not only for the taiko diff~~~
Oh~~Thank you so much~~~PROGUY wrote:
Hm, I see you improved a lot since my mod. Here's a star