Mapper 31 wrote:

heyhisiriruiwanttomaketaikodiffcanimake

1. Every .wav file must be at least 100ms long to prevent issues with soundcards. If you want a silent/blank hitsound, then you must use a 0-byte .wav file. This is from the "Current Ranking Rules and Guidelines"
2. All difficulty: The last spinner is too long.I rather shorten that to a half of now.
3. Please unify the tick rate in all difficulty.

1. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:41:842 (2) - (design) Probably make this slider move curve and smooth like this?I think this is more beautiful.
      
      Suggestion

      
   2. 01:50:167 (1) - I find the rhythm is weird on the reverse of the slider because no vocal and drum sound to support it.I know it's quite hard to solve it owing to the arrangement.However please try to fix it as you can.
   3. 02:09:165 (1) - Probably shorten this slider to 1/1 beat but also end at 02:10:498 - ? Just going to fit the strong drum sounds here.
   4. 02:11:665 (x) - Consider to the vocal,I think this spinner should starts from 02:11:832 - and end it at02:16:831 - .
2. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:52:174 (3) - Add a finish and a whistle at the beginning of the slider to fit the music.
   2. 02:48:494 (4) - I think a whistle is much appropriate then finish here.
   3. 02:52:494 (2) - hum,I would add a finish here and then add a whistle at the reverse of the slider.

1. Issue/unrankable stuff
   (Something bad in gameplay or unrankable staff,you should take a look on it.)
   
   1. 00:07:845 (2,3,4,5) - (Bad gameplay) wat...I found a inconsistent spacing here.Please fix this.
2. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 02:42:828 (6) - I would add a new combo here and then remove the new combo at 02:43:495 (1) - .
   2. 03:03:327 (x) - I think here shouldn't be a spinner because the vocal still singing here, so using notes or spinner here is more appropriate then spinner.
   3. 03:07:493 (4) - I would add a new combo here because this chain of combo is much longer then others.
   4. 03:23:824 (x) - Same as 03:03:327
   5. 03:30:156 (5) - Same as 03:07:493
3. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:19:511 (2) - You can add a whistle here.
   2. 02:43:495 (1) - And here.Add a S2-whistle at the beginning of the slider and then back to S1 section at 02:43:661 - .
   3. 02:46:161 (5) - ^Same as this.
   4. 02:48:494 (4) - Probably add a whistle here?
   5. 03:41:822 (1) - ^Same

1. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:30:176 (1,2,3,4,5) - Some design modding here:I would make this pattern a symmetry.The pattern is quite ugly now.I believe that it would be much better if you consider it.
      
      Suggestion

      
   2. 01:16:338 (2) - I would unstack this and then move this nearby the slider.
   3. 01:51:834 (1) - Add a new combo here to fit with the lyric and music and also shorten the combo length.
   4. 02:44:161 (3,4) - I feel extremely weird with the rhythm here.Actually,I don't agree with this rhythm.Well, just leave this to you.
   5. 02:58:160 (4) - I would add a new combo here to make the jump more clear to read.
   6. 03:00:827 (5) - ^ Same.
2. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:21:011 (5) - Probably add a S1-whistle here to fit the music.
   2. 00:29:843 (1) - I think you are missing a clap sound here because there obvious is a drum sound.

1. Difficulty setting
   (I suggest the difficulty setting for better gameplay.)
   
   1. I don't understand why this needs AR9.Be honest, AR8 is really cool for this map and most of the calm part are looking very rough with AR9.
2. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:22:010 (1,2) - Probably move this to the centre of the y-axis?
   2. 01:33:503 (9) - Add a new combo here to fit with the drum sounds.
   3. 03:17:158 (5) - (design) I would make this slider to curve and more smooth.There is a example and you can follow this:
      
      Suggestion

      
   4. 03:34:656 (3) - I think you can add a jump here to make it more fun because I can heard a very strong accent here which is suitable for a jump.
3. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:42:841 (4) - Would you remove the clap sound at the end of the slider?

1. 00:19:677 (x) - I think you are missing a finish sound here?
2. 03:16:158 (1) - I think this slider is quite ugly.I rather change it to a normal pattern or just make it more beautiful.
3. 03:26:323 (x) - wat? I think the hitsounds pattern sounds wrong here.It doesn't fit the music and very weird for me.
4. 03:28:490 (4) - ^Same.

1. 01:39:169 (1) - How about adding a whistle here to fit the music?
2. 02:48:494 (4) - ^Same.
3. 03:41:822 (1) - ^

1. 00:42:841 (7,8,1) - Inconsistent spacing.Do you make this on purpose? Plese fix it if not.You might need to adjust the spacing after change.

1. 01:33:669 (1) - Add a whistle at the reverse of the slider?
2. 03:43:821 (13) - Add a whistle at the end of the slider.
3. 03:52:987 (x) - Please remove this spinner like you did in other diffficulty owing to the unification with other difficulties.

kanpakyin wrote:

Rechecking.

[Easy]

1. 00:19:677 (x) - I think you are missing a finish sound here? Fixed
2. 03:16:158 (1) - I think this slider is quite ugly.I rather change it to a normal pattern or just make it more beautiful. Fixed
3. 03:26:323 (x) - wat? I think the hitsounds pattern sounds wrong here.It doesn't fit the music and very weird for me. Oh yes. I forgot to change pattern of hitsounds after changed Tick Rate Fixed
4. 03:28:490 (4) - ^Same.

Fixed

[Normal]

1. 01:39:169 (1) - How about adding a whistle here to fit the music? Fixed
2. 02:48:494 (4) - ^Same.using custom finish sound. look same with original
3. 03:41:822 (1) - ^ ^

[Hard]

1. 00:42:841 (7,8,1) - Inconsistent spacing.Do you make this on purpose? Plese fix it if not.You might need to adjust the spacing after change. Fixed

[Insane]

1. 01:33:669 (1) - Add a whistle at the reverse of the slider? Fixed
2. 03:43:821 (13) - Add a whistle at the end of the slider. Fixed
3. 03:52:987 (x) - Please remove this spinner like you did in other diffficulty owing to the unification with other difficulties. Fixed

Darksonic wrote:

AR9 Best decision ever.

Gratz Siriru!, great map.

S i R i R u wrote:

I want to make this speedy with high BPM BeatofIke ~

thank you ~ Darksonic ~ Kurai ~