212,336,3070,2,0,B|256:360|300:336,2,89.9999973177911,2|0|0
212,336,3820,1,2
152,264,4195,1,0

Combo1 : 0,128,64
Combo2 : 235,57,48
Combo3 : 0,64,128
Combo4 : 184,113,255

giO- wrote:

Hello from my mod queue~

Easy

00:03:820 - add note Nah
00:06:820 - ^ Nah
00:37:570 (1) - fix slider shape following those points http://puu.sh/hksI x:432 y:296, x:392 y:328 fixed
00:39:070 (3) - ^ http://puu.sh/hktb x:120 y:328, x:80 y:296 fixed
01:00:070 (5) - new combo Nah
01:07:945 (4,5,6) - replace those notes with 1 slider and 1 beat http://puu.sh/hkv7 and add clap at the slider end http://puu.sh/hkvs maybe
01:18:070 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - replace some note with some slider like previous suggestion maybe
01:29:320 - add note Nah
01:32:320 - ^ Nah


Normal

AR -1 Nope
OD -1 Nope

01:04:570 (7) - new combo Nah
01:10:007 (2) - remove 2 repeat and add note here 01:10:945 - Nah
01:16:570 (5) - new combo Nah
01:22:007 (2) - remove 2 repeat and add note here 01:22:945 - Nah


Hard

AR +1 looks better YES! Thank you ^_^

00:39:632 - add note No
01:28:007 (3) - delete this note maybe
01:29:507 (3) - delete this note too and move 01:29:320 (2) - to 01:29:132 - http://puu.sh/hkCn No
01:31:007 (3) - move to 01:31:101 - and 01:31:195 (4) - move to 01:31:382 - http://puu.sh/hkDx to follow music No
01:32:320 (2) - move to 01:32:132 - No
01:32:507 (3,4) - delete those 2 notes and replace with slider http://puu.sh/hkEO , sounds better No

of course fix spacing


Insane

Good~


Good luck~

l1106188 wrote:

Here are just suggestion ~OAO
If you do not like , you can skip it .
[General]
A file in the folder as this http://puu.sh/hl51
If you dosen't have SB , please remove it ~ Fixed

[Normal]
00:45:070 (3) - add NC ?! Nah
[Hard]
00:03:070 (4,5,6) - like this ?! http://puu.sh/hkZV

212,336,3070,2,0,B|256:360|300:336,2,89.9999973177911,2|0|0
212,336,3820,1,2
152,264,4195,1,0

Fixed
01:04:007 (4) - 1 grid right ? Fixed
01:04:757 (1) - 1 grid right ? Fixed

[Lunatic]
00:21:632 (4,1) - get it cover (1) ?! Nah
Good song!!
sorry to my poor English
[Easy] I can't find any suggestion

BeatofIke wrote:

wantuole wrote:

last day I say your map is stiff
now I find the problem
for example
diff『lun』00:01:382~00:02:320
It's 5 star, this star kill you creativity,
try too broken and also use ,like this http://puu.sh/hhp2
I think it's not stiff ,and this is fun
a lot place like this,neat and tidy. try use more idea
( sorry my eng is bad ,I can't express more clear)
It's not my modding ,only my think
hope rank soon, I like this song

I tried to be creative with this map, but it did feel right when I played the map. Maybe when it is used right, it can be interesting, but thanks for your suggestion.


Also what skin was that in that picture? I want it XD.

http://puu.sh/hok1
:3 here

Teru21 wrote:

hi i want m4m with you.. as you said on your queue, i mod your map first

i highly recommended to use touhou skin. i guess you have? i forgot where have i DL it, but if you wanna add this, go to song setup>storyboarding>skinning. there you go.. or....... you can insert the skin to your beatmap folder :3 its fit perfectly~ I don't have it

[General]
delete osb file on the beatmap if you aren't making SB Oh wow, I was wondering what OSB file is there for. I didn't know that it was used for storybording. Thank you ^_^ Fixed
try this colors?

Combo1 : 0,128,64 
Combo2 : 235,57,48
Combo3 : 0,64,128
Combo4 : 184,113,255

the combo 4 is yours
fixed

[Easy]
00:51:070 - fill this with slider? then add finish Nah
00:54:070 - ^ Nah
00:57:070 - ^ Nah
01:01:757 - add spinner till 01:02:695 Nah
01:09:070 (1) - http://postimage.org/image/kkd5bajq7/ fixed

[Normal]
01:20:695 (5,1) - swap combo nope
01:28:570 (3) - ctrl+h Nah

[Hard]
00:27:070 (5) - remove 1 reverse and end the slider here 00:27:632. it means, it will ended 00:28:195
01:30:820 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - why u put them like that? it will more tidy if you put the at the x:256 y:160

okay.. thats all my beatmap on your queue
GL and have my star~

1. Remove anime, game and japanese from the tags. Touhou is a video game, not an anime from what I know of. When this map gets ranked, this map will be categorized based on the song's genre and language. So, game and Japanese are not needed in the tags.
2. I'm not so confident about the video here. There is one scene that is nsfw... I'm not going to show it but I'm sure you know what it is. Well... either remove the video or find a way to censor that scene.

1. Add 15 to the offset. Which should be 95. That could be the correct timing. If it is, don't forget to resnap all the notes and resnap all the timing sections.

1. 00:25:570 (1)-Good idea to add a finish here.
2. 00:46:570 (1)-Perhaps add a finish here?
3. 01:06:070 (1)-Didn't shape the curve properly on this slider?
4. 01:13:570 (1)-I wouldn't recommend using a 1/1 kick-back slider for this Easy difficulty. Instead, use two 1/1 sliders and a note on 01:15:070. Here's the diagram.
5. 01:16:570 (4)-Instead of a 1/1 kick back slider, use 1/1 sliders. Here is a diagram for this also.
6. 01:17:070 (1)-Add a new combo here. Reason being is that there is a new combo glitch because of the spinner. Don't know why it's happening but it's showing...

1. Perhaps it's best to decrease the HP Drain Rate, Approach Rate and Overall Difficulty by one. I'm sure this Normal would play better that way.
2. 01:27:070 (1)-Same reason. A new combo glitch. Add a new combo in.

1. It's a good idea to decrease the Approach Rate by one. It's also a good idea to increase the HP Drain Rate and Overall Difficulty by one. That way, this Hard should play fine. (:
2. 00:34:570 (1)-Add a finish or a whistle?
3. 00:46:757 (1)-Add a finish?

1. Approach Rate 9 is a bit much in my opinion. ): You can keep it but know you, I don't find it really fitting. ._. It would be best if you decrease it by one. Also, the Overall Difficulty and HP Drain Rate are a bit low for an insane. xD It's a good idea to increase them by one.
2. 00:46:757 (1)-Add a finish?

Roddie wrote:

Hello.

General

1. Remove anime, game and japanese from the tags. Touhou is a video game, not an anime from what I know of. When this map gets ranked, this map will be categorized based on the song's genre and language. So, game and Japanese are not needed in the tags. fixed
2. I'm not so confident about the video here. There is one scene that is nsfw... I'm not going to show it but I'm sure you know what it is. Well... either remove the video or find a way to censor that scene.

I could probably think of something to censor it, although I don't have a video editing software XD.
Timing

1. Add 15 to the offset. Which should be 95. That could be the correct timing. If it is, don't forget to resnap all the notes and resnap all the timing sections.

It felt late when I tried this lol, so I just kept it as it is.

Easy

1. 00:25:570 (1)-Good idea to add a finish here. fixed
2. 00:46:570 (1)-Perhaps add a finish here? Nah
3. 01:06:070 (1)-Didn't shape the curve properly on this slider? okay fixed
4. 01:13:570 (1)-I wouldn't recommend using a 1/1 kick-back slider for this Easy difficulty. Instead, use two 1/1 sliders and a note on 01:15:070. Here's the diagram. fixed
5. 01:16:570 (4)-Instead of a 1/1 kick back slider, use 1/1 sliders. Here is a diagram for this also. I decided to do something else.
6. 01:17:070 (1)-Add a new combo here. Reason being is that there is a new combo glitch because of the spinner. Don't know why it's happening but it's showing...

You mean at 01:27:070? fixed hopefully.

Normal

1. Perhaps it's best to decrease the HP Drain Rate, Approach Rate and Overall Difficulty by one. I'm sure this Normal would play better that way. fixed
2. 01:27:070 (1)-Same reason. A new combo glitch. Add a new combo in.

fixed hopefully

Hard

1. It's a good idea to decrease the Approach Rate by one. It's also a good idea to increase the HP Drain Rate and Overall Difficulty by one. That way, this Hard should play fine. (: fixed
2. 00:34:570 (1)-Add a finish or a whistle? i added the whistle
3. 00:46:757 (1)-Add a finish?

Nah

Insane

1. Approach Rate 9 is a bit much in my opinion. ): You can keep it but know you, I don't find it really fitting. ._. It would be best if you decrease it by one. Also, the Overall Difficulty and HP Drain Rate are a bit low for an insane. xD It's a good idea to increase them by one. lol okay, fixed
2. 00:46:757 (1)-Add a finish?

Nah

And that's about it.

Good luck to you, man!

BeatofIke wrote:

Roddie wrote:

Hello.

General

1. I'm not so confident about the video here. There is one scene that is nsfw... I'm not going to show it but I'm sure you know what it is. Well... either remove the video or find a way to censor that scene.

I could probably think of something to censor it, although I don't have a video editing software XD.

BeatofIke wrote:

Roddie wrote:

Easy

1. 01:17:070 (1)-Add a new combo here. Reason being is that there is a new combo glitch because of the spinner. Don't know why it's happening but it's showing...

You mean at 01:27:070? fixed hopefully.

Roddie wrote:

Find someone that does.

Easy

00:42:820 (5) - : change distance 0.80x

00:43:570 (1,2,3,4) - : change like this >> http://puu.sh/hSVf

00:45:445 (4,1) - : slider and spin distance is so far

00:49:570 (1,2) - : it is not easy

00:52:570 (3,4) - : ^

00:55:570 (3,4) - : ^

Normal

00:07:570 (1) - : change distance 1.00x +,- 0.1~0.2

(why change distance...? 1.00x>>0.80x)

(Normal is hard;;)

Hard

00:07:195 (5) - : so close

(why change distance...? 0.80x>>1.00x)

00:52:382 (4) - : move x:200 y:256

01:03:070 (3) - : move 360 144

Lunatic

00:24:820 (1,2,3,4) - : Maybe change another square like this >> http://puu.sh/hSZu

W h i t e wrote:

Hello

Easy

00:42:820 (5) - : change distance 0.80x Nah, for what reason.

00:43:570 (1,2,3,4) - : change like this >> http://puu.sh/hSVf That will make the spacing inconsistent.

00:45:445 (4,1) - : slider and spin distance is so far It's easy difficulty, New players tend to lose their cursor at spinners and need time to recover.

00:49:570 (1,2) - : it is not easy It's okay to have a few 1/2 notes on easy.

00:52:570 (3,4) - : ^ same as above

00:55:570 (3,4) - : ^ same as above

Normal

00:07:570 (1) - : change distance 1.00x +,- 0.1~0.2 Nope, but I can see why.

(why change distance...? 1.00x>>0.80x) I didn't want to for some reason.

(Normal is hard;;)

It only has 3 stars.

Hard

00:07:195 (5) - : so close You're right. Fixed

(why change distance...? 0.80x>>1.00x) Not sure why.

00:52:382 (4) - : move x:200 y:256 okay

01:03:070 (3) - : move 360 144

It's already at x:360 y:144

Lunatic

00:24:820 (1,2,3,4) - : Maybe change another square like this >> http://puu.sh/hSZu

Nah

good map! thx~

Black_Cherry_Ita wrote:

hi~ here's your m4m~

General
add "Hakurei" in tags because its a surname of Reimu okay, fixed
are you sure about 2 and 4 combocolours? they dont fit to the background, maybe change this? It looked good with the video, but the MAT suggested me to censor this one part of the video, but I have no a video editing software nor I have no experience whatoever in editing videos, so I decided to just remove it for now (I still have the video with me, just not on the map).One of the modders suggested these combo colors, so I decided to just leave it as it is.

Easy
00:50:882 (2) - remove, its very hard for beginners I'll be fine.
00:53:882 (4) - ^ This I removed
00:56:882 (4) - ^ Nope
01:07:570 (3) - 2 grid right and 1 up, if you do this, dont forget to replace a little after it It does looks weird, but I might change it to somethng else though.

Normal
00:43:570 (1) - http://puu.sh/hVGh ? LOL LMAO, almost every modder said this XD. I'll just change to something else then haha.
01:03:070 (3) - NC? Nah
01:10:007 (2) - http://puu.sh/hVGN ? finally fixed this
01:21:913 (2) - ^ finally fixed this

Hard
01:02:320 (1) - remove NC Nah
01:03:070 (3) - add NC and remove on the next one Nah

Lunatic looks good sweet

star, nice mapser GL :3

Jacob wrote:

From my queue.

[General]

• The offset is definitely late. I'm not audio savvy, so please get someone who is to help you on this one. It sounds fine to me.
[Easy]

00:37:570 - The clap pattern you have going on starting here is really inconsistent. I suggest placing the claps on the offbeat. Start the claps at 00:38:320, then the next one at 00:39:820. near fixed, but need to adjust some notes.
00:50:882 - Use distance snap instead of stacking this. It's much easier to read for newer players. Maybe
00:53:882 - ^ Maybe
00:56:882 - ^ Maybe

[Normal]

Looks good. Sweet

[Hard]

• +1 to OD and HP drain, please. It's too low as it currently is. HP drain rate and Overall difficulty of 7 is too high. It's only hard difficulty. 5 or 6 is good enough for a hard.

[Lunatic]

00:30:070 - Why would you lower the slider velocity here? The song doesn't really feel slower here, and you don't do it anywhere else, therefore making this inconsistent. I also broke combo here due to the fact that I wasn't expecting it.

I might fix this some how

nekonomitsu wrote:

Hey Ike~
I'll give you a star -w-

SPOILER

I wanted to see the video before you removed it though -3-
Edit: Do you remember where it i? 8D lol

MoonShade wrote:

Great map so far, so watch out for some nazi stuff.

General
- Delete .osb fixed

Easy
00:50:882 (2) - not sure if you should put this behind a slider on an easy diff, espacially because it's not 1/1 as the rest. Maybe http://puu.sh/hY4y Fine, i'll change it then.
00:53:882 - ^ well then put a circle here like above? Or leave it out in both cases. Nope
00:56:882 (4) - ^ fixed

Normal
00:40:945 (2,3,4) - move them 1 grid up for consistant spacing I thought of something better.
00:45:070 (3,4,5) - ^ same but 1 grid down ^
00:46:757 (1) - I would end the spinner at 00:48:820 (with a finish sound) so the player get's more time to hit the next slider fixed

Hard
00:37:570 (1) - 1 grid right fixed

Lunatic
00:16:382 (1) - I really expect this to start at 00:16:570, this gap is too big/the jump feels too sudden so maybe shorter the distance That's understandable, but that's insane for you. I decided to shorten it though, so fixed.
01:36:069 (4) - 1 grid down fixed
That's all. Very nice map which deserves my star :3

DJNightmare wrote:

Red = Recommended
Blue = Suggestions
Green = Comments

[Normal]

00:28:945 (2) - Move > 1 Grid Fixed
01:10:945 (3,4,5,1) - The Spacing here seems alittle awkward when going towards a new combo... Fixed

[Hard]
01:01:007 (3) - Move > 1 Grid Fixed
01:35:507 (1,2,3,4) - How about putting it vertically symmetrical? (Moving up until it suits the line) Fixed

[Insane]
00:17:320 (4) - Move Down 1 Grid Fixed
00:30:070 (8) - The spacing from the previous note to here is too short... I agree, but I decieded to leave it there for now until I can find an alternative pattern.

OVERALL: NICELY DONE!~ AWESOME!~

THANK YOU

Elly-chan wrote:

finished, beatofike, change whatever you'd like then call me back for a second round of modding

Okay. Thank you very much. Your mods are the best. It is really helping.

Elly-chan wrote:

Recheck. No kds, please.

Purple: Last Time i'm Suggesting This. I Highly Suggest You Do It.

[General]

1. The offset is off. Trust me. It's 94~96. Nope, still think it's right.
2. There are two .osb's in the folder. Remove both, or at least one, and full-submit. Okay, fixed
3. One scene of the video is nsfw. Discussed in IRC. He will add the video to the description and remove it from the mapset.

I'll do this later.

[Easy]

1. 00:34:570 (3) - New Combo. Fixed
2. 00:36:820 (x) - Empty space. Add a note here. Maybe later.
3. 00:53:882 (x) - Add a note here as you did at 00:50:882 and 00:56:882. Maybe later
4. 01:03:070 (1, 2, 3) - The pattern still flows a bit awkwardly. I suggest you rearrange it. Might do this later.
5. 01:11:320 (x) - How about add a note here and one on the downbeat after this one?

Fixed

[Normal]

1. 00:30:070 (5) - New Combo.

Fixed

[Hard]

1. 00:27:070 (5) - PLEASE make this into a one-time-repeat slider and just add a note where the second repeat would have been. It sounds and plays much better. Okay fine -_-, fixed!
2. 00:27:070 (5) - Add a whistle here and one on it's second repeat.

Fixed

[Insane]

1. 01:06:094 (1) - Fugly slider. Make it different, please. Fixed
2. 01:07:594 (5) - New Combo. Fixed
3. 01:10:969 (5) - Fugly slider. Make it different, please.

1. Add the video to the description.
2. 00:53:882 (x) - Add a note here as you did at 00:50:882 and 00:56:882. Maybe later
3. 01:03:070 (1, 2, 3) - The pattern still flows a bit awkwardly. I suggest you rearrange it. Might do this later.

Elly-chan wrote:

Nice Doing Business With You. / Shoots a Kudosu Star /

I Wish You Good Luck.

Thanks for the star and thanks for the mod. Thanks for everything.

1. Fine, I suppose. Move on. (Oh, and the video's NSFW rating wasn't really so high.)

1. 01:36:070 - Why the time when this spinner starts is different to the other diffs?

1. Looks fine.

1. This one looks good too.

1. 00:40:007 (6,7,8) - ...This distance snapping makes me feel awkward. Swap "7" and "8"'s places?

Hinsvar wrote:

Hi.

LET'S BEGIN THE MOD.

(lol)

*Usual note: Gold ones are a must-do. Yes, I'm playing with my avatar. Everything in red are things that look awkward to me (subjective suggestions; you can follow my lead here or not); everything else are rants and minor suggestions to make things look cooler.

>General

1. Fine, I suppose. Move on. (Oh, and the video's NSFW rating wasn't really so high.)

>Easy

1. 01:36:070 - Why the time when this spinner starts is different to the other diffs?

>Normal

1. Looks fine.

>Hard

1. This one looks good too.

>Lunatic

1. 00:40:007 (6,7,8) - ...This distance snapping makes me feel awkward. Swap "7" and "8"'s places?

Guess just that. This beatmap can get bubbled (and ranked) shortly.

Good luck on the way

Darksonic wrote:

Hello~ Request from my queue.

Easy:

00:03:830: Add a note?
00:06:830: ^
00:36:830: ^
00:52:580 (1): Spacing.
01:02:330: Add a note?
01:29:330: ^
01:32:330: ^

I know that this is an easy, but some parts are a little empty. These are just my suggestions.

Normal:

00:28:580 (1): Clap?
00:30:080 (1): ^
00:33:080 (1): Whistle?
00:33:830 (3): ^
00:52:205 (6): Remove Clap.
00:55:205 (6): ^
01:02:330: Maybe it will be better if you add notes here, it feels a little empty. Like this.
01:13:955 (2): I think that only a Finish fits better, so remove clap.
01:14:705 (4): ^

Hard:

Circle Size +1 ?

I think that 1,6 SV it's a little fast for a hard, try to reduce it just a little.

01:10:767 (4): Clap.
01:11:705 (7): Whistle instead of Clap.
01:11:892 (8): Clap.

Lunatic:

00:22:392 (4): x:256 y:320 Maybe it would be better if you do it like the previous pattern.
01:32:705 (9) NC.
01:33:080 (1) Remove NC.

That's all for me, Good luck~

OrangeNeKo wrote:

the lunatic nice><...

Leorda wrote:

Hello

General
* Remove "reimu hakurei" in tags, because this is not Reimu's theme Okay fixed.
* The tags should be "chireiden", not "chireiten" Oops a typo. Fixed
* Use Koishi Komeiji BG, instad of Reimu. Because this song is Koishi's stage theme Do I really need to find a different BG for Koishi? Oh well, Fixed.
* Your MP3 has a blank sound on ending. Please remove it I guess I'll do that then. I'll have to Full submit though.


Easy
* Set the Audio-Lead In to 1500 for consistency on each diff Fixed

00:49:580 (1) - Almost covered by spinner-osu. Could be hidden for beginners Hmm... I don't know
00:58:580 (1) - The tail slider is almost offscreen (just a warning) Fixed
01:04:580 (3) - Clap at repeating slider Fixed


Normal
00:39:080 (5) - New combo for stanza? Fixed


Hard
* This kiai is different on each diff Oh wow. Fixed


Insane
00:14:892 (6) - Turn off grid snap, and move to X: 196 and Y: 271. For better placement (Nazi_ Nah, well actually I might.
00:17:705 (6) - Why finish here? To be honest, I have no idea XD. Fixed
01:03:455 (5) - The tail slider is almost offscreen (just a warning) Fixed


Nice job

SapphireGhost wrote:

Alright, let's have this one be first ranked.

SapphireGhost wrote:

[General]
- Yeah, the thumbnail needs to get fixed. I'll do a bit more work on this soon. In the meantime, try full submitting numerous times, with and without the new background. Delete the .osb file while you're at it, maybe it'll magically solve everything. Okay done.
- It felt like you could have mapped through that break in the earlier difficulties as well, for the short version of a song I wouldn't leave 10% of it unmapped. For some reason, this is how I planned the map to be like during the early stage of developing this map.

[Lunatic]
- For some reason I bothered with more small things on this difficulty than the other ones, it's still not very problematic.
00:25:580 (1,2,3,4,5) - Pattern would look a bit better if you spaced it out to avoid overlap. Fixed.
00:38:330 (3) - Try to smooth out this arc? It looks quite unnatural at the moment. Fixed.
01:06:080 (1,2,3,4) - Because of stacking placing (4) directly under the reverse arrow of (1), it's difficult to read on Hidden. Oh wow, that is hard to read on hidden XD (Sorry SiLviA XD). Not mod friendly at all. Fixed.
01:33:080 (1,2) - Quite a bit of overlapping here, try to make it more like 00:55:580 (1,2) - . Fixed, hopefully.

[Hard]
- Stack Leniency is too low, for this map 1/2 and 1/1 notes should stack when they're in the same place. I agree. Changed it to Stack Leniency 6.

[Normal]
00:58:205 (6,1,2) - Try to rework this pattern so the hitburst of (6) doesn't cover up so much of (2), it currently looks like this. Fixed hopefully.

[Easy]
- I'd probably have used distance spacing 1.0x here, it's actually sort of confusing when 1/1s are overlapping. Just for future reference.
01:27:080 (1) - You need to manually add a new combo to this note. Fixed hopefully.

Most stuff looks good here, just do some fixes and PM me for a re-check, thanks.

SapphireGhost wrote:

- Also, it seems I missed something