NewRulerNA wrote:

[R a i n's Easy]

00:25:699 (1) - オブジェクトの大部分がスピナーの300表示で被ってしまいEasyには向かない配置かもしれません　もう少し中心から離してみては？ fixed

配置に関して気になった1点のみ
good map

1. 01:57:386 (2) - spacing

1. 00:03:949 (1) - move 1 grid up and 1 grid right..?
2. 00:49:699 (4) - this slider goes out of the right border it's unrankable.
3. 01:12:574 (1) - remove clap
4. 02:05:261 (4) - as there is 1/1 stack before, this 1/2 can be confusing, so move away for distance snap?

1. 00:05:824 (1) - why it's not stacked o.o this? http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot224-0.jpg
2. 00:11:261 (5) - weird spacing o.o
3. 00:46:136 (2) - this note should be deleted... and move 3 to 2's place..?
4. 01:53:261 (3) - move points to (280,168) and (232,212)..?

1. 00:00:949 (1) - move 3rd point to (200,248) it looks better
2. 00:01:511 (2) - move 2nd point to (320,72)
3. 00:05:824 (8) - remove a reverse?
4. 01:02:636 (8) - I think this distance should be larger..
5. 01:04:886 (3,4,5,6) - ctrl+r -> reverse these notes, plays better for me
6. 01:16:511 (4,5,6) - here http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot223-0.jpg better to play for me
7. 01:43:136 (1) - new combo here, it's too long
8. 02:41:261 (1) - hard too see this o.o can you move it to somewhere clearer
9. 02:42:011 (1) - this note is not needed
10. good map, jumps are very nice

Byakugan249 wrote:

Alright let's see what I can find.

General:
Rename the source to "Touhou". remove "FELT and flower flag" flower flag is the title of the song and why is FELT there?

Byakugan249 wrote:

Easy:
why is the beat snap at 1/1? it looks like some sliders are unsnapped and are at the red ticks
i think it'd look better if the spacing is set to either 0.8 or 1.0 because the slightly hidden circles are easy to see and not clumped up. DS 0.8 chenged
00:10:324 - remove the break since the normal diff doesn't have 1.
00:12:949 (1) - i think it'd sound nice if you can add a finish at the beginning.
00:40:699 (4) - instead of putting it beside the end of the previous slider, how about stacking it on (2) so that it'd make a nice blanket around (1,3)
00:54:199 (1) - extend it to the next red tick or by 1 tick to follow vocals accurately. no
00:57:199 - add a 1/1 slider here because the beginning follows "wo" and the end follows "aru". correct me if i didn't say it right.
01:15:199 (1) - maybe add a finish at the end because of vocals?
01:24:199 (2) - add a finish at the end because of the cymbals.
01:26:449 (4) - add a finish because of the cymbals.
01:30:574 (1) - end the spinner till 01:32:824 to follow the long pause.
01:51:949 (1) - add a finish at the beginning because if you remove the whistle, you'll hear the cymbals. keep the whistle for consistency.
01:54:949 (3,1) - spacing error. the distance between them is at 0.35. for easy diffs the spacing needs to be consistent.
01:56:449 (1,2) - it'd look easier if you can extend till where (2) is. delete (2) because it looks a bit hidden under the end of (1)
02:00:574 (1,2,3) - try a different pattern. this doesn't follow vocals at all as beginners might hit it too early or late. no
02:30:199 (3) - add a finish at the end since you have 1 on 01:15:199
02:36:949 (2) - same as 01:26:449
02:39:199 (1) - same as 01:24:199
02:41:449 (3) - ^

376,168,36949,6,0,B|326:86|239:101,1,160,4|0
272,204,38449,1,0
170,241,39199,2,0,B|219:322|306:307,1,160,4|0
404,320,40699,1,0

l1106188 wrote:

[General]
The picture "24832758" should 800x600 or 1024x768　24832758 is SBfile

[Normal]
Slider Tick Rate 1 ?! keep

[Insane]
00:45:574 (1,1) - not pretty ?! sorry i cant make good slider... i try it
01:40:324 (2) - ^

The picture so beautiful . lol yeah~ yuyuko!!

l1106188 wrote:

[R a i n's Easy]
remove 01:04:324,02:18:386,03:06:949 bookmark

00:36:949 (3,5) - like this ? http://puu.sh/iyWT

376,168,36949,6,0,B|326:86|239:101,1,160,4|0
272,204,38449,1,0
170,241,39199,2,0,B|219:322|306:307,1,160,4|0
404,320,40699,1,0

Quilt wrote:

Felt is the group which made this music.

DeathBlood wrote:

modヽ('ω')ノ≡ヽ('ω')ノ

[Flower Flag]
03:05:449 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - がんばｔｔ＞＜；keep

[Pastel Flag]
00:08:261 (5) - 位置がoh keep
01:27:761 (8) - 削除 keep
02:14:449 (9,10) - ９と１０の間・・・？ keep

[Flow]
00:57:574 (1) - ここは重ねないほうがいいかもです。他の人にも言われたら直しますー

お互いランクド頑張りましょう(`･ω-)▄︻┻┳═一･:'.,.　がんばりましょう！！

S MoMo wrote:

nice song
may i make a taiko diff?

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

Helloww~
You requested in my queue~

[Pastel Flag]
-00:27:574 (6) - Reverse? keep
-00:39:574 (4) - ^ keep
-00:44:074 (1) - Remove new combo? keep
-00:50:074 (3) - Reverse? keep
-01:42:574 (6) - ^ keep
-01:45:574 (7) - ^ keep

Nicely mapped and and nice song~
Star~

Fenya wrote:

Hi

Pastel Flag:
00:11:636 (1,2,3,4,5) - Not have the same distance... I recommend you do it with the distance snap in x1,3　keep
00:47:636 (1,2,3,4) - Not have the same distance keep
02:40:511 (5) - The slidertick are unsnapped keep

Flower Flag:
00:48:199 (5) - 3rd slidertick unnecessary no change

Well, I'm not good at this, I did everything I could >_<
I hope you serve something~
Sorry for my bad English, good luck

3er123 wrote:

PASTEL FLAG
00:37:511 (2,1) 00:39:011 (3) - - looks askew keep
00:48:574 (6) - stack with 00:48:011 (3) - keep
02:49:324 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Why in other diffs isn't mapped keep

SliderMultiplier:1

Rei_Fan49 wrote:

[R a i n Flag]
> its easy ^^
00:25:692 (1) - remove this ?　no chenged

Rei_Fan49 wrote:

yuuyuukoo~~~ <3 damn, the bg is too cute to concentrate >.<

request from queue~

[General]
> Yuyuko <3　yuyuko!!
> Add "yuyuko saigyouji" (or "saigyouji yuyuko") tag ^^ i forget the touhou 7 stage 6 boss title , but there's " ... ~ Border of Life " for extra info~
> Audio Leadin about 1500ms ? for around 2.5sec delay before hitcircle appear..
all diff fixed

Hinacle wrote:

＜R a i n Flag＞

1. AR+1? 自分にはAR3が一番いいと思いました
2. 00:21:942 (1) - スライダーの終わりを00:24:942に移動
3. 01:02:254 (1) - スライダーの終わりを01:03:942に移動
4. 02:16:504 (1) - スライダーの終わりを02:18:942に移動

Leorda wrote:

Konnichiwa

General
* Remove your SB, it seems pretty useless for me It is carrying out the creation request at the friend.

* The difficulty names must name the diff (like Normal, Pastel's Hard). Your current name diff is hard to guess for players for which diff is easy or insane　rename
* Source : Touhou
* Tags : add "saigyouji yuyuko"

Flow
* AR +1?

00:14:442 (1) - Why new combo here? It doesn't make sense here
00:54:192 (5) - New combo for your combo pattern
01:46:317 (1) - The tail slider is almost offscreen (just a warning, though)
01:54:942 (4) - New combo for your combo pattern
02:05:254 (4) - Don't stack under head slider. Because some beginners are hard to read this since the hitbursts are overlap this
02:21:567 (5) - New combo for your combo pattern


Flower Flag
00:27:379 (8) - Remove whistle at sliderbody, it's annoying
01:01:504 (3) - New combo? Since previous slider are slow....

all fixed!

Good luck

Hinacle wrote:

こんにちわ！
すべて提案です！

mod

＜General＞

1. このままでも悪くはないですがclapの音を変更してみてはどうですか？ ちょっとみんなと相談してみます！

＜Flow＞

1. HP-1 HPがHardと同じ設定になってます
2. 01:39:942 (x) - Note追加
3. 02:15:942 (1) - Remove new combo?

＜Flower Flag＞

1. 01:33:942 (x) - Kiaiタイムをここで終わらせてください
2. 02:52:129 (1) - Remove new combo

神曲すぎる！！
Nice map！！
Ranked期待してます！

nich95 wrote:

Hi, Quilt

From my modding queue

[Normal]
00:42:942 (1) - Add finish in the beginning of slider.
00:45:379 (1) - Add finish in the end of slider.
00:56:254 (1) - Same with 00:42:942 (1)
01:12:567 (1) - Add clap
01:25:317 (4) - Remove clap in the end of slider.
02:05:254 (x) - Add a note?

[Lunatic]
00:45:567 (1) - Add finish in the end of slider.

That's all, that I can find them.
nice map and song, give a star.

Good luck.

Patchouli wrote:

れっつらごー

-Gamu- wrote:

[Lunatic and Normal]

SPOILER

21:01 <-Gamu-> : きるとさん、東方のMaika - Flower
21:01 <-Gamu-> : Flag　MODしたいんですが、フォーラムかくのめんどいので　このチャットで書いて良いですか？
21:01 <Quilt> : おｋです～
21:02 <-Gamu-> : rainさんとpastleさんはあとでチャットでMODしたいと思います
21:02 <Quilt> : りょうかいですー
21:03 <-Gamu-> : Normalいいですか？
21:03 <Quilt> : おｋですー
21:03 <Quilt> : 一回あぷでかけたんで更新おねですー
21:03 <-Gamu-> : おｋ
21:03 <-Gamu-> : まず、タグを一つ増やさないといけないです
21:04 <Quilt> : ！
21:04 <-Gamu-> : Tags: "rain" 　というのを入れてください
21:04 <-Gamu-> : r_a_i_nだけじゃだめなんです
21:04 <Quilt> : そうなのですか
21:04 <-Gamu-> : はい、
21:04 <-Gamu-> : 例えばS o r d aさんとかが例です
21:05 <Quilt> : hmhm
21:05 <Quilt> : れいんが入れなくていいって言ってるんで入れない感じでもおｋです？
21:05 <-Gamu-> : そうしたら、検索ででてこないんですよ
21:06 <Quilt> : あー　そうなんですか
21:06 <Quilt> : りょうかいですー
21:06 <-Gamu-> : 僕みたいなハイフンついてる人とかもそうです
21:06 <Quilt> : ｈｍｈｍ
21:06 <Quilt> : わかりましたー
21:06 <-Gamu-> : あと、taikoもこれ追加する予定なんですよね？
21:07 <Quilt> : はいー
21:07 <-Gamu-> : その人の太鼓が完成して追加したときのタグ追加は忘れないでください、入ってないですよね？まだ
21:07 <Quilt> : はい　りょうかですー
21:08 <Quilt> : りょうかい*
21:08 <-Gamu-> : ｗｗ
21:09 <-Gamu-> : SBはいっとるｗｗ
21:10 <Quilt> : ｗｗｗｗ
21:10 <Quilt> : 頼んだ&作りました
21:10 <Quilt> : ｗ
21:10 <-Gamu-> : MODといっても、きるとさんうまいから見るとこすくなそ
21:10 <-Gamu-> : う
21:11 <Quilt> : うまいのはないかなー・・・
21:12 <-Gamu-> : 01:03:942 (3) - ニューコンボいれてみる？　 kiaitimeのはじめやし
21:14 <Quilt> : hmhm
21:14 <-Gamu-> : 気合いタイムの提案なんですが、自分はよく　サビを二つに分けてるんですが、分けてみてはどうでしょう
21:14 <-Gamu-> : 01:15:192 ーここで一回気合いタイムを終了して
21:15 <-Gamu-> : 01:15:942 ここで気合いタイムを再開
21:15 <Quilt> : 気合タイムはこのままいくことにしますー
21:15 <-Gamu-> : わかりました
21:16 <-Gamu-> : 01:15:942 (3) - さっきのにゅーこんぼいれたならここにも
21:16 <Quilt> : ok~
21:17 <-Gamu-> : 02:09:942 (4) - ここ全体にwhistleの音がついている
21:17 <-Gamu-> : しゅーっていう音する
21:18 <Quilt> : おっと・・・　修正修正～
21:18 <-Gamu-> : 02:18:942 (3) - これもさっきのにゅー（ｒｙ
21:18 <Quilt> : ok~
21:19 <-Gamu-> : 02:30:942 (4) - こ（ｒｙ
21:19 <Quilt> : ok~
21:20 <-Gamu-> : AR5か・・最近AR５のNormal多くて困ってるｗ
21:20 <Quilt> : ｗｗｗ
21:20 <-Gamu-> : FLできないじゃないですかｗｗ
21:20 <Quilt> : ｗｗｗｗｗ
21:20 <Quilt> : FLさせませんｗ
21:21 <-Gamu-> : ｗｗ
21:21 <-Gamu-> : まぁ、良いと思うよ　個人的にはAR４（ｒｙ
21:21 <-Gamu-> : なんでもないっす
21:21 <Quilt> : ｗｗｗｗｗｗ
21:21 <-Gamu-> : まぁまぁ、ニューコンボしか言ってないけど良いと思う　spacing広い感じするけど　まぁ大丈夫だと思う
21:22 <Quilt> : りょうかいー！
21:23 <-Gamu-> : 00:09:754 (7,8,9) - 微妙にずれとる
21:23 <-Gamu-> : あ、Insaneです　あlunaticです
21:24 <Quilt> : あいあいー
21:24 <-Gamu-> : 00:09:754 (7,8,9) - 1 grid 下かな　座標(x:64 y:228)
21:24 <Quilt> : ok~
21:27 <-Gamu-> : 00:37:879 (1) - これ重なってない　ずれとる
21:28 <Quilt> : 修正～
21:29 <-Gamu-> : 00:37:129 (7,1) - これを座標(x:264 y:649にするといいかんじ
21:29 <-Gamu-> : *y:64
21:29 <-Gamu-> : *x:260
21:30 <Quilt> : ok~
21:30 <-Gamu-> : 00:50:817 (1) - ずれてる？
21:31 <Quilt> : おっと・・・
21:31 <Quilt> : 修正ー
21:31 <-Gamu-> : 00:54:192 (1) - 今の位置でもいいと思うけど　重ねたい派は　00:53:254 (5) に重ねる
21:32 <-Gamu-> : そしたら次の（２）もずらさないと・
21:33 <Quilt> : )00:54:942 (1) - その場合これも00:54:192 (1) - にスタックさせたほうがいい感じ・・・？
21:33 <-Gamu-> : 見た目的にそしたほうがいいかも　
21:33 <-Gamu-> : 別に移動したくないなら別にいいけど
21:34 <Quilt> : りょうかいー
21:34 <-Gamu-> : 01:03:192 (4) - にゅーこんぼ＞
21:34 <-Gamu-> : *？
21:34 <Quilt> : ok~
21:35 <-Gamu-> : 01:49:504 (1) - にゅーこんぼ削除？？
21:36 <Quilt> : ok~
21:37 <-Gamu-> : 02:42:004 (1,2,3,4) - これ
21:38 <-Gamu-> : http://puu.sh/lseV
21:38 <-Gamu-> : こんな感じに左右対称にしてみてはどうでしょうか
21:39 <Quilt> : 一応花の形っぽい感じで作ってるんでno changeでー
21:39 <-Gamu-> : あ、まじか　おｋです
21:40 <-Gamu-> : 異常です！
21:40 <Quilt> : りょうかい！！
21:40 <-Gamu-> : *以上
21:40 <Quilt> : ありがとう！
21:41 <-Gamu-> : ちょっとフォーラムにこのチャット残してますね　そしたらkudosもらっても大丈夫なので
21:41 <Quilt> : あいあいー
21:41 <-Gamu-> : kudos欲しいわけじゃないんだからねっ
21:41 <Quilt> : ｗｗｗｗ

good luck~

EDIT: kudosいらない勢・・・だから投げる

1. You better use 1.5 seconds of lead-in, 2.5 is too much. Change it on every diff
2. Add Border of Life to tags to help people find it when they will look for original version of theme

1. 00:00:942 (1) - add finish to beginning
2. 00:03:942 (1) - end it 1/2 earlier and add a note before next slider?
3. 00:06:942 (1) - add finish to beginning
4. 00:13:361 — useless green line
5. 00:18:942 (1) - add finish to beginning?
6. 00:38:442 (2) - place it in center (1 grid left), it'll fix symmetry
7. 00:40:692 (4) - the same? I dunno, do it if you want
8. 00:45:192 (2) - add finish to the end. Check all the moments where it should be
9. 01:30:567 (1) - you know what, make it 1 white tick shorter
   Ah yes, I almost forgot. 02:24:942 (2) - do you hear finish here? I advice you to re-do new combo placement and start new combos from notes like this one, where you can hear finish in music. You know, it's like a.. a new part of it

1. 00:03:942 (1) - make it more accurate? http://puu.sh/lsNS
2. 00:29:817 (1) - remove new combo?
3. 00:35:817 (2) - I recommend you to avoid so many repeats. It's hard to see and count them because sliderball moves fast enough for a short slider. So, better leave only one repeat and add 1/1 note
4. 00:42:942 (1) - same. Either remove one repeat or divide it into 2 1/2 sliders
5. 00:49:692 (4) - ^ (or use note + repeating slider with 1 repeat)
6. 00:57:567 (1) - why it's stacked?
7. 01:23:817 (7,1) - I know that spacing doesn't change here, but it'll be better if you avoid such "jump" on Normal
8. 01:39:942 — add a note, huh? I hear finish here, it should be playable
9. 02:21:567 (1,2) and so on — don't overuse stacks, please. It's all about playing (almost constant moving), not walking from point to point

1. 00:32:442 (4,5) - I don't see a reason for using this jump (3.7x) on calm and quiet part of song. You better re-do it
2. 00:41:067 (1,2,3,4) - eww, now it's antijump. Even if you map a Hard diff, there's no need in sudden spacing change
3. 01:03:942 (5) - it's beginning of kiai time, so I highly recommend you to put new combo here, not on next note
4. 02:18:942 (3) - ^
5. 02:45:379 (1) - start 1/2 later

1. 00:06:379 (1,2,3) - I don't like how these notes lay, better make a straight line: http://puu.sh/lt6s
2. 00:15:942 (2,3) - remove whistle from 3 and add it to 2, sounds better for me
3. 00:28:317 (1,2,3) - uh, there's no triplet in music, why putting it here?
4. 00:46:129 (2) - maybe it's just me, but I don't like how it looks, a little bit ugly
5. 01:30:379 (1) - start 1/2 later
6. 01:49:504 (3) - 1 grid left (lol) to fix symmetry
7. 02:00:942 (1) - few grids up, and slider will not overlap it
8. 02:07:129 (6) - it's really unnecessary, consider removing it
9. 02:26:629 (8,1,2) - ugly things, you better make them more straight. They look.. broken
10. 02:42:192 (2,3,4) - make it symmetrical. Use CTRL+H to check if two notes are symmetrical, then CTRL+H to flip it again
11. 02:45:379 (1) - start 1/2 later

• [General]

1. AudioLeadinの値が、[R a i n's Easy], [Normal], [Pastel's Hard]では2500、それ以外では1000になっています。どこかに統一してください（TicClickさんの提案より 1500に?）
2. Tagsに太鼓譜面の作者名（S MoMo）を何らかの形で入れてください
   
   [Lunatic]
3. Snapされていない緑線が 02:49:080 にあります。修正してください

蛇足

So easy :p Go For Rank （｀・ω・´）

Naryuga wrote:

SoMo's Taiko

• [SoMo's Taiko]

1. TagsをほかのDiffと統一してください ok
2. Song Setupから、"Enable Countdown"のチェックを外してください（譜面には直接影響はないですが、全Diff統一すべきという考えです） ok
3. 以下、d = red/don(小)、k = blue/katsu(小)、 D = red(大)、 K = blue（大）を追加もしくはそれに変更することを指します
4. 00:32:254 (4,1) - k d? ok
5. 00:40:317 (2,1,2) - dkd? no
6. 00:42:567 - k ok
7. 00:43:504 (2) - k? ok
8. 00:43:692 (1) - 00:43:879 に移動? no
9. 00:45:660 (1) - 00:45:567 に移動　（ここの4連打は少し違和感を感じました） ok
10. 00:57:192 (2) - ddddk? no
11. 00:59:817 - d no
12. 01:23:629 (2,3) - k? no
13. 01:32:817 (2,6) - d? ok
14. from 01:38:254 (1) to 01:39:567 (3) - このように？ ---> no
15. 01:44:817 (5) - k（dが多く続いているので変化があったほうがいいかと） ok
16. 01:45:567 (1) - k (not K)? ok
17. 01:45:942 (3) - delete no
18. 01:50:817 - k? no
19. 01:51:379 - d ok
20. 02:00:754 (2,3,4,1,2) - ddkkk? ok
21. 02:02:535 (4) - 02:02:629 に移動 ok
22. from 02:13:504 (3) to 02:14:817 (17) - umm... (9)と(17)をdに？ no
23. from 02:18:942 - (2nd KIAI TIME) - 1st KIAI TIMEに比べて、かなり音が少ない印象を受けました（1st:147個 / 2nd:118個）。　2ndのほうにもっと音を置いてもいいと思います ok
24. 02:18:754 - k? ok
25. 02:23:817 (1) - k? ok
26. 02:24:754 (5) - k? ok
27. from 03:05:442 to 最後 - d k k d k d d...D ? ok

書いていたら結構長くなったのでタブにしまいました↑

僕からのModは以上です。　Starおいておきます（´・ω・｀）つ☆

S i R i R u wrote:

とりゃ！

OnosakiHito wrote:

Requested Taiko mod by Leorda (sorry for late one)

[Hitcircles]
x = 1/1 space

01:42:379 ~ 01:43:692 - k d k d k x d k　ok
01:43:879 (2) - delete? Feels better because of the comming voice. ok

Well, to be honest that's all I could find. There are some more things I could mention, but this would just mess up maps structure.

But overall it's a really nice map in my view! Nice.
Don't need to kd. lol

Good luck~

hoLysoup wrote:

:D
<3

S MoMo wrote:

一応太鼓BG作ってみましたが、使用はしていないので位置がズレていたりなどの報告ください。
修正します。

ストーリーボードですが一度osb内の内容をコピーしTaiko以外のそれぞれのosu内の[Events]に書き込んでください

Quilt wrote:

んー　結構位置がずれちゃってます＞＜　こちらで一応直して置いたんで確認？だけおねがいします

S MoMo wrote:

Quilt wrote:

んー　結構位置がずれちゃってます＞＜　こちらで一応直して置いたんで確認？だけおねがいします

修正どうもです。

後フォルダ内のosbは消したほうがいいです

NoHitter wrote:

[Pastel's Hard]
00:31:879 (1,2,3,4,5) - The sudden spacing change in order to make a pattern, doesn't fit the music IMO.Fixed
00:41:067 (8) - New Combo.Fixed
01:04:317 (1) - This anti-jump doesn't play well. Since it's similar to a Central Anti-Jump, players will tend to assume it's spaced similarly in the timeline as the previous notes. I don't want to change this
02:06:379 (2,3,4) - Maybe tone down the spacing here? II I don't want to change this><

terametis wrote:

[Hard] Fixed
01:06:192 (x)　　　　音取りに違和感を感じます。こんな音取りはどうでしょうか

SPOILER

wcx19911123 wrote:

[Pastel's Hard] ALL Fixed
HD+1, or it is too low as a Hard diff
00:46:317 (2) - move to x:292 y:40? or the anti-jump between 00:45:567 (1,2) - is kinda confusing
01:04:317 (1) - ^, x:300 y:296?
01:06:567 (7) - move this slider up a bit plz, it nearly out of the screen

1. ランクには支障ないと思いますが、歌詞以外のSBが線上に乗っていないので乗せた方が良いかと思います。全SBを動かす方法は上記ツールのDesign⇒ Move all elements in Timeでできるので便利です。
2. mod↓

1. 2つ目のkiai time前にエフェクト付けてみては？　↓は提案 (BGm1.jpgの行に追加)
   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\BGm1.jpg",320,240
   F,0,18754,18942,0,1
   F,0,18942,19692,1,0
   S,0,18942,19692,1,1.072
   F,0,138192,138754,0,0.4
   S,0,138192,138754,1
   F,0,138754,138942,0.4,0.5
   S,0,138754,139317,1,1.2
   F,0,138942,139317,0.5,0

1. SB isn't snapped other than the lyricsSB. ( As for this, there is not the problem with ranked. but it is better to snap )
2. Deficit:My suggestion↓

SPOILER

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg"
F,0,0,,0　⇒add. SB from below so i think the set of BG should be here
//Break Periods
2,10142,12192
2,94142,99192
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
Sprite,Background,TopLeft,"BG.jpg",0,0　　⇒Remove the above reasons
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
Sprite,Fail,Centre,"SB\BGm1.jpg",320,240　　⇒remove. This does not so have a meaning.
F,0,21949,24761,0,0.724
F,0,24761,35449,0.724,0.7237426
M,0,25317,26008,320,240,318,240
F,0,35449,36949,0.7237426,0
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\BGm.jpg",320,240
F,0,12386,12949,0,1　⇒
M,0,12386,25317,320,240,321,240 　⇒There is no meaning because it does not move
F,0,12949,63199,1,0.9662522　⇒nazi F,0,12949,63199,1
M,0,25317,31879,321,240 ⇒There is no meaning because it does not move
M,0,31879,100317,321,240,321,241　⇒There is no meaning because it does not move
F,0,63199,63949,0.9662522,0　⇒nazi　F,0,63199,63949,1,0
F,0,63949,99199,0
F,0,99199,99949,0,0.9674953　⇒nazi F,0,99199,99949,0,1
F,0,99949,186949,0.9674953,0.9520154 　⇒nazi F,0,99949,186949,1
F,0,186949,189949,0.9520154,0　　⇒nazi F,0,186949,189949,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\f2.png",320,240
F,0,6761,6949,0,1
S,0,6761,12574,0.5440001,1.48
R,0,6761,12574,-1.184,-1.621246E-07
F,0,6949,10699,1
F,0,10699,12574,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\f1.png",320,240
F,0,761,1324,0
M,1,761,3949,320,253,283,226
S,0,761,3949,0.1280002,1.624
R,1,761,3949,-4.688,0.07999983
F,0,1324,3574,0,1
F,0,3574,3949,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\f2.png",320,240
F,0,1136,3574,0,1
M,1,1136,3949,324,272,255,232
S,0,1136,3949,1.936,0.7280002
R,1,1136,3949,0,-2.608
F,0,3574,3949,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\f2.png",320,240
M,0,3761,,320,240
F,0,3761,3949,0,1
S,1,3761,5449,1.496,1.96
R,0,3761,5449,0,-2.016
F,0,3949,5449,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\f1.png",320,240
F,0,5261,5449,0,0.316
S,0,5261,6949,1.576,1.28
R,0,5261,6949,0.5119998,-1.328
F,0,5449,6949,0.316,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\t2.png",320,240
M,0,6949,,398,258
F,0,6949,8449,1,0
S,0,6949,8449,1.264,1.744
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\t2.png",320,240
F,0,6761,6949,0,1
M,0,6761,12949,399,260,396,236
S,0,6761,12949,1.256,1.064
F,0,6949,12199,1
F,0,12199,12949,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\t1.png",320,240
F,0,761,949,0,1
M,0,761,12949,320,240,318,193
S,0,761,12949,1,1.296
F,0,949,12199,1,0.9787234
F,0,12199,12949,0.9787234,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\t1.png",320,240
F,0,949,1699,1,0
S,1,949,1699,1,1.352
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\white.png",320,240
F,0,11824,12386,0,1
F,0,12386,12761,1,0
M,0,12574,,320,240
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\BGm1.jpg",320,240
F,0,18761,18949,0,1
F,0,18949,19699,1,0
S,0,18949,19699,1,1.072
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\0.jpg",320,240
F,0,93574,93949,0,1
M,0,93574,99949,256,239,355,239
F,0,93949,99574,1
F,0,99574,99949,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\white.png",320,240 ⇒Do not have much effect. It is necessary to put it behind 「kk.jpg」 to keep an effect. so move to *1
F,0,63199,63949,0,1
F,0,63949,64136,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\whitew.jpg",320,240
F,0,12199,12386,0,1
F,0,12386,12949,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\kkblack.jpg",320,240
F,0,75199,93949,1
F,0,93949,94699,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\f2.png",320,240
S,0,81574,,1.416
F,0,81574,81949,0,1
M,0,81574,85699,432,-143,345,348
R,0,81574,85699,0,-0.64
F,0,81949,85324,1
F,0,85324,85699,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\f2.png",320,240
S,0,87574,,1.608
F,0,87574,87949,0,1
M,0,87574,90949,457,63,353,434
R,0,87574,90949,0,-0.9919998
F,0,87949,90199,1
F,0,90199,90949,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\f2.png",320,240
S,0,84574,,1.56
F,0,84574,84949,0,1
M,0,84574,88699,123,16,188,354
R,0,84574,88699,0,1.392
F,0,84949,87949,1
F,0,87949,88699,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\f2.png",320,240
S,0,78574,,1
F,0,78574,78949,0,1
M,0,78574,81574,252,-6,282,231
F,0,78949,81574,1,0.006399989
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\f2.png",320,240
S,0,75574,,1.504
F,0,75574,76699,0,1
M,0,75574,83449,429,-155,67,420
R,0,75574,83449,0,1.936
F,0,76699,82699,1
F,0,82699,83449,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\f2.png",320,240
S,0,80824,,1.8
F,0,80824,81199,0,0.704
M,0,80824,84192,164,16,367,376
R,0,80824,84574,0.9440001,0.8639996
F,0,81199,83074,0.704
F,0,83074,84574,0.704,0
M,0,84192,84574,367,376,392,352
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\yuyuk.png",320,240
F,0,74449,75949,0,1
M,0,75574,,394,257
F,0,75949,93574,1
F,0,93574,95074,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\kk.jpg",320,240
F,0,63574,63949,0,1
F,0,63949,75199,1
F,0,75199,75949,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\white.png",320,240　⇒*1 above reasons. and add my suggestion
F,0,63192,63754,0,0.7
F,0,63754,63942,0.7,1
S,0,63754,63942,2,2.5
F,0,63942,64317,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\01.png",320,240
F,0,25317,25692,0,1
M,0,25317,28879,200,330,240,330
F,0,28504,28879,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\02.png",320,240
F,0,28879,29254,0,1
M,0,28879,31692,400,400,360,400
F,0,31317,31692,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\03.png",320,240
F,0,31879,32254,0,1
M,0,31879,36567,220,330,260,330
F,0,36192,36567,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\04.png",320,240
F,0,37317,37692,0,1
M,0,37317,40692,400,400,360,400
F,0,40317,40692,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\05.png",320,240
F,0,41067,41442,0,1
M,0,41067,43879,220,330,260,330
F,0,43504,43879,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\06.png",320,240
F,0,44067,44442,0,1
M,0,44067,45192,400,400,380,400
F,0,44817,45192,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\07.png",320,240
F,0,45379,45754,0,1
M,0,45379,48004,200,330,240,330
F,0,47629,48004,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\08.png",320,240
F,0,48192,48567,0,1
M,0,48192,50817,400,400,380,400
F,0,50442,50817,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\09.png",320,240
F,0,51192,51567,0,1
M,0,51192,54004,200,330,240,330
F,0,53629,54004,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\10 copy.png",320,240
F,0,54379,54754,0,1　　⇒Fade-in is slower than others. change to F,0,54192,54567,0,1
M,0,54379,57379,400,400,380,400　　⇒ M,0,54192,57379,400,400,380,400
F,0,57004,57379,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\11.png",320,240
F,0,57567,57942,0,1
M,0,57567,59629,200,330,240,330
F,0,59254,59629,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\12.png",320,240
F,0,60192,60567,0,1
M,0,60192,63004,400,400,380,400
F,0,62629,63004,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\13.png",320,240
F,0,63192,63567,0,1
M,0,63192,65629,200,330,240,330
F,0,65254,65629,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\14.png",320,240
F,0,65817,66192,0,1
M,0,65817,69004,400,400,380,400
F,0,68629,69004,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\15.png",320,240
F,0,69192,69567,0,1
M,0,69192,72004,200,330,240,330
F,0,71629,72004,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\17.png",320,240
F,0,75192,75567,0,1
M,0,75192,77629,200,330,240,330
F,0,77254,77629,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\16.png",320,240
F,0,72192,72567,0,1
M,0,72192,75004,400,400,380,400
F,0,74629,75004,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\18.png",320,240
F,0,77817,78192,0,1
M,0,77817,81004,400,400,380,400
F,0,89629,81004,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\19.png",320,240
F,0,81379,81754,0,1　⇒Fade-in is slower than others. change to F,0,81192,81567,0,1
M,0,81379,84004,220,330,260,330　⇒M,0,81192,84004,220,330,260,330
F,0,83629,84004,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\20 copy.png",320,240
F,0,84192,84567,0,1
M,0,84192,93754,400,400,380,400
F,0,93379,93754,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\21.png",320,240
F,0,100317,100692,0,1
M,0,100317,103879,220,330,260,330
F,0,103504,103879,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\22.png",320,240
F,0,104067,104442,0,1
M,0,104067,106504,400,400,380,400
F,0,106129,106504,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\23.png",320,240
F,0,106879,107254,0,1
M,0,106879,111192,240,330,300,330
F,0,111192,111567,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\24.png",320,240
F,0,112317,112692,0,1
M,0,112317,115692,400,400,380,400
F,0,115317,115692,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\25.png",320,240
F,0,116067,116442,0,1
M,0,116067,118879,240,330,300,330
F,0,118504,118879,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\26.png",320,240
F,0,119067,119442,0,1
M,0,119067,120379,400,400,380,400
F,0,120004,120379,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\27.png",320,240
F,0,120567,120942,0,1
M,0,120567,123004,240,330,300,330
F,0,122629,123004,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\28.png",320,240
F,0,123192,123567,0,1
M,0,123192,125817,400,400,380,400
F,0,125442,125817,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\29.png",320,240
F,0,126192,126567,0,1
M,0,126192,129004,240,330,300,330
F,0,128629,129004,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\30 copy.png",320,240
F,0,129192,129567,0,1
M,0,129192,132379,400,400,380,400
F,0,132004,132379,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\31.png",320,240
F,0,132567,132942,0,1
M,0,132567,135004,240,330,300,330
F,0,134629,135004,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\32.png",320,240
F,0,135192,135567,0,1
M,0,135192,138004,400,400,380,400
F,0,137629,138004,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\33.png",320,240
F,0,138192,138567,0,1
M,0,138192,140629,240,330,300,330
F,0,140254,140629,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\34.png",320,240
F,0,140817,141192,0,1
M,0,140817,144004,400,400,380,400
F,0,143629,144004,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\35.png",320,240
F,0,144192,144567,0,1
M,0,144192,147004,240,330,300,330
F,0,146629,147004,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\36.png",320,240
F,0,147192,147567,0,1
M,0,147192,150004,400,400,380,400
F,0,149629,150004,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\37.png",320,240
F,0,150192,150567,0,1
M,0,150192,152629,240,330,300,330
F,0,152254,152629,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\38.png",320,240
F,0,152817,153192,0,1
M,0,152817,156004,400,400,380,400
F,0,155629,156004,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\39.png",320,240
F,0,156192,156567,0,1
M,0,156192,159004,240,330,300,330
F,0,158629,159004,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\40 copy.png",320,240
F,0,159192,159567,0,1
M,0,159192,161629,400,400,380,400
F,0,161254,161629,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\41.png",320,240
F,0,161817,162192,0,1
M,0,161817,168942,240,330,300,330
F,0,168567,168942,1,0
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

1. Add effects to 2nd kiaitime How is?　so ↓my suggestion (Added to the BGm1.jpg)
   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\BGm1.jpg",320,240
   F,0,18754,18942,0,1
   F,0,18942,19692,1,0
   S,0,18942,19692,1,1.072
   F,0,138192,138754,0,0.4
   S,0,138192,138754,1
   F,0,138754,138942,0.4,0.5
   S,0,138754,139317,1,1.2
   F,0,138942,139317,0.5,0

wcx19911123 wrote:

form my queue

[General]
jsut saying, as a sb designer, shia is no need to put into tags.. anyway it's up to you o.o
why not cancel letterbox during breaks? it looks bad cuz this map has nice sb　no change~

[Normal]
01:15:942 - cancel newcombo? fixed
01:26:067 (1,2,3,4,5) - this pentagon can be better fixed

[Lunatic]
00:37:129 (3,1) - this is really hard to read, plz don't make hidden sldiers.. fixed
01:11:067 (7) - move this slider up a bit plz, it nearly out of the screen fixed
01:19:879 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - move this pattern right and down a bit plz, or the spacing between 01:19:504 (1,2) - is wrong when playing fixed
02:42:754 - add a note plz, it's odd when here hasn't object..fixed

did you find any sb mod? I'm not sure..
anyway, you can call me back when it got some sb mod

1. I suggest adding a silent slider into the file.Some of the part are just too noisy with the sliderslide sound.

1. Difficulty setting
   (I suggest the difficulty setting for better gameplay.)
   
   1. HP +1?
2. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These ar e totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:03:942 (1) - The rhythm is quite weird here.I think this should be a 1.5 beat here.That means the slider should end at 00:04:504 - and you should add a whistle at the end of the slider if you fix it.
   2. 00:10:317 (x) - I don't know why you put a break here.I think a spinner here is much better then a break.If you change that, you don't need to place a long spinner.
   3. 01:02:067 (x) - I guess you need to add a note here to follow the vocal but well, just leave it to you.
   4. 01:30:567 (1) - I would move this spinner to 01:30:754 - to fit with the vocal if I were you.You need to end it at 01:33:942 -
   5. 02:45:567 (1) - ^Similar to previous.
3. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:00:942 (1) - Add a whistle at the end of the slider due to the drum sound.
   2. 00:33:942 (4) - Add a whistle at the ednd of the slider to fit your whistle pattern.
   3. 00:48:192 (3) - Please remove the clap sound at the reverse of the slider.It doesn't fit the music at all and it is the only clap in this part.
   4. 00:51:192 (1) - ^Same.
   5. 00:55:879 (3) - ^Same.
   6. 02:30:192 (3) - Add a clap sound at the beginning of the slider and add a finish at the end of the slider.

1. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:10:317 (x) - I don't know why you put a break here.I think a spinner here is much better then a break.If you change that, you don't need to place a long spinner.
   2. 01:00:192 (1,2,3) - I would change this 1/2 stack to a 1/2 slider if I were you because this is the only 1/2 stream in this part which may cause a miss to some newbie player.
   3. 01:05:442 (5) - Would you add a new combo here because this chain of combo is much longer than others.
   4. 01:07:692 (1,2) - Be honest, the 1/2 rhythm here doesn't sound right, I think it is off the music.Some 1/1 here is good enough for me though.
2. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:35:817 (2) - I think a whistle here would be nice, it depends on you.
   2. 01:03:942 (3) - I guess you are missing a clap at the reverse of the slider.Please add one on it to follow your hitclap pattern.
   3. 01:11:442 (3) - Add a whistle at the beginning of the slider?
   4. 01:39:942 (1) - I guess you are missing a finish sound here because there is a very strong accent point.
   5. 02:18:942 (3) - Please remove the clap sound at the reverse of the slider.It doesn't fit the music for sure.
   6. 02:36:942 (3) - Remove the clap at the end of the slider and then add a clap at the reverse of the slider.
   7. 02:40:692 (5) - Remove the clap from the beginning of the slider and the end of the slider and then add a clap at the reverse of the slider.

1. Issue/unrankable stuff
   (Something bad in gameplay or unrankable staff,you should take a look on it.)
   
   1. 02:39:754 (4,5,1) - (Bad gameply)Inconsistent spacing, were you make this intentional?This can make a bad gameplay to players.Please use the distance snap to snap it again.
2. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:09:942 (3) - Design stuff here.I would make it like this if I were you.Yeah, just make it more beautiful.
      
      

      255,131,9942,2,0,B|193:128|199:86|123:79,2,140,4|2|2

   2. 00:17:629 (4) - They rhythm here is really weird for me.1/1 on red line doesn't fit the music here.Probably change it to 1/2 or some 1/2 with some triplets?
   3. 00:21:942 (1) - I don't think a spinner would fit the music here.I rather map this part instead of spinner.
   4. 02:21:567 (4) - A bit nazi here.Would you put slider (4)- between (2.3)- properly like this?You need to check the spacing after fix.
      
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   5. 02:26:254 (x) - I guess you need to add a note here to follow the vocal.At least I can't find a reason that you skip this pitch.
   6. 02:42:754 (7) - How about move this note to x:416 y:256? (grid 4) ?It looks much better imo.
3. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:11:254 (5) - I'm quite wondering that why you don't add a finish sound here.I can hear a finish sound from the instrument so a finish is really suitable here.
   2. 01:18:379 (1) - Add a whistle at the end of the slider would be nice.
   3. 02:33:754 (1) - Please remove the clap at the end of the slider.I feel extremely weird of this clap and it don't fit the music.

1. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:05:817 (8) - Remove or change this 5-plets please.It sounds really noisy and doesn't fit the music here.
   2. 00:10:317 (x) - I don't know why you put a break here.I think a spinner here is much better then a break.If you change that, you don't need to place a long spinner.
   3. 00:15:942 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - It would be much better if you can 1/1 spacing consistent here.It can improve the gameplay if you do that.
   4. 00:20:629 (7) - Add a new combo here to emphasize the new stanza
   5. 01:00:942 (2) - A desgin stuff here.This slider is really ugly for me.I would make a new one for you but use or not is depended on you.
      
      

      185,342,60942,2,0,B|236:320|261:361|308:337,1,119.999996423721,4|2

   6. 02:57:754 (1) - I would put this note between (2)- and (2)- properly like this.
      
      
2. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:17:817 (6) - Remove the whistle at the beginning of the slider please.
   2. 02:26:629 (8) - Add a whistle at the end of the slider please.

1. 00:00:942 (1) - Change it to big don?
2. 00:28:317 (2,3,1) - I don't think triplet is really fitting the music here.You can either remove or change it to 1/2 pattern.
3. The drum sound in kiai time is almost covered by the music.Please increase the volume (change it normal hitsound can increase the volume.)
4. 01:14:254 (1,2,3,1,2) - kkddd sounds much better here.
5. 01:43:129 (1) - Remove this note?
6. 01:45:942 (3) - Change to big kat and then remove the note at 01:46:129 (1) - .This note is quite meaningless.
7. 02:13:504 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - Why such a long stream here? D: It doesn't fit the music for SURE.It just make the noisy without any fun.