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S h i a

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S h i a 2012-02-29T17:48:48+00:00

yooooooo wcx sama

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Mod request via my queue

[overall]
Osb删掉？
Tag里面不再加点别的东西？

[Gu's Easy]
00:02:701 (1) - nazi.

moe moe

总之做好看点比较好后面很多slider与note slider与slider之间保持好的空隙图会很好看。
我列了下还有这些

00:10:906 (1) - 
00:12:444 (3) -
00:25:265 (3) - 
00:31:932 (2) -  这个调整的话00:33:983 (4) - 这个也顺手调整吧
00:41:675 (3) -

00:51:932 (1) - 90%的normal-hitnormal太大声了。。用NC1 whistle?
01:27:829 (1) - 701的绿线没有用到。删了吧。然后这里add finish?而且音量5%如果是为了要凸显本身MP3的音效的话感觉没必要

[Normal]
...毫无槽点。都是建议
00:18:085 (3) - 音量降50%？
00:19:111 (1) - 同Insane 这里用NC1 Finish 比较好一点。保持与之后音效的一致性。
00:56:034 (1) - 同上
01:17:060 (1) - 这里建议这样？

moe

01:21:675 (3,4) - 合并为slider?

[Gu's Hard]
map set很不错不过
感觉音效有点混乱ww
00:04:752 (1) - slider头add whistle?
00:12:957 (1) - ^
00:15:008 (1) - ^
00:16:034 (3) - whistle
00:18:085 (3) - 这里突然用SC1的clap好奇怪
00:19:111 (1) - NC1 Finish?
00:27:316 (1) - ^
00:35:265 (4) - slider头加whistle
00:35:521 (1) - slider头的whistle 去掉
00:43:726 (1) - NC1 Finish? 从这里开始为什么没有whistle了 o.ob
00:49:880 (1) - slider头尾音效对换
00:50:906 (3) - ^
00:55:521 (6) - ...别呀还是要点声音好点。。顺便Newcombo?
00:58:085 (1) - whistle?
01:00:137 (1) - slider头whistle
01:02:188 (1) - ^
01:06:291 (1) - ^
01:08:342 (1) - ^后面真的很缺whistle啊 Q_Q
01:27:829 (1) - 701的绿线没有用到。删了吧。然后这里add finish?而且音量5%如果是为了要凸显本身MP3的音效的话感觉没必要

[Insane]
...毫无槽点。都是建议
00:18:085 (1) - 这里降到50%？ 60基本没区别或者用绿线做音量递减？
00:19:111 (1) - 这里用NC1 Finish 比较好一点。保持与之后音效的一致性。
00:33:470 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 音量递减
00:51:932 (1,2,3,4) - 从50%开始音量递增？
00:56:034 (1) - NC1 Finish
01:11:419 (3) - 多加一次折返？
~~01:28:342 (4) - 加1NOTE 然后 NC1 finish~~

KayeSara

KayeSara 2012-02-29T19:11:02+00:00

Fix some weird parts :3

Download: Iguchi Yuka - Platinum Disco (TV Size) (wcx19911123) [KS's Taiko].osu

asmn33

asmn33 2012-03-02T03:10:49+00:00

insane 好节奏好跳跃，不错哦，就是后面有个点隐藏的太深。。。不过不妨碍打。。

asmn33

asmn33 2012-03-02T03:12:37+00:00

不过insane的节奏话，打多几次手指会很累的说。。。

wcx19911123

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wcx19911123 2012-03-02T07:19:52+00:00

updated

Nymph

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Nymph 2012-03-02T13:20:02+00:00

General:
好像没啥

Gu's Easy:
Beatmap design/suggestion
00:07:316 (2) - 我不知道你在意不在意这些不过一眼就看见这slider没对称好左边开头的锚点往右一格是正好的
00:09:367 (4) - 这个看形状就知道没拉好（后面类似的不提了
01:15:778 (4) - 前面类似节奏用的空一半然后短slider kiai部分要不要考虑这个slider来回一次我个人觉得这样更顺

Hitsound
00:40:650 (2,4) - 我总觉的这24的那个铃太吵了。。稍微减点音量更顺耳现在总感觉好突出啊
00:51:932 (1) - 这结尾用着90volumn的normalhit真心很奇葩啊
00:56:034 (1) - 如果是我估计会在这用默认的finish 这custom完全没有finish的感觉我觉得
01:04:239 (1) - 同上
01:08:342 (1) - 即使是custom我也感觉这头上有一个很突然照着趋势我以为2也会有因为这custom finish我觉得应该当whistle而不是finish来用
01:16:547 (1) - 前面连续2个铃这里再跟一个我个人觉得不好听不如弄掉了
01:24:752 (1,2,1,2) - 如果是我这4个肯定都用custom finish铃突然变成normal hit略突然

Normal:
Beatmap design/suggestion
00:33:598 (1) - 这转盘停的位置很奇葩啊而且也不好接红线那个note 直接白线停 note也可以删了简单了不少
00:39:624 (1,2,3,4,1) - 。。。。这几个有声音的位置空了没声音的有object 不跟vocal大丈夫尤其是00:41:419
00:47:829 (1,2) - 同上

Hitsound
00:02:701 (1) - 这种地方我还是觉得default finish更合适（后面类似的不提了诡异了
00:04:239 (4) - 开头的clap呢？
00:06:803 (1) - 前面2个whistle了这里就别whistle开头了过渡不好
00:15:008 (1) - 同上（类似不再提
00:18:085 (3) - 作为过渡我觉得hitsound略单调了头whistle arrow加clap如何？
00:19:111 (1) - 为啥这里想起来默认finish。。。。。why？（其实我觉得一直用默认finish不错但是你之前全用的custom的铃啊这里咋想起来默认了
00:24:239 (3) - 这也是加个whistle？
00:58:085 (1) - 这有个想法类似这样的如第一个开头用了finish的话像这样的第二小节就开头不要加whistle了之后第三第四在集中加给我感觉更好我感觉这样略零碎
后面基本也都类似的意见感觉略平淡了

Gu's Hard:
Beatmap design/suggestion
00:19:111 (1,2) - 跟vocal的话这里蓝白线接更好点吧你其他地方都是那么接的就这里中规中矩白线2个走

Hitsound
00:33:983 (2) - 这clap很多余
00:34:496 (3) - 这结尾的也是你之前都没有下clap 这里过渡用起来我觉得就很怪
00:40:650 (4,5) - 还是跟以前说的。。感觉这略吵了
00:54:496 (3) - 还是没必要clap啊。。（就算他是2白线。。加whistle呗
00:55:521 (6,7) - 音量5真心意外
结尾同easy说的反正都是个人意见嘛

Insane:
Beatmap design/suggestion
00:32:444 (4,5) - 这里是jump略意外
00:55:265 (6) - 音乐没有的东西。。听起来略奇怪了还是感觉这里应该空着改成1个note就顺的多
01:03:726 (7) - 略别扭 vocal很清晰是2个字。。所以这slider就
01:27:829 (3) - 与其放在这不如放远点在下面弄个jump 这也太近了要不就把第二个slider拉远然后note包进去

Hitsound
。。基本同上面说的个别的不太好挑

No_Gu

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No_Gu 2012-03-02T13:56:54+00:00

Nymph wrote:
Gu's Easy:
Beatmap design/suggestion
00:07:316 (2) - 我不知道你在意不在意这些不过一眼就看见这slider没对称好左边开头的锚点往右一格是正好的吗的我完全是描点对称但是不知道slider对不对称。巨蠢
00:09:367 (4) - 这个看形状就知道没拉好（后面类似的不提了重修
01:15:778 (4) - 前面类似节奏用的空一半然后短slider kiai部分要不要考虑这个slider来回一次我个人觉得这样更顺我觉得还是这样简单点

Hitsound
00:40:650 (2,4) - 我总觉的这24的那个铃太吵了。。稍微减点音量更顺耳现在总感觉好突出啊我感觉还可以
00:51:932 (1) - 这结尾用着90volumn的normalhit真心很奇葩啊换NC1 FINISH了
00:56:034 (1) - 如果是我估计会在这用默认的finish 这custom完全没有finish的感觉我觉得恩好像还行
01:04:239 (1) - 同上同
01:08:342 (1) - 即使是custom我也感觉这头上有一个很突然照着趋势我以为2也会有因为这custom finish我觉得应该当whistle而不是finish来用哦好像是有点突然了
01:16:547 (1) - 前面连续2个铃这里再跟一个我个人觉得不好听不如弄掉了这个以前考虑过但是感觉不加有点空
01:24:752 (1,2,1,2) - 如果是我这4个肯定都用custom finish铃突然变成normal hit略突然个人感觉把，我觉得还是这样比较爽

Gu's Hard:
Beatmap design/suggestion
00:19:111 (1,2) - 跟vocal的话这里蓝白线接更好点吧你其他地方都是那么接的就这里中规中矩白线2个走加个圈，不然没clap不爽

Hitsound
00:33:983 (2) - 这clap很多余我觉得还好
00:34:496 (3) - 这结尾的也是你之前都没有下clap 这里过渡用起来我觉得就很怪同
00:40:650 (4,5) - 还是跟以前说的。。感觉这略吵了同
00:54:496 (3) - 还是没必要clap啊。。（就算他是2白线。。加whistle呗这里不是因为二四只是我感觉clap比较舒服
00:55:521 (6,7) - 音量5真心意外我瞎放静音也不是一次两次了
结尾同easy说的反正都是个人意见嘛

also fixed some things from Shia's mod...lazy to reply

好明天我也来一发

Download: Iguchi Yuka - Platinum Disco (TV Size) (wcx19911123) [Gu's Hard].osu

Download: Iguchi Yuka - Platinum Disco (TV Size) (wcx19911123) [Gu's Easy].osu

No_Gu

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No_Gu 2012-03-03T13:19:52+00:00

my mod here

[normal]
00:04:239 (4) - 没落下clap?
00:05:008 (1) - 考虑删掉?后面相同节奏的note都不是很密
其他没啥= =感觉kiai里面的两个铃的部分可以带24clap.不然光whistle太清感觉不太适合

[insane]
00:32:444 (4,5) - 为啥这里要跳。。正好4个1/2的vocal感觉可以摆个正方形
00:50:906 (4) - N1 finish
01:03:726 (7) - 中间那个repeat感觉不合适，改成俩全正好不用结尾多个slider还压vocal
01:11:419 (3) - 加个repeat吧
01:25:265 (3,7) - 我觉得N1 finish比较好

~~我来骗kud的~~

wcx19911123

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wcx19911123 2012-03-03T19:11:05+00:00

updated

716 Girl

716 Girl 2012-03-05T15:00:28+00:00

Hitsounds... *_* I LOVE IT <3
And Song <3333

Easy
00:09:367 (4) - looks askew here
00:56:547 (2,4) - ^
01:11:932 (5) - HMM maybe finish here?
01:19:880 (3) - replace to 01:19:624 and add repeat
01:15:778 (4) - replace to 01:15:778 and add repeat
01:28:085 - I don't you can add note here

Normal
00:28:342 (3) - add finish on start

Hard
00:00:650 (1,2) - looks not good
00:35:265 (4,1) - ^
00:49:111 (5) - ugly

Insane
00:35:906 (2) - maybe replace

SkyDevil

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SkyDevil 2012-03-05T16:47:19+00:00

Modmodmod x3
Lovable hitsounds <3 XD

Gu's Easy
Nothing special

Normal
Also nothing special o.o

Gu's Hard
00:06:291 too far away >w<
00:22:188 Somehow i also think its too far away...
00:31:162 ^
00:49:111 Weird slider o.o Can you make something else out of it?
01:16:034 too far compared to the next circle? D:
01:20:137 ^

Insane
01:25:778 I think it gives a nice effect if you put new combo here

Anyway this is kinda a fail mod, anyway I really love this song now o_o Star~!

BeatofIke

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BeatofIke 2012-03-08T02:24:12+00:00

[Gu's Hard]
01:26:803 (2) - This circle is making the star shape inconsistent.

Very Good Map.
STAR~

Snowy Dream

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Snowy Dream 2012-03-08T11:23:03+00:00

Hi wcx.

以下是mod
TV SIZE无良快改fullver

wcx19911123

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wcx19911123 2012-03-08T11:26:41+00:00

楼上自重
updated

No_Gu

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No_Gu 2012-03-08T11:27:47+00:00

Snowy Dream wrote:
Hi wcx.

以下是mod
TV SIZE无良快改fullver

好 wait for my full ver

arien666

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arien666 2012-03-08T14:45:18+00:00

[Insane]
00:25:265 (1,2,3) - Returning might be hard for some people imo orz
00:32:444 (4,5,6,7) - Err... spacing?
00:57:060 (4,5,6) - Same as 00:25:265 (1,2,3) but as Kiai... I dunno orz. Keeping might be okay...?

[KS's Taiko]
01:27:829 - Keep Kiai after last note :3?

meow :3

wcx19911123

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wcx19911123 2012-03-08T15:36:29+00:00

arien666 wrote:
[Insane]
00:25:265 (1,2,3) - Returning might be hard for some people imo orz this is not hard to play imo.. I got this idea from some S i R i R u's maps :3
00:32:444 (4,5,6,7) - Err... spacing? oh this one , it is on purpose. you can hear the vocal "o"(at 00:32:701) is loud and high , right? or I add a jump here to fit the vocal , not a huge jump so it is not confusing :3
00:57:060 (4,5,6) - Same as 00:25:265 (1,2,3) but as Kiai... I dunno orz. Keeping might be okay...? same here , not too hard to play imo :3

meow :3

thanks for modding :3

KayeSara

KayeSara 2012-03-08T19:39:49+00:00

>arien666
Fixed
Thanks for your modding.

Download: Iguchi Yuka - Platinum Disco (TV Size) (wcx19911123) [KS's Taiko].osu

arien666

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arien666 2012-03-09T05:37:31+00:00

meow :3

Haruhi_sama

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Haruhi_sama 2012-03-11T04:40:01+00:00

yo

Gasaiyuno-chan

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Gasaiyuno-chan 2012-03-11T04:41:00+00:00

Bubbeld?
OK i want say
[Gu's Hard]
00:17:060 (1,2,3) - spacing wrong maybe?
[Easy]
00:17:060 (3) - NC?

If you think no problem,skip you know?

No_Gu

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No_Gu 2012-03-11T05:03:51+00:00

Gasaiyuno-chan wrote:
Bubbeld?
OK i want say
[Gu's Hard]
00:17:060 (1,2,3) - spacing wrong maybe?
[Easy]
00:17:060 (3) - NC?

If you think no problem,skip you know?

hahah I think ther are both fine

Mafiamaster

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Mafiamaster 2012-03-11T15:17:25+00:00

I enjoyed this.

Ranked!

Nymph

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Nymph 2012-03-11T15:18:55+00:00