LunarSakuya wrote:

Tatsh and Gabi <33 xD

Easy
00:33:801 (4) - Move a little lower? ok i guess
01:30:882 (1) - Add Finish done

Basic
00:50:342 (2) - NC done
00:54:233 (1) - Finish and clap at end ah this note shouldn't have hitsounds on it, but thanks for noticing it i removed the whistle ^^
01:39:963 (1) - Remove NC ok

Extreme
00:28:936 (4) - NC? i think i'll keep it as it is
01:08:180 (7) - NC ^
01:26:017 (3,4) - Make a slider instead the song flow here is that when it's a whistle hitsound it's a slider and when it's a circle it's no hitsound except clap maybe so i will leave it.

Nice challenge! xD

Advanced I'll wait for what ignorethis has to say about it ^^
00:31:774 (6,7) - Ctrl + H and adjust, flows better imo
00:33:153 (4) - Move this note to the left a bit, so its visible; consistent with your other 1/4 patterns
00:52:936 (4) - NC
01:53:261 (1,1,1) - Put these in a line instead of stacking them:
http://puu.sh/hHP1

Good luck, I love your streams xD

bmin11 wrote:

[Advance]
00:55:207 (3) - I would personally move it down a bit more for the consistency of the movement. It makes it easier to hit the next note as well.

Gabi wrote:

Thx Rika, i fixed the combo on easy, but i'll leave the bg since it's only like 2 pixels off ^^

@bmin11: I'll ask ignorethis about the advance difficulty. On the basic difficulty im not quite sure what you mean about better blanket xD. Anyways don't worry about more stars, i just want some mods so MAT's/BAT's will mod this, Thx though, and thx for the mod :3

• 
  Speaking of the source, I think it should be "jubeat copious". Not be in capital.
  
  

  Gabi wrote:

  but i'll leave the bg since it's only like 2 pixels off ^^

  Then
  
  1024*768

  
  How about it above?

1. 01:14:909 (T) - Remove this green line.
2. 01:30:882 (T) - ^
3. 01:36:072 (T) - ^

1. 00:28:288 (1) - Move it left by 1 grid to make the spacing of 00:27:638 (2,1,2) be consistent.
2. 00:28:936 (3,4,5) - ^ if you fixed above, move these notes right too.
3. 00:32:504 (2,3,4,5) - (4,5) touches HP bar a bit. It's not recommended because it prevents reading, so please try to move (2,3,4,5) to avoid it.
4. 00:33:477 (1,2,3,4) - ^
5. 00:50:666 (2,3,4) - It's kinda hard for normal-player to read current rhythm. So I recommend you to change (3,4) to a slider.
6. 01:02:017 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Good pattern though...playing long chain of circles makes normal-player be tired...change some notes to a slider if you can.
7. 01:30:882 (2) - Add finsh as well as Extreme?
8. 01:34:774 (1) - It's better to avoid being out of screen.
9. 01:36:072 (T) - Remove this green line.

• 
  About yellow notes, I think 1.50x SV is too fast, it's kinda confusing...how about 1.25x SV or something else instead?

1. 00:19:207 (1,2,3,4,5) - Maybe only to me, this formation doesn't look so beatiful. If you can, try once to make it symmetric?
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:28:288 (1) - IMO it's easier to read the timing if this note isn't stacked with slider's end.
3. 00:46:450 (T) - Remove this green line.
4. 00:46:936 (2,3,1) - When playing, the stack looks broken due to stack leniency. Try to move (3,1) right & below by 1 grid with grid level 4.
   
   when playing current one

   
   when playing fixed one

   
5. 00:48:234 (2,3,1) - ^
6. 00:52:126 (2,3,1) - ^
7. 00:53:423 (2,3,1) - ^
8. 01:30:882 (T) - Remove this green line.
9. 01:36:072 (T) - ^
10. 01:36:072 (1) - Add finish to the top of slider as well as Extreme?
11. 01:52:612 (1,1,1,1,1) - Try to make it perfect equilateral triangle. On current one, the spacing of 01:52:612 (1,1,1) looks kinda narrow.

1. 01:29:099 (1,2) - I think this stream should start from 01:29:261. So remove (1,2)? (Though you have to move rest notes to adjust the formation after fix...)
2. 01:53:261 (1,2,3) - The space between (2,3) looks kinda wider than one between (1,2). How about moving (3) down by 1 grid if you don't have mind on it?

Suzully wrote:

From my modding queue.

[General]

• 
  Speaking of the source, I think it should be "jubeat copious". Not be in capital. You're right, fixed
  
  

  Gabi wrote:

  but i'll leave the bg since it's only like 2 pixels off ^^

  Then
  
  1024*768

  
  How about it above?

ok fixed, thx

[Easy]

1. 01:14:909 (T) - Remove this green line.
2. 01:30:882 (T) - ^
3. 01:36:072 (T) - ^

done all above

[Basic]

1. 00:28:288 (1) - Move it left by 1 grid to make the spacing of 00:27:638 (2,1,2) be consistent. ok
2. 00:28:936 (3,4,5) - ^ if you fixed above, move these notes right too. ok
3. 00:32:504 (2,3,4,5) - (4,5) touches HP bar a bit. It's not recommended because it prevents reading, so please try to move (2,3,4,5) to avoid it. fixed
4. 00:33:477 (1,2,3,4) - ^ fixed
5. 00:50:666 (2,3,4) - It's kinda hard for normal-player to read current rhythm. So I recommend you to change (3,4) to a slider. changed rythm and put 2 sliders
6. 01:02:017 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Good pattern though...playing long chain of circles makes normal-player be tired...change some notes to a slider if you can. fixed
7. 01:30:882 (2) - Add finsh as well as Extreme? You are right, i missed this, thx ^^
8. 01:34:774 (1) - It's better to avoid being out of screen. Fixed
9. 01:36:072 (T) - Remove this green line.

fixed

[Advanced]

• Will talk to ignorethis about it
  About yellow notes, I think 1.50x SV is too fast, it's kinda confusing...how about 1.25x SV or something else instead?

1. 00:19:207 (1,2,3,4,5) - Maybe only to me, this formation doesn't look so beatiful. If you can, try once to make it symmetric?
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:28:288 (1) - IMO it's easier to read the timing if this note isn't stacked with slider's end.
3. 00:46:450 (T) - Remove this green line.
4. 00:46:936 (2,3,1) - When playing, the stack looks broken due to stack leniency. Try to move (3,1) right & below by 1 grid with grid level 4.
   
   when playing current one

   
   when playing fixed one

   
5. 00:48:234 (2,3,1) - ^
6. 00:52:126 (2,3,1) - ^
7. 00:53:423 (2,3,1) - ^
8. 01:30:882 (T) - Remove this green line.
9. 01:36:072 (T) - ^
10. 01:36:072 (1) - Add finish to the top of slider as well as Extreme?
11. 01:52:612 (1,1,1,1,1) - Try to make it perfect equilateral triangle. On current one, the spacing of 01:52:612 (1,1,1) looks kinda narrow.

[Extreme]

1. 01:29:099 (1,2) - I think this stream should start from 01:29:261. So remove (1,2)? (Though you have to move rest notes to adjust the formation after fix...) I understand your point of view of this (following drums), but here im following the electro(?) notes so ill keep it
2. 01:53:261 (1,2,3) - The space between (2,3) looks kinda wider than one between (1,2). How about moving (3) down by 1 grid if you don't have mind on it?

fixed

Great map! I was excited thx
Call me back after fix :3