Kawayi Rika wrote:

Moe Ichiban <3

spboxer3 wrote:

[general]

• 
  Settings
  

1. Inconsistency in PreviewTime Fixed
2. Inconsistency in Tags Fixed
3. video offset: 200ms I think~ Fixed

[Easy]

• 
  mapping
  

1. 00:40:578 (1) - left 1 grid? Fixed

[Normal]

• 
  
  mapping
  

1. none~

[Insane]

• 
  Settings
  

1. unused green line:
   00:44:242 - Fixed

Overlaps
(Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap eachothou could space them farther apart.)

1. 00:42:868 (2,3) -
   mapping
   
   1. none~

red is unrankable issue. bule is need to discuss. Black is just suggest.

spboxer3 wrote:

[S o r d a's Hard]

• 
  
  Overlaps
  (Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap eachothou could space them farther apart.)
  

1. 00:48:364 (2,3) -

nope

mapping

1. 00:11:265 (1) - finish at slider head?Fixed
2. 00:18:593 (1,2) - I think you can try to let it much better↓Fixed
   
   photo

   
   

   412,228,18593,6,0,B|332:176|348:76,1,160,2|0
   440,136,19280,2,0,B|292:200,1,160,2|0

3. 01:27:524 (1) - Bug. you must be add NC hereFixed

-Bakari- wrote:

eh..
let's try to mod

Insane
00:56:150 (1) - x３２４　y252
00:56:608 (2) - x476 y92
01:07:601 (4,5) - are you sure? maybe like this http://puu.sh/jN0h
01:08:517 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - http://puu.sh/jN0s looks better.. or not?
01:20:654 (4,1) - looks bad :<
01:24:547 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8....) - maybe like this? http://puu.sh/jN1k
01:28:211 (5) - maybe spinner/slider?

Normal
00:49:738 (1,2,3) - maybe like this http://puu.sh/jN3J Fixed

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Sorry, my mod is too short.
Hope it will be usefull :3

senaya wrote:

pew~
looks nice already.

[Easy]
My personal opinion: too many straight sliders.
just some thoughts:
00:00:273 (1,2,1) - http://puu.sh/jNqt
00:02:105 (1,2,3,1) - http://puu.sh/jNqG
00:24:089 (1,2,3,1) - http://puu.sh/jNs3
00:25:921 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/jNsa
etc, it's up to you to decide which and how.

[Normal]
00:41:494 (2) - add 2 sliders for drums? http://puu.sh/jNtn Fixed
00:44:929 (2) - remove, move 00:45:158 (3) here instead and add circle at 00:45:616 to follow lyrics better? Fixed
00:54:089 (2) - remove, move 00:54:318 (3) here instead and add circle at 00:54:776 to follow lyrics/music better? Fixed

-Bakari- wrote:

Hard
00:13:097 (5) - new combo~Fixed
00:13:097 (5) - circle here?eh,already put a circle
00:55:692 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/jN2YNope

senaya wrote:

[S o r d a's Hard]
01:08:517 (1,2,3,4,5) - more rounded shape, something like this http://puu.sh/jNx6 ?Nope
01:10:807 (3) - change like http://puu.sh/jNxS to follow lyrics and music better?^
01:19:967 (2) - remove clap, add clap at 01:20:425 (3) ?Fixed

suirenn05 wrote:

hi phonic~MODリクエストから:D


※大体は提案です、気に入らなければ無視してもらっても構いません



Easy
✩01:20:883(1)-提案：最後の部分はジグザグ配置とかどうかな？ Fixed

最後の単発はジグザグのほうがいいかも！って思っただけでした いい譜面～




Normal
✩00:12:410(3)-提案：ここの単発を↓にしてミッキーみたくしてみたりとか

ちょっとミッキーは危ないかなって思ったけど。まあいいかwいい譜面だった！頑張って！



phonic~Ranked目指して頑張ってね～応援してます:0


とぅっ(ノ*´д｀*)ノ~[star]

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Moe Moe phonic chan <3 I'm Moe boy >w<

Mod time for PM - In game ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

1. 01:24:547 (1) - This spinner maybe end to here 01:28:135(1/6),sound much better with me. Fixed

[Insane]

1. 00:47:906 - Add finish. No, I think that it does not match a sound to add finish here

[Normal]

1. I think AR+1 will be much better play. Fixed
2. 00:47:906 - Add finish. same as Insane
3. 01:04:853 (2) - Add new combo to here,Vocal start to here. Fixed
4. and Remove 01:04:395 (1) and 01:06:227 (1). ^
5. 01:06:914 (2) - Add new combo^. ^
6. 01:07:830 (1,2) - Try like this rhythm. ^
   

[Easy]

1. 00:47:906 - Add finish. same as Insane

Moe nice map ganbare <3

Kawayi Rika wrote:

[Baka' Hard]

I'm not bakaT_T

1. OD+1 OD,HP+1
2. This part need more hitsound,not simple sound for here 00:29:585 - 00:58:669.Hmm already some Added Custom whistle keep it now
   Try add some whistle or clap. huh already some hitsound if have problem you can tell me
3. 00:44:242 - Add finish.Fixed
4. 00:47:906 - ^ doesn't fit Nope

Thite wrote:

[S o r d a's Hard]
00:48:364 (2) - こういう風にしてみては？Fixed

SPOILER

01:08:517 (1,2,3,4,5) - 綺麗な5角形にしたらもっと見栄えいいかなぁって思いましたFixed 多分綺麗になったはず>_<
01:21:341 (2,6) - 2と6だけスペーシングが違って少しだけ気になりましたスペーシング同じにしました

S o r d a wrote:

@phonic HPとOD+1しましたー譜面自体簡単だと思うので恐らく問題ないかとー

Thite wrote:

すべて提案ですー！


[Easy]
00:00:273 (1) - スライダーの最初にfinish追加？ Fixed
00:30:043 (1) - スピンの後すぐにノートあると初心者には難しいかなぁって思うから消してみては？ ^


[Normal]
00:00:273 (1) - スライダーの最初にfinish追加？Fixed
01:22:257 (2) - 01:22:028 - ここからスタートにしてみては？ スライダーの代わりにノート置いてみました


[Insane]
00:00:158 (1) - このノートはいらないような気がします
01:27:982 (4) - りむーぶfinish？ Fixed
01:28:211 (5) - でこっちにfinish追加？ ^

good map

Cilvery wrote:

[Easy]

01:03:479 (3) - whistle

01:19:051 (1) - ^

01:24:547 (1) - 01:28:211までのばした方がいいと思いますｗ (Hard,Insaneの終わりが01:28:211なのでそろえた方が統一感あるかな～って感じがします)



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[Normal]

00:56:608 (2) - 1grid上 Fixed

01:06:227 (3) - finish ^

01:24:547 (1) - 01:28:211までのばした方がいいと思いますｗ (Easy同様)



[Insane]

00:03:479 (5) - 1grid左 Fixed

00:03:937 (1) - ^ ^

00:15:387 (2) - 1grid下 ^

00:16:532 (6,7,1) - ^ ^

00:21:570 (5,6,7,1) - 綺麗なひし形?になるといいかな～って思いますｗ ^



00:22:715 (2) - 00:22:257 (1)の下に置く(上のイメージ) ^

01:06:227 (1) - 始点finish ^

01:11:265 (4) - 2grid左 ^

01:11:952 (2) - 01:11:265 (4)の終点にstack ^

01:24:547 (1) - finish
＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿

初心者なので変なmodがあるかもしれません・・・(￣∀￣；)

良い曲ですね！

頑張ってください(´ω `*)

Saten-san wrote:

hi~~

Insane
00:14:471 (6) - Finish at the beginning Fixed
00:47:906 (1) - Make this into 2 hitcircles instead?
01:06:914 (2) - ^
01:13:326 (3) - Finish Fixed
01:27:982 (4) - finish at the beginning ^
01:28:211 (5) - lower the volume to 50%? ^

Easy
00:57:066 (1,1) - feels kinda too close


That's all
Good luck~

1. Red - Unrankable stuff.
2. Blue - Extremely suggest you to follow this.
3. Black - Feel free to ignore this.

1. Fine~

1. 00:30:502 (1) - Have to set new combo manually here ~
2. 01:24:547 (1) - I'm not sure whether you do this on purpose ~ But I extremely suggest you to put the tail on 01:28:211 ~ Sounds much better for me ~

1. 00:45:616 (3) - Miss clap ?
2. 01:08:746 (3) - Move clap to 01:08:517 (2) ? If you do this on purpose, ignore this ~
3. 01:24:547 (1) - The same to easy ~

1. 00:02:792 (2,3,4,5,6) - I suggest to use normal spacing here... If you consist to, I cosider 2~6 should be one part which follow the music...
2. 00:09:433 (6) - Miss clap on tail ? >< And why change to whistle from here suddenly....
3. 00:21:341 (8) - Move whistle to 00:21:112 (7) ?
4. 01:14:013 (2) - Clap ?
5. 01:27:524 (1,2) - Whistle ?

1. 01:27:982 (4) - Remove finish from tail ?

JoJo wrote:

[Sorda baka desu =~=]baka jyanai baka JoJo!

1. 00:02:792 (2,3,4,5,6) - I suggest to use normal spacing here... If you consist to, I cosider 2~6 should be one part which follow the music...Fixed
2. 00:09:433 (6) - Miss clap on tail ? >< And why change to whistle from here suddenly....okey,All changed clap remove whistle
3. 00:21:341 (8) - Move whistle to 00:21:112 (7) ?Fixed
4. 01:14:013 (2) - Clap ?Fixed
5. 01:27:524 (1,2) - Whistle ?

Fixed

JoJo wrote:

Hi hi ~ >w<
Time to pay debt =w="

1. Red - Unrankable stuff.
2. Blue - Extremely suggest you to follow this.
3. Black - Feel free to ignore this.

[General]

1. Fine~

[Easy]

1. 00:30:502 (1) - Have to set new combo manually here ~
2. 01:24:547 (1) - I'm not sure whether you do this on purpose ~ But I extremely suggest you to put the tail on 01:28:211 ~ Sounds much better for me ~

[Normal]

1. 00:45:616 (3) - Miss clap ?
2. 01:08:746 (3) - Move clap to 01:08:517 (2) ? If you do this on purpose, ignore this ~
3. 01:24:547 (1) - The same to easy ~

[Sorda baka desu =~=]

1. 00:02:792 (2,3,4,5,6) - I suggest to use normal spacing here... If you consist to, I cosider 2~6 should be one part which follow the music...
2. 00:09:433 (6) - Miss clap on tail ? >< And why change to whistle from here suddenly....
3. 00:21:341 (8) - Move whistle to 00:21:112 (7) ?
4. 01:14:013 (2) - Clap ?
5. 01:27:524 (1,2) - Whistle ?

[Insane]

1. 01:27:982 (4) - Remove finish from tail ?

That's all =w="
blablabla~

eLtigreXXx wrote:

suggestion ;^;

Offset: 271 ?
audio 60 %

easy
00:02:105 (1)- remove new combo
00:03:021 (4) - ^
00:05:769 (1) - ^
00:09:433 (1) - ^
00:13:097 (1) - ^
00:16:761 (1) - ^
00:17:677 (5) - new combo
00:18:593 (1) - ^
00:20:425 (1) - ^
00:21:799 (7) - ^
00:22:257 (1) - remove new combo
00:25:921 (1) - ^
00:31:418 (1) - ^
00:33:250 (1) - ^
00:33:997 (6) - new combo
00:35:082 (1) - ^
00:49:509 (x) - add a note here?
00:53:173 (x) -- ^


good song
I'm newbie mod QAQ

KanaRin wrote:

>~< kami song
I will add a bg later.
Taiko Oni Level . 7

KanaRin wrote:

bg here~

hoLysoup wrote:

[Sorda]
/me eats sordame eats holysoup
00:04:624 (2) - just suggestion: ctrl+r?
00:09:433 (6) - forgot clap on slider end?
00:11:265 (1) - ^
01:19:967 (2) - add whistle here
Very nice too! :> nothing found~

hoLysoup wrote:

This is a lovely song <3

[Insane]
00:29:127 (1) - add whistle? I think it's great
01:14:013 (2,3) - Try this rhythm?: circle at 01:14:013, slider from 01:14:242~01:14:700. そして, circle at 01:14:929
Very nice~ nothing found~

[Normal]
Hp Drain and OD +1

[Easy]
00:31:418 (1) - remove NC

Nothing else found~
Really great map and song
I have no kd.. gomen :< i will give you kudosu \:D/
just past 1000 posts~! Congrats www

-Sekai- wrote:

mod mod mod baka Phonic~ >3< baka Sekai ~

[Easy]

1. 00:01:189 (2) - add a whistle on slider star? because i hear i whistle there ~ o.o
2. 00:03:021 (2) - ^
3. 00:03:937 (1) - 1 grip down, line it with 00:03:021 (2,3) - ?
4. 00:04:853 (2) - spacing~ Fixed
5. 00:04:853 (2) - whistle here will be nice~ ^
6. 00:21:799 (3) - 1 grip right to be lined with (2) ~
7. 00:39:662 (2) - 1 grip up, if you did that then fix the spacing on next notes/sliders~ Fixed
8. 01:07:143 (3) - NC and remove the NC on 01:08:059 (1) - because the vocal starts there~ ^

[S o r d a's Hard]

1. 01:23:402 (7) - NC? No chnage

[Kana's Taiko Oni]

remove the video from the .osu file Fixed

awesome map as always Phonic :3 good luck~ Thank you >w<!

Byakugan249 wrote:

Alright let's see what I can find. found this on #modreqs


Easy:
00:03:937 (1) - NOTE: if you do this ignore the suggestion below: replace the whistle for a finish and reduce the volume. 30% should be fine and it sounds a lot better IMO Fixed
00:05:769 (1,2) - NOTE: if you ignore the suggestion above do this: if you want to keep the consistency on the whistles, add it at the beginning.
00:07:601 (1) - same as 00:03:937 Fixed
basically add whistles at the first and at the third downbeat to keep the consistency till 00:10:807
01:22:715 (1) - i think the hitburst still covers this note which makes it hard for beginners to find. to make it easier, stack this on (2). it's fully visible for beginners to see IMO ^

Normal:
00:03:937 (1) - same as easy. Fixed
00:07:601 (1) - ^ ^
00:11:265 (1) - ^ ^
01:20:883 (1) - add a finish at the beginning? same reason as above. ^

Insane:
00:03:937 (1) - same reason with the finish. Fixed
00:07:601 (1) - ^ ^
00:11:265 (1) - ^ ^
00:44:929 (4) - make this a NC because the vocals start. (1-3) follows instrumental. ^
00:57:982 (9) - hmm to make this more challenging, how about adding 1/4 sliders with 2 repeats?

This is the best i can do. Star and GL