Fixed~

Thx bossandy, No_Gu, and Rei-chan~

Hello from #modreq

[Normal]

plz Slider tick rate 1 maybe looks better

00:56:857 (6) - not good (pattern)

01:47:690 - add circle with finish sound

01:47:690 (1) - this spinner start at 01:47:794.

01:59:357 (1,2,3) - Perhaps, this three circle delete and add the slider like - >

01:59:982 (4) - delete circle

02:37:690 (1,2,3,4) - make symmetry. like - >

03:27:691 (3) - add whistle

GOOD !

[Hard]

00:28:315 - add circle and stack with 2

00:33:315 - add circle

00:58:732 - add circle it is following the vocal

01:02:690 (4) - style. - >

01:38:524 (6) - Use Ctrl + R

01:47:690 - add circle

01:47:690 (1) - this spinner start at 01:47:794 -

02:45:815 - add circle

03:45:815 - add circle


FANTASTIC !


[Lunatic]


difficulty name change plz

Lunatic - > Insane it is Following the mapping rule


00:34:044 (10,11) - delete circle

00:34:149 - add circle

01:15:399 (1,2,3) - strange , and so suddenly

01:16:232 (2,3) - rhythm suggestion - > 01:16:440 (4) - add clap in head

01:17:169 (7) - add clap in head

01:18:003 (10) - ^

01:23:836 (5) - ^

01:37:169 (5) - ^

02:17:065 (1,2,3) - strange , and suddenly

02:24:669 - add circle

02:30:190 (7,8) - make a stream !

03:11:232 - ~03:37:690 - toooooooooooooooo empty !! this part is So many boring!

this diff is Lunatic more add beat !

03:51:336 - add circle

04:14:357 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Pattern suggestion - >


that's all !!!












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plz see my map .. .....

Hi Nymph here and M4M from your queue.

General:
kiai times are a little consistent, you may want to check them again~([Hard] 00:27:693)


SB:
B02.png: those looks pretty ugly in the storyboard, maybe cut them off?

A11.png: seems I didn't see this img in the storyboard? where did you use this


Normal:
Issues
I am not a fun of high Hp drain is easier diff, so I would suggest to -1 at least
03:12:690 (1) - new combo bug, need new combo here.
03:58:524 (1) - same^

Beatmap design/suggestion
01:18:524 (4,5,6) - distance inconsistent

Hitsound
03:16:024 (1) - from here the sliderslide feel very noisy, maybe consider using a silence one instead.
03:43:732 (2) - I may suggest to change these 2 note to normal hitsound, cuz soft clap really not strong enough for here imo. I suggest to use normal finish instead.


Hard:

Beatmap design/suggestion
00:36:024 (4) - the arrow on this slider is a little hidden by the comboburst of 3, still able to play but didn't feel very good, so maybe consider move it out a little bit?
03:41:440 (X) - there is a finish here in the mp3 too, although only add a note at 03:41:649 is a choice, but maybe make a slider starts at here and end at 03:41:649 may feel better, cuz it is easier to play and you can add both 2 finishes to fit with the mp3 imo.
04:06:023 (4) - same with 00:36:024 (4).

Hitsound
02:17:690 (1) - finish on the head of this slider?
03:12:690 (1) - I saw you add some whistles after here in normal diff, but no hitsound here in hard diff, I think whistles fit here pretty much, so maybe consider to add some in this diff, at here too?
03:43:523 (2) - same suggestion as normal diff.


Lunatic:
Issues
I thought Lunatic is a word from Touhou, so maybe rename the diff name to Insane?

Beatmap design/suggestion
01:01:024 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - these didn't played very well because I think they don't fit the vocal or music very much... maybe try another rhythm pattern?
02:20:815 (7) - still feel a little hidden when first time I played here, but feel better after 2nd try, so maybe just me
03:56:023 (1,2) - this would be much better imo.

Hitsound
03:12:690 (1) - same as I mentioned in Hard diff.


yeah that is all~

m4m from Twitter RuRu's map

* this is just my opinion , you can ignore which point you don't like it.

General

　● Tag : EXIT TRANCE PRESENTS SPEED



Normal

Style

03:58:524 (1) - you forgot to add new combo


Hard

Style

00:45:190 (3) - try to stop slider at 00:46:024 + finish sound and start spinner here > 00:46:232
01:47:690 - add note and finish sound here.
01:47:899 - start spinner here
04:15:190 (3) - stop slider at 04:16:024 and start spinner here > 04:16:232


Lunatic

* I think that this should change this diff's name to Insane is better. this is not Touhou song

Sounds

01:59:357 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - use Normal sounds for follow Drum ?


Style

00:32:899 (4) - delete this note and move 1 to 00:33:003

>

00:41:961 (6) - delete and change 00:42:065 (7) to 3 stream is better for me
00:46:024 - add note here + finish sound and start spin at 00:46:128 or 00:46:232

00:59:357 (1) - stop spinner at 01:00:190 and add note here > 01:00:607
01:13:419 - add note
02:00:086 (5) - ^

02:02:690 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think stream is not fit for this part
02:49:357 - I think break is too long, How about starting from 03:02:690 ?

03:17:482 - add note
03:22:690 (1) - use Normal finish sound ?

fixed

Thx VocaloidTACU, Nymphing and G a Y i R u

Hi ~ Leorda ~

Mod time for my Queue ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions



That's all ~ very nice mapset ~

Please accept my star ( My heart ) >///<

Good luck ~

fixed about tags things

thx

Insane

00:58:732 (5,1<spinner>) - it feels bad to have such a simple rhythm here... I think there should be more notes/streams to fit the drums and crashes in the music.
01:12:690 (1,2) - the two notes on blue tick and white tick sound weird, and the following stream plays little awkward with these two notes. I think it's better to follow the drums here, just add notes on 01:12:690 & 01:12:899 & 01:13:107.
01:13:940 (10) - clap is unexpected...
01:27:065 (2) - why slider...I think there should be a note on 01:27:274

something I'd like to mention about hitsounds during kiai time...it's really a bad idea to add clap on 2nd and 4th white tick where there is a note and ignore others where there isn't any note...hitsounds should be considered when you create your rhythm. for song like this you can try other way to add claps, for example 01:16:336 (3) - add claps on the both notes of the slider, 01:21:024 (1) - clap for last two notes. I'm not going to point out the same problem in other parts and diffs.

01:47:690 - I'd prefer if you have a short breaktime here and begin the following part from 01:49:357.
02:17:690 - orz too loud...85% volume for kiai time
02:26:024 (1,2) - weird rhythm. neither follows the vocal nor the music.
03:11:024 - 80% volume for this part
03:17:065 (4) - try a 0.5x slider here? (same length from red tick to red tick)
03:24:357 to 03:31:024 - consider adding more notes here in oder to make a contrast to previous part. (here is a suggestion: add notes on 03:25:190 03:27:274 03:28:524 and from 03:29:357 to 03:31:024 add notes following vocal)
03:44:357 - reduce volume by 10~15%
03:55:398 (2) - ok ctrl+v part...same suggestion.
03:56:857 - better more notes & streams than spinner.


Hard

00:31:024 (3,4) - try this: 00:36:024 (4) - clap on blue tick is weird. I'd recommand using simple rhythm like 00:29:149 (3,4) if you want to keep a clap here.

01:21:649 & 01:22:065 - add clap?
01:28:940 (7) - remove clap?
01:34:357 (1,2,3,4,5) - same suggestion as previous.

also same hitsounds suggestion for other kiai part so not going to mention it any more.

02:08:315 - add clap?
02:17:690 - 85% volume.
03:11:024 - 80% volume and remove all whistles from this part...too loud.
03:31:024 - more notes more notes more notes plz don't just copy copy and copy orz
03:44:357 - 85~90% volume
04:06:336 - remove this clap or add one on 04:06:649


Normal

00:38:524 - remove this unexpected clap.
00:41:857 - ^
00:44:357 (1,2) - remove claps on them?
01:01:857 (1,2,3,4,5) - choose either 2nd4th tick or 3rd tick to add clap(2&4 is the right choice for this song), do not add on both, too weird....

not going to point out other claps on 3rd white tick...

02:19:044 - reduce volume.
03:11:024 - reduce volume and remove whistles.
03:44:357 - reduce volume.


well claps seem to be a big problem here...

that's it :3

fixed some

thx Sandpiggy

ok then

[General]

1. Akhir dari kiai time yg pertama berbeda dengan 2 diff lainnya. Tolong di betulin

[SB]

1. SB loadnya melewati batas maksimum di
   01:28:732 ~ 01:29:357 dan di
   01:42:690 ~ 01:43:419
   02:23:419 ~ 02:23:836 - Yang ini sangat singkat jadi mungkin g terlalu masalah
   Masih ada banyak yg lain sih tapi itu semua nggak nyampe 100ms jd nggak terlalu masalah. Dugaan wa karena kamu memakai banyak image dengan ukuran yang sangat besar. Jadi ketika kamu menggabungkan image tersebut, SB Loadnya naik dengan cepat

[Normal]

• Combo mod

  1. 1. 00:33:732 (1) - Hapus NC di sini dan ganti NC nya ke down beat di objek berikutnya (00:34:357 (4))
     2. 02:23:732 (1) - ^
     3. 04:04:149 (3,4) - ^
     4. 01:46:024 (6) - NC ini
• 03:16:024 (1,2,3) - Wa agak tersenyum juga pas denger ritme ini. Padahal di Hard cuma pakai 3 ritme sederhana di sini ritme nya ikutin vokal. Ah nggak masalah sih wa cuma pengen bilang doank :>
• 01:41:024 (3) - Repeat yg di 1/2 terdengar aneh karena di sini vokalnya sangat jelas terdengar. Saran wa pakai ritme yg sama dengan 00:37:690 (1,2,3,4) atau 02:42:690 (3,4,5,6)
• 02:27:690 (1) - ^ Lebih baik ganti dengan ritme yg sama dg 01:26:024 (1) atau 04:07:690 (1)

[Hard]

1. 00:45:190 (3) - Note ini terdengar nggak komplit karena masih terdengar ketukan di 00:45:919 jadi tambah repeatnya satu lagi. Nggak masalah di jadiin pre spinner note soalnya ini Hard
2. ^
3. 03:07:690 (1) - Ubah volume timing section ini ke 60%. Volume yang skrg membuat spinner end terlalu mencolok. Tambah timing section di objek berikutnya untuk menaikkan volumenya lagi

[Insane]

• Combo mod

  1. 1. 00:56:024 (6) - Ubah ke NC
     2. 01:26:649 (1) - NC yang nggak perlu, hapus aja
     3. 01:31:649 (1) - ^
     4. 02:28:524 (1) - ^ Ubah jg 02:29:357 (7) ke NC
     5. 02:42:690 (5) - NC
     6. 03:54:982 (1) - NC yg ga perlu, hapus aja
• 01:47:794 (1) - Ubah biar spinner end ini ke soft hitsample, ini bukan cuma biar sama dengan 2 diff lainnya, tapi juga karena bagian setelah ini nggak cocok dengan suara Normal-finish yang terlalu kuat
• 03:07:690 (1) - Sama dengan Hard Map yang bagus, kalau mau re-check wa PM wa lagi2 minggu kemudian, selama itu betulin SBna dulu.
  Wa nggak jago maximizing SB =3=

fixed, makasih Sallad~

ok

[General]
I heard from Odaril that map's size should below 12MB without video but with sb..

[Normal]
01:44:357 (4,5,6,7) - change to sliders? here is kinda hard to play imo
02:14:357 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^
02:21:024 (1) - use some shape like "S" here? it touched HP bar
02:29:357 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - kinda hard here , too
03:16:024 - 03:36:649 - I suggest use 0.75 slider speed here , fit song much better imo

[Hard]
fine

[Insane]
AR+1? better imo
01:23:003 - add note here?
03:31:440 - I suggest move this newcombo to 03:31:024 - , easier to read the speed up
03:41:336 (1,2) - this jump is too huge , it is really too suddenly after a spinner , I strongly suggest to reduce spacing here
03:51:336 - add note?

nice
I'd like you reduce spacing on long streams.. it is really hard to play imo o.o

recheck

seems it is fine that the .osz file's size is just a bit more than 12MB

[Insane]
03:41:336 (1,2) - I still think this jump is too suddenly.. if you really want to jump I suggest make this jump smaller and make 03:42:690 (1,2,3) - larger..

others are fine o.o

edit : ok , fine now , bubbled

Where's the Lunatic Diff? :O

Philippines wrote:

Where's the Lunatic Diff? :O

Lunatic diff has been changed into Insane diff

[Hard]

03:29:357 (1,2,3) - These might be confusing to read, what about a slider instead? Much better imo.
03:35:190 (4) - New combo.
03:36:023 (1) - Remove new combo.

[Insane]

Approach Rate -1, it's too high right now to me.

03:26:858 (3,4,5) - Inconsistent spacing.
03:31:440 (2) ~ 03:35:608 (4) - Normal hitsounds would be better imo.

Let me know when you're ready.

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Hard]

03:29:357 (1,2,3) - These might be confusing to read, what about a slider instead? Much better imo.
03:35:190 (4) - New combo.
03:36:023 (1) - Remove new combo.

[Insane]

Approach Rate -1, it's too high right now to me.

03:26:858 (3,4,5) - Inconsistent spacing.
03:31:440 (2) ~ 03:35:608 (4) - Normal hitsounds would be better imo.

Let me know when you're ready.

all fixed

Looks good now.

Ranked~

osuplayer111 wrote:

Looks good now.

Ranked~

yaaaaaaay!!!!!!!!!

Congrats!

phonic wrote:

Congrats!

thx~

Gratz, great map/song.

Darksonic wrote:

Gratz, great map/song.

thx :3

Yey, Nice work.

Darksonic wrote:

Gratz, great map/song.

+1

nice *-*

omedeto!!!

Congratz~~! >3<

congrats pr0leorda

thx guys~

EXIT TRANCE's MAKI is the same MAKI as Seventh Heaven MAXION's MAKI.

Maav wrote:

EXIT TRANCE's MAKI is the same MAKI as Seventh Heaven MAXION's MAKI.

really?

plz don't bump, btw