Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there~~ mod from queue~~
哇好多GD XD

General:

1. 没用的osb文件请删掉吧等菲姐的SB呢
2. Rainbow难度的preview time和其他不一致，unrankable，请修正fixed
3. 添加到Tags: Vocaloid, Vocaloid2 vocaloid2就不用了吧``很少见有加2的
4. 考虑使用自定义颜色吧，系统默认颜色感觉不是很适合。我不会配色``所以是准备找菲姐一起配的

sun rainbow暂时上不了``所以我代改mod
Rainbow:

1. 00:31:903 - 考虑在这里加个note？实际位置是这里00:31:956所以不放了
2. 02:11:850 - 同上fixed
3. 03:53:535 (1) - 感觉可以去掉这个finish改为whistle
4. 03:55:429 - 考虑把spinner结束到这里？然后03:56:061 - kiai开始这里加个note。这样用spinner收尾开始kiai总觉得少了点什么的感觉fixed
5. 04:05:535 (1,2) - NC建议从(2)这里开始fixed
6. 04:16:903 (1) - 去掉clap
7. 04:16:903 (1) - 删掉没用的绿线04:36:804这里才是吧?

Insane:

1. 00:36:482 - break从这里开始就好……滞后反而感觉有点怪……fixed
2. 00:58:903 (1) - 删掉？我跟的节奏``不是歌词``如果这里突然改为跟歌词会影响读图的
3. 01:16:587 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这里发生什么了……读图障碍……像atk说的``这图的节奏一打开始就知道了``所以没什么难读的._.
4. 03:04:903 (7) - 删掉？如果是节奏原因看00:58:903 (1) - 如果是因为藏的原因我加个NC好了
5. 03:55:324 (1) - 同上00:58:903 (1) -

差不多就这些了，加油的说～

Scorpiour wrote:

Gu's Hardl:

1. Hard难度这么大量的使用二连没问题么……大丈夫
2. 00:36:482 - break调到这里开始？K
3. 01:49:745 (1) - 去掉finish?K
4. 02:10:271 (3) - 去掉clap?N
5. 减少一次折返？N

No_Gu wrote:

Scorpiour wrote:

Gu's Hardl:

1. Hard难度这么大量的使用二连没问题么……大丈夫
2. 00:36:482 - break调到这里开始？K
3. 01:49:745 (1) - 去掉finish?K
4. 02:10:271 (3) - 去掉clap?N
5. 减少一次折返？N

=_=我都这么懒了你还叫我fix

1. 00:24:324 (2,3) - 没叠好
2. 00:27:008 (7) - 尾巴上多了个描点导致形状别的有点怪
3. 00:34:903 (2) - 挪到后面红线？
4. 00:53:850 - 加个note？其实我觉得前面的(4)拉过来做个slider感觉更好点
5. 00:54:640 (6) - 挪到前面白线？
6. 01:05:377 (7) - 同上
7. 01:12:482 (6,7,8) - 这里节奏好奇怪。建议01:12:956 - 做一个note，然后01:13:114 - 这里开始做一个白线的折返slider就好，如图
   [attachment=0:76f85]1.jpg[/attachment:76f85]
8. 01:54:798 (1) - 从前面白线开始？这里前面歌手有一小节停顿所以往后延了一拍
9. 01:58:271 - 加个note？Fix
10. 03:45:956 (5,6) - 这里应该是白线的节奏吧……这里偶尔转换一下气氛,,用了三分拍，一直PAPAPA下去太无聊了

Mura_77 wrote:

Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there~~ mod from queue~~
哇好多GD XD

XD我是个大SB

Kira:

1. 00:24:324 (2,3) - 没叠好
2. 00:27:008 (7) - 尾巴上多了个描点导致形状别的有点怪
3. 00:34:903 (2) - 挪到后面红线？
4. 00:53:850 - 加个note？其实我觉得前面的(4)拉过来做个slider感觉更好点
5. 00:54:640 (6) - 挪到前面白线？
6. 01:05:377 (7) - 同上
7. 01:12:482 (6,7,8) - 这里节奏好奇怪。建议01:12:956 - 做一个note，然后01:13:114 - 这里开始做一个白线的折返slider就好，如图
   [attachment=0:84153]1.jpg[/attachment:84153]
8. 01:54:798 (1) - 从前面白线开始？这里前面歌手有一小节停顿所以往后延了一拍
9. 01:58:271 - 加个note？Fix
10. 03:45:956 (5,6) - 这里应该是白线的节奏吧……这里偶尔转换一下气氛,,用了三分拍，一直PAPAPA下去太无聊了

1. HR-1比較好吧 hard 7 有點高...
2. 00:21:219 (1) - 跟vocal吧...這樣好怪 ~這slider到00:21:324結束...
3. 01:26:587 - 加個圈
4. 01:54:798 ~ 01:55:956 - 有幾個圈缺了clap~ 全部加上吧
5. 02:05:850 (1) - 加Finish或Clap
6. 03:22:587 - 從這邊就開始連打? 做個七連? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/240211
7. 03:49:745 (7) - NC吧... combo到14不好看阿....
8. 04:05:219 - 加個圈, 然後clap?

1. HR-1 & OD+1
2. 01:22:903 (4) - DS太小了 可能會混淆._. 調大些換個地方?
3. 01:36:798 (7) - Finish
4. 01:41:429 - 加個圈
5. 02:16:798 - ^
6. 04:39:956 (5) - 跟流線吧~ 換一下slider的方向 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/240232

proseyu wrote:

Kira
03:45:956 (5,6,7) - 唔……打好幾次都覺得跟音樂不合。這個節奏是很有趣的，可是總覺得不是放在這。
03:53:692 (1) - 這裡接在圈圈後，就normal來說，可能會有些玩家跟不上速度。=~=

Gu's Hard
03:23:008 (3,4,5) - 好像跟拉長音不太配？
03:48:482 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - 我只是想說我喜歡這段。

Insane
是綠色圍牆！
音效通常建議設早一點，不然像我這樣手笨的人如果手一抖早按了，那音效就會跟你精心安排的不一樣了。:(
大概像這樣。提前1/3可以说是不可能的``只能提前1/6``

12BARRY21 wrote:

Request In-Game!!

[General]

Looks fine~

[Gu's Hard]

1. HR-1比較好吧 hard 7 有點高...
2. 00:21:219 (1) - 跟vocal吧...這樣好怪 ~這slider到00:21:324結束...
3. 01:26:587 - 加個圈
4. 01:54:798 ~ 01:55:956 - 有幾個圈缺了clap~ 全部加上吧
5. 02:05:850 (1) - 加Finish或Clap
6. 03:22:587 - 從這邊就開始連打? 做個七連? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/240211
7. 03:49:745 (7) - NC吧... combo到14不好看阿....
8. 04:05:219 - 加個圈, 然後clap?

[Insane]

1. HR-1 & OD+1OD+1
2. 01:22:903 (4) - DS太小了 可能會混淆._. 調大些換個地方?fixed
3. 01:36:798 (7) - Finishfixed
4. 01:41:429 - 加個圈哭了``再加爆分了
5. 02:16:798 - ^^
6. 04:39:956 (5) - 跟流線吧~ 換一下slider的方向 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/240232

fixed

就這麼些了._. 神mapper2枚無誤

Star~

快去找MAT吧:3

ziin wrote:

Very nice SB. Let me know when everything is done/updated and I'll recheck and compress everything. I'm going to do the bare minimum here, so you'll have to resize stuff, fix stuff.

Common problem with the images is that there is no black halo around the images. The video has a number of them with a black shadow. To do this, you can just duplicate the image, then Gaussian blur it with a radius of 10-30 until it looks good, and color the image black (don't change the alpha channel).

BG.jpg - first off, the only image I can find of this is 1000x750. It looks like you resized this to be 1024x768? There's no reason to do this, as osu is going to resize it anyway for most people. The new version is also 100 kB larger than the original, and adds in compression errors. Since the ratio is 4:3, 1000x750 is perfectly fine to use as a background.

sniff.png - 3 problems. 1) the top of her head is chopped off. 2) the first time you see this it should be majorly blurred. I've included large versions of both. At first, when it's supposed to be blurred, you can still "see" through her in the video. One option is to use 2 blurred images, the bottom one using additive blending and the top one fading in slowly but not as blurred as the first. If this doesn't make sense I'll try my hand at it.

ball.png - the ball in the video moves in a perfect circle. There's 2 ways to do this: use MX and MY with tweening to make it seem like it's moving in a circle or add transparency to the top of the image and change the origin from centre to topcentre. This will make the ball rotate properly in a circle, though you lose your original rotation. I'm going off the video here, not your SB.

00:56:692 - 56692 - the fade out for phone should be here, not 1/1 later.

You should be able to blur the bunny as well. Just make them the same size, same rotation etc... then fade in the blurred image on top of it.

02:42:798 - 162798 - rabbit.png has this white border around it.

I may have to recheck because I think I forgot something.

The images I re-captured were either from the original 1000x750 image or the 1024x768 video on nico nico (which I downloaded).
http://up.ppy.sh/files/howareyoustuff.zip

The rest of the images looked fine, or close enough. Note that a few images should have transparency in the hair as well.

[kira]
you need 1/3 snap.

Melophobia wrote:

Hello, As requested in game

Easy
00:21:324 (2,3) - spacingfixed
01:19:429~ 01:51:640 use 1,0x herefixed

Insane
01:02:061 (1,2,3) - kinda confusing because of high spacingfixed
02:07:324 (2) - finish to the endfixed
02:42:798 (5) - newcombo herefixed
03:13:113 (5) - finish to the beginningfixed

Nice, it deserves a star. good luck

1. 尽管BG没啥用 但还是换成推荐的1024x768

2. Odaril wrote:

   Try to keep osz files under 10mb, or 24mb if you include a video/storyboard (please remove the audio track from video files to save space).

   现在是11.X 好像还能接受
3. kiaitime不太一样
4. 加Vocaloid2去tag？
5. Offest 8692吧 1XXX那里根本没音
6. offest 1104

Odaril wrote:

However, try to avoid longer breaks that are in excess of 15 seconds.

LKs wrote:

Rainbow

01:47:219 (1) - 这里NC OK
02:11:850 (5) - clap OKJ
虽说我不想引用也不喜欢做完了再做break 但23秒的break确实有点略长 放了NOTE

Odaril wrote:

However, try to avoid longer breaks that are in excess of 15 seconds.

04:40:261 (3) - 这不太准 OK

LKs wrote:

From 【All requests posted here will be modded】 queue

General

1. 尽管BG没啥用 但还是换成推荐的1024x768
   人家的SBmod要求的``
   
   SPOILER

   ziin wrote:

   BG.jpg - first off, the only image I can find of this is 1000x750. It looks like you resized this to be 1024x768? There's no reason to do this, as osu is going to resize it anyway for most people. The new version is also 100 kB larger than the original, and adds in compression errors. Since the ratio is 4:3, 1000x750 is perfectly fine to use as a background.

2. Odaril wrote:

   Try to keep osz files under 10mb, or 24mb if you include a video/storyboard (please remove the audio track from video files to save space).

   现在是11.X 好像还能接受
3. kiaitime不太一样是不是kira难度的?
4. 加Vocaloid2去tag？fixed
5. Offest 8692吧 1XXX那里根本没音 fixed 8682
6. offest 1104

哇nogu神mapper

Insane

01:03:008 (4) - 其实slider也别间距加大了 这里都小了fixed

其实我懒了 先这样 好困

spboxer3 wrote:

[general]

• 
  Settings
  

1. none...的樣子...吧~

[Rainbow]

• 我估摸着他上课没空改了``all fixed
  Settings
  

1. 多餘的綠線:
   02:32:681 -

Overlaps
(Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap eachothou could space them farther apart.)

1. 03:10:576 (8,1) -
2. 03:57:313 (3,4) -
3. 03:58:576 (4,5) -

mapping

1. 01:04:260 (2) - 這個是有直還是沒有直啦 作明顯點吧~
2. 01:39:629 (1) - 同樣的/...\
3. 01:42:787 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 間距把握好 看起來是跑掉了些
4. 02:12:471 (1) - 這slider蠻醜的 可以的話最好改一下 有些MAT會挑的
5. 03:10:576 (8) - 8!!!!!!!! 你讓Easy擺到8combo去了!!! 快改掉阿D:
6. 04:33:945 (1,1) - 距離中心有些遠了...擺近一點吧 因為對Easy來說 太難了...

[Insane]

• 
  Settings
  [list:2ccca]草~你這是傷害我眼睛嗎?看這個很辛苦的!! 知道嗎?
  

1. 多餘的綠線
   00:23:155 -
   00:23:786 -
   00:28:839 -
   00:57:892 -
   01:08:322 -
   01:13:365 -
   02:07:681 -
   04:06:628 - all fixed
   
   我發誓下次看到你再放這樣的綠牆我會直接忽略這部份 根本蛋疼阿!!! 我光看這個看了10分鐘

人家做了6个小时人家容易么...

mapping

1. none

紅色是unrankable的 一定要改 藍色的是需要討論的問題 黑色就只是建議

val0108 wrote:

[Rainbow]
01:54:787 (1) - fast spin.change note or slider
03:00:471 (1) - ^
03:54:155 (1) - ^
03:50:366 (2,3,4) - it's better
04:44:050 (1) - spin end 04:45:524 -

good SB.*crying*

val0108 wrote:

[hard]
01:26:576 - add note 8 stack K
03:01:418 (9) - slider end 03:01:629 - K
04:44:997 (6) - slider end 04:45:524 - and this is slow slider better K

1. fine

1. 01:25:734 (1) - remove NC and 01:26:997 (3) - remove NC. ( long NC in Easy ) or If you do not like this. 01:29:524 (6) - add NC
2. 01:52:260 (5) - add NC ( long NC )
3. 02:01:103 (1) - remove NC and 02:02:366 (2) - add NC
4. 02:42:155 (5) - Suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/k9EA 02:42:787 - Here it is better put a note and NC
5. 02:57:313 (4) - spacing too far (1.17x) use DS1.0x is better for a beginner
6. 03:05:524 (1) - remove NC and 03:07:418 (2) - add NC
7. 03:11:208 (1) - remove NC and 03:13:103 (2) - add NC is better.
8. 03:48:471 (1,2,3,4) - Suggestion of the form: http://puu.sh/k9Hf
9. 03:56:050 (x) - Why do you not put note here? I think that it is a place to excite with this song most here. I want you to put something by all means here !
10. 04:01:103 (5) - add NC ( very long NC in Easy ) and add finish
11. 04:11:208 (1) - add finish to start of the slider

1. AR -1 ( I think that 6 is too high in Normal )
2. 00:13:103 (1) - add finish to end of the slider
3. 00:34:892 (2) - spacing too far (1.17x) I think such a jump not to put it if this is normal diff
4. 00:46:576 (1) - remove NC ( same as others. ex:04:26:366 (6) )
5. 00:44:997 (7) - this kick slider is difficult in normal
6. 00:46:576 (1) - spacing too close (0.36x) normal player is confused at this distance snap
7. 01:36:471 (1) - same 00:44:997(7)
8. 02:15:945 (1) - add finish
9. 02:31:418 (4,1,2,3,4) - Suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/k9WK ( or Is this rhythm intentional? )
10. 02:59:208 (2) - use straight slider. now http://puu.sh/k9ZP
11. 03:03:313 (1) - it becomes difficult to look in hitburst after spinner, it is better to move.
12. 03:07:418 (1) - remove NC and 03:08:050 (2) - add NC
13. 03:46:366 (6) - dose not match rhythm ><; move to 03:46:576 and 03:46:892 (7) - remove note
14. 03:53:734 (1) - It is too fast that note comes after a spinner. it is difficult in normal.
15. 04:37:103 (4) - add NC ( rhythm change point )
    
    
    There is little use of hitsound. it is better to use more and I think that NC is too long in normal diff

1. 01:39:524 (4) - add NC and 01:39:629 (1) - remove NC
2. 01:48:471 (3) - Suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/kaTQ ( I think that 1/3 matches here than 1/4 )
3. 02:54:787 (2) - ^ http://puu.sh/kaVk
4. 03:45:945 (7) - add NC and 03:47:208 (1) - remove NC and 03:48:471 (3) - add NC
5. 03:50:997 (5) - add NC
6. 04:05:839 (1) - remove NC and 04:06:155 (2) - add NC ( Placement of the NC is different only this KIAI TIME. Is this intentional?
   also lower than this time)

1. OD +1 or +2 ( Please set higher than hard diff )
2. 01:11:524 (9) - spacing too close. ( I prefer the form of the Ctrl + R )
3. 01:12:787 (1) - remove NC and 01:14:260 (2) - add NC

• SPOILER

  Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\sniff2.png",320,240
  M,0,68061,,443,250
  F,0,68061,74166,0,1　
  F,0,74166,76903,1,0.9993448 ⇒F,0,74166,76903,1
  
  very nazi only... orz. There is not the problem in particular even if you do not repair it
  
  The problem was not found in the other

val0108 wrote:

o/ lazy mod

[SB]
lrc B-8 "涙の跡を隠す為"
lrc D-5 "言葉を浪費して生きてゆく"

[insane]
00:26:260 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - left up 'cause 00:26:997 (6,1) - near notesFixed
01:16:576 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - timing cunfu *_*what cunfu mean?
02:16:787 - add note?Fixed
04:07:734 (3,1) - I think it's better.add Slider to a voice. Fixed
04:10:261 (9,1) - ^Fixed

good SB.*crying*

kosiga wrote:

Hi~ Lan wings

Thank you for the request ~

here my mod ~ ( maybe not yet finished a fix for the above mod ? I'm sorry If you have to point out that the same mod above ;x; )

[Insane]

1. OD +1 or +2 ( Please set higher than hard diff )Fixed OD6.OD7 is 22,432,140 =w=
2. 01:11:524 (9) - spacing too close. ( I prefer the form of the Ctrl + R )Fixed
3. 01:12:787 (1) - remove NC and 01:14:260 (2) - add NC

Fixed

very nazi only... orz. There is not the problem in particular even if you do not repair it

The problem was not found in the other[/list]

Sorry for bad mod. I am a little weak 1/3rhythm

If you do not help, please do not throw the kudosu

very good map & beautiful SB Star☆~

Good Luck ~

NatsumeRin wrote:

[General]
BPM 95好吗。。。这哪听起来像190。。。。SV*2就好。如果你觉得tick有必要就tick 2Fixed
offset:+8Fixed
BG是1000*750，虽然没什么关系但是最好弄个1024*768放大图片会增加体积的说._.本来已经11M的了

ziin wrote:

BG.jpg - first off, the only image I can find of this is 1000x750. It looks like you resized this to be 1024x768? There's no reason to do this, as osu is going to resize it anyway for most people. The new version is also 100 kB larger than the original, and adds in compression errors. Since the ratio is 4:3, 1000x750 is perfectly fine to use as a background.

下次的话希望你可以自己做至少两个难度，现在这样并没什么但印象要差些。噢噢``我下次会注意的了
[Insane]
HP8 OD6？至少平衡一下？HP7 OD7
整体不错我就不多废话了

主要Normal的改一改然后叫我吧。

NatsumeRin wrote:

[Gu's Hard]
挺好不过前面0.5x感觉太缩了，进kiai的那个或许1.5就足够，2x的话形状被迫拉的很开或许反而体现不出

NatsumeRin wrote:

[Rainbow]他说周一到周四没空改......
01:26:997 (5) - new comboFixed
01:47:208 (1,2) - 并不是问题的地方。这里你开始给了一个折返slider，后面如果2位置给一个note，3位置给一个近似但位置低些的折返slider感觉会不会更好？只是个人意见。是不是这样??
主要Normal的改一改然后叫我吧。