1. 00:55:468處的KIAI line我建議移到00:55:929
2. kpy的難度可以改成叫Hard, 無論總分數或是玩起來的感覺都是Sharon難些

1. 00:15:314 (1) - 起頭S finish如何
2. 00:22:237 (5) - 70% vol綠線移來這, 音效明顯些
3. 00:29:852 (1) - 改成29:621起頭的repeat slider感覺更合音樂
4. 00:33:775 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這邊由於音樂本身(1,3,5)有鈸, (2,4)沒有, 導致聽起來比較小聲, 加音到90%好些
5. 00:55:929 (x) - 把結束的KIAI綠線也移來這, 或者對齊55:006的note
6. 01:20:852 (2) - 維持白線S finish? 音樂本身是有的, 可以漸漸降音
7. 01:37:929 (6) - +finish as 00:22:237
8. 02:04:237 (1) - +finish
9. 02:25:468 (4) - 我覺得結尾應該有個強點的音效(升音量的clap), 後面的(1)可以上finish
10. 02:55:698 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - 這段類似其他地方補上S finish?

1. 前奏的部份我覺得靜音sliderslide會好些
2. 00:33:314 (6) - 覺得remove finish好些
3. 00:39:314 (1) - 加new combo如何
4. 00:54:083 (1,2) - 覺得別理vocal全擺1/3比較好聽
5. 00:57:775 (1,2,3) - 和(4)的間距有點沒擺好, 全體右移1格(grid 3)
6. 01:10:698 (x) - (超nazi) Breakline手動拉來這
7. 01:49:006 (6) - 同00:33:314拔掉finish
8. 01:55:006 (5) - 同00:39:314加上NC
9. 02:09:775 (1,2) - 同樣理由建議用1/3
10. 02:43:006 (5) - 同樣理由NC

1. 像是22:698~29:160這種輕的段落要不要降點音量?
2. 00:22:006 (66,67,68) - del (67)並且一樣做成k K
3. 01:19:814 (227,228) - del (227)並且把(228)改成大圓比較有三連重音的感覺 (228,233,238)
4. 02:51:891和02:52:352的KIAI line沒對齊, 我不確定在太鼓diff是不是有rules問題

1. 前奏的部份我覺得靜音sliderslide會好些
2. Slider Tick Rate 2確實會幫助讀那些變速slider, 不過只是建議, 我覺得並不影響音效
3. 00:28:237 (1) - 改成whistle?
4. 00:53:852 (2,3,4) - 打起來有微妙的違合感..想辦法讓1/3 slider的起頭都在白線並且上finish?
5. 01:56:160 (x) - map here, 一致性並且感覺較好
6. 02:10:698 (3) - +finish
7. 02:31:929 (2) - 改成whistle?
8. 03:04:814 (1) - 我確實沒想到這裡藍線會有東西, spacing改成像其他標準的1/2間格一樣?
9. 03:11:391 (5,1) - 微妙違合感..說不上來..

1. Well, I can see a .osb in the file? but seems it's useless.
2. Isn't pending?
3. No Source?
4. seems lead-in 3000 has a bit too long. try 2500 or 2000? just saying
5. Ok,let's move on to the diffs

1. 00:14:852 (1) - You miss a Finish at long white line? add finish as well, sounds better.
2. 00:55:006 (3) - it has a bit hard for newbie imo , make the slider obviously? for example:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:19:468 (2) - clap instead of finish? you can try to add clap here, finish sounds weird for me.
4. 03:14:391 (x) - also add a note (+finish) here? seems you miss a note here , add this can be more powerful imo.
5. That's it, good easy diff, like the slider<3

1. 用番中文, 圓圓可以再大多格?
2. 其實前part唔落clap? 雖然用background music clap呢個idea唔錯
3. 00:22:698 (1) - 暫時係前邊都冇一條Slider用4次來回 , 事實上有d fake, 因為我新手果時都死係到. 可以用3來回再加個note?打擊感都好d
   雖然都係個人化,不過都比個例子你
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:28:698 (4) - 呢到加個whislte 反而奇怪過clap , 所以都加clap好D
5. 00:52:006 (1) - 係尾,即係長白線到加Finish,呢個結尾可以再有力量D
6. 00:53:160 (3) - Slider最頭都要加,理由同上
7. 01:20:852 (2) - 你個大圓高手唔好可以miss咁多個finsih(?)(頭+尾) 我覺得這歌最正就係多finish (液)
8. 其實少左好多個,如果你有心情就落多D佢啦 (?)
9. 02:07:698 (1) - 其他唔落都好唔可以唔落呢個(?) 最like this
10. 02:08:852 (3) - ^
11. 03:08:852 (4) - repeat太長了, 搵個方法改改佢? 雖然你可以選擇keep (最好改啦,因為影響左流暢性)
12. 03:10:468 (1) - 呢part開始識做架啦(?)
13. 係咁多.冇Easy咁好, 不過都係冇咩問題

1. 00:14:391 (5,6,7) - 其實照道理冇問題, 不過想做得更好可以將呢3個note分開, 同一個位其實我覺得冇咁流暢.例如可以跟番spacing咁樣做?
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:10:698 (x) - 聽上去miss左粒note, 加個finish係到?
3. 01:30:083 (5,6,7) - 嗯 , 理由同上
4. 02:06:083 (7) - Stream冇問題,加個New combo係到?好睇D.
5. 03:08:852 (7) - ^
6. 做多D stream map <33

1. 這個Diff多了幾個tags, 問題存在(?)
2. 00:29:852 (7) - 呢邊有D難睇 , 不過玩上去冇問題,ups to u.
3. 00:41:160 (1) - 加個finsih更powerful<3
4. 01:10:583 (1,2,3) - 藍線起連打玩上去果時有D辛苦, 唔介意可以做Slider 1/4 ? 可以偉高可玩性
5. 01:59:160 (9) - 後邊D NC開始亂 , 跟我一步一步咁做, 呢個先開nc
6. 02:00:083 (1) - remove nc
7. 02:00:545 (5) - 最後係到NC就最好了
8. 02:10:237 (2) - 加少左個Finish?
9. 02:10:698 (3) - 呢到都最好加埋^
10. 03:11:391 (5) - 呢個Slider, 藍線完節奏我覺得真係好奇怪, 如果你白線完會相當好, 唔會影響流暢性. 提提你, 你改左白線完再加finish會更有力
11. 好圖, nice job.

• The Tags are different in each diff

• I think you should use the same distance snap throughout the whole map.Probably 1.50x? (You use 1.00x and 1.50x so this might confuse beginners)
  03:00:314 - Unnecessary green line
  00:00:545 (1,1,1,1,2) - Use 1.50x spacing?
  00:21:314 (4) - Too close to previous note
  01:57:775 (1,2,3) - Use 1.50x?
  02:10:698 (3) - ^
  03:00:545 (2) - Too close to previous note
  03:01:468 (1) - ^
  03:04:698 (3) - ^
  03:10:698 (1,2,1,2,3,1) - Inconsistent spacing

• 00:44:391 - Add note?
  00:52:006 (1) - Starting this on the white tick sounds better imo
  01:30:545 - Add note?
  01:52:237 (3) - Maybe curve this slider?
  
  Example

  
  03:08:852 (4) - End this slider on 03:09:775 - and add notes after this? THis slider is too long
  03:12:545 (1,2,3) - Maybe something like this?
  
  

• No problem

• 00:14:852 (8) - NC to emphasize the velocity change? (You do it at 00:22:237 (1) - )2.0x is so fasssst
  00:47:852 (7) - NC?
  00:55:237 (5) - ^
  01:50:391 (5) - Normal slider speed fits better imo
  01:52:237 (5) - ^
  02:03:775 (7) - NC?

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  V,0,3231,3346,1,1,1,0.1

...(中间略)

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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG2.jpg"
//Break Periods
2,55929,69833
2,131821,145179
2,164852,171487
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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  V,0,0,116,1,0.1,1,1
  V,0,3231,3346,1,1,1,0.1

...(中间略)

Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB\K-8B.png",237,73
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  V,0,0,116,1,0.1,1,1
  V,0,3231,3346,1,1,1,0.1

//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)

1. 第三段kiai的起始点不统一？
   
   Easy: 02:52:237
   Normal: 02:44:852
   kpy: 02:52:237
   Sharon's: 02:59:621
   Taiko: 02:44:852

wmfchris wrote:

的確, kpy's Hard太難了
我叫他改一改好了

kanpakyin wrote:

尼馬無節操阿....我原本就是做I的...........放學再看看吧

wcx19911123 wrote:

[Kanpakyin's Hard]
02:56:621 - 02:58:698 - 这点跳略鬼畜。。