1. Easy (2.35 stars, 96 notes)
2. Hard (4.59 stars, 183 notes)
3. Insane (4.89 stars, 308 notes)
4. Scorpiour's Normal (3.18 stars, 114 notes)

1. 关掉Countdown
2. Audio Lead-in: 1.5s
3. Roromiya Karuta从Tags里去掉，和Source重复了
4. Tags最短至少3个字母，把op改成opening
5. 加一个无声的sliderslide去掉滚动音吧，不好听
6. 00:56:729 - - kiai从这里开始？

1. 00:18:282 (4) - clap感觉错位了，去掉吧……
2. 00:35:175 (2) - 同上。要是Clap放在第2白线的话，可以用clap做个slidertick的音效然后用soft-custom 2来实现
3. 00:36:923 (4) - 同上。我觉得最好统一一下，是2clap还是2/4clap，这样换来换去很别扭。
4. 00:49:739 (5,6,1) - 这种节奏和遮挡都很不适合Easy难度，没必要强行跟vocal，改掉吧
5. 00:50:904 (1,2,3,4) - 1/2连打太长了，改1/1的吧
6. 00:54:399 (4,5) - 同样是不合适的节奏。其实我觉得spinner从这里开始比较好
7. 01:06:923 (2) - 删掉
8. 01:08:088 (4) - 向后挪动到白线
9. 01:09:253 (5) - ^
10. 01:09:836 (6,7) - (6)向后移动到白线然后删掉(7)
11. 01:28:040 (3,4) - 改成slider在前把。

1. 00:28:476 (4) - 考虑删掉？
2. 00:31:098 (5) - 下一组NC从这里开始？
3. 00:33:428 (3) - NC
4. 00:55:418 (1) - (nazi)最好把首尾重叠起来
5. 01:21:632 (7) - clap吓我一跳。。。后面这段要用clap建议可以用2/4…………

1. 00:01:826 (3,4) - 不是很推荐这种造型，很容易被人吐槽什么的
2. 00:07:797 (1) - 折返完全被分数挡住了，unrankable
3. 00:08:525 (2) - 应该在后面红线上
4. 00:18:428 (1,2,3) - 这段保留2/4clap就好。。。前后都没有这么做的就这里特殊有点别扭
5. 00:37:214 (1,2,3,4) - 同样建议2/4clap
6. 00:38:088 (4) - NC?
7. 00:46:535 (5,6,7,8,9) - 2/4clap
8. 00:57:166 (3) - 删掉？
9. 01:06:049 (2) - 这组NC从这里开始
10. 01:15:661 (3) - clap
11. 01:16:243 (6) - ^
12. 01:17:991 (8) - ^
13. 01:18:573 (2) - ^
14. 01:23:088 (4) - 向后放到红线
15. 01:28:331 (5) - 加个折返或者延长到蓝线

Scorpiour wrote:

然后Mod for request~~~

SPOILER

General:

1. 关掉Countdown
2. Audio Lead-in: 1.5s
3. Roromiya Karuta从Tags里去掉，和Source重复了
4. Tags最短至少3个字母，把op改成opening
5. 加一个无声的sliderslide去掉滚动音吧，不好听
6. 00:56:729 - - kiai从这里开始？

Candy:

1. 00:18:282 (4) - clap感觉错位了，去掉吧……
2. 00:35:175 (2) - 同上。要是Clap放在第2白线的话，可以用clap做个slidertick的音效然后用soft-custom 2来实现
3. 00:36:923 (4) - 同上。我觉得最好统一一下，是2clap还是2/4clap，这样换来换去很别扭。
4. 00:49:739 (5,6,1) - 这种节奏和遮挡都很不适合Easy难度，没必要强行跟vocal，改掉吧
5. 00:50:904 (1,2,3,4) - 1/2连打太长了，改1/1的吧
6. 00:54:399 (4,5) - 同样是不合适的节奏。其实我觉得spinner从这里开始比较好
7. 01:06:923 (2) - 删掉
8. 01:08:088 (4) - 向后挪动到白线
9. 01:09:253 (5) - ^
10. 01:09:836 (6,7) - (6)向后移动到白线然后删掉(7)
11. 01:28:040 (3,4) - 改成slider在前把。

Cream:

1. 00:28:476 (4) - 考虑删掉？
2. 00:31:098 (5) - 下一组NC从这里开始？
3. 00:33:428 (3) - NC
4. 00:55:418 (1) - (nazi)最好把首尾重叠起来
5. 01:21:632 (7) - clap吓我一跳。。。后面这段要用clap建议可以用2/4…………

Chocolate:

1. 00:01:826 (3,4) - 不是很推荐这种造型，很容易被人吐槽什么的
2. 00:07:797 (1) - 折返完全被分数挡住了，unrankable
3. 00:08:525 (2) - 应该在后面红线上
4. 00:18:428 (1,2,3) - 这段保留2/4clap就好。。。前后都没有这么做的就这里特殊有点别扭
5. 00:37:214 (1,2,3,4) - 同样建议2/4clap
6. 00:38:088 (4) - NC?
7. 00:46:535 (5,6,7,8,9) - 2/4clap
8. 00:57:166 (3) - 删掉？
9. 01:06:049 (2) - 这组NC从这里开始
10. 01:15:661 (3) - clap
11. 01:16:243 (6) - ^
12. 01:17:991 (8) - ^
13. 01:18:573 (2) - ^
14. 01:23:088 (4) - 向后放到红线
15. 01:28:331 (5) - 加个折返或者延长到蓝线

OK就这些了～～～GL

Candy diff

You should change distance 0.10x (where is sound..?)

00:50:175 (6,1) - : so hard distance.. change

Cream diff

You should change distance 0.10x

00:09:107 (3,4) - : stuck

00:55:418 (1) - : so hard

Chocolate diff

00:36:340 (3,4) - : stuck

W h i t e wrote:

Hello~~

SPOILER

Candy diff

You should change distance 0.10x (where is sound..?)

00:50:175 (6,1) - : so hard distance.. change

Cream diff

You should change distance 0.10x

00:09:107 (3,4) - : stuck

00:55:418 (1) - : so hard

Chocolate diff

00:36:340 (3,4) - : stuck

It is good map! good luck...

(But Where is normal sound..?)

Thank u, Candy diff fixed,,i'll fix the normal hitsound soon

Yumeko Yuki wrote:

一个建议:
当前的normal的clap声音略大 打击起来可能比较吵....
一个比较好的解决方法就是:
整体还是用soft的音色...将normal-hitnormal来当做soft-hitclap来用
这样一来降低了嘈杂 也用到了whistle
这里给你附了一个改好了的可以参考一下
说明一下附件里的soft-normal和原来的是一样的 就是声音比较小
这样能更好的体现出whistle的作用

其他都没大问题 加油XD

_Kiva wrote:

moded via qq
some logs:
00:12:457 (1) -
WHISTLE取消
00:09:690 - 这里加一个SLIDER
加到 00:12:894 (2) - 的末尾
00:14:641 (10) - 末尾WHITLE取消
00:15:224 (3) - 末尾加whistle
00:21:923 (1,4) - 4的末尾没叠上去
00:55:418 (5) - 这个啊 建议拉成波浪SLIDER
01:05:612 (10) - 这里加个圈 做成三连
01:28:331 (5,6) - 最后这里建议改成改成跟着歌词一样的五连

Scorpiour wrote:

Cheese难度……

请尽情吐槽……………………

[attachment=0:4a9dd]Hanazawa Kana - Sweets Parade(TV Size) (Mura_77) [Cheese].osu[/attachment:4a9dd]

goodbye wrote:

虽然normal的音量改小了但是soft也还是很大啊建议降个40%左右
00:55:418 (5) - 5%太小了建议15%至少
01:04:593 (x) - 这里加个note

大体上都是note>sliderx2这样的布局可能有点乏味，不过整体感不错
no kudos.

LKs wrote:

为防了止蛋疼B扣A我T的裤兜s 几句乱扯先假我mod了装很多

General

offest: +4, make it 811

Chocolate

00:13:622 (6,7,8,9,10) - 这里的节奏其实不太对 应该从6开始做slider 而从7开始不仅扰乱了节奏和note/slider感觉 也让你的10的结尾压在了下一小节的开端(长白线) 也就扰乱了NC和初始感觉 所以从6开始做4个slider

Melophobia wrote:

Hi~

[General]

Tag in Cream diff is different from others
normal-hitclap is too loud to me ><

[Candy]

00:15:952 (2) - no need to add 2 repeats for this slider imo
00:50:175 (6) - i think its too hard to read for beginner, since this note is on blue tick
00:54:836 (5,6) - ^
00:56:729 (1) - too early after spinner >_>


[Cheese]
spacing is inconstant, is it on purpose ?
00:22:942 (2,3,1) - spacing
00:45:078 (1) - whistle to the beginning

[Cream]
00:47:408 (1,2,3) - like this?
http://puu.sh/iQ97

01:17:700 (5) - newcombo
01:18:865 (1) - remove newcombo
01:20:030 (3) - add newcombo


[Chocolate]
00:36:340 (3,4) - stack them
00:42:748 (1,4) - ^

good luck ><

Mrdude007 wrote:

Hey, is it alright with you if I add the video to it?
Love the way you set out this beatmap xD

If you want to add it manually I'll send you the file
It's tested and works in time with the audio

Mrdude007 wrote:

Hello, sorry my attachments arn't working at the moment but I uploaded it to mediafire. Should be called Sweets Parade (no sound) and be 6.1mb.

http://www.mediafire.com/file/lo5la11lr6m2d71/Sweets%20Parade%20(no%20sound).rar

Kuma-san wrote:

Maaan your map is AWESOME.Rly you are cool mapper
[General]
Delete normal-hitclap.Stanadart claps will be better
Resnap all notes
[Cream]
00:39:840 (5) - i don't like this overlap...
00:55:422 (1) - unrankable ok?
01:05:471 (7) - 1 grid down *nazi*
01:28:335 (6) - Add repeat
[Chocolate]
00:04:451 (4) - not perfectly stacked with 00:03:723 (2) - *nazi*
00:11:442 (6,7,8) - change to slider with repeat
00:12:898 (2) - make longer by one tick and delete 00:13:189 (3) -
00:22:510 (5) - make shorter and add note 00:22:655 (5) -
01:05:908 - add note?(suggestion)

That's all.This map is veeeeeeryyy good.Gl with rank~ Here is your star~

Melophobia wrote:

[Cheese]
spacing is inconstant, is it on purpose ? yes...
00:22:942 (2,3,1) - spacing I suppose it's doesn't matter
00:45:078 (1) - whistle to the beginning forget >.<

DarknessAngel wrote:

request from ★(oﾟ∀`从'∀ﾟo)★-Gamu-'s Modding Queue [Slot is unlimited]

Red words = Unrankable thing
Blue words = It is the best way that you fix it
Black words = If I were you,I would do that
Green words = some of my comment,or something I want you to notice

Chocolate

1. 00:02:849 (6) - remove clap on the slider's head would be better imo
2. 00:05:179 (6) - ^
3. 00:07:509 (8) - ^
4. 00:13:626 (6) - add whistle on the slider's head because you do that ar [00:11:296 (5)]
5. 00:47:412 ~ 00:55:422 - Normal hitsound is not fit the song..but you can decrease volume to 40%,it will be much better

Cream

1. 00:28:772 (1) - the spacing between (3) & (1) will make people a little confused,move the slider to here to fix the problem
2. 01:08:092 (6) - I think making it with 1.2x distance snap is better than making a jump

Cheese

1. 01:02:849 (2) - the slider doesn't fit the song.change it to 2 notes or a reserved-slider will be better
2. 01:09:257 (2) - adjust the spacing without grid snap
3. 01:28:189 (3) - change clap to whistle on the slider's tail will fit the song well
4. 00:14:791 (1) - spacing
5. It is not a good way to make a Normal diff with different distance snap

Easy

1. 00:55:422 (1) - the spinner is too short for Easy,try to remove it and complete this part
2. 01:05:179 (5) - remove both claps,it will much better
3. 01:13:335 (4) - ^
4. Why you didn't add finish instaed clap in kai time ? like [00:56:733 (1)] & [01:10:713 (1)],it will much better than now

喂，結果你看得懂中文是嗎...？
哦草我浪費好多時間...lol
萌歌和萌影片！
好耶 ~ S.T.A.R ~


加油祝好運 ~

os : sp3的MOD量變少好多...我很懷念之前的style說

spboxer3 wrote:

[general]

• 
  Settings
  

1. letterbox during break應該可以拿掉的...
   

[Candy]

• 
  
  mapping
  

1. none~

[Cheese]

• 
  
  mapping
  

1. 00:09:548 (5,2) - stack會比較好吧~
2. 00:13:626 (2,3,1) - 間距
3. 01:06:053 (1,2) - 間距 你看(1,2)之間的距離
   

[Cream]

• 
  
  mapping
  

1. 00:08:383 (2) - 對稱好吧~左右邊沒有做好
2. 00:55:422 (1) - 這個應該是unrank的... 太近了(問過MAT的感覺 他說應該是unrankable的)

[Chocolate]

• 
  Settings
  

1. 多餘的綠線:
   00:30:810 -

Overlaps
(Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap eachothou could space them farther apart.)

1. 00:36:781 (4,2) -

mapping

1. 00:03:723 (2,4) - stack吧~沒有stack好~

紅色是unrankable的 一定要改 藍色的是需要討論的問題 黑色就只是建議

superazunyan wrote:

Ah! Yes! Thank you. Like your's better than the other two by far

Darksonic wrote:

Hello~ Request from my queue.

SPOILER

Candy:

00:04:306 (5): Add a Finish at the end of the slider.
00:08:966 (5): ^
00:13:044 (4): NC
00:21:781 (4): NC
00:55:131 (6): Whistle here?
00:55:422 (1): This spinner is too short for an easy, remove it and try to add a slider there.
01:25:277 (2): Remove Clap.

Cheese:

00:09:548 (5): Finish instead of Clap?
00:28:189 (2): ^
00:48:577 (3): Whistle instead of Clap.
00:53:238 (1): Remove NC.
00:54:111 (2): Add NC.
01:28:189 (3): Add a Whistle.

Cream:

00:20:325 (2): Add a Clap.
00:33:141 (4): ^
00:39:257 (3,4,5,6): Try this ?
00:54:403 (5): NC

Chocolate:

00:13:917 (7): Remove that Whistle at the end of the slider.
00:14:063 (8): Add Whistle when slider starts.
00:18:432 (1): Remove clap, and add Whistle only at the end of the slider.
00:19:014 (3): ^
00:24:111 (10): Whistle when slider starts.
00:28:189 (3): ^
01:01:393 (4): NC
01:02:704 (1): Remove NC.
01:03:723 (4): NC

That's all for me, Good luck~

Almost fixed, thank you!