Use of kiai is pretty inappropriate. Kiai is supposed to be used to accentuate "the most epic part of the map", and I'm seeing it about five seconds in. Not to mention, the first break is in kiai time, which I guess is kinda weird? Anyhow, keep in mind, not every song is suited to kiai time. I'm just not feelin' it here.
[Rononormal]
01:27:33 (13) - Please put a hit-finish on this <3
01:36:94 (1,1) - I like how the second spinner rolls with the "Do it again now!" lyrics, but it's quite unexpected, awkward, and challenging for a Normal-level difficulty.
01:45:84 (1) - Should be changed to a single-reverse, half-note slider.
[Normal]
01:27:09 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This is just too much of a clusterfuck. Move the notes around so the pattern can be followed.
[Hard]
Increase the spacing a bit? This map feels a bit cramped to me. But maybe it's okay, because it's still playable.
00:30:84 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Avoid one-note combo stacks; it messes with the HP drain-rate calculation and makes an otherwise even map imbalanced.
01:30:84 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Please don't do this; move the notes around. It's only Hard mode; you don't need to have the score explosions covering the game-play so thickly.
There mighta been something else but I forgot what it was.
[Aqua Touch]
00:25:92 (1,2) - This is bad design; the second slider is hidden within the first. 01:24:05 (1,2) - Here, too. 01:16:55 (1,2,3,4) - Here too, kinda. Space it out horizontally more.
Some of the sound usage also seems a bit odd to me here.
But overall, it's quite playable, and I enjoyed 'em.