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Tomatsu Haruka & Yahagi Sayuri - Apple Panic!? (TV Size)

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wcx19911123
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年3月30日 at 15:42:23

Artist: Tomatsu Haruka & Yahagi Sayuri
Title: Apple Panic!? (TV Size)
Source: To Love-Ru
Tags: Sumisola OVA
BPM: 158.1
Filesize: 6632kb
Play Time: 01:32
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.65 stars, 107 notes)
  2. Normal (4.22 stars, 175 notes)
  3. Sumisola's Hard (4.84 stars, 212 notes)
  4. Sumisola's Insane (5 stars, 299 notes)
Download: Tomatsu Haruka & Yahagi Sayuri - Apple Panic!? (TV Size)
Download: Tomatsu Haruka & Yahagi Sayuri - Apple Panic!? (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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To LOVEる -とらぶる- OVA ED
Hard & Insane by Sumisola
No_Gu
o.o/沙
KuronumaSawako
真的嗎? o.o/
DJNightmare
Red = Recommended
Blue = Suggestions
Green = Comments

[Sumisola's Hard]
00:08:324 (2,3,4) - Try making it symmetrical from the 3rd hitcircle
00:47:793 (8) - New Hitcombo, the combo is getting alittle too much

I couldn't find much fault in the beatmap, so this is all i can find...
Great beatmap!~ =D

I don't know if i should be asking here, but could i have a mod from you too? >.<
I'll try to post it in your queue once it's open...
CMP
Can I possible to make CTB difficult?
JauiPlaY
Hi
一些建議:

[General]
Source應該是To Love-Ru才對

[Easy]
00:20:658 (2,3) - 位置比較誤導新手
00:23:694 (2,3) - ^
後面還有類似的就不說了...
還有就是加個spinner比較好,不然又一堆同分

[Normal]
00:46:464 (7) - 移到前面紅線好點
00:46:844 (x) - 加個note
00:52:536 (6) - 多折返一次好點
00:56:521 (1) - 前面藍線開始?
01:32:954 (1) - ^

[Sumisola's Hard]
01:14:168 (T) - 多根綠線
00:42:859 (5) - 太靠上了...換個方向

[Sumisola's Insane]
01:28:210 (5) - 遮擋得有點多,還有太靠邊了...不過還算可以接受

這到底算是誰的圖啊...
Nichiyouki
Hi, wcx19911123

From my modding queue

[General]
  1. Audio Lead-In is 10000
[Easy]
00:13:827 (1) - Add finish
00:52:536 (5) - ^ in the end of slider
01:00:127 (1) - ^ in the repeat of slider

[Normal]
01:29:728 (1) - I think that add finish here would be better?
01:31:056 (3) - ^

[Sumisola's Hard]
00:59:368 (7) - Add finish in the beginning of slider
01:00:886 (1) - Add finish, too. May be better.

[Sumisola's Insane]
01:00:127 (1) - Add finish in the repeat of slider.
01:17:015 (1) - Remove clap would be better.

Sorry, I can find it just this, but nice map, star

I see that you need video. I have brought video for you. Have both with and without sound music. (as files .AVI)
http://www.mediafire.com/?k4v7cfuye3avn ... u9wbnuh4r5

Good luck.
hillaryzx
From modding queue...
I hope this gonna be a useful mod (=.=)/

So,

General

I say no....

Easy

00:18:571(3) - can make this slider into something like this?

01:10:753 - add a note here?
01:29:728(1) -although I sense it will be a little tough for easy diff, can make something like this?


Normal

00:14:586(3) - shortening this slider like this


Sumisola's Hard

00:42:859(5) - I think this slider hit the HP bar ( just pointing it out )

Sumisola's Insane

Good :3

Man, this is short mod....
But, I shall take my leave...
Barney Stinson
I can listen to this song before sleeping.

From queue

Easy:
00:31:474 (5) - Dat whistle. Unexpected slowdown. Slowdowns should get off on easies
Nothing more

Normal:
Nothing

Hard: Hentai bg? No problem,I don't give a poot

Nothing more on map.

Good luck!
BeatofIke
Request from my modding queue: :|

Although, your map is so good, it's hard for me to mod, sorry :( .
To make it up, I found the video for you (Near HD Quality). 8-)


Click this link below to download (Set offset to 448ms):
http://puu.sh/jDJk

Feel me to ask me if you need any High Quality Anime Openings/Endings in your future maps.
Good Luck! :)
716 Girl
Easy
01:32:954 (1) - remove on next white tick

Normal
VEERY GOOD

Hard
00:09:083 (4,7) - stack ends
00:39:633 (2,3) - looks ugly here
00:46:275 (5) - repeat
00:13:827 (1,2,x) - make anti jump here

Insane
Gooood


staaar~
Topic Starter
wcx19911123
thanks BeatofIke , the video is great :3
and updated
No_Gu
无聊混个kud0.0
OVA还是第一部的。所以我觉得source还是To LOVE
颜色不一致0.0

[easy]
00:38:115 (1,2) - repeat加finish
00:41:151 (1) - 这个是尾加finish
01:32:764 (4) - S可能好点?

[normal]
没什么槽点

[hard]
00:31:474 (4) - 接1/4后面了还来个减速感觉很突然。。NC?
00:38:115 (1) - finish
00:42:859 (5) - 好像出界太多
01:32:005 (6,7) - 个人不太喜欢这种排法。。这样的? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/259966
01:08:096 (1,2,3,4,5) - 本来节奏下的就松。连打就换slider吧。。
其他没问题,开头有点overlap看起来不是很好

[insane]
random mod不起。。

音效音量略挫
丢一颗好了
KayeSara
....找不到什么问题.....
abalee
normal:
01:11:322 (2) - consider to delete it.

sumisola 在hard里面的hitsound下得和我感觉中的不一样不好评价 >_>
Nymph
SPOILER
12:57 <wcx19911123> : 当做mod看下也行嘛0.0
12:58 <Nymph> : 为啥
12:58 <Nymph> : 又不是我的guest
12:58 <wcx19911123> : 就是因为不是你的guest所以正好可以mod下啊0.0
12:58 <Nymph> : 为啥
12:58 <Nymph> : 不是我的我要mod
12:58 <wcx19911123> : 0.0?
12:59 <wcx19911123> : mod音效就可以的0.0
12:59 <wcx19911123> : 被aba吐槽了0.0
13:00 <wcx19911123> : 因为我音效渣,听不出来
13:00 <wcx19911123> : 要是你觉得没啥问题我就去找他了0.0
13:02 <Nymph> : 倒也没什么特别的
13:03 <Nymph> : 不过怎么少了一些东西
13:03 <wcx19911123> : 肯定是澄空改了下notes
13:03 <wcx19911123> : 然后音效会自动没掉的0.0
13:03 <Nymph> : 01:26:313 (1) -
13:03 <Nymph> : 最明显的 这clap呢。。。
13:03 <wcx19911123> : 0.0
13:04 <wcx19911123> : 瞎了
13:04 <wcx19911123> : 这都能听出来QAQ
13:04 <Nymph> : 01:27:451 (3) -
13:04 <Nymph> : 也是没了
13:05 <wcx19911123> : 瞎了你怎么听出来的。。
13:05 <Nymph> : 用耳朵听呗
13:06 <Nymph> : 00:04:719 (1) -
13:06 <Nymph> : whistle
13:06 <wcx19911123> : 头?
13:06 <Nymph> : 00:07:755 (1) -
13:06 <Nymph> : 嗯
13:06 <Nymph> : 我加吧 加完了给你
13:06 <Nymph> : 关键阿爸说的我也不懂 我就按我的思路补完就得了
13:07 <wcx19911123> : 是不是要买个耳机
13:07 <Nymph> : 感觉澄空很不愿意长白线加w啊
13:07 <Nymph> : 吗的不管 加上
13:08 <wcx19911123> : 加了0.0
13:08 <wcx19911123> : 感觉whistle有点点多了0.0
13:09 <Nymph> : 哎 那就不加好了 不过不加也没什么好加的
13:09 <Nymph> : 我就找大地方好了
13:09 <Nymph> : 还原回去吧
13:09 <Nymph> : 弄回去 我从头说
13:09 <wcx19911123> : 哦哦
13:10 <wcx19911123> : 可以骗kd的哦0.0
13:10 <Nymph> : 00:04:719 (1) -
13:10 <Nymph> : 这个 其实加2白线不如去2加1
13:10 <Nymph> : 音乐明显1是最高音 需要whistle来提一下
13:10 <wcx19911123> : 哦哦
13:11 <Nymph> : 如果加2我就建议12全加了 但是你觉得w太多 那就只加1不要2
13:11 <wcx19911123> : 恩0.0
13:11 <Nymph> : 00:07:755 (1) - 同
13:11 <wcx19911123> : 0.0
13:11 <Nymph> : 00:13:447 (8) -
13:11 <Nymph> : clap呢
13:12 <Nymph> : 00:04:339 (7) - 这个MP3里的clap跟custom1clap是一样的
13:13 <wcx19911123> : 突然发现I也漏了这个clap0.0
13:13 <Nymph> : 我去 为啥。。。
13:13 <Nymph> : 当时我都加了啊
13:13 <Nymph> : 你们改图都不改hitsound的么。。。
13:14 <wcx19911123> : 好
13:14 <wcx19911123> : 改完了 :D
13:15 <Nymph> : 00:04:339 (7) - 这个MP3里的clap跟custom1clap是一样的 当时原意是同声音抬一下音量的
13:15 <Nymph> : 我当时是都加了clap 不过发现都变成whistle了 澄空改的你改的?
13:15 <Nymph> : 2个都行反正
13:15 <wcx19911123> : 我没改过音效啊0.0
13:15 <Nymph> : 那就是澄空那白痴改的么
13:16 <Nymph> : 00:10:791 (1) - 这也是长白线w吧
13:16 <wcx19911123> : 有可能吧0.0
13:17 <Nymph> : 00:31:474 (4) -
13:17 <wcx19911123> : 瞎了我看到4个人都在mod一个图
13:17 <Nymph> : soga
13:17 <Nymph> : 00:31:474 (4) -
13:17 <Nymph> : normal whistle 头和body
13:17 <Nymph> : 这咋还丢了
13:17 <wcx19911123> : 哦哦
13:18 <wcx19911123> : 咦
13:18 <wcx19911123> : 这次的I没丢0.0
13:18 <Nymph> : 嗯
13:19 <Nymph> : 00:38:115 (1) -
13:19 <Nymph> : 可以考虑改成finish
13:19 <Nymph> : 00:39:633 (2) -
13:19 <Nymph> : 同
13:19 <Nymph> : 00:41:151 (1) -
13:19 <Nymph> : 同
13:20 <Nymph> : 00:53:295 (5) - 还是
13:20 <wcx19911123> : 恩恩
13:21 <Nymph> : 00:56:331 (3) -
13:21 <Nymph> : 感觉这之后可以考虑下点clap 不过区别不大
13:21 <Nymph> : 要考虑么
13:22 <wcx19911123> : 恩恩加了
13:22 <Nymph> : 00:59:368 (7) -
13:22 <Nymph> : 头finish
13:23 <Nymph> : 01:08:476 (5) - 一样
13:23 <wcx19911123> : 恩
13:23 <Nymph> : 01:26:313 (1) -
13:23 <Nymph> : clap 说过了
13:24 <Nymph> : 01:27:451 (3) -
13:24 <Nymph> : 头尾的clap全丢了
13:24 <wcx19911123> : 恩
13:24 <Nymph> : 01:32:764 (7) -
13:25 <Nymph> : 之后这2个slider可以考虑跟MP3下finish
13:25 <Nymph> : 我建议是7的头 8的尾
13:25 <Nymph> : 没了
13:26 <wcx19911123> : 偶也
13:26 <wcx19911123> : 神mapper赛高
13:26 <Nymph> : 不过阿爸说的是什么意思啊我还是不懂
13:27 <wcx19911123> : 就是说H的音效乖乖的吧

存在感+1
Topic Starter
wcx19911123
fixed many hitsounds in Hard & Insane diff and
updated
Gonzvlo
Hey! Sorry for the delay, many, many requests. Oh well, It's been a while since I modded a non-bubbled map, this will be fun :D

[General]
  1. Source: Shouldn't the source be "To LOVE-Ru" or "To-LOVE-Ru" o3o?
[Easy]
  1. Peeeeerhaps, AR -1?
[Normal]
  1. Overall, pretty good. My only concerns is that a couple circles are stacked under slider-ends. Most of the times, stacking circles under slider-ends is not a good idea since it might be hard to hit for this difficulty level.
  2. 01:07:337 (6) - ^
  3. 01:22:517 (4) - ^
[Sumisola's Hard]
  1. I asked in #lounge for some thoughts about the BG, some guys considered that it'd be better if you changed the BG, keep that in mind please!
  2. Whee, nice diff, no problems here.
[Sumisola's Insane]
  1. OD 8 fits perfectly this difficulty level, I strongly suggest to raise OD 1 tick.
  2. 00:31:474 (6) - Nice slowdown, it was a bit hard to follow the first time though. At first I thought it was a normal slider due to its shape, It's way too similar to the previous sliders. I'd suggest to change the shape, you could try a wave.
  3. 00:39:633 (1,2) - Just a minor suggestion. The current curve doesn't look smooth, you could improve it by moving the red control point a couple grids up, here's an example.
  4. 00:44:187 (9) - Why is the slider-end snapped to 1/6? Is this intentional? Well, it should be snapped to 1/2 o3o
  5. 01:28:210 (5) - The repeat arrow is mostly hidden, you should fix this by moving the last control point some grids down, here's a possible solution.
  6. 01:28:210 (X) - To be honest, I expected a circle here and then the spinner 1/2 later. The current pattern is okay too but you should consider this alternative.
  7. Overall, really, really nice. It's really fun to play, good job! (Like always o3o)
Awesome mapset!
Sumisola

Gonzvlo wrote:

[Sumisola's Hard]
  1. I asked in #lounge for some thoughts about the BG, some guys considered that it'd be better if you changed the BG, keep that in mind please!
  2. Whee, nice diff, no problems here.
[Sumisola's Insane]
  1. OD 8 fits perfectly this difficulty level, I strongly suggest to raise OD 1 tick.
  2. 00:31:474 (6) - Nice slowdown, it was a bit hard to follow the first time though. At first I thought it was a normal slider due to its shape, It's way too similar to the previous sliders. I'd suggest to change the shape, you could try a wave. Since I use slider 6 to "hug" circle 2, I wanna to keep this shape. ^w^
  3. 00:39:633 (1,2) - Just a minor suggestion. The current curve doesn't look smooth, you could improve it by moving the red control point a couple grids up, here's an example. fixed
  4. 00:44:187 (9) - Why is the slider-end snapped to 1/6? Is this intentional? Well, it should be snapped to 1/2 o3o fixed
  5. 01:28:210 (5) - The repeat arrow is mostly hidden, you should fix this by moving the last control point some grids down, here's a possible solution. thanks for your nice suggestion. Fixed
  6. 01:28:210 (X) - To be honest, I expected a circle here and then the spinner 1/2 later. The current pattern is okay too but you should consider this alternative. Fixed
  7. Overall, really, really nice. It's really fun to play, good job! (Like always o3o)
Awesome mapset!
Download: Tomatsu Haruka & Yahagi Sayuri - Apple Panic! (TV Size) (wcx19911123) [Sumisola's Insane].osu
Topic Starter
wcx19911123

Gonzvlo wrote:

[General]
  1. Source: Shouldn't the source be "To LOVE-Ru" or "To-LOVE-Ru" o3o? I checked wiki and changed to "To LOVE Ru"
[Easy]
  1. Peeeeerhaps, AR -1? sorry , I think AR3 is easy enough to play as an Easy diff..
[Normal]
  1. Overall, pretty good. My only concerns is that a couple circles are stacked under slider-ends. Most of the times, stacking circles under slider-ends is not a good idea since it might be hard to hit for this difficulty level. I think the rhyme is not too hard to read , cuz I follow the vocal in the whole diff. stack is just for symmetry , so I want to keep this , or it is a huge work..
  2. 01:07:337 (6) - ^
  3. 01:22:517 (4) - ^
[Sumisola's Hard]
  1. I asked in #lounge for some thoughts about the BG, some guys considered that it'd be better if you changed the BG, keep that in mind please! fixed
  2. Whee, nice diff, no problems here.
all updated , hope it is ready now o.o
Shana Aisaka
Hi wang-kun!! :D
Just some random mod~ :P

[General]
All seems fine. :3

[Normal]
HP Drain - 1 ?

[Sumisola's Hard]

Timing :
01:02:024 = un-used timing. please delete it.

Map/Hitsounds :
00:07:375(6) = use clap instant of whistle.
00:13:257(7) = add clap.
00:44:187(1) = how about make the slider a bit longer?? till 00:44:567
00:45:326(3) = move it to 00:45:136 ? sounds weird you put there.
00:46:085(x) = add note here. so it won't sounds weird...

[Sumisola's Insane]

Hitsounds :
01:08:096(4) = use finish instant of whistle.
01:11:132(4) = add whistle.

Okay ~ That's all ~
Nice song so Star!! :D
Ganbatte wang-kun!! XD
Kiddo-Kun
Wakakakaka.

General:

• Took the honers of researching for a moment and found that most websites say the source is in fact " To Love-Ru ". The latest ranked To love ru map also has that tag on it. So you should change it like so.

Hard:

AR +1?

• 00:31:474 (4) - I just find that this slider shouldn't be this slow. The combo is rather fast and this is a huge speed drop, in my opinion. I say you should either change the slider speed, or add a new combo.
• 00:42:859 (5) - This would be sexy if it wasn't being covered by the HP Bar so much.
• 00:59:368 (7) - Same as above, it's a rather drastic speed drop.
• 01:08:096 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't think a 1/4 stack like this is fitting in a Hard difficulty.
• 01:32:764 (7) - New combo on this note to match the change in the music.

Insane:

• 00:31:474 (6) - Same problem as Hard. Either speed it up a bit or add a new combo on it.

Everything else seems fine. Star.
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