1. Fang's Taiko (4.88 stars, 929 notes)
2. Hard (4.67 stars, 516 notes)
3. Normal (2.92 stars, 292 notes)

arikanon wrote:

I think the title should be: Renai Circulation (Instrumental)

Spectator wrote:

[ Hard ]

00:08:680 - 박자가 조금 이상합니다. 전것과 같은 모양으로 수정 완료
00:10:680 - 너무 같은 박자만 있으니까 어색하세요. NC도 추가하시고 박자도 조금씩 바꾸시는게.. 수정 완료
00:11:680 - NC 수정 완료
00:40:180 - 여기에 엇박을 넣는것도 나쁘진 않을거 같네요. 음...뭘 넣어야 될지..
01:27:680 - 슬라이더가 약간 비대칭인데 아래 사진처럼 해주시면 괜찮을거 같습니다. 수정 완료

SPOILER

01:31:680 - NC 수정 완료
02:23:180 - 갑자기 큰 점프가 나오는 느낌이라... 거리 조금만 좁혀주세요. 약간 좁혔습니다
03:51:680 - 여기도 비대칭 슬라이더가 있습니다. 아래 사진처럼 하는건 어떨까요. 수정 완료

SPOILER

[ Overall ]

BG가 화질이 조금 안 좋습니다.
해상도가 안맞는 느낌이랄까..

더 좋은 BG가 필요할 거 같습니다. 음..어디서 구한다...


또 콤보컬러에 갈색 계열이 좀 많은데
핑크색, 하늘색, 오렌지색 같은
색을 추가해서 더 다채롭게 하고

옅은 갈색 하나를 빼는것도 괜찮을 거 같습니다. 수정 완료

나머진 전부 괜찮습니다.
맵 잘 만드셨네요 >_<

랭크 될 수 있기를...

No_Gu wrote:

request from my queue
Normal is 3.01 stars.reduce to 3 at least Ok,Now 2.97

[normal]
00:57:680 (1) - put it to center will be easier for new players Nope.sorry
00:59:680 (5) - whistle at the end ok
01:37:680 (1) - finish ok
02:08:680 (4) - clap at the repeat ok
02:47:680 (1,2) - too hard for new players to play change easy
03:15:680 useless line Delect
03:55:680 (1) - finish at the beginning ok

[hard]
00:47:680 (3) - ctrl+H ok
00:48:680 (4) - ctrl+J ok
02:04:180 (1) - 1 grid right ok
02:08:180 (1) - ^

Melophobia wrote:

Hard

00:10:180 (2) - clap to beginning instead of whistle
00:10:680 (3) - clap to end instead of whistle
00:12:180 (2) - clap to beginning instead of whistle
00:12:680 (3) - clap to end instead of whistle
00:17:680 (1) - clap to reverse arrow
00:19:680 (1) - ^
00:26:180 (2) - clap to beginning
00:28:180 (2) - ^
00:29:680 (1) - clap to end
00:31:680 (1) - ^
00:34:180 (2) - clap
00:36:180 (2) - ^
00:37:680 (1) - clap to end
00:38:430 (2) - remove clap from end
00:38:930 (3) - clap to beginning
00:39:680 (1) - clap to end
00:40:430 (2) - remove clap from end
00:40:930 (3) - clap to beginning
00:41:680 (1) - clap to 1st reverse and end
00:43:680 (2) - ^
00:45:680 (1,2,3) - clap to end instead of whistle
00:58:180 (2) - clap and remove whistle
00:59:180 (4) - ^
01:00:180 (2) - clap to beginning
01:00:680 (3) - clap to 2nd reverse
01:02:180 (3) - clap
01:03:180 (1) - clap
01:02:930 - add note
01:04:180 (3) - remove repeat
01:04:930 - add note
01:05:180 - ^
01:08:180 (3) - clap
01:09:180 (7) - ^
01:09:680 (1) - clap to 1st reverse and end
01:22:930 - add note with a clap
01:24:930 - ^
01:27:680 (1) - clap to 1st reverse
01:30:180 (2) - clap to beginning
01:31:180 (4) - ^
01:32:180 (2) - ^
01:33:180 (4) - ^
01:35:180 (2) - clap to beginning
01:45:680 (1) - shorten 1/2, and add a repeat~
01:48:930 (5) - add clap
01:50:930 (5) - ^
01:52:680 (6) - ^
01:56:680 (2) - change to 1/2 slider then add a repeat and clap to reverse
01:58:680 (4) - clap to end
02:00:930 (6) - clap to beginning
02:08:180 (1) - try this rhythm
http://puu.sh/cXhu
02:18:180 (2) - clap
02:19:180 (4) - clap
02:19:680 (1) - clap to 1st reverse and end
02:25:680 (1,2) - claps to ends
02:28:180 (3) - clap
02:29:180 (9) - ^
02:30:180 (3,7) - ^
02:32:180 (5) - ^
03:51:680 (1) - clap to 1st reverse and end
03:56:930 - add a note with a clap
03:58:930 - ^
04:03:680 (1) - clap to 2nd reverse
04:05:680 (1) - ^

Normal
add claps to where piinted out on Hard

1. Try make sliders more tidy~ :3

Yasora-chan wrote:

mod because m4m with me

General

1. Try make sliders more tidy~ :3

Normal
00:09:680 (1) add finish in here because new rhythm
00:11:680 (4) new combo? because same pattern with before notes(1,2,3)
00:17:680 (1) add finish in here is fit I think
00:19:680 (5) add new combo in here? same pattern with before notes (1,2,3,4)
00:22:680 (2) this slider isn't same shape with (1), copy-paste (1) --> ctrl+h --> ctrl+r. and don't forget to fix spacing
00:25:180 (4) move this circle into beginning next note (1), like this? so that easy read by players
00:25:680 (1) add finish in beginning slider is fit
00:27:680 (4) add new combo for new rhythm and same pattern with before note (1,2,3)
00:31:680 (3) add new combo for new thythm?
00:41:686 (1) add finish in the beginning slider because sound like "desh" is audible
00:46:180 (3) I think more symmetic like this?
00:47:680 (4) add new combo in here. same pattern with before notes (1,2,3)
00:49:680 (1) add finish in beginning slider more fit
00:59:680 (5) this slider is inconsistency spacing from before notes
01:13:430 (break) move this break to downbeat like this
01:21:680 (1) (nazi) move 2nd way point 1 grid left for more symmetric?
01:27:680 (3) this slider isn't symmetric I think. do this?
01:30:680 (3) (nazi) move 2nd way point 1 grid left?
01:37:680 (1) add finish in here more fit
01:38:680 (4) (nazi) move 2nd way point 1 grid down?
01:39:680 (5) add new combo in here
01:55:680 (5) add finish in here
02:01:680 (1) add finish in the beginning slider
02:09:680 (1) add finish in here
02:33:430 (break) same as 01:13:430
02:43:680 (1) remove new combo because this slider still same spacing with before note
02:56:680 (3,4,5,6) I think this circles is too hard for beginner, consider to change them with reverse slider like this don't forget to fix spacing
03:15:680 - I think this green timing section is just spam. consider to delete that
03:53:180 (2) I think this circle more easy read by players if no stack
04:09:680 (1) remove this new combo because just spam in here and fix the spacing because this circle is too close with before notes

Hard
00:17:680 (1) add finish in the beginning slider because sound like "desh" is audible in here
00:18:930 (2,3,4,5,6) I think this stream is too silent. consider to add hitsound in here. my suggestion: add whistle in (3) and (6)
00:20:930 (2,3,4,5,6) ^
00:25:680 (1) same with 00:17:680
00:41:680 (1) ^
01:02:930 (x) add circle in here. feel 'something' missing in here
01:13:430 (break) same with 01:13:430 in Normal diff
01:29:680 (1) new rhythm in here. add finish in the beginning slider
01:33:930 (2) add whistle in here. too silent in here
01:37:680 (1) same with 00:17:680
01:43:680 (1) more symmetric like this?
02:25:671 (1) more symmetric like this? and make slider (2) similar like this too
02:33:430 (break) same with 02:33:430 in Normal diff
03:55:680 (1) add finish in here
04:09:680 (1) remove this new combo because this new combo is just spam

That's all~
Good luck~ :3

128,192,111706,6,0,B|192:224|216:296|216:296|240:224|304:192,1,280

296,152,103706,6,0,B|344:192|344:272|256:312|168:272|168:192|216:152,1,320

1. 00:37:706 (1) - move the 2nd point 1 grid up
2. 02:05:706 (1) - middle point 1 grid up

1. maybe OD-1? makes easier, and does not affect score
2. 00:31:706 (1) - this? http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot149-2.jpg
3. 00:57:206 (4) - stack with 3?
4. 01:00:706 (3) - -1 reverse?
5. 01:58:206 (2,3) - just use a 1/4 slider + reverse here? it makes the pattern much easier
6. 02:19:706 (1) - clap at the end?
7. 02:31:206 (7) - 1/2 slider?
8. 03:56:956 (4) - make this in the same line with 3 and 5
9. 03:58:956 (4) - ^

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

Hi, from my queue

this map is pretty nice

[Normal]

1. 00:37:706 (1) - move the 2nd point 1 grid up
2. 02:05:706 (1) - middle point 1 grid up

[Hard]

1. maybe OD-1? makes easier, and does not affect score
2. 00:31:706 (1) - this? http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot149-2.jpg
3. 00:57:206 (4) - stack with 3?
4. 01:00:706 (3) - -1 reverse?
5. 01:58:206 (2,3) - just use a 1/4 slider + reverse here? it makes the pattern much easier
6. 02:19:706 (1) - clap at the end?
7. 02:31:206 (7) - 1/2 slider?
8. 03:56:956 (4) - make this in the same line with 3 and 5
9. 03:58:956 (4) - ^

that's all

Good luck~

SPOILER

SPOILER

336,144,37706,6,0,B|400:192|376:344|256:352,1,280
256,208,39206,1,8
256,72,39706,6,0,B|136:79|112:231|176:279,1,280
288,192,41206,1,8

SPOILER

128,192,111706,6,0,B|184:232|208:304|208:304|232:232|288:192,1,280
392,96,113206,1,8

SPOILER

128,120,235706,6,0,B|176:60|336:60|384:120,1,280
384,120,237206,1,8
384,264,237706,2,0,B|336:324|176:324|128:264,1,280
128,264,239206,1,8

terametis wrote:

Hi~
These are all suggestion.


[General]
Please delete unnecessary .osb file.


[Normal]
00:37:706 (1)~(2),(1)~(2)　　How about this?

SPOILER

SPOILER

336,144,37706,6,0,B|400:192|376:344|256:352,1,280
256,208,39206,1,8
256,72,39706,6,0,B|136:79|112:231|176:279,1,280
288,192,41206,1,8

01:52:706 (1)　　　　　　　　　　(nazi)Make it prettier

SPOILER

128,192,111706,6,0,B|184:232|208:304|208:304|232:232|288:192,1,280
392,96,113206,1,8

02:08:956 (4)　　　　　　　　　　add clap
03:55:706 (1)~(4)　　　　　　　(Nazi)Make it prettier

SPOILER

128,120,235706,6,0,B|176:60|336:60|384:120,1,280
384,120,237206,1,8
384,264,237706,2,0,B|336:324|176:324|128:264,1,280
128,264,239206,1,8

04:09:706 (7)　　　　　　　　　　Why don't use DS? Otherwise, please add New combo.

[Hard]
04:09:706 (7)　　　　　　　　　　Add New combo

I wish your map is Ranked~
Bye~

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ [Ranger] ~

Mod time for my Queue ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[Hard]

1. 01:21:706 (1) - Add finish.
2. 03:36:706 (4,5,6,7,8) - Try move to here like this.
   
   SPOILER

   

That's all ~ nice mapset ~ gogo ranked ~

Good luck ~

-Chata- wrote:

랜덤 모드

[Normal]

00:05:706 (1) - 뉴콤보
01:07:206 - 소리라던가 좀 이상하네요. http://puu.sh/f6zy이렇게 되면 좋을거같아요 간격에 의해 01:07:956에 노트 하나 추가해 수정

[Hard]

우선 http://puu.sh/f6D8 이걸 곡 폴더에 넣은후 타임세션의 오디오 셈플셋을 모두 커스텀으로 바꿔주세요. 슬라이더의 스윽 소리가 매우 안어울립니다
노말도 그렇지만 힛사가 구간적으로 많이 단조롭습니다.
커스텀 힛사 추가와함께 기본 힛사도 좀더 쓰시는게 좋을거같네요. 예를 들자면 이런곳입니다

01:38:706
01:40:706
01:52:206
01:52:956
02:21:706
02:22:706
02:23:706
02:24:456

03:39:706
03:40:456
03:41:456

등에 휘슬이 되겠습니다.

이상입니다

A s g a r d wrote:

[General]
폴더안에 있는 .osb 파일 2개있는데.. 2개있다는거는 잘못했다는거고 어쨋거나 두개 다 지워주세요
SB나 스킨 쓸꺼아니면 osb 있으면 안됩니다 절대로!!
그리고 SB부분 포어그라운드에 왜 bg가 들어가있나요 삭제해주세요
키아이 시작부분
57706
57706
203706
219706

각 키아이 끝나는부분 :
73206
153206
219206
235206

[Normal]
전체적으로 디스탠스가 0.95~1.05 이러네요.. 그리드 레벨 4로 맞춰서 전부다 조금씩더움직여서 확실하게 맞쳐보세요 0.95 1.00 차이 작은거같아도 의외로 잘보입니다
00:05:706 (1) - 이거 지우시고 00:01:706 (1) 이거복사해서 대칭시키세요 대칭 아예 안맞습니다

박자소리가 슬라때문에 자꾸 끊기니까
00:59:706 (5)
이런것처럼 긴 슬라이더 틱에 틱소리로 크랩 박자에 맞게 크랩소리 넣으세요 이 뒤로나오는 긴 슬라이더 전부

01:01:706 (1) - 피니쉬 넣어주세요
01:01:706 (1,2,3,4) - 이것도 대칭이 안맞아요 기왕 이렇게 만들거면
01:01:706 (1)
01:03:206 (4)
이렇게 대칭 되고
01:02:206 (2)
01:02:706 (3)
이렇게 대칭 되도록 만들어보세요
01:05:706 (1) - 슬라 처음에 피니쉬넣어주세요
01:09:706 (1,3) - 피니쉬
01:27:706 (3) - 이전 슬라 01:26:706 (2) 때문에 오버랩 됬네요 안겹치게 해주세요
01:35:706 (3) - 슬라가 너무 못생겼어요.. 이쁘지도않고
02:01:706 (1) - 한칸 오른쪽으로 옮기세요 그래야 오버랩 안되고 대칭맞습니다
02:17:706 (1,2,3,4) - 이것들도 아까 위에서 말한것들처럼 대칭으로 좀 맞춰주세요 그게 훨씬 깔끔하고 보기좋아요
02:21:706 (1) - 휘슬지우고 피니쉬 넣어주세요
02:25:706 (1) - 피니쉬
02:29:706 (1) - 슬라 앞부분에 피니쉬 넣어주세요(시작부분/반복부분)
02:31:706 (1) - 피니쉬
02:43:706 (2) - 이런것도 좀대칭으로 만들어주세요
02:56:956 - 노트추가
02:58:706 (3) - 대칭으로 만들어주세요
03:02:456 (2) - 184,296 으로 이동
03:02:706 (3) - 이거 지우고 03:01:706 (1) 이거 똑같이 복사해서 컨트롤+H / 컨트롤+R 누른후 그리드 해재해서 251,371 로 이동해주세요
03:04:706 (3) - 반복 한번 없애세요 그리고 사운드 다시 넣는거 잊어버리지 말고요
03:31:706 (1) - 피니쉬
03:39:706 (1) - 휘슬제거
03:39:206 여기에 Inherited point 추가해서 키아이타임 끝내세요
03:43:706 (1) - 슬라이더 모양 언랭입니다 가능하면 떨어트려주세요
04:09:706 (1) - 노멀에서 안티점프 넣는 사람이 어딨대요.


[Hard]
00:01:706 (1,2,3,4) - 이것도 좀 대칭으로 깔끔하게 만들어주세요
00:06:706 (2,3,4) - 이런건 맘대로 막 만들지말고 00:05:706 (1) - 이거 복사해서 컨트롤+쉬프트+R로 만드는데 더 좋습니다
00:13:706 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 휘슬 다 지우시고 크랩넣으세요 왜 갑자기 휘슬나온대요
00:18:956 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
00:20:956 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
갑자기 크랩나오다 휘슬로 크랩을 대신하는건 진짜 안좋습니다
휘슬을 쓸라면 노래의 어떤느낌에나 한번씩 여러번 써주는게 더 자연스러운데
휘슬로 크랩쓰면 그건... ㄷ;;
더이상 이건 언급 안하겠습니다
00:32:456 (2,3,4) - 대칭 안맞아요
00:43:706 (2) - ^
00:46:706 (2,3,4) - 이것도 마찬가지로 컨트롤+쉬프트+R로
00:59:706 (1,3) - 슬라 위치가 진짜 이상하네요..
01:00:706 (3) - 반복 한번 없애시고 사운드 다시 넣으세요
01:01:706 (1) - 피니쉬
01:05:706 (1) - 시작부분 피니쉬
01:07:706 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 패턴 바꿔주세요 이런패턴 모양 너무아님
01:09:706 (1) - 슬라이더 시작부분 두군데 다 피니쉬(시작부분/반복부분)
01:42:706 (2) - 이것도 좀 대칭으로 만들어주세요
02:09:706 (1,2,1,2) - 무슨하드에 디스탠스가 3.7입니까 ㅡ ㅡ
02:26:706 (2) - 대칭으로 만들어주세요
04:00:706 (2) - ^



참고로 여기서 제가 의미하는 대칭들은 그것과 모양이 비슷한 슬라이더와 상하(좌우)대칭이 안맞는다는 소리입니다

Ra-s wrote:

[General]
*.osb파일을 지워주시고 풀섬밋 해주셨으면 좋겠어요. 지워도 지워도 계속 생기는 경우가 있긴 한데 방법을 어디에서 본거 같은데...;ㅅ;

[Normal]
00:59:706 (5) - 왼쪽으로 3칸 (lv3)수정 완료
01:40:206 (3) - 왼쪽으로 1칸 (lv3)수정 완료
03:33:706 (1) - 이전의 흐름대로 맞추려면 NC제거하시는게 좋아보여요수정 완료
03:51:706 (1,2) - 2번노트가 1번노트랑 약간 겹치는게 조금 그럽니다 ㅠㅠ수정 완료

[Hard]
02:30:206 (3,4) - 왼쪽으로 1칸 (lv4)수정 완료
02:31:206 (7) - 오른쪽으로 1칸 (lv4)수정 완료
02:51:206 (1,2) - 1번 NC제거하고 2번에 NC?일단 이부분은 보류해두겠습니다
02:55:206 (1,2) - ^
02:59:206 (1,3) - 1번 NC제거하고 3번에 NC?수정 완료
03:03:206 (1,3) - ^수정 완료
03:21:706 (5) - 리턴부분은 무음처리 하시면 깔끔할꺼 같아요수정 완료

SPOILER

04:02:456 (1,2) - 1번 NC제거하고 2번에 NC?수정 완료

phonic wrote:

As your request from queue


NC = Add New Combo.
RNC = Remove New Combo.

[General]

1. AudioLeadIn : 500?
2. BG thinks that a JPEG image is better than PNG image
3. Kiai Time : Unify

[Hard]

1. HP+1 and OD+1 fixed
2. 01:04:956 (4,5) - Remove clap and add whistlefixed
3. 01:49:456 (7) - I think that I am not necessary for you whether this Note is necessary for you
4. 01:51:456 (7) - ^
5. 01:59:456 (6) - ^
6. 02:04:206 (1,1) - Note is covered to the slider, and a look is badfixed
7. 02:24:956 (2,3) - Remove clap and add whistlefixed
8. 03:01:456 (7) - NCfixed
9. 03:01:706 (1) - RNCfixed
10. 03:21:706 (5) - When you add finish to the head of this slider, I think that I am betterfixed
11. 03:50:956 (6) - x:136 y:320fixed
12. 03:51:206 (7) - x:80 y:264fixed
13. 03:53:456 (x) - You match a sound by putting Note herefixed
14. 03:57:706 (1) - Add finishfixed
15. 03:59:706 (1) - Add finish to the head of the sliderfixed
16. 04:01:706 (1) - Add finishfixed
17. 04:05:706 (1) - Add finish to the head of the sliderfixed
18. 04:07:706 (1) - Add finish

fixed

[Normal]

1. OD+1 and AR-1fixed
2. 00:27:206 (3) - x:128 y:124fixed
3. 01:03:706 (5) - NCfixed
4. 01:27:706 (3) - ^fixed
5. 01:36:956 (2,3) - This one has good look, is suggestion to you from me
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:43:706 (6) - ^
   SPOILER

   
7. 02:19:706 (5) - NCfixed
8. 02:23:706 (5) - ^fixed
9. 02:24:206 (6) - x:396 y:136fixed
10. 02:27:706 (5) - NCfixed
11. 02:29:206 (7) - x:196 y:328fixed
12. 02:57:206 (5,1) - Space is small. The beginner is surely puzzledfixed
13. 03:04:706 (3) - x:44 y:100fixed
14. 03:25:706 (5) - NCfixed
15. 03:29:706 (4) - ^fixed
16. 03:33:706 (5) - ^fixed
17. 03:41:706 (5) - ^fixed
18. 03:43:706 (7) - ^fixed
19. 03:47:706 (1) - Add finishfixed
20. 03:49:706 (5) - NCfixed
21. 03:51:706 (1,2) - This is suggestion to you from me
    SPOILER

    

fixed

dragonxcz wrote:

Here is my mod. (Request in modding queue)

[-General-]
Convert background to jpg. ok

[-Hard-]

AR 8 (+1)Nope,sorry

Reisen Udongein wrote:

안녕하세요 <3

[General]

프리뷰타임은 57706이 더 좋은것 같아요!

[Normal]

00:01:706 (1) - 1 그리드 왼쪽 수정 완료

00:05:706 (2) - 1 그리드 오른쪽 ^

00:25:706 (1) - Grid Snap 끄고 디스턴스 스페이싱 0.0인채로 제대로 맞춰주세요~ ^

00:29:206 (3) - 1 그리드 왼쪽 ^

00:37:706 (1.1) - 슬라이더 모양이 약간 이상한데, 좀 더 대칭으로 하는게 어떨까요? ^

00:53:706 (1,2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/fUkH 이런 식으로 이어지게 하는게 더 자연스럽지 않을까요? ^

01:09:706 (1) - 전의 슬라이더와 직각이 되는것이 나을것 같아요. ^

01:11:706 (1) - http://puu.sh/fUlg 이런 식으로 하는것이 어떨까요? 물론 바꾸실거면 스피너의 피니시를 지우고 노트에 피니시를 넣는거구요. x

01:45:706 - 브레이크타임을 없애는것도 괜찮은것 같아요. x

01:48:206 (2) - 1 그리드 왼쪽 수정완료

01:50:206 (2) - 1 그리드 오른쪽 ^

02:31:706 (1) - http://puu.sh/fUlg 이런 식으로 하는것이 어떨까요? 물론 바꾸실거면 스피너의 피니시를 지우고 노트에 피니시를 넣는거구요. x

02:52:206 (2) - x:24 y:196 으로 해주세요! 수정 완료

03:59:206 (2) - Grid Snap 끄고 디스턴스 스페이싱 0.0인채로 제대로 맞춰주세요~ ^

04:02:706 (4,5,6) - 그전 노트3개를 복사 해서 써주시는게..? ^

[Hard]

00:09:706 (1) - 중앙에 맞춰주시는게 어떨까요? ^

00:11:706 (1) - ^ ^

00:29:706 (1) - 중앙선에 맞도록 마지막 포인트를 하나 올려주세요! ^

00:31:706 (1) - ^ ^

00:34:706 (5) - http://puu.sh/fUnV 이런식으로 하는게 더 보기 좋은것같아요! ^

00:36:706 (5) - ^ ^

00:37:706 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/fUo5 이런식으로 삼각형을 만드는게 더 보기 좋은것 같아요! ^

00:39:706 (1,2,3) - ^ ^

00:41:706 (1) - 서로 수평이 되도록 마지막 포인트를 하나 왼쪽으로 ^

00:43:706 (2) - ^ ^

00:45:706 (1) - 시작 부분의 휘슬은 일부러 하나만 넣어주신건가요? 4개 다 넣던가 다 빼던가 하는게 나을것같아요! ^

01:04:206 (3) - 약간 모양이 이상한데.. http://puu.sh/fUoC 이런식으로 바꿔주시는게 어떨까요? ^

01:05:706 (1,2) - 슬라이더가 양쪽이 수평이 되도록 해주세요~ ^

01:11:706 (1) - http://puu.sh/fUp1 이런 식으로 하는것이 어떨까요? 물론 바꾸실거면 스피너의 피니시를 지우고 노트에 피니시를 넣는거구요.x

01:32:206 (2) - 휘슬 제거해주세요 수정 완료

01:45:706 (1) - 수평이 되게끔 마지막 포인트를 하나 위로 올려주세요~ ^

01:52:206 (2) - 휘슬 제거해주세요 ^

01:52:956 (7) - 스페이싱이 이상해요! ^

02:04:206 (1) - 수평이 되게끔 마지막 포인트를 오른쪽 하나, 아래로 하나씩 내려주세요~ ^

02:41:706 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/fUqx 이렇게 해주시는게 더 보기 좋은것같아요! ^

02:43:706 (1,2,3) - ^ ^

03:04:706 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - http://puu.sh/fUra 이런식으로 곡선을 그리는게 더 좋은것같아요~ ^

03:21:706 (5) - 수평이 되게끔 마지막 포인트를 하나 왼쪽으로~ ^

03:39:706 (1) - 시작부분 휘슬 제거해주세요~ ^

03:42:456 (4) - 휘슬 추가해주세요~ ^

03:43:456 (8) - ^ ^

03:46:456 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - http://puu.sh/fUsb 이렇게 하는게 보기좋은것같아요! ^

03:57:706 (1,2,3,4,5) - 그 전의 노트 5개를 복사해서 좌우반전 시켜주세요~ ^

04:03:706 (1,2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/fUsO 이런식은 어떠세요? ^

04:05:706 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^

전체적으로 깔끔한 맵이네요! 꼭 랭크 되길 빌게요

좋은 모딩 감사드려요~

1. Seems fine

1. 00:01:706 (1) - change clap to whistles is better
2. 00:05:706 (2) - ^
3. 00:11:706 (1) - whistle
4. 00:13:706 (1) - ^
5. 00:14:706 (2) - ^
6. 00:15:706 (1) - ^ and add whistles throughout the map
7. 00:23:706 (3,4,1) - maybe not stack? Because you have stacked notes 1/2, so it may be thought as 1/2
8. 01:07:206 (3,4,5) - stack it all or don't stack
9. 01:13:706 (x) - maybe start break here
10. 01:43:706 (6) - nc?
11. 02:33:706 (x) - maybe start break here
12. 02:49:456 (4) - finish? As in Hard. I love it
13. 02:57:206 (4) - ^
14. 02:57:706 (1,3) - maybe make it symmetrical
15. 03:05:706 (1) - remove finish and turn off the volume
16. 03:29:706 (1,2,3) - stack it all or don't stack it
17. 03:46:956 (1) - remove nc?
18. 03:56:956 (x) - add a note with clap?
19. 03:58:956 (x) - ^
20. 04:02:956 (2) - clap
21. 04:06:956 (4) - clap-clap

1. 00:01:706 ~ 00:08:706 - remove all claps and add whistles. Sounds better.
2. And add whistles throughout the map, please
3. 00:24:206 (2) - you forgot clap
4. 01:13:706 (x) - start break here
5. 01:33:956 (2) - remove clap and add it to the blue tick as in first part (00:13:956 (2,3) - )
6. 01:34:956 (2,3) - ^
7. 01:35:956 (2) - remove clap?
8. 02:24:956 (2,3) - maybe change claps to whistles? As in 01:04:956 (4,5) -
9. 02:41:706 - omg, I love this part
10. 03:05:706 (1) - remove finish and turn off the volume

Reiji-RJ wrote:

Hello..

[General]

1. Seems fine

[Normal]

1. 00:01:706 (1) - change clap to whistles is better
2. 00:05:706 (2) - ^
3. 00:11:706 (1) - whistle
4. 00:13:706 (1) - ^
5. 00:14:706 (2) - ^
6. 00:15:706 (1) - ^ and add whistles throughout the map
7. 00:23:706 (3,4,1) - maybe not stack? Because you have stacked notes 1/2, so it may be thought as 1/2
8. 01:07:206 (3,4,5) - stack it all or don't stack
9. 01:13:706 (x) - maybe start break here
10. 01:43:706 (6) - nc?
11. 02:33:706 (x) - maybe start break here
12. 02:49:456 (4) - finish? As in Hard. I love it
13. 02:57:206 (4) - ^
14. 02:57:706 (1,3) - maybe make it symmetrical
15. 03:05:706 (1) - remove finish and turn off the volume
16. 03:29:706 (1,2,3) - stack it all or don't stack it
17. 03:46:956 (1) - remove nc?
18. 03:56:956 (x) - add a note with clap?
19. 03:58:956 (x) - ^
20. 04:02:956 (2) - clap
21. 04:06:956 (4) - clap-clap

[Hard]

1. 00:01:706 ~ 00:08:706 - remove all claps and add whistles. Sounds better.
2. And add whistles throughout the map, please
3. 00:24:206 (2) - you forgot clap
4. 01:13:706 (x) - start break here
5. 01:33:956 (2) - remove clap and add it to the blue tick as in first part (00:13:956 (2,3) - )
6. 01:34:956 (2,3) - ^
7. 01:35:956 (2) - remove clap?
8. 02:24:956 (2,3) - maybe change claps to whistles? As in 01:04:956 (4,5) -
9. 02:41:706 - omg, I love this part
10. 03:05:706 (1) - remove finish and turn off the volume

Good job!

Almost Fixed
Thanks Modding and star~

Neptunus wrote:

Hey~

Normal:
Nice flow in this diff
00:15:706 (1) - suggest cancel the newcombo and start the newcombo at 00:16:706 (3) -
00:39:706 (1) - cancel newcombo here because you did not newcombo at 00:32:706 (4) - ,which is on a same rhythme
either cancel newcombo at 04:02:706 (1) - or newcombo at 04:08:706 (4) -

Hard:
00:16:706 (4) - newcombo ,only suggestion here
00:24:206 (2,3) - no, space out please
01:04:956 (4,5) - I suggest that these 2 notes are without whistles but with claps on them
01:21:706 (1,2,3,4,5) - little bit style suggestion here~ you can make it like this:

which means you stack 01:21:706 (1) - and 01:22:706 (3) -
01:23:706 (1,2,3,4,5) - same suggestions on these
02:24:956 (2,3) - without whistles but with claps

Solid mapset~
Good luck on ranking~

spboxer3 wrote:

from tutuhaha and spboxer3's Mod queue

[general]

• 
  Settings
  

1. none~

[Normal]

• 
  
  mapping
  

1. 00:59:706 (5) - not regular~ please fix it fixed

[Hard]

• 
  
  mapping
  

1. 03:05:456 (7) - use 03:04:706 (1) - and ctrl+Jfixed

No kds~thanks

Nymph wrote:

Hi Nymph here and request from my queue.

General:
nothing.


Normal:
Issue
AR+1 OD+1? score can get about 2.7million, just make the diff spread looks better. OD+1

Beatmap design/suggestion
01:13:706 (1) - why don't just let the spinner stops at here, the finish sound perfect at here. ???
01:53:206 (2) - little spacing inconsistent. ok,fixed
02:17:706 (1,2,3,4) - ehh.... a rectangle here? I thought it should be a square. fixed a little
02:33:706 (1) - why don't just let the spinner stops at here, the finish sound perfect at here.???
03:46:706 (4,5,6) - little spacing inconsistent, looks a little ugly. fixed?
04:02:206 (3) - ^little nazi but 1 grid right would be better. fixed


Hard:
Beatmap design/suggestion
00:18:956 (2,3,4,5,6) - I don't think this fit the music very much......not very comfortable to play
00:20:956 (2,3,4,5,6) - and same..
01:11:706 (1) - spinner stuff same as I said in normal.???
01:48:706 (3,4,5) - try to make the spacing of the pattern more consistent, really not beautiful currently. fixed a little
01:50:706 (3,4,5) - ^ ^

Hitsound
00:13:706 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - I don't really like the way of the claps here, but..whatever, I just think whistle maybe better. Fixed
01:30:206 (2) - only here got a whistle and clap together. on purpose? oh,my mistake,fixed
02:24:956 (2,3) - clap instead of whistle maybe? feel a little werid that seems only here you are using whistles at the claps place. fixed


I think these are all for me. good luck!

[Ranger] wrote:

Nymph wrote:

01:13:706 (1) - why don't just let the spinner stops at here, the finish sound perfect at here. ???

Nymph wrote:

01:13:706 (1) - I mean, in normal diff, maybe let this spinner 01:11:706 (1) - : stop at 01:13:706 instead of 01:13:206. so it fits better and the finish hitsound sounds better too. Sorry for my poor explanation#_#

And same 02:33:706 here, and hard diff 01:11:706, I think it is better to let the spinner stops at the long white tick, instead of letting the break time starts at there.

Muya wrote:

[Normal]:
00:53:706 (1,2) - move to x:324 y:232. 00:54:706 (3,4) - x:188 y:232 fixed
01:41:706 (1,2,3,4,5) - Hard part here. please reduce note fixed
02:18:206 (2,3) - (2) move to x:326 y:271 (3) move to x:186 y:271
02:43:706 (1) - remove new combo fixed


[Hard]:
01:42:706 (2) - delete. and copy 01:41:706 (1) - and Rotate 180° ? fixed

Cirno wrote:

hi there, sorry for being very late

[General]

Artist = Kousaki Satoru, this is the arranger for this instrumental track. Hanazawa Kana is the vocalist and shouldn't be used.

[Normal]

01:11:706 (1) - why not end at 01:13:206 ? it sounds and feels better
others fine

[Hard]

till 00:09:706 - imo the rhythm here is way too generic, especially for an instrumental track, paying more attention to the music can bring more interesting gameplay but well, pop song arrangements doesn't have much to map since they are made to support the vocal tracks.
00:22:081 (3) - see pic

SPOILER

[attachment=1:14053]c1.JPG[/attachment:14053]

00:23:081 (6) - ^
00:41:706 - 01:11:206 - same issues as said to the beginning part.
01:11:706 (1) - why not end at 01:13:206 ? it sounds and feels better
01:22:956 (4) - maybe just make (3,4,5) straight, this doesn't look that good
01:24:706 (3,4,5) - ^
02:25:706 (1) - maybe this is better

SPOILER

[attachment=0:14053]c2.JPG[/attachment:14053]

not much to say, good luck. Just remember that you have to full submit for the artist field.

Dark_Ai wrote:

Here we go~

Normal

00:09:706 (1) - spacing
01:24:706 (2,3,4) - I dont like this part with circle ._. make a slider like this http://puu.sh/ihqo I think it's better ><
01:25:706 (1) - it isn't follow the beat ._. delete this slider and add a note there and 01:26:206 (1/1)
01:26:706 (-) - sam here ^
02:23:206 (4) - add new combo
02:23:706 (1) - delete new combo

but it seems fine for me

Hard

I dont like the streams in this Diff ._. it isnt follow the beat ._.
01:58:206 (2,3,4) - like change this part please... it doesn't fit at all purely :/
01:59:706 (1,2,3,4) - same here ^
02:45:456 (1) - delete new combo
02:45:706 (2) - new combo

short mod >< but yeah

Good luck ~

Leorda wrote:

Annyong

Normal
00:25:206 (4,1) - Not stacked correctly at tail slider while gameplay
01:01:706 (1,2,3,4) - These spacing are completely different on each circles. Re-space this pattern please
02:17:706 (1,2,3,4) - ^ (if you think this is jump, no)


Hard
01:04:956 (4,5) - Add clap?
02:24:956 (2,3) - ^


That's all~

[general]

1. .OSB should be removed

[Normal]

1. 00:35:706 (3,3) - NC
2. 00:51:706 (3) - ^
3. 00:59:706 (5) - ^
4. 01:07:206 (3) - change 2 circle ? and NC at 1:07:706 ?
5. 01:27:706 (5) - NC
6. 02:03:706 (2) - ^
7. 02:07:706 (3) - ^
8. 02:11:706 (5) - ^
9. 02:43:706 (2) - ^
10. 03:45:206 (2) - change 2 circle ? and NC at 03:45:706 ?
11. 03:51:706 (3) - NC
12. 04:08:706 (1) - remove NC

[Hard]

1. 00:43:706 (2) - NC
2. 00:47:706 (3) - ^
3. 00:56:456 (6) - remove NC
4. 02:32:456 (1) - ^
5. 03:54:456 (1) - ^
6. 04:02:706 (1) - ^
7. 04:08:706 (1) - ^