narakucrimson wrote:

[Yuki YukI]

1. 00:20:787 (2,4) - Honestly, I think these two claps don't sound so good. Perhaps it would be better if you remove them and add a clap at (3). fixed
2. 00:23:254 (1) - Some hitsound here to follow the SB would be cool, too. add a whistle here
3. 00:32:419 (1) - This new combo isn't really needed, consider removing it. removed it
4. 00:34:534 (1) - I suggest ending the spinner here and removing this circle. It might be a little hard to see due to the hitburst. fixed
5. 00:37:354 (1,2) - It would be nice if these two were parallel :3 fixed
6. 00:48:281 (1) - A new combo here could be a good idea, and if you do, you should remove the next one (00:50:043 (1)) and add one at 00:51:453 (6). fixed
7. 00:54:273 (1) - I'd say you should at least end this 1/4th earlier. Also, it's pretty hard to see the approach circles of the next circles... try placing them somewhere else that isn't the middle of the playfield. fixed
8. 01:16:832 (1) - Sounds like a new combo to me! fixed
9. 02:35:788 (9) - New combo, yeah. fixed
10. 02:40:371 (1,2,3,4,5) - Again, can you move this away from the center? Because of the hitburst. fixed
11. 03:02:048 (2) - This gets too trick with such a jump here (x1,96). Place it at x1, please. x1 is too close i use x1.30 instead
12. 03:26:546 (4) - Ok this slider would be unrankable, actually, when the new rules get applied. The way the slider track overlaps itself (and also circles the start) makes it really hard to tell in which direction it starts. Try something else, please. use spinner here
13. 03:48:400 (3) - This x0,5 is sooo confusing. Sooo confusing. Use 0,75, and try some other way to place it. fixed
14. 03:54:745 (4,8) - New combos here, please. fixed
15. 04:04:967 (2,4) - Again, I think it sounds better with just a clap at (3). fixed

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  Skin:

1. Actually, I was wrong last time when I said that the skin elements have "the right size"
   Those CtB elements (fruits and fruits overlays) seem to be rather big. The images could be cropped ehm... A lot, to save some filesize.
2. You seem to be missing a reversearrow.png in your folder. It is needed if you have a custom hitcircle~

3. narakucrimson wrote:

   A white slider border doesn't quite fit your hitcircleoverlay. I suggest using some dark grey. If yu don't like that, at least try to find something that isn't white, it doesn't really look so well.
   Also, a third combo colour would be grrrreat. I'm not a big fan of just using two combo colours, that's why I'm suggesting this~

   I insist about this. First of all you need to have a custom sliderborder because you have a custom hitcircle. And in second place, a third combo colour would look miiighty nice!
4. Also, I already said that you could complete the skin set. It would be veery nice~

1. Woah that .osb file omg! 257 kb! Next time try using some loops please!

2. narakucrimson wrote:

   There's just the Thumbs.db file in the SB folder, that is totally unused; but you don't have to worry about it since it's only 7,0 extra KB

   The file is still there hehe.

1. You still have the 20 seconds long break in some difficulties
2. How about having a Taiko-specific background? It can be the same you're using right now but with some customization, such as adding some shadows, blurs, etc.

1. The Countdown is activated only in this diff... You should de-activate it for consistency (did you apply my previous mod...?)
2. The stats seem rather high for an Easy... You should lower AR, HP Drain Rate and OD a bit, imo.

1. Why is Letterbox During breaks activated in this diff? Is that intentional? I'd suggest to turn it off

narakucrimson wrote:

Rechecking~
Also, I already said that you could complete the skin set. It would be veery nice~[/list]

1. Kiais:
   You have some unsnapped kiais in some difficulties, for example at:
   
   1. 02:18:869
   2. 03:44:875
   Please check that every kiai in every difficulty is snapped!
2. Hitsounds:
   
   1. Overall, I think that the volume is a little too high. You should consider playing a bit with inherited sections, lowering the volume so it goes along with the "soft" feeling of the song at some points.
      This goes especially for some spinner that seemed too noisy, imo.
   2. To be honest, at first, I thought that the hitsounding was very poor in the sense that I thought that you used too few hitsounds.
      Then, I came to believe that it was the hitsounds themselves that were too low and weren't heard so well.
      Now, I think that both things are happening simultaneously.
      For example, I can't almost hear the whistles. Perhaps you should find a new .wav that's louder, dunno.
      And then, you could have used much more custom claps. They actually sound pretty well and fit the song. [Yuki YukI] is a good example for this

1. Overall, about the spacing, you have the exact value to make every 1/2 object not touch the next/previous one. And there are some that are touching one another, for example:
   
   SPOILER

   00:25:722 (4) -
   With the DS and SV you have chosen, you should be able to make every 1/2 look like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
   This is something aesthetical, and I know it's a little too nazi of my part But please, if you could, everything would look much better.
   Also if I were to be even more nazi, I'd have to say "make spacing consistent!"

Lissette wrote:

Sakura
01:40:448 (10) - move to prev blue tick, fits more the music, you can also add a note where the spinner starts moving the spinner to the next blue tick ok
02:03:007 (3) - same ok
02:14:110 (6,7,8,1,2) - instead of these notes a slider fits better, till this point 02:14:639 - ok
02:56:585 (7) - this is slider sounds totally off, try this.... http://puu.sh/cU5P ok
since break times on this diff arer practically at the end, a break here 01:19:651 - would be nice, like in Yuki YukI sorry I don't think it D: Umm...yukiyuki is guest diff. so I think we doesn't need same!!

Yuki YukI
00:35:238 (1) - new combo bug, add new combo again OK
01:38:685 (4) - place this note a bit farther from prev slider, so this note is in jump too, like the next notes OK
03:44:851 - delete inherited section ok
03:56:129 - same ok

Normal
Delete inherited timing section that you are not using done done
a break here 01:19:651 - fits better than the one you have since this part of the song is calm, like in Yuki YukI, your actual break time sounds pretty nice to map ;_; sorry smae as sakura

Easy
00:57:093 (1) - this is to fast after the spinner for an easy diff fix it
01:19:651 -same about break time as normal ok

Taiko Oni
02:48:478 (1,2,1,1,2) - sounds off, try same as i said on Sakura 02:56:585 (7) - yes
02:56:585 (1,1,2,1) - same here ok
03:15:619 - add note here? sure:D

Hitsounds are <3 but I didn't like how slider tick sounds on Easy and Normal diff, i would of use slider tick 1 to avoid this, because ruins the softness of this song T.T

*Falling in love with this song*~ *.*

Nice~

spboxer3 wrote:

Lissette wrote:

Sakura
01:40:448 (10) - move to prev blue tick, fits more the music, you can also add a note where the spinner starts moving the spinner to the next blue tick ok
02:03:007 (3) - same ok
when i said to change to prev tick i thought was obvious that you need to fix spacing because this jumps is just wrong

02:14:110 (6,7,8,1,2) - instead of these notes a slider fits better, till this point 02:14:639 - ok
i meant a slider without reverse, you can keep it if you want, but the reason i suggested this is because all those notes doesn't fit the song imo

since break times on this diff arer practically at the end, a break here 01:19:651 - would be nice, like in Yuki YukI sorry I don't think it D: Umm...yukiyuki is guest diff. so I think we doesn't need same!!
I never said it need to be the same as yuki yuki just beacause, i said that since you don't have a break time till minute 03:06:807 you should have one earlier, and yuki yuki's break is in a good point to add yours too.

spboxer3 wrote:

Lissette wrote:

Sakura
01:40:448 (10) - move to prev blue tick, fits more the music, you can also add a note where the spinner starts moving the spinner to the next blue tick ok
02:03:007 (3) - same ok
when i said to change to prev tick i thought was obvious that you need to fix spacing because this jumps is just wrong

02:14:110 (6,7,8,1,2) - instead of these notes a slider fits better, till this point 02:14:639 - ok
i meant a slider without reverse, you can keep it if you want, but the reason i suggested this is because all those notes doesn't fit the song imo

since break times on this diff arer practically at the end, a break here 01:19:651 - would be nice, like in Yuki YukI sorry I don't think it D: Umm...yukiyuki is guest diff. so I think we doesn't need same!!
I never said it need to be the same as yuki yuki just beacause, i said that since you don't have a break time till minute 03:06:807 you should have one earlier, and yuki yuki's break is in a good point to add yours too.

Remember be careful when fixing something, because you can mess up other things

Sakura
04:14:639 (1) - due to multiples offsets the slider end isn't snapped, use single notes in this part so all is snapped properly

Sandpig wrote:

EDIT: BPM貌似好像应该是170

narakucrimson wrote:

A section was added, but I don't really think that his has to be rebubbled again.

Happy birthday, spboxer3!

KayeSara wrote:

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