Larval Stage Planning - Trip -innocent of D- (TV Size) · forum

Snowy Dream

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Snowy Dream 2012-01-16T13:11:55+00:00

长喜淫荡 =A=
竟然开18X的

wcx19911123

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wcx19911123 2012-01-16T13:36:01+00:00

updated
thanks for modding

L_P

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L_P 2012-01-16T17:04:49+00:00

快ban了hentai wcx

HARD
没问题的随手FC了。。找碴吧。。

依照前面的势头来看 00:24:561 (4,5) - 这俩应该stack的。。
00:30:048 (3) - add repeat and delete note 4?
00:34:805 (4) - 用repeat减低难度吗？

好诡异的insane居然躲在hard后面- -
00:28:494 (x) - 加个note感觉更美好？
00:41:756 (2) - 这个slider出现的不大理想？不如用两个antijump note (跟note 1 ）取代？
01:01:512 (1,3) - 这里的vocal在拖拍，不如这个slider拉长一点？http://puu.sh/dBku ？
01:14:317 (5) - tail finish?

normal
00:08:463 (6) -用repeat取代吧？比较容易。。。
00:14:317 (7) - ^
01:04:439 (3) - 可以跟1,2形成一个三角形（头部）比较美？http://puu.sh/dBmd
01:05:170 (4) - head finish?

easy
good job!

随手送你一颗星吧。。

bossandy

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bossandy 2012-01-17T12:31:52+00:00

Hi hi~ request from my queue~

General :

Lead-In不用整數嘛? 雖然是一樣的

Easy :
00:38:097 (1,2,3) - 我的話一定用slider 這樣比較順
01:22:000 (2,3,4) - ^
01:20:536 (1,2) - 把NC去掉然後再2加NC 讓他的Part跟其他diff一致

Normal :
00:11:024 (6) - 開頭去clap比較好因為這樣比較有漸層的感覺而且音樂也只有後面三拍有重音
00:34:805 (6) - 開頭加clap不? 再節奏變快時加的話打起來會比較舒服~
01:16:878 (6) - 開頭去clap
01:22:000 (1) - 加NC吧跟Hard一樣在這換Part比較好

Hard :
00:11:024 (3) - 去clap
00:23:097 (4) - 我知道你可能不想疊到1的slider上(猜測) 但是spacing不對!!!
00:24:012 (2) - 這裡小跳沒什麼意義移到x:88 y:56吧
00:28:585 (2,3,4,5) - 變慢速度是從00:29:317 開始所以這裡還是用之前的spacing吧
00:34:439 (3) - 我的話會把音效顛倒過來
00:39:378 (6) - spacing有點小錯誤但是很小應該沒差多少XD
00:46:329 (5,6,1) - 連三拍都不同位置的note spacing不一樣比較難打把5移到6上面吧
00:51:177 (5) - 有是很小的spacing錯誤... 用Tiny grid size往上移一小格吧
01:10:292 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 慢慢變大聲不? 不然打起來沒啥感覺...
01:16:512 (2) - 結尾去clap

Insane :
00:34:439 (4) - 音效倒過來
01:16:878 (2) - 去clap

務必要閱讀~!
紅色:是我覺得unrankable的 藍色:建議但個人認為要改的 黑色:就單純建議

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不管怎麼mod都還是只有一些請見諒!~ Star!~

可以做個Taiko diff嘛?

Suzully

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Suzully 2012-01-19T01:38:09+00:00

From my modding queue.

[General]

Remove "op" from tags. It doesn't work because of two letters.

Even if you warned of the video scene, people can't necessarily know it. For example, in case people dl'd this map via osu! direct.
You should do something to hide obscene scene, or remove the video.

[Easy]

00:38:097 (1,2,3,4) - It's kinda hard for newbie to read these notes because it's also hard to hear this rhythm of the music (At the end, 01:22:000 (2,3,4) can be said same thing but that one is easier to hear than this.). I recommend you to change (1,2,3) to a one-repeat-slider.

[Normal]

Fine.

[Hard]

00:28:585 (2,3,4,5) - I think the slow part begins at 00:29:317, it's still better to use 1.0x DS here imo. On the other hand, I also know these notes make it easier to read next slow part. So I leave it to you
00:35:170 (T) - The slow part was finished yet, 1.00x SV fits more imo.
00:36:634 (1,2) - Between these notes, I don't know why only this spacing is different from other notes without any logics.

[Insane]

Great.

The map is great as always.
If this map won't be bubbled after it satisfied my criteria(refer to my userpage), feel free to call me back to recheck.
Star for now :3

wcx19911123

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wcx19911123 2012-01-19T10:30:08+00:00

Suzully

Suzully wrote:
From my modding queue.

[General]

Remove "op" from tags. It doesn't work because of two letters.
fixed

Even if you warned of the video scene, people can't necessarily know it. For example, in case people dl'd this map via osu! direct.
You should do something to hide obscene scene, or remove the video.
ok , I added some sb to cover those stuff..
[Easy]
00:38:097 (1,2,3,4) - It's kinda hard for newbie to read these notes because it's also hard to hear this rhythm of the music (At the end, 01:22:000 (2,3,4) can be said same thing but that one is easier to hear than this.). I recommend you to change (1,2,3) to a one-repeat-slider.
fixed
[Normal]

Fine.
[Hard]
00:28:585 (2,3,4,5) - I think the slow part begins at 00:29:317, it's still better to use 1.0x DS here imo. On the other hand, I also know these notes make it easier to read next slow part. So I leave it to you keep this , I think it is good for players to know the speed will slow down later
00:35:170 (T) - The slow part was finished yet, 1.00x SV fits more imo. just keep for now , I want to speed up when kiai time coming
00:36:634 (1,2) - Between these notes, I don't know why only this spacing is different from other notes without any logics. keep this. now slider (1) blanket slider (2) with a good shape , if I fix the spacing , slider (1)'s shape will be odd to blanket slider (2)
[Insane]

Great.
The map is great as always.
If this map won't be bubbled after it satisfied my criteria(refer to my userpage), feel free to call me back to recheck.
Star for now :3

thanks for modding

sherrie__fay

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Joined October 2010

sherrie__fay 2012-01-20T10:27:44+00:00

skin done.

puush file will be deleted in 7 days.

http://puu.sh/dZ8e

someone said:
SB and skin elements don't deserves KDS.

ahaha.

._.

wmfchris

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wmfchris 2012-01-21T08:47:53+00:00

皮老闆不是禁了18+了麼

wcx19911123

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wcx19911123 2012-01-21T10:57:18+00:00

wmfchris wrote:
皮老闆不是禁了18+了麼

咦，什么时候禁的。。
~~那我改成15+好了0.0~~

AdriiaN_old

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AdriiaN_old 2012-01-22T03:58:18+00:00

Un buen Beatmap al igual que el anime!
An excellent beatmap!

KayeSara

KayeSara 2012-01-23T22:06:02+00:00

BG自己组装的，名字就叫TaikoBG（这动画好H，BG很难找到自己喜欢的那种萝莉
9颗星了反正都要泡了，扔Star可惜了

TaikoBG

Download: Larval Stage Planning - Trip -innocent of D- (TV Size) (wcx19911123) [KS's Taiko].osu

wmfchris

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wmfchris 2012-01-24T03:45:44+00:00

新年快樂

等你決定了加不加taiko我就來看

wmfchris

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wmfchris 2012-01-24T10:19:23+00:00

._. 我要紅包(伸手

[Insane]
00:11:207 (5,6) - [Nazi] down 1 grid
00:46:329 (5) - placement suggestion: place around (208,136)?

[Hard] 我靠比insane還高rating .____.
00:23:463 (1) - cruve adjustment

0,216,23463,6,0,B|56:128|144:128,1,160,0|8

[Normal]
good

[Easy]
good

[Taiko]
Taiko skin's position is not correct

SPOILER

你看還有條黑邊
00:31:512 - try k d k k d k---k d
00:42:488 - ddk k
00:45:414 - move this 1/2 later
01:23:463 - add one more d and spinner 1/2 later

嗚嗚嗚王長喜好變態

P.S. 那video怎樣說~~都看到了~~是18+, 前車之鑑這個比那個更明顯吧

至少我的底線是直接在影片中碼掉, 或者你先多問幾個蝙蝠的意見, sorry

KayeSara

KayeSara 2012-01-24T17:15:43+00:00

wmfchris wrote:
[Taiko]
Taiko skin's position is not correct
SPOILER
你看還有條黑邊
放过我吧 mat大人。。。你每次都要吐槽我这个黑线，实话说真的只能做到这样啊>_<
00:31:512 - try k d k k d k---k d Fix
00:42:488 - ddk k Fix
00:45:414 - move this 1/2 later Fix
01:23:463 - add one more d and spinner 1/2 later Fix, spinner 1/4later

Download: Larval Stage Planning - Trip -innocent of D- (TV Size) (wcx19911123) [KS's Taiko].osu

wmfchris

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wmfchris 2012-01-24T17:19:33+00:00

好像每次都是只有我看到黑線...可是的確有其他taiko bg沒事 orz

wcx19911123

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wcx19911123 2012-01-25T04:04:03+00:00

wmfchris

wmfchris wrote:
._. 我要紅包(伸手给你红包0.0

[Insane]
00:11:207 (5,6) - [Nazi] down 1 grid fixed
00:46:329 (5) - placement suggestion: place around (208,136)? no , this note looks fine and play with good flow here , so I keep it

[Hard] 我靠比insane還高rating .____. 因为I爆星了 :3
00:23:463 (1) - cruve adjustment umm , I fixed a bit by myself
0,216,23463,6,0,B|56:128|144:128,1,160,0|8
[Normal]
good

[Easy]
good

嗚嗚嗚王長喜好變態胡说我很善良的

P.S. 那video怎樣說~~都看到了~~是18+, 前車之鑑這個比那個更明顯吧
至少我的底線是直接在影片中碼掉, 或者你先多問幾個蝙蝠的意見, sorry
昨天问了几个BAT的意见，于是我决定删掉vid了QAQ ~~这哪里H嘛（slap）~~

thanks for modding :3

ok , I removed the video..
updated

arien666

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arien666 2012-01-30T13:59:53+00:00

Well, 2nd thing was okay so here's something ;_;

cRyo[iceeicee]

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cRyo[iceeicee] 2012-02-05T14:26:38+00:00

wcx19911123 wrote:
ok , I removed the video..
updated

SPOILER

Nymph

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Nymph 2012-02-06T17:08:44+00:00

wcx19911123 wrote:
ok , I removed the video..
updated

SPOILER

suzutsukikanade

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suzutsukikanade 2012-02-06T18:30:33+00:00

wcx19911123 wrote:
ok , I removed the video..
updated

SPOILER

Curisu

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Joined January 2010

Curisu 2012-02-12T07:52:46+00:00

wcx19911123 wrote:
ok , I removed the video..
updated

SPOILER

路过
~~吐槽一下source是D×D~~

Garven

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Garven 2012-02-13T04:55:29+00:00

[Easy]
00:05:902 (3) - New combo

[Normal]
00:41:390 (1) - Really soon after a spinner for a Normal

[Taiko]
00:35:079 - d?
00:41:756 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Feels rather over-done considering there's only two beats in the music
01:23:555 (1) - Although it doesn't matter for taiko so much, it was weird seeing this spinner end one tick earlier than all the other difficulties.
I don't think there were any K or D in the entire map. Makes me sad. :<

[Insane]
01:11:756 (1,2,3,4,5) - This was kind of weird considering the rhythm from 00:05:536 (7,1,2) -

Nice set.

wcx19911123

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wcx19911123 2012-02-13T05:20:32+00:00

Garven wrote:
[Easy]
00:05:902 (3) - New combo fixed

[Normal]
00:41:390 (1) - Really soon after a spinner for a Normal I think this is fine , spinner is long enough and the slider is in the middle of the screen , no too hard to play

[Insane]
01:11:756 (1,2,3,4,5) - This was kind of weird considering the rhythm from 00:05:536 (7,1,2) - uh.. I think this rhyme is fine , it's a transition to next part

Nice set.

KayeSara

KayeSara 2012-02-13T05:38:48+00:00

>Garven
Fix all of them except finish.
Thanks for your modding :3

Download: Larval Stage Planning - Trip -innocent of D- (TV Size) (wcx19911123) [KS's Taiko].osu

Garven

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Garven 2012-02-13T05:55:06+00:00

Booooop

Kawayi Rika

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