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Pereira006
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Pereira006
hello~~

General

  1. Hard TAG are inconsistency

    Hard: Saten-san akareh inaba-tan yuno gasai yukiteru amano yandere god 1st 2nd deus ex machina future diary OP opening

    and another diff's are :Saten-san akareh inaba-tan yuno gasai yukiteru amano yandere god 1st 2nd deus ex machina Future Diary OP opening

    so you hard only "future" and "diary" are different another so pleasse make same TAG
  1. also you all diff need disable "letterbox during breaks" because you have video so pleasse disable that
Some Suggestions
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Easy

  1. 00:54:170 (4) - grid 1 left because need symentric with 00:53:127 (2) or just intentional?
  2. 01:25:997 (1) - grid 1 right
relax play
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Akareh's Normal

  1. 00:30:953 (1) - just nazi need 1 grid up to fix spacing IMO
  2. 00:37:214 (3,4) - pleasse don't make jump because the bpm are 230 and too hard catch here on normal so pleasse fix spacing also if you fix spacing you need fix spacing at 00:37:997 (5) too
  3. 01:18:562 (4,5) - grid 1 right because the (4) need symentric with 01:17:518 (1)
  4. 01:25:866 (1,2) - they are not perfect stack try perfect stack with 0.00x
stuff cool
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Hard

  1. 00:19:214 (1) - grid 1 left with symentric 00:19:736 (3)?
  2. 00:21:823 (4) - grid 1 up with symentric 00:22:084 (5,6) ?
  3. 00:24:692 (5) - grid 1 up with symentric 00:24:171 (4)?
  4. 00:35:258 (3,4,5) - inconsistency spacing
  5. 00:45:040 (1) - this are ugly arc with 4 point must better if use 5 point http://puu.sh/ezlC here code if you wanna symentric arc also if you use you need fix spacing at 00:45:823 (2)
    336,200,45040,6,0,B|348:252|400:272|452:252|464:200,1,180,0|8
  6. 00:53:649 (1) - grid 1 dowm with symentric 00:54:171 (3,4)
  7. 01:16:344 this line green timing are unsnapped
stuff cool
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Saten

ho my gaw
stuff cool :(
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Deus Ex

you crazy mapper orz
stuff aswome
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the mod are just suggestions but you have fix the General anyway
that all i think and star because nice gameplay and great mapper
good luck and bye bye
Suzully
osu! Alumni
2,446 posts
Joined July 2010
Suzully

Pereira006 wrote:

hello~~

General

  1. Hard TAG are inconsistency

    Hard: Saten-san akareh inaba-tan yuno gasai yukiteru amano yandere god 1st 2nd deus ex machina future diary OP opening

    and another diff's are :Saten-san akareh inaba-tan yuno gasai yukiteru amano yandere god 1st 2nd deus ex machina Future Diary OP opening

    so you hard only "future" and "diary" are different another so pleasse make same TAG
  1. also you all diff need disable "letterbox during breaks" because you have video so pleasse disable that
Not a problem even if tags are capital or not...and also you need not to think about letterbox because all diffs have no break...
But yeah, there is no reason that I prevent you to fix them...call me back again after fix, rickyboi.
*sign* How many times will I recheck and rebubble :lol:
rickyboi
Topic Starter
rickyboi

Pereira006 wrote:

Hard
you need fix spacing at 00:45:823 (2)
I didn't use distance snap on this one, It's fine as it is so I'm not gonna change it.

Thank you for the compliment and mod ;)

@Suzully
Sorry about this.. People have been popping up so suddenly.
Suzully
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2,446 posts
Joined July 2010
Suzully
Improving the map is pretty good thing.

Rebubbled. again :P

To BAT:
[Saten] and [Deus Ex] have more than three slider speeds, but they are fine imo because...
About [Saten], a note that is used 4th SV is only one, 00:57:301 (3), and it's not confusing and not big gap.
About [Deus Ex], 1.00x SV is not used.
rickyboi
Topic Starter
rickyboi
Thank you again for always checking my map.

How do I get a 2nd bubble again?
Saten
Global Moderator
3,863 posts
Joined August 2010
Saten

rickyboi wrote:

Thank you again for always checking my map.

How do I get a 2nd bubble again?
you don't.

Only approval maps need 2 bubbles.
rickyboi
Topic Starter
rickyboi

Saten-san wrote:

rickyboi wrote:

Thank you again for always checking my map.

How do I get a 2nd bubble again?
you don't.

Only approval maps need 2 bubbles.
Then I guess I should just wait.
SuperMIC
420 posts
Joined July 2011
SuperMIC
Hellou, just a few things I wanted to point out:

[Akareh's Normal]

[01:12:431] (1) - Probably would look better if you centered this.
[01:23:779] (1) - This would sound better if you pulled either of the ends by one pixel. Then resnap the notes after.

[Hard]

[01:25:866] (1) - You might want to turn the volume down even further hear, the spinner sounds kinda ruins the quiet ending. You can turn it back up at the end of the spinner for the final hitsound.

---

It looks really nice, good luck! :D
Akareh
771 posts
Joined February 2010
Akareh

SuperMICrophone wrote:

[Akareh's Normal]

[01:12:431] (1) - Probably would look better if you centered this. ok
[01:23:779] (1) - This would sound better if you pulled either of the ends by one pixel. Then resnap the notes after. Sounds fine for me as is

Pereira006 wrote:

Akareh's Normal

00:30:953 (1) - just nazi need 1 grid up to fix spacing IMO ok
00:37:214 (3,4) - pleasse don't make jump because the bpm are 230 and too hard catch here on normal so pleasse fix spacing also if you fix spacing you need fix spacing at 00:37:997 (5) too fixed
01:18:562 (4,5) - grid 1 right because the (4) need symentric with 01:17:518 (1) ok
01:25:866 (1,2) - they are not perfect stack try perfect stack with 0.00x ^
Download: Yousei Teikoku - Kuusou Mesorogiwi (TV size) (rickyboi) [Akareh's Normal].osu
Saten
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Joined August 2010
Saten
Gonna pop the bubble again? o_o
rickyboi
Topic Starter
rickyboi

Saten-san wrote:

Gonna pop the bubble again? o_o
Yeah, no BATS are checking it anyway. I think this should be the last.

Updated again.
Suzully
osu! Alumni
2,446 posts
Joined July 2010
Suzully
Okay. This is third time though :P

To BAT:
[Saten] and [Deus Ex] have more than three slider speeds, but they are fine imo because...
About [Saten], a note that is used 4th SV is only one, 00:57:301 (3), and it's not confusing and not big gap.
About [Deus Ex], 1.00x SV is not used.
mancuso_JM_
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4,615 posts
Joined October 2010
mancuso_JM_
NO MORE BUBBLE POP PLEASE :P
Congratz on ReReReBubble :)
al2e10
1,101 posts
Joined August 2008
al2e10
Here to pop the bubble

First,
[Deus Ex] End the note at 01:26:605. And Saten ended at 01:26:649.
Two diff. end points. Should any of the diff. chnage the endding time?

Next,
WANNING that, the slience soft-sliderslide.wav is not rankable.
- Such as Hard should be changed Slider Tick Rate to 1.
- Cannot cover the slider tick sound to upper your Tick Rate.

Finally,
-Akareh's Normal
01:22:214 (2,3) - Spacing problem. (Found in AImod)
Saten
Global Moderator
3,863 posts
Joined August 2010
Saten
There should be a limit on how many times you pop a bubble on a single beatmap D:

>Non of those things looks critical enough to pop the bubble again
rickyboi
Topic Starter
rickyboi

KingsAL2 wrote:

Here to pop the bubble

First,
[Deus Ex] End the note at 01:26:605. And Saten ended at 01:26:649.
Two diff. end points. Should any of the diff. chnage the endding time?
- Not a good enough reason for me to pop the bubble, but I'll think about it.

Next,
WANNING that, the slience soft-sliderslide.wav is not rankable. - It's rankable. refer to this Yousei Teikoku - Kuusou Mesorogiwi
- Such as Hard should be changed Slider Tick Rate to 1.
- Cannot cover the slider tick sound to upper your Tick Rate. - Okay..

Finally,
-Akareh's Normal
01:22:214 (2,3) - Spacing problem. (Found in AImod) - Nothing wrong with this. Distance snap 1.3x was used on the whole song.
Last edited by rickyboi , edited 1 time in total.
Weez
2,318 posts
Joined February 2009
Weez

KingsAL2 wrote:

Next,
WANNING that, the slience soft-sliderslide.wav is not rankable.
Silent slider ticks are unrankable not the slider.
rickyboi
Topic Starter
rickyboi

Weezy wrote:

KingsAL2 wrote:

Next,
WANNING that, the slience soft-sliderslide.wav is not rankable.
Silent slider ticks are unrankable not the slider.
I tried asking around #modhelp.



Okay I'm popping the bubble due to some Music and Title issues.
Also gonna use this opportunity to use KingsAl2's mod for the last unmatched timeline note.

Waiting for something please don't rebubble yet.
lolcubes
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4,437 posts
Joined November 2010
lolcubes
Okay, before I even think about modding this, here are a few things.

You didn't apply your mp3 change properly, I am still getting the old mp3.

In the folder you have a picture called "You'reSoF*ckedNow" without the censure, you should really rename this as this is highly inappropriate. Don't forget to fix it in your diffs and do a full submit ofcourse.

Also a tip when you change your mp3: Always call it differently compared to your old one, because it's easy to notice if you have the right mp3, since if you didn't have the right one, you would get an "audio error" message or something.
And one last thing, check if you still have your original map folder (the folder in \Songs\ without the number before the map name), because that can mess up with full submits as well.

Don't kudo this post.

edit: I have also checked your ticks. If you are using silenced ticks with tick rate 2, you are doing something wrong. You should be using tick 1 instead. Silenced ticks are good to use when you have a slider tick which is located where nothing plays in the music, as you can't change the tickrate without changing the bpm. Those cases aren't that common and in general it's a bad thing to do.
rickyboi
Topic Starter
rickyboi

lolcubes wrote:

Okay, before I even think about modding this, here are a few things.

You didn't apply your mp3 change properly, I am still getting the old mp3. - Updated

In the folder you have a picture called "You'reSoF*ckedNow" without the censure, you should really rename this as this is highly inappropriate. Don't forget to fix it in your diffs and do a full submit ofcourse. - Oops forgot to change this lol.

edit: I have also checked your ticks. If you are using silenced ticks with tick rate 2, you are doing something wrong. You should be using tick 1 instead. Silenced ticks are good to use when you have a slider tick which is located where nothing plays in the music, as you can't change the tickrate without changing the bpm. Those cases aren't that common and in general it's a bad thing to do. - Ok thank you for this.
Updated!

- Replaced silenced slider tick.
- Tick rate 2 remains.
Elly-chan
969 posts
Joined January 2011
Elly-chan
Your Late Bubble Pop Mod~ >w<.

Yousei Teikoku - Kuusou Mesorogiwi (TV size)

(General)
  1. Incorrect title. The title should be 'Yousei Teikoku - Kuusou Mesorogiwi (TV Size'. [We talked about this on IRC.]
  2. Incorrect preview point. The part where it is currently placed has no emphasis and the kiai isn't near it. I suggest you start the preview time at 00:51:652, instead. It has emphasis and it's a bridge to the chorus. [We also spoke about this on IRC]
  3. Remove 'op' from the tags. If you want to include the fact that this is opening, use only 'opening' like you did. If you disbelieve you should do this, search all ranked beatmaps by typing in 'op'. None of them have that as a tag.
  4. Why didn't you map the beginning of the mp3 on Easy, Normal, or Hard? I recommend that you keep consistency and map the beginning of the mp3 of all three difficulties. (If you do so, add a 1500 leadin to Easy, Normal, and Hard.)
  5. I think that at 01:17:348 - in every difficulty, you should add a kiai time. It feels kiai-worthy, as it is filled with exitement and awesome BGM. I also think you should do this [as I just checked MafiaMaster's ranked version] because [MafiaMaster] used it for his map. If you decide to do this, end the kiai at 01:25:696.
(Easy)
Hitsound and Combo mods
  1. 00:07:957 (Spinner) - Remove the Finish. Totally unneeded and it breaks your hitsound pattern.
  2. 00:25:174 (3) - If I'm following up on your combo pattern correctly, there should be a New Combo here. It fits with the music's change in mood and follows your previous combo pattern.
  3. 00:37:174 (3) - I highly suggest for you to add a new combo here since the singer switches verses. If you do not add a new combo here, you MUST remove the new combo at 00:41:348.
  4. 00:50:739 (2) - New combo since you are now following the background voices? >w< I don't know about this one, It's fine either way. This is completely optional.
  1. 00:06:130 (Spinner) - I highly disbelieve that you should start the spinner here. Please, start it at the main downbeat (00:06:391) or remove it in general. It plays better. (We talked about this in IRC, already fixed.)
(Akareh's Normal)
Hitsound and Combo mods
  1. 00:23:087 (6) - You forgot to add a new combo here. (Yes, this does indeed follow your combo pattern, and it also means that you must remove the new combo at 00:24:130.)
  2. 00:55:957 (5) - Maybe add a new combo here as you did at the begining of the kiai? Completely optional.
(Hard)
Hitsound and Combo mods
  1. 00:34:044 (4) - You should have a new combo here to follow the combo pattern you are using. Add one, please?
  2. 01:20:739 (1) - Looking at your combo pattern, there shouldn't be a new combo here. Remove it, please.
Last edited by Elly-chan , edited 1 time in total.
rickyboi
Topic Starter
rickyboi

Elly-chan wrote:

[*]Remove 'op' from the tags. If you want to include the fact that this is opening, use only 'opening' like you did. If you disbelieve you should do this, search all ranked beatmaps by typing in 'op'. None of them have that as a tag. - Okay.
[*]Why didn't you map the beginning of the mp3 on Easy, Normal, or Hard? I recommend that you keep consistency and map the beginning of the mp3 of all three difficulties. (If you do so, add a 1500 leadin to Easy, Normal, and Hard.) - I know what you're trying to say but It's not really necessary to map that part for all difficulties and I want the map to be this way.
[*]I think that at 01:17:348 - in every difficulty, you should add a kiai time. It feels kiai-worthy, as it is filled with exitement and awesome BGM. I also think you should do this [as I just checked MafiaMaster's ranked version] because [MafiaMaster] used it for his map. If you decide to do this, end the kiai at 01:25:696.[/list] - Okay.

(Easy)
[*]00:07:957 (Spinner) - Remove the Finish. Totally unneeded and it breaks your hitsound pattern. - Okay
[*]00:25:174 (3) - If I'm following up on your combo pattern correctly, there should be a New Combo here. It fits with the music's change in mood and follows your previous combo pattern. - Okay
[*]00:37:174 (3) - I highly suggest for you to add a new combo here since the singer switches verses. If you do not add a new combo here, you MUST remove the new combo at 00:41:348. - Okay
[*]00:50:739 (2) - New combo since you are now following the background voices? >w< I don't know about this one, It's fine either way. This is completely optional. - It's fine as it is.



(Hard)
[*]00:34:044 (4) - You should have a new combo here to follow the combo pattern you are using. Add one, please? - Removed new combo on 00:29:870 (4) instead for consistency.
[*]01:20:739 (1) - Looking at your combo pattern, there shouldn't be a new combo here. Remove it, please. - Okay
Thanks for the mod! ;)
Last edited by rickyboi , edited 1 time in total.
rickyboi
Topic Starter
rickyboi
AH ~
Akareh
771 posts
Joined February 2010
Akareh
[quote="Elly-chan"]
[*]I think that at 01:17:348 - in every difficulty, you should add a kiai time. It feels kiai-worthy, as it is filled with exitement and awesome BGM. I also think you should do this [as I just checked MafiaMaster's ranked version] because [MafiaMaster] used it for his map. If you decide to do this, end the kiai at 01:25:696. okay


(Akareh's Normal)
Hitsound and Combo mods
  1. 00:23:087 (6) - You forgot to add a new combo here. (Yes, this does indeed follow your combo pattern, and it also means that you must remove the new combo at 00:24:130.) Ok
  2. 00:55:957 (5) - Maybe add a new combo here as you did at the begining of the kiai? Completely optional. nope, sorry. The new combo is at 00:56:478 to follow the lyrics, like at 00:52:304 (Eins, zwei, drei means 1, 2, 3). So I'm not going to change that.
:V

Download: Yousei Teikoku - Kuusou Mesorogiwi (TV Size) (rickyboi) [Akareh's Normal].osu
rickyboi
Topic Starter
rickyboi
@Akareh
I fixed your kiai timing point to 01:17:478 (1) and 01:25:304 (3) because the previous time lines doesn't have a note in it.

Updated and done with everything. ;)

Just gonna wait for lolcubes.
Elly-chan
969 posts
Joined January 2011
Elly-chan

Elly-chan wrote:

ASDASDASD I GOT LAZY UNFINISHED MOD IS UNFINISHED
orz, did you guys not read that? ;N;
rickyboi
Topic Starter
rickyboi

Elly-chan wrote:

Elly-chan wrote:

ASDASDASD I GOT LAZY UNFINISHED MOD IS UNFINISHED
orz, did you guys not read that? ;N;
I read it. Are you trying to point something out?
Elly-chan
969 posts
Joined January 2011
Elly-chan
That means I was going to finish the mod within a day but whatever, I guess it doesn't matter now. :c
rickyboi
Topic Starter
rickyboi

Elly-chan wrote:

That means I was going to finish the mod within a day but whatever, I guess it doesn't matter now. :c
Well.. next time it would be better to finish your mod before posting it. I'll still accept yours if you're willing to finish it.
Elly-chan
969 posts
Joined January 2011
Elly-chan
asdasdasd sorry, I'm just usually really busy and I don't want the person to keep waiting forever to get my modpost orz.. Nevermind, I won't finish it. Good luck on getting a rank~ >w< and I know better for the future now~
rickyboi
Topic Starter
rickyboi

Elly-chan wrote:

asdasdasd sorry, I'm just usually really busy and I don't want the person to keep waiting forever to get my modpost orz.. Nevermind, I won't finish it. Good luck on getting a rank~ >w< and I know better for the future now~
Okay. Thanks!

EDIT:
Updated.
Suzully
osu! Alumni
2,446 posts
Joined July 2010
Suzully
Since you changed KIAI, only [Normal] diff had different one.

mp3, title, file name, ticks look all fine now.
rickyboi
Topic Starter
rickyboi
KIAI done changing, Updated.
Suzully
osu! Alumni
2,446 posts
Joined July 2010
Suzully
Good, all stuff are fine now. Rebubble~
rickyboi
Topic Starter
rickyboi

Suzully wrote:

Good, all stuff are fine now. Rebubble~
Thank you again!
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
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Joined August 2008
Andrea
[Easy]

01:25:435 (4) - New combo.
01:25:957 (1) - Remove new combo.

[Akareh's Normal]

00:52:304 (1) - Starting from here until the end of the difficulty volume is really loud, please decrease it a bit.
01:22:174 (2,3) - Inconsistent spacing.
01:25:826 (1) - Silence the tick on this slider, it sounds weird.

[Hard]

01:25:826 (1) - Silence completely this spinner.

[Saten]

00:16:044 (4) - I'm not really sure about this, to be honest. Do something else.
00:22:304 (3) - ^ At least there's a new combo here, though.
00:23:348 (2) - ^ Same as 00:16:044.
00:51:000 (4) - ^ Same here.

That's all, I guess.
Saten
Global Moderator
3,863 posts
Joined August 2010
Saten

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Saten]

00:16:044 (4) - I'm not really sure about this, to be honest. Do something else.
00:22:304 (3) - ^ At least there's a new combo here, though.
00:23:348 (2) - ^ Same as 00:16:044.
00:51:000 (4) - ^ Same here.
did them orz



Download: Yousei Teikoku - Kuusou Mesorogiwi (TV Size) (rickyboi) [Saten].osu
rickyboi
Topic Starter
rickyboi

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Easy]

01:25:435 (4) - New combo. - Okay
01:25:957 (1) - Remove new combo. - Okay

[Hard]

01:25:826 (1) - Silence completely this spinner. - Okay

That's all, I guess.
Thanks and Updated. ;)

@Update
Adjusted position of slider on Deus Ex at 00:31:696.
Akareh
771 posts
Joined February 2010
Akareh

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Akareh's Normal]

00:52:304 (1) - Starting from here until the end of the difficulty volume is really loud, please decrease it a bit.
01:22:174 (2,3) - Inconsistent spacing.
01:25:826 (1) - Silence the tick on this slider, it sounds weird.
I've done everything, I don't know how to silence ticks, so I've silenced the last 2 sliders. I hope that works.

Download: Yousei Teikoku - Kuusou Mesorogiwi (TV Size) (rickyboi) [Akareh's Normal].osu
rickyboi
Topic Starter
rickyboi

Akareh wrote:

I've done everything, I don't know how to silence ticks, so I've silenced the last 2 sliders. I hope that works.
Fixed the last two sliders for you. Take a look at it if you wanna see how I did it. ;)

Anyways Updated everything :)
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