1. Easy v2 (2,03 stars, 136 notes)
2. Easy (1,99 stars, 163 notes)
3. Hard (4,37 stars, 437 notes)
4. Normal (3,06 stars, 191 notes)

HellDawn wrote:

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Good luck :3

Lehon wrote:

Ooooh, thanks so much
What are the images? xD

1. I do not understand a meaning to use the same color for
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2. 00:23:634 (7) - add new combo
3. 00:37:699 (7) - ^
4. 01:03:953 (1) - It is finish first
5. 01:14:736 (7) - add new combo
6. 01:24:581 (3) - ^
7. 01:32:082 (6) - ^
8. 02:07:244 (4) - ^
9. 02:28:341 (1) - It is finish first
10. 02:32:091 (8) - add new combo
11. 02:36:311 (3) - ^
12. 02:38:186 (6) - ^
13. 02:39:593 (10) - ^
14. 02:56:470 (9) - ^
15. 03:22:724 (4) - ^
16. 03:25:537 (3) - ^
17. 03:26:475 (5) - ^
18. 04:02:106 (1) - It is finish first
19. 04:05:387 (5) - add new combo
20. 04:07:731 (11) - ^
21. 04:17:108 (1) - It is finish first
22. 04:26:484 (5) - add new combo
23. 04:32:110 (1) - It is finish first
24. 04:36:330 (9) - add new combo
25. 04:39:611 (1) - It is finish first
26. 04:47:113 (1) - ^
27. 04:51:566 (10) - add new combo
28. Your map has many spaces.
29. Having various people watch your map Recommend
    
    That's all~
    

phonic wrote:

I do not understand a meaning to use the same color for

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1. Prova offset 18.959, sembra perfetto. (Ricorda di resnappare tutte le note e le green lines e lo sb)
2. http://puu.sh/8VYz The Edge Of Glory.png nella folder non lo usi, di conseguenza eliminalo e full submit
3. Che brutto BG <.< E 600x373 non penso proprio vada bene lol. Potresti usare questo: http://puu.sh/8VZW se non ti piace ce ne sono tanti altri belli.
4. Perchè la Easy la finisci prima rispetto alle altre 2? <.< Terminala nello stesso punto della hard e normal, è meglio.

L_P wrote:

hello
from mod request
all suggestion cause your map is nice and rankable

HARD

the only thing i wanna criticize your map is like things in 00:22:475 (6) - slider shape.
it doesnt blanket the previous note nice enough. many slider shape could be nicer also
and it is obvious enough to see that the spacing is not even between 00:27:632 (2,3,4) .

00:44:978 (7) - add break dude
01:05:841 (5) - make it symmetrical
01:08:654 (8) - why like this? not nice to see
your first break is too long (?)
02:10:539 (4) - spacing
02:59:999 (6) - can add a spinner after this
04:18:996 (1,2,3,4) - like the previous four sliders, you should have similar system also...
05:02:128 (1) - try end it silence?

thats all. no insane?

CDFA wrote:

A map graving? NOT ON MY WATCH.

But let's go on an adventure here or something. Sorry for the long wait ;D (Although in CDFA standards, it's pretty fast)
Overall:
You need a 4:3 ratio background, just so there aren't any black bars. The easiest thing you can go is the go to google images, and then press "exactly" and be like "1024x768", then type "Lady Gaga."

I just chose a random one that I haven't seen yet. Feel free to use it

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A video would be nice too.
Hard:
00:30:210 - Kinda awkward blank space here o-o
02:05:850 - Where the clappus go?!
03:56:492 - WARNING WEEOOOH WEEEOOH
04:11:964 (5) - New Combo. Or on (6)
04:36:343 (9) - New Combo. Or on (8)

Normal:
Solid, but map it the full length! I know it's hard, but you can do it!~

Easy:
ADD PREVIEW POINT.
00:45:538 - Also awkward silence.
Map the full length!

I know I said a lot, and a lot of big stuff, but I'm going to star this. Your hard really impressed me, especially if this is your first map (even though you said second map in the description o-o), and your normal and easy are solid too. Just fix the cool stuff

1. 00:24:584 (1) - Lengthen to the long white tick
2. 01:33:970 (1,2,3,4,5) - Stacking makes this not aligned, and 5 stacked notes are boring anyways. Try a pattern.
3. 01:27:876 (1) - Looks ugly against the previous slider, try flattening to make it parallel, then symmetric.
4. Then do the same for the copypasta.

1. 00:35:355 (4) - Not symmetric because the end node extends past the actual end. See this for more details.
2. 00:37:700 (1,3) - ^
3. 00:42:270 (3) - ^
4. 00:43:325 (5) - Not symmetric, move center node left 1 grid
5. 01:15:204 (1) - Pull the first node right 1 grid
6. 02:01:618 (6,1) - I wouldn't stack these at 1 beat apart since the previous two notes were stacked 1/2 beat apart. Or just add a note at 02:01:852 to the stack.
7. 02:03:493 (2,3) - ^
8. Then do the same for the copypasta.

1. 00:18:958 (1) - If this was meant to be symmetric, it suffers from the same problem I brought up in Normal.
2. 00:27:632 (2,3) - Spaced too closely
3. 00:56:465 (1) - Asymmetric
4. 01:20:843 (7) - The repeat here is in quite an awkward place, consider making it shorter and repeating twice.
5. 02:07:022- add a circle
6. 02:07:257 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Set this up into a nice-looking pattern, right now it looks quite random
7. 02:44:763 (1,2,3) - Space equally
8. 02:56:483 (1,2,3,4) - Make some kind of pattern?
9. 03:32:114 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This part was quite boring as simply clicking on what appears to be randomly placed notes, generically placed 1 beat apart. Again, try some interesting patterns.
10. I don't think that warning about 1.5x is necessary.

akrolsmir wrote:

Hello, Lehon!

Alright, first off there's a gigantic AIBat printout. You might want to try downloading the program and using it to check your maps in the future, it'll catch a lot of ranking problems and save modders a lot of time and effort. /shamelessplug

AIBat Warnings

These warnings were generated by AIBat v1.0, based on the current ranking guidelines and rules. Some things (like breaks and spinners) can be ignored, but just know that it's generally a bad practice.

[Storyboard]
Epilepsy Warning:
A storyboard was detected, you may want to include an epilepsy warning.

[All .osu Files]
General and Metadata:

Inconsistency in PreviewTime:
- [Easy] : -1
- [Hard] : 184903
- [Normal] : 184903

Inconsistency in Countdown:
- [Easy] : 1
- [Hard] : 0
- [Normal] : 0

Inconsistency in LetterboxInBreaks:
- [Easy] : 1
- [Hard] : 0
- [Normal] : 0

Timing Sections:
Inconsistency in uninherited (red) timing sections:

- [Easy]
Red timing sections at:
00:18:959, BPM of 127.980

- [Hard]
Red timing sections at:
00:18:959, BPM of 127.980

- [Normal]
Red timing sections at:
00:11:445, BPM of 127.980

Kiai:
Inconsistency in Kiai Times:

- [Easy] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:03:953, ends on 01:18:877
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:18:955, ends on 01:20:752
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:20:830, ends on 01:22:627
Kiai #4: Starts on 01:22:706, ends on 01:24:517
Kiai #5: Starts on 01:24:581, ends on 01:35:833
Kiai #6: Starts on 02:28:341, ends on 02:43:265
Kiai #7: Starts on 02:43:343, ends on 02:45:140
Kiai #8: Starts on 02:45:219, ends on 02:47:016
Kiai #9: Starts on 02:47:094, ends on 02:48:891
Kiai #10: Starts on 02:48:969, ends on 03:00:221

- [Hard] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:03:953, ends on 01:18:877
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:18:955, ends on 01:20:752
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:20:830, ends on 01:22:627
Kiai #4: Starts on 01:22:706, ends on 01:24:517
Kiai #5: Starts on 01:24:581, ends on 01:35:833
Kiai #6: Starts on 02:28:341, ends on 02:43:265
Kiai #7: Starts on 02:43:343, ends on 02:45:140
Kiai #8: Starts on 02:45:219, ends on 02:47:016
Kiai #9: Starts on 02:47:094, ends on 02:48:891
Kiai #10: Starts on 02:48:963, ends on 03:00:215
Kiai #11: Starts on 04:02:106, ends on 04:16:991
Kiai #12: Starts on 04:17:108, ends on 04:18:866
Kiai #13: Starts on 04:18:983, ends on 04:20:741
Kiai #14: Starts on 04:20:858, ends on 04:22:617
Kiai #15: Starts on 04:22:734, ends on 04:31:993
Kiai #16: Starts on 04:32:110, ends on 04:39:494
Kiai #17: Starts on 04:39:611, ends on 04:54:497
Kiai #18: Starts on 04:54:614, ends on 05:02:584

- [Normal] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:03:953, ends on 01:18:877
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:18:955, ends on 01:20:752
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:20:830, ends on 01:22:627
Kiai #4: Starts on 01:22:706, ends on 01:24:517
Kiai #5: Starts on 01:24:581, ends on 01:35:833
Kiai #6: Starts on 02:28:341, ends on 02:43:265
Kiai #7: Starts on 02:43:343, ends on 02:45:140
Kiai #8: Starts on 02:45:219, ends on 02:47:016
Kiai #9: Starts on 02:47:094, ends on 02:48:891
Kiai #10: Starts on 02:48:963, ends on 03:00:215

[Difficulty: Easy]
Snapping:
01:00:697 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:00:697 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:01:634 (1) - Unsnapped spinner (start).
01:01:634 (1) - Unsnapped spinner (end).
02:34:930 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
02:34:930 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).

Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:
01:03:953
01:18:877
01:18:955
01:20:752
01:20:830
01:22:627
01:22:706
01:24:581
01:35:833
02:28:341
02:43:265
02:43:343
02:45:140
02:45:219
02:47:016
02:47:094
02:48:891
02:48:969
03:00:221

Kiai Times Not On Downbeat:
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:03:953, ends on 01:18:877
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:18:955, ends on 01:20:752
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:20:830, ends on 01:22:627
Kiai #4: Starts on 01:22:706, ends on 01:24:517
Kiai #5: Starts on 01:24:581, ends on 01:35:833
Kiai #6: Starts on 02:28:341, ends on 02:43:265
Kiai #7: Starts on 02:43:343, ends on 02:45:140
Kiai #8: Starts on 02:45:219, ends on 02:47:016
Kiai #9: Starts on 02:47:094, ends on 02:48:891
Kiai #10: Starts on 02:48:969, ends on 03:00:221

Preview Point:
A preview point has not yet been set for this difficulty.

[Difficulty: Hard]
Snapping:

Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:
01:03:953
01:18:877
01:18:955
01:20:752
01:20:830
01:22:627
01:22:706
01:24:581
01:35:833
02:28:341
02:43:265
02:43:343
02:45:140
02:45:219
02:47:016
02:47:094
02:48:891
02:48:963
03:00:215
04:02:106
04:16:991
04:17:108
04:18:866
04:18:983
04:20:741
04:20:858
04:22:617
04:22:734
04:31:993
04:32:110
04:39:494
04:39:611
04:46:995
04:54:497
04:54:614
05:02:584

Breaks:
01:36:046 - The break here is 21253 ms long, which is longer than the recommended 15000 ms.

Kiai Times Not On Downbeat:
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:03:953, ends on 01:18:877
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:18:955, ends on 01:20:752
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:20:830, ends on 01:22:627
Kiai #4: Starts on 01:22:706, ends on 01:24:517
Kiai #5: Starts on 01:24:581, ends on 01:35:833
Kiai #6: Starts on 02:28:341, ends on 02:43:265
Kiai #7: Starts on 02:43:343, ends on 02:45:140
Kiai #8: Starts on 02:45:219, ends on 02:47:016
Kiai #9: Starts on 02:47:094, ends on 02:48:891
Kiai #10: Starts on 02:48:963, ends on 03:00:215
Kiai #11: Starts on 04:02:106, ends on 04:16:991
Kiai #12: Starts on 04:17:108, ends on 04:18:866
Kiai #13: Starts on 04:18:983, ends on 04:20:741
Kiai #14: Starts on 04:20:858, ends on 04:22:617
Kiai #15: Starts on 04:22:734, ends on 04:31:993
Kiai #16: Starts on 04:32:110, ends on 04:39:494
Kiai #17: Starts on 04:39:611, ends on 04:54:497
Kiai #18: Starts on 04:54:614, ends on 05:02:584

[Difficulty: Normal]
Snapping:
00:42:849 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
00:44:738 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
02:26:472 (1) - Unsnapped spinner (start).
02:26:472 (1) - Unsnapped spinner (end).

Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:
01:24:517
02:48:963
03:00:215

Kiai Times Not On Downbeat:
Kiai #10: Starts on 02:48:963, ends on 03:00:215

So...
Set previewtime on easy to 184903
Remove countdown in easy
Set the red timing section in Normal to be on 00:18:959 instead of where it is now. Oh, and the BPM for all diffs should be 128 flat, fix this.
Then resnap all difficulties, and go through making sure that the slider velocities work properly (especially in Hard).

Also, your combo colours look very close, sometimes bordering on indistinguishable. Try different colors than just purple.
I personally don't mind the kiai streams, but others might, and it's usually advised that you don't toggle kiai just for the fountains.

Onto modding!

[Easy]

1. 00:24:584 (1) - Lengthen to the long white tick
2. 01:33:970 (1,2,3,4,5) - Stacking makes this not aligned, and 5 stacked notes are boring anyways. Try a pattern.
3. 01:27:876 (1) - Looks ugly against the previous slider, try flattening to make it parallel, then symmetric.
4. Then do the same for the copypasta.

Fairly nice, the curved sliders were nice and smooth and circular which is somewhat of an uncommon sight. I didn't like sharp sliders (L-shaped ones) but that's just a personal preference.

[Normal]

1. 00:35:355 (4) - Not symmetric because the end node extends past the actual end. See this for more details.
2. 00:37:700 (1,3) - ^
3. 00:42:270 (3) - ^
4. 00:43:325 (5) - Not symmetric, move center node left 1 grid
5. 01:15:204 (1) - Pull the first node right 1 grid
6. 02:01:618 (6,1) - I wouldn't stack these at 1 beat apart since the previous two notes were stacked 1/2 beat apart. Or just add a note at 02:01:852 to the stack.
7. 02:03:493 (2,3) - ^
8. Then do the same for the copypasta.

Again, pretty well patterned. Watch out for sliders that seem like they should be symmetric by their nodes, but actually aren't because of the length.

[Hard]

1. 00:18:958 (1) - If this was meant to be symmetric, it suffers from the same problem I brought up in Normal.
2. 00:27:632 (2,3) - Spaced too closely
3. 00:56:465 (1) - Asymmetric
4. 01:20:843 (7) - The repeat here is in quite an awkward place, consider making it shorter and repeating twice.
5. 02:07:022- add a circle
6. 02:07:257 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Set this up into a nice-looking pattern, right now it looks quite random
7. 02:44:763 (1,2,3) - Space equally
8. 02:56:483 (1,2,3,4) - Make some kind of pattern?
9. 03:32:114 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This part was quite boring as simply clicking on what appears to be randomly placed notes, generically placed 1 beat apart. Again, try some interesting patterns.
10. I don't think that warning about 1.5x is necessary.

Overall, my advice is to work on your patterns that are comprised of circles, because those often felt random, or just like a big arc, which gets repetitive. Don't forget that you don't have to perfectly follow distance spacing in Hard. I really liked a lot of your sliders for being neat, so keep that up. Starred!