fixed some O.OFaust wrote:
Nothing on Easy & Normal ( ´∀`)
eveless: Noticed a few of the nudging overlaps were on purpose and made consistent, it's not much of an issue even if I'm going over "neatness". They're well-suited enough I think, and given your tendency to use them often.
- 00:16:674 (2) - Hmm, it's better not to place this so close in proximity against the previous notes. Maybe something like this formation so their attention is brought more to the right side like this?
- 00:32:453 (3) - Probably on purpose, though I suggest you align this properly?
- 00:42:583 (2) - Would suggest a repeat instead, you would need to remove the note on - 00:43:362 - if you follow this.
- 01:10:050 (5) - Hmm, maybe the only major overlap. Suggest you shift - 01:10:245 (1,2) - more to the right to avoid this.
- 01:36:349 (5) - Seems like an odd angle to put this slider at.
- 02:12:972 (2) - Little touch on this part.
- 02:16:089 (2,3) - Heads up here, might want to take notice of this since you may want to reconsider and change it.
IRC mod for Rin:SPOILER17:27 <Faust> : playing is so crap today
17:28 <NatsumeRin> : hope i didn't make you nervous = =
17:28 <Faust> : hahah
17:30 <Faust> : oh god
17:30 <NatsumeRin> : lol
17:30 <Faust> : didn't see that coming at all
17:30 <Faust> : 02:25:245 (1,2,3,4,5) - maybe you could make them into more compressed stacks
17:31 <Faust> : so people can tell the difference between these and
17:31 <Faust> : 02:26:219 (1,2,3) - these
17:31 <Faust> : lol
17:31 <NatsumeRin> : i hope not compress them too much (not make it like a manual stack)
17:34 <Faust> : gah, video..
17:35 <NatsumeRin> : = =
17:35 <NatsumeRin> : should be better now
17:40 <Faust> : 01:58:557 (1,2,3,4) - always gets me :l
17:40 <Faust> : I think that's about all the things I feel are odd.
17:40 <Faust> : rest is smooth :3
17:41 <Faust> : the animation for the video this time is pretty cool
17:41 <Faust> : few static images
17:42 <NatsumeRin> : osu.ppy.sh/ss/158706
17:42 <NatsumeRin> : what about this?
17:44 <Faust> : Yeah, that's good
17:44 <NatsumeRin> : ok, i'll change
17:45 <Faust> : kinda feel for this song, it's not a good idea to have such pattern stacking
17:45 <Faust> : given the video as well, lol
17:45 <Faust> : it makes you really look for it.
17:46 <Faust> : Out of curiosity, why did you start 02:00:115 (1) here?
17:46 <Faust> : Nothing wrong with it, just curious :3
17:46 <NatsumeRin> : well... if starts at the white line it feels late a bit
17:46 <NatsumeRin> : just that, nothing special
17:47 <Faust> : I think regardless of why, it's perfect, despite being overlapped
17:47 <Faust> : the vocal rises and sinks, it kinda "connects"
17:48 <NatsumeRin> : yep, part of the meaning
17:48 <NatsumeRin> : another part... is i just love overlap
17:48 <Faust> : haha
17:49 <Faust> : 02:25:245 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - this section is fine for me now at 2nd attempt so you could let it stay and wait for
17:49 <Faust> : other opinions
17:49 <NatsumeRin> : hehe, i think most players will feel "wtf" at the first try
17:50 <NatsumeRin> : but when they calm down and they could feel the part= =
17:50 <NatsumeRin> : this is probably a part i won't change for any reasons
17:50 <Faust> : looks like 1/4, so they will miss. Then the actual 1/4 maybe some will still 1/2
17:50 <Faust> : lol
17:50 <Faust> : Yeah
17:50 <Faust> : you need to be calm and read the music at that part
Excellent.
Download: Hatsune Miku - Senbonzakura (Short Ver.) (NatsumeRin) [eveless].osu
