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Atsumi Saori - Mou Sukoshi, Mou Sukoshi ...

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tom800510
258 posts
Joined June 2008
tom800510
OK.

THERE IS TOO MANY DISTANCE WRONG TO POST AS I SAW.

maybe you should fix them in use distance snap(dont forget turn off grid snap when you fix it)

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few unrankable slider as i saw.
normal:
02:34:572
03:16:084(maybe not use 1/8 in normal)
hard:
01:06:666
insane:
01:03:875
01:13:468(maybe not rankable, hardly to read)
02:11:549
03:16:084(ask for bats to do it, maybe turn as before)
03:51:055(WHATS THIS?)
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suggest.
normal:
00:21:142~00:23:759 maybe overlap them , but i like it better now
00:42:596 end at here sounds weird
00:43:293 dont start at here, nothing from it.
00:50:968~00:52:712 if you dont wanna set note here, just fix it to one spinner
01:08:846~01:10:677 weird part
01:34:224~01:36:666 weird part
02:23:410 make corner farrer than begining will be better
03:03:177~03:05:619 overlap them?

hard:
01:20:881 why you end it here?
01:25:503 extend it fore 1/2(start at 01:25:328)
02:11:549 Still little hard to read
02:42:427 fix as 01:25:503

insane:
add circle at 00:16:607 , 00:16:956 , 00:17:305(funner)
01:25:503 extend it fore 1/2
03:07:014 Weird!
03:33:177~03:36:491 im not sure its playble , i could beat this part though :(
04:02:828 as 01:25:503
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you will get other check after fix them well ;)
tom800510
258 posts
Joined June 2008
tom800510
use distance snap to reset your weird space

you have to reset all with one by one check

and you will find out it have many ways to fix :(
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how to do?
turn your option as the picture
and reset note one by one



and your hard/insane's BG is gone

reset them and full upload.
tom800510
258 posts
Joined June 2008
tom800510
see here.

Atsumi Saori - Mou Sukoshi, Mou Sukoshi ...

Atsumi Saori - Mou Shukoshi, Mou Sukoshi ...


thats why you got another upload

http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?t=11038

call Bats if you wanna delete one of them
mattyu007
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Here since the beginning
mattyu007
Ok, deleted the new map. Please download this one and perform a Full Resubmission.
WyndII
777 posts
Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
WyndII
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Al-Azif
436 posts
Joined August 2008
Al-Azif
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
tom800510
258 posts
Joined June 2008
tom800510
insane:
01:25:503(1) move to 01:25:328
04:03:526(1) set the "M" beautier
last part of spinnesr , boring.

as i saw, there are some parts ugly
and many notes sounds weird( specailly, solf finish)
but few things bad

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hard:
third breaking is too long i guess
03:53:759(1) every ugly

seems hard sounds better than insane
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normal:
too many parts look same as in hard
thats no good for me

no mod this difficulty, unless you fix out it
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Suggestion Note Set.
seems you wanna set the double "M" in hard,
so set as the pic




Star for much improve
Pasonia
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Pasonia
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WyndII
777 posts
Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
WyndII
I tried to put a Storyboard but i think its ugly :(
And I also added 'epic chorus', its so cool to use it :lol:
Tell me if I overused it and tell me how to fix the SB?
Al-Azif
436 posts
Joined August 2008
Al-Azif
can you change the backgound colour to black / white? its hard to see the approach circle when everything in green colour

Normal:

Perhaps the storyboard continues after the map end.
To fix this, you need to use Notepad to open the .osb,
Copy the those code from :

//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
4,3,1,"count3.png",320,240
 M,0,4572,4660,141,226,141,226
....
..
//Storyboard Sound Samples

Then , in the Hard/Insane's .osu
to replace these line :

//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

After this, remove the .osb file, also those unncessary sound samples.
At last , Full upload again

Hard :

00:30:38 (1) - fix this whistle sound pls

Insane:

03:03:87 (1,1) - this is circle or slider?
03:47:13 (1,1) - spacing?
Al-Azif
436 posts
Joined August 2008
Al-Azif
Insane:
02:23:41 (1,2) - Spacing :o
maybe move the slider (1) to the right side for the circle (2), space with DS 1.0 there

its good enough to shoot a star :P
im not going to nazi one gird spacing..up down left right
WyndII
777 posts
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Topic Starter
WyndII
Thanks Al. :)
Alace
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Joined August 2008
Alace
<Normal>
Where is the BG ??
00:23:75 (1) a little ugly
00:26:54 (1)~00:32:47 (1) i think this part is a little hard in normal (spacing)
maybe you can find some players to test this area
02:00:38 (2) start point up 1 (tiny grid)

<Hard>
00:46:663(1) fix the end point, ogly XD
you have some short spinners in hard
i think sliders more fit those parts (ex 01:25:32 (1) )

<Insane>
Where is the BG ??
02:11:02 (1) I think this one looks better (pic)

good map
as Al said
I won`t be nazi too
Star it~

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WyndII
777 posts
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Topic Starter
WyndII

Alace wrote:

<Normal>
Where is the BG ??
00:23:75 (1) a little ugly
00:26:54 (1)~00:32:47 (1) i think this part is a little hard in normal (spacing)
maybe you can find some players to test this area
02:00:38 (2) start point up 1 (tiny grid)
fixed


Alace wrote:

<Hard>
00:46:663(1) fix the end point, ogly XD lol
you have some short spinners in hard
i think sliders more fit those parts (ex 01:25:32 (1) )
Sliders Spinners prolonged

Alace wrote:

<Insane>
Where is the BG ??
02:11:02 (1) I think this one looks better (pic)
awesome! XD

Alace wrote:

good map
as Al said
I won`t be nazi too
Star it~
xD thanks for modding
Last edited by WyndII , edited 1 time in total.
abalee
osu! Alumni
1,994 posts
Joined June 2008
abalee
Good map need a star ;)
no kd plz :D
Lesjuh
Elite Mapper
2,442 posts
Joined October 2008
Lesjuh
I'm very tired now to be honest and I don't have much time so I've overseen some small things. Here are some examples of what you can improve.

Insane:
00:45:386 (5) - Place this beat on (3) - 00:44:689
00:55:154 (1) - Place this slider on the note before it.
01:16:782 (2,3) - I have no problem with this but I dunno id all BAT's approve this overlapping.
01:21:317 (1) - looks prettier if you place it on the slider before it.
01:46:084 (1) - looks prettier if you place it on (2) - 01:45:212
Similiar things are in all difficulties but there are no serious problems with it.

Hard is fine.

Normal is also fine but in both difficulties i've had many 'dunno about it's' only BAT's can be sure if it's rankable.
In my opinion everything is ok however you still can improve this map by making the patterns prettier and such.

gotta sleep.
WyndII
777 posts
Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
WyndII
Thanks for modding :)
kioukiou
774 posts
Joined June 2008
kioukiou
Nice storyboard , I like it.

[Normal]
fine

[Hard]
03:53:58 (3,1) - spacing

[Insane]
full of jumps XD
But seems fine

/me shoots star
WyndII
777 posts
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Topic Starter
WyndII
Thanks! :)
vytalibus
osu! Alumni
870 posts
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vytalibus
Okay, still screwed up. I want you to do the following:

1. Rename the audio file. I want you to remove those periods.
2. Open the .osu files and rename the AudioFileName to the new name you gave the audio file.
3. Refresh the beatmap.
4. Do another full submission, just in case.
WyndII
777 posts
Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
WyndII
Uhm.. this what happened when I rename the file.(pic when choosing)

I can't scroll too. (pic when editing)



Ivalset
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Ivalset
When making vyt's changes, do not rename the .osu files, and do not change the title of the map under song setup. Only change the filename of the .mp3, and only change the AudioFilename line in the .osu to match the filename of the mp3.

They should look something like this.

WyndII
777 posts
Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
WyndII
I see. I now understand how to fix it.


DONE!!!

now can you guys check the map na? xD
Jarby
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Joined August 2008
Jarby

WyndII wrote:

I see. I now understand how to fix it.


DONE!!!

now can you guys check the map na? xD
Full submit it.
WyndII
777 posts
Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
WyndII
Ok I full submitted it .
And I full submit it again..
Jarby
2,962 posts
Joined August 2008
Jarby
The 2nd countdown shakes a bit. And the 3rd one is pretty flat. You manually faded the ending storyboard, didn't you? It flicks occasionally. Also, the manga pages are of inconsistent quality, and are resized.

Normal:

Combos don't have much consistency.

00:34:22() - Timing section a 1/4 earlier.
01:01:08() - Timing section a 1/4 earlier.
01:58:99 (1) - Too big a jump.
02:02:47() - Timing section 1/4 earlier.
02:23:41 (1) - Bad ending.

Hard:

Combos, blah, blah. Same timing section fixes

00:11:89 (3) - 1/2 short, or replace with a circle and slider.
00:20:27 (1) - Are direct overlaps like this allowed?
00:20:96 (1) - Doesn't start on vocals and has no reason not to.
00:46:43 (1) - Remove finish from end.
01:11:00() - Remove break.
01:19:22 (1) - Stack to start of previous slider.
01:25:50 (1) - Drag to the start of 'sa' and end a beat before the next circle.
02:11:54 (1) - Remove the finish from the end, or try and compress it down a beat.
02:41:89 (1) - Move forward a beat and extend 2 beats.
04:03:52 (1) - Overlapping slider thingy. If they are allowed, you should at least overlap them completely.

Insane:

Blah, blah.

01:25:50 (1) - Drag to the start of 'sa' and end a beat before the next circle.
03:04:22 (2) - Plain ugly overlapping.
03:50:44() - Switching to soft soundset for a bad reason.
Alace
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Alace
<Normal>
From 00:27:94~00:32:47
Use Distance snap 0.7X to work ( spacing fix)
other diffs are fine
WyndII
777 posts
Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
WyndII
uuuuuuuupdate :o

Ok, so i did some things

This map has some major issues
WyndII
777 posts
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Topic Starter
WyndII
double posting!!

I m gonna remake insane xD


Im very sorry to those who modded my normal and insane.. very sorry. :oops:
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
[Normal]

00:16:78 (4) - Align perfectly with (3). Turn grid snap off.
00:22:71 (2) - ^
00:29:34 (6) - New combo.
00:41:20 (7) - ^
01:09:10 (4) - Align perfectly with (3). Turn grid snap off.
01:54:10 (10) - New combo.
02:02:479 - Move this section here -> 02:02:131 -> Sounds better.

[Insane]

01:23:410 - This section needs 2x bpm warning.
03:27:596 - Remove this break.
03:30:038 - ^

Wooh, nice map, and nice storyboard :3

Take a star.
mosluv
748 posts
Joined December 2008
mosluv
Yay nazi mod ^_^! Couldn't tell if the alignment of the notes mentioned below were intentional or not since a lot of places the alignment was fine.

Normal:
Make the storyboard that starts after normal ends only for insane or this won't end until the whole song does.

00:16:78 (4) - Restack on end of slider.
00:20:27 (6) - ^
00:22:71 (2) - ^
00:41:54 (8) - Stack the end on 7.
00:42:24 (9) - Restack on end of slider.
01:06:66 (1) - Stack the end properly.
01:09:10 (4) - Restack.
01:29:68 (1) - Make this heart look better. <3
01:50:96 (6) - New combo.
01:54:10 (10) - ^
02:07:71 (6) - ^
02:08:41 (7) - Restack the end on 6.
02:32:47 (3) - Restack on end of slider.

Insane:
00:27:24 (3) - Clap on end of slider.
00:45:73 (4) - Align the end of slider on the hitcircles.
00:53:41 (5) - Restack on end of slider.
01:05:96 (6) - ^
01:15:03 (5) - New combo.
01:47:47 (1) - Clap.
01:51:66 (2) - Align on fading 4.
02:11:54 (1) - Make this heart look better. :3
02:21:49 (5) - Restack.
02:33:17 (4) - Restack on end of slider.
02:36:66 (4) - Align end of slider properly.
03:04:22 (9) - Align the end of this slider on 6.
03:49:57 (6) - New combo.
03:52:71 (12) - ^
03:58:64 (6) - Align the end of the slider with 5's end.

Love this map. So relaxing :) ! Star :D !
WyndII
777 posts
Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
WyndII
comments on bold XD

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Normal]

00:16:78 (4) - Align perfectly with (3). Turn grid snap off. You mean I'll align 3 to 4 and no need to turn grid snap off
00:22:71 (2) - ^
00:29:34 (6) - New combo.
00:41:20 (7) - ^
01:09:10 (4) - Align perfectly with (3). Turn grid snap off.
01:54:10 (10) - New combo.
02:02:479 - Move this section here -> 02:02:131 -> Sounds better. yea, it does sound better.

[Insane]

01:23:410 - This section needs 2x bpm warning. no need, I remap it to normal sliders.
03:27:596 - Remove this break.
03:30:038 - ^

Wooh, nice map, and nice storyboard :3 Thanks! ^-^ thanks for modding! xD

Take a star.

Nexy wrote:

Yay nazi mod ^_^! Couldn't tell if the alignment of the notes mentioned below were intentional or not since a lot of places the alignment was fine.

Normal:
Make the storyboard that starts after normal ends only for insane or this won't end until the whole song does. press Skip button or space.

00:16:78 (4) - Restack on end of slider.
00:20:27 (6) - ^
00:22:71 (2) - ^
00:41:54 (8) - Stack the end on 7.
00:42:24 (9) - Restack on end of slider. omg where?
01:06:66 (1) - Stack the end properly.
01:09:10 (4) - Restack.
01:29:68 (1) - Make this heart look better. <3 haha, right ventricle is now a bit slender lol and I, accidentally slide down my mouse and heart became sexy, Nexy =D
01:50:96 (6) - New combo.
01:54:10 (10) - ^
02:07:71 (6) - ^
02:08:41 (7) - Restack the end on 6.
02:32:47 (3) - Restack on end of slider.

Insane:
00:27:24 (3) - Clap on end of slider.....
00:45:73 (4) - Align the end of slider on the hitcircles.
00:53:41 (5) - Restack on end of slider.
01:05:96 (6) - ^
01:15:03 (5) - New combo.
01:47:47 (1) - Clap. Sounds better =D!
01:51:66 (2) - Align on fading 4.
02:11:54 (1) - Make this heart look better. :3 new kokoro! it's the same with normal lol
02:21:49 (5) - Restack.
02:33:17 (4) - Restack on end of slider.
02:36:66 (4) - Align end of slider properly.
03:04:22 (9) - Align the end of this slider on 6.
03:49:57 (6) - New combo.
03:52:71 (12) - ^ there is no 12 in 3:52:71 >:{ anyway skip this lol
03:58:64 (6) - Align the end of the slider with 5's end.

Love this map. So relaxing ! arigatou =D
blissfulyoshi
osu! Alumni
4,755 posts
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blissfulyoshi
No nazi post from me. Even though those alignment issues really annoy me, I will hold back.

Normal:
00:12:59() - I really wished you mapped a little more in this area because the drain hurts a little, but I guess it is not that bad
00:19:92 (5,6) - make the spacing similar to 2 and 3, or try to make the curve more symmetrical
00:20:27 (6) - realign this 6 onto the end of 1
00:25:50 (1) - a little hard for a normal
00:41:20 (1) - realign 1 onto the end of 2
01:06:66 (1) - realign this to end directly on 5
01:42:94 (1) - wish the end of this slider was consistent with the end of 1,2,3 slope
02:03:17 (3) - make this an exact replica of 1
02:06:66 (5) - have this end directly on 2

Insane:
00:20:96 (4) - the 2's score covers the repeating slider, so it is difficult to see
00:29:86 (4) - this is one of the few sliders that repeat more than once, so most ppl will not notice this repeats 3 times
00:54:80 (3) - have this be where the end of 1 and 5 are, or align 5 and the end of t1 on 3 (the origin)
01:10:50 (5) - another hidden repeat (this could stay since you do this pattern multiple times throughout the song)
01:17:82 (1,2,3) - this appears crooked while playing...? (There are also similar occurances of this throughout the song)

I don't like the way insane is mapped with switching between wide spacing and stacking two notes on top of each other constantly. It seems to break the flow and make the song confusing to play.

Other than that, great map. Star.
mosluv
748 posts
Joined December 2008
mosluv

WyndII wrote:

00:42:24 (9) - Restack on end of slider. omg where?
Was this always a 3? lol Restack the 3 @ the end of the fading slider.

WyndII wrote:

03:52:71 (12) - ^ there is no 12 in 3:52:71 >:{ anyway skip this lol
D: Became a 7! Must have been hallucinating while doing this @_@. Anyways, make this a new combo?

:?
WyndII
777 posts
Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
WyndII
comments on colors lol

blissfulyoshi wrote:

No nazi post from me. Even though those alignment issues really annoy me, I will hold back.

Normal:
00:12:59() - I really wished you mapped a little more in this area because the drain hurts a little, but I guess it is not that bad doesn't hurt a little ;)
00:19:92 (5,6) - make the spacing similar to 2 and 3, or try to make the curve more symmetrical
00:20:27 (6) - realign this 6 onto the end of 1
00:25:50 (1) - a little hard for a normal look overall diff, it's so low you can 300ed it at 250 s/min
00:41:20 (1) - realign 1 onto the end of 2 it really looks that way.
01:06:66 (1) - realign this to end directly on 5 done already in nexy's nazi mod
01:42:94 (1) - wish the end of this slider was consistent with the end of 1,2,3 slope
02:03:17 (3) - make this an exact replica of 1 they are ^^
02:06:66 (5) - have this end directly on 2

Insane:
00:20:96 (4) - the 2's score covers the repeating slider, so it is difficult to see
00:29:86 (4) - this is one of the few sliders that repeat more than once, so most ppl will not notice this repeats 3 times uhm that's why there's an approach circle >.>
00:54:80 (3) - have this be where the end of 1 and 5 are, or align 5 and the end of t1 on 3 (the origin)
01:10:50 (5) - another hidden repeat (this could stay since you do this pattern multiple times throughout the song)
01:17:82 (1,2,3) - this appears crooked while playing...? (There are also similar occurances of this throughout the song)

I don't like the way insane is mapped with switching between wide spacing and stacking two notes on top of each other constantly. It seems to break the flow and make the song confusing to play.

Other than that, great map. Star. XD thank you ^0^
lol @ Nexy
tieff
Featured Artist
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tieff
[Normal]
00:44:689 (1) - Maybe make slider vertically?
00:49:921 (7) - Up 1 grid? (Lvl 3 grid)
01:54:456 - Maybe clap here?
03:02:479 (1) - Why new combo?
03:08:759 (1) - ^

[Insane]
00:17:828 (5) - Down 1 grid?
01:42:247 (4) - Left 1 grid?

Nice map. Starred.
Mashley
2,042 posts
Joined September 2008
Mashley
You need to up snapping, I think

Normal
03:02:47 (1) - Add a finish sound?

Insane
Fine

Blaaah starred.
Hikato
444 posts
Joined August 2008
Hikato
Some suggestions :D

[Normal]
00:11:20 (3) - Align with end of previous 3
00:16:08 (3) - Align with 1,2 and 4
00:17:13 (5) - ^
00:17:82 (1) - Align with start of previous 5?
00:22:88 (3,4,5) - Align with 2
00:27:07 (2) - Move 1 grid 3 down.
00:27:24 (3) - Move 2 grid 3 down.
00:32:13 (7) - Align on top of 3
00:37:88 (2,3,4) - Align with end of 1
00:41:20 (1) - Align with the end of 2
00:49:22 (6) - Align with end of 5
00:52:36 (2,3) - Align with 1
01:29:68 (1) - Align start and end?
01:49:57 (4) - Align with end of 3
02:03:00 (2) - Align with 1 or move like this
02:08:41 (2) - Align on end of 5
02:10:15 (4) - Align on end of 2
02:20:96 (2) - Align the end with 3
02:23:41 (1) - Align end with start of 2
02:32:47 (3,4,5,6) - Align with end of 2?
02:46:78 (1,2) - Align with end of 6
03:15:03 (1) - Align with the end of 6


[Insane]
00:07:88 (2) - Align with 1
00:18:17 (6,7) - Align with end of 5
00:22:18 (6,7,8,9,10) - Align with end of 5
00:24:28 (2) - Align with end of 10 after ^
00:26:54 (1,2,3) - Align with 3?
01:16:43 (2) - Align with start of 1
01:42:24 (4) - Align with 3
01:57:94 (1) - Align with start of 2
02:01:43 (1,2) - Align with end of 7
02:11:54 (1) - Make the start and end align
02:33:52 (5) - Align with 4
02:36:66 (4) - Align with the end of 3
03:03:70 (6) - Align with 4 and 5 then realign the slider, 7 and 8.
03:24:63 (4) - Align with end of 3
03:36:49 (10) - Align with 7
04:01:95 (2,3,4,6) - Align with 5
04:04:57 (7) - Align with end of 6
04:04:92 (1) - Any reason the end of this is like it is? o-o

Nice map.
Henkie
728 posts
Joined July 2008
Henkie
Some things are hard for me to see/mod, since i CAN'T SEE slider heads and tails :cry: (dam graphic chip)
Working in grid 3

[Normal]
00:44:68 (1) - Should this slider tilt a bit or is it sloppy work? xD your choice, tilted or straight up, just noticed me on first sight.
00:52:71 (3) - I can see that (1) and (2) are uhm.. alligned descending, move (3) 1 square down to allign it correct too
(wow i can't find more D:)

[Insane]
00:51:99 (4) - Move this slider 1 square to the left, than it's exactly in the middle (NAZI i know)
01:48:89 (3,4) - Snap these notes on the middle line? D: oh wait.. there's still alligned.. tilted.. but still, dam you u.u
03:03:70 (6) - allign this horizontally with (5)? o.o

Holy crap, sometimes i think you have an extra grid or something (grid 4 u.u), since some notes arent grid snapped and some are, but it doesn't matter, it looks nice anyway ^-^ so.. nice map ;)
Starred

EDIT: lol hikki xD
WyndII
777 posts
Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
WyndII
Comments on bold

Well

tieff wrote:

[Normal]
00:44:689 (1) - Maybe make slider vertically?
00:49:921 (7) - Up 1 grid? (Lvl 3 grid)
01:54:456 - Maybe clap here?
03:02:479 (1) - Why new combo? Coz current stanza is 62: 0
03:08:759 (1) - ^ lol invalid format but I figured that out ^0^

Nice map. Starred
TY

Hikki's modding prove useful. You are good at Modding Hikki =P

HenkieBP wrote:

Some things are hard for me to see/mod, since i CAN'T SEE slider heads and tails :cry: (dam graphic chip) Get new PC, Laptop
Working in grid 3

[Normal]
00:44:68 (1) - Should this slider tilt a bit or is it sloppy work? xD your choice, tilted or straight up, just noticed me on first sight. omg it is <,<
00:52:71 (3) - I can see that (1) and (2) are uhm.. alligned descending, move (3) 1 square down to allign it correct too
(wow i can't find more D:)

[Insane]
00:51:99 (4) - Move this slider 1 square to the left, than it's exactly in the middle (NAZI i know)
01:48:89 (3,4) - Snap these notes on the middle line? D: oh wait.. there's still alligned.. tilted.. but still, dam you u.u
03:03:70 (6) - allign this horizontally with (5)? o.o

Holy crap, sometimes i think you have an extra grid or something (grid 4 u.u), since some notes arent grid snapped and some are, Weird, my grid snap is on when I was mapping the whole map >.>
but it doesn't matter, it looks nice anyway ^-^ so.. nice map ;) XD thanks for modding
Starred

EDIT: lol hikki xD hikki, it's on his ava xD
Nachy
807 posts
Joined April 2009
Nachy
Great map, the custom skin is pretty neat, timing on both difficulties are perfect.
Normal mode is pretty great by now, no problems at all, I just suggest on 00:36:00-00:40:00, separate the notes a bit farther, can get confusing for a Normal mode, but otherwise it's pretty perfectly made.
Insane mode is pretty frantic and fun, really found no problems on it, can be really classified as a great Insane map, also pretty perfect now, I only suggest a quick spinner for the finale at 04:08:00, gives a more satisfying feeling.
RaisTF
208 posts
Joined October 2008
RaisTF
Normal:
02:03:00 (2) - I think it sounds better without this
02:32:82 (4,5,6) - I think you need move it to 02:32:47 and 02:32:47 (3) - move to 02:33:875
Insane is hard for me ^^*
Good map, starred (:
WyndII
777 posts
Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
WyndII
Thank you Nacho and Rais :)
PandaCath
89 posts
Joined April 2009
PandaCath
[Normal]
2:32:479 (3) I don't like where this is, please move it over somewhere because it keeps confusing me about when to hit the other ones.
2:51:325 Timing Change, could you set a different distance snap? I notice because of the tighter spacing in the faster BPM, I was getting those wrong. Try to match the previous distances so it looks the same. :)

[Insane]
00:16:782 (2) (3) (4) Respace so the pattern is much clearer, you would only know if you actually played the song a couple of times.

I have nothing else to say about it since I can't play through it without total crash and burn. x3

Starred! I love the map anyhows!
Zekira
9,233 posts
Joined September 2008
Zekira
I think the offset is 6653..
WyndII
777 posts
Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
WyndII
Thanks for moddin'!!
nazi posts
Subaru
62 posts
Joined December 2008
Subaru
it's cool. Nice beatmap. A job well done.
anonymous_old
0 posts
Here since the beginning
anonymous_old
Not much to say, IMO, Normal should be renamed to Hard and the Overall Difficulty increased a bit.

Also, Insane may need a slightly higher Overall Difficulty and an increased HP drain rate.

Not really my kind of map, but star'd regardless.
Jinxy
2,777 posts
Joined February 2009
Jinxy
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
niedz
719 posts
Joined May 2008
niedz
~
WyndII
777 posts
Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
WyndII
^skin too :o TYTY
Subaru
62 posts
Joined December 2008
Subaru
btw suggestion if other ppl use a skin i think the hp bar is not suited i guess.
my best suggestion is to make a new hp bar like this XD

WyndII
777 posts
Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
WyndII
Subaru make it greener like this D=
anyway fixed. i did it tahnks for the effort subaru
Mafiamaster
osu! Alumni
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Joined July 2008
Mafiamaster
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Alace
osu! Alumni
3,088 posts
Joined August 2008
Alace
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vytalibus
osu! Alumni
870 posts
Joined May 2008
vytalibus
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WyndII
777 posts
Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
WyndII

vytalibus wrote:

<Cosmetic/Storyboard>
Titler looks blurry.
count2.png and count1.png is missing. You probably didn't do a full reupload. They were missing in my beatmap's folder while full resubmittting
fixed..
update
Metroid
834 posts
Joined May 2008
Metroid
Normal
Fine

Insane
01:23:41 (1,1,1) - Make this 1 whole combo please.
03:54:45 (8,9) - I doubt someone can survive this big of a jump.
04:09:45 (1,1,1) - Make this 1 whole combo please.

starred' for lack of errors.
vytalibus
osu! Alumni
870 posts
Joined May 2008
vytalibus
Redo all the breaks. Also, resnap all notes.

[Normal]
02:26:89 (6,7) - Iunno about the (6). I don't like that it's covering the end point of (7).

[Insane]
01:57:94 (1) - I hate that starting on this note, the patterns go into a 0.5x pace without any foreshadowing whatsoever.
02:49:57 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - NO.
Orkel
osu! Alumni
450 posts
Joined September 2008
Orkel
Really happy to see this song mapped, it's one of my favs. Starred.
Skyripper
osu! Alumni
1,016 posts
Joined August 2008
Skyripper
[Normal]
NOT SNAPPED!
00:25:49 (1) - a little harsh for normal, but it works
01:42:05 (1) - this note will get messed up when you resnap. just beware of that
a little more overall difficulty please!

[Insane]
This has a DIFFERENT offset than [Normal]
More HP drain, more overall difficulty (just a little on overall) Never mind, that would put you over score limit
4 minutes? yeesh!
02:49:57 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - what? XD
Yuukari-Banteki
1,534 posts
Joined June 2008
Yuukari-Banteki
[Normal]
00:55:15 (1) - resnap
actually the entire section isnt snapped. try resnapping please
00:25:50 (1) - the note following the spinner appears at the same time as it does - very confusing
02:42:24 (6) - spacing
02:52:53 (2,3,4) - unintuitive note placement (whole section) and why the sudden spacing change?
03:04:22 (3) - spacing
03:07:01 (3) - ^
map is not particularly well spaced and the last bit isnt particularly well mapped either, please focus your efforts on creating a more intuitive and fun map.



[Insane]
00:20:96 (4) - what is this mapped to?
00:22:18 (6,7,8,9,10) - hard to read
00:25:50 (4) - unintuitive bpm change
00:29:86 (4) - one repeat shorter
00:43:64 (1) - start one beat earlier
00:55:15 (4) - is the shape intended to actually represent something? its very difficult to tell, and kinda weird. also wtf .5bpm
01:00:73 (1) - use normal sampleset starting here
01:09:45 (3) - hidden repeat
01:34:22 (1) - the area just after this is obviously filler that can be easily replaced with a break
01:48:52 (end of 5,7) - remove whistles
01:54:63 (3) - remove finish
01:58:29 (2) - unintuitive bpm change
02:03:17 (1) - what is this supposed to be?
02:10:85 (3) - unintuitive
02:25:85 (3) - remove whistle
02:33:87 (6) - ^
02:42:24 (1) - finish
02:51:31 (6) - ^
03:03:70 (6,7,1,3) - confusing
03:12:59 (7) - new combo
03:18:52 (2) - map the dead space
03:22:01 (1) - clap the third hit
03:23:41 (3) - ^
03:24:80 (5) - ^ etc.
03:34:57 (5,6,7,8,9) - too much whistle
03:48:52 (5) - hidden repeat
03:52:71 (7) - new combo
03:54:80 (9) - clap
04:10:85 (3) - finish
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