good thing it's not 3 6s!!

Finished Hard and new offset

Thanks fluffy

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OK ok..

this slider 00:19:224 (1) is like a magic slider with no reverse arrow!.. please accept it


1. I'll make it playable, rankable, listenable.(why can't you hear the SONG!?)
2. I'll make it more interesting
3. I won't copy and paste to much
4. Hard.... ok harder
5. IM NOT LAZY!!
6. ok I will try to call u in IRC..

most of those "magic slider" are not rankable

so, fix it




and too many similar set notes in both two difficulty(or 3 difficulty)

that wouldnt be approved by me and Bats

fix too.




if you fix those 2 problem,you can ask for my mod.

but now not yet to mod

here is.

----------------------
go fix.

normal.
00:21:142 (x) set slider start at here and end at 00:22:014
00:22:363 (X) set slider start at here and end at 00:23:061
00:41:200 ~ 01:00:386 this part really boring me, map more fun here.
01:03:875 (1) extend 1 whole beat
01:04:660 (1) place it start at 01:05:096, end at 01:05:968
01:31:433 (1) notes couldnt set at same time, even if it just end of slider
01:52:363 (2) set the slider start at 01:52:712 and set a circle at here.
01:57:770 (2) start at 01:57:945, end same time.
02:00:125 (1) set a circle here. slider start at 02:00:386 ,end at 02:01:433
02:17:828 ~ 02:22:712 to boring to me
02:23:410 (1) fix sliders like it in all difficulty!!(same as hearts) its not good for people couldnt notice the way which it start (right or left?)
and its a "magical slider" too, you didnt fix it.
02:28:991 ~ 02:33:875 boring?
02:42:247 (1) turn it a slider or circles? you set too many spinner like this in hard/insane already
03:03:177 (1) extend 1/4
03:03:875 (1) start at 03:03:700, end at same time sounds better.
03:05:619 (1) end at 03:06:317 sounds better
03:12:596 ~ 03:16:433 do you really like this boring end?
you can map more fun i guess

Suggest.
1.actually, 172bpm with 1.6 slider velocity is too fast.
2.why dont you use soft sounds?
3.maybe the speed change should be easier(i mean you can just set with rule), because its Normal
to myselt.
i will set 0.5bpm timing at
01:37:014 - 01:42:247
03:16:433 - 03:37:712
but sure, you can set it in hard/insane.

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hard & insane

too many thing to post on
1.try map those boring spinners funner
2.fix those "no regular-jumps"
although jumps can make maps more fun and playable, they just looked weird and hard to read the tempo
and that i though it wont be approved.


how to fix?
turn jumps and space regular or just fix them readable
you can try use "vary distance snap" at each sentence

uhm... I fixed normal where are the others


XD

OK.

THERE IS TOO MANY DISTANCE WRONG TO POST AS I SAW.

maybe you should fix them in use distance snap(dont forget turn off grid snap when you fix it)

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few unrankable slider as i saw.
normal:
02:34:572
03:16:084(maybe not use 1/8 in normal)
hard:
01:06:666
insane:
01:03:875
01:13:468(maybe not rankable, hardly to read)
02:11:549
03:16:084(ask for bats to do it, maybe turn as before)
03:51:055(WHATS THIS?)
--------------------------------------------
suggest.
normal:
00:21:142~00:23:759 maybe overlap them , but i like it better now
00:42:596 end at here sounds weird
00:43:293 dont start at here, nothing from it.
00:50:968~00:52:712 if you dont wanna set note here, just fix it to one spinner
01:08:846~01:10:677 weird part
01:34:224~01:36:666 weird part
02:23:410 make corner farrer than begining will be better
03:03:177~03:05:619 overlap them?

hard:
01:20:881 why you end it here?
01:25:503 extend it fore 1/2(start at 01:25:328)
02:11:549 Still little hard to read
02:42:427 fix as 01:25:503

insane:
add circle at 00:16:607 , 00:16:956 , 00:17:305(funner)
01:25:503 extend it fore 1/2
03:07:014 Weird!
03:33:177~03:36:491 im not sure its playble , i could beat this part though
04:02:828 as 01:25:503
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you will get other check after fix them well

use distance snap to reset your weird space

you have to reset all with one by one check

and you will find out it have many ways to fix
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how to do?
turn your option as the picture
and reset note one by one



and your hard/insane's BG is gone

reset them and full upload.

see here.

Atsumi Saori - Mou Sukoshi, Mou Sukoshi ...

Atsumi Saori - Mou Shukoshi, Mou Sukoshi ...


thats why you got another upload

http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?t=11038

call Bats if you wanna delete one of them

Ok, deleted the new map. Please download this one and perform a Full Resubmission.

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This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

insane:
01:25:503(1) move to 01:25:328
04:03:526(1) set the "M" beautier
last part of spinnesr , boring.

as i saw, there are some parts ugly
and many notes sounds weird( specailly, solf finish)
but few things bad

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hard:
third breaking is too long i guess
03:53:759(1) every ugly

seems hard sounds better than insane
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normal:
too many parts look same as in hard
thats no good for me

no mod this difficulty, unless you fix out it
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Suggestion Note Set.
seems you wanna set the double "M" in hard,
so set as the pic




Star for much improve

-

I tried to put a Storyboard but i think its ugly
And I also added 'epic chorus', its so cool to use it
Tell me if I overused it and tell me how to fix the SB?

can you change the backgound colour to black / white? its hard to see the approach circle when everything in green colour

Normal:

Perhaps the storyboard continues after the map end.
To fix this, you need to use Notepad to open the .osb,
Copy the those code from :

//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
4,3,1,"count3.png",320,240
 M,0,4572,4660,141,226,141,226
....
..
//Storyboard Sound Samples

Then , in the Hard/Insane's .osu
to replace these line :

//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

After this, remove the .osb file, also those unncessary sound samples.
At last , Full upload again

Hard :

00:30:38 (1) - fix this whistle sound pls

Insane:

03:03:87 (1,1) - this is circle or slider?
03:47:13 (1,1) - spacing?

Insane:
02:23:41 (1,2) - Spacing
maybe move the slider (1) to the right side for the circle (2), space with DS 1.0 there

its good enough to shoot a star
im not going to nazi one gird spacing..up down left right

Thanks Al.

<Normal>
Where is the BG ??
00:23:75 (1) a little ugly
00:26:54 (1)~00:32:47 (1) i think this part is a little hard in normal (spacing)
maybe you can find some players to test this area
02:00:38 (2) start point up 1 (tiny grid)

<Hard>
00:46:663(1) fix the end point, ogly XD
you have some short spinners in hard
i think sliders more fit those parts (ex 01:25:32 (1) )

<Insane>
Where is the BG ??
02:11:02 (1) I think this one looks better (pic)

good map
as Al said
I won`t be nazi too
Star it~

Alace wrote:

<Normal>
Where is the BG ??
00:23:75 (1) a little ugly
00:26:54 (1)~00:32:47 (1) i think this part is a little hard in normal (spacing)
maybe you can find some players to test this area
02:00:38 (2) start point up 1 (tiny grid)

fixed

Alace wrote:

<Hard>
00:46:663(1) fix the end point, ogly XD lol
you have some short spinners in hard
i think sliders more fit those parts (ex 01:25:32 (1) )

Sliders Spinners prolonged

Alace wrote:

<Insane>
Where is the BG ??
02:11:02 (1) I think this one looks better (pic)

awesome! XD

Alace wrote:

good map
as Al said
I won`t be nazi too
Star it~

xD thanks for modding

Good map need a star
no kd plz

I'm very tired now to be honest and I don't have much time so I've overseen some small things. Here are some examples of what you can improve.

Insane:
00:45:386 (5) - Place this beat on (3) - 00:44:689
00:55:154 (1) - Place this slider on the note before it.
01:16:782 (2,3) - I have no problem with this but I dunno id all BAT's approve this overlapping.
01:21:317 (1) - looks prettier if you place it on the slider before it.
01:46:084 (1) - looks prettier if you place it on (2) - 01:45:212
Similiar things are in all difficulties but there are no serious problems with it.

Hard is fine.

Normal is also fine but in both difficulties i've had many 'dunno about it's' only BAT's can be sure if it's rankable.
In my opinion everything is ok however you still can improve this map by making the patterns prettier and such.

gotta sleep.

Thanks for modding

Nice storyboard , I like it.

[Normal]
fine

[Hard]
03:53:58 (3,1) - spacing

[Insane]
full of jumps XD
But seems fine

/me shoots star

Thanks!

Okay, still screwed up. I want you to do the following:

1. Rename the audio file. I want you to remove those periods.
2. Open the .osu files and rename the AudioFileName to the new name you gave the audio file.
3. Refresh the beatmap.
4. Do another full submission, just in case.

Uhm.. this what happened when I rename the file.(pic when choosing)

I can't scroll too. (pic when editing)

When making vyt's changes, do not rename the .osu files, and do not change the title of the map under song setup. Only change the filename of the .mp3, and only change the AudioFilename line in the .osu to match the filename of the mp3.

They should look something like this.

I see. I now understand how to fix it.


DONE!!!

now can you guys check the map na? xD

WyndII wrote:

I see. I now understand how to fix it.


DONE!!!

now can you guys check the map na? xD

Full submit it.

Ok I full submitted it .
And I full submit it again..

The 2nd countdown shakes a bit. And the 3rd one is pretty flat. You manually faded the ending storyboard, didn't you? It flicks occasionally. Also, the manga pages are of inconsistent quality, and are resized.

Normal:

Combos don't have much consistency.

00:34:22() - Timing section a 1/4 earlier.
01:01:08() - Timing section a 1/4 earlier.
01:58:99 (1) - Too big a jump.
02:02:47() - Timing section 1/4 earlier.
02:23:41 (1) - Bad ending.

Hard:

Combos, blah, blah. Same timing section fixes

00:11:89 (3) - 1/2 short, or replace with a circle and slider.
00:20:27 (1) - Are direct overlaps like this allowed?
00:20:96 (1) - Doesn't start on vocals and has no reason not to.
00:46:43 (1) - Remove finish from end.
01:11:00() - Remove break.
01:19:22 (1) - Stack to start of previous slider.
01:25:50 (1) - Drag to the start of 'sa' and end a beat before the next circle.
02:11:54 (1) - Remove the finish from the end, or try and compress it down a beat.
02:41:89 (1) - Move forward a beat and extend 2 beats.
04:03:52 (1) - Overlapping slider thingy. If they are allowed, you should at least overlap them completely.

Insane:

Blah, blah.

01:25:50 (1) - Drag to the start of 'sa' and end a beat before the next circle.
03:04:22 (2) - Plain ugly overlapping.
03:50:44() - Switching to soft soundset for a bad reason.

<Normal>
From 00:27:94~00:32:47
Use Distance snap 0.7X to work ( spacing fix)
other diffs are fine

uuuuuuuupdate

Ok, so i did some things

This map has some major issues

double posting!!

I m gonna remake insane xD


Im very sorry to those who modded my normal and insane.. very sorry.

[Normal]

00:16:78 (4) - Align perfectly with (3). Turn grid snap off.
00:22:71 (2) - ^
00:29:34 (6) - New combo.
00:41:20 (7) - ^
01:09:10 (4) - Align perfectly with (3). Turn grid snap off.
01:54:10 (10) - New combo.
02:02:479 - Move this section here -> 02:02:131 -> Sounds better.

[Insane]

01:23:410 - This section needs 2x bpm warning.
03:27:596 - Remove this break.
03:30:038 - ^

Wooh, nice map, and nice storyboard :3

Take a star.

Yay nazi mod ^_^! Couldn't tell if the alignment of the notes mentioned below were intentional or not since a lot of places the alignment was fine.

Normal:
Make the storyboard that starts after normal ends only for insane or this won't end until the whole song does.

00:16:78 (4) - Restack on end of slider.
00:20:27 (6) - ^
00:22:71 (2) - ^
00:41:54 (8) - Stack the end on 7.
00:42:24 (9) - Restack on end of slider.
01:06:66 (1) - Stack the end properly.
01:09:10 (4) - Restack.
01:29:68 (1) - Make this heart look better. <3
01:50:96 (6) - New combo.
01:54:10 (10) - ^
02:07:71 (6) - ^
02:08:41 (7) - Restack the end on 6.
02:32:47 (3) - Restack on end of slider.

Insane:
00:27:24 (3) - Clap on end of slider.
00:45:73 (4) - Align the end of slider on the hitcircles.
00:53:41 (5) - Restack on end of slider.
01:05:96 (6) - ^
01:15:03 (5) - New combo.
01:47:47 (1) - Clap.
01:51:66 (2) - Align on fading 4.
02:11:54 (1) - Make this heart look better. :3
02:21:49 (5) - Restack.
02:33:17 (4) - Restack on end of slider.
02:36:66 (4) - Align end of slider properly.
03:04:22 (9) - Align the end of this slider on 6.
03:49:57 (6) - New combo.
03:52:71 (12) - ^
03:58:64 (6) - Align the end of the slider with 5's end.

Love this map. So relaxing ! Star !

comments on bold XD

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Normal]

00:16:78 (4) - Align perfectly with (3). Turn grid snap off. You mean I'll align 3 to 4 and no need to turn grid snap off
00:22:71 (2) - ^
00:29:34 (6) - New combo.
00:41:20 (7) - ^
01:09:10 (4) - Align perfectly with (3). Turn grid snap off.
01:54:10 (10) - New combo.
02:02:479 - Move this section here -> 02:02:131 -> Sounds better. yea, it does sound better.

[Insane]

01:23:410 - This section needs 2x bpm warning. no need, I remap it to normal sliders.
03:27:596 - Remove this break.
03:30:038 - ^

Wooh, nice map, and nice storyboard :3 Thanks! ^-^ thanks for modding! xD

Take a star.

Nexy wrote:

Yay nazi mod ^_^! Couldn't tell if the alignment of the notes mentioned below were intentional or not since a lot of places the alignment was fine.

Normal:
Make the storyboard that starts after normal ends only for insane or this won't end until the whole song does. press Skip button or space.

00:16:78 (4) - Restack on end of slider.
00:20:27 (6) - ^
00:22:71 (2) - ^
00:41:54 (8) - Stack the end on 7.
00:42:24 (9) - Restack on end of slider. omg where?
01:06:66 (1) - Stack the end properly.
01:09:10 (4) - Restack.
01:29:68 (1) - Make this heart look better. <3 haha, right ventricle is now a bit slender lol and I, accidentally slide down my mouse and heart became sexy, Nexy =D
01:50:96 (6) - New combo.
01:54:10 (10) - ^
02:07:71 (6) - ^
02:08:41 (7) - Restack the end on 6.
02:32:47 (3) - Restack on end of slider.

Insane:
00:27:24 (3) - Clap on end of slider.....
00:45:73 (4) - Align the end of slider on the hitcircles.
00:53:41 (5) - Restack on end of slider.
01:05:96 (6) - ^
01:15:03 (5) - New combo.
01:47:47 (1) - Clap. Sounds better =D!
01:51:66 (2) - Align on fading 4.
02:11:54 (1) - Make this heart look better. :3 new kokoro! it's the same with normal lol
02:21:49 (5) - Restack.
02:33:17 (4) - Restack on end of slider.
02:36:66 (4) - Align end of slider properly.
03:04:22 (9) - Align the end of this slider on 6.
03:49:57 (6) - New combo.
03:52:71 (12) - ^ there is no 12 in 3:52:71 >:{ anyway skip this lol
03:58:64 (6) - Align the end of the slider with 5's end.

Love this map. So relaxing ! arigatou =D

No nazi post from me. Even though those alignment issues really annoy me, I will hold back.

Normal:
00:12:59() - I really wished you mapped a little more in this area because the drain hurts a little, but I guess it is not that bad
00:19:92 (5,6) - make the spacing similar to 2 and 3, or try to make the curve more symmetrical
00:20:27 (6) - realign this 6 onto the end of 1
00:25:50 (1) - a little hard for a normal
00:41:20 (1) - realign 1 onto the end of 2
01:06:66 (1) - realign this to end directly on 5
01:42:94 (1) - wish the end of this slider was consistent with the end of 1,2,3 slope
02:03:17 (3) - make this an exact replica of 1
02:06:66 (5) - have this end directly on 2

Insane:
00:20:96 (4) - the 2's score covers the repeating slider, so it is difficult to see
00:29:86 (4) - this is one of the few sliders that repeat more than once, so most ppl will not notice this repeats 3 times
00:54:80 (3) - have this be where the end of 1 and 5 are, or align 5 and the end of t1 on 3 (the origin)
01:10:50 (5) - another hidden repeat (this could stay since you do this pattern multiple times throughout the song)
01:17:82 (1,2,3) - this appears crooked while playing...? (There are also similar occurances of this throughout the song)

I don't like the way insane is mapped with switching between wide spacing and stacking two notes on top of each other constantly. It seems to break the flow and make the song confusing to play.

Other than that, great map. Star.

WyndII wrote:

00:42:24 (9) - Restack on end of slider. omg where?

Was this always a 3? lol Restack the 3 @ the end of the fading slider.

WyndII wrote:

03:52:71 (12) - ^ there is no 12 in 3:52:71 >:{ anyway skip this lol

D: Became a 7! Must have been hallucinating while doing this @_@. Anyways, make this a new combo?

comments on colors lol

blissfulyoshi wrote:

No nazi post from me. Even though those alignment issues really annoy me, I will hold back.

Normal:
00:12:59() - I really wished you mapped a little more in this area because the drain hurts a little, but I guess it is not that bad doesn't hurt a little
00:19:92 (5,6) - make the spacing similar to 2 and 3, or try to make the curve more symmetrical
00:20:27 (6) - realign this 6 onto the end of 1
00:25:50 (1) - a little hard for a normal look overall diff, it's so low you can 300ed it at 250 s/min
00:41:20 (1) - realign 1 onto the end of 2 it really looks that way.
01:06:66 (1) - realign this to end directly on 5 done already in nexy's nazi mod
01:42:94 (1) - wish the end of this slider was consistent with the end of 1,2,3 slope
02:03:17 (3) - make this an exact replica of 1 they are ^^
02:06:66 (5) - have this end directly on 2

Insane:
00:20:96 (4) - the 2's score covers the repeating slider, so it is difficult to see
00:29:86 (4) - this is one of the few sliders that repeat more than once, so most ppl will not notice this repeats 3 times uhm that's why there's an approach circle >.>
00:54:80 (3) - have this be where the end of 1 and 5 are, or align 5 and the end of t1 on 3 (the origin)
01:10:50 (5) - another hidden repeat (this could stay since you do this pattern multiple times throughout the song)
01:17:82 (1,2,3) - this appears crooked while playing...? (There are also similar occurances of this throughout the song)

I don't like the way insane is mapped with switching between wide spacing and stacking two notes on top of each other constantly. It seems to break the flow and make the song confusing to play.

Other than that, great map. Star. XD thank you ^0^

lol @ Nexy

[Normal]
00:44:689 (1) - Maybe make slider vertically?
00:49:921 (7) - Up 1 grid? (Lvl 3 grid)
01:54:456 - Maybe clap here?
03:02:479 (1) - Why new combo?
03:08:759 (1) - ^

[Insane]
00:17:828 (5) - Down 1 grid?
01:42:247 (4) - Left 1 grid?

Nice map. Starred.

You need to up snapping, I think

Normal
03:02:47 (1) - Add a finish sound?

Insane
Fine

Blaaah starred.

Some suggestions

[Normal]
00:11:20 (3) - Align with end of previous 3
00:16:08 (3) - Align with 1,2 and 4
00:17:13 (5) - ^
00:17:82 (1) - Align with start of previous 5?
00:22:88 (3,4,5) - Align with 2
00:27:07 (2) - Move 1 grid 3 down.
00:27:24 (3) - Move 2 grid 3 down.
00:32:13 (7) - Align on top of 3
00:37:88 (2,3,4) - Align with end of 1
00:41:20 (1) - Align with the end of 2
00:49:22 (6) - Align with end of 5
00:52:36 (2,3) - Align with 1
01:29:68 (1) - Align start and end?
01:49:57 (4) - Align with end of 3
02:03:00 (2) - Align with 1 or move like this
02:08:41 (2) - Align on end of 5
02:10:15 (4) - Align on end of 2
02:20:96 (2) - Align the end with 3
02:23:41 (1) - Align end with start of 2
02:32:47 (3,4,5,6) - Align with end of 2?
02:46:78 (1,2) - Align with end of 6
03:15:03 (1) - Align with the end of 6


[Insane]
00:07:88 (2) - Align with 1
00:18:17 (6,7) - Align with end of 5
00:22:18 (6,7,8,9,10) - Align with end of 5
00:24:28 (2) - Align with end of 10 after ^
00:26:54 (1,2,3) - Align with 3?
01:16:43 (2) - Align with start of 1
01:42:24 (4) - Align with 3
01:57:94 (1) - Align with start of 2
02:01:43 (1,2) - Align with end of 7
02:11:54 (1) - Make the start and end align
02:33:52 (5) - Align with 4
02:36:66 (4) - Align with the end of 3
03:03:70 (6) - Align with 4 and 5 then realign the slider, 7 and 8.
03:24:63 (4) - Align with end of 3
03:36:49 (10) - Align with 7
04:01:95 (2,3,4,6) - Align with 5
04:04:57 (7) - Align with end of 6
04:04:92 (1) - Any reason the end of this is like it is? o-o

Nice map.

Some things are hard for me to see/mod, since i CAN'T SEE slider heads and tails (dam graphic chip)
Working in grid 3

[Normal]
00:44:68 (1) - Should this slider tilt a bit or is it sloppy work? xD your choice, tilted or straight up, just noticed me on first sight.
00:52:71 (3) - I can see that (1) and (2) are uhm.. alligned descending, move (3) 1 square down to allign it correct too
(wow i can't find more D:)

[Insane]
00:51:99 (4) - Move this slider 1 square to the left, than it's exactly in the middle (NAZI i know)
01:48:89 (3,4) - Snap these notes on the middle line? D: oh wait.. there's still alligned.. tilted.. but still, dam you u.u
03:03:70 (6) - allign this horizontally with (5)? o.o

Holy crap, sometimes i think you have an extra grid or something (grid 4 u.u), since some notes arent grid snapped and some are, but it doesn't matter, it looks nice anyway ^-^ so.. nice map
Starred

EDIT: lol hikki xD

Comments on bold

Well

tieff wrote:

[Normal]
00:44:689 (1) - Maybe make slider vertically?
00:49:921 (7) - Up 1 grid? (Lvl 3 grid)
01:54:456 - Maybe clap here?
03:02:479 (1) - Why new combo? Coz current stanza is 62: 0
03:08:759 (1) - ^ lol invalid format but I figured that out ^0^

Nice map. Starred

TY

Hikki's modding prove useful. You are good at Modding Hikki =P

HenkieBP wrote:

Some things are hard for me to see/mod, since i CAN'T SEE slider heads and tails (dam graphic chip) Get new PC, Laptop
Working in grid 3

[Normal]
00:44:68 (1) - Should this slider tilt a bit or is it sloppy work? xD your choice, tilted or straight up, just noticed me on first sight. omg it is <,<
00:52:71 (3) - I can see that (1) and (2) are uhm.. alligned descending, move (3) 1 square down to allign it correct too
(wow i can't find more D:)

[Insane]
00:51:99 (4) - Move this slider 1 square to the left, than it's exactly in the middle (NAZI i know)
01:48:89 (3,4) - Snap these notes on the middle line? D: oh wait.. there's still alligned.. tilted.. but still, dam you u.u
03:03:70 (6) - allign this horizontally with (5)? o.o

Holy crap, sometimes i think you have an extra grid or something (grid 4 u.u), since some notes arent grid snapped and some are, Weird, my grid snap is on when I was mapping the whole map >.>
but it doesn't matter, it looks nice anyway ^-^ so.. nice map XD thanks for modding
Starred

EDIT: lol hikki xD hikki, it's on his ava xD

Great map, the custom skin is pretty neat, timing on both difficulties are perfect.
Normal mode is pretty great by now, no problems at all, I just suggest on 00:36:00-00:40:00, separate the notes a bit farther, can get confusing for a Normal mode, but otherwise it's pretty perfectly made.
Insane mode is pretty frantic and fun, really found no problems on it, can be really classified as a great Insane map, also pretty perfect now, I only suggest a quick spinner for the finale at 04:08:00, gives a more satisfying feeling.

Normal:
02:03:00 (2) - I think it sounds better without this
02:32:82 (4,5,6) - I think you need move it to 02:32:47 and 02:32:47 (3) - move to 02:33:875
Insane is hard for me ^^*
Good map, starred (:

Thank you Nacho and Rais

[Normal]
2:32:479 (3) I don't like where this is, please move it over somewhere because it keeps confusing me about when to hit the other ones.
2:51:325 Timing Change, could you set a different distance snap? I notice because of the tighter spacing in the faster BPM, I was getting those wrong. Try to match the previous distances so it looks the same.

[Insane]
00:16:782 (2) (3) (4) Respace so the pattern is much clearer, you would only know if you actually played the song a couple of times.

I have nothing else to say about it since I can't play through it without total crash and burn. x3

Starred! I love the map anyhows!

I think the offset is 6653..

Thanks for moddin'!!
nazi posts

it's cool. Nice beatmap. A job well done.

Not much to say, IMO, Normal should be renamed to Hard and the Overall Difficulty increased a bit.

Also, Insane may need a slightly higher Overall Difficulty and an increased HP drain rate.

Not really my kind of map, but star'd regardless.

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~

^skin too TYTY

btw suggestion if other ppl use a skin i think the hp bar is not suited i guess.
my best suggestion is to make a new hp bar like this XD

Subaru make it greener like this D=
anyway fixed. i did it tahnks for the effort subaru

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This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

vytalibus wrote:

<Cosmetic/Storyboard>
Titler looks blurry.
count2.png and count1.png is missing. You probably didn't do a full reupload. They were missing in my beatmap's folder while full resubmittting

fixed..
update

Normal
Fine

Insane
01:23:41 (1,1,1) - Make this 1 whole combo please.
03:54:45 (8,9) - I doubt someone can survive this big of a jump.
04:09:45 (1,1,1) - Make this 1 whole combo please.

starred' for lack of errors.

Redo all the breaks. Also, resnap all notes.

[Normal]
02:26:89 (6,7) - Iunno about the (6). I don't like that it's covering the end point of (7).

[Insane]
01:57:94 (1) - I hate that starting on this note, the patterns go into a 0.5x pace without any foreshadowing whatsoever.
02:49:57 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - NO.

Really happy to see this song mapped, it's one of my favs. Starred.

[Normal]
NOT SNAPPED!
00:25:49 (1) - a little harsh for normal, but it works
01:42:05 (1) - this note will get messed up when you resnap. just beware of that
a little more overall difficulty please!

[Insane]
This has a DIFFERENT offset than [Normal]
More HP drain, more overall difficulty (just a little on overall) Never mind, that would put you over score limit
4 minutes? yeesh!
02:49:57 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - what? XD

[Normal]
00:55:15 (1) - resnap
actually the entire section isnt snapped. try resnapping please
00:25:50 (1) - the note following the spinner appears at the same time as it does - very confusing
02:42:24 (6) - spacing
02:52:53 (2,3,4) - unintuitive note placement (whole section) and why the sudden spacing change?
03:04:22 (3) - spacing
03:07:01 (3) - ^
map is not particularly well spaced and the last bit isnt particularly well mapped either, please focus your efforts on creating a more intuitive and fun map.



[Insane]
00:20:96 (4) - what is this mapped to?
00:22:18 (6,7,8,9,10) - hard to read
00:25:50 (4) - unintuitive bpm change
00:29:86 (4) - one repeat shorter
00:43:64 (1) - start one beat earlier
00:55:15 (4) - is the shape intended to actually represent something? its very difficult to tell, and kinda weird. also wtf .5bpm
01:00:73 (1) - use normal sampleset starting here
01:09:45 (3) - hidden repeat
01:34:22 (1) - the area just after this is obviously filler that can be easily replaced with a break
01:48:52 (end of 5,7) - remove whistles
01:54:63 (3) - remove finish
01:58:29 (2) - unintuitive bpm change
02:03:17 (1) - what is this supposed to be?
02:10:85 (3) - unintuitive
02:25:85 (3) - remove whistle
02:33:87 (6) - ^
02:42:24 (1) - finish
02:51:31 (6) - ^
03:03:70 (6,7,1,3) - confusing
03:12:59 (7) - new combo
03:18:52 (2) - map the dead space
03:22:01 (1) - clap the third hit
03:23:41 (3) - ^
03:24:80 (5) - ^ etc.
03:34:57 (5,6,7,8,9) - too much whistle
03:48:52 (5) - hidden repeat
03:52:71 (7) - new combo
03:54:80 (9) - clap
04:10:85 (3) - finish