@Suzully
Ok ;_;

@inaba-tan
Done.

and change "saten" to "Saten-san" on the tags please ><

OK LET'S ATTEMPTAR THIS.

Saten:
THIS SV. I dunno, it seems incredibly wtfish.
00:53:910 (2) - Idunno, this is kinda hidden by having a comboburst happening both on the beginning and ending of this slider, both from previous notes o-o.
01:16:866 (1) - Nope.

Largest complaint is that it's overmapped like hell.

Deus ex:
00:04:344 (1) - Kinda boring pattern for an insane o-o
01:00:692 (1) - Not moe :<
01:01:475 (5) - ^
01:06:953 (1) - ^

Hard:
AR +1?
00:45:823 (2) - Not moe :<

Taiko:
I'm going to assume the Inaba and the Taiko are undercase on purpose.

Normal:
01:15:301 (2) - Not moe :<
01:25:866 (1,2) - Keep as a spinner?

Easy:
00:47:127 (1) - :<

uguu.

CDFA wrote:

Deus ex:
00:04:344 (1) - Kinda boring pattern for an insane o-o

Hmm I not gonna change this due to previous mods, unless you could suggest me a better pattern

CDFA wrote:

Hard:
AR +1?

Not gonna change this due to previous mod by Suzully.

CDFA wrote:

Taiko:
I'm going to assume the Inaba and the Taiko are undercase on purpose.

Yep.


Done. Thank you for the mod!

Taiko checking here.

([Hard]'s kiai end is unsnapped.)

[Taiko]
00:02:127 - d k
00:13:605 - consdering it's a 1/2 note from the music use kkk d here'
00:28, 00:30, 00:32 - I don't see the reason that you make a SV change here, and it confuses player at the end of the SV changes. Remove the SV changes.
00:33:562 - it's just echo of the vocal so don't need stream there
kiai part - seriously overmapped. I don't really see many 1/4 vocal/drums there D:
01:19 ~ 01:24 - no problem with the pattern itself, but it doesn't really fit with the vocal? there's no 1/1 break when vocal breaks and so on.

the later part of the diff is quite overmapped, while the first half arrangement sounds fine. When some remapping is done tell me to recheck this one.

CDFA wrote:

Saten:
THIS SV. I dunno, it seems incredibly wtfish. Deus Ex has a higher SV
00:53:910 (2) - Idunno, this is kinda hidden by having a comboburst happening both on the beginning and ending of this slider, both from previous notes o-o. It appeared after that part
01:16:866 (1) - Nope. nope?

Largest complaint is that it's overmapped like hell. It's not overmapped

I really liked [Saten] better, cuz your Insane already has a Custom name

Download: Yousei Teikoku - Kuusou Mesorogiwi (TV size) (rickyboi) [Saten's Insane].osu

Saten-san wrote:

CDFA wrote:

I really liked [Saten] better, cuz your Insane already has a Custom name

lol okay! renamed.

@wmfchris
Ok thanks for the mod!

wmfchris wrote:

Taiko checking here.

([Hard]'s kiai end is unsnapped.)

[Taiko]
00:02:127 - d k
00:13:605 - consdering it's a 1/2 note from the music use kkk d here'
00:28, 00:30, 00:32 - I don't see the reason that you make a SV change here, and it confuses player at the end of the SV changes. Remove the SV changes.
00:33:562 - it's just echo of the vocal so don't need stream there
kiai part - seriously overmapped. I don't really see many 1/4 vocal/drums there D:
01:19 ~ 01:24 - no problem with the pattern itself, but it doesn't really fit with the vocal? there's no 1/1 break when vocal breaks and so on.

the later part of the diff is quite overmapped, while the first half arrangement sounds fine. When some remapping is done tell me to recheck this one.

mod thx !

Download: Yousei Teikoku - Kuusou Mesorogiwi (TV size) (rickyboi) [inaba's taiko].osu

CDFA wrote:

Normal:
01:15:301 (2) - Not moe :< D: not gonna change it, seems fine for me.
01:25:866 (1,2) - Keep as a spinner? Nope, me <3 it, also this is stacked from a previous mod, so I'm not gonna space it either.

I'm not uploading the diff, haven't changed anything. Anyway, thx for the mod :3

Okay everything seems to be updated.

still look hard but much reasonable now, it's now up to your judgement suzully .w.

Hmm...only one thing I have hesitated to bubble this map was about taiko diff, but according to wmf, it's reasonable now.
Yes, it's just overmapping, that doesn't mean it's not playable. And overall taiko map is not broken, yes it's just hard, nothing to prevent getting bubbled...

Oh, taiko's audio-lead-in should be 1500 as well as other diffs.
And [Deus Ex]'s KIAI is not snapped.
Please fix them. I'll bubble.

Updated and done.

Oops, sorry, there were some stuff I forgot to write.

[Deus Ex]
00:10:607 (T) -
00:51:825 (T) -
00:52:086 (T) -

[Hard]
01:17:388 (T) -

[Easy]
00:08:783 (T) -
01:17:653 (T) -

These green lines should be snapped because they are bit off from correct position.
Please resnap them. Sorry for letting you fix again

EDIT:Ahhhhh
[Akareh's Normal]
01:25:866 (1) - The end of slider isn't snapped.

[Deus Ex]
01:25:866 (1) - ^

Okay, I think everything's done. lol

@01:25:866
Nothing seems to be wrong here. the slider is in 1/3 o_o

rickyboi wrote:

Okay, I think everything's done. lol

@01:25:866
Nothing seems to be wrong here. the slider is in 1/3 o_o

But the top of sliders are in 1/4. You have to choose whether snapping in 1/3 or 1/4.

Suzully wrote:

rickyboi wrote:

Okay, I think everything's done. lol

@01:25:866
Nothing seems to be wrong here. the slider is in 1/3 o_o

But the top of sliders are in 1/4. You have to choose whether snapping in 1/3 or 1/4.

Okay, sorry I think I messed up my explanation before. I should've said 1/6 instead of 1/3.


It's already snapped in 1/6. I think it really fits better in 1/6 rather than 1/3 or 1/4.

rickyboi wrote:

Okay, sorry I think I messed up my explanation before. I should've said 1/6 instead of 1/3.


It's already snapped in 1/6.

Oh I see, it was also my bad

Okay everything looks fine now! Bubbled!


To BAT:
[Saten] and [Deus Ex] have more than three slider speeds, but they are fine imo because...
About [Saten], a note that is used 4th SV is only one, 00:57:301 (3), and it's not confusing and not big gap.
About [Deus Ex], 1.00x SV is not used.

Thank you very much! Suzully!

So happy right now.

Hey, I know that your map is still in Bubble, but I have say some things

General:
- Maybe you can change your BG.png to .jpg, to have more space in your folder

- Name of difficulties: [*] New Rule: Difficulty names must name the difficulty, for this reason you must add Insane in Saten-San diff in this case Saten's Insane
[*] And the name in Taiko diff must be inaba's Taiko with capitalize the word Taiko. Also I think that you can add the word Oni in the title (inaba's Taiko Oni)

- Tags: [*] Add opening in tags (all diff)
[*] Change akareh to Akareh

Easy:
00:20:257 (3): I don't like how to sound only this Note. I suggest to add a Slider that starts in 00:19:997 and have to ends in (3)
01:06:823 (4,5): Unstack the notes, it is difficult to read to New Players, specially because the BPM is too high

Akareh's Normal:
00:25:214 (Spin): This Spinner is too short in Normal diff., try to make another thing
00:34:605 (1): (Nazi Stuff): Move this Slider 1 grid right to stack with previous (5)
00:37:605 (3,4): Spacing, it's not recommended have this problems in Easy/Normal difficulties. Try to fix it with Distance Snap (Don't forget to move the next notes to don't have more Spacing Problems)
00:50:431 (Spin): Short Spinner in Normal difficulty
01:06:866 (4,5): Spacing, fix with Distance Snap (Don't forget to move the next notes to don't have more Spacing Problems)
01:19:736 (1): This Slider fit better with music if Starts in 01:19:605 (Red Tick) and finish in 01:20:127 (Red Tick)
01:22:084 (2): This note is quite difficult to read to ''Normal Players'', and I also think that sounds well without that note. So, Remove it

inaba's taiko:
- The change of name that I mentioned in General
- Remove the Video from this difficulty, it's totally unnecesary
00:13:605: kkd sounds better in this case
This map it's a little overmapped, but it's OK in general

Hard:
HP Drain Rate: +1
01:23:388 (3): This note sounds off rhythm, I suggest to move it 1/2 forward (Red Tick, 01:23:518)

Saten:
- The change of name that I mentioned in General
00:16:084 (4): Hidden Slider, you have to replace this Slider
00:29:388 (1,1): Those New Combo are unnecesaries, Remove it please.
00:31:475 (1): This note sounds weird without hitsounds, maybe a whistle sounds well here
00:51:888 (2): Add a New Combo here, since starts a New Section

Deus Ex:
00:57:214 (4,5): (Nazi Stuff): Stack it those notes well (Move (4) 1 grid right)

Well, That's all. If you make some change, I'll contact with Suzully for a rebbuble
The map looks well in General
Good Luck in Rank

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

Saten:
- The change of name that I mentioned in General It should be fine since I've used this before and Never used on anything lower than [I] . And that rule is still in discussion it seems
00:16:084 (4): Hidden Slider, you have to replace this Slider it's fine imo
00:29:388 (1,1): Those New Combo are unnecesaries, Remove it please. those aren't unnecessary
00:31:475 (1): This note sounds weird without hitsounds, maybe a whistle sounds well here Added
00:51:888 (2): Add a New Combo here, since starts a New Section no NC here

Only added that hitsound

Download: Yousei Teikoku - Kuusou Mesorogiwi (TV size) (rickyboi) [Saten].osu

Saten-san wrote:

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

Saten:
- The change of name that I mentioned in General It should be fine since I've used this before and Never used on anything lower than [I] . And that rule is still in discussion it seems

Without see the Rule, I forgot to mentiont about the consistency with Normal diff since it's Akareh's Normal for this reason I think that you have to change the name too

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

Saten:
- The change of name that I mentioned in General It should be fine since I've used this before and Never used on anything lower than [I] . And that rule is still in discussion it seems

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

Without see the Rule, I forgot to mentiont about the consistency with Normal diff since it's Akareh's Normal for this reason I think that you have to change the name too

My diff is seen as the hardest one anyway (not the highest score tho)
I see no harm in using the current one

Take a look at this for example
viewtopic.php?t=65154

just saying: live and let live :<

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

General:
- Maybe you can change your BG.png to .jpg, to have more space in your folder

No need. Current one is enough reasonable.

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

- Name of difficulties: [*] New Rule: Difficulty names must name the difficulty, for this reason you must add Insane in Saten-San diff in this case Saten's Insane

It's working document, doesn't work yet.
And for now, I guess it will be just a guideline, not a rule.
Current these names are fine, they need not to be changed imo.

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

[*] And the name in Taiko diff must be inaba's Taiko with capitalize the word Taiko. Also I think that you can add the word Oni in the title (inaba's Taiko Oni)

There is no rule like what you meant.
Taiko diff's name depends on the mind of a mapper. And a mapper can decide it freely.

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

- Tags: [*] Add opening in tags (all diff)
[*] Change akareh to Akareh

Whether adding or not adding "opening" is free. Even if it's not in tags, that's not a problem.
The tags have not to be in capital.

Please don't try to pop a map unless you found critical unrankable stuff.

@rickyboi
I can bubble again so feel free to fix the points of his mod~

making a note here:
Most of inaba's taiko diff is called 'inaba's taiko" (nowdays) so no problem with it.
But to inaba: you will encounter such arguements many times later on so it's better to put your diff as "inaba's Taiko" or "inaba's Taiko Oni" in the future.

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

Hey, I know that your map is still in Bubble, but I have say some things
General:
- Maybe you can change your BG.png to .jpg, to have more space in your folder

No it's fine as it is.

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

Easy:
00:20:257 (3): I don't like how to sound only this Note. I suggest to add a Slider that starts in 00:19:997 and have to ends in (3)

Not changing this due to previous mods.

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

Hard:
01:23:388 (3): This note sounds off rhythm, I suggest to move it 1/2 forward (Red Tick, 01:23:518)

Not off rythm, it definitely follows the drum snare, it's also included in Suzully's previous mod.

Thank you for the mod!

@wmfchris
I see then, I'll talk to inaba-tan with this later.



@Suzully
I'll contact you when all updates are done.

mod thx ><
i was changed diff name ''inaba's Taiko''

Download: Yousei Teikoku - Kuusou Mesorogiwi (TV size) (rickyboi) [inaba's Taiko].osu

Okay updated just gonna wait for Akareh.

@Page 1
Why did Mez's Kudosu got denied? I already stated in the first post that he helped me via IRC.
This is the 2nd time his kudosu got denied by a MAT.

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

[color=#0000FF]Akareh's Normal:
00:25:214 (Spin): This Spinner is too short in Normal diff., try to make another thing Sorry, but this seems fine for me, also I have some friends that play in normal and they don't find it very short.
00:34:605 (1): (Nazi Stuff): Move this Slider 1 grid right to stack with previous (5)ok
00:37:605 (3,4): Spacing, it's not recommended have this problems in Easy/Normal difficulties. Try to fix it with Distance Snap (Don't forget to move the next notes to don't have more Spacing Problems) ok
00:50:431 (Spin): Short Spinner in Normal difficulty Same thing as the other spin
01:06:866 (4,5): Spacing, fix with Distance Snap (Don't forget to move the next notes to don't have more Spacing Problems) ok
01:19:736 (1): This Slider fit better with music if Starts in 01:19:605 (Red Tick) and finish in 01:20:127 (Red Tick) ok
01:22:084 (2): This note is quite difficult to read to ''Normal Players'', and I also think that sounds well without that note. So, Remove it mm...ok

Ok, fixed everything except the two spins, I don't really find it necessary. Please Suzully, check them, if you too find them too short I'll fix them.

Download: Yousei Teikoku - Kuusou Mesorogiwi (TV size) (rickyboi) [Akareh's Normal].osu

Ok updated.

rickyboi wrote:

@Page 1
Why did Mez's Kudosu got denied? I already stated in the first post that he helped me via IRC.
This is the 2nd time his kudosu got denied by a MAT.

I'm not a man who denied kds though, if you want to give him kds, you have to put that log.

Akareh wrote:

Ok, fixed everything except the two spins, I don't really find it necessary. Please Suzully, check them, if you too find them too short I'll fix them.

00:50:453 (1) is kinda short but all spinners seem fine. (and this diff is not easiest one)


Rebubbled.

To BAT:
[Saten] and [Deus Ex] have more than three slider speeds, but they are fine imo because...
About [Saten], a note that is used 4th SV is only one, 00:57:301 (3), and it's not confusing and not big gap.
About [Deus Ex], 1.00x SV is not used.

Suzully wrote:

rickyboi wrote:

@Page 1
Why did Mez's Kudosu got denied? I already stated in the first post that he helped me via IRC.
This is the 2nd time his kudosu got denied by a MAT.

I'm not a man who denied kds though, if you want to give him kds, you have to put that log.

Actually it's already in the log ever since I upload the song lol.

Anyway Thank you again for the bubble!

Just need 1 more.

hello~~

General

1. Hard TAG are inconsistency
   
   Hard: Saten-san akareh inaba-tan yuno gasai yukiteru amano yandere god 1st 2nd deus ex machina future diary OP opening
   
   and another diff's are :Saten-san akareh inaba-tan yuno gasai yukiteru amano yandere god 1st 2nd deus ex machina Future Diary OP opening
   
   so you hard only "future" and "diary" are different another so pleasse make same TAG

1. also you all diff need disable "letterbox during breaks" because you have video so pleasse disable that

Some Suggestions
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Easy

1. 00:54:170 (4) - grid 1 left because need symentric with 00:53:127 (2) or just intentional?
2. 01:25:997 (1) - grid 1 right

relax play
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Akareh's Normal

1. 00:30:953 (1) - just nazi need 1 grid up to fix spacing IMO
2. 00:37:214 (3,4) - pleasse don't make jump because the bpm are 230 and too hard catch here on normal so pleasse fix spacing also if you fix spacing you need fix spacing at 00:37:997 (5) too
3. 01:18:562 (4,5) - grid 1 right because the (4) need symentric with 01:17:518 (1)
4. 01:25:866 (1,2) - they are not perfect stack try perfect stack with 0.00x

stuff cool
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Hard

1. 00:19:214 (1) - grid 1 left with symentric 00:19:736 (3)?
2. 00:21:823 (4) - grid 1 up with symentric 00:22:084 (5,6) ?
3. 00:24:692 (5) - grid 1 up with symentric 00:24:171 (4)?
4. 00:35:258 (3,4,5) - inconsistency spacing
5. 00:45:040 (1) - this are ugly arc with 4 point must better if use 5 point http://puu.sh/ezlC here code if you wanna symentric arc also if you use you need fix spacing at 00:45:823 (2)
   

   336,200,45040,6,0,B|348:252|400:272|452:252|464:200,1,180,0|8

6. 00:53:649 (1) - grid 1 dowm with symentric 00:54:171 (3,4)
7. 01:16:344 this line green timing are unsnapped

stuff cool
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Saten

ho my gaw
stuff cool
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Deus Ex

you crazy mapper orz
stuff aswome
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
the mod are just suggestions but you have fix the General anyway
that all i think and star because nice gameplay and great mapper
good luck and bye bye

Pereira006 wrote:

hello~~

General

1. Hard TAG are inconsistency
   
   Hard: Saten-san akareh inaba-tan yuno gasai yukiteru amano yandere god 1st 2nd deus ex machina future diary OP opening
   
   and another diff's are :Saten-san akareh inaba-tan yuno gasai yukiteru amano yandere god 1st 2nd deus ex machina Future Diary OP opening
   
   so you hard only "future" and "diary" are different another so pleasse make same TAG

1. also you all diff need disable "letterbox during breaks" because you have video so pleasse disable that

Not a problem even if tags are capital or not...and also you need not to think about letterbox because all diffs have no break...
But yeah, there is no reason that I prevent you to fix them...call me back again after fix, rickyboi.
*sign* How many times will I recheck and rebubble

Pereira006 wrote:

Hard
you need fix spacing at 00:45:823 (2)

I didn't use distance snap on this one, It's fine as it is so I'm not gonna change it.

Thank you for the compliment and mod

@Suzully
Sorry about this.. People have been popping up so suddenly.

Improving the map is pretty good thing.

Rebubbled. again

To BAT:
[Saten] and [Deus Ex] have more than three slider speeds, but they are fine imo because...
About [Saten], a note that is used 4th SV is only one, 00:57:301 (3), and it's not confusing and not big gap.
About [Deus Ex], 1.00x SV is not used.

Thank you again for always checking my map.

How do I get a 2nd bubble again?

rickyboi wrote:

Thank you again for always checking my map.

How do I get a 2nd bubble again?

you don't.

Only approval maps need 2 bubbles.

Saten-san wrote:

rickyboi wrote:

Thank you again for always checking my map.

How do I get a 2nd bubble again?

you don't.

Only approval maps need 2 bubbles.

Then I guess I should just wait.

Hellou, just a few things I wanted to point out:

[Akareh's Normal]

[01:12:431] (1) - Probably would look better if you centered this.
[01:23:779] (1) - This would sound better if you pulled either of the ends by one pixel. Then resnap the notes after.

[Hard]

[01:25:866] (1) - You might want to turn the volume down even further hear, the spinner sounds kinda ruins the quiet ending. You can turn it back up at the end of the spinner for the final hitsound.

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It looks really nice, good luck!