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Riseha - Namae no nai uta

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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年4月12日 at 20:30:19

Artist: riseha
Title: Namae no nai uta
Source: dateken
Tags: vocaloid len kagamine vocaloid2 riseha
BPM: 74
Filesize: 5081kb
Play Time: 03:03
Difficulties Available:
  1. Advanced (4.32 stars, 264 notes)
  2. Nameless diff (4.88 stars, 366 notes)
  3. Relaxing (0.86 stars, 88 notes)
  4. Standard (2.02 stars, 154 notes)
Download: riseha - Namae no nai uta
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Graveyard, great.

(I will make another map soon, with a little more experience than this graveyard map)
(Or Resurrect this map...)
Suzully
Anyway good luck with you, a new mapper!                  
aesopl19193
Hi 你好
想要加星的話有2種方法,
1.自己加
你幫別人mod圖,如果你的mod對作者有用,他會給你kd, 有了kd就可以給星
2.別人加
別人覺得你的圖有潛質就會給你星

想找人mod圖的話可以直接去找人mod, 或者到這裡:
viewforum.php?f=60

[General]
offset : 3269
Delete "riseha - Namae no nai uta (Anchor).osb" 然後Full submit
03:03:269 之後你應該不會map了吧, 最好剪掉, 因為後面差不多佔了1/4 的長度...

下節奏方面,
同一段落一時跟鼓一時跟歌詞感覺很亂
最好統一
Topic Starter
Anchor

aesopl19193 wrote:

Hi 你好
想要加星的話有2種方法,
1.自己加
你幫別人mod圖,如果你的mod對作者有用,他會給你kd, 有了kd就可以給星
2.別人加
別人覺得你的圖有潛質就會給你星

想找人mod圖的話可以直接去找人mod, 或者到這裡:
viewforum.php?f=60

[General]
offset : 3269
Delete "riseha - Namae no nai uta (Anchor).osb" 然後Full submit
03:03:269 之後你應該不會map了吧, 最好剪掉, 因為後面差不多佔了1/4 的長度...

下節奏方面,
同一段落一時跟鼓一時跟歌詞感覺很亂
最好統一
thank you for modding!

P.S. can anyone tell me what does"riseha - Namae no nai uta (Anchor).osb" use for? Is it OK for deleting it?
Nymph

Anchor wrote:

P.S. can anyone tell me what does"riseha - Namae no nai uta (Anchor).osb" use for? Is it OK for deleting it?[/color]
OSB文件一般是你给你的MAP制作STORYBOARD的时候 相关的数据会保存在里面吧

如果不制作的话 删了也无妨
Topic Starter
Anchor

Nymph wrote:

Anchor wrote:

P.S. can anyone tell me what does"riseha - Namae no nai uta (Anchor).osb" use for? Is it OK for deleting it?[/color]
OSB文件一般是你给你的MAP制作STORYBOARD的时候 相关的数据会保存在里面吧

如果不制作的话 删了也无妨
i see... 但幾只有數KB, Keep著也無所謂吧...
imRitaka
Just a random mod for a fellow new mapper. :D
These are all just suggestions too.

[General]
For the tags, you might want to put 'kagamine' in there, since it's Kagamine Len.
The timing here seems to be good. Nice job.

[Relaxing]
HP Drain Rate: -1 / Overall Difficulty: -1.
01:55:160 - 01:56:782 > Maybe you could try this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/156150
01:58:606 - 02:08:336 > You should consider mapping this part.
02:29:620 > Try putting (2) above (1) instead of below it. It'll be easier to follow.
02:35:296 > End this slider on the red tick. It sounds better.

[Standard]
HP Drain Rate: -2 / Approach Rate: -3 / Overall Difficulty: -2.
There are some places in this difficulty where the spacing randomly changes. (For example: 01:03:269 > (4) is farther from (3) than (2) is.) Try going around and fixing these using Distance Snap.
There are some places in here that need to be spaced farther. (For example: 02:45:431 - 02:47:863 ) Find these and fix these too.
01:11:377 - 01:12:593 > Try making this combo go straight down.
01:58:606 - 02:08:336 > Again, consider mapping this part for all difficulties.
02:40:160 > (4,5,6,7,8) You probably shouldn't keep the notes so close.
For this difficulty, try focusing more on fixing the spacing when changing some things.

[Advanced]
HP Drain Rate: -1 / Approach Rate: -2.
In this difficulty, there are some spacing issues. Try using AIMod (File > Open AIMod) to find these and fix them. (Though you don't have to fix them all, just the ones that look too far or too close.)
01:08:944 - 01:09:552 > (4) and (5) aren't close enough to the end of slider (3).
01:12:593 > Try moving (2) from underneath the slider and put it somewhere else.
02:16:647 - 02:17:863 > Try spacing these out a bit more. (I used 0.8x Distance Snap.) Also, if you see more of these that look like they need to be spaced, try using 0.8x too.
02:19:079 > Take (2) out from under that slider and use Distance Snap to place it somewhere else.

[Extra]
HP Drain Rate: -1 / Approach Rate: -3 / Overall Difficulty: -1.
00:38:741 -00:39:958 > The spacing suddenly changed here from what it was. Fix this.
00:50:296 - 00:50:498 > This needs to be spaced alot closer.
01:17:052 > This stream isn't necessary. You'd just need to put notes where she says 'Uta'.
01:49:890 - 01:51:106 and 01:53:133 - 01:54:350 > I think this was what you were trying to do. I don't really mind this pattern, but I don't see it alot, so it's a little weird to me.
In this difficulty, the spacing really needs to be worked on. I'm seeing alot of notes that are either too far away from each other or too close.

For your first map, you're off to a very good start. You just need to fix up some things and get more people to mod your map. :)
Topic Starter
Anchor

Ritaka wrote:

Just a random mod for a fellow new mapper. :D
These are all just suggestions too.

[General]
For the tags, you might want to put 'kagamine' in there, since it's Kagamine Len. done!
The timing here seems to be good. Nice job. thanks!

[Relaxing]
HP Drain Rate: -1 / Overall Difficulty: -1. done!
01:55:160 - 01:56:782 > Maybe you could try this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/156150 done!
01:58:606 - 02:08:336 > You should consider mapping this part. is it necessary...? i think that is ok for now..
02:29:620 > Try putting (2) above (1) instead of below it. It'll be easier to follow.done!
02:35:296 > End this slider on the red tick. It sounds better. i changed that slider instead

[Standard]
HP Drain Rate: -2 / Approach Rate: -3 / Overall Difficulty: -2. done!
There are some places in this difficulty where the spacing randomly changes. (For example: 01:03:269 > (4) is farther from (3) than (2) is.) Try going around and fixing these using Distance Snap.done!
There are some places in here that need to be spaced farther. (For example: 02:45:431 - 02:47:863 ) Find these and fix these too. done!
01:11:377 - 01:12:593 > Try making this combo go straight down. done!
01:58:606 - 02:08:336 > Again, consider mapping this part for all difficulties. is it really necessary..?
02:40:160 > (4,5,6,7,8) You probably shouldn't keep the notes so close. done!
For this difficulty, try focusing more on fixing the spacing when changing some things. ok!

[Advanced]
HP Drain Rate: -1 / Approach Rate: -2. done!
In this difficulty, there are some spacing issues. Try using AIMod (File > Open AIMod) to find these and fix them. (Though you don't have to fix them all, just the ones that look too far or too close.) ok!
01:08:944 - 01:09:552 > (4) and (5) aren't close enough to the end of slider (3). done!
01:12:593 > Try moving (2) from underneath the slider and put it somewhere else. i has changed that instead
02:16:647 - 02:17:863 > Try spacing these out a bit more. (I used 0.8x Distance Snap.) Also, if you see more of these that look like they need to be spaced, try using 0.8x too. ok
02:19:079 > Take (2) out from under that slider and use Distance Snap to place it somewhere else. I has changed it

[Extra]
HP Drain Rate: -1 / Approach Rate: -3 / Overall Difficulty: -1. done!
00:38:741 -00:39:958 > The spacing suddenly changed here from what it was. Fix this. done!
00:50:296 - 00:50:498 > This needs to be spaced alot closer. done!
01:17:052 > This stream isn't necessary. You'd just need to put notes where she says 'Uta'. no stream now~ but not just putted on "Uta"
01:49:890 - 01:51:106 and 01:53:133 - 01:54:350 > I think this was what you were trying to do. I don't really mind this pattern, but I don't see it alot, so it's a little weird to me. I think that is fine... or if other one tells me that is weird, then i will change it
In this difficulty, the spacing really needs to be worked on. I'm seeing alot of notes that are either too far away from each other or too close. ok!

For your first map, you're off to a very good start. You just need to fix up some things and get more people to mod your map. :)


OK! thanks for your modding, I'm going to fix the spacing problem right now..
eikkaleyd
麴子長度剪掉吧?文件也能減小一點,為了方便我帮你剪了一下看看能不能用~
網阯在這邊,應該可以下載?


放進folder時要改一下文件名,不然讀不齣來
哦= =我髮現我不會剪VIDEO【踹飛

——for standard
其實作為easy難度很多地方我們覺得很簡單的,新人會覺得有點喫力,比較難讀懂【找個新手試一下就知道了】,稍微給點提醒你可以看看的

應該算是炤顧新手吧?:P
00.50.701 ,最好把note2拿到拖條外側(比如左上方
01.07.323 note6放到5的左上角吧
02.17.458 同理也把3放到最右邊
02.29.214 拖條不要和圈叠在一起,拉到上麵
所以說EASY比HARD難做啊( ̄▽ ̄")

——for extra
00.48.269 雖然兩個正方形感覺有點花了,不過想想也沒什麼好改的,把那個slider拿遠一點試試看吧,也許不會那麼看不清
01.51.512 我很喜歡這個跳的感覺,但一直順時鍼走就會顯得單調重複,解決建議是把1-4和後麵的1-7全選中,然後用edit-flip horizontally水平繙轉一遍,看起來就好很多了
02.30.431 上麵這個問題的重現,唔,也可以用水平繙轉(把1-8和slider選中繙轉),就不會單調了。

總之作為INSANE的話擺的有點糾結應該也不成影響,推薦多利用繙轉,把類似的段落鏡麵反射,免得玩的時候既視感強烈o(* ̄▽ ̄*)o
Topic Starter
Anchor

eikkaleyd wrote:

麴子長度剪掉吧?文件也能減小一點,為了方便我帮你剪了一下看看能不能用~
網阯在這邊,應該可以下載?


放進folder時要改一下文件名,不然讀不齣來
哦= =我髮現我不會剪VIDEO【踹飛

——for standard
其實作為easy難度很多地方我們覺得很簡單的,新人會覺得有點喫力,比較難讀懂【找個新手試一下就知道了】,稍微給點提醒你可以看看的

應該算是炤顧新手吧?:P 嗯.. 所以我有Relaxing吧~
00.50.701 ,最好把note2拿到拖條外側(比如左上方 done!
01.07.323 note6放到5的左上角吧 done!
02.17.458 同理也把3放到最右邊 done!
02.29.214 拖條不要和圈叠在一起,拉到上麵 done!
所以說EASY比HARD難做啊( ̄▽ ̄") 嗯... 未動手做前真的想不到..

——for extra
00.48.269 雖然兩個正方形感覺有點花了,不過想想也沒什麼好改的,把那個slider拿遠一點試試看吧,也許不會那麼看不清done!
01.51.512 我很喜歡這個跳的感覺,但一直順時鍼走就會顯得單調重複,解決建議是把1-4和後麵的1-7全選中,然後用edit-flip horizontally水平繙轉一遍,看起來就好很多了done!
02.30.431 上麵這個問題的重現,唔,也可以用水平繙轉(把1-8和slider選中繙轉),就不會單調了。 done!

總之作為INSANE的話擺的有點糾結應該也不成影響,推薦多利用繙轉,把類似的段落鏡麵反射,免得玩的時候既視感強烈o(* ̄▽ ̄*)o
S h i a
[总体]
删掉无用的bookmark?

[relaxing]
XD 加油啊
建议多玩玩最近rank的一些图,看看其他mapper easy的做法

00:30:836 (2,3) - 距离太近 建议在00:31:647加NOTE (3)
02:42:187 (1) - 加new combo
02:44:620 (1) - 同上
03:00:836 (5,6,1) - note之间距离XD

[standard]
01:45:431 (1) - spinner从 1:43:809开始 结束位置不变

[Advance]
note可以再排满一点 尝试打一些自己的节奏

00:41:985 (4) - 4移动到00:42:187 会好一点
01:07:931 (7) - 加note?
01:46:241 (1) - 同上

[ameless diff]
fine <3
Topic Starter
Anchor

S h i a wrote:

[总体]
删掉无用的bookmark?

[relaxing]
XD 加油啊
建议多玩玩最近rank的一些图,看看其他mapper easy的做法 OK!

00:30:836 (2,3) - 距离太近 建议在00:31:647加NOTE (3) done!
02:42:187 (1) - 加new combo done!
02:44:620 (1) - 同上 done!
03:00:836 (5,6,1) - note之间距离XD done!

[standard]
01:45:431 (1) - spinner从 1:43:809开始 结束位置不变 done!

[Advance]
note可以再排满一点 尝试打一些自己的节奏 嗯.. i try...

00:41:985 (4) - 4移动到00:42:187 会好一点 done!
01:07:931 (7) - 加note? i try...
01:46:241 (1) - 同上 同上

[ameless diff]
fine <3
Scorpiour
只看了advanced和nameless难度……提点建议希望有用的说

advanced:

00:36:512 (2) - 从这里开始slider时不时会出现滚动的音效感觉略违和,考虑整个替换掉?
00:46:647 (1) - 跟着vocal的感觉走时有点怪怪的,考虑去掉最后一个reverse,然后在00:47:863和00:48:066加2个note接上后面的形成五连打?
01:01:039 (3,4) - 考虑向后挪动到红线?这样配合节奏会更流畅一些,现在01:01:444的空拍略别扭
01:02:052 - 承接上面的,这里的空拍也别扭,考虑整体移动一下节奏,给个建议(见下面附件,白线对准位置为01:02:052)

01:04:485 - 考虑加个note?
01:04:687 (1,2) - 这两个slider似乎短了?好像没压准节奏
02:15:836 (3) - 感觉有些吵,考虑给拉直?
02:19:079 (2) - 建议取消finish,同上的原因,后面还有一些finish音效感觉用多了
02:49:282 - 考虑加个note?

nameless:
00:40:769 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这种连续的clap啪啪啪感觉不是很好听……考虑简化一点?(后面还有一处)另外一个就是finish感觉还是用的偏多了,考虑减少一些?
00:53:741 (7) - 2次finish很违和……
00:58:606 (2,3) - 考虑向后挪动一拍?现在后面那个空拍感觉怪怪的
01:01:850 (1,2,3,4) - 前后的各一个空拍略违和。。但是我想不出该怎么改动。。只是建议考虑下。
01:16:039 (5) - 移除finish,或者移除起点的finish
01:50:296 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 以及后面的一个,考虑只保留1-7?
01:57:187 - 考虑加个note?
01:57:998 (5) - 略吵。。。
02:26:985 (2) - 考虑删掉?感觉突然很仓促的样子
02:27:796 (1) - ^
02:28:606 (1) - ^
02:37:525 (7) - finish音效
02:40:160 (4) - slider结束位置好像不对,感觉应该停在白线
02:47:052 (6,7,8,9) - finish音效太多了。。。感觉最多保留9的就足够了
02:49:890 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:53:539 (5) - 这个slider也应该结束在白线吧?
02:56:579 - 加个note?或者把slider拉长到这里?其实我感觉这里都可以做个减速了
02:57:187 - 加个note?



蛮喜欢这首歌的,加油!

Topic Starter
Anchor

Scorpiour wrote:

只看了advanced和nameless难度……提点建议希望有用的说

advanced:

00:36:512 (2) - 从这里开始slider时不时会出现滚动的音效感觉略违和,考虑整个替换掉? done!
00:46:647 (1) - 跟着vocal的感觉走时有点怪怪的,考虑去掉最后一个reverse,然后在00:47:863和00:48:066加2个note接上后面的形成五连打?done!
01:01:039 (3,4) - 考虑向后挪动到红线?这样配合节奏会更流畅一些,现在01:01:444的空拍略别扭 done!
01:02:052 - 承接上面的,这里的空拍也别扭,考虑整体移动一下节奏,给个建议(见下面附件,白线对准位置为01:02:052) done!

01:04:485 - 考虑加个note? done!
01:04:687 (1,2) - 这两个slider似乎短了?好像没压准节奏 done!
02:15:836 (3) - 感觉有些吵,考虑给拉直? done!
02:19:079 (2) - 建议取消finish,同上的原因,后面还有一些finish音效感觉用多了 done!
02:49:282 - 考虑加个note? done!

nameless:
00:40:769 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这种连续的clap啪啪啪感觉不是很好听……考虑简化一点?(后面还有一处)另外一个就是finish感觉还是用的偏多了,考虑减少一些? done!
00:53:741 (7) - 2次finish很违和…… done!
00:58:606 (2,3) - 考虑向后挪动一拍?现在后面那个空拍感觉怪怪的 done!
01:01:850 (1,2,3,4) - 前后的各一个空拍略违和。。但是我想不出该怎么改动。。只是建议考虑下。 done!
01:16:039 (5) - 移除finish,或者移除起点的finish done!
01:50:296 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 以及后面的一个,考虑只保留1-7? done! (but I keep 8)
01:57:187 - 考虑加个note? done!
01:57:998 (5) - 略吵。。。 done!
02:26:985 (2) - 考虑删掉?感觉突然很仓促的样子 done!
02:27:796 (1) - ^ ^
02:28:606 (1) - ^ ^
02:37:525 (7) - finish音效 done!
02:40:160 (4) - slider结束位置好像不对,感觉应该停在白线 done!
02:47:052 (6,7,8,9) - finish音效太多了。。。感觉最多保留9的就足够了 done!
02:49:890 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^
02:53:539 (5) - 这个slider也应该结束在白线吧? done!
02:56:579 - 加个note?或者把slider拉长到这里?其实我感觉这里都可以做个减速了 减速..?
02:57:187 - 加个note?done!



蛮喜欢这首歌的,加油!
現在我開始消滅多餘的finish!
Abe Nana
koreha mod desuka?

実は これ初moddingですw
笑わないで...

[standard]
hitsoundを もっと 追加してみてわ いかがですか
これは 例示ですから 入れてみて 参考して下さい
00:38:133 (4) - whistle
00:42:998 (2,3) - whistle
00:45:431 (5) - whistle
00:47:458 (3) - whistle
00:50:701 (3) - whistle
00:58:404 (1) - whistle
00:59:214 (3) - whistle
01:01:647 (6) - whistle
01:02:458 (1) - whistle
01:04:485 (2) - whistle
01:06:512 (5) - whistle
01:47:052 (1) - clap
01:48:674 (1) - clap
01:51:106 (3) - clap
01:52:728 (3) - clap
01:54:350 (3) - clap
01:55:160 (1) - clap
01:56:782 (1) - clap
01:58:404 (2) - whistle
02:25:160 (3) - whistle
02:26:377 (1) - whistle
02:54:755 (4) - whistle
00:51:917 (1) - whistle 排除検討
適当に 見たから 他にも追加する 部分はあります

[Advance]
すごくいいですね. でも whistleとclapが もちょい入ったら いいと思います.

[Nameless diff]

00:32:052 (4) - 00:33:269 (3) - 00:33:674 (5) - whistle
00:34:282 (2,3,4,5,6) - 検討を 願います
00:36:714 (2) - 00:37:728 (5) - whistle
00:40:971 (2) - 00:41:377 (4) - whistle 排除検討
00:54:755 (1) ~ 00:59:620 (1) - GREAT
01:00:025 (2) - 01:00:431 (4) - 01:00:836 (6) - 01:01:241 (8) - whistle
01:01:444 (9) ~ 01:07:728 (7) - GREAT
01:08:539 (2) - 01:09:350 (6) - 01:09:755 (8) - 01:09:958 (9) - 01:13:404 (3) - whistle
01:13:606 (4) - whistle and finish
01:14:215 (1) - 01:17:863 (5) - GREAT
01:48:674 (5) - 01:50:296 (1) - clap
02:15:025 (7) - 02:15:431 (1) - 02:15:836 (2) - 02:16:241 (3) - 02:17:458 (4) - 02:20:296 (3) - 02:20:701 (4) - whistle
02:25:769 (6) - NGです
02:42:390 (1) - 02:42:998 (4) - 02:43:606 (7) - 02:47:458 (7) - 02:55:160 (3) - 02:55:971 (5) - whistle
03:01:241 (5) - finish
03:01:647 (1) - 03:02:052 (2) - 03:02:863 (4) - 03:03:674 (7) - 頭にwhistle
lovhin456
hi! here's my mod (:

song's info;
- tags >> add kagamine vocaloid2

general;
- the quality of the bg is bad, but i guess it can't be helped :/
- try these colors ? fit more
Combo1 : 96,164,183
Combo2 : 253,228,142
Combo3 : 230,157,60
- i'm not sure the video is that important, i mean is just the lyrics :/
- 74 bpm ? well in my opinion if you double the bpm it would be much better ...

standard;
- Inconsistent spacing during the whole song ):
- AR -1 ?
- 00:38:133 >> move to 00:38:539
- 01:16:647 >> delete, you're just making things harder by adding more notes
- 01:17:863 >> end the slider here and the kiai time too
- 02:17:052 >> delete
- 02:22:323 (4,5,6,7,8~1,2,3,4) >> too many notes in a row; delete (6,8) and the note at 02:25:566
- 02:42:187 (1,2,3) >> mix into a slider otherwise there are too many notes in a row
- 02:43:809 >> just put a note at 02:44:214
- 02:45:431 >> remove a repeat and move to 02:45:836
- 02:48:269 (2,3) >> delete both and make a slider from this point to 02:49:079 then add a repeat to it
- 02:54:755 >> delete
- 03:01:647 >> just end the slider here, way better imo, and kiai too
- overall; the main problem is the spacing, the look of the sliders could improve a bit more

advance;
- may as well change to advanced ?
- circle size +1 bigger
- slidertick 2 please
- again inconsistent spacing during the whole song D:
- 00:33:674 >> remove new combo
- 00:45:431 (2,3,4) >> combine these into a slider, sounds better
- 00:48:269 >> delete
- 01:01:241 (3,4) >> move these one tick forward
- 01:04:485 >> add a note
- 01:04:890 >> end the slider here
- 01:17:863 >> end kiai here
- 02:16:647 >> combine these 3 into a slider
- 02:17:458 >> ^
- 02:18:877 >> move (2) here
- 02:53:133 >> make a slider from here to 02:53:741 and add a repeat
- 03:01:647 >> end kiai here

nameless diff;
- slider tick 2
- 00:32:863 (1,2,3,4,5) >> no need for all these notes ... they don't even sound well
- 00:43:809 >> remove new combo
- 00:48:269 >> ^
- 00:55:566 (1,2,3) >> this is not okk, you're using 1/8 snap :/ this is what happens when you use such a low bpm, you have to use 1/8 to create streams which don't even sound good
- 00:56:174 >> don't use these kind of 'streams' they sound awful
- i don't like this diff at all, this diff shouldn't exist, don't try to do an insane diff for this kind of song, this song is just too slow with a hard diff with a few jumps is just enough

* Here's some advice: 1st double that bpm, it will help greatly; 2nd since this is a long song you could just do 2 diffs, balanced diffs, a normal and a hard.
* star for the effort, you can ask for a re-check anytime you want
Topic Starter
Anchor
KongkineTeitoku mod:
SPOILER

KongkineTeitoku wrote:

koreha mod desuka?

実は これ初moddingですw
笑わないで... 笑うなんてしないよ、ありがとう!!

[standard]
hitsoundを もっと 追加してみてわ いかがですか
これは 例示ですから 入れてみて 参考して下さい
00:38:133 (4) - whistle Done!
00:42:998 (2,3) - whistle Done!
00:45:431 (5) - whistle i think it is ok for now...
00:47:458 (3) - whistle Done!Oh my god, i love this, thanks!!
00:50:701 (3) - whistle Done!
00:58:404 (1) - whistleDone!
00:59:214 (3) - whistleDone!
01:01:647 (6) - whistleDone!
01:02:458 (1) - whistle Done!
01:04:485 (2) - whistle i think it is just fine..
01:06:512 (5) - whistle Don't mind..
01:47:052 (1) - clap Done! このパートにどんなhitsoundを入ればいいのか、悩みました
01:48:674 (1) - clap Done! 感謝!
01:51:106 (3) - clap Done!
01:52:728 (3) - clap Done!
01:54:350 (3) - clap Done!
01:55:160 (1) - clap Done! 
01:56:782 (1) - clap Done!
01:58:404 (2) - whistle finishの方がいいと思いますが…
02:25:160 (3) - whistle Done!
02:26:377 (1) - whistleDone!
02:54:755 (4) - whistleDone!
00:51:917 (1) - whistle 排除検討 いいね!
適当に 見たから 他にも追加する 部分はあります 分かりました

[Advance]
すごくいいですね. でも whistleとclapが もちょい入ったら いいと思います. 分かりました

[Nameless diff]

00:32:052 (4) - 00:33:269 (3) - 00:33:674 (5) - whistle Done! (but not all)
00:34:282 (2,3,4,5,6) - 検討を 願います Done!
00:36:714 (2) - 00:37:728 (5) - whistle Done!(but not 2)
00:40:971 (2) - 00:41:377 (4) - whistle 排除検討 Done!(2,3 and 5)
00:54:755 (1) ~ 00:59:620 (1) - GREAT
01:00:025 (2) - 01:00:431 (4) - 01:00:836 (6) - 01:01:241 (8) - whistle Done!Great hitsound suggestion!
01:01:444 (9) ~ 01:07:728 (7) - GREAT
01:08:539 (2) - 01:09:350 (6) - 01:09:755 (8) - 01:09:958 (9) - 01:13:404 (3) - whistle Done! (but no 9)
01:13:606 (4) - whistle and finish Done!
01:14:215 (1) - 01:17:863 (5) - GREAT
01:48:674 (5) - 01:50:296 (1) - clap i already have clap over there
02:15:025 (7) - 02:15:431 (1) - 02:15:836 (2) - 02:16:241 (3) - 02:17:458 (4) - 02:20:296 (3) - 02:20:701 (4) - whistle Done!
02:25:769 (6) - NGです Done!
02:42:390 (1) - 02:42:998 (4) - 02:43:606 (7) - 02:47:458 (7) - 02:55:160 (3) - 02:55:971 (5) - whistle Done!
03:01:241 (5) - finish Done!
03:01:647 (1) - 03:02:052 (2) - 03:02:863 (4) - 03:03:674 (7) - 頭にwhistle Done!

lovhin456's mod:
SPOILER

lovhin456 wrote:

hi! here's my mod (:

song's info;
- tags >> add kagamine vocaloid2 done!

general;
- the quality of the bg is bad, but i guess it can't be helped :/ BG mean the background picture?
- try these colors ? fit more i chose some other colors... please have a look :3
Combo1 : 96,164,183
Combo2 : 253,228,142
Combo3 : 230,157,60
- i'm not sure the video is that important, i mean is just the lyrics :/ yeah.. i'm thinking if i can remove the video, what should i do to remove the video? Because i tried it, but there are still have 2 button(video + no video) (and then i will make some SB for lyrics
- 74 bpm ? well in my opinion if you double the bpm it would be much better ... really? what is the difference between using 1/8 snap and double BPM?

standard;
- Inconsistent spacing during the whole song ): ok... i will fix it later
- AR -1 ? done!
- 00:38:133 >> move to 00:38:539 done!
- 01:16:647 >> delete, you're just making things harder by adding more notes done!
- 01:17:863 >> end the slider here and the kiai time too done!
- 02:17:052 >> deletedone!
- 02:22:323 (4,5,6,7,8~1,2,3,4) >> too many notes in a row; delete (6,8) and the note at 02:25:566 done...
- 02:42:187 (1,2,3) >> mix into a slider otherwise there are too many notes in a rowdone!
- 02:43:809 >> just put a note at 02:44:214done!
- 02:45:431 >> remove a repeat and move to 02:45:836 done!
- 02:48:269 (2,3) >> delete both and make a slider from this point to 02:49:079 then add a repeat to it done!
- 02:54:755 >> delete done!
- 03:01:647 >> just end the slider here, way better imo, and kiai too done!what does imo means?
- overall; the main problem is the spacing, the look of the sliders could improve a bit moreOk... i try my best..

advance;
- may as well change to advanced ? OK
- circle size +1 biggerdone!
- slidertick 2 pleasedone!
- again inconsistent spacing during the whole song D:ok... i will fix it later
- 00:33:674 >> remove new combodone!
- 00:45:431 (2,3,4) >> combine these into a slider, sounds better done!
- 00:48:269 >> delete done!
- 01:01:241 (3,4) >> move these one tick forwardwhat does you mean " one tick forward" like now?
- 01:04:485 >> add a note done!
- 01:04:890 >> end the slider heredone!
- 01:17:863 >> end kiai here done!
- 02:16:647 >> combine these 3 into a sliderdone!
- 02:17:458 >> ^done!
- 02:18:877 >> move (2) here done!
- 02:53:133 >> make a slider from here to 02:53:741 and add a repeatdone!
- 03:01:647 >> end kiai here done!

nameless diff;
- slider tick 2Done!
- 00:32:863 (1,2,3,4,5) >> no need for all these notes ... they don't even sound well Done! changed to slider
- 00:43:809 >> remove new combo Done!
- 00:48:269 >> ^ Done!
- 00:55:566 (1,2,3) >> this is not okk, you're using 1/8 snap :/ this is what happens when you use such a low bpm, you have to use 1/8 to create streams which don't even sound good i though it is just fine.. i want to know why it is not good?
- 00:56:174 >> don't use these kind of 'streams' they sound awful let us due with BPM problem first, but i promise i will change the stream
- i don't like this diff at all, this diff shouldn't exist, don't try to do an insane diff for this kind of song, this song is just too slow with a hard diff with a few jumps is just enoughops, that is petty sad,I get your point, I will think about it, if there's anyone tell me"this diff shouldn't exist" again, then i will consider deleting it or something else..

* Here's some advice: 1st double that bpm, it will help greatly; 2nd since this is a long song you could just do 2 diffs, balanced diffs, a normal and a hard. Thanks for your mod anyway.
* star for the effort, you can ask for a re-check anytime you want

Thanks for you two's mod!
lovhin456
[spoilerbox]

lovhin456 wrote:

- the quality of the bg is bad, but i guess it can't be helped :/ BG mean the background picture? yes
- try these colors ? fit more i chose some other colors... please have a look :3 they're good
- i'm not sure the video is that important, i mean is just the lyrics :/ yeah.. i'm thinking if i can remove the video, what should i do to remove the video? Because i tried it, but there are still have 2 button(video + no video) (and then i will make some SB for lyrics delete the video from the song's folder, then open every osu file with notepad, under [events] look for the video's code and delete it, then close and save and at last full upload

standard;
- 03:01:647 >> just end the slider here, way better imo, and kiai too done!what does imo means? imo = in my opinion

advance;
- 01:01:241 (3,4) >> move these one tick forwardwhat does you mean " one tick forward" like now? what I meant was to move (3) to 01:01:039 and (4) to 01:01:241; one tick forward in the timeline

nameless diff;
- 00:55:566 (1,2,3) >> this is not okk, you're using 1/8 snap :/ this is what happens when you use such a low bpm, you have to use 1/8 to create streams which don't even sound good i though it is just fine.. i want to know why it is not good? you're right 1/4 and 1/8 is the same if you don't double the bpm, then I think that mainly streams don't go well with this slow song or that well is tricky to place them and make them fit the song well

Thanks for you two's mod!
Topic Starter
Anchor
lovhin456:
SPOILER

lovhin456 wrote:

[spoilerbox]

lovhin456 wrote:

- the quality of the bg is bad, but i guess it can't be helped :/ BG mean the background picture? yes
- try these colors ? fit more i chose some other colors... please have a look :3 they're good
- i'm not sure the video is that important, i mean is just the lyrics :/ yeah.. i'm thinking if i can remove the video, what should i do to remove the video? Because i tried it, but there are still have 2 button(video + no video) (and then i will make some SB for lyrics delete the video from the song's folder, then open every osu file with notepad, under [events] look for the video's code and delete it, then close and save and at last full upload

standard;
- 03:01:647 >> just end the slider here, way better imo, and kiai too done!what does imo means? imo = in my opinion

advance;
- 01:01:241 (3,4) >> move these one tick forwardwhat does you mean " one tick forward" like now? what I meant was to move (3) to 01:01:039 and (4) to 01:01:241; one tick forward in the timeline

nameless diff;
- 00:55:566 (1,2,3) >> this is not okk, you're using 1/8 snap :/ this is what happens when you use such a low bpm, you have to use 1/8 to create streams which don't even sound good i though it is just fine.. i want to know why it is not good? you're right 1/4 and 1/8 is the same if you don't double the bpm, then I think that mainly streams don't go well with this slow song or that well is tricky to place them and make them fit the song well

Thanks for you two's mod!

yeah.. I've asked MAT and he told me the same thing that no insane is needed in slow song, though, insane in a slow song is still rankable.
I'm not going to delete the insane just for now..(I petty like that diff in fact :( ), i just keep it, but I will make a easy diff. (But I am going to delete the streams)

Video deleted, thank you for telling me how to delete it!! (I will need to spend some more time for making the SB lol)

If there is not a big difference between double BPM and 1/8 snap, I'm not going to change it for now... (but once the streams in insane is gone, there is nothing about using 1/8 snap)

I thinking how to let the BG being better quality... :|

Anyway, thanks a lot for your pro modding.

Oh yes, one more question, I think there's some problem about the offset... is it too early or later...?
lovhin456

Anchor wrote:

I thinking how to let the BG being better quality... :| If it is really necessary to use that bg and you can't find a better quality one then I guess is fine to use it

Oh yes, one more question, I think there's some problem about the offset... is it too early or later...?
I think the current offset is fine, at one point I got 0ms early which is a good thing, if you have more doubts you could ask a mat or bat to check it (:
wmfchris
Photoshop yeahhhhhhhhhhh

edit:
長話短說
1) spacing係硬傷 留意右上既spacing multiple, 維持一樣既spacing multiple既話距離同時間成正比先唔會誤導玩家
你用grid lv4的話相信可以整得幾好
2) BPMx2吧 感覺不太慢而且一串四分音vocal比一串八分音vocal合理多了 原則問題,沒理由慢歌當快歌打,也不能快歌當慢歌打
3) new combo很亂 試一下一句一NC 00:57:390 這種NC理解唔到囉

關於insane問題我覺得有insane冇問題 只係冇快歌既insane咁難,十分正常

先fix, PM我去recheck 今次唔要kd

Topic Starter
Anchor
wmfchris:

感謝wmf君的mod... 但目前我沒有時間edit我的圖/ . \
對不起...
未來我edit好的話會PM你了

話說你拿那張圖出來是要做什麼..? 要我用那張作BG嗎?
wmfchris

Anchor wrote:

wmfchris:

感謝wmf君的mod... 但目前我沒有時間edit我的圖/ . \
對不起...
未來我edit好的話會PM你了

話說你拿那張圖出來是要做什麼..? 要我用那張作BG嗎?
用PS放大了 勉強可以用
BTW你中幾 : D
Topic Starter
Anchor
中6 DSE / . \
放一放低osu先...
Breadhunter
Good map, i'm like it)
bmin11
Since this is your very first beatmap (by the way, this is pretty well done for a first attempt), I'll post some tips to start with.

1. Give more dynamics to your patterns. For example:

You see [nameless] 00:31:850 (3,4) - these notes? They are forming a straight line, which itself isn't too bad I guess. However, just ending it's combo, fading off the cursor's movement like that is lame (let me say this again, lame!). Lets apply some actions into it:

Ofcourse, this is not the finest you can get from this rhythm, but it serves okay to show the difference. The cursor is forced to turn it's direction off the slider, making it to speed up on different direction. This way, the cursor won't fade off it's movement like it was before.
This tip is not absolute A.K.A. does not apply to every situation. There are parts that serves better if notes were aligned in smooth path with trailing notes. This is the mapper's side to judge.




2. Don't add the same hitsounds right after another.
[nameless] 00:38:741 (1,2,3,4) - You see (or hear I guess >_>), this is not the best work of hitsounds. Could it improve? Certainly. The problem I can see (or hear *blah blah*) is that you added soft whistles on every single notes. There is one golden rule in hitsounds. "Less is more". I don't mean you should only put in few, but abusing hitsounds turns out horrifically when it's done wrongly. For new mappers, it's lot easier to have a better hitsounds if you keep it in certain pattern, such as claps on every second white tick! or every forth white tick! and such (you name it). I think you get the point by now.

[nameless] 00:48:268 (9) - This is another great example of abusing hitsounds.




If you need more help, just PM me or post it below.
Topic Starter
Anchor
SPOILER

bmin11 wrote:

Since this is your very first beatmap (by the way, this is pretty well done for a first attempt), I'll post some tips to start with.

1. Give more dynamics to your patterns. For example:

You see [nameless] 00:31:850 (3,4) - these notes? They are forming a straight line, which itself isn't too bad I guess. However, just ending it's combo, fading off the cursor's movement like that is lame (let me say this again, lame!). Lets apply some actions into it:

Ofcourse, this is not the finest you can get from this rhythm, but it serves okay to show the difference. The cursor is forced to turn it's direction off the slider, making it to speed up on different direction. This way, the cursor won't fade off it's movement like it was before.
This tip is not absolute A.K.A. does not apply to every situation. There are parts that serves better if notes were aligned in smooth path with trailing notes. This is the mapper's side to judge.




2. Don't add the same hitsounds right after another.
[nameless] 00:38:741 (1,2,3,4) - You see (or hear I guess >_>), this is not the best work of hitsounds. Could it improve? Certainly. The problem I can see (or hear *blah blah*) is that you added soft whistles on every single notes. There is one golden rule in hitsounds. "Less is more". I don't mean you should only put in few, but abusing hitsounds turns out horrifically when it's done wrongly. For new mappers, it's lot easier to have a better hitsounds if you keep it in certain pattern, such as claps on every second white tick! or every forth white tick! and such (you name it). I think you get the point by now.

[nameless] 00:48:268 (9) - This is another great example of abusing hitsounds.




If you need more help, just PM me or post it below.

Thanks for your mod... But I dont have much time for now so when I modded my map, I will send a PM to you (Yet it may take a few months..)
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