Raging Bull wrote:

General:


Impossiblexu:
00:17:095 (1,2) - Maybe unstack these? Don't think stacks are a good idea in lower diff but up to you.
00:22:550 (2,3) - ^
01:38:913 (1,2) - ^
01:45:050 (1) - Maybe like this? http://puu.sh/5RYX
Nothing much. Good easy:3


Normal:
Kinda fast SV for normal but I guess it's okay.
00:01:072 (1) - Slider plays awkward for me. Maybe put the note when you first hear the vocal here 00:01:243 ? / hmm... I'll consider if another modder point out this but nothing awkward imo.
00:58:686 - Kiai sounds a lot better here since it's on the downbeat. Maybe move it here? / Fixed.
02:02:777 - Start kiai here? / Fixed.
02:09:084 (2,3,4,1) - Why did spacing suddenly change here? / Because of the symmetry I put a little jump.
02:10:618 (1,2) - This might be confusing. Because the way you put 2 next to 1, beginners might think it's one repeat and might click 2 early. Maybe move 2 somewhere else? / Fixed.

Suzully:
Holy FFFF- I love the flow on this diff.

Lunatic:
I disagree with AR9. I think AR8 would play better. It's not really a fast song. / Yes. It's not that fast song but not too slow that AR9 seems awkward. At first I made this map with AR8 but after I've ordered many test players who are pro or not, I decided to choose AR9 because some test players are confused with AR8.
00:58:686 - Kiai over here instead? / Fixed.
02:01:413 (1,2,3,4) - These seems kinda confusing and it doesn't sound anything like you need a jump in the song. Also remove kiai time. It sounds better placed at 02:02:777 instead. / Obviously not confusing. No one of my test players confused at this part although some of them are not pro(also with AR8 which is much more confusing). Also, I think this part deserve jump because the drum sound is going up. And kiai either.

This map really deserves a star :3

KingsAL2 wrote:

Here for you ~ :3

[Lunatic]
00:23:998 (2,3,4,5,6) - 2,4,6 Clap is much beautiful :3 // fixed.
00:51:527 (1-3rd) - Finish // fixed.
00:58:686 (5) - ^ // fixed.
01:01:413 (6) - Remove it, it is strange for the musical //Removing that one is stranger.....
In the kiai time, use more Finish is much better than just a few. // I used more finish on kiai time! Fixed.
02:11:129 (4,1) - This simi jump is weird // seems bit weird but I think it fit to music and fun.
02:12:834 (1-1st) - Finish // fixed.
03:02:606 (9) - Change it to spinner is much matter :3 // hmm.... I will consider this.
**I think the sound effect can improve, if you need more mod for sound, you can pm me again.

[Hard]
Just rightly use the distance snap :3
Nothing mod
**Noticed that, don't copy and plaste all the time Orz

[All]
That;s a good map.
LUCKY STAR ~~~ good luck:3

Byakugan249 wrote:

Yo Modding ur song because of ur request

impossiblexu's Easy:
00:01:413(1) - Make the slider like this http://puu.sh/6zmk
00:04:140(1) - ^ http://puu.sh/6zot if u ignore this try to make it the same look as the 1st slider. i mean the slider points
00:51:868(1) - 1 grid down for the 4th point and 1 grid left for the end point
01:17:436(4) - 1 grid down
01:40:959(4) - x:152 y:184 for the end point. i want it to look even with the start point
02:02:777(1) - x:192: y:140 for the end point. ^
02:08:231(1) - x:460 y:32 ^

Normal:
01:35:945(5) - NC //Fixed

Suzully's Hard:
00:38:913(3) - 1 grid left for the 2nd point. it should look even
02:20:334(1) - 1 grid down for the end point. ^

Lunatic:
00:26:100(6) - NC //Fixed

This is the best i can do. Star and GL

Shiki wrote:

Hi~ from my queue

[Easy]
Fine to me :3

[Normal]
00:14:027 (3) - If you curve it like (2), it'd be awesome! // Fixed.
00:21:186 (6) - Copy (4) and ctrl+j? // Fixed.
01:28:515 (1,2) - The sound of (1)'s tail and (2)'s head is too noisy imo. // Fixed.

[Hard]
00:18:970 (1) - Do you think this one looks better?? http://puu.sh/6ADw
01:39:084 (3,4,1) - I heard drum here. Maybe add note at 01:39:169 and 01:39:339?
02:11:470 (3) - A grid right to the red control point.
02:14:879 (1,2) - Please don't overlap (1)'s body with (2)'s head. It looks bad imo.

[Insane]
I think AR9 is kinda fast for the song, AR8 may suit the song better?? // AR8 is disturbs the reading. SV is fast and note density is high
00:40:703 (4) - Add clap? // Fixed.
00:58:686 (1) - New combo here? // Fixed.

That's all I can do
Good luck to the map~

artpiggo wrote:

Lunatic
00:06:186 (3,4,5,6,7) - just make stream leads to next slider. // Fixed.

00:23:998 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - same reason // This change disturbs flow with slider 1.

00:44:709 (9) - try move to (156,152). It should flow not stay waiting. // Fixed.
01:00:050 (5) - try adding and move to (372,104) // There is no beat here.
01:04:140 (1) - move to (128,128) // Nah.
01:38:572 (3) - move to (300,300) // ^
02:01:584 (2) - (156,176) // I think back and forth of the rythm is important at this part.
02:01:754 (3) - (228,308) // ^
02:01:925 (4) - (316,180) // ^
02:03:629 (1) - just think that the distance from previous should not be only 1.0 cuz the rhythm goes purely tense here. so move it to left to make about 1.4x distance. Also move 02:04:481 (2) near to (1), too. // Nothing problem with current spacing. and this is stacked with note 10.
02:11:470 (1) - also in this. maybe try this. // Will consider seriously.

02:16:413 (1) - (72,192) // Nah.

Suzully
very fine with it.

Normal, impossiblexu
fine too.

9/10 This is apparently a good map. Try your best. Wish this map ranked. ^^

ykcarrot wrote:

[Lunatic]
00:24:595 (1) - 리듬이 좀 어색하네요. 이렇게 한번 바꿔보세요. http://puu.sh/780G
02:01:413 - 키아이 여기 말고 02:02:777 에서 시작하세요.
02:19:652 (2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/165144 이렇게 바꿔보세요. 흐름이 한결 나아집니다.
02:21:356 (1,2,3) - 수직 반전
02:21:868 (1) - 노래 패턴에 따르면 02:24:425 까지 늘리는게 더 낫습니다. 흰색 긴선 바로 앞 빨간선에 힘이 들어가다보니..
02:53:402 (3,4,5) - 휘슬?


[Suzully's Hard]
Subarashii


[Normal]
00:32:777 (5) - 뉴콤보
00:34:140 (1) - 뉴콤보 제거
00:35:163 (2) - 뉴콤보
00:37:890 (1) - 뉴콤보 제거
00:38:572 (2) - 뉴콤보
02:21:868 (1) - 02:24:425 까지 늘리는게 더 낫습니다.
02:53:743 (2,3) - 휘슬?


[xu's Easy]
Can't mod.
In this song, heavy beats are on red tick mostly, but your map doesn't follow the music.
I suggest remap.


아흥 베리굿 잡 크림님

Faust wrote:

Hi.
Make sure the Audio Lead-in is a solid digit. Currently, it is 1974 ms. You can simply edit the OSU files individually. Fixed to 2000ms

Lunatic:

You have a peculiar mapping. It holds up pretty nicely.
Intuitive jumps and note arrangement made consistent.

- 00:34:822 - Unsnapped inherited timing section.

- 00:35:334 - ^

- 00:35:334 - ^

- 00:40:959 - ^

From here on till the end of the map, I need you to go through the inherited timing sections and ensure they are properly snapped. Although those aren't neat, they never mess up playing or hitsounds so I didn't fixed

- 01:47:606 (1) - Why not make it perfect:

SPOILER

Fixed

- 01:51:868 (2) - Touching up on the slider:

SPOILER

Fixed

- 01:56:640 (1) - If you'd like to:

SPOILER

Fixed

So on and so forth. If you like what I did and want to continue refining the sliders in any way you think is appropriate then you can follow through with the rest on your own.

- 02:12:322 (1,2) - Actually, I think it'd work better if you reversed their positions. Sorry but I don't think so

- 02:36:527 (5) - I feel this is not a very wise move. Here's a suggestion:

SPOILER

So in following what I did, the notes have the player go down and then the upper slider has the player reach up. So the movement is generally a "loop" which I think plays nicer than the jump. Fixed! Thank you for pointing out this

- 02:45:050 (3) - I am not sure if this is intentional, but it is surely late on the vocals.


It should be on the previous blue tick. It follows piano

- 02:50:163 (1) - Shift to previous blue tick. This starts late. It follows piano

- 03:03:288 - ~ - 03:08:061 - As I wrote earlier. A spinner would be cool. Spinner would be cool, but I'd like to maintain my style. I like to zip up the ends clearly.

That's it.

Excellent mapset.