Download: paraoka - Mani mani (Short Ver.) (Mixagji) [0108].osu

thanks garven!! good sugesstions.

曲のタイトルの「まにまに」は漢字で書くと「随に」になるので、タイトルを Mani mani から Manima ni に変更してください

了解です～
ありがとうございます

From my queue

Sorry for too late and poor english

[Hard]

1. 00:45:747 - Add a note
2. 01:18:017 (2,3,4,5,6) - Like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/207119
3. 01:23:369 - Add a note
4. 02:29:693 (3) - Move to here? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/207125

[Insane]

1. 00:24:828 (4,5) - Reserve?
2. 01:48:423 - Add a note
3. 02:14:288 (1,2,3) - Try this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/207133
4. 02:23:855 (1,2) - Make them stack?
5. 02:27:747 (7) - Make it better~
6. 02:28:396 (9) - ^
7. 02:29:369 (1,2) - Try this~ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/207138

[0108]

1. 00:01:639 (1) - Maybe like [Insane]?
2. 00:49:477 (2) - I think reserve is better to me :33
3. 00:50:125 (4) - ^
4. 00:50:774 (2) - ^
5. 01:37:152 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try rolate by "30"

I like 0107 diff0.0

Star~

Good luck!!

12BARRY21 wrote:

[Hard]

1. 01:18:017 (2,3,4,5,6) - Like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/207119
2. 02:29:693 (3) - Move to here? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/207125

They were fixed but others didnt change orz

thanks for mod and star

12BARRY21 wrote:

I like 0107 diff0.0

what!? lol

[0108]

1. 00:01:639 (1) - Maybe like [Insane]?
2. 00:49:477 (2) - I think reserve is better to me :33
3. 00:50:125 (4) - ^
4. 00:50:774 (2) - ^
5. 01:37:152 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try rolate by "30"

I like 0107 diff0.0

Star~

Good luck!!

thanks!!and nice 0107diff!!

12BARRY21 wrote:

I like 0107 diff0.0

lol It's"0108" Sorry XD~

12BARRY21 wrote:

12BARRY21 wrote:

I like 0107 diff0.0

lol It's"0108" Sorry XD~

Never mind

Red : Unrankable/error staff
Blue : Important things that I think you'd better fix
Black : Just suggestions




Send me a forum PM for a recheck when you have reply

Breeze wrote:

Skin

1. You're missing a reverse arrow.png, even deault one is fine, please add it into your folder and do a full submit
2. Since you're using a custom hitcircle skin, it's strongly recommended that you enforce a sliderborder code in your osu file, under [colour] events:
   

   SliderBorder : 255,255,255(any RGB value you want)

All fixed

Insane

1. AR-1 maybe? It's the same to 0108, but not that hard and jumpy as 0108, so maybe AR8 is completely suitable for this diff. imo, and also maybe HP drain rate -1 sorry I keep AR9 >.< I think AR9 is the optimal.　Did HP drain rate -1
2. 01:42:342 (1) - I think you can make this slider more smooth, try this　Fixed
   

   319,264,102342,6,0,B|240:256|232:312|236:376|312:372,2,200,6|0|4

thank you for mod !

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAweseome

thsnk you Breeze!!done!!

Download: paraoka - Manima ni (Short Ver.) (Mixagji) [0108].osu

ヾ(๑╹ω╹๑)ノ

thank you Breeze <333

And this set completes my Manima ni modathon, woo~

[Normal]
00:45:261 (6,1) - I am wary of this spacing since you can see the circles at the same time. Might be better to try and position these so they're not so close. This -is- the easiest of the set.
01:38:774 (1) - Could you move this closer to the center to aid in spinner recovery?
01:42:342 (3,1) - Didn't like this spacing. Too close.
Hit sounding felt weak. There were big sections with no hit sounds at all where some liberal use of soft whistles would help fill in that gap really nicely.

[Hard]
00:54:666 (1) - Remove new combo
00:55:315 (1) - ^
01:05:044 (1) - ^
01:05:693 (1) - ^
02:17:693 (1) - ^
02:18:342 (1) - ^
02:25:801 (3,4,5) - Why is the spacing different on these?

00:56:936 (2,3,4) - I really didn't like how you had fast-paced sliders like this so close together, then a slow longer slider spaced differently even though the rhythm is the same nearby. It's really unintuitive to play and is just frustrating. Please rethink these patterns. Applies to 01:59:207 (2) - as well.

[Insane]
AR -1. The guest difficulty already is AR9, and your map reads just fine at AR8.
00:15:098 (1,2) - I found this very awkward and unintuitive to play. The problem is that it's hard to feel the repeating slider's end and the immediate jump to 2 just feels strange.
00:33:909 (2,3) - This is just bad spacing. Please change it.
01:24:180 (1,2,3) - I'm not feeling why you have anti-jumps here. Just breaks the nice pace you had for the entire kiai section.
02:29:369 (1) - I don't understand why a note is here. There's nothing in the music to prompt it.
Combo changes on this difficulty felt very inconsistent with the other difficulties. Please look over them and see if you can line things up better.

[0108]
Good stuff.

Garven wrote:

And this set completes my Manima ni modathon, woo~ It was great!

[Normal]
00:45:261 (6,1) - I am wary of this spacing since you can see the circles at the same time. Might be better to try and position these so they're not so close. This -is- the easiest of the set. fixed
01:38:774 (1) - Could you move this closer to the center to aid in spinner recovery? fixed
01:42:342 (3,1) - Didn't like this spacing. Too close. fixed
Hit sounding felt weak. There were big sections with no hit sounds at all where some liberal use of soft whistles would help fill in that gap really nicely. added some whistle

[Hard]
00:54:666 (1) - Remove new combo
00:55:315 (1) - ^
01:05:044 (1) - ^
01:05:693 (1) - ^
02:17:693 (1) - ^
02:18:342 (1) - ^
02:25:801 (3,4,5) - Why is the spacing different on these?
^ all fixed

00:56:936 (2,3,4) - I really didn't like how you had fast-paced sliders like this so close together, then a slow longer slider spaced differently even though the rhythm is the same nearby. It's really unintuitive to play and is just frustrating. Please rethink these patterns. Applies to 01:59:207 (2) - as well. tried new patterns

[Insane]
AR -1. The guest difficulty already is AR9, and your map reads just fine at AR8. As long as 2 AR9 are possible, I desire AR9 strongly...>.<

00:15:098 (1,2) - I found this very awkward and unintuitive to play. The problem is that it's hard to feel the repeating slider's end and the immediate jump to 2 just feels strange. removed(2)
00:33:909 (2,3) - This is just bad spacing. Please change it. (3) did ctrl+R
01:24:180 (1,2,3) - I'm not feeling why you have anti-jumps here. Just breaks the nice pace you had for the entire kiai section. fixed
02:29:369 (1) - I don't understand why a note is here. There's nothing in the music to prompt it. removed
Combo changes on this difficulty felt very inconsistent with the other difficulties. Please look over them and see if you can line things up better.tried to some chang

thank you for mod Garven !!

[Hard]
01:38:774 (1) - This section felt weak on hit sound use as well.

[Insane]
I'd still prefer AR8. The way you mapped this doesn't feel like AR9 is needed except for maybe one or two patterns - the rest of it feels more appropriate for AR8. It's ultimately up to you, but I'd really prefer to hear at least a decent reason behind wanting AR9 for this map beyond you simply wanting it to be that way.
01:22:882 (1) - Soft whistles during this section stuck out a lot since you didn't really use them much until this small part of the chorus.

Combos look a little better, but I was mostly referring to consistency with the measure changes. In general, this refers to the tall white ticks in the time line or with musical phrase changes. You followed a strong pattern with them in the Normal/Hard, but Insane it looks like you changed to using new combos for mapping patterns instead and it gives a feeling of inconsistency amongst your own maps.

Let me know your thoughts and I'll get back to ya.

Yup, I'm still prefer AR8 to [Insane], too. That do fit this diff. more imo, consider more about it Mixagji. You can ask some players to test play to see which AR more suitable.
It still depends on you then

Garven wrote:

[Hard]
01:38:774 (1) - This section felt weak on hit sound use as well. changed volume 50%

[Insane]
01:22:882 (1) - Soft whistles during this section stuck out a lot since you didn't really use them much until this small part of the chorus.
tried to arange with finish

Combos look a little better, but I was mostly referring to consistency with the measure changes. In general, this refers to the tall white ticks in the time line or with musical phrase changes. You followed a strong pattern with them in the Normal/Hard, but Insane it looks like you changed to using new combos for mapping patterns instead and it gives a feeling of inconsistency amongst your own maps.
Probobly I could understand and good chenge....probably...

Garven wrote:

I'd still prefer AR8. The way you mapped this doesn't feel like AR9 is needed except for maybe one or two patterns - the rest of it feels more appropriate for AR8. It's ultimately up to you, but I'd really prefer to hear at least a decent reason behind wanting AR9 for this map beyond you simply wanting it to be that way.

Breeze wrote:

Yup, I'm still prefer AR8 to [Insane], too. That do fit this diff. more imo, consider more about it Mixagji. You can ask some players to test play to see which AR more suitable.
It still depends on you then

Yes,First time This map was AR8. I asked many player the skillful person ~ poor person to test play.
The answer that it is better to use AR9 as a result was overwhelming.
So I am using AR9 and I feel AR9 is the best. so I desire AR9 strongly...

You guys are very reliable.
Much gratitude is carried out.
very very thanks!!!

sorry my poor English

gogo

i prefer AR8.
9 is easier than 8, but it is not fit to this map.

Apricot wrote:

i prefer AR8.
9 is easier than 8, but it is not fit to this map.

hmm....
[9 is easier than 8] I think so ,too
[but it is not fit to this map.] I think I suit ar9....

[Hard]
01:38:612 - Sorry, I had meant that there were very little hit sounds used during this section, and it really could be enhanced by adding some.

[Insane]
Well, this is my last plea for you to use AR8. I strongly feel that it fits your map much better than AR9 does. You use relatively low spacing with occasional jumps that suit AR8 much better than AR9 does. If you were to use larger spacing it would probably fit better, but since you already have a map with AR9, it would be best for the balance of the entire map set to have your Insane at AR8 rather than AR9 so you don't alienate more players from enjoying the entire scope of your map set.

Anyway, let me know on the hit sounding for hard in the least.

[Hard]
Fixed

[Insane]
AR8 is the optimal if surely it sees in the balance of mapset. It may be a fact also my map suitable for AR8 further.
but I still think that it is AR9 that can play most fun in respect of this map. Only this cannot be yielded.
I'm sorry I was beeing selfish on you......orz



sorry my poor English....

Very well then.

Rebubbled.

>Garven
thank you ;_;

Talked with lolcubes about the timing a little bit, and I agree with his suggestion of +10 ms to the timing. See if that works better for you. If you change, please let me know so I can recheck afterward. (maybe AR-1 on Insane. )

I changed offset +10ms and replaced green line
thak you Garven and lolcubes sensei !

gogo

Download: paraoka - Manima ni (Short Ver.) (Mixagji) [0108].osu

val0108 wrote:

gogo

update

Rebub

thank you ~

Just a minor fix via IRC, everything looks good. Congratulations!

Ranked.

this is so awesome

おめでとう！！！

thanks a lot ;_;

おめでとーう

Nice map let me tell you o:
Grats

people should map more songs like this

おめでとう！！

thnk you !
valさんありがとう！

おめですー

Wow~
Congratz!!~

Congrats!

おめでとう！

gratz!

Thank you !!!

ＲＡＮＫおめでとう

ありがとうございます！

Congrats <3

Congratz~