• 00:14:410 (2,3,4) - They're spaced almost equally, although they're separated differently on the timeline. Maybe you can add another note between (3) and (4) to make it less disorienting?
  00:16:370 (8,9) - This one too, same as above
  00:19:312 (x) - The guitar ends here actually. You could try to extend the previous slider by 1/2, or add a circle here
  00:23:821 (1) - I don't think a new combo is required here too, the previous NC is close enough already
  00:30:292 (4,5) - Unintuitive sudden jump (it's shocking me in test mode orz)
  00:32:057 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Switch (4) and (5)'s position? Also, I think the whistle is somewhat overused here. I prefer the whistle only on (2,5), and a finish sound on (6)
  00:38:331 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same hitsound suggestion as before
  00:44:410 (x) - idk why... I have a feeling the jump should be started here (because of the synth notes from the song)...
  00:58:135 (1) - Add finish on slider's start?
  01:00:880 (5) - Minor spacing error here. Could be fixed by simply moving (6) to the right a bit though
  01:04:214 (x) - I feel the jump should be continued here. The synth sound is loud this time :3
  01:17:351 (8,1,2,3,4,5) - I prefer making the clap's consistent every 1/1 - add clap on (8)'s end also, remove clap on (1), add clap on (3), remove clap on (4)
  01:29:704 (8,9,10) - Hard to read jump. At first I thought (9,10) is also separated by 1/2 orz
  01:35:586 (7) - Use soft sound on the slider's end? It will be much smoother for this part ^^
  02:04:214 (4,5) - Again, unintuitive sudden spacing change (I thought this was 3/4 at first)
  02:29:704 (4,6) - These two aren't in the center. Is it intentional?
  02:41:273 (3) - Add clap here also for clap consistency?

• 00:18:527 (2,3,4) - Arrange like this?
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:29:508 (1,2) - CTRL + J both, and place it where this slider originally was. imo it will flow better this way, thus preventing (1) from touching (3)
  00:37:743 (3) - Move 1 grid down and right, to make it perfectly pointing to (2)'s start
  00:42:057 (1) - I think this slider is kinda overflowed, just use 1/2 waypoint is enough imo
  00:44:802 (2) - Add finish on slider's end?
  00:54:606 (x) - I think a note should be added here to fill the blank, maybe with clap/whistle
  01:00:880 (1) - Stack the end to (4)'s end?
  01:05:978 (1,3) - Not in the center. Is it intentional? Also would be nice if these two could encircle (2)
  01:44:802 (3) - Extend this slider by 1/2 perhaps? The vocal actually ends there
  02:00:684 (4) - imo the rhythm will be better if all the repeats here were removed, and then add note at 02:01:272
  02:16:174 (2) - Move it few grids left? The tilted effect between these two will look better

1. I believe the offset is off. Add +10 to your current offset, don't forget to change your inherited points as well!
2. I also believe this is from the OVA of the animation, so if you don't mind changing your source by removing "The Animation" and replacing it with "OVA".

1. Keep in mind, your spacing for this Hard is very.. inconsistent, to say the least. With how you've spaced out some combos, I believe this feels more like an insane.
2. I suggest tick rate 2, it makes the sliders feel and look much nicer overall.
3. 00:32:057 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This entire combo feels off, making your own rhythm track using hitsounds is a bit unconventional. I would suggest to change the whistles as Niva suggested above. This also goes with my statement that your spacing is inconsistent and imho wouldn't belong in a hard, but that's for you to decide.
4. 00:38:331 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
5. 00:44:606 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
6. 01:10:880 (5,6,7,8) - Perhaps this jump is a bit too harsh; the Y difference compared to the X difference in axis here (imho) breaks flow.
7. 02:30:488 (6) - A bit nazi, but move left a grid to match with 4.

1. I suggest against Niva's suggestion with HP and OD -1.
2. Why do you put a break at 20 seconds? It feels incomplete!
3. 01:13:821 (3) - A bit nazi, but up a grid to match with 1?
4. 01:18:527 (1,2) - Personally, I would redo these two sliders to make it *look* better.
5. 02:08:723 (1,3) - ^; try getting both endpoints symmetrical, it'll look much better.

Niva wrote:

Mod request via In-Game PM ~

[General]
-> On timing check, I got offset 1674 (+9 ms) I just noticed it too. Thanks but like dkun said, adding 10ms is much better
-> Combo color 3 and 4 is quite similar, this can be disorienting on some patterns (example : 02:43:626 (6,7,8,1) - on Hard diff) Nope, i think it's different.
-> As far as I know Choucho is a singer, idk if this song is actually composed fully by Choucho or not, but if you find the name of the original composer (if any), you could add it to the tags . Composer? Too lazy to find it out

[Hard]

• 00:14:410 (2,3,4) - They're spaced almost equally, although they're separated differently on the timeline. Maybe you can add another note between (3) and (4) to make it less disorienting?. Hmm okay, i'm adding a note there.
  00:16:370 (8,9) - This one too, same as above. Hmm, not adding anything.
  00:19:312 (x) - The guitar ends here actually. You could try to extend the previous slider by 1/2, or add a circle here. Adding a circle there.
  00:23:821 (1) - I don't think a new combo is required here too, the previous NC is close enough already. It's for the antijump.
  00:30:292 (4,5) - Unintuitive sudden jump (it's shocking me in test mode orz). Okay deleted the jump there.
  00:32:057 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Switch (4) and (5)'s position? Also, I think the whistle is somewhat overused here. I prefer the whistle only on (2,5), and a finish sound on (6). Switched the position, but two people say most of the rythim here is bad, so i'll use your suggestion >.</b]
  00:38:331 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same hitsound suggestion as before. [b]Nope again
  00:44:410 (x) - idk why... I have a feeling the jump should be started here (because of the synth notes from the song)... Uh no, my own rythim doesn't fit there if it start there >.<
  00:58:135 (1) - Add finish on slider's start? Umm, i don't like adding a finish there, too loud imo >.<
  01:00:880 (5) - Minor spacing error here. Could be fixed by simply moving (6) to the right a bit though. Ups, okay, fixed
  01:04:214 (x) - I feel the jump should be continued here. The synth sound is loud this time :3 Hmm okay, adding a note there and stacked above the next note.
  01:17:351 (8,1,2,3,4,5) - I prefer making the clap's consistent every 1/1 - add clap on (8)'s end also, remove clap on (1), add clap on (3), remove clap on (4). Hmm, follow the add clap on 8 but i remove every clap on the next note.
  01:29:704 (8,9,10) - Hard to read jump. At first I thought (9,10) is also separated by 1/2 orz Okay, changing the pattern there
  01:35:586 (7) - Use soft sound on the slider's end? It will be much smoother for this part ^^ umm, no. I prefer my way >.<
  02:04:214 (4,5) - Again, unintuitive sudden spacing change (I thought this was 3/4 at first). Okay, fixed the spacing >.<, maybe i was not focus before.
  02:29:704 (4,6) - These two aren't in the center. Is it intentional? not focused when making the beatmap imo. >.<
  02:41:273 (3) - Add clap here also for clap consistency? umm, i don't like clap sound there.

That's it from me.
Good luck~

dkun wrote:

General

1. I believe the offset is off. Add +10 to your current offset, don't forget to change your inherited points as well! Sure, changing it
2. I also believe this is from the OVA of the animation, so if you don't mind changing your source by removing "The Animation" and replacing it with "OVA". The album itself says it's from Sora no Kiseki The Animation >.<

Hard

1. Keep in mind, your spacing for this Hard is very.. inconsistent, to say the least. With how you've spaced out some combos, I believe this feels more like an insane. I know, i will keep it in mind.
2. I suggest tick rate 2, it makes the sliders feel and look much nicer overall.
3. 00:32:057 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This entire combo feels off, making your own rhythm track using hitsounds is a bit unconventional. I would suggest to change the whistles as Niva suggested above. This also goes with my statement that your spacing is inconsistent and imho wouldn't belong in a hard, but that's for you to decide. Umm, okay, but no to the spacing due the jump >.<
4. 00:38:331 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
5. 00:44:606 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
6. 01:10:880 (5,6,7,8) - Perhaps this jump is a bit too harsh; the Y difference compared to the X difference in axis here (imho) breaks flow. Okay, balanced the jump.
7. 02:30:488 (6) - A bit nazi, but move left a grid to match with 4. It's have same x position with 4, so it's symetrical

Niva wrote:

Mod request via In-Game PM ~

[Yasora's Normal]
-> To balance the difficulty, HP Drain and OD -1?

• 00:18:527 (2,3,4) - Arrange like this? oh great suggestion, but in (4) I adding repeater for following rhythm
  
  SPOILER

  http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/213358
  00:29:508 (1,2) - CTRL + J both, and place it where this slider originally was. imo it will flow better this way, thus preventing (1) from touching (3)
  00:37:743 (3) - Move 1 grid down and right, to make it perfectly pointing to (2)'s start
  00:42:057 (1) - I think this slider is kinda overflowed, just use 1/2 waypoint is enough imo
  00:44:802 (2) - Add finish on slider's end?
  00:54:606 (x) - I think a note should be added here to fill the blank, maybe with clap/whistle I think because the vocal is end in slider (4), it's ok imo. but if someone mention this, I will think about that again
  01:00:880 (1) - Stack the end to (4)'s end?
  01:05:978 (1,3) - Not in the center. Is it intentional? Also would be nice if these two could encircle (2) fixed with myself
  01:44:802 (3) - Extend this slider by 1/2 perhaps? The vocal actually ends there
  02:00:684 (4) - imo the rhythm will be better if all the repeats here were removed, and then add note at 02:01:272
  02:16:174 (2) - Move it few grids left? The tilted effect between these two will look better

That's it from me.
Good luck~

dkun wrote:

Yasora's Normal
I suggest against Niva's suggestion with HP and OD -1.
Why do you put a break at 20 seconds? It feels incomplete! I don't mind this, I just following vocal ;_; if vocal end, of course "it's" end too
01:13:821 (3) - A bit nazi, but up a grid to match with 1?
01:18:527 (1,2) - Personally, I would redo these two sliders to make it *look* better. err..not fixed
02:08:723 (1,3) - ^; try getting both endpoints symmetrical, it'll look much better.

Hyguys wrote:

sexy mod4mod o.o

00:19:714 (2,3) - 2 ticks up , in tiny grid. Hmm, more nice to see. Okay
00:57:165 (2) - On reverse and end put whistle. Emm, no, sounds awkward to me
00:57:753 (3) - Entire slider , whistle. Same as above
01:05:792 (10) - Clap? Same as above
01:23:439 (1) - Clap I prefer my own way at adding hitsound in this part >.<.
01:23:635 (2) - Remove clap
02:22:459 (9) - On finish slider clap. Clap doesn't suit here imo [/spoilerbox]
Nice map , I can't star because I don't have kudosu =D
I have to mod more...

1. Keep the tick rate consistent on every difficulty if possible,try tick rate 2 on Normal too
2. Disable the letterbox during breaks

MoodyRPG wrote:

Hi Miya listen hmm i wake up in the morning and i still tired.Weird do you think? I don't know. Maybe you have bad position when sleeping or just too tired >.<

General

1. Keep the tick rate consistent on every difficulty if possible,try tick rate 2 on Normal too. Tick rate consistency doesn't matter right? o.o it depends on the mapper.
2. Disable the letterbox during breaks Okay

Hard
01:13:635 (5) - Switch new combo. Okay for the anti jump
01:29:125 (7) - ^ Hmm, okay
01:41:871 (7) - Center this. Okay, bring it to center looks more good.
02:27:753 (6) - New combo. Okay

Killing jumps but its ok.Good Job

Hyguys wrote:

sexy mod4mod lol~

[Yasora's Normal]

SPOILER

00:20:488 (Break) - Cant you map this break? nope >< because if I map this break, the star will be up.. but if someone mention that again, I will think back
00:45:978 (1) - I suggest inverting whistle and normal , like whistle then normal. nya~
01:00:880 (1) - Do this. already do that O.o
01:45:586 (4,1,2) - This is hard as hell for noobs ;w; really? o.o I think I already follow vocal orz ><
01:58:919 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ ^

Nice diff bro

MoodyRPG wrote:

Normal
-- The slider velocity uhm is too high for being a Normal uhh sorry for that >3< because in the past, I forgot to change that orz. and now, I'm too lazy change that -w- but it's ok, right?
- 00:45:988 (1) - Oh Nazi, center this
- 00:54:616 (x) - A note here would be good
- 02:25:988 (1,2,3) - Center those notes

Byakugan249 wrote:

Yo modding this map because of ur request

General:
hav u thought about making an easy diff? because Yasora's diff has over 3 stars. Oh the easiest diff is normal, and that rule is still under debate. So it will be no problem
u forgot to add the tags in Yasora's diff. Not forgot, but i haven't update it since yasora give her map when i was sleep. My bad

Hard:
01:06:576(2,3) - replace this for a slider. it should follow vocals accurately. Sure, it more good to hear. Thanks~
02:23:439(4,5) - ^ as for this, i want to make this note jumping. Sorry not follow this.
other than that i really enjoyed the jumps for this diff. Thank you~

this is the best i can do. GL

DiamondCrash wrote:

General:

Turn on, or off, letterboxing on all difficulties. Haven't update it when you modding my map, but it's fixed now.
Add the tags from Hard to the Normal as well.
It might be wise to have an Easy; the Normal seems a little hard for beginners. The song itself is fast. but i will take it in mind.

Hard:

In dire need of hitsounding up to 00:50:694. For this, i want to make it different with the next rythim. I want next rythim to be more epic than this part. A hitsound for some part at this point is enough imo.
The difference between the spacing and the slider speed is really very jarring. I would suggest making the slider speed quicker, but that would involve a remapping, which I guess you wouldn't be all that up for. Sorry, forgot to change slider velocity when i already done 75% of the map. So i just continue the mapinng
There's a lot of spacing inconsistencies and jumps which don't make sense; I'll try to list the worst of them here. Hey, of course jumps make spacing inconsistecies. So don't compare jump with spacing consistensies. Also please notice the anti jump >.<
00:15:008 (5,6) - This gap should really be wider. Oh, spacing inconsistensies, thanks for pointing that.
00:16:380 (3,4) - As should this. Fixed this like before.
00:22:655 (6,1) - ^ I already have put a new combo to notice it's an anti jump. Well, maybe it's better to remove the new combo and make it further.
00:39:322 (6,1) - ^ It's anti jump, and i already put new combo for these. Spacing can be break when new combo start right?
and so on, so forth. I don't mind most of the jumps, it's the antijumps that seem really unfair. Just go through and check for things like what I have pointed out thus far~

Byakugan249 wrote:

Yo modding this map because of ur request

Yasora's Normal:
00:33:439(1) - can u make this a curved slider like (2)? already do that O.o
01:02:067(3,4) - remove the clap for (3) and remove the clap at the repeat arrow and at the end of (4) nope, I want variation hitsound for this one
01:48:341(1) - remove the spinner but instead add a slider at 01:48:145 and end it at 01:49:518. it should follow vocals properly
02:06:969(1) - ^ but try to make a looped slider that ends at 02:08:341. something like This? until 02:07:928 more fit I think
02:08:733(1) - if u follow the suggestion above flip this slider vertically and put it at x:268 y:308. basically this combo could be like This
02:19:322(2) - *nazi* 1 grid down

DiamondCrash wrote:

Normal:

Tick rate 2.
01:44:812 (3,4,1,2) - This is very confusingly spaced. Perhaps something more like this would make it easier to read?
01:48:341 (1) - This spinner is terribly short for a Normal difficulty. I suggest you map through it.
01:52:655 (1,2,3,4,5) - This pattern is kinda messy; I'd make it not overlap on itself as much.
01:54:420 (5) - Make 1/2 longer, to the next white tick.
02:06:969 (1) - Same as at 1:48:341.
02:17:165 (1) - No new combo.

KingsAL2 wrote:

==General==

====
-- Combo Problem --
01:21:086 (1) - Remove new combo. I think no need to remove new combo here, because i put a new combo for every rythim like this.
-- Sound --
02:08:733 (1-1st) - Finish. Ups, forgot to add it. Thx for mentioning these.
00:33:047 (6) - Remove finish or lower it volume. I chose lower volume.
00:45:596 (6) - Remove finish ^
-- Spacing --
02:26:380 (3,4) - So fake that 3 and 4 so far and 4 to 5 are too close ... Ok, fixed.
-- Other(S) --
Some clap putting on the wrong way but... I think it is your style :3 ah, maybe it's my style ^^

==OVERALL==
LIKE : Lovely map
UNLIKE : Some spacing are quite strange ... But overall it is rankable. :]
So ~ Good luck and STAR ~

268,296,81674,6,0,B|309:307|314:264|314:264|361:286|377:229,1,130,0|8
288,184,82459,2,0,B|246:195|241:152|241:152|194:174|178:117,1,130,0|8

First example: 400,216,107949,2,0,B|216:264|124:116|256:20|388:116|296:264|108:216,1,520
Second example: 376,216,107949,2,0,B|216:264|88:112|256:8|424:112|296:264|124:216,1,520

264,200,126969,2,0,B|368:244|440:140|344:64|248:140|320:244|432:200,1,325

The 08 team_Bourdon wrote:

Hello Hi

Hard
00:19:714 (2,3,5) - move circle (2) to grid x:112 y:224 , (3) x:284 y:224 , (5) x:196 y:156 ? Uhm, sorry, it will make circle 5 spacing with the next note become inconsistent.
00:30:890 (6,7) - change two of them like this? --> http://puu.sh/cFSv. The slider doesn't good to hear >.<
00:37:165 (5,6) - ^ Same with above
00:41:478 (6) - change it to a slider to 00:41:773 ? Stop at the blue tick? The polarity changed and it's not good
00:43:831 (5,6) - change two of them to a slider? Hmm, sounds good, ok.
00:50:106 (5,6) - ^ Okay
01:08:537 (1) - remove this New Combo.
01:14:812 (1) - ^
01:21:086 (1) - ^
01:27:361 (1) - ^
01:30:498 (1) - ^
02:25:400 (1) - ^
02:28:537 (1) - ^
02:31:675 (1) - ^
02:37:949 (1) - ^
02:41:086 (1) - ^
02:44:224 (1) - ^
Hosh, if someone mention this again, i'll remove it. For now, i'll not remove it.
----------
That's all. and Good Luck!
(why two difficulty only? Q.Q) Because too lazy since i''m not free now.

• Delete .osb file and fullsubmit
  Add letterbox during breaks?
  Your normal map is 3.11 atm >.< You have to make an easy too because the rules says that a song has to have a map with 3 or less stars. Or simply let try to decrease the stars of your normal diff

1. 00:16:969 (5) - You may overlap this slider with the end of 00:15:400 (3) in this way, and make his shape as 00:16:184 (4), it seems better:
   
   SPOILER

   
   The slider's code:
   

   359,210,16969,2,0,B|403:202|399:142,2,65,8|0|0

   If you do it, don't forget to distance snap the next notes (:
2. 00:59:322 (3) - Make in this way, it sounds much better since on a white long tick in a normal diff there should be a note:
   
3. 01:03:635 (1) - This spinner is following the vocal, then end it on 01:05:008
4. 01:49:910Add circle?
5. 02:35:400 (1,2,3,4) - These shapes are so bad >.< Make it in this way:
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   64,245,155400,6,0,B|64:164|152:164,1,130
   248,164,156184,2,0,B|328:164|328:252,1,130
   224,260,156969,1,0
   152,336,157361,2,0,B|84:336,2,65,8|0|8

   Don't forget to use distance snap with the next elements

1. Omg this spacing.. It seems an insane diff, use distance snap please?
2. 00:32:655 (4) - 1 Grid right
3. 01:18:537 (5,1) - Exchange new combo
4. Patterns are good for the rank, but not the spacing that is exaggerated imho.. So I suggest you to use distance snap (:

Chewin wrote:

General

• Delete .osb file and fullsubmit. No, it doesn't need for that.
  Add letterbox during breaks? Nope, better without letterbox.
  Your normal map is 3.11 atm >.< You have to make an easy too because the rules says that a song has to have a map with 3 or less stars. Or simply let try to decrease the stars of your normal diff That rule still on debate, so it doesn't matter.

Hard

1. Omg this spacing.. It seems an insane diff, use distance snap please? Like a said in beatmap description it's ajump map >.<. I want this map to be jump map, so in some note, i'm not using any distance snap.
2. 00:32:655 (4) - 1 Grid right. Ah, fixed.
3. 01:18:537 (5,1) - Exchange new combo. No for this, it's a jump, new combo in middle of jump is not good.
4. Patterns are good for the rank, but not the spacing that is exaggerated imho.. So I suggest you to use distance snap (:

Good luck \:D/

The 08 team_Bourdon wrote:

Hello

Yasora's Normal
00:31:871 (1) - remove this New Combo?
01:17:753 (3) - make it like this? --> http://puu.sh/cFO3 nope, I think more fit to the vocal if repeating >.<
01:21:675 (1,2) - make both of them like this? --> http://puu.sh/cFOC
01:47:949 (3) - make it like this? --> http://puu.sh/cFQj or http://puu.sh/cFPS choosing second
02:03:243 (2,3,4,5) - move circle (2) to grid x:172 y:116 , (3) x:204 y:216 , (4) x:308 y:216 , (5) x:340 y:116 and make the slider (5) like this? --> http://puu.sh/cFQP no, if I do this, that not consistency spacing
02:06:969 (5) - make it like this? --> http://puu.sh/cFRi
02:36:969 (3) - downward 1 grid? x:188 y:260
02:37:361 (4) - make it three repeating? no, I following vocal
02:38:537 (1,2) - same as 01:21:675 ? I want variation for this one

Chewin wrote:

General

• Your normal map is 3.11 atm >.< You have to make an easy too because the rules says that a song has to have a map with 3 or less stars. Or simply let try to decrease the stars of your normal diff this is 3.09 star orz ;_;

Normal

1. 00:16:969 (5) - You may overlap this slider with the end of 00:15:400 (3) in this way, and make his shape as 00:16:184 (4), it seems better: nope, I think this is no problem ><;;
   
   SPOILER

   
   The slider's code:
   

   359,210,16969,2,0,B|403:202|399:142,2,65,8|0|0

   If you do it, don't forget to distance snap the next notes (:
2. 00:59:322 (3) - Make in this way, it sounds much better since on a white long tick in a normal diff there should be a note:
   
3. 01:03:635 (1) - This spinner is following the vocal, then end it on 01:05:008
4. 01:49:910Add circle?
5. 02:35:400 (1,2,3,4) - These shapes are so bad >.< Make it in this way:
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   64,245,155400,6,0,B|64:164|152:164,1,130
   248,164,156184,2,0,B|328:164|328:252,1,130
   224,260,156969,1,0
   152,336,157361,2,0,B|84:336,2,65,8|0|8

   Don't forget to use distance snap with the next elements

shikyu wrote:

Mod by request~

[General]
It would be nice if you add 1 more diff Hmm, it will be no problem with just 2 diff.

[Hard]
If you really wanna make jumpy map, it better to make it to insane diff. In hard there's jump, but still controlled with distance snap (the change not much, really). I think this hard diff fit for insane. Ah, no. Most of the jump doesn't follow distance snap, and i have use distance snap too often and caused my map a bit boring.
But overall this diff has good rhytm

That's all~

shikyu wrote:

Mod by request~

[Yasora's Normal]
00:16:969 (5) - move somewhere, overlapped by slider (3)
01:00:302 (4,1,2) - I guess player will choose to reach (2) than (1) if you keep that placement
02:06:184 (3) - add clap nope, the sound is weird to me

[Te][Amo] wrote:

Hi There

Hard

00:58:145 (1) - Add finish at the begin of the slider. Uhm no for now. But if someone mention this again, i'll take it into consideration.
01:08:929 (1) - Remove NC. Ah no, i NC it for vocal, which it's start here.
01:09:518 (2) - Add NC
01:12:067 (1) - Remove NC ^
01:12:655 (2) - Add NC
01:44:027 (1) - Start break here like this http://puu.sh/cQc9. Ah okay
02:02:459 (7) - Add finish. Same as above.
02:15:008 (1) - ^. Ah, no for this one.

The map is great ! Hope this mod was helpful

Good Luck ! And Star !

1. 00:45:400 (5) - (nazi) 3 grid down? or
2. 00:45:204 (4,5,6) - (nazi) 1 grid left-down

Generated by Rei_Fan49's modding program
Private use, no distribution
Choucho - Dramatic Daydream by Miya

[General]

[Timing]

[Hard]
> EXtra
00:54:224 (4) - Stream formed by 3 objects 99ms apart faster than 110ms
01:30:596 (2) - Time between 2 beats is 98ms and faster than 110ms
01:30:694 (3) - Stream formed by 3 objects 98ms apart faster than 110ms
01:34:518 (2) - Time between 2 beats is 98ms and faster than 110ms
01:34:616 (3) - Stream formed by 3 objects 98ms apart faster than 110ms
01:40:890 (3) - Stream formed by 3 objects 98ms apart faster than 110ms
02:14:224 (4) - Stream formed by 3 objects 99ms apart faster than 110ms
02:27:949 (3) - Stream formed by 3 objects 98ms apart faster than 110ms
02:28:635 (2) - Time between 2 beats is 98ms and faster than 110ms
02:28:733 (3) - Stream formed by 3 objects 98ms apart faster than 110ms
02:37:263 (5) - Time between 2 beats is 98ms and faster than 110ms
02:37:361 (6) - Stream formed by 3 objects 98ms apart faster than 110ms
02:38:145 (3) - Stream formed by 3 objects 98ms apart faster than 110ms
02:38:929 (4) - Stream formed by 3 objects 98ms apart faster than 110ms
02:40:400 (2) - Time between 2 beats is 98ms and faster than 110ms
02:40:498 (3) - Stream formed by 3 objects 98ms apart faster than 110ms
02:41:184 (2) - Time between 2 beats is 98ms and faster than 110ms
02:41:282 (3) - Stream formed by 3 objects 98ms apart faster than 110ms
02:43:537 (5) - Time between 2 beats is 98ms and faster than 110ms
02:43:635 (6) - Stream formed by 3 objects 98ms apart faster than 110ms
02:44:322 (2) - Time between 2 beats is 98ms and faster than 110ms
02:44:420 (3) - Stream formed by 3 objects 98ms apart faster than 110ms
02:45:106 (4) - Time between 2 beats is 98ms and faster than 110ms
02:45:204 (5) - Stream formed by 3 objects 98ms apart faster than 110ms
02:47:459 (6) - Time between 2 beats is 98ms and faster than 110ms
02:47:557 (7) - Stream formed by 3 objects 98ms apart faster than 110ms
Overall calculated difficulty level is 74.6089095832737
> Lunatic
Approach Rate is 8 greater than or equal to 8

[Yasora's Normal]
> Hard
00:54:027 (4) - Time between 2 beats is 196ms and faster than 200ms
00:57:949 (1) - Time between 2 beats is 197ms and faster than 200ms
01:03:635 (1) - Spinner length is 1373ms shorter than 1500ms
Overall calculated difficulty level is 42.5584419092515

[Te][Amo] wrote:

Hi There

This mod is just suggestions

General: Maybe in Yasora's Normal Difficult You can use custom hitsounds I think default hitsound is fit too


Yasora's Normal

00:20:890 (5) - Start break here like this http://puu.sh/cQ9K I think the break is ok anyway
01:02:067 (3) - Remove clap I want variation for this one ><
01:02:459 (4) - Remove clap at the reverse arrow ^
01:16:184 (1) - Remove NC nope, because adding little jump to next note
01:31:478 (6) - Start break here like this http://puu.sh/cQaB same with 00:20:890
02:01:674 (5) - Add finish at the end of the slider I think the sound is weird ><

Rei_Fan49 wrote:

[Indri] asdfghjkl
- FCable~
- AR/OD/Drain + 1 (pick one) no nyan~ too high for this diff
- nice symmetry slider~ <3 lagi niat nih XD
00:14:616 (2) - (nazi) 1 grid right 00:15:400 kali -3- soalnya spacingny error wew~
00:38:929 (4) - (nazi) 3 grid down checking with distance snap~
00:43:439 (1,2) - bikin sedikit bengkok~ ga ga ga mau~
00:54:027 (4) - (nazi) 1 grid right, (nazi : 2nd point) 1 grid right ^

Shiirn wrote:

General
I'm not sure about the metronome issues on this map, get a person . I don't understand what do you mean by this.


Hard
To be blunt: I hate the huge spacing used. It's over the top and unnecessary. But moving on.
01:08:537 (1,2,3) - these don't need to have a new combo, either make it a part of the previous one or remove the next one.
01:11:675 (1,2,3) - ^
01:14:812 (1,2,3) - ^ i think you can tell where i'm going from here so i won't say it any more
awkward spacing is hard to mod

Shiirn wrote:

Normal
Can handle AR+1
02:01:674 (5,1,2) - this underlap of (2) is hard on the eyes, but i don't see any quick and easy way to fix it other than making 5 curve downwards

No_Gu wrote:

[normal]
00:49:910 (3) - don't overlap1 I think this overlap still can read by players ;_;
01:00:302 (4,1) - according to the ranked rule. this is unrankable I think this pattern still rankable, because unrankable is if I overlapped reverse slider ._.
01:02:067 (3) - remove clap okay ;_; *uhh the peoples hate me add clap in here huh?*
01:15:400 (1) - finish nope the sound is weird to me
01:44:027 (2) - 1 grdi right
02:44:812 (1) - ^ why (1) in here? O.o it's (3)

Minos2012 wrote:

Wow, A map with so many jumps....
(Hi,Miya..I found your map in #modreqs)
[HARD]
00:25:008 (3,4) - because you have used 1.2X DS on the 00:23:831 (1,2) - , imo, using a 1.2X DS between 3&4 is better. (to keep the play not jump suddenly) I think it's fine.

00:31:675 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - change like this? whistle on 2&6
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/217692 Okay, great suggestion but i'll not follow the whistle sounds.

00:51:871 (6,1) - why a 3.0X+ jump here? just the same DS like before (around 2.0X~2.6X). Ah, okay
02:24:420 (7) - new combo here? Okay
02:44:616 (1,2) - = = 3.0X agian...and then quite hard to catch the 3 and the stream after 3. Uh, reduced ds just a bit.

I guess that's all....I'm not a fan for jumps = =...

BTW,,I think the diffs spread of your map is not good. Because your hard is much harder than the normal diff. Maybe an extra diff between them is neccesary. But it depends on the BAT...

Anyway,your map is nice...Good luck!!:D Thank you

And if you have time for M4M please mod this map, thx.
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/41444

Samah wrote:

From queue:

[Yasora's Normal]
00:49:910 (3,4) - Spacing. fixed o.o

1. why source says "The Animation"? = = anyways I haven't watched it, just asking =.= I see why.

1. nice diff
2. 00:20:106 (4) - 1/1 slider is more fitting here
3. 01:00:106 (4) - add note, or use 1/2 reverse slider?
4. 01:23:635 (4) - clap on the start and reverse arrow

1. 00:15:596 (6) - spacing too close... I suggest adding a reverse for 00:15:008 (5)
2. 01:06:576 (2) - this clap sounds awkward... so how about adding nore claps before it, like 01:04:812 (4,8,9) (and adjust volume too)
3. 01:08:733 (6) - add clap?
4. 01:11:871 (7) - ^
5. 01:12:067 (1,2,3,4) - can you change the pattern, it's really hard to read this =.=
6. 01:15:204 (1) - use smaller spacing? =.=
7. 02:08:341 (4) - why clap here?
8. 02:23:439 (4) - this note is hidden by the kiai burst: http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot126-5.jpg

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

Hi, from my queue

[Normal]

1. nice diff thanks~ :3
2. 00:20:106 (4) - 1/1 slider is more fitting here nope, because in downbeat is fit to put finish ;_;
3. 01:00:106 (4) - add note, or use 1/2 reverse slider? because vocal is beginning in red tick, i think this is more following vocal
4. 01:23:635 (4) - clap on the start and reverse arrow nope, because I think the sound is weird (and already add clap in the start O.o

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

Hi, from my queue


[General]

1. why source says "The Animation"? = = anyways I haven't watched it, just asking =.= I see why. The album say so. >.<

[Hard]

1. 00:15:596 (6) - spacing too close... I suggest adding a reverse for 00:15:008 (5). oh sure.
2. 01:06:576 (2) - this clap sounds awkward... so how about adding nore claps before it, like 01:04:812 (4,8,9) (and adjust volume too) Ah no, sounds good to me.
3. 01:08:733 (6) - add clap? Nope
4. 01:11:871 (7) - ^
5. 01:12:067 (1,2,3,4) - can you change the pattern, it's really hard to read this =.= hard to read? i don't think so.
6. 01:15:204 (1) - use smaller spacing? =.= Nope, it's slow, and player can catch it.
7. 02:08:341 (4) - why clap here? Hear the bg music carefully.
8. 02:23:439 (4) - this note is hidden by the kiai burst: http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot126-5.jpg Not in default skin.

Good luck~

1. 00:20:890 - Start the break here ? :3
2. 00:26:773 - You should add a note here, even if you are following the vocal, if there isn't anything here the previous slider will feel too late (because there is a strong beat in the music here).
   The easiest solution to fix is this :
   
3. 00:39:714 (1) - Sadly, this circle is partially hidden by the previous slider's track and by its hitburst which makes hard to read (for beginners of course).
4. 01:00:302 (4,1) - Stack their ends correctly please.
5. 01:16:184 (1) - There's no need to have a new combo on this note since 01:15:400 (1,1) are in the same pattern.
6. 01:56:184 - Like 00:26:773, this spot needs a note.

1. 02:23:439 (4) - This circle is hidden by hitbursts, besides it's a huge jump so it makes it very hard to read ! You ought to consider flipping 02:23:439 (4,5) horizontally or changing the pattern to fix this problem.

KuraiPettan wrote:

Yasora's Normal

1. 00:20:890 - Start the break here ? :3
2. 00:26:773 - You should add a note here, even if you are following the vocal, if there isn't anything here the previous slider will feel too late (because there is a strong beat in the music here).
   The easiest solution to fix is this :
   
3. 00:39:714 (1) - Sadly, this circle is partially hidden by the previous slider's track and by its hitburst which makes hard to read (for beginners of course).
4. 01:00:302 (4,1) - Stack their ends correctly please.
5. 01:16:184 (1) - There's no need to have a new combo on this note since 01:15:400 (1,1) are in the same pattern.
6. 01:56:184 - Like 00:26:773, this spot needs a note.

Miya wrote:

oh thank you ^^
But don't expect too much from my new hard diff. It's have less jump and stream compare to my old diff

[Hard]

• 
  00:16:773 (7) - new combo
  00:23:047 (6) - ^
  00:37:557 (6) - 1 grid left
  01:03:635 (2) - remove whistle & add normal hitsound at slider tail?
  01:26:576 (6) - new combo
  01:30:498 (4) - ^
  01:31:086 (3) - normal-finish is better, i guess
  02:20:498 (1) - 1 grid left & new combo
  02:20:890 (3) - remove whistle & add normal hitsound at slider tail?
  02:27:753 (5) - new combo
  02:31:086 (5) - ^
  02:32:067 (7) - remove new combo
  02:32:851 (1) - new combo
  02:37:361 (6) - ^
  02:40:302 (6) - ^
  02:43:439 (5) - ^
  02:46:576 (5) - remove new combo
  02:47:361 (1) - new combo

SPOILER

0OoMickeyoO0 wrote:

[Hard]

• 
  00:16:773 (7) - new combo
  00:23:047 (6) - ^
  00:37:557 (6) - 1 grid left okay, it seems i've been careless >.<
  01:03:635 (2) - remove whistle & add normal hitsound at slider tail? Nope, sounds weird
  01:26:576 (6) - new combo
  01:30:498 (4) - ^
  01:31:086 (3) - normal-finish is better, i guess nope, soft finish is much better
  02:20:498 (1) - 1 grid left & new combo
  02:20:890 (3) - remove whistle & add normal hitsound at slider tail? ^
  02:27:753 (5) - new combo
  02:31:086 (5) - ^
  02:32:067 (7) - remove new combo
  02:32:851 (1) - new combo
  02:37:361 (6) - ^
  02:40:302 (6) - ^
  02:43:439 (5) - ^
  02:46:576 (5) - remove new combo
  02:47:361 (1) - new combo

When you add a jump, you should add new combo too about new combo thing, i'll not change it unless others said it too
I would like you to change clap partern like Yasora's diff :3 No, thank you, i prefer my own rythim :3

SPOILER

A s g a r d wrote:

this mod just my opinion

Sorry ignored all of your hitsound mod >.<
Insane
01:08:733 (6) - add clap
01:11:871 (7) - ^
01:15:008 (8) - ^
01:16:576 (5,6) - remove and copy 01:15:988 (3,4) look http://puu.sh/dMSB not same is it? ah, i copy pasted it anyway
01:17:165 (7,8) - grid lv4)1 grid left fixed :3
01:18:145 (3) - add clap
01:18:537 (5) - ^
01:21:282 (9) - ^
01:23:831 (3,4) - grid lv4)1 grid down fixed here too
01:24:420 (3) - add clap
02:02:263 (6) - X : 256 Y : 120 http://puu.sh/dMRh<-not matched with 4 ah, i've been careless >.<
02:02:459 (7) - X : 316 Y : 60 ^
02:25:596 (6) - add clap
02:28:733 (8) - ^
02:28:929 (1) - add clap on end of slider
02:31:871 (11) - ^
02:35:008 (3) - ^
02:35:204 (4) - remove clap on start of slider and add clap end of slider
02:37:165 (4) - remove clap
02:37:361 (6) - add clap on start of slider
02:38:145 (10) - add clap
02:41:282 (8) - ^


Hard
no broblem!

Yasora's Normal
00:16:969 (5) - make triangle move X : 408 Y : 124
00:38:929 (4) - grid lv4)1 grid down (stack with 00:36:576 (2))


that's all
if you don't want used this sound, skip sound mod

regenz wrote:

Normal

02:10:302 (3) - remove finish at head ? not fit imo.
02:17:165 (3) - ^ do you mean in slider's end? lol

A s g a r d wrote:

Yasora's Normal
00:16:969 (5) - make triangle move X : 408 Y : 124
00:38:929 (4) - grid lv4)1 grid down (stack with 00:36:576 (2))

• Nothing to say.

1. The first break feels weird. It stops the flow you were starting to build up. I'd suggest to map in it.
2. 00:37:753 (3) - You can cal me nazi (and I *am* nazi when it comes to this) but this slider isn't symmetric.
3. 00:40:498 (3) - This slider is partially hidden by the hitburst from 00:38:929 (4) - .
4. 00:56:576 (3) - This one isn't symmetric either (it made me cringe when playing).
5. 01:00:302 (4,1) - I must say that this confused me quite badly, but I'm not sure why. Try making (4) start 1/2 earlier (and add a repeat) or changing the placement.
6. 01:18:537 (1) - This slider is overlapped by 01:17:753 (4) - and it can be very easily fixed - while improving the aesthetics quite a lot
7. 01:47:949 (3) - This slider is asymmetric too. Except it's much easier to notice than the two before because of the ticks.
8. 01:54:616 (4) - Neither is this one.
9. 01:56:184 (5,1) - Reverse these new comboes: it doesn't make much sense to have new comboes on offbeat ticks.
10. 02:07:165 (4) - This one's asymmetric too.
11. 02:14:224 (4,1) - Easily avoidable overlap.
    It's true that I'm a bit nazi about symmetry in sliders, but when a slider is meant to be symmetric and isn't, people notice it very easily, and it can screw over a whole diff's aesthetics.

• Good.

• Can't approve of this. The spacing keeps changing in weird ways, the jumps are never at the same place or the same spacing, and there are awkward little breaks (like 01:07:165 - which causes a clap to be missing). The difficulty has little consistence to me.

Odaril wrote:

Yasora's Normal

1. The first break feels weird. It stops the flow you were starting to build up. I'd suggest to map in it. ok
2. 00:37:753 (3) - You can cal me nazi (and I *am* nazi when it comes to this) but this slider isn't symmetric. fixed.. I hope my fix slider is symmetry now
3. 00:40:498 (3) - This slider is partially hidden by the hitburst from 00:38:929 (4) - . move to other place
4. 00:56:576 (3) - This one isn't symmetric either (it made me cringe when playing). why? I think this slider is not make confused player, following the vocal and this slider is 'U' shape :'< fixed
5. 01:00:302 (4,1) - I must say that this confused me quite badly, but I'm not sure why. Try making (4) start 1/2 earlier (and add a repeat) or changing the placement. ok fixed
6. 01:18:537 (1) - This slider is overlapped by 01:17:753 (4) - and it can be very easily fixed - while improving the aesthetics quite a lot move to other place
7. 01:47:949 (3) - This slider is asymmetric too. Except it's much easier to notice than the two before because of the ticks.
8. 01:54:616 (4) - Neither is this one.
9. 01:56:184 (5,1) - Reverse these new comboes: it doesn't make much sense to have new comboes on offbeat ticks.
10. 02:07:165 (4) - This one's asymmetric too.
11. 02:14:224 (4,1) - Easily avoidable overlap. remapping because I think too hard to fix this >.>
    It's true that I'm a bit nazi about symmetry in sliders, but when a slider is meant to be symmetric and isn't, people notice it very easily, and it can screw over a whole diff's aesthetics.

-Chata- wrote:

it's a my style. take it for reference please

•Hard

00:48:145 (1,2,3,4) - develop that beat like this - 00:48:341 add whistle - 00:48:733 add circle - 00:49:518 ^ ah no change for this


•Insane

00:15:596 (6,1,2) - check spacing I have put a new combo to warning the player, right?
00:37:949 (6,1,2) - ^ it's a jump there o.o
01:07:165 - add circle and add clap ah okay
01:07:361 (4) - remove this note's clap fixed
01:12:263 - add clap to slider's end? sorry, i don't like mixing clap with finish
01:19:714 - add note okay
01:23:243 - ^ ^
01:58:145 (7,8,1) - spacing it's a jump
02:21:282 (1) - 02:21:871 (5) - finish? nope
02:26:184 (2,3,4) - this jump pattern is really hard. Xd really? i don't think so >.<
02:29:322 (2,3,4) - spacing jump
02:45:988 (1,2,3) - ^ another jump

AsprikaQ wrote:

MODDING!!!!

[Normal]

Serious Perfect Normal

[Hard]

General : AR -1 and check is it overclap hit sound in your map. ah nope for the ar. and i prefer my own clap rythim and it's not overuse.

01:26:576 (6,7,8,9) - Remove some clap (?)
01:29:910 (3) - Remove clap
02:02:263 (6) - Add Finish
02:15:008 (1) - Add Finish okay
02:32:263 (2) - Add Finish instead of clap
02:39:518 (5) - Remove clap

[Insane]

I see there is some note missing due to rhythm of song and about hitsound again check plz.

02:45:988 (1,2) - Pattern get outside of frame. ah no problem with this, as long it's still in game field.

thank you for the mod
Well,Good luck

CXu wrote:

Hello there ^^
Choucho~~ >w<

[Hard]
This difficulty looks a lot like [Insane].

00:22:459 (4,5,6,7,8) - I'm not sure if this type of spacing in [Hard] is a very good idea. It's a jump, jump can be placed on hard diff too.
00:39:714 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Center this shape? Hmm, okay
00:48:145 (1) - Remove this. Nope
01:12:067 (1,2,3,4) - inconsistent spacing like this might throw off players playing [Hard] diffs. I don't mind because it's an easy jump.
01:30:498 (4,5,6) - ^
02:20:498 (1) - New combo? okay
02:24:616 (3,4,5,6) - Move this shape away. The spacing Nope, it's jump
02:32:067 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Kinda hard spacing for [Hard]? Hmm, change the stream into repeat slider.
02:33:047 (4,5) - Oh and this should be a slider imo. Nope

Well, in general, this diff feels a lot like [Insane] at a lot of parts, which means some parts feels a bit too hard to be in [Hard], as they're similar to the [Insane] counterpart. Nope, hard can be placed with streaming and some jump too to make the map more fun to play.

[Insane]
While the spacing is a bit inconsistent in this one, I'm able to read the map just fine, and FC it on my first try.
Maybe you should've used a higher slider velocity, but the one you have now works well too.
Oh hey use some long sliders too \o\ sorry, i'm not a fan of long slider >.<

00:15:596 (6,1) - This spacing feels a bit awkward, so you might consider changing this a bit. It's an anti jump, and i have placed a new combo there.
00:17:361 - It feels very natural to add a note here. I don't think so.
00:19:518 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try make this shape completely symmetrical? Umm, okay.
00:20:694 (2,3,4) - The close spacing here feels a bit awkward again. Adding notes at 00:21:086 and 00:21:675 would probably help. See if you can come up with something cool ah okay, remap this part
00:25:792 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Very sudden spacing change. Would probably feel much more natural if you try to map this part 00:23:831 (1,2,3,4) to be a bit faster. Nope, this one is a jump.
00:31:675 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I don't think you need this huge spacing on this part. The song itself is soft here. The spacing you had here 00:38:341 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - would work out quite well I think. Ah, nope i want a jump here.
01:00:106 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Center this shape here, so it's mirrored along the vertical axis? If you do, make 01:01:674 (1) a mirrored copy of 01:01:086 (6). Nope. I don't need to center this shape.
01:03:831 (2) - Stack this directly underneath 01:03:047 (5). It's stacked properly o.o
01:05:988 (1,2) - Don't you think a jump of some sort here would feel great A jump? i don't think so.
01:15:988 (3,4,5,6) - This one is hard to read, as the spacing kinda suggests that these notes are like the ones before. You could replace (4,5) with a slider? Hard to read? nope, i don't think so.
01:37:557 (2) - Try ctrl+r on this. How does that feel for you? Hmm, okay
02:02:459 (7) - Finish for consistency? okay
02:15:008 (1) - Finish here? okay
02:26:576 (4) - Copy 02:26:380 (3), then mirror it. hmm okay

That's it for this diff~~ It's actually quite fun to play with the different spacing and all that

~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Aaand that's that. Good luck with the map

CXu wrote:

01:15:988 (3,4,5,6) - This one is hard to read, as the spacing kinda suggests that these notes are like the ones before. You could replace (4,5) with a slider? Hard to read? nope, i don't think so.

CXu wrote:

CXu wrote:

01:15:988 (3,4,5,6) - This one is hard to read, as the spacing kinda suggests that these notes are like the ones before. You could replace (4,5) with a slider? Hard to read? nope, i don't think so.

Thought I'd point out this is the only place I got 100, actually.

suzutsukikanade wrote:

[Yasora's Normal]
AR+2 nope, AR 4 is usually setting in normal diff and since this diff is very low diff in mapset
00:46:773 (2): This slider is strange ... can remake this slider? just change the shape >.>
01:24:616: Add note here? this circle will be trap and not easy read by players
01:56:184: ^ yeah I think in the past is good too for add circle in here :3
02:31:282: ^ same as 01:56:184
02:38:537 (1): I think the slider is not symmetrical. Because I want variation slider in here

Elly-chan wrote:

(Hard)

Hitsound and Combo mods

Beginning of your mapping up to 00:26:773: Use claps whenever you hear a noise like the one at 00:14:616 (If this causes confusion, just look to Yasora's Clap Pattern. Nope, i like my own way.

1. Okay, double-checked, everything looks clean except for the fact that some of your combos are very big. Perhaps split some patterns' combos' up that have 9-11 as their final combo? Nope to this too.

1. 00:48:145 ~ 00:50:106 - What's up with the sudden distance-spacing increase? I get that you use it at emphasis and instrumental-only parts, but this wasn't one of them. Space them normally, please. Okay, i space them normally
2. 01:26:576 (6, 7, 8, 9) - All the other vocal parts like this that have no streams in this section are spaced normally. Please, don't break that consistency and space it like you did the others. Okay
3. 01:30:498 (4, 5, 6) - Yet again, checking what you do with your spacing and seeing that you emphasise parts by increasing spacing, you should also space out (4) since it's a instrumental part. (5) and (6) are spaced out, so this makes total sense to space this one out, too. Okay, space this one.
4. 01:45:008 (5) - This just feels awkward to play.. It doesn't feel as if there should be a repeat slider here. Perhaps do what you did at 01:51:282 [(3, 4)] instead? ( http://puu.sh/eHkf ) . It feels way more natural and better flowing/playing! ^^ Uhm, no to these. The slider tick cover up the vocal, i think it's no problem.
5. 02:14:420 (5) - Either add a repeat onto this slider, or add a note at 02:14:812. You clearly hear a BGM sound/beat there, so it's best to add one.Ok, added
6. 02:36:773 (5) - HURRHURR One Grid Up Please To Level it With (3) c: Fixed, orz >.<

asdasdasd, very good hard difficulty, i enjoyed every single moment of it. bravo. thank you

9/10

(Insane)

- Why is the break at a different time in this difficulty? Nothing much against it, but I honestly think you should've kept consistency. I just want a variation, that's all, and it doesn't break any rule or guideline.

Hitsound and Combo mods

Beginning of your mapping up to 00:26:773: Use claps whenever you hear a noise like the one at 00:14:616 (If this causes confusion, just look to Yasora's Clap Pattern.

1. Same Thing As Hard For The Combos.

1. 'Gonna Have To Quote Odaril On This. "Can't approve of this. The spacing keeps changing in weird ways, the jumps are never at the same place or the same spacing, and there are awkward little breaks (like 01:07:165 - which causes a clap to be missing). The difficulty has little consistence to me." Sorry, I can't check this right now. Anyways, best of luck! I hate general thing like these. I have talk to Odaril and fixed all inconsistencies jump. At least give my detail where is the inconsitencies jump. I can't search it by myself. So, sorry, no change for this difficulty

7/10, no comments.

Overall Comments

It's good, but i'm not quite sure I can pass this to the second layer of the queue yet. I'd say it needs a bit more mods. I'll be the first to give you a ticket. Having a ticket means that once you get a few more mods, I'd say about 2-5, you can call me back for a re-check and still get the benifits of the queue. If I think the map's good enough then, i'll pass it on to layer two.

1. 00:26:184 - Add a note is better for me
2. 01:21:674 (1,2) - I don't like these slider's shape, It's too twist and difficult to beginners. Maybe do this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/229900
   

   256,248,81674,6,0,B|324:268|376:219,1,130,0|8
   296,156,82459,2,0,B|224:140|177:191,1,130,0|8

3. 02:38:537 (1,2) - ^ (Try this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/229901) ....Give you code too, hope you can fix it ~
   

   312,296,158537,6,0,B|376:284|376:284|440:252,1,130,0|8
   476,160,159322,2,0,B|412:172|412:172|348:204,1,130,0|8

1. 00:25:596 - Add a note
2. 00:28:537 (4) - Follow the vocal?
3. 00:32:655 (4) - 1 grid left and 1 down? (grid level = 4)
4. 01:04:420 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Turn up the volume gradually? I think it's better (50% 55% 60%.....
5. 02:02:067 - whistle
6. 02:21:282 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Same as ^2 the suggestion

1. 00:15:596 (6,1) - The two notes DS is same as before...But before rhythm is 1/2, here is 1/1. I think maybe someone who is first play the song will think it's 1/2 too then lead to miss>< So...Maybe change to another place?? >>>>(6) Stack on (5)'s tail
2. 00:25:792 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Rhythm is same, DS is not same>< it's not a good idea..
   (just suggestion) maybe change to this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/229873
3. 00:57:263 - Add a note
4. 01:03:439 - ^
5. 01:04:420 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Same as Hard
6. 01:10:890 (1,2,3,4) - Rotate by 25 degrees, and then reverse (1) & (4)?
7. 01:12:655 (2,3) - What a Big jump...too difficult and suddenlyo.o maybe change to another place?
8. 02:21:282 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Same as hard too~
9. 02:23:439 (4,5,6) - I have a idea... (4) stack on (2), (6) move to (4)'s place(hasn't moved) omg..sorry for my bad English
   like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/229891 ...I really it's better than now ~ but it's up to you (just suggestion)
10. 02:35:302 - Add a note

12BARRY21 wrote:

M4M here~

[Hard]

1. 00:25:596 - Add a note Nope.
2. 00:28:537 (4) - Follow the vocal? Um, the slider tick cover that vocal
3. 00:32:655 (4) - 1 grid left and 1 down? (grid level = 4) Why? it has same x position 00:32:263 (2) -
4. 01:04:420 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Turn up the volume gradually? I think it's better (50% 55% 60%..... I don't see any increased volume from the music here.
5. 02:02:067 - whistle Nope. i want 2/1 whistle rythim here.
6. 02:21:282 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Same as ^2 the suggestion Nope

[Insane]

1. 00:15:596 (6,1) - The two notes DS is same as before...But before rhythm is 1/2, here is 1/1. I think maybe someone who is first play the song will think it's 1/2 too then lead to miss>< So...Maybe change to another place?? >>>>(6) Stack on (5)'s tail Hmm, okay
2. 00:25:792 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Rhythm is same, DS is not same>< it's not a good idea..
   (just suggestion) maybe change to this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/229873 A jump doesn't must have a same ds. Nope.
3. 00:57:263 - Add a note You mean 1/4? nope
4. 01:03:439 - ^ Nope, it's overmapped
5. 01:04:420 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Same as Hard Nope
6. 01:10:890 (1,2,3,4) - Rotate by 25 degrees, and then reverse (1) & (4)? Nope
7. 01:12:655 (2,3) - What a Big jump...too difficult and suddenlyo.o maybe change to another place? Okay, decreasing the spacing.
8. 02:21:282 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Same as hard too~ Nope
9. 02:23:439 (4,5,6) - I have a idea... (4) stack on (2), (6) move to (4)'s place(hasn't moved) omg..sorry for my bad English
   like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/229891 ...I really it's better than now ~ but it's up to you (just suggestion) Hmm seems fine, okay
10. 02:35:302 - Add a note Nope

That's all~ Good Luck~
I like the song :> So.....Star~~~~

12BARRY21 wrote:

[Yasora's Normal]

1. 00:26:184 - Add a note is better for me nope, too hard for player read it
2. 01:21:674 (1,2) - I don't like these slider's shape, It's too twist and difficult to beginners. Maybe do this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/229900 ok, but I will make slider by myself :3
3. 02:38:537 (1,2) - ^ (Try this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/229901) ....Give you code too, hope you can fix it ~ ^

1. Song Setup - Source - maybe 「Sora no Kiseki The Animation」　⇒英雄伝説 空の軌跡 The Animation　「Eiyu Densetsu Sora no Kiseki The Animation」 or 「The Legend of Heroes Sora no Kiseki The Animation」 is correct http://puu.sh/f6as

1. 00:26:773 - remove green line
2. 00:26:773 (1) - spacing too close a little(0.73x)
3. 00:39:714 (1) - very nazi >< stack with 00:40:106 (2) grid : x302,y172
4. 00:42:851 (2,3,4) - Why is only here follow in vocal? I think rhythm a little strange Suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/f6ib
5. 01:56:184 (5) - add NC and 01:56:576 (1) - remove NC is better
6. 02:02:459 - add note. ( 01:56:184 (5) - same rhythm )
7. 02:17:165 (3) - Suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/f6kJ This is easy to take rhythm for a beginner

1. 00:16:773 (7) - add NC ( DS change point )
2. 00:23:047 (6) - ^
3. 00:25:400 (x) - Suggestion of the rhythm: add repeat slider here. end 00:25:596
4. 00:44:224 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think DS is too far. http://puu.sh/f6nY rhythm is different, but DS is the same as that. When first played, I probably confused
5. 00:48:145 (1) - Why does not only here follow in vocal? tick move. 00:48:733 is better
6. 00:50:498 (1,2,3,4) - same 00:44:224
7. 00:56:773 (1) - grid move. x320,y68
8. 00:56:969 (2) - one grid up.
9. 01:29:125 (1) - remove NC
10. 01:52:459 (1) - dose not match vocal. because vocal start 01:52:655 ><; I think that match with a vocal fits here.
11. 02:05:008 (1) - ^ remove note.
12. 02:10:498 (1) - remove NC ( NC is different from other. ex:00:58:537 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) )
13. 02:16:380 (1) - ^
14. 02:16:576 (2,3) - aligned to DS 1.1x
15. 02:43:439 (1) - remove NC ( NC is different from 02:35:204 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) )
16. 02:46:576 (1) - remove NC and 02:47:361 (3) - add NC

1. 00:23:047 (8) - one grid down. ( stack with 00:21:871 (5) )
2. 00:25:400 (x) - Suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/f6vF I think that put is interesting
3. 02:47:361 (5) - add NC