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Chris Da House & DJ Sledge Hammer - Believe (Nightcore Mix)
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Topic Starter
all looking good now :3 updated ~
I'm kinda sleepy now. Anyway, it doesn't matter.
Easy
Easy
- 00:19:988 (1,2) - How I would make them
- 00:29:805 (4) - if you make it 1/4 longer, it will sound right. But I'm not sure if it's comfortable for easy. {The same goes for other sliders like this}
- 01:12:577 (3) - make it 1/2 longer and add finish
- 01:46:934 — What if you drag break and place it here?
- 01:51:142 (2) - forgot whistle?
- 01:58:153 (1) - add something to it, I don't like how it sounds when it's almost completely silenced
- 02:03:763 (1,2,3) - the same. It's too quiet, either rise volume up to 20-22% or add whistle(s)
- 02:34:615 (1,2) - I don't know if these sliders want to have curvy beginning or straight. Please, choose something
- 02:59:682 — I would increase this section's volume by 10% and add finish to slider's end
- 00:18:761 — why? (Now it looks like a bug; I see these things almost everywhere in your mapset)
- 00:30:331 (5) - what about applying whistle to the first and the second repeats?
- 01:12:401 (5) - whistle for the last repeat?
- 01:41:676 (2,3,4,5,6) - I wonder if somebody has already said "Hey man, put these things in center"
- 01:44:480 (4) - NC
- 00:29:454 (2) - stack it with 00:28:052 (3) - and move 00:29:805 (3) 2 grid up for symmetry (kind of)
- 01:12:401 (6) - whistle?
- 01:46:584 (4,5,6) - why don't you make spacing consistent here?
- 02:57:403 (5) - not really symmetrical
- 01:11:875 (5,6,7) - looks a little bit strange (or inaccurate)
- 02:26:201 (1) - did you want to stack it or not?
Topic Starter
I stacked it manuallyTicClick wrote:
Insane
- 02:26:201 (1) - did you want to stack it or not?
thanks for the mod TicClick :3
So HAAAAAAAAAI Tony~ <3
[General]
Soo, the timing looks a bit wrong
i suggest :
Offset: 5 950ms BPM: 171,145
this fit better.
[Easy]
00:36:801 (1) - Up the last point of the slider 2grids (Lv4) you can't see it so much but it's a nazi thing
01:10:456 (1,2,3) - Put these 3 notes with y=140 because it looks really mapped fastly and not "clean".
Nice Easy i can't really see any issues on it.
[Normal]
buh nice Normal sorry (:
[Hard]
00:05:949 (1,2) - Firstly, this spacing surprised me, try to arrange a bit? x)
00:51:174 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Why you don't hitsounded this part? i don't really understand.
01:24:655 (1) - I think that the note is too previous than the spinner, try arrange by reduce the spinner 1tick 1/2?
01:40:781 (5) - One of the only 1/4 slider ever in this map. mmh i don't think it's good
01:41:307 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Omg this spacing, it shocked me here (4,5,6) =w=
[Insane]
I suggest to reverse these notes 00:09:455 (3) - ; 00:10:858 (6) - ; 00:26:283 (3) - ; 00:27:685 (6) - ; 01:56:032 (3) - ; 01:57:434 (6) - ;
00:32:681 (4) - This 1/4 note have non sense ! :v it's not following the song at all.
00:35:486 (6) - ^
00:38:291 (4) - ^
00:41:095 (4) - ^
I think you understand what i means for other one.
This diff have technically no issues
but anyways. I like it. Good Luck
Overalls is fine, just timing looks wrong. <3
Good Luck
[General]
Soo, the timing looks a bit wrong
i suggest :
Offset: 5 950ms BPM: 171,145
this fit better.
[Easy]
00:36:801 (1) - Up the last point of the slider 2grids (Lv4) you can't see it so much but it's a nazi thing
01:10:456 (1,2,3) - Put these 3 notes with y=140 because it looks really mapped fastly and not "clean".
Nice Easy i can't really see any issues on it.
[Normal]
buh nice Normal sorry (:
[Hard]
00:05:949 (1,2) - Firstly, this spacing surprised me, try to arrange a bit? x)
00:51:174 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Why you don't hitsounded this part? i don't really understand.
01:24:655 (1) - I think that the note is too previous than the spinner, try arrange by reduce the spinner 1tick 1/2?
01:40:781 (5) - One of the only 1/4 slider ever in this map. mmh i don't think it's good
01:41:307 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Omg this spacing, it shocked me here (4,5,6) =w=
[Insane]
I suggest to reverse these notes 00:09:455 (3) - ; 00:10:858 (6) - ; 00:26:283 (3) - ; 00:27:685 (6) - ; 01:56:032 (3) - ; 01:57:434 (6) - ;
00:32:681 (4) - This 1/4 note have non sense ! :v it's not following the song at all.
00:35:486 (6) - ^
00:38:291 (4) - ^
00:41:095 (4) - ^
I think you understand what i means for other one.
This diff have technically no issues
but anyways. I like it. Good Luck
Overalls is fine, just timing looks wrong. <3
Good Luck
Topic Starter
updated~
about the timing talked with you on IRC
thanks Musty :3
about the timing talked with you on IRC
thanks Musty :3
General
All SB should be in Foreground.
Your pulsations work not in time, because of new timing. Recheck/remake loops. Or don't know.
Insane
rare normal whistles sound so lonely... :<
00:50:489 (10,1) - make both of them more visiable. Especially (10)
01:24:672 (1) - new combo bug, add nc to this note
01:43:779 (1) - ctrl+j 02:05:165 (5,6) - stack of sliders, tshhhhh :S
02:07:970 (5,6) - ^
02:10:775 (5,6) - ^
02:24:798 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - nazi, but... too curve ><
Hard
00:15:781 (4) - add nc, like in similar pattern after this place
01:35:716 (1,2,3) - well, this patterns should fit more than now.
02:31:635 (7,8,9) - huh, 1/4?
02:58:455 (1) - remap it, imo, doesn't fit
Normal
Tickrate 1 in Normal? Huh? set 2 like in other diffs.
end of 1st Kiai is unsnapped. Should be 01:13:102 instead of 01:13:103. 1ms but aaaaaaanyway
Stats were like in Hard. HP-1, OD-1. AR5 fine, cuz in Hard AR will be 6.
00:30:331 (5) - add whistles to the reverse, end
00:33:135 (6) - ^
00:35:940 (6) - ^
00:38:745 (4) - ^
etc etc (but imo, if 1st of two sliders would be 1/2 instead of 1/1... And no claps, only whistles on them... It will be more sexy, then whistles only)
01:04:864 (1,2) - spacing, but readable
01:24:497 - from here. whistles every high white tick sound bad. Better every two on low, like claps. like this 01:41:676 (2) -
01:56:751 (4) - add nc, huh?
Easy
fine for me
Star~
All SB should be in Foreground.
Your pulsations work not in time, because of new timing. Recheck/remake loops. Or don't know.
Insane
rare normal whistles sound so lonely... :<
00:50:489 (10,1) - make both of them more visiable. Especially (10)
01:24:672 (1) - new combo bug, add nc to this note
01:43:779 (1) - ctrl+j 02:05:165 (5,6) - stack of sliders, tshhhhh :S
02:07:970 (5,6) - ^
02:10:775 (5,6) - ^
02:24:798 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - nazi, but... too curve ><
Hard
00:15:781 (4) - add nc, like in similar pattern after this place
01:35:716 (1,2,3) - well, this patterns should fit more than now.
how to fix
^ till 01:41:325for 1st :
For next :
For next :
02:31:635 (7,8,9) - huh, 1/4?
02:58:455 (1) - remap it, imo, doesn't fit
Normal
Tickrate 1 in Normal? Huh? set 2 like in other diffs.
end of 1st Kiai is unsnapped. Should be 01:13:102 instead of 01:13:103. 1ms but aaaaaaanyway
Stats were like in Hard. HP-1, OD-1. AR5 fine, cuz in Hard AR will be 6.
00:30:331 (5) - add whistles to the reverse, end
00:33:135 (6) - ^
00:35:940 (6) - ^
00:38:745 (4) - ^
etc etc (but imo, if 1st of two sliders would be 1/2 instead of 1/1... And no claps, only whistles on them... It will be more sexy, then whistles only)
01:04:864 (1,2) - spacing, but readable
01:24:497 - from here. whistles every high white tick sound bad. Better every two on low, like claps. like this 01:41:676 (2) -
01:56:751 (4) - add nc, huh?
Easy
fine for me
Star~
Topic Starter
most fixed. thanks Aleks :3
EDIT:fixed storyboard and some minor issues in all diffs
I'M READY!
EDIT:fixed storyboard and some minor issues in all diffs
I'M READY!
Kiai
End of kiai should be snapped on 01:13:103 in all diffs. Well,to be honest, you have 01:13:103 in Normal diff, but in Normal diff timing section on 01:12:752 is useless. remove it.
SB
Take a look on last lines for "SB\BG_Bright.jpg"
0.03523553 --> should be 0
"SB\Layer_1.jpg". 2nd line :
Or use 0.4, then bg in the start will be just a bit darker, not absolutely black
Insane
00:50:139 (9) - horizontal looks not perfect before vertical
01:50:440 (3) - note? maybe 1/1 slider here? as here 01:56:050 (3) - . not "me" work here. but fits nice too
01:51:843 (3) - ^
01:55:349 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - long combo. previous - 2 short. choose one variant only
02:07:970 (5) - remove reverse, imo,fits better
02:13:579 (5) - ^
02:58:981 (6) - add whistle to the end, as in other diffs
Hard
AR+1
01:12:401 (6) - remove whistle from the end
02:27:252 (2) - lol, 2 grids down
Normal
00:15:080 (2,5) - add 2 whistles
01:55:349 (1,2,3,4,5) - long combo instead two short again. suggest to recheck all
02:41:627 (2,3) - forgot to fix spacing in this copy pasta? ;3
Easy
never thought that i'll say that, but tickrate 2 sounds awful on this diff. Especially here 02:06:568 (1) - and next long sliders. Maybe tickrate 1?
02:04:113 (2) - few grids down?
~And yes, full submit after fixing *.osb~
End of kiai should be snapped on 01:13:103 in all diffs. Well,to be honest, you have 01:13:103 in Normal diff, but in Normal diff timing section on 01:12:752 is useless. remove it.
SB
Take a look on last lines for "SB\BG_Bright.jpg"
F,0,73103,74680,0,0.020000150.02000015 --> should be 0
F,0,125621,126563,0.03523553,0
0.03523553 --> should be 0
"SB\Layer_1.jpg". 2nd line :
F,0,-345,5965,1,0.44400...0.44400... --> imo, 0 would be better. If 0, then your map will have a black screen in the start and the end.
Or use 0.4, then bg in the start will be just a bit darker, not absolutely black
Insane
00:50:139 (9) - horizontal looks not perfect before vertical
01:50:440 (3) - note? maybe 1/1 slider here? as here 01:56:050 (3) - . not "me" work here. but fits nice too
01:51:843 (3) - ^
01:55:349 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - long combo. previous - 2 short. choose one variant only
02:07:970 (5) - remove reverse, imo,fits better
02:13:579 (5) - ^
02:58:981 (6) - add whistle to the end, as in other diffs
Hard
AR+1
01:12:401 (6) - remove whistle from the end
02:27:252 (2) - lol, 2 grids down
Normal
00:15:080 (2,5) - add 2 whistles
01:55:349 (1,2,3,4,5) - long combo instead two short again. suggest to recheck all
02:41:627 (2,3) - forgot to fix spacing in this copy pasta? ;3
Easy
never thought that i'll say that, but tickrate 2 sounds awful on this diff. Especially here 02:06:568 (1) - and next long sliders. Maybe tickrate 1?
02:04:113 (2) - few grids down?
~And yes, full submit after fixing *.osb~
Topic Starter
hope I didn't forget something.
Most fixed. Rest are intentionally
Most fixed. Rest are intentionally
Some fixes via irc :
Kiai time,two nc in Normal were removed, were removed note and two inis breaks in Hard, one inis break in Insane. Maybe something else too, but who cares.
Edit : Bubbled~
Kiai time,two nc in Normal were removed, were removed note and two inis breaks in Hard, one inis break in Insane. Maybe something else too, but who cares.
Edit : Bubbled~
Looks pretty good.
Ranked~
Ranked~
Topic Starter
booooo thanks :3
Gratz !!
Congratz~;)
heeeey gratz! :3
Congratz!!!
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Topic Starter
no more love D:IceBeam wrote:
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