As requested
[
General]
- Combo color 3 & 4 are a bit similar through. Would be nicer if they were more different.
- When I downloaded, I didn't get video. Try re- full submitting.
[
Easy]
- I highly recommend approach rate 2 since this is such a calm song. I tested this while modding and it plays fine.
00:24:457 (2) - This note plays weird since isn't really following anything. How about removing it and put a note on the next red tick (00:24:684) and end it where (3) is and remove (3). Play and sound nicer, plus it gives a consistent feel (since it has the same length as the next slider).
00:43:548 (2) - Kick slider on easiest diff :/ It isn't too hard to read, but wouldn't it better to do just a long slider (remove all repeat and end it at same place as before) instead? Place like this if you don't have any ideas on what to do
http://puu.sh/bdS8. You may want to move (3) more down if you follow this suggestion to make the blanket look nicer and adjust a little.
00:47:184 (3) - Wave slider perhaps? I think this fits more than a straight slider with how the singer is singing
http://puu.sh/bdSE.
00:53:548 (1) - Like this perhaps, nicer I think.
http://puu.sh/bdT201:03:093 (4) - Nazi: move the center anchor point two grid up and two grid right (grid 4), blanket look nicer to me like this.
01:06:275 (4) - This slider looks a bit unsymmetrical to me and looking at how most of your sliders are really nice, fix it up a bit?
01:31:275 (2) - ^
01:46:895 (2) - I highly recommend you remove a repeat from here so hitting the next note feel better. This feel really jerky because of the low distant snap and doesn't look good since they touch each other. Place like this perhaps,
http://puu.sh/bdUF01:55:477 (T) - On all the other diff, you put this 5% timing point at 01:54:954 so perhaps change it unless you have a reason for this?
Pretty nice
[
Normal]
00:14:002 (1,2) - This doesn't play too good imo, removing a repeat from (1) still sound good and plays better to me.
00:22:639 (2) - Putting this on the previous red tick (00:22:411) feel a lot better. Since there is a space between (1,2), it felt weird playing a note on a weak beat (there is no piano on this beat) and putting it on the strong beat (where there is piano) make more sense to me. Also remove (3).
00:23:775 (1) - At this spacing, I'm not so sure about putting notes 1/2 next to each other. Notes shouldn't overlap unless it's a stream imo and this doesn't play too nice to me. I suggest removing it.
00:36:275 (2) - Moving the second and fourth anchor point more left and right respectively will make this look better. Incase you are not sure which points I mean, the first point is on the slider begin, the fifth is on the slider end, the third is the middle anchor point. So the second and fourth are the ones on the sides.
01:11:275 (7) - Perhaps make it like this so it doesn't overlap (6).
http://puu.sh/bdXZ Just feel cleaner.
01:21:503 (3,4) - I really feel a short slider make more sense here. It fits more with the vocal and I think it'll play nicer as well.
01:41:233 (1,2) - Same as 00:14:002, but this one plays a lot nicer so you can keep it if you want.
01:46:895 (2) - Similar to my suggestion for 01:46:895 in Easy. Remove a repeat from this slider.
01:49:198 (2) - Move the center anchor point more down and spread the third/last anchor more out will make this look nicer.
http://puu.sh/bdZsLooks good, but I feel sliders are not as good as in Easy.
[
Hard]
00:02:639 (1) - I would prefer if you follow the vocal here a bit, instead of just the piano.
00:05:366 (1) - ^ A little bit disappointed to see longer sliders like this in Hard.
00:14:684 (2) - Feel better to stack this with (1) to me.
00:23:548 (5,6) - Space it out to be consistent with the previous bit? Also play nicer to me, stacks like this make me think of stream and I keep getting 100s on (5).
http://puu.sh/be1X - this is what I mean by consistency.
00:24:002 (7) - Not sure about using red point on this slider, just use whites? Nicer to me.
00:25:139 (9,1) - Please space this out, the overlapping approach circles makes it really confusing to hit these notes.
http://puu.sh/be2D00:38:775 (4) - Not snapped to 0.9x like the other notes?
00:49:911 (1) - Again long sliders like this are a little disappointed to see in Hard, follow vocal a bit?
00:53:548 (1) - ^
01:00:139 (2) - Perhaps new combo so it easier to see the space between the stack?
01:43:633 (1,2,3) - Making this a repeating slider make the anti jump in the next pattern nicer to play.
01:45:591 (1) - A 8etter idea to space it out/make this a jump. The first time I play through this I keep on hitting (2) late, feel better after playing a second time through.
01:46:895 (5,6,7) - Similar to 00:23:548, please space it out
http://puu.sh/be45 Be sure to fix spacing for other notes if you follow this suggestion.
Calm fitting map, just a little bit disappointed by some of the long sliders where you can have easily shorten them by following the vocal.
Nice and clean map, have a star. Not a good idea to mod this at 2am, feel so sleepy right now
Good luck
100th Kudosu mod post 
