1. 01:05:827 (1) - spacing too far. I think that difficult in normal.
2. 01:40:327 (1) - stack 01:37:327 (1)slider end better ?
3. 01:54:952 (5) - remove NC and 01:56:639 - add NC
4. 02:13:327 (1,2) - Symmetry plz
5. 03:04:327 (1,2,3,4) - try like this
   

   336,112,184327,6,0,B|288:72|248:64,1,89.9999999999999,2|0
   184,96,185077,2,0,B|128:120|104:152,1,89.9999999999999,2|0
   160,208,185827,2,0,B|184:248|240:272,1,89.9999999999999,2|0
   304,240,186577,2,0,B|352:224|384:176,1,89.9999999999999,2|0

6. 03:47:452 (4) - spacing too far.
7. 03:57:014 (4) - grid x208,y168
8. 03:57:389 (1) - spinner start 03:58:139. and 03:57:389 add kick slider. http://puu.sh/80NF

1. 01:00:952 (7) - stack with 01:00:764 (6)
2. 01:24:952 (5) - stack 01:24:577 (4) slider end
3. 01:27:952 (4) - remove slider. and add circle here and 01:28:327
4. 02:08:639 (1,2) - Spacing includes sense of incongruity
5. 02:19:139 (4) - stack with 02:18:952 (3)
6. 02:28:702 (5) - overlap and am hard to look a little. plz move. grid x152,y232 . and with grid move 02:28:889 (6) - x224,y200
7. 03:27:202 (1,2) - I think that I do not fit 03:27:202 (1) - slider end 03:27:389 and 03:27:577 (2) - slider end 03:27:764

1. 00:05:827 (1,2) - I think that I do not fit 00:06:202 (2) - remove slider and 00:05:827 (1) - slider end 00:06:202 ( and 00:06:389 add circle? )
2. 00:25:514 (7) - remove NC and 00:25:702 - add NC
3. 02:32:827 (4) - NC
4. 03:08:639 (4) - ^
5. 03:24:952 (1) - remove NC and 03:25:327 - add NC
6. 03:33:764 (1) - remove NC and 03:34:139 - add NC
7. 03:36:952 (1) - remove NC and 03:37:327 - add NC

1. AR3 definitely doesn't fit this difficulty, it makes the map really unreadable. AR4 or AR5 would be much better
2. 00:56:639 (4) - A new combo is needed here because it's another pattern

• 00:09:577 (4,1) - This kind of pattern are confusing, because the player does not expect to see the slider stacked with the other slider's beginning.

1. 00:29:639 (4) - This slider shouldn't have a reverse because you absolutely need a note at 00:30:202. Otherwise, if you have something at 00:30:389 and not at 00:30:202, it feels like something is missing. It could be disconcerting to the player.
2. 01:06:764 (4,5,6) - Those notes are hidden by the previous notes' 300/100/50/x images, I highly recommand you to make them more visible.
3. 02:28:889 (6) - It's not a good idea to make this slider go in this direction, because in this way, it makes the map kinda hard to read
4. 02:42:577 (5) - New combo because it looks cool
5. 03:12:202 (8) - A new combo is needed here because the music suggest it.
6. 03:27:202 (1,2,3) - I really hate this kind of pattern when it's not justified by the music D:
7. 03:28:514 (4) - New combo is needed here, because of the music.
8. 03:57:389 (8) - New combo owo

1. Nice background
2. I think OD7 would be nicer here
3. 00:05:827 (1,2,3) - As I already said in Hard, I hate this kind of pattern when it's not justified by the music
4. 00:09:577 (7) - The new combo mark should be on this note on not on 00:10:327 (1).
5. 00:41:639 (4) - This slider shouldn't have a reverse because you absolutely need a note at 00:42:202. Otherwise, if you have something at 00:42:389 and not at 00:42:202, it feels like something is missing. It could be disconcerting to the player.
6. 01:21:202 - 20% Hitsound volume is not enough here imo, hitsounds have to be audible, you should start increasing the volume at 40%.
7. 02:32:827 - Same as above
8. 02:52:327 - Here again, the HS volume shouldn't be < 40%

KuraiPettan wrote:

Normal :

1. AR3 definitely doesn't fit this difficulty, it makes the map really unreadable. AR4 or AR5 would be much better
2. 00:56:639 (4) - A new combo is needed here because it's another pattern

Hard :

• 00:09:577 (4,1) - This kind of pattern are confusing, because the player does not expect to see the slider stacked with the other slider's beginning.

1. 00:29:639 (4) - This slider shouldn't have a reverse because you absolutely need a note at 00:30:202. Otherwise, if you have something at 00:30:389 and not at 00:30:202, it feels like something is missing. It could be disconcerting to the player.
2. 01:06:764 (4,5,6) - Those notes are hidden by the previous notes' 300/100/50/x images, I highly recommand you to make them more visible.
3. 02:28:889 (6) - It's not a good idea to make this slider go in this direction, because in this way, it makes the map kinda hard to read
4. 02:42:577 (5) - New combo because it looks cool
5. 03:12:202 (8) - A new combo is needed here because the music suggest it.
6. 03:27:202 (1,2,3) - I really hate this kind of pattern when it's not justified by the music D:
7. 03:28:514 (4) - New combo is needed here, because of the music.
8. 03:57:389 (8) - New combo owo

Insane :

1. Nice background
2. I think OD7 would be nicer here
3. 00:05:827 (1,2,3) - As I already said in Hard, I hate this kind of pattern when it's not justified by the music
4. 00:09:577 (7) - The new combo mark should be on this note on not on 00:10:327 (1).
5. 00:41:639 (4) - This slider shouldn't have a reverse because you absolutely need a note at 00:42:202. Otherwise, if you have something at 00:42:389 and not at 00:42:202, it feels like something is missing. It could be disconcerting to the player.
6. 01:21:202 - 20% Hitsound volume is not enough here imo, hitsounds have to be audible, you should start increasing the volume at 40%.
7. 02:32:827 - Same as above
8. 02:52:327 - Here again, the HS volume shouldn't be < 40%

Alace wrote:

+10ms to offset ?
if you agree with the new offset, you have to move all of your green lines in all of your diffs (注意變速的綠線一定要確實對好）
don't forget resnapping all notes

<Insane>
01:08:077 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 可以在這種地方多補一點softwhistle音效 比如說在 3.5.7.8.9加上,這樣串會比較有打擊感
01:28:327 (1) - 這clap移掉?
01:34:702 (1) - 這邊開始到01:43:327 (1) 為止 其實每條白線都可以下clap XD 可惜你空了幾個
02:25:327 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這邊音效不太順
02:40:327 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - 這一段比第一段同部份好聽 可以考慮把這邊的音效也移去第一段,這樣 01:28:327的clap就不用移了
03:25:327 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 這邊的clap不順
03:37:889 (3) - 移掉這clap ?

<Hard>
感覺AR+1好讀點?

<Normal>
01:28:327 (1) - 移掉這clap?
03:46:327 (3) - 移掉尾部的clap ?

Normalwhistle really fits this song \:D/

L_P wrote:

tag : the world god only knows 有了大大增加曝光性
得空還可以tag artist : nao toyama kana hanazawa nakagawa aoyama mio takahara ayumi kanae ito

Alace wrote:

maybe my ears got some problems XD
well since we only change hitsounds and tiny stuffs
it's time to rank

S h i o n wrote:

Congrats~~

KayeSara wrote:

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