Looks promising. Anticipating the first installment. If I must add direction I'd say the background in the first panel should be yellow.
Pokebis wrote:
I sent you a well thought out plot with a clever joke and punchline that will make the community shower you in praise and diamonds.
But it isn't off-topic if it doesn't suck and I'm not an attention whore if I don't post.failboat wrote:
your plot sucks pokebis, seriously
Make me a black person please.failboat wrote:
TBTE the pointless character who doesn't even deserve to be in this