S h i o n wrote:

:)

Relaxing

1. 03:48:277 (1) - Finish ? - 突然发现easy的音效没弄好……晕死了。。严重失误……
2. 02:27:833 (T) - 去掉kiai time ? -
3. 03:41:159 (T) - 加kiai time ? Hard同.
   - kiai 已经重做啦，中间instrumental段会用sb效果取代kiai~

22HH's Normal

1. too too H

Hard

1. 00:53:604 (6) - spacing ? 完全有理由以为这个是1/4的.. - 这里调整了～～
2. 01:10:937 (5) - 不喜欢像这样叠起来切断flow的感觉.. - 确实是诶～～调整啦～
3. 01:20:715 (1,1) - 这2个有点意义不明= = 索性去掉。 或者从01:24:270 (1) - 这里开始map 后面一段背景音乐空着浪费啊~ - 这里我自己感觉啦，留一点点空间可以让节奏有一些变化～
4. 01:35:826 (2,3,4) - 小间距还是不舒服 会误以为1/4 - 这三个是想放个梗：）
5. 01:38:492 (7) - NC - fixed~
6. 01:54:492 (1,2,3,4,5) - 可以更跳些? - 唔，除了instrumental段和结尾那里以外确实不想再放超过1.0x的跳梗了……毕竟开始制作时的定位就是听歌向刷分图:)
7. 02:11:381 (3) - vocal是1/4的, 考虑在02:11:270 加个note ? - 恩，加了个note，配合slider尾音做了个whistle三连，听起来蛮好的XD。。不过担心被人吐槽小坑呢～
8. 02:15:826 (7) - NC ? - 我改这里的时候连续蓝屏2次。。。悲剧。。暂时放弃，换个电脑弄。
9. 03:02:048 (6) - NC 03:02:493 (1) - RNC -fixed~
10. 03:42:937 (7) - NC 不然13个有点多啊~ - fixed~
11. 03:58:048 (7) - Ctrl + R ? 更顺手点似乎./. - 确实是！
12. 04:09:604 (1) - 静音? - 暂时没动。。。等换了音效的～

好图(片?) 射之.

Kiiwa will probably mod this later...

1. Song folder - image.jpg - It is an opinion same as other people.
2. Song Setup - tags - add tutuhaha in all diff
3. Timing - offset - Only Hard diff is different. plz Please unify it. change 2493⇒2500

Leorda wrote:

Hi there

General
* Make sure the kiai times is same on each diff
* Remove bg2 and bg8, since it's unused
* Add "tutuhaha" on each diff, since he is created you a guest diff
- remaking sb, and added to tag XD
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Skin
* The custom numbers skin has a cut-off the shadow....
* The comboburst looks low-quality and blur, try find it new one?
* You need an cursortrail.png. It's weird without one!
* Rename the "approachcircles.png" to "approachcircle.png". Because the custom approach circle are not appear
* comboburst image must not larger than 500x767 (currently 565x800)
- fixed
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Relaxing
01:38:499 (1) - Remove new combo, it's doesn't make sense having a single combo in single object - fixed~
02:04:277 (2) - Replace this object into a slider for a good flow? - good idea~
03:16:722 (2) - Not stack perfectly with head slider (Nazi) - fixed~~not nazi, it's really not stack well

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tutuhaha's Normal
* AR +1?

00:36:277 (1) - It is just me or the sliderslider sound is appear suddenly?
01:09:833 (5) - Unstack this and move to X:404 and X:120 for a good pattern? (Nazi)

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Hard
01:13:159 (1) - Remove new combo, it's doesn't make sense having a single combo in single object - err...it's for reducing difficult because a 1/2 hidden behind a small stream, so this new combo could help players to notice it
01:39:159 (8) - New combo? Since it's a slowdown slider - fixed~
02:35:381 (1) - Sudden slowdown slider can makes confusing for player - i thought it's fit for here:) actually i tryed several kinda style here but at last i choose slowdonw:)
03:25:159 (5) - New combo? Since it's a slowdown slider - okay~

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Good luck~

kosiga wrote:

hi~ Scorpiour

from my queue ~

here my mod ~

[General]

1. Song folder - image.jpg - It is an opinion same as other people.
2. Song Setup - tags - add tutuhaha in all diff
   - fixed above~
3. Timing - offset - Only Hard diff is different. plz Please unify it. change 2493⇒2500 -omg essential mistake i made... offset is 2493, forget to change other diffs after adjusting...

[SB]

SPOILER

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"bg3.jpg",320,240
F,0,23843,25621,0,1
M,0,23843,30954,320,240,459,340
F,0,25621,29176,1,0.9859393　⇒F,0,25621,29176,1
F,0,29176,30954,0.9859393,0　⇒F,0,29176,30954,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"bg4.jpg",320,240
F,0,73176,73621,0,1
M,0,73176,80732,453,222,187,258
F,0,73621,78954,1
F,0,78954,79843,1,0.4590402　⇒remove
F,0,79843,80732,0.4590402,0　⇒F,0,78954,80732,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"bg5.jpg",320,240
F,0,139398,139843,0,1
M,0,139398,148287,555,395,156,313
F,0,139843,141954,1,0.9679997　⇒remove
F,0,141954,143732,0.9679997,1　⇒remove
F,0,143732,144732,1　⇒F,0,139843,144732,1
F,0,144732,147398,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"bg.jpg",320,240
F,0,171398,171843,0,1
M,0,171398,178954,321,387,320,240
S,0,171398,178954,1.4352,0.6544001
F,0,171843,178065,1,0.9842697　⇒F,0,171843,178065,1
F,0,178065,178954,0.9842697,0　⇒F,0,178065,178954,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"028.jpg",320,240
F,0,185621,186509,0,1
M,0,185621,193621,309,515,320,256
S,0,185621,193621,1,0.5008
F,0,186509,192732,1
F,0,192732,193621,1,0
M,0,193621,,320,256　⇒remove
F,0,193621,,0 ⇒remove
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"011.jpg",320,240
F,0,177621,178954,0,1
M,0,177621,186509,191,198,442,280
S,0,177621,186509,0.8079998,0.6159999
F,0,178954,185621,1
F,0,185621,186509,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"104.jpg",320,240
F,0,198954,199843,0,1
M,0,198954,202509,1123,726,1171,759
S,0,198954,202509,1.3968,1.4608
F,0,199843,206509,1
M,0,202509,202954,1171,759,28,508
S,0,202509,202954,1.4608,0.9999997
M,0,202954,206954,28,508,144,311
S,0,202954,206954,0.9999997,0.5903999
F,0,206509,206954,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"009.jpg",320,240
F,0,192732,193621,0,1
M,0,192732,199843,180,321,358,219
S,0,192732,199843,0.7056001,0.5008
F,0,193621,198954,1
F,0,198954,199843,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"013.jpg",320,240
M,0,251398,256287,320,238
S,0,251398,256287,0.3344

-fixed~

[Relaxing] ⇒ change name Easy is better. (because do not match others) -okay

SPOILER

1. 00:13:166 (1) - spacing too close (0.74x) - a blank here:)
2. 00:20:277 (1) - ^ (0.84x) - ^
3. 00:22:944 (5) - remove finish to start of the slider and add finish to end of the slider - but not heard well..let me think about it
4. 00:36:388 - green line. 00:36:277 (5) - sliderslide sound is a little noisy. (I think that you should have sliderslide in softhitsound2) - good idea~
   
5. 00:41:166 (4) - spacing too close (0.91x) x392,y272 ? - okay
6. 00:57:611 (3) - remove finish to end of the slider
7. 00:59:388 (1) - add finish to start of the slider
8. 01:02:055 (4) - remove finish
9. 01:06:055 (4) - ^
10. 01:06:499 (1) - add finish to start of the slider
11. 01:09:166 (4) - remove finish to start of the slider
12. 01:27:833 (1) - add finish to start of the slider
13. 01:49:166 (1) - ^
14. 01:51:833 (5) - remove finish to end of the slider
15. 01:55:833 (6) - remove finish
16. 01:56:277 (1) - add finish to start of the slider
17. 02:02:499 (5) - remove finish
18. 02:10:055 (1) - remove NC and 02:10:499 - add NC - but here is the beginning of lyric...sorry no change
19. 02:10:499 (2) - add finish to start of the slider
20. 02:58:499 (1) - ^
21. 03:04:722 (5) - add finish to end of the slider
22. 03:11:833 (5) - ^
23. 03:16:722 (2) - one grid right. - fixed~
24. 03:19:833 (1) - add finish to start of the slider
25. 03:25:166 (5) - remove finish to start of the slider
26. 03:26:944 (1) - add finish to start of the slider
27. 03:34:055 (1) - add finish
28. 03:40:277 (4) - remove finish
29. 03:41:166 (1) - add finish to start of the slider
30. 03:48:277 (1) - ^
31. 03:55:388 (1) - add finish
32. 03:57:166 (1) - ^
33. 04:02:055 (1) - add finish to repeat of the slider
34. 04:07:833 (1) - spinner end 04:11:722 ? (same normal)

- i decide to remake my hit sounds

[tutuhaha's Normal]

SPOILER

1. AR -1 (I think too fast >< )
2. 00:36:388 - remove green line ?
3. 00:36:944 - ^
4. 01:24:277 (4) - add NC and 01:24:722 - remove NC and 01:26:055 - add NC
5. 02:10:499 (1) - add finish to start of the slider
6. 03:40:722 (1) - remove NC and 03:41:166 - add NC
7. 03:41:166 (2) - add finish to start of the slider
8. 03:48:277 (1) - ^
9. 03:53:611 (1) - add finish to end of the slider
10. 04:02:055 (1) - ^

[Hard]

SPOILER

1. 00:09:604 (1) - add finish to start of the slider
2. 00:16:270 (4) - remove finish
3. 00:16:715 (1) - add finish to start of the slider
4. 00:32:270 (6) - remove finish to end of the slider (finish does not match a red line)
5. 00:34:048 (4) - ^
6. 00:37:826 (4) - ^
7. 00:38:048 - add note and this note to add finish - sorry no change due to the lyric
8. 00:39:381 (4) - remove finish to end of the slider
9. 00:41:159 (5) - ^
10. 00:44:715 (4) - remove finish to repeat of the slider and add finish to end of the slider
11. 00:59:381 (1) - add finish to start of the slider
12. 01:02:492 (5) - remove finish
13. 01:04:715 (5) - add NC - okay~
14. 01:06:048 (10) - remove finish
15. 01:06:492 (1) - add finish to start of the slider
16. 01:27:826 (1) - ^
17. 01:39:159 (8) - add NC - fixed~
18. 01:47:381 (1) - remove finish
19. 01:49:159 (1) - add finish to start of the slider
20. 01:52:270 (4) - remove finish
21. 01:55:826 (6) - ^
22. 01:56:270 (1) - add finish to start of the slider
23. 02:02:048 (2) - dose not match vocal. try like this http://puu.sh/bsXQ - good idea!
24. 02:02:492 (4) - remove finish
25. 02:03:381 (5) - add finish to start of the slider
26. 02:06:492 (8) - remove finish
27. 02:10:492 (1) - add finish to start of the slider
28. 02:15:826 (7) - add NC
29. 02:27:826 (4) - remove finish
30. 03:02:048 (6) - add NC and 03:02:493 - remove NC -fixed~
31. 03:18:937 (1) - remove finish to end of the slider
32. 03:19:826 (1) - add finish
33. 03:22:270 (2) - remove finish
34. 03:25:159 (5) - remove finish to end of the slider
35. 03:26:937 (1) - add finish
36. 03:30:048 (6) - remove finish
37. 03:33:604 (6) - ^
38. 03:34:048 (1) - add finish to start of the slider
39. 03:35:826 (7) - add NC and 03:36:715 - remove NC - fixed~
40. 03:36:715 (1) - remove finish
41. 03:40:270 (1) - spacing too close. not stack ? - considering how to change....
42. 03:41:159 (1) - add finish to start of the slider
43. 03:42:493 (5) - remove finish
44. 03:42:715 (6) - add NC - fixed
45. 03:44:270 (13) - ^- fixed
46. 03:46:493 (7) - add NC - sorry no change
47. 03:47:826 (10) - remove finish
48. 03:48:270 (1) - add finish
49. 03:50:048 (7) - add NC
50. 03:50:937 (11) - remove finish to end of the slider
51. 03:54:493 (3) - remove finish
52. 03:55:381 (2) - add finish to start of the slider
53. 04:02:493 (4) - add NC and add finish to start of the slider
54. 04:05:159 (5) - remove finish to end of the slider
55. 04:09:604 (1) - spinner end 04:11:715 ( same normal )

sorry, long mod

not long~~pretty a nice mod:) .... and i'm remaking my SB & hitsounds

map is good ~ Star☆~

Good luck ~

Star Stream wrote:

hi
from my queue

Relaxing
00:41:611 (1,2) - make like this http://puu.sh/bqgj - unable to see this image....
00:57:611 ~ 00:59:388 (kiai) - delete? or make it -> start point : 00:59:388 - end : 01:12:722 - all kiai remaked~
01:06:055 (4,1) - 1grid up? (parallel with 01:04:722 (3) - ) - -!!!
01:08:277 (3) - 1grid down the slider tick(368,96) - but now it is here...
01:11:833 (3,4,5) - slider? - emm...change (3,4) to slider:)
01:34:055 (4) - looks ugly, delete the middle tick - okay~
02:10:055 (1,2) - remove NC, NC - sorry no change because of lyric
02:14:499 (6) - NC - also no change
02:15:833 (1,1) - combine them - considering
03:08:277 (4) - 2grid down the middle tick - okay
03:41:166 - kiai end,and kiai start point

tutuhaha's Normal
02:48:722 (2) - touch my timer, 2~4grid down
03:35:833 (1) - spinner? why?

Hard
OD-1 - em...my acc promote to 99% when test by OD6 ... okay
Kiai - same as Relaxing
00:15:826 (3,4) - feel empty, like this? http://puu.sh/buFm - ..unable to see ur image
00:22:048 (7,8) - delete and add a slow slider - em.. make some change base on ur advice:)
01:00:604 - add a circle - ..i'd like to keep 1/2 here:)
01:05:604 (9,10) - slow slider - sorry no change because of the accent here:)
01:07:715 - add a circle - ..i'd like to keep 1/2 here, too:)
01:26:048 - add some notes - emm. at first i dont want to add anything here, but this point...i got new idea , so added:)
01:39:159 (2) - make longer than 01:40:270 (3) - but it's designed
01:50:381 - add a circle - still 1/2
02:15:826 (7) - NC - fixed~
03:21:159 (7,8) - same as 00:15:826 (3,4) - but they're different so sorry no change
04:07:270 - add a circle - sorry
04:07:381 (5) ~ 04:07:381 (5) - stream? - i really don't wanna add a stream in the end...

that's all
good luck~

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

Halloww~
You requested on my queue ;3
Nice skin ;D

Normal
-02:48:715 (2) - Reverse once more

._. That's all I could find :I
In insane the hit circles are sorta of hard to see though =/ - emm...seems i need to darken the shadow of hitcircleoverlay...let me think about how to make it
Other then that,the map is really well made ;D

Star~

• 
  [General]
  结尾那个spin我觉得可以用音量线做个淡出的效果.
  skin真心不错 不影响打图\:D/
  
  [Hard]
  finish加的有点过多的感觉...显得有些吵...吵得像过年
  
  00:19:604 (4) - 如果你一定要加这么多finish的话...这里也补一个finish
  00:22:492 (8) - 这个new combo后面那个1的nc删掉
  00:30:937 (1) - 其实这才是本该加finish的地方不是吗233
  00:36:270 (6) - ^
  01:09:826 (x) -虽然能够理解但是还是建议这里补个note?
  01:10:826 (x) - 这个akari很带感啊不要忽略它;_;
  01:13:159 (1) - 不介意这个叠着5放...而且要叠也不要new combo 突然刹车不好读
  01:20:715 (1,1,1) - 这几个spacing可以有点细小的变化...比如第二个比第一个稍微下一点点 第三个比第二个稍微下一点点 当然这只是建议，现在这样也很好
  01:39:159 (2) - 常速1.28这里不是应该0.65吗为什么又变成正常的0.5了呢...而且建议从01:38:492 (1) - 开始变慢...
  03:36:604 (x) - 这么带感的wasure的re真的要带过吗...
  04:09:381 (4) - 换个位置吧 现在这样不太好看...你可以放右边什么的
  
  [tutuhaha]
  多加点除了finish以外的音效吧...明明有很多可以加的地方,不带这样偷懒的

goodbye wrote:

• 
  [General]
  结尾那个spin我觉得可以用音量线做个淡出的效果.
  skin真心不错 不影响打图\:D/
  
  [Hard]
  finish加的有点过多的感觉...显得有些吵...吵得像过年
  -非kiai段音量调低了，感觉应该好一点了:)
  
  00:19:604 (4) - 如果你一定要加这么多finish的话...这里也补一个finish - 00:19:826 (6) - 这里有个finish诶。。2个有点乱了吧
  00:22:492 (8) - 这个new combo后面那个1的nc删掉 - 我把nc换到了00:22:048 (1) - 要不感觉有点长了，现在看起来好多了:)
  00:30:937 (1) - 其实这才是本该加finish的地方不是吗233 -好象是诶～
  00:36:270 (6) - ^ - 这里用custom clap啦，没有finish那么重:)
  01:09:826 (x) -虽然能够理解但是还是建议这里补个note? - 恩。。正好一起把前面连打调整了下:)
  01:10:826 (x) - 这个akari很带感啊不要忽略它;_; -没有注意到诶。。补上啦。
  01:13:159 (1) - 不介意这个叠着5放...而且要叠也不要new combo 突然刹车不好读 - 我决定挪到上面配合5连作了个blanket:)
  01:20:715 (1,1,1) - 这几个spacing可以有点细小的变化...比如第二个比第一个稍微下一点点 第三个比第二个稍微下一点点 当然这只是建议，现在这样也很好 - 开始是这样的，后来总觉得有点歪，于是改成的同位置的呢
  01:39:159 (2) - 常速1.28这里不是应该0.65吗为什么又变成正常的0.5了呢...而且建议从01:38:492 (1) - 开始变慢... 0.5x是因为感觉0.64x不够慢>.<，前面reverse也减慢了，好主意呢～
  03:36:604 (x) - 这么带感的wasure的re真的要带过吗... 加上一个note的话好听不好看了…我好好想想怎么改改造型的XD
  04:09:381 (4) - 换个位置吧 现在这样不太好看...你可以放右边什么的
  
  [tutuhaha]
  多加点除了finish以外的音效吧...明明有很多可以加的地方,不带这样偷懒的

1. This folder's size is 11,0 MB, which is greater than the allowed size of 10.0 MB without video. Try to make the filesize smaller for the big images >:
2. Kiai times are inconsistent between difficulties.
3. It's really hard to read notes around 3:30, as seen here. Mind changing the purple combo color a bit?

1. 00:09:604 (1) - Add a finish hitsound to the start? You can hear it in the song.
2. 00:16:715 (1) - ^
3. 00:22:937 (5) - Add a finish or a whistle to the end? It sounds quite empty atm.
4. 00:36:270 (5) - A whistle to the start? It fits the song.
5. 01:06:048 (4,1) - Remove finish at (4) then add it to (1)'s start? It sounds better since (1) is the big white tick.
6. 01:31:381 (1) - Add a finish here? You can hear it in the song >:
7. 01:44:715 (5) - Remove the whistle from the start? It sounds a bit awkward right now.
8. 01:47:381 (5) - Add a whistle to the start? It kinda fits the vocals.
9. 02:03:381 (1) - Add a finish to the start here? Fits the song.
10. 02:10:048 (1,2) - Remove new combo from (1) and add it to (2) since (2) is on the big white tick
11. 02:15:826 (1,1) - Make this only one spinner?
12. 02:34:493 (6) - Add a finish to the start of this to make it consistent with 02:32:270 (2,3,4)?
13. 02:58:270 (T) - Move this kiai section to 02:58:493.
14. 03:02:048 (1) - Add a finish here? It fits with the song.
15. 03:09:159 (1) - ^
16. 03:16:270 (1) - ^
17. 03:33:604 (6,1) - Same as 01:06:048.
18. 03:48:270 (1) - Add a finish at the start? Fits with the song.

• Overall Rating: 9.0/10 ~ Pretty nice, liked some patterns and the non-stop flow felt pretty good. Just some hitsound issues on the downbeat that should be fixed, but that's very easy to fix and will only make it better ~ Great job.

• 
  
  There are basically... No hitsounds throughout the whole diff? I can just hear some finishes sometimes and that's all. Please add more hitsounds, the map feels very empty as it is. Try adding some whistles to the white ticks, wouldn't hurt. Also, add finish hitsounds to most of the big white ticks, but only if necessary and if the song feels like it, like at 02:10:492 (1).
  Also, the SB here is apparently glitched, the "Mapped by tutuhaha" fades out way too fast.

1. 02:49:604 (1) - Finish this on the next blue tick - it actually fits with the song.

• Overall Rating: 8.7/10 ~ I loved the map, seriously. The patterns are perfect and I didn't spot any big issues there. However, please put more hitsounds in this difficulty, since it feels very empty as it is. Apart from that, it's great.

• 
  
  HP Drain -1, please. It feels WAY too high for a Hard difficulty.

1. 00:20:604 (3) - Remove the whistle? It feels better and prevents whistle abuse.
2. 00:32:270 (6) - Maybe remove the finish from the end of this slider and add a new note at 00:32:715 with a finish hitsound? It sounds better to have the finishes on the white tick.
3. 00:34:048 (4) - Same as ^, but then add a note at 00:34:492.
4. 00:36:492 (7) - Remove the whistle from the start/end, only leaving it on the repeat. Prevents whistle abuse and sounds much better.
5. 00:37:826 (4) - Same as 00:32:270, however, add a note at 00:38:048.
6. 00:39:381 (4) - ^ & add at 00:39:826.
7. 00:41:159 (5) - ^ & add at 00:41:604.
8. 00:42:159 (4) - Remove whistle? sounds much better.
9. 00:44:715 (4) - Remove finish from repeat then add it to the end of the slider. Sounds much better.
10. 00:46:270 (2) - Remove whistle? Sounds better.
11. 00:48:715 (1) - Add finish? Follows the song.
12. 01:09:492 (4) - Remove whistle? Prevents whistle abuse.
13. 01:12:826 (8) - ^
14. 01:40:270 (3) - Maybe add a new combo here to show it speeds up again?
15. 01:42:715 (4,1) - Is this spacing intentional? If it is, please explain why.. D:
16. 01:50:937 (1,2,3) - Please stack the slider ends.
17. 02:01:048 (5) - Remove whistle to prevent abuse?
18. 02:24:937 (Break) - Remove this break?
19. 02:38:937 (5) - Maybe slowdown again and add a new combo? Fits with the song.
20. 03:27:604 (1,2,3) - Stack the slider ends.

• Overall Rating: 9.1/10 ~ Nice map, just try to prevent abusing whistles next time. Also, I really like 03:23:381 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4), it's a really fun pattern. Excellent job in this map, liked it a lot!

Blue Dragon wrote:

~General~

1. This folder's size is 11,0 MB, which is greater than the allowed size of 10.0 MB without video. Try to make the filesize smaller for the big images >: - i've reduce it from 20MB to 11MB....okay...i'll try to reduce to quality of some images..u know, the mp3 is over 5.6MB..it's too long...
2. Kiai times are inconsistent between difficulties. - fixed~~
3. It's really hard to read notes around 3:30, as seen here. Mind changing the purple combo color a bit? - adjusted~~
   

[Easy]

1. 00:09:604 (1) - Add a finish hitsound to the start? You can hear it in the song. - okay
2. 00:16:715 (1) - ^ - not add here because of the prev finish
   
3. 00:22:937 (5) - Add a finish or a whistle to the end? It sounds quite empty atm. - s:c1 clap~
4. 00:36:270 (5) - A whistle to the start? It fits the song. -okay~
5. 01:06:048 (4,1) - Remove finish at (4) then add it to (1)'s start? It sounds better since (1) is the big white tick. - use finish here because it is the accent of vocal:)
6. 01:31:381 (1) - Add a finish here? You can hear it in the song >: - okay~
7. 01:44:715 (5) - Remove the whistle from the start? It sounds a bit awkward right now. - actually this slider should redline to redline.. but may too hard for a easy diff because of change beats...not very sure how to change...
   
8. 01:47:381 (5) - Add a whistle to the start? It kinda fits the vocals.- okay~
9. 02:03:381 (1) - Add a finish to the start here? Fits the song.- s:c1 clap~
   
10. 02:10:048 (1,2) - Remove new combo from (1) and add it to (2) since (2) is on the big white tick - current pos is the boundary of lyric..
11. 02:15:826 (1,1) - Make this only one spinner? - too many people claim it! so i change XDD
12. 02:34:493 (6) - Add a finish to the start of this to make it consistent with 02:32:270 (2,3,4)? - no...here should be a mutative beats:)
13. 02:58:270 (T) - Move this kiai section to 02:58:493. - i remove it!
14. 03:02:048 (1) - Add a finish here? It fits with the song.
15. 03:09:159 (1) - ^
16. 03:16:270 (1) - ^ - add all these three
17. 03:33:604 (6,1) - Same as 01:06:048. - ...why and how...?
18. 03:48:270 (1) - Add a finish at the start? Fits with the song. - cannot add also due to the finish before

• Overall Rating: 9.0/10 ~ Pretty nice, liked some patterns and the non-stop flow felt pretty good. Just some hitsound issues on the downbeat that should be fixed, but that's very easy to fix and will only make it better ~ Great job.

[tutuhaha's Normal]

• 
  
  There are basically... No hitsounds throughout the whole diff? I can just hear some finishes sometimes and that's all. Please add more hitsounds, the map feels very empty as it is. Try adding some whistles to the white ticks, wouldn't hurt. Also, add finish hitsounds to most of the big white ticks, but only if necessary and if the song feels like it, like at 02:10:492 (1).
  Also, the SB here is apparently glitched, the "Mapped by tutuhaha" fades out way too fast.

1. 02:49:604 (1) - Finish this on the next blue tick - it actually fits with the song.

• Overall Rating: 8.7/10 ~ I loved the map, seriously. The patterns are perfect and I didn't spot any big issues there. However, please put more hitsounds in this difficulty, since it feels very empty as it is. Apart from that, it's great.

[Hard]

• 
  
  HP Drain -1, please. It feels WAY too high for a Hard difficulty. - u'r right, it is a hard diff not insane

1. 00:20:604 (3) - Remove the whistle? It feels better and prevents whistle abuse. - nice:)
2. 00:32:270 (6) - Maybe remove the finish from the end of this slider and add a new note at 00:32:715 with a finish hitsound? It sounds better to have the finishes on the white tick. - about this part, the long-whitle tick is the blank of vocal, so i decide to use a finish to end a lyric, and leave that blank. I tryed ur suggestion and it is really sound good, but i decide to leave these blanks because i think can make some change on rhythm, it's another sense of music:)
   
3. 00:34:048 (4) - Same as ^, but then add a note at 00:34:492.
   
4. 00:36:492 (7) - Remove the whistle from the start/end, only leaving it on the repeat. Prevents whistle abuse and sounds much better. - okay~
5. 00:37:826 (4) - Same as 00:32:270, however, add a note at 00:38:048.
6. 00:39:381 (4) - ^ & add at 00:39:826.
7. 00:41:159 (5) - ^ & add at 00:41:604.
   
8. 00:42:159 (4) - Remove whistle? sounds much better.- okay~
9. 00:44:715 (4) - Remove finish from repeat then add it to the end of the slider. Sounds much better. - good idea!
   
10. 00:46:270 (2) - Remove whistle? Sounds better.- okay~
11. 00:48:715 (1) - Add finish? Follows the song. - finish here heard too heavy i suppose
12. 01:09:492 (4) - Remove whistle? Prevents whistle abuse. - here's a whistle triplet:)
13. 01:12:826 (8) - ^ - ^
14. 01:40:270 (3) - Maybe add a new combo here to show it speeds up again? - emm...but new combo make here not looks good, let me think about it~~
15. 01:42:715 (4,1) - Is this spacing intentional? If it is, please explain why.. D: - i fixed here! it's not designed D:
16. 01:50:937 (1,2,3) - Please stack the slider ends. -..... sorry but i make it like it is now..i think it looks cute...
17. 02:01:048 (5) - Remove whistle to prevent abuse?- okay~
18. 02:24:937 (Break) - Remove this break? - ah...i forget it!
19. 02:38:937 (5) - Maybe slowdown again and add a new combo? Fits with the song. - actually ... i remove the slowdown here...XDD
20. 03:27:604 (1,2,3) - Stack the slider ends. - okay ..a hard work T^T

• Overall Rating: 9.1/10 ~ Nice map, just try to prevent abusing whistles next time. Also, I really like 03:23:381 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4), it's a really fun pattern. Excellent job in this map, liked it a lot!

tutuhaha wrote:

-A-亲爱的不是说你来加音效么？

wcx19911123 wrote:

from my queue

[General]
.osz file is 10.8 MB , it is greater than the allowed size of 10.0 MB without video
kiai time is not the same in all diffs
- fixed

[skin]
approachcircle.png must be 128x128 - - fixed

[sb]
开头的mapper那图太没存在感了，要么就弄明显点要么就不要浪费sb load 去掉了～
00:09:159 - 这个效果挪到00:09:604 - ，好很多 - 改过来啦。
01:20:715 - 这闪三下，感觉很违和 - 恩。。去掉了
03:22:270 - 哭了这BG动得太生硬了 - 加快了移动速度，配合那个slider移动！

[Easy]
00:22:937 - 少点音效，太多了不好听 - fixed~
00:30:937 - whistle - 因为后面有w了，所以下clap了～
00:36:270 - whistle换finish - 后面有finish了……所以这里也clap了
00:39:826 - whistle - 这段是红线whistle，所以抱歉没改
00:46:048 - 这一段开始音效可以少点，比如去掉一半的whistle - 好主意～
00:49:159 - 这个finish应该挪到00:48:715 - fixed~
00:51:826 - 这个finish挪到00:52:270 - 这个没有动，用来收尾一个长音～
00:59:381 - finish - nice~
01:06:048 - 这个finish挪到01:06:492 - 这个也没动因为也是收尾～
哭了我ign之后的所有finish。。我感觉finish你完全用错了，最好remap一遍finish，finish用在长白线或者红线才对啊。。
02:28:270 - 哭了24finish。。- 整个这段我的finish是做clap用的，用来弥补clap本身不适合曲子的缺陷——实际上整个都是当clap用的～
02:51:381 - 这里建议静音或者降音 - 好的～
03:18:048 (5) - 多个锚点，包围好点 - 尼姆芙说1个描点就可以。。于是使劲调了半天……
04:11:715 - 感觉应该结束在04:11:826 - ，然后静音 - 果然我一开始没弄错～～～修正啦～

[tutuhaha's Normal]
这太鬼畜了，已经是H了
00:09:604 - finish吧
00:11:159 - remove whistle
00:22:048 (3) - 这个明显不圆啊
01:09:604 (4,5) - 这个我建议还是叠到下个slider头上，不然有点confusing
01:11:826 (3) - 还是明显不圆
01:40:492 (2) - 短一点，01:40:937 - 折返，01:41:381 - 结束，然后在01:41:604 - 加个note
02:15:826 (4) - 不圆
02:17:715 (1) - 我觉得跟其他难度一样跟vocal结束在02:19:381 - 附近好点，记得消音

[Hard]
还是跟Easy一样，finish全部用错了，我建议你只下长白线就好
- finish我是下在vocal尾音重音或者小节收尾，放长白线的话感觉反而会乱了套，所以没有动……而且那样太生硬了，听着缺少变化

00:23:826 - 加个note，用上finish - 这里加finish感觉……恩，还好，所以加上了，和前面叠在一起
00:57:604 (1) - 这0.5速也太慢了，至少0.75吧 - 用0.5是因为0.75的话sv数量会超。。不过还是加快了一些：）
01:00:937 (6,1) - 这种摆满1/2的图，1/2 slider红线起真心巨违和，弄成白线起好多了 - 这里改掉了！
01:13:159 (10) - 串个5连到01:13:604 - 结束好点 - 连续2个5连会不会有点难。。让我想想的……
01:33:159 (9,1) - 换成一个3/4折返slider好点 - 没敢用3/4折返不过画了个有点奇怪的slider叠，不知道会不会吐槽呢
01:33:604 (1,2) - 这里spacing不对，不过打的时候感觉还行 - 是这样设计的……
01:39:159 (2,3) - 这两个变速有点怪。。感觉一下慢很多，一下快很多0.0 - 我觉得挺好玩的
01:50:937 (1,2,3,4) - 你就没考虑过叠好点么，这种pattern不用在意spaicng - 啊。。别吐槽这里啊专门做成这样的……
02:01:604 (1,2,3) - 跳下是好的，问题是整首歌都是1/2，就这里3/4然后你这里跳。。很confusing的 - 尼姆芙说没有跳不好玩，于是我加了个跳>.<

这图感觉路还长着。。
good luck

1. The slider followcircle is too big (284x284). I resized it for you... Approach circle is too big too, and I resized it as well. Remember to full submit afterwards.
2. It's nazi of me, but Konna should be capitalized in the source.
3. If this is an ending (like the mp3 name suggests), add "ending" and "ed" to the tags of all difficulties ? Might aslo add "full" "version" and "ver." as well.
4. I think you should make the line of the approach circle bigger - as it is now, it's very difficult to see.

1. Your use of finishes is weird. Finishes are supposed to emphasize very particular beats in the song, usually in the beginning of comboes. For instance, the very first finish fits, but 00:12:270 (4) - this one sounds weird. Consequently, removing 00:16:270 (4) - this and adding a finish on 00:16:715 (1) - this slider's first beat fits better (and is more consistent). Go through the whole diff and check your finish usage - it will improve how your diff sounds a lot.
2. 00:22:937 (5) - It's a whole lot better not to have a finish on the slider's beginning. Listen to the song - there's no particular sound on the slider's beginning.
3. 00:36:270 (5) - Remove the finish on this slider and add a finish on 00:38:048 (1) - this slider's beginning (see the first thing I wrote for this diff). You can do that several times in the diff.

1. The spacing is quite big for a Normal, but it makes the spread better. Also, I like the use of the custom clap, but the ticks shouldn't be silenced - they offer a replacement for the missing whistles.

1. The AR feels really too fast for the diff. Try using AR7 instead.
2. Same comment as for Easy regarding the Finish hitsounds.
3. It's better to use the same spacing for all 1/4 beats all over the map so it looks better. Consider reducing the spacing on these: 01:10:492 (4,5,6) - 02:50:715 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
4. 01:35:826 (2,3,4,1) - This pattern was very confusing. The spacing makes the player think they are 1/4 while they aren't.
5. 01:56:270 (1,2) - Same.
6. 03:39:826 (8,2,3) - Very confusing spacing (same reasons). Move the slider away.

Odaril wrote:

As per your request.

Please reply to this mod saying what you ddin't fix (and what you did) and why.
Also, if you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game.

General

1. The slider followcircle is too big (284x284). I resized it for you... Approach circle is too big too, and I resized it as well. Remember to full submit afterwards. - fixed~~
   
2. It's nazi of me, but Konna should be capitalized in the source. - not nazi, it's really my mistake
3. If this is an ending (like the mp3 name suggests), add "ending" and "ed" to the tags of all difficulties ? Might aslo add "full" "version" and "ver." as well. - i select tags "ed 7" and "full version" for supposing that's enough for players to find this song:)
   
4. I think you should make the line of the approach circle bigger - as it is now, it's very difficult to see. - emm...i broaden it:)

Easy

1. Your use of finishes is weird. Finishes are supposed to emphasize very particular beats in the song, usually in the beginning of comboes. For instance, the very first finish fits, but 00:12:270 (4) - this one sounds weird. Consequently, removing 00:16:270 (4) - this and adding a finish on 00:16:715 (1) - this slider's first beat fits better (and is more consistent). Go through the whole diff and check your finish usage - it will improve how your diff sounds a lot.
   
   - the most hard part for me it that instrumental chorus. I fixed other finishes in both diffs, but that but i remain more finishes to make some differences:)
   
2. 00:22:937 (5) - It's a whole lot better not to have a finish on the slider's beginning. Listen to the song - there's no particular sound on the slider's beginning. - here i move finish to the end : same as hard diff:)
   
3. 00:36:270 (5) - Remove the finish on this slider and add a finish on 00:38:048 (1) - this slider's beginning (see the first thing I wrote for this diff). You can do that several times in the diff. - i fixed all but instrumental part because i need to think about how to make it better in that part:) acutally, i remove about half of the finishes in intrumental part, but not all.
   

tutuhaha's Normal

1. The spacing is quite big for a Normal, but it makes the spread better. Also, I like the use of the custom clap, but the ticks shouldn't be silenced - they offer a replacement for the missing whistles.

Hard

1. The AR feels really too fast for the diff. Try using AR7 instead. - it's AR7 now, i just worried that because of overlaps, ar7 may cause some trouble in reading map while playing. i'm not very sure...just supposed.
   
2. Same comment as for Easy regarding the Finish hitsounds. - it's a big work T^T . and , with the change of finish, i reset many nc...
   
3. It's better to use the same spacing for all 1/4 beats all over the map so it looks better. Consider reducing the spacing on these: 01:10:492 (4,5,6) - 02:50:715 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - it's okay, i reduced them, and the later one, i make a line, it looks better:)
   
4. 01:35:826 (2,3,4,1) - This pattern was very confusing. The spacing makes the player think they are 1/4 while they aren't. - okay, I change it to 1.0x DS, the change really make flow better
5. 01:56:270 (1,2) - Same. - spend a lot of time to change here...nearly makes me remap..
6. 03:39:826 (8,2,3) - Very confusing spacing (same reasons). Move the slider away. - i move stream away here..slider pattern is hard to move ....

1. 01:31:381 (1) - 2 grids up and 2 grids right. Remember to fix the spacing after that!
2. 02:13:159 (5) - Spacing

• Nothing found,good job!

1. 00:15:826 (3,4) - You should put them where the slider 1 began. Here's an example:
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:27:826 (1,2) - I found this part pretty confusing. You sould move one of the sliders to make this patterm more readable
3. 01:49:604 (2,3,4,5,6) - You should put them like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 03:13:604 (1,2) - I found this part pretty confusing. You sould move one of the sliders to make this patterm more readable
5. 03:15:604 (2) - It's better to place this here:
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 03:26:937 (1) - Place it under the beginning of the slider 03:25:159 (1) -

L_P wrote:

from mod que
btw, lets start

general: no insane...the picture quality is bit too low

HARD
00:12:715 (4) - 我個人覺得一開始就這樣stack不是很合適，而且你也可以用repeat slider啊。。這樣會讓我有個慾望想要早一個tick打下去 折返的话节奏对不上了吧……
00:14:048 (3) - 跟vocal吧（移前一個tick)。。。沒跟很奇怪 放了个slider~单纯蓝线的话担心有点难吧？
00:19:381 (3) - 這裡也是，而且我個人喜歡在拉長音的地方用slider，it is up to you 于是这里暂时没动……
00:23:381 (7) - spacing 不一致 允许误差之内XD
00:32:270 (6) - 試試看吧tail放在五角形狀上 没法和(1)的tail叠上。。就这样吧……
00:34:937 (2,3) - 其實我建議這裡之間加多一個note然後就。。。隨便咯 确实多放个节奏似乎会更好一点
00:38:715 (2) - 同上的問題
00:47:604 (7) - 這個可以拉下來一點，讓上一個的slider tail 放在他上面 看起来挺好玩的
00:48:715 (1,2,3) - hohoh 這裡會造成讀圖誤解（MAT會噴，但是我建議你不要改，堅持下去吧 那么就不改了XD
01:02:381 (x) - 加note？雖然破壞形狀啊 是的……
01:20:715 (1,1,1) - boring。。。最少antijump嗎 距离这么远，于是没动……
03:18:937 (1) - 不要攪和在一起吧 挪开了一点点
03:21:604 (1) - blanket好萊吧 恩

當我看到tutuhaha normal我就覺得放心了，因為他基本上沒啥問題，只是稍微提不起勁而已
01:06:048 (6) - 這裡不加finish嗎
01:20:715 (1) - cancel finish吧，要不然就小聲點，很吵
哇你的slider好美哦

我不mod easy 從來不哈哈

就這樣咯，還是建議加insane,如果嫌麻煩就找人做collab吧 （誒，說倒反了

Nymph wrote:

Hi Nymph here and M4M request from qq?.
中文MOD


General:
你这skin真心不好看……从哪弄的……我建议全删了得了……

full version有必要放进tag里？感觉不是应该写在title上么


SB:
开头一直模糊很单调 不考虑点变化么 比方说跟着MP3来调整模糊的程度适当再震一下之类的

bg3这图很不清晰啊 在SB里面放大了更不好看了 可能是图的源的事么 bg5这个也不好 但是02就好清晰啊。。还有别的黑猫图没
tag的部分改来改去已经改晕了……sb的bg的话，没办法被压图压成这样了。卡着10MB线……

Easy:
Beatmap design/suggestion
01:39:159 (1) - 这转盘位置略奇怪……完全没想到这里会转 长音有点不知道怎么处理了……就偷懒转盘了……
03:41:159 (1) - 这都震屏了 不喷一下kiai么 不是说不要为了喷泉而放kiai么……

Hitsound
01:42:048 (1) - 头finish一个？挺怪的这里居然空着 看你以前的pattern以为这里肯定会finish的 改了！
02:30:937 (5) - 这丢了个whistle？这不应该是故意的啊 因为这比前面音高还高 没理由前面有这里倒没 也改了！
02:40:270 (2,3) - 2个finish连着很诡异的 修改到了24
02:43:826 (4,5) - 这也是 我不太喜欢这种用法 不知道你感觉如何 所以类似的我不提了 这个改了，后面那个没动。
03:19:826 (1) - 头finish？
03:26:937 (1) - ^这也是 这两个加上了～
03:33:604 (6,1) - 重音在1啊 finish加6不奇怪么 你前面那些重音不明显的地方加4白线还好 这里实在是不觉得好了 类似的不提了 这里是个vocal重音……有点不知道怎么处理好了……
03:36:715 (6) - 这whistle从24白线变成13白线真心突兀 而且好像不只这里吧 感觉别的地方也听到了违和感 类似的不提了 不是24变13，而是8拍的循环节奏……b w w b w w w b 类似这种


tutuhaha's Normal:
Hitsound
01:06:048 (6) - 这里不考虑加个whistle么
01:09:604 (4) - 感觉whistle断开了 这里加个如何
02:17:715 (1) - 看整个图都没调段落音量 本来不想怎么提 但是这个whistle在这里实在是声音太大了


Hard:
Beatmap design/suggestion
01:39:159 (2,3) - 这俩滑条速度的对比真是太奇葩…………像这种紧挨着 又不加nc的滑条 就用一种SV吧 弄了NC
其他的比原来好不少了 唯一我还是不喜欢的地方就是节奏太死板了 有很多地方可以跟vocal走一下别的类型的pattern的 不过现在也没有错


嘛 先这些吧 nazi的东西以后有机会再提

Shiirn wrote:

General
Storyboard is sometimes distracting, but is still nice.
I'm not going to figure out the tags and assume they're ok

Easy
01:26:048 - not sure why you didn't put a note here, but not really a problem i think i need to put 4 notes if i put one, likes hard diff
02:10:048 (1) - overlap with the previous slider is ewww. Can move to the left a bit and change 2? okay, changed them~

tutuhaha
03:22:715 (1) - curve this. you know you want to.

Hard
00:15:826 (3,4) - stack this under the start of 1, the way it underlaps a slider is ugly i stack (3) with start of (1), and move (4) up
00:34:715 (1,2,3,4) - this could be made into a star shape or something, as it is right now it looks strange (although it plays well!) err....actually it is a half star shape, and if i make a big star, there may be no enough space, so sorry, not changed yet
00:40:048 (1,2,3,4) - ^ same as above~~
00:46:492 (3) - move between 1 and 5 to make a better "alternating" pattern. good idea!! fixed~~

00:48:715 (1,2,3,4,5) - i had an extremely hard time reading this due to the bg at that moment and the skin o...somebody mentioned me before but when i fix some NCs, they turned back D: have already gone through my map and fixed all
00:54:048 (1,2,3,4) - stack the endings correctly try my best to stack them again T^T
01:13:604 - i highly suggest putting a note somewhere off to the right side here. It fits so well. okay, with ur suggestion, a new stream here~~:)
03:25:159 (1,1) - find some way to make both of them start on the center, or for the second note to start on the beginning of the slider. so i moved the slider >.<


Pretty nice map overall. Some tiny flow issues i didn't really care about.

Kirino Kousaka wrote:

No Kudos for this post pls.
Hello!~
This map is too good I don't see anything wrong, and here's one suggestion, I guess you should enable the epilepsy warning?
I like this map so go have a star~ :3

Scorpiour wrote:

Do u love Kero Neko or Hanazawa Kana

Melophobia wrote:

Easy
00:19:381 (5,1) - spacing i think it's doesn't matter because of the blank beat
01:31:381 (1) - move to x408 y;72 okay~
01:46:937 (4) - 1grid down fixed~
03:16:270 (1) - add a finish here fixed~
04:07:826 (1) - because of SB, beginning of this spinner should be at 04:09:604 imo. emm..that sb effect just for hard diff, not change yet but i will consider that:)

tutuhaha's Normal

04:02:492 - why kiai ends here? should end at 04:09:604 imo
04:07:826 (1) - same as Easy


Hard
00:32:715 - add note
00:34:492 - ^ I leave these blank specific so sorry no change~
02:13:048 - ^ good idea~
03:21:270 - ^ okay, maybe hard a bit, but heard nice~
04:01:604 (3) - this note should be at 04:01:492 - fixed~

No_Gu wrote:

Scorpiour wrote:

Do u love Kero Neko or Hanazawa Kana

其实我不想吐槽你罗马音了...Orz但是实在太好笑了
不要吐槽在奇怪的地方上呀>.<

recheck request from my queue
结果你还是用这精灵球了?...多萌的精灵球
SB还是装一个文件夹吧 本来是在单独文件夹的结果制作sb的时候editor给自动拷了出来，囧。

[hard]
00:14:270 (4,5,6) - 干脆分开算了 感觉还好吧，我稍微挪开了0.1x的距离这样stack leniency就不会导致错位了～
00:36:492 (7,1,2,3,4) - 开1.5摆个五角星 1.5ds嘛，真不善良，不过看起来挺好玩的所以摆了
00:43:381 (1,2,3,4) - 遮挡大小都不一样。。 修改啦！
01:22:492 (1,1,1) - 其实感觉掉血蛮可怜的。。考虑加下break吧 本来有break的但是又发现血条来回出现比较影响感觉于是就取消了。
02:17:159 (4) - 结尾finish 不太好听，所以用了clap
02:51:381卖萌的绿线 哦，之前的kiai线忘记关了……
04:09:381 (4) - finish 这里也是用了clap
说实话这么多变速不清楚会不会MAT/BAT吐槽
结果你还是没用clap 用了很多clap呀，不过可能不太明显什么的～而且已经有这么多mat/bat来吐槽了再多来两个咱也没所谓！

[easy]
tick略响
00:57:604 (3) - 开头finish
03:26:492瞎了还是不太明白kiai为啥开在这

本来像上次看normal这次换easy看看，但其实没啥可吐槽的

xinhe wrote:

[EZ][NOR]感觉挺好的

[Hard]
01:50:937 (1,2,3) - 感觉可以稍微调整对其一下，如果是特意这样摆的就无所谓啦 稍微调整了一下～～

02:42:493 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - 好吧，还是吐槽一下这个串，个人觉得是整张图最不合适的地方.........
这个串嘛……其实是为了下音效这么摆的:)

Shiirn wrote:

Hard
01:26:048 (1,2,3,4) - I know this is technically against the rules what with the slider stacking and all that, but I personally see no problem with it blah blah. Mapper has some trouble getting it right, so if you're a ranking BAT // bubble-popping MAT, be sure to be very nice in how to manually stack it.


Seeing as there are no other issues whatsoever, bubbled.

haha5957 wrote:

[General]
what happened to the sliderball? I don't think it's a good idea..

[Easy]
00:17:604 (2,3,4,5) - um, this looks bad for me
03:23:381 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
maybe these patterns are for insane, high AR, fast tension O.O..


[Normal]
nothing O.O

[Hard]
00:34:937 (2,4) -
01:11:604 (8) -
02:38:048 (3,5) -
03:08:715 (5,1,2) -
those seems weird for me O.O// maybe because of bad overlap, try different pattern