• 1. Avoid using really high difficulty settings on slow songs. 8 should be the max for HP drain rate and overall difficulty for this type of song in and Insane difficulty. For hard maybe use 6 or 7.
  
  2. Try have an even/consistent spread for your new combos. And don't let the combo counter go up to high. Sometimes your combo counter goes up to 18!! Too high. You can put in a new combo at the beginning of every stanza or whenever the section of the vocals seems to be different from previous combo.
  
  3. For Insane difficulty, try to follow the instruments or vocals as accurately as possible. For example, this slider 01:33:293 (15). Yes it's very beautiful but it's not as fun as hitting more notes that could have followed with the vocals. Here is an example where the repeat portion of the slider doesn't follow anything 00:39:844 (1).
  
  4. It is easier to map a song that has more activity it. Dear You is very slow paced so it's not easy for new mappers.

mochi wrote:

[General]
Resize BG to 800x600 (use this if you want http://puu.sh/biCj)

Because this is probably your first (maybe second?) map, I'll just give you advice instead of pointing out everything that's wrong in your map.

• 1. Avoid using really high difficulty settings on slow songs. 8 should be the max for HP drain rate and overall difficulty for this type of song in and Insane difficulty. For hard maybe use 6 or 7.
  
  2. Try have an even/consistent spread for your new combos. And don't let the combo counter go up to high. Sometimes your combo counter goes up to 18!! Too high. You can put in a new combo at the beginning of every stanza or whenever the section of the vocals seems to be different from previous combo.
  
  3. For Insane difficulty, try to follow the instruments or vocals as accurately as possible. For example, this slider 01:33:293 (15). Yes it's very beautiful but it's not as fun as hitting more notes that could have followed with the vocals. Here is an example where the repeat portion of the slider doesn't follow anything 00:39:844 (1).
  
  4. It is easier to map a song that has more activity it. Dear You is very slow paced so it's not easy for new mappers.

Anyways, good luck with your mapping!

Kirino Kousaka wrote:

Hello raxar! I think there's something wrong with your map because I can't redownload it ._. I deleted your map because when I updated to the latest version, the BG disappeared. And now when I try to dl your map, I can't for some reason ._. I have already started modding your map and about to continue until this happens... Pls. fix whatever this is so I can continue modding. :3

Kyshiro wrote:

As requested in my queue, modded your map.

Normal
v______________________________________________v

-00:18:465 Add clap
-00:19:844 ^
-00:38:465 ^
-00:39:155 Add whistle
-01:45:361 Remove whistle, Add clap
-01:46:396 Add whistle
-01:47:086 Add clap
-01:47:775 Add whistle
-01:48:465 Add clap
-01:49:155 Add whistle
-01:49:844 Add clap
-01:50:534 Add whistle
-01:50:879 Add finish

-Suggestion:{
02:30:879 Delete slider
02:31:224 Put slider (2) here
02:32:603 Add beat
}

-02:41:224 Slider looks messy
-02:42:603 ^
^______________________________________________^

Hard
v______________________________________________v

-00:04:672 New combo

{
-01:26:396 Remove slider
-01:26:396 New slider till 01:26:741
-01:27:086 New slider till 01:27:430
}

-01:41:224 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Move 5 squares to the left @Tiny grid
-03:09:499 (3,4,5,6,7) - Move 6 squares to the left @Tiny grid
-03:16:396 (6) - 1 square up @Tiny grid
^______________________________________________^

Insane
v______________________________________________v

-00:06:741 (1) - Slider looks messy
-00:08:120 (3) - ^
-01:30:879 (5) - Move the slider so it doesn't collide with (4)
-02:18:810 Add beat

-Suggestion:{
02:59:155 (4) - Remove slider
Add 5 beats on each step @ 1/4
Remove 03:00:017 (9,10)
}
-03:05:361 (5) - Remove slider, Add beat
-03:10:189 If you like the suggestion, you might want to do the same thing here nope, it will change the pattern
-
^______________________________________________^

Any questions? Contact me in-game :3

spboxer3 wrote:

[genenal]
Hard and Normal need remove countdown
you need let kiai same as all diff

General done
[Normal]
combo issue : In Narmal. over 6 combo is too over~

00:44:672 - add some note?
00:46:741 (2,3,4,5,6) - uneven spacing
00:50:879 - why have a break at this way? I suggest you need map this way [IMO]
01:47:430 (3) - up 1 grid ? (size 3)
02:36:396 (2,3,4) - need let them on same line~

all normal done

[Hard]
same combo issue~ In Hard. over 10 combo is too over~
00:12:258 (1,2) - stack it [nazi]
00:16:396 (7,1) - ^ no, I'll keep the pattern
00:23:293 (1) - spinner finish at 00:23:293 (1) - :? mistype I guess?
00:48:810 (11,12,13) - uneven spacing fixed, I hope.
01:01:224 (7) - left 1 grid (size 4) [nazi] nope, I want it at the center, so I change position of (6) and (7)
01:10:189 (9) - NC (new combo)
01:20:879 (1,2,3) - pattern [nazi]
01:28:810 - add 1 note and let it use finish
01:43:293 (5,6,7) - uneven spacing
02:48:465 (6,7) - stack [nazi]
02:53:293 (4) - up 1 grid (size 4)? done, hope I'm right
03:11:568 (1) - spinner isn't good solution I think you got me xD changed to circles~

the rest of it are done.

[Insane]
01:16:396 (11) - (start) finish?
01:18:120 (1,2) - stack it [nazi]
01:31:396 (6,7) - spacing issue~
01:31:568 (7) - NC
01:32:603 (1) - remove NC
01:33:637 (6) - NC
01:40:534 (1) - lol for this slider. I think it's not good for this way [IMO]
01:57:775 - Break? map this is more good then break
02:06:051 - ^
02:15:361 (6) - NC
02:16:741 (1) - remove NC
02:17:775 (4,5,6) - spacing issue~ so confuse for player ztrot's formation always like that IMO. I'll keep it for now.
02:20:879 (5) - NC
02:37:775 (10) - NC
02:39:155 (1) - remove NC
02:39:844 (3) - NC
02:41:224 (1,3) - stack [nazi]
02:41:913 (2,4) - ^
02:52:258 (6) - NC
02:55:361 (3,5) - stack it [nazi]
03:11:568 (7) - NC

that's all
rest of insane is done


hmm... you need find other have more mapping skill modder to check your map~ okay

good lucky

Nymph wrote:

Hi Nymph here and request from my queue.

General:
KIAI times are not the same in all the diffs, please try to make them the same. done, hope it's correct this time, I have checked it many times.


Normal:
Issues
oops difficulty setting are too high for a normal diff like this, I suggest to set the HP drain and the overall difficulty to 3. wow o.o okay

Beatmap design/suggestion
00:22:603 (1) - this spinner didn't feel in the right place, actually I may suggest to make it begins at 00:21:913 and ends at 00:23:293. it follow the music. can't do it, if I follow your suggestion I have to remake other diff, to set the kiai time I move it to 00:23:293 instead
00:38:810 (3) - spacing like this is quite weird to play, I suggest to use the distance snap, you can see 3 is too near to 2, try to move it further. done
01:10:189 (1) - too near with 4, actually I can see you want to put this note in the middle of notes before, but this may make new players confuse due to the spacing change, so I would suggest to put this note further. done
01:17:086 (5) - yeah again spacing problem, seems this is a little further then I expected, move it nearer, make sure it is the same spacing with others. done
01:30:189 (2,3,4) - I don't really like triple hits in a normal diff, because it is really hard for new players to play. 1 note removed
01:39:155 (3) - yeah again spacing things. From now I am not gonna to mention things like this, please use sometime to check all the spacing yourself. if you have any trouble, see the upper right corner of the screen, and watch that prev: next: number, it tells you the spacing. For example: I saw you are using 0.8spacing all over this diff, so if you see 0.9 0.7 or something else, then check it. unless you do it on purpose sorry <(_ _)> fixed all of them
.
02:00:189 (1) - this spinner didn't feel in the right place too, seems it didn't follow anything. And seems you are using it to shorten the breaktime, I think it is not good, I suggest to map some of the breaktime, it will makes the player feel better to play. Mapped, break time in hard diff also mapped for consistency.

Hitsound
00:50:879 (1) - from here, no hitsounds since here? I suggest to add some, just like the things you did before here. looks like I forgot to put it, added
01:01:568 (1) - eh you got a whistle on the slider body, seems werid for me, on purpose or something? My wrong, also fixed other sliders at other diff, I just want to put the hitsound at the start and end of the sliders, because I'm tired when I making it, I add it like that since I think it's similar
02:56:741 (1) - the finish on the spinner feel very sudden, and the time the spinner ends is werid too. try to listen to the music and find out a better place to stop this spinner. Moved to 02:57:086, hope it's okay now


basiclly, same things are with hard diff and insane diff. of course you can use more freely spacing in those diffs but like this:
Hard:
00:36:741 (8) - this note should be in the center, it will helps the pattern looks more clean and neat. done

about insane diff, actually I think it is a slow song, hard diff is enough, insane seems a little overmap. and seems you didn't use more rhythm in insane, just using smaller circle with higher difficulty settings and higher sv, I didn't feel it good to play. Hmm, I see, I shall consider it, and I'll wait for other's opinion too

Sorry I didn't mod the hard and insane diff in details, because seems they are not ready for detail mods yet. Just want to make sure you got the right rhythm,spacing and other stuffs first. Then we can mod this in details. What this looked like to me is that "your hard and insane are not good enough, have many spacing problem, go remap it" you're giving me deathblow here <_< hard and insane remapped, insane has not much changes though(one of it, ztrot formation scaled to be smaller), hard's pattern are changed.

alright these are just suggestions~ feel a little hungry now so I am leaving yay~ good luck with your map! pretty good patterns and hitsounds for a new mapper, I hope you can work hard and finally rank it~ thank you Nymph

CDFA wrote:

General:
Your timing section aren't snapped :3. I know it's silly, but if I don't mention it, someone else will ;~;. I don't understand how to do that, really ;_; I will ask some people at IBC to get this done.
Take Youtube out of the source~. Done

Insane:
Shorten down your combos ;~; Probably work to make them like, 8-9 instead of 14-15 so hard to do, fixed some, there are still some that have more than 10, there are none that reach 14 though, if i'm right >_<
The pattern mapping is ok, just sometimes it makes some weird jumps o-o. fixed some
00:41:224 (3) - Unless this was intentional, then stack this with (2) :3 stacked

Hard:
00:38:810 (3) - The endpoint of 3 is too high, so (3) and (4) aren't parallel ;~; umm, copypaste the (4) to the (3) position did the trick, I hope

Easy:
02:15:361 (5) - NC :3 done :)

Cool stuff. thanks

hitmantutor wrote:

wah ternyata u map lagu ini? gw dulu denger di yt haha

Kirino Kousaka wrote:

Hello!~ Here's my mod :3 Sorry for being very late >< (a request from my queue)

[General]
Kiai from "00:12:274" up to "00:12:446" only. I suggest you to do this for the Kiai fountain only at the start and no kiai up to "01:29:343"

[Normal]
00:13:293 (1) - Remove the "clap" on this part of the slider.
00:14:672 (2) - ^
00:15:706 (3) - Replace "clap" with "whistle".
00:16:396 (4) - Add a "whistle" on this hitcircle.
00:16:741 (5) - Remove "whistle".
00:17:086 (6) - Replace "clap" with "whistle".
00:36:741 (5) - Remove "whistle".
00:39:844 (4) - Put a "finish" on this part of this slider.
00:40:879 (4) - Remove the "finish" on this part of the slider.
00:44:327 (4) - Remove the "whistle" & "clap" on this part of the slider.
00:44:672 (5) - Put a "whistle" on this hit circle.
00:46:396 (1) - Remove the "clap" on this part of the slider.
00:47:775 (3) - Add a "finish" on this hit circle.
00:48:120 (1) - Remove the "finish" on this hitcircle.
00:51:913 (3) - Remove the "whistle" on this hitcircle.
00:52:603 (4) - Remove the "clap" on this part of the slider.
00:53:923 (5) - Remove the "whistle" on this hitcircle.
00:53:982 (1) - Remove the "whistle" on this part of the slider.
00:54:672 (3) - Remove the "clap" on this hitcircle.
00:56:051 (1) - Remove the "clap" on this part of the slider.
00:56:396 (1) - Put a "clap" on this part of this slider.
00:57:430 (3) - Remove the "clap" on this part of the slider.
00:59:499 (4) - Remove the "finish" on this part of the slider.
01:00:879 (3) - Remove the "clap" on this hitcircle.
01:01:568 (1) - Remove the "whistle" on this part of the slider.
01:02:948 (2) - ^
01:04:327 (3) - Remove all hitsounds on this slider.
01:05:706 (5) - Remove the "clap" on this hitcircle.
01:11:224 (3) - Remove the "whistle" and "finish" on this hitcircle.
01:13:982 (2) - Remove all hitsounds on this slider.
01:18:120 (1,2) - Remove the "clap" on the start and end of these sliders.
01:20:879 (1) - Remove the "whistle" on this hitcircle.
01:21:568 (3) - Remove the "clap" on this hitcircle.
01:22:258 (4) - Remove the "finish" on this part of the slider.
01:24:327 (2) - Remove the "clap" on this hitcircle.
01:26:396 (5) - Remove all hitsounds on this slider.
01:29:499 (1) - Remove the "clap" on this part of the slider.
01:29:499 (1) - Put a "whistle" on this part of the slider and remove all other hitsounds on this.
01:30:534 (3) - Remove the "whistle" & "finish" on this hitcircle.
01:30:879 (4) - Put a "whistle" on this part of the slider and remove all other hitsounds on this.
01:33:637 (3) - Replace "clap" with "whistle".
01:33:982 (4) - Remove the "whistle" on this.
01:45:017 (2) - ^
02:13:293 (1) - ^
02:13:982 (3) - ^
02:20:879 (1) - ^
02:21:568 (2) - Remove the "clap" on this part of the slider.
02:22:258 (4) - Remove the "finish" on this part of the slider.
02:22:603 (4) - Put a "finish" on this part of the slider.
02:22:948 (5) - Remove the "clap" on this.
02:27:086 (4) - Remove "whistle".
02:27:775 (1) - ^
02:28:120 (2) - Put "clap".
02:28:465 (2) - Remove "clap".

[Hard]
00:44:155 (8,9) - Remove these notes.
02:23:637 (8) - Remove "finish".
02:23:982 - Add a hitcircle here with a "finish".

[Insane]
00:55:361 (6) - Remove "finish".
00:55:706 - Add a hitcircle here with a "finish".

Lucy-Kaede wrote:

Modding from my queue
Hopefully I dont find the same stuff as Kirino

Normal
01:31:568 (5) - Move to x:396 y:248 for visibility. Little hard to see for a normal.
01:32:258 (1,2) - May need to be rearranged if you that the above ^

02:21:224 (2,3,4) - Was a little tricky for 2.5 stars.

Could try something like this?

OR

(imo I prefer this second one)

this?

02:26:741 (4,1,2) - Similar conflict here with both the sliders, hard to see the second slider is a slider and not a note. Could consider unstacking.

Hard
02:38:120 (1,2,3,4,5) -

Another cosemetic change

02:59:155 (5) - Move this slider down 1 and right 1 grid. ~ Slider's shouldn't share the same starting point. (Stack leniency issue) Please fix, and anything like it if i've missed one!
03:04:672 (4) - Same here ^

Insane
Some of the combo's are a little long, but seem to fit the lyrics properly.

01:54:327 (6) - Possible new combo.

Thats all for now!

Maya-kira wrote:

good luck raxar >w</
maya belum download map atau lagunya sih (slow net issue)

inb4
star

Genkishi wrote:

Hi

requested from my queue

[General]
-delete .osb file if you will not add any SB
-resnap kiai parts my friend said to do it by timing resnap all notes...hope he's right and I did it right

[Normal]
00:39:844 (4)-it is better to make this slider like this

SPOILER

okay
00:45:361 (1)-^same okay
00:57:430 (3)-^ nope, I use the slider from sindemon
01:04:327 (3)-move the last of this slider 1 grid to the right,if you do move (4,5,6) 1 grid to the right to so (6) will be in the middle line nice
01:09:499 (4)-1 grid to the right so (2) and (4) will align okay
02:42:603 (3)-add clap in the reverse arrow of this slider okay

[Hard]
00:13:293 (2)-1 grid to the left
00:21:913 (5)-1 grid to the right
01:41:913 (3)-1 grid to the right as well the slider that stack with this note
all done

[Insane]
-very small circles add 1 in the Circle size as well as the Overall diff. Umm, if I add +1 it would be smaller, so I -1 it so it would be bigger. no changes to OD if you want me to +1 it.
00:15:017 (5)-align this slider with (1) in 00:14:327 done
00:42:603 (7)-1 grid up? thanks c:
00:46:741 (6)-it is better if the slider would be like this

SPOILER

took some time to get it, hope I did it right (•‿•)

That's All!!

1. OD-1?
2. 00:23:293 (1) - To 00:27:086?
3. 00:54:672 (3,4) - Try this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/210098
4. 01:01:224 (7) - Remove finish
5. 01:01:913 - Add a note with finish
6. 01:10:879 (3,4) - Remove finish
7. 01:34:327 (7) - Make them become a triangle? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/210100
8. 02:51:741 - Add a note
9. 02:51:913 - ^
10. 03:00:189 - ^

1. HR & OD-1?
2. 01:05:017 (6) - Remove finish
3. 01:06:051 (9) - Finish
4. 01:17:775 - Add a note with finish
5. 01:19:499 (2) - Likke this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/210103
6. 01:29:499 (1) - Fix it please... To 01:29:844 not to 01:29:930 =w=
7. 02:26:741 (7) - Remove finish
8. 02:27:086 (1) - Finish
9. 02:28:465 (5) - ^
10. 02:28:982 (7,8) - Remove finish...
11. 03:05:706 - Add a note

----- wrote:

A mod request on irc pm

In my mod post, any text in round brackets will be my opinions, suggestions, explanations, or something I'm not so sure about.
And every note moving suggestions is using grid level 4.

[General]
(It seems you don't put as much effort on the hitsound part on Normal as your Insane or Hard 0.0)

[Normal]
00:56:051 (1) - (even if it's a new combo, please keep the distance snap between it and previous circle no greater than 0.8x since that seems to be the principle of this map)
01:49:499 (2,3,4,5) -move down a grid (to align them with "(1)" and "(1) in next combo chain")
02:14:327 (4) - move right 2 grids (to form a symmetry pattern)

done all of the normal mod :3

[Hard]
00:20:534 (1) - is it supposed to be the same place with "00:19:155 (4)"...? nope
00:23:293 (1) - extend the spinner length to 00:27:430
00:56:051 (1,2,3,4) - (right one grid)
01:48:810 (1) - (left one grid)
01:56:396 (5) - add a clap
02:17:775 (4) - (should be finish)
02:26:741 (7) - move right one grid
03:13:293 (6) - (add a clap)

done all of the hard mod except the first one :3

[Insane]
01:05:362 (7) - left 3 grids, up 3 grids
01:17:430 (4) - (no finish here is better) changed to whistle, though with no sound, with whistle or with finish it still could sound good lol
01:19:499 (2) - remove finish
01:32:086 (3) - (should be finish)
01:32:430 (4) - (should be clap)
01:33:465 (9) - move it to 01:33:293
01:50:534 (8) - (a slider to 01:50:879 with finish sounds better)
02:00:189 (6) - right one grid, up one grid
02:17:430 (7) - down 3 grids
03:07:430 (10) - (add a finish) nope, (11) got the finish sound :3

done all of them except the last one

That's about it then :3
Good luck on your ranking~ thank you hyphens (-w-)b

12BARRY21 wrote:

Request from my queue~

[Hard]

1. OD-1? nope
2. 00:23:293 (1) - To 00:27:086? I think it's already at that time, tho it's extended to white line from -----'s mod.
3. 00:54:672 (3,4) - Try this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/210098 ok
4. 01:01:224 (7) - Remove finish no
5. 01:01:913 - Add a note with finish how could I? It's the middle of slider -_-
6. 01:10:879 (3,4) - Remove finish changed to whistle
7. 01:34:327 (7) - Make them become a triangle? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/210100
8. 02:51:741 - Add a note nope
9. 02:51:913 - ^ ^
10. 03:00:189 - ^ there is a sound to put a note, but you only could hear it if you use slow playback speed, so nope

[Insane]

1. HR & OD-1? nope, and by HR, IDK what do you mean, should it be hp drain or AR :/ if you mean AR, I will keep it for the time being
2. 01:05:017 (6) - Remove finish no, I want to keep the sound pattern
3. 01:06:051 (9) - Finish no
4. 01:17:775 - Add a note with finish no, placing circle would result in changes of position for sliders and so on
5. 01:19:499 (2) - Likke this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/210103 no, it would change the pattern again, and because it's only one beat away I think it's best to overlap it
6. 01:29:499 (1) - Fix it please... To 01:29:844 not to 01:29:930 =w= recalculated.
7. 02:26:741 (7) - Remove finish no, change 02:27:775 (3) - to get finish instead
8. 02:27:086 (1) - Finish no/color]
9. 02:28:465 (5) - ^
10. 02:28:982 (7,8) - Remove finish... no, change (6,7) to clap instead
11. 03:05:706 - Add a note

I won't add it atm, at that timeline there was a slider, but I changed it to circle for reason that I have forgot, so I'll keep it for now

That's all~

1. 00:18:810 (3,4) - up 1 grid
2. 00:19:499 (5) - up 1 grid, left 1 grid
3. 00:48:810 (3) - move second grid to (148,116), end point to (76,144)

1. 00:09:155 (1,2) - maybe http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot108-4.jpg
2. 00:16:396 (1) - new combo
3. 00:20:189 (7) - move to (312,120)
4. 00:20:534 (1,2,3,4,5) - move to (264,200)
5. 02:41:224 (1) - new combo

1. 00:37:775 (1) - new combo
2. 00:43:982 (5) - fix line
3. 00:55:189 (5) - change clap to whistle
4. 01:32:430 (4) - ^
5. 01:33:293 (9) - spacing?
6. 02:19:155 (1) - new combo
7. 02:22:258 (1) - ^
8. 02:25:017 (2) - stack with the slider perfectly...
9. 03:00:534 (1) - new combo?
10. 03:02:603 (4) - clap

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

Hi, from my queue what a fast mod 0.0


[Normal]

1. 00:18:810 (3,4) - up 1 grid
2. 00:19:499 (5) - up 1 grid, left 1 grid I did this myself before I see your post, but it's aligned so I guess it's okay
3. 00:48:810 (3) - move second grid to (148,116), end point to (76,144)

normal mod done

[Hard]

1. 00:09:155 (1,2) - maybe http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot108-4.jpg hmm, okay.
2. 00:16:396 (1) - new combo fit with the pronunciation of the lyric, okay then
3. 00:20:189 (7) - move to (312,120) fixed
4. 00:20:534 (1,2,3,4,5) - move to (264,200) okay..there are no big difference when playing after all. no stack though
5. 02:41:224 (1) - new combo okay, also changed the next new combo

[Insane]

1. 00:37:775 (1) - new combo okay, it looks like it doesn't make the diff easier too much.
2. 00:43:982 (5) - fix linefixed, thanks
3. 00:55:189 (5) - change clap to whistle nice
4. 01:32:430 (4) - ^ okay
5. 01:33:293 (9) - spacing? it's insane so I guess it's okay, no change
6. 02:19:155 (1) - new combo okay, color pattern
7. 02:22:258 (1) - ^ the placement of this new combo(this one and the one above this line) doesn't make the map easier too much imo, so yeah, okay
8. 02:25:017 (2) - stack with the slider perfectly... okay
9. 03:00:534 (1) - new combo? I'm afraid that this will make the diff easier..but hey, it fit the music for me, so I guess I should do it
10. 03:02:603 (4) - clap no, I'll keep the finish sound, it's the end of combo after all

Good luck~

Maya-kira wrote:

raxarrr~
maya boleh buat taiko diff? >_<
kayaknya seru nih lagunya~
kalau bukan taiko, easy boleh? xD

raxar wrote:

Genkishi wrote:

Hi

requested from my queue

[General]
-delete .osb file if you will not add any SB
-resnap kiai parts my friend said to do it by timing resnap all notes...hope he's right and I did it right

[Normal]
00:39:844 (4)-it is better to make this slider like this

SPOILER

okay
00:45:361 (1)-^same okay
00:57:430 (3)-^ nope, I use the slider from sindemon
01:04:327 (3)-move the last of this slider 1 grid to the right,if you do move (4,5,6) 1 grid to the right to so (6) will be in the middle line nice
01:09:499 (4)-1 grid to the right so (2) and (4) will align okay
02:42:603 (3)-add clap in the reverse arrow of this slider okay

[Hard]
00:13:293 (2)-1 grid to the left
00:21:913 (5)-1 grid to the right
01:41:913 (3)-1 grid to the right as well the slider that stack with this note
all done

[Insane]
-very small circles add 1 in the Circle size as well as the Overall diff. Umm, if I add +1 it would be smaller, so I -1 it so it would be bigger. no changes to OD if you want me to +1 it.
00:15:017 (5)-align this slider with (1) in 00:14:327 done
00:42:603 (7)-1 grid up? thanks c:
00:46:741 (6)-it is better if the slider would be like this

SPOILER

took some time to get it, hope I did it right (•‿•)

That's All!!

thank you for mod
and SinDemonDragon13, thanks for star

144,192,144672,5,2
236,192,145017,1,8
324,192,145362,1,2
280,272,145706,1,8
189,272,146051,1,8
236,348,146396,1,4
236,256,146741,2,0,B|236:164,1,90,2|2

Faust wrote:

IRC Modding.

SPOILER

00:49 <Faust> : About your Youtube Chorus
00:50 <Faust> : I think you could give it tickrate 2
00:50 <Faust> : it'd be really nice that way
00:50 <raxar> : oh, I think you'd ignore it lol
00:50 <raxar> : already applied btw
00:50 <Faust> : oh?
00:50 <Faust> : nice
00:50 <Faust> : I ignore 10% of the maps
00:50 <Faust> : I admit
00:50 <Faust> : XD
00:51 <raxar> : just not updated, dealing with nazi mod here, which I realized in the middle of doing it
00:51 <raxar> : *nazi hitsound mod
00:51 <raxar> :
00:51 <Faust> : 01:25:362 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - On Insane.
00:51 <Faust> : You can see here it's not centralized
00:52 <Faust> : really nothing much to touch on except nazi
00:52 <Faust> : lol
00:52 <Faust> : 01:32:430 (4,5,6,7) - Bad idea
00:53 <Faust> : not intuitive to stack like this, really
00:53 <raxar> : I'll change it then, somehow
00:53 <Faust> : 01:33:293 (9) - And then this note somehow jumps here
00:54 <Faust> : which I feel, isn't warranted
00:54 <Faust> : But I like that your map is clean
00:55 <raxar> : thank you for that
00:55 <raxar> : for the not centralized, maybe I should change it to another type of triangle...I'll think it through
00:56 <raxar> : for 01:33:293 I'll try to match it by changing the not intuitive stack
00:56 <Faust> : 02:23:293 (4) - Try this: http://puu.sh/c7xs
00:57 <Faust> : currently that slider looks limpy
00:57 <Faust> : it's not strong
00:57 <Faust> : for any sliders of such length I'd advise you to use more sliderpoints
00:57 <Faust> : so there's more emphasis to the flow
00:57 <Faust> : "fuller" looking sliders look better ;3
00:58 <raxar> : I see O.o will keep that in mind the next time I map
00:59 <Faust> : 03:11:568 (1) - probably should re-make this
01:00 <raxar> : o.o remake the slider....what I could I try..
01:00 <Faust> : On Hard:
01:00 <Faust> : 00:11:396 (6) - better to remove this note
01:01 <Faust> : 00:17:775 (1) - stack properly on previous note
01:01 <Faust> : 00:51:741 - Add a note
01:02 <raxar> : done 3 of them(hard mod)
01:03 <Faust> : 02:24:672 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Centralize if you want.
01:04 <Faust> : 02:30:879 (3) - Move to the red tick instead, this starts too early.
01:04 <Faust> : 02:31:568 (4) - Delete note
01:04 <Faust> : 02:31:913 (4) - Move back and add a note instead
01:04 <Faust> : 02:32:603 - Add a note I want to keep this pattern you gave me here so I kept the slider.
01:05 <Faust> : 02:39:155 (1,2,3) - Shift this pattern downwards so it doesn't overlap with the previous pattern
01:06 <raxar> : okay, trying to do it now..
01:06 <raxar> : the first one is not possible to be centralized I guess, will violate the dist. snap, I want to do it though.
01:06 <Faust> : 03:16:741 (7,8) - Suggest you move these notes somewhere else
01:07 <Faust> : Just violate it
01:07 <Faust> : lol
01:07 <Faust> : Distance Snap is not a law
01:07 <Faust> : Rather, it is a guide for measuring
01:07 <Faust> : It sets the foundation for mapping
01:07 <raxar> : lol, I'll try to do it then
01:07 <Faust> : and now I am applying a mod which I feel is more intuitive.
01:08 <Faust> : don't worry about it too much
01:08 <Faust> : Normal:
01:08 <Faust> : 01:29:499 - Unsnapped inherited timing section
01:09 <Faust> : 02:35:706 - Here as well
01:09 <Faust> : 02:46:396 - And here
01:09 <raxar> : gah, so it's still not snapped..
01:10 <Faust> : Actually, on every difficulty the same sections are not snapped
01:10 <Faust> : remember to resnap the notes back after you do these
01:10 <Faust> : I think that's about it
01:10 <Faust> : I think your Hard diff settings..
01:10 <raxar> : um, after I add inheriting section, I have to resnap then? o.o
01:10 <Faust> : no
01:11 <Faust> : my bad
01:11 <Faust> : just resnap the sections
01:11 <Faust> : your Hard settings are better off being AR6 and OD5
01:11 <Faust> : Technically
01:12 <Faust> : your mapset, going in accordance to the song..
01:12 <Faust> : is basically Easy, Normal and Hard
01:12 <Faust> : if you want to rename them, you can do so
01:12 <Faust> : Insane is a wrong choice of wording.
01:12 <raxar> : it's possible? without doing major changes?
01:12 <Faust> : Yes
01:12 <Faust> : it's very simple
01:12 <Faust> : : l
01:13 <raxar> : I'll do just that then, after I applied all of your mod
01:13 <Faust> : do you need me to post this log?
01:14 <raxar> : I guess yes, so I could give kudosu too
01:14 <Faust> : Alright then.

-Gamu- wrote:

hi-

request from my queue

[General]

●Volume 45% ⇒ 60%? I guess 60% is too loud, I'll keep it for now
●Some green lines are not snapped. Please make sure all. I snapped the section just like Faust asked, hope it's gone now.

[Normal]

●AR-1?
●00:12:603 (T) - Move in 00:12:430 okay
●00:16:396 (4) - ｓｐａｃｉｎｇ it's already gone when I done the previous mod I think
●00:36:396 (4,5,6) - try this okay, stack it with (3)
●01:08:810 (3) - whistle change? hmm, okay I guess.

[Hard]

●OD-1 and AR-1 please already changed in faust's mod
●00:01:224 (T) - Volume 10% ⇒ 40%? No hear orz no, it will make the instrument sound can't be heard.
●00:12:603 (T) - Move in 00:12:430 ok
●00:17:775 (1) - 1 grid up already done
●00:18:810 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - 2 grid left o.o nice
●02:24:672 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - try

144,192,144672,5,2
236,192,145017,1,8
324,192,145362,1,2
280,272,145706,1,8
189,272,146051,1,8
236,348,146396,1,4
236,256,146741,2,0,B|236:164,1,90,2|2

I centralized it in faust's mod
[Insane]

●OD-1 or HP-1 Please HP Drain rate -1
●00:01:224 (T) - Volume 10% ⇒ 40%? No hear orz no, it will make the instrument sound can't be heard.
●00:06:568 (T) - ^ ^
●00:48:120 (7) - Add a new combo? okay.
●00:52:258 (6) - ^ no, I want to keep the color pattern :3
●01:04:672 (5) - ^ no
●01:46:051 (5) - ^ okay I guess, I hope it doesn't make the diff significantly easier
●02:00:879 (8) - Move (x:244 y:212)after get told by a friend, I change it.
●02:10:879 (9) - Add a new vombo? okay I guess, I hope it doesn't make the diff significantly easier
●03:06:051 (6) - ^ already NCed in the previous mod

Good luck Thanks

1. Why is there an .osb file in your folder if you don't use any SB? Delete it and full submit ~
2. In my opinion, it's better if you don't use the soft clap because it doesn't sound good on this song >.<

1. 00:13:637 (2) - Add whistle at the end, because you used it on the previous slider with the same sound
2. 00:39:844 (4) - A new vocal starts here, so add new combo
3. 00:41:224 (1) - Remove nc
4. 02:57:086 (1) - This spinner, start it at 02:56:741 so it follows the voice
   There are a lot of overlaps on this diff, infact you didn't use the full "area" http://puu.sh/ceFX >.< For example here: 00:17:775 (1,2,3,4) that is overlapped with the previous 00:16:396 (1,2,3). You also should to use different parts of the "work table" instead to use always the same positions <.< The map is localized and mapped especially at the center, so let try to improve it using different positions ;P

1. 00:01:224 (1) - Don't use 10% volume, so low is unrankable. Set it at 45% like the others timing sections
2. 01:31:568 (7) - New vocal starts here, so set new combo here and remove from 01:31:913 (1)
3. 02:15:362 (7) - New combo
4. 02:16:741 (1) - Remove new combo
5. 02:18:810 (5) - New combo
6. 02:20:879 (1) - New combo
7. 02:32:603 (5) - ^
8. 02:35:017 - Add circle
9. 02:59:155 (5) - Improve the overlap with the slider (4)
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 03:04:672 (4) - Aww the same ^

1. 00:13:293 - Add a circle
2. 00:13:982 - ^
3. 00:15:706 (6) - New combo
4. 00:16:741 (1) - Remove new combo
5. 02:18:810 (5) - New combo
6. 02:19:155 (1) - Remove new combo
7. 02:27:430 (2) - Move to x340 y60

Starry wrote:

All suggestion / Mod for fun

[Normal]

00:39:844 (4) - Maybe new combo here? okay, and I remove the new combo for the circle after it.
01:57:430 (5) - ^ okay and remove the new combo after this
02:01:568 (4) - ^? Not sure about this one. nope.
01:25:017 (3) - Make this slider shorter so its similar to the two notes before? They sound very alike so maybe make it similar/symmetrical? aligned

Couldn't find anything else

[Hard]

00:03:293 (5) - New combo here? I like my combo's as short as possible but its your choice orz hmm, okay.
00:39:499 (4) - ^ nope
01:28:120 (2) - ^ nope
00:14:672 (4) - Move this note and put it after this note 00:13:637 (3) -? make it stack? nope, and I'm going to remake hard's note placement too.
00:21:913 (5) - Make this slider? cause the person holds his/her voice so slider would be better then just circle. okay
01:10:189 (1) - Why new combo here? Its same pattern o_o? new stanza, and the combos will be too long if I remove that
02:23:293 (6,7,8,9) - Not stacked right? 9 is kinda late?changed.
03:03:293 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Can you find a way to split this combo? splitted.

All for this difficulty


[Insane]
01:58:465 (2) - x:272:204 just move it slightly cause spacing is a bit off okay, also arranged the pattern to fit.
02:21:224 (2) - Move this 4 grids up so its similar to this note 02:19:499 (2) - because your trying to make it symmetrical / pattern? yup, fixed

Wow this difficulty is nice couldn't find anything wrong much xD

Chewin wrote:

Hai, from my queue ~

General

1. Why is there an .osb file in your folder if you don't use any SB? Delete it and full submit ~
2. In my opinion, it's better if you don't use the soft clap because it doesn't sound good on this song >.< the normal sounds louder, no I guess :/

Normal

1. 00:13:637 (2) - Add whistle at the end, because you used it on the previous slider with the same sound changed, not like what you said though
2. 00:39:844 (4) - A new vocal starts here, so add new combo already applied in previous mod.
3. 00:41:224 (1) - Remove nc already done while I'm doing the previous mod
4. 02:57:086 (1) - This spinner, start it at 02:56:741 so it follows the voice
   There are a lot of overlaps on this diff, infact you didn't use the full "area" http://puu.sh/ceFX >.< For example here: 00:17:775 (1,2,3,4) that is overlapped with the previous 00:16:396 (1,2,3). You also should to use different parts of the "work table" instead to use always the same positions <.< The map is localized and mapped especially at the center, so let try to improve it using different positions ;P

I'll remake the placement

Hard

1. 00:01:224 (1) - Don't use 10% volume, so low is unrankable. Set it at 45% like the others timing sections the instrumental sound will be covered by hitsounds if I use 45% :<
   
2. 01:31:568 (7) - New vocal starts here, so set new combo here and remove from 01:31:913 (1)
3. 02:15:362 (7) - New combo
4. 02:16:741 (1) - Remove new combo
5. 02:18:810 (5) - New combo
6. 02:20:879 (1) - New combo
7. 02:32:603 (5) - ^
8. 02:35:017 - Add circle
9. 02:59:155 (5) - Improve the overlap with the slider (4)
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 03:04:672 (4) - Aww the same ^

Insane

1. 00:13:293 - Add a circle
2. 00:13:982 - ^
3. 00:15:706 (6) - New combo
4. 00:16:741 (1) - Remove new combo
5. 02:18:810 (5) - New combo
6. 02:19:155 (1) - Remove new combo
7. 02:27:430 (2) - Move to x340 y60

Aww I wish you good luck >.</
PS: Give kudosu to -Gamu- you forgot it.. (: