Melophobia wrote:

Aleks

1. 00:04:392 (3) - make end of the slider at 00:05:696 - then add circle at 00:06:131 - no, because of symmetry
2. 00:09:174 (2,3,4) - Those notes are too difficult for biginner imo. how about deleting 00:09:392 (3) -? huh, no, triple 1/2 is fine here. It's not "omfg, how easy", it's easy, but close to normal diff.
3. 00:27:653 (4) - Move to 00:27:435 - , and add a reverse,if you fix this, dont forget add a clap. no, because if i would add, i have to add note here : 00:28:087 for music pattern. it would be too hard
4. 00:55:696 (5) - add a finish to end of the slider? no, ofc. there is not strong beat here.

Melophobia wrote:

hi cRyo Hi Melophobia \:D/
from my queue.

thank you for request!



[General]

1. Title: Natsunohi (Short Ver.)
2. Artist: Hisui Rika and Hotarubi kakeru
3. Source: Moenatsu Plus

Thx for Title, its was rly hard to find anything on this song ......orz
But i decided to write Natsu no Hi

When you do a full submission,this topic may be helpful to you!
http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?f=56&t=24443

cRyo

1. 01:10:153 (6) - delete circle?

hmm, i folowed music at this part and i think everything is fine

really nice diff, i could not find anymore orz..


good luck!

KayeSara wrote:

/me eat you

lovhin456 wrote:

hello ~ modding because i'm bored ~

general;
- you have 4 osb files! is fine to have one but ... yeah, delete the ones that don't have the current artist and the (short ver.) included
Yeah, 4 is too much xD, fixed~
cRyo;
- 00:53:087 >> new combo and remove new combo on the next note nah, i think its fine ><

* good luck

lovhin456 wrote:

aleks;
- 00:00:914 >> remove whistle and add finish ? no, too loud
- 00:10:261 >> add clap ok
- 00:11:348 (2,3,4) >> finish yes
- 00:18:305 >> new combo ok
- 00:49:609 >> finish no
- 01:03:522 >> ^ ^

A s g a r d wrote:

]Hi.. From my Queue : Queue

General

Background color : Black

Aleks

00:30:044 (2) - stack on 00:28:740 (1) so 1 grid left and 1 grid down
01:01:783 - add note

h3k1

good~

cRyo

good..

actually i can't found any thing..

1. 00:23:522 (5) - nc here
2. 00:25:044 (1) - delete nc here
3. 00:26:566 (2) - add nc
4. 00:30:044 (2) - hm, its not a perfect overlap but maybe it was on purpose so i just point this out for you
5. 00:32:218 (5) - nc ?
6. 01:07:435 (5) - you can also add a nc here as this combo seems pretty long
   ---
7. 00:20:913 (1,2,3) - nazi mod thing, if you want the slider shape fit perfectly to the approachcircle you should fix this.

• another combo suggestion:

1. 00:23:087 (1) - the combo before is pretty short why not deleting this combo and setting a new combo here 00:23:522 (3) - ?
2. 00:25:044 (1) - if you do so delete nc here
3. 00:25:261 (3) - and add nc here
4. 00:25:913 (1) - delete nc
5. 00:27:000 (6) - add nc
6. 00:27:653 (1) - and delete nc here
   
7. 00:36:348 (1) - delete nc here and add it at 00:36:566 (2) - as this new soudns starts here imo. and it makes the previosu combo longer
   ---
8. 00:37:435 (6) - Nazi-mod on! you can make this overlap more precise
9. 00:56:457 (10) - Fix Spacing its x0.75 here in a x0.65 stream

xDeaTHcOrEx wrote:

i still owe you a mod so ill give you a mod for this now yay! thx

[cryo]:

• another combo suggestion:

1. 00:23:087 (1) - the combo before is pretty short why not deleting this combo and setting a new combo here 00:23:522 (3) - ?
2. 00:25:044 (1) - if you do so delete nc here
3. 00:25:261 (3) - and add nc here
4. 00:25:913 (1) - delete nc
5. 00:27:000 (6) - add nc
6. 00:27:653 (1) - and delete nc here
   
7. 00:36:348 (1) - delete nc here and add it at 00:36:566 (2) - as this new soudns starts here imo. and it makes the previosu combo longer
   ---
   Changed little bit #1,2,3 other seems fine for me o:
8. 00:37:435 (6) - Nazi-mod on! you can make this overlap more precise ok~
9. 00:56:457 (10) - Fix Spacing its x0.75 here in a x0.65 stream

yeah, dunno how this happened ..orz

I have an appointment now but ill edit the mod for h3ki when im back


btw. don't want to use kiai time ? o.o nope xD

NatsumeRin wrote:

[Aleks]
00:09:392 (3) - delete? ok
01:00:044 (1) - consider a more..."regular" shape..? ok
very nice as easiest diff btw. orz

256,56,12000,1,4
192,192,12218,1,0
168,88,12435,1,8
168,88,12653,2,0,B|113:149|33:136,1,150,4|0

-Gamu- wrote:

[Aleks]

●AR-1? hum, no ><
●00:00:914 (1) - whistle ⇒ finish change?(start) no ><
●00:30:044 (2) - Move (x:152 y:144) no ><

-Gamu- wrote:

hi- hi ></
[General]

●Add please "soft-sliderside (Silent)" http://puu.sh/bjXW i dont like this default slider-slide too, but i dont hear it in this song ><

[cRyo]

●HP+1? ok~
●00:12:000 (4,5,6,7) - try this hmm, no i wanted 00:12:653 (7) - to be between note #4,5

256,56,12000,1,4
192,192,12218,1,0
168,88,12435,1,8
168,88,12653,2,0,B|113:149|33:136,1,150,4|0

Good map!!!!!!

that's all

NatsumeRin wrote:

[cRyo]
01:10:261 (7) - clap? ok~
also want to say, some random spacing in the map is not really fit imo, such as:01:05:261 (1) -, i could understand it in the highest diff, but still don't like it because it's more like "just for a better placement, but has nothing to do with the rhythm or the beats" 2 of my favoirite maps have this "random spacing jumps" ]hi Sumisola wwww, so i decided to use the same pattern style. I think this "chaotic jumps" very interesting to play, and since its only 138 bpm i dont care about spacing too much.

Aleks719 wrote:

cRyo[iceeicee], update my diff from previous post B(

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

Haiiitharr~ ;3
You requested in my queue~

Aleks
-00:30:044 (2) - Place it where the previous note was?

cRyo
-00:40:696 (1) - Remove new combo? i think it looks better when slider and notes have same color, no change sry ><
-00:40:913 (10) - New combo?

Nice song~
Star~

KingsAL2 wrote:

Nice song ~~~ Lets MOD it

----------------------------------------cRyo
00:06:131 (5,6,7) - Try to make the distance as same as 00:05:696 (4,5). hmm, no
00:09:066 (X) - Lower to 50% at this timing section ok~
00:52:435 (5) - NEw combo (Distance changed) ok~
--Try to make the map fun but not making the map annoying. Those jump werent got the map into fun but others may get annoied by those jump.
--Nice Sound.

1. Maybe add moebono to the tags for the company of the game.
2. Disable letterbox during breaks in all diffs.
3. Why no kiai time? I think in this song fits good, if you agree add the first part here 00:42:653 end up at 00:56:131 and again in 00:56:566 to end up in 01:03:522.

1. 00:30:044 (2) - Stack this note with 00:28:740 (1)
2. 00:32:218 (5) - Maybe new combo.
3. 00:42:653 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try some like this http://puu.sh/dvDN to after put this beats 00:45:261 (4,5) in the center and finally make the next pattern symmetric to the first.
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   Code of 00:42:653 to 00:48:740
   
   

   236,192,42653,6,0,B|284:184|284:184|320:144,1,96.0000022888184,4|8
   404,76,43522,2,0,B|396:123|396:123|423:165,1,96.0000022888184,0|8
   440,276,44392,2,0,B|392:280|392:280|361:243,1,96.0000022888184,0|8
   256,192,45261,1,0
   256,192,45696,1,8
   150,140,46131,6,0,B|119:103|119:103|72:108,1,96.0000022888184,2|8
   89,220,47001,2,0,B|115:260|115:260|108:308,1,96.0000022888184,0|8
   196,235,47870,2,0,B|228:200|228:200|276:192,1,96.0000022888184,2|8
   280,308,48740,2,0,B|249:345|249:345|198:348,1,96.0000022888184,0|8

4. 01:03:522 (4) - New combo, if you agree remove the nc of the next note and put it in 01:07:000 (5), something like this http://puu.sh/dvKr

1. 01:09:283 - The track suggest a note here, add it to make a stacked triplet.
2. Nice :3~

1. 00:14:500 - Add a beat to make a triplet like 00:55:696
2. 00:34:609 (4) - Put this note stacked to the begin of 00:33:522 (3) http://puu.sh/dvSZ, after make 00:34:174 (2) symmetric to this http://puu.sh/dvTn.
3. 00:33:957 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - After the before changes try this to make the pattern a bit more jumpy, 00:34:609 (4,5) Ctrl + R http://puu.sh/dvU0.
4. 00:49:609 (6) - New combo here and remove to the next note.
5. I think in is all.

Kenezz wrote:

Aleks

1. 00:30:044 (2) - Stack this note with 00:28:740 (1) *MADFACE* NO.
2. 00:32:218 (5) - Maybe new combo. maybe, but if i'll add here, i'll have to add nc in other places and it will be new combos for only one slider. so, no.
3. 00:42:653 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try some like this http://puu.sh/dvDN to after put this beats 00:45:261 (4,5) in the center and finally make the next pattern symmetric to the first. Sorry, no. I prefer my patterns without symmetry more
4. 01:03:522 (4) - New combo, if you agree remove the nc of the next note and put it in 01:07:000 (5), something like this http://puu.sh/dvKr no, because of same reason as before.

Kenezz wrote:

Hii! oh oh a supah moe song!! ♥ Hihiiii
from my queue
Kenezz's Bakamod~

General

1. Maybe add moebono to the tags for the company of the game. done~
2. Disable letterbox during breaks in all diffs. disabled ><!
3. Why no kiai time? I think in this song fits good, if you agree add the first part here 00:42:653 end up at 00:56:131 and again in 00:56:566 to end up in 01:03:522.

dont like kiai sry ><, but added few fountains wwww \></


cRyo

1. 00:14:500 - Add a beat to make a triplet like 00:55:696 i dont hear triplet here....
2. 00:34:609 (4) - Put this note stacked to the begin of 00:33:522 (3) http://puu.sh/dvSZ, after make 00:34:174 (2) symmetric to this http://puu.sh/dvTn. slider stacked, but didnt change notes position
3. 00:33:957 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - After the before changes try this to make the pattern a bit more jumpy, 00:34:609 (4,5) Ctrl + R http://puu.sh/dvU0. i am afraid of jumps (/ω＼)
4. 00:49:609 (6) - New combo here and remove to the next note. ok~
5. I think in is all.

Ok, I hope to helps you
>w< moe song <3~

Kenezz wrote:

Kabuum!
Cherry Bubble~

Good Luck with the rank >w<

IceBeam wrote:

ranked

h3k1ru wrote:

^w^