1. Easy (1.75 stars, 97 notes)
2. Hard (4.98 stars, 343 notes)
3. Normal (3.4 stars, 140 notes)

1. preview pointは01:46:747か、01:47:947がいいと思います。
2. Combo3と4の色が近すぎます。もう少し変えてください。
3. 全体的にhit soundが小さく感じました。5~10%ほど上げてみては？

1. 01:15:067 ( )add circle
2. 01:16:987 ( )^
3. 01:42:907 (1)折り返しを削除して、01:44:827にサークル追加
4. 01:45:787 (1)^を変える場合RNC
5. 01:52:027 (4)NCこっち・・・かな？

1. Insane diffを作らないのであれば、HP,ODを共に+1してInsaneにしてもいいかもです？
2. 00:45:307 (5)NCこっちに
3. 00:45:427 (1)^変更するなら連打の方がきれいかもです。
4. 01:21:547 (1)前の01:20:827(1,2)の間隔と大した変化がないのでもう少し離した方がいいです。

keimntn wrote:

(｡･ω･)ﾉﾞ ﾁﾜｰ

全然見あたらなかったのでほんの少しですがmodを。（すべて提案なのでシカトokですｗ）

[General]

1. preview pointは01:46:747か、01:47:947がいいと思います。 fixed 01:47:947
2. Combo3と4の色が近すぎます。もう少し変えてください。 変えてみました。
3. 全体的にhit soundが小さく感じました。5~10%ほど上げてみては？ ごめんなさい、no change. 私にしてはこれでも大きくしたつもりです ><

[Easy]

1. 01:15:067 ( )add circle　ごめんなさい、 とりあえず no change です ><
2. 01:16:987 ( )^ ^
3. 01:42:907 (1)折り返しを削除して、01:44:827にサークル追加 いいと思いますが、配置に悩むので保留です
4. 01:45:787 (1)^を変える場合RNC ^
5. 01:52:027 (4)NCこっち・・・かな？no changeです ><

[Normal]
fine!

[Hard]

1. Insane diffを作らないのであれば、HP,ODを共に+1してInsaneにしてもいいかもです？ Normal⇒Insaneへ飛ぶと見た目悪いのでこのままいきます ><
2. 00:45:307 (5)NCこっちに fixed
3. 00:45:427 (1)^変更するなら連打の方がきれいかもです。 ok~ 変えました～
4. 01:21:547 (1)前の01:20:827(1,2)の間隔と大した変化がないのでもう少し離した方がいいです。離しました～

以上です。少ない上にヘタくそですいません(´；ω；｀)
納得がいくところだけ変えてくださいな。

ルパン ルパ～ン♪ ルパン ルパーン♪

spboxer3 wrote:

[genenal]
00:18:427 - let red line at this way I think that I am all right as now. I change it depending on other people

[Easy]
00:55:267 - remove this green line because It's unnecessary not remove. >< this green line is N:C1⇒S:C1　change line

[Normal]
00:46:267 (2) - rhythm issue? I think that I do not problem.
01:05:947 (3,1,2) - uneven spacing [nazi] thanks >< fixed
01:28:987 (1) - use note and start spinner at 01:29:467 - ok~ fixed

[Hard]
00:38:587 (4) - hey~ I think you use 1/3 snap rhythm is more batter [IMO] ok~ change it!!
01:00:667 (1,2) - why don't stack those? hehe no change
01:19:867 (1,2,3,1,2) - confuse for player~ just notice this ((spacing's issue I think that I do not problem. I change it depending on other people
01:34:267 (3,4,5,6,1) - not good rhythm in Osu mod ((But I think Taiko is prefect~ ^
01:38:707 (8,4) - why do you don't stack them?? fixed



really good pattern~
good lucky and star~

1. 何もないです

1. 00:46:747にadd note?
2. 01:16:027 (1) - 折り返してみてはどうでしょうか？
3. 01:42:907 (1) - 「あー」って声に合わせてこういう形にしてるのだと思いますが、返ってくるときに「あー」に対応する部分がないからリバースにしないほうがいいと思います。

1. 00:26:107 (1) - をx-284 y=92に持ってきた方が,きれいにスペーシングが整うし、1,2,3が直線になって見栄えがいいと思います。
2. 01:34:267 (2) - 前のスライダーみたいななめらかなカーブの方が合ってると思います。

1. 00:28:027 (1) - whitstleの代わりにfinishの方が合ってる気がします
2. 00:44:587 (4) - 1,2,3と形が似たようなスライダーが続いているのでここもそのようにしませんか？
3. 00:46:027 (6) - 譜面全体を見ると、スライダーの途中の点が真ん中にきていないスライダーはほとんどないので、真ん中の点をx=60 Y=200に移動させてみてはどうでしょう？その場合次の２が上手くスタックされなくなるのでそこも変更してください。
4. 01:00:187 (1) - remove new combo? もしここ変えるなら01:02:107 (1) - もremove ner combo
5. 01:17:707 (3) - add clap?
6. 01:20:827 (1,2) - この前の1,2,3とリズム違うのに、同じようなスペーシングなのでノートが読みにくいと思うのでここのスペーシングも1.2にしてみてはどうですか？
7. 01:29:347 (2) - このノート青線に乗っててタイミングがとりずらいと思うし、直後にスピナーがあるのでいっそのこと消してみてはどうでしょう？
8. 01:57:667 (6) - add finish?　もしこの提案にのるなら01:59:587 (7) - もfinishでお願いします。

Pastel wrote:

　
メリークリスマス メリクリ～

クリスマスでも暇なぱすてるさんがModしに来ました

すべて提案ですので、変更しないほうがいいと思ったところはスルーしてください。

[General]

1. 何もないです

[Easy]

1. 00:46:747にadd note? すいません、no change
2. 01:16:027 (1) - 折り返してみてはどうでしょうか？ 折り返すとvocalと少しズレるのでno changeです
3. 01:42:907 (1) - 「あー」って声に合わせてこういう形にしてるのだと思いますが、返ってくるときに「あー」に対応する部分がないからリバースにしないほうがいいと思います。2人に言われたので直します~ fixed

[Normal]

1. 00:26:107 (1) - をx-284 y=92に持ってきた方が,きれいにスペーシングが整うし、1,2,3が直線になって見栄えがいいと思います。 fixed ~
2. 01:34:267 (2) - 前のスライダーみたいななめらかなカーブの方が合ってると思います。一応01:32:347 (4)に合わせてあるので no changeです。他の人次第で直します><

[Hard]

1. 00:28:027 (1) - whitstleの代わりにfinishの方が合ってる気がします ごめんなさい no change
2. 00:44:587 (4) - 1,2,3と形が似たようなスライダーが続いているのでここもそのようにしませんか？ ^
3. 00:46:027 (6) - 譜面全体を見ると、スライダーの途中の点が真ん中にきていないスライダーはほとんどないので、真ん中の点をx=60 Y=200に移動させてみてはどうでしょう？その場合次の２が上手くスタックされなくなるのでそこも変更してください。 fixed
4. 01:00:187 (1) - remove new combo? もしここ変えるなら01:02:107 (1) - もremove ner combo ここはDS変わるのでNCしております
5. 01:17:707 (3) - add clap? no change
6. 01:20:827 (1,2) - この前の1,2,3とリズム違うのに、同じようなスペーシングなのでノートが読みにくいと思うのでここのスペーシングも1.2にしてみてはどうですか？　とりあえずno change >< スペーシングが変わるのでNCしています。 （他の人次第で変えるかもです）
7. 01:29:347 (2) - このノート青線に乗っててタイミングがとりずらいと思うし、直後にスピナーがあるのでいっそのこと消してみてはどうでしょう？ ここは欲しいです
8. 01:57:667 (6) - add finish?　もしこの提案にのるなら01:59:587 (7) - もfinishでお願いします。 ごめんなさい、no change

非常にいい譜面でした！あまり指摘できるとこなかったです＞＜
ふぁいと！

CDFA wrote:

I'm glad I modded this early so I didn't feel like an asshat for finding this map to be so good.

But yeah, hard kinda impressed me with how clean it was mapped :3. Gud jub brub. Kudosu star for you~. Sorry I couldn't find anything D:.

The 08 team_Bourdon wrote:

Hello
i just can give you some suggestion

General
00:41:467 - remove this KIAI time? sorry, no change ><

Easy
looks great!

Normal
looks great!

Hard
00:54:187 (5,6,7) - move the circle (5) to grid x:352, y:96. (6) x:232, y:36. (7) x:156, y:136 ? ok~ but (6) x236,y36 :3
02:04:027 (1) - remove this new combo? sorry, no change

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Great mapset! I did not find any major problem in this map!
Great job! and shoot a little star for you

SinDemonDragon13 wrote:

Request from my and Crystals modding queue!

Easy: Its perfectly fine~ There is nothing to mod here.

Normal diff:
- 00:25:387 - (circles 1, 2, 3) - You should place them like this: sorry, no change >< I do not think that AIMOD is perfect

SPOILER

- 00:31:867 - (1, 2, 3, 4) - Place them like this: ^

SPOILER

Hard diff:
Modded myself according to AImod. some pattern fixed :3

Thank it I guess. Sorry for making you wait so long and my bad english! D:
Hope I helpd you~ will star map after I get more kudosu.

SinDemonDragon13 wrote:

neh its ok ^^
and thank you for the kudosu! <3

1. Folder seems to be okay.
2. Increase hitsound volume a bit? I can barely hear them...

1. 00:54:907 (1) - Add a finish here?
2. 00:56:827 (1) - Remove new combo?
3. 01:16:027 (1) - Maybe remove new combo?
4. 01:23:707 (1) - ^
5. 01:46:747 (1) - Whistle in this entire slider?

• 
  
  Approach Rate +1?

1. 00:23:227 (1) - This spinner might be a bit too short for a Normal difficulty.
2. 01:15:307 (1) - Remove new combo maybe?
3. 01:17:227 (1) - ^
4. 01:54:907 (1) - Maybe remove new combo? Not sure about this though...

1. 01:01:147 (2) - Move this 1 grid to the left (using grid 4) to stack with (1)
2. 01:02:347 (2) - Remove the whistle? It sounds quite bad here...
3. 01:19:867 (1,2,3,1,2) - Maybe make the pattern like this to make the spacing better?
4. 01:26:587 (5) - New combo to tell that there is a 1/3 change here?
5. 01:44:827 (1,2,3) - Put this a bit closer to 01:44:467 (7)?

Blue Dragon wrote:

~General~

1. Folder seems to be okay.
2. Increase hitsound volume a bit? I can barely hear them...　really? ok... volume up 10% at softhitsound

[Easy]

1. 00:54:907 (1) - Add a finish here? sorry, no change
2. 00:56:827 (1) - Remove new combo? ^
3. 01:16:027 (1) - Maybe remove new combo? ^
4. 01:23:707 (1) - ^ ^
5. 01:46:747 (1) - Whistle in this entire slider? ^

[Normal]

• 
  
  Approach Rate +1? no ><

1. 00:23:227 (1) - This spinner might be a bit too short for a Normal difficulty. I make modifications after hearing the opinion of other people
2. 01:15:307 (1) - Remove new combo maybe? sorry no change
3. 01:17:227 (1) - ^ ^
4. 01:54:907 (1) - Maybe remove new combo? Not sure about this though... ^

[Insane]

1. 01:01:147 (2) - Move this 1 grid to the left (using grid 4) to stack with (1) sorry, this is intentional
2. 01:02:347 (2) - Remove the whistle? It sounds quite bad here... sorry, no change
3. 01:19:867 (1,2,3,1,2) - Maybe make the pattern like this to make the spacing better? ok~. remake pattern and spacing . but my pattern and spacing
4. 01:26:587 (5) - New combo to tell that there is a 1/3 change here? ok~ fixed
5. 01:44:827 (1,2,3) - Put this a bit closer to 01:44:467 (7)? sorry, no change ><;

Great map.

R a r e wrote:

All suggestions~
気に入らないところは無視してください～

Overall
全体的にスライダーが速いと思いました。
Easyは下げたほうがいいです。　とりあえずno changeで他の人の意見も聞いてみたいと思います。

Easy
01:04:027 (2) - 始点にadd whistle fixed
01:13:627 (3) - Easyでスタックは初心者には難しいと思います。this like 単発⇒スライダーだと難しいと思いますが、こういったスタックは大丈夫なはずです！（他の人に注意受けたら考えます。）

SPOILER

01:16:027 (1) - remove new combo ごめんなさい、no change
01:23:707 (1) - ^ ^
01:46:747 (1) - ^ ^

Normal
01:23:707 (1) - remove new combo ごめんなさい、no change
Looks nice~

Hard
OD+1 Hardということで6にしてあります
00:46:387 (7) - add new combo fixed
00:56:827 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this like いいと思いますが、できるだけ偶数連打は避けたいのでここはno change ><;

SPOILER

01:26:587 (1) - remove new combo リズムが1/3にここから変わるので変えてあります
01:26:587 (3) - add new combo ^
01:32:947 (6,7,8) - 01:33:307 (1) ここにスタックしてみては？ 偶数連打がわかりやすいようにしてあります。（他の人次第）
01:42:547 (5,6,7) - 01:42:907 (1) ^　^
01:46:747 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this like ごめんなさい><; 上と同様です

SPOILER

02:02:227 (2) - remove note 入れるか入れないか迷った所ですがとりあえずこのままいきたいと思います。他の人次第で変更有り

Nice map~~~
個人的に好きな音取りでした！
頑張ってください～

344,92,54192,1,8
240,52,54432,1,0
156,128,54672,1,0

wmfchris wrote:

[General]
Tag:
1) bmg or bgm (background music)?　
2) remove the tag "Japan" because it'll be classified into Japanese songs 1),2) BMG JAPAN is Recordmaker Is it not necessary?
I suggest +5ms offset? I hear the opinion of other people

[Hard]
00:18:432 - consider to move (1~6) up 2 grids so that (3) and next (3) stacked perfectly? :3 sorry, this is intentional ><
00:45:553 (3,5) - clap sound appears at (5) so clap at (5), remove clap on (3)? fixed
00:54:192 (5,6,7) - make a regular pentagon ok~ fixed

344,92,54192,1,8
240,52,54432,1,0
156,128,54672,1,0

01:27:552 (3,4,5,6) - this is very misleading because (3,4) and (4,5) have the same spacing but they have different time interval. use DS1.2x ! fixed

just thinking that the custom whistle (clap sound) as be applied throughout the song because in the rest of the diff we have clapping/whistle at kiai ~01:00 but you didn't put them in [Hard]. ok... added !

[Normal]
01:00:427 (3) - remove whistle here may fit the vocal better ok~ fixed with 01:02:347 whistle
01:39:547 (2) - whistle here fixed with 01:41:467
01:47:707 (2) - finish fixed

overall nice, though the sliders with varying length may cause difficulty to normal players? One pattern, however, think boring ><

KingsAL2 wrote:

Sorry for my late =[

=============General
A Hard song for map.
**All Diff Missed BREAK!** what :3 ?

----Hard

--Spacing
00:23:347 (2,3,4) - I think make the spacing be 1.2 is better. Coz you needed to make sure they know the rhyphm here. ok~ fixed
--Others
00:46:747 (X) - Add a note ? sorry, no change ><
01:21:307 (X) - Add a note ? ^
01:27:547 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Timing is strange ;_; How about a break here? Or a spinner here? Or a Slider(s)? sorry.. I want to use 1/3timing here><!!
02:01:147 (4,5,6,7) - A bit strange to the player ;_; ^ sorry, same ;u;
--Combo problem
00:48:427 (5) - NEw combo (Spacing change) and so remove 00:49:147 (1) ok. but NC is 00:47:707(1)

===========Overall
Nice map but the timing is strange >_< >_<
Good luck and STAR

Lucy-Kaede wrote:

And heres Lucy's mod

Pretty much all suggestions

Easy
01:38:107 (2) - This seems a little awkward after (1) move up to y:124 (x:248)? - (Ofc, following notes would have to be moved) x248 ? why ? I do not know what to do
01:50:587 (2) - Repeating slider, and remove 01:51:547 (3)? sorry, no change

Normal
00:18:427 (1) - Copy 00:20:347 (1) to put here so that its symmetrical? Currently it looks a little off at the repeat. sorry, no change ><;
00:38:587 (2) - Remove repeat and end at 00:39:067 ? ^
00:46:267 (2) - end at 00:46:747? ^
02:02:587 (2) - Use 3 hit circles instead of the reapeating slider to emphasise the lyrics? (Sounds alot better being 1 - 2 - 3 - 4 I think) ok~ but pattern is circle and slider

Thats all I could find for now ^^

R a r e wrote:

ごめんなさい、Star投げたつもりでいましたｗ　Star!!!!!!

Kiddo-Kun wrote:

Hi

General:

• The original name for the source is "Lupin III" change it please. ok~ fixed

Easy:

• 00:47:227 (2) - This slider does not feel very good. I feel as though it breaks the flow. Expand it to the white tick please. ok. fixed
• 01:14:107 (1,1) - This would play better if you added a repeat to these two sliders. It matches the music better that way. ^
• 01:42:907 (1) - I wouldn't do a slider like this on an Easy diff. Players would over jump it from time to time and it looks odd to me. ok... change it !
• 01:40:027 (2) - Same as above, it kind breaks the flow. ^

Normal:

• 00:22:267 (3) - New combo on this note to follow the combo pattern we created fixed
• 00:23:227 (1) - This slider does not fit well. I would map through it. not slider xD this is spinner :3. ok~ change pattern
• 00:34:747 (2) - This slider should end on 00:35:147 since it's following the lyrics. If you're uncomfortable using 1/6th notes then too bad then you can end it on the white tick. uhh.. ok.. change pattern and with 01:57:307 (2,2)
• 00:36:667 (2) - ^ This goes for all sliders like that. ^

Hard:

• 00:39:067 (5,6) - Bring the volume up on these notes. I don't see why you would bring it down since it makes the map feel weird. ok. fixed
• 00:46:387 (7) - If you're following the lyrics move this to the next red tick. If not, here is a picture of a cat. sorry, As for me, a timing is fit now. and cat is very pretty =>x<=
• 01:28:147 (7,8) - This does not really play well. The transition from 1/6 to 1/4 is odd. Do this instead ok. change it
• 01:29:347 (2) - I feel as though this note is fairly unnecessary. Please delete it. I need it vocal lupin the thir~d . I think that do match ><!
• 02:01:147 (4,5,6,7) - I think this stack is rather disappointing. I believe that you can do much more fun stuff with this. o.o... ok. change form
• 02:02:227 (2) - Delete this note. It does not fit the song very well. fixed

Overall:

I like the map. But I see room for improvement. I'd say a couple more mods before this is good to go. Good luck

♪Star♪

Shana Aisaka wrote:

Hi ~ M4M >w<"

Red - Fix it.

[General]
I think the first KIAI time should be in 00:26:107 - 00:41:467 end. :sorry, I do not have problem in this

[Easy]
01:28:987 = spinner end till 01:30:907. :This is intentional. For a beginner, I put space after a spinner.
01:31:387(1) = add finish ok. change finish in all diff

[Normal]
00:46:267(2) = slider end till 00:46:747 . :This is intentional.I think this matches a vocal

ahahaha.. that's all @///@"