-Sekai- wrote:

can i take this part?
02:14:712 ~ 02:43:825
o.o
never mind xD
i just changed my mind~

C R E A M wrote:

내가 노트 찍은 부분외에 나머지 부분은 다 지웠고 초록선 하나도 사용안했으니 노트만 옮기면 됨.
모딩 들어오면 내 의견 묻지 말고 그냥 그때그때 니버가 판단해서 적절히 고쳐줘. 바빠서 내가 신경쓰지를 못할것 같다.

1. add Apricot to tags
2. remove countdown on [Easy] and [Normal]
3. You should add some SB for the collab diffs to show the mapper names, and maybe add a little "beatmap by" for the non-collab diffs (or you can include "Apricot" in the diff name)
4. try to make the diffs end at the same time (If you want to keep [Easy] as is, then at least end the spinner 1/4 earlier and add a finish sound)

1. 03:16:496 - remove this section on all diffs
   ->[Easy]/[Normal]:put 1x speed on the section at 03:16:495 then
   ->[Hard]/[Insane]: you don't need to set speed to 1x directly 1ms after slowing down, since you have a 1x section at the end of the slider already

1. 2 unsnapped objects
2. 00:27:146 (1) - you should remove this, as this is too shortly after the spinner
3. 00:46:673 (1) - make this end 1/2 earlier
4. 01:40:992 (1) - then remove this too
5. 01:49:868 (3) - make this return 1 more time (put finish sound on the new end of slider)

1. 00:35:312 (1) - looks a bit like a flat tire
   maybe make the shape a bit rounder and pay attention to the endpoint, it might be a little too far away from the playfield atm
2. 01:23:596 (1) - remove new combo?
3. I recommend using different patterns on the part between 2nd break and 2nd kiai, it's just getting very repetitive
4. at least flip the copy pasted parts

1. just put 1st offset on 4070ms as in other diffs and delete the green line there, then put S:C2 on offset (sounds basically the same)
2. Bass-chan's part: I would just keep normal hitsounds in the whole part
3. 03:16:495 (1) - start 1/2 earlier

1. 113 unsnapped objects (all objects till 1st bookmark)
2. 01:00:164 (6,7) - either there is a beat missing between them, or they are too close together (compared to the previous stream pattern)
3. 01:11:170 (7) - put a new combo here, it seemed quite long
4. 02:09:750 (1) - move this a bit away and create a stacking effect, so that it gets more visible

Dangaard wrote:

general

1. add Apricot to tags
2. remove countdown on [Easy] and [Normal]
3. You should add some SB for the collab diffs to show the mapper names, and maybe add a little "beatmap by" for the non-collab diffs (or you can include "Apricot" in the diff name)
4. try to make the diffs end at the same time (If you want to keep [Easy] as is, then at least end the spinner 1/4 earlier and add a finish sound)

timing

1. 03:16:496 - remove this section on all diffs
   ->[Easy]/[Normal]:put 1x speed on the section at 03:16:495 then
   ->[Hard]/[Insane]: you don't need to set speed to 1x directly 1ms after slowing down, since you have a 1x section at the end of the slider already

[Easy]

1. 2 unsnapped objects
2. 00:27:146 (1) - you should remove this, as this is too shortly after the spinner
3. 00:46:673 (1) - make this end 1/2 earlier
4. 01:40:992 (1) - then remove this too
5. 01:49:868 (3) - make this return 1 more time (put finish sound on the new end of slider)

[Normal]

1. 00:35:312 (1) - looks a bit like a flat tire
   maybe make the shape a bit rounder and pay attention to the endpoint, it might be a little too far away from the playfield atm
2. 01:23:596 (1) - remove new combo?
3. I recommend using different patterns on the part between 2nd break and 2nd kiai, it's just getting very repetitive
4. at least flip the copy pasted parts

[Hard]

1. just put 1st offset on 4070ms as in other diffs and delete the green line there, then put S:C2 on offset (sounds basically the same)
2. Bass-chan's part: I would just keep normal hitsounds in the whole part
3. 03:16:495 (1) - start 1/2 earlier

[Insane]

1. 113 unsnapped objects (all objects till 1st bookmark)
2. 01:00:164 (6,7) - either there is a beat missing between them, or they are too close together (compared to the previous stream pattern)
3. 01:11:170 (7) - put a new combo here, it seemed quite long
4. 02:09:750 (1) - move this a bit away and create a stacking effect, so that it gets more visible

1. add "Apricot" as tag in [Easy] and [Normal] too
2. remove countdown in [Easy] and [Normal]
3. Maybe it's just me, but I got the feeling that the endspinner is too long (btw: [Hard] still ends earlier than the others diffs)

1. 03:16:495 - double section here, remove 1 of them ([Easy] and [Normal])
2. same for [Insane], delete the 1x speed section

1. 00:46:496 (1) - start should be 1/2 later (as it was before) and the end should be 1/2 earlier

1. maybe add sb for your own diff too for consistency
2. I still recommend flipping some parts horizontally as some parts are recycled 3 times here without any differences

1. 00:03:892 (1,2) - add back the claps on these 2 beats

1. 00:59:809 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - I would still increase the spacing between these 2 streams or add an extra note in between like in the previous stream pattern in this part

blissfulyoshi wrote:

02:37:442 (3,1) - this jump in spacing felt sort of random if we are going to slow down on the next note anyway

1. 03:11:860 - set this section 10ms later
2. set the whole map 5ms earlier
3. consider using a higher OD for Insane

Dangaard wrote:

ok, here is what I got for the end:
03:29:316 offset / 79,500 bpm
03:31:616 / 68,500 bpm
with this you can place notes on full beats

(talked to some other BATs about this)

Edit: you should only use the 2 sections I posted here before for the end.
Furthermore some stuff Cyclone mentioned:

1. 03:11:860 - set this section 10ms later
2. set the whole map 5ms earlier
3. consider using a higher OD for Insane

Nakagawa-Kanon wrote:

Dangaard wrote:

ok, here is what I got for the end:
03:29:316 offset / 79,500 bpm
03:31:616 / 68,500 bpm
with this you can place notes on full beats

(talked to some other BATs about this)

Edit: you should only use the 2 sections I posted here before for the end.
Furthermore some stuff Cyclone mentioned:

1. 03:11:860 - set this section 10ms later
2. set the whole map 5ms earlier
3. consider using a higher OD for Insane

all fixed. but If I use higher OD in Insane, score become 2000milion.

1. 03:11:520 (2) - Here, the end of the slider is unsnapped because of the bpm change, then I think you should consider making it two notes like this because this way you will have the note snapped correctly.

Katsuri wrote:

Normal

1. 03:11:520 (2) - Here, the end of the slider is unsnapped because of the bpm change, then I think you should consider making it two notes like this because this way you will have the note snapped correctly.

• 
  Volume:

1. 00:04:064 ~ 00:09:390 - The volume on this section is a little too high imo... I suggest turning it down a little.
2. 03:32:596 (1) - 5% seems a little too low to place it from the start of the spinner... How about doing a fade out in volume?
   
   Settings:
3. I suggest turning off Letterbox During Breaks to avoid stuff like this, unless it was your intention in the first place.

1. 03:40:370 - Shouldn't the spinner end here, as in the other difficulties?

1. 03:11:520 (2) - This slider's end is unsnapped due to the timing section you added right before it's end:
   
   Maybe you could use two circles to avoid this!

1. There's kind of a... Too big jump in difficulty from Normal to this imo. You should check that spread, but I doubt that you are willing to change anything now...
2. 00:14:715 (1,1,1,1) - Is this new combo spam needed?
3. 00:25:543 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - (^) I don't like this so much... (Plus it doesn't look consistent with the work of the rest of the mappers).
4. 02:10:278 (1) - I hit this early because I thought it would be at 02:10:100 -. Would you move it please? And then you could add notes at 02:10:455 - and 02:10:810 -.
5. 03:05:129 (1) - Unneeded new combo, please remove it.
6. 03:06:283 (1) - (^)

1. I didn't feel that this was so much harder than Hard... That's what I ment about the spread, too :/
2. 02:13:473 (1,1) - I don't know about this... Such a short spinner, and an object right after, might be really hard to hit. Consider changing this.
3. 03:32:486 (5) - Why don't you add a new combo, as in the other difficulties?