shikyu wrote:

Hi, I see your request at #modreq and I like this song , so some suggestions:


[General]
- There're some timing that didn't snapped, fix it maybe fixed?
- At hard & insane diff I found unconsistenty, if you follow music or lyric just follow one of them until the end. it somehow make confuse maybe fixed?

[Easy]
00:25:295 (3) - change finish to whistle, more consistent and sound better fixed.
01:19:107 (2) - better use clap at end of slider (1) than here changed already.
overall good

[Normal]
00:22:437 (3,4) - better make it a slider, since it have some ticks that'll follow drum sound nah,sorry.
00:26:723 (2) - remove whistle at end of slider ^
01:11:584 (4) - add clap at start of slider fixed.
01:18:211 (2) - add clap at start of slider changed already
good

[Hard]
good, just fix something I wrote at general

[Insane]
Make insane doesn't always mean making stream, just don't overdo it. or you can make jump hm..i will suspension that problem.
I just point you some:
00:01:243 (4) - make this slider lenghten until 00:01:598 and delete (5), I heard this slider off-vocal fixed.
00:01:776 (6) - delete this, seem doesn't follow anything nah,sorry

That's all, star

xsrsbsns wrote:

Hi
only suggestions~

[Easy]
01:06:749 (1) - End this spinner at 01:08:898? If you follow, then no need to silence the spinner.　fixed.
01:14:092 (3) - A little weird to me, and will be confusing for beginners.. suggestion: remove 2 repeats? http://puu.sh/9jb9 fixed.
01:16:957 (3) - (Extra nazi) Make shorter by half and add repeat? fixed.
01:20:181 (3) - This note doesn't seem to follow anything, same suggestion.. http://puu.sh/9jbD fixed.
01:26:076 (4) - Start this slider at 01:26:255? nah,sorry

[Normal]
00:21:545 (2) - I think confusing.. Maybe combine (1) and (2) into 1 slider with 5 beats? but it's [Normal], so maybe ok. no change, sorry
01:19:823 (4) - Remove repeat? nah,sorry

[Hard]
AR+1 for easier reading hm..ok,changed.

[Insane]
Cool finishes in the front part, but almost overdo.. hm..ok,i consider the problem. moreover, i will change it, when pointed out to many modder.
00:01:421 (X) - Add a beat? http://puu.sh/9jdr although it was the beat before, it changed by mod. but, i like this beat too.I will consider this problem, since it is right too.

ganbare~! ><

-Kamui- wrote:

VERYYYYYYYYYY~ Good map, i can make a guest diff ~ ?

hot493 wrote:

I love this song and the map is so wonderful.

• Nothing to point out.

1. 00:00:711 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - You shouldn't use the echoed whistles like that. The repeated echo makes an annoying backgroud noise.
2. 00:28:866 (1) - The linear part of the slider should be further away from the previous one. It will look a lot better. =P
3. 00:43:866 (1) - This spinner looks rather short to me... Try expanding it to 00:46:009 - ?

1. Same comment as for Easy for the whistles in the beginning.
2. 00:21:545 (2) - I think this is too confusing for a Normal. First of all, repeat sliders like that are confusing because the number of repeat can't be expected, or read because of the cursor hiding the repeat arrows. But on top of that, the hitburst from 00:21:366 (1) - hides the repeat arrow as well, which makes it 100% impossible to read.
3. 01:26:791 (6) - Silencing notes like this is unrankable. And this note shouldn't be silenced at all since there *is* something in the song for it. Move the timing section 1/2 later, to 01:26:969 - .

1. Same comment as for Easy for the whistles in the beginning.
2. 00:06:213 (3) - This slider's end is silenced when it shouldn't be. There is something in the song for that note...
3. 00:13:509 (5) - This slider breaks the comboing. The new combo should be on its sliderend, but it's on the next note, which makes the pattern feel weird, especially the jump. Here's the timeline I suggest: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/192375 Also if you want to add jumps, having a jump 00:13:509 (5,6) - here feels extremely weird to me. I'd see the jumps here instead: 00:12:616 (2,3) - 00:13:330 (4,5) - 00:14:045 (6,7) - that way the jump on 00:14:402 (8,9) - will feel less sudden =o
4. 00:22:437 (1,2) - If you're adding a jump here, you should add one on 00:22:973 (2,3) - for consistency
5. 00:23:866 (1) - Starting here and until 00:40:652 (1) - , I don't understand the comboing. To be honest, it looks inconsistent to me. I'm not sure it follows a given pattern or a few given rules. If you want, here are the new combos I suggest. I strongly recommend you to follow either all either none of them, or the comboing will be inconsistent.
   
   • 00:23:866 -
     00:26:723 -
     00:29:580 -
     00:32:437 -
     00:36:723 - you'll have to change the repeat slider into slider+circle if you want to add this one.
     00:38:152 - you'll have to change the repeat slider into slider+circle if you want to add this one.
6. 00:46:723 (1,2,3) - Why is this spaced using 1.5x and 00:47:616 (3,4,5,6) - this using 1.00x ? It looks quite bad because it's inconsistent. I don't really understand why there would be jumps on the first three either.
7. 00:48:152 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - That's a bit too much 1/2 for that part imo... The rhythm is pretty nice at this point, try using it !
8. 01:03:525 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - I liked this pattern a lot ! It goes extremely well with the song and plays amazing. I'd just recommend to move 01:06:749 (2) - up so 01:06:390 (1,2) - looks like 01:03:525 (1,2) - . It will look and play even better imo. The pattern is still great !
9. 01:08:898 (1) - The normal-hitnormal is too loud here. I'd recommend to go for soft-hitnormal with a crescendo instead.
   01:26:791 (4) - Silencing notes like this is unrankable. And this note shouldn't be silenced at all since there *is* something in the song for it. Move the timing section 1/2 later, to 01:26:969 - .[/b]

1. Same comment as in Easy for the whistles in the beginning.
2. The two following notes are silenced and shouldn't be - see the other diffs for the reasons: 00:06:213 (5) - sliderend and 01:26:791 (7) -

Odaril wrote:

hello~
request taken from the *AT modding queue.

Please reply to this post saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why.
Also, if you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game.

General

• Nothing to point out.

Easy

1. 00:00:711 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - You shouldn't use the echoed whistles like that. The repeated echo makes an annoying backgroud noise.
2. 00:28:866 (1) - The linear part of the slider should be further away from the previous one. It will look a lot better. =P
3. 00:43:866 (1) - This spinner looks rather short to me... Try expanding it to 00:46:009 - ?

Normal

1. Same comment as for Easy for the whistles in the beginning.
2. 00:21:545 (2) - I think this is too confusing for a Normal. First of all, repeat sliders like that are confusing because the number of repeat can't be expected, or read because of the cursor hiding the repeat arrows. But on top of that, the hitburst from 00:21:366 (1) - hides the repeat arrow as well, which makes it 100% impossible to read.
3. 01:26:791 (6) - Silencing notes like this is unrankable. And this note shouldn't be silenced at all since there *is* something in the song for it. Move the timing section 1/2 later, to 01:26:969 - .

Hard

1. Same comment as for Easy for the whistles in the beginning.
2. 00:06:213 (3) - This slider's end is silenced when it shouldn't be. There is something in the song for that note...
3. 00:13:509 (5) - This slider breaks the comboing. The new combo should be on its sliderend, but it's on the next note, which makes the pattern feel weird, especially the jump. Here's the timeline I suggest: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/192375 Also if you want to add jumps, having a jump 00:13:509 (5,6) - here feels extremely weird to me. I'd see the jumps here instead: 00:12:616 (2,3) - 00:13:330 (4,5) - 00:14:045 (6,7) - that way the jump on 00:14:402 (8,9) - will feel less sudden =o
4. 00:22:437 (1,2) - If you're adding a jump here, you should add one on 00:22:973 (2,3) - for consistency
5. 00:23:866 (1) - Starting here and until 00:40:652 (1) - , I don't understand the comboing. To be honest, it looks inconsistent to me. I'm not sure it follows a given pattern or a few given rules. If you want, here are the new combos I suggest. I strongly recommend you to follow either all either none of them, or the comboing will be inconsistent.
   
   • 00:23:866 -
     00:26:723 -
     00:29:580 -
     00:32:437 -
     00:36:723 - you'll have to change the repeat slider into slider+circle if you want to add this one.
     00:38:152 - you'll have to change the repeat slider into slider+circle if you want to add this one.
6. 00:46:723 (1,2,3) - Why is this spaced using 1.5x and 00:47:616 (3,4,5,6) - this using 1.00x ? It looks quite bad because it's inconsistent. I don't really understand why there would be jumps on the first three either.
7. 00:48:152 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - That's a bit too much 1/2 for that part imo... The rhythm is pretty nice at this point, try using it !
8. 01:03:525 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - I liked this pattern a lot ! It goes extremely well with the song and plays amazing. I'd just recommend to move 01:06:749 (2) - up so 01:06:390 (1,2) - looks like 01:03:525 (1,2) - . It will look and play even better imo. The pattern is still great !
9. 01:08:898 (1) - The normal-hitnormal is too loud here. I'd recommend to go for soft-hitnormal with a crescendo instead.hmm..sorry, no change.because it can think that it suits me.
   01:26:791 (4) - Silencing notes like this is unrankable. And this note shouldn't be silenced at all since there *is* something in the song for it. Move the timing section 1/2 later, to 01:26:969 - .[/b]

Insane

1. Same comment as in Easy for the whistles in the beginning.
2. The two following notes are silenced and shouldn't be - see the other diffs for the reasons: 00:06:213 (5) - sliderend and 01:26:791 (7) -

I didn't really like the Insane... Too many jumps and 1/4 when I think they don't fit. But it has nothing really wrong - part from the silenced notes.
i'm very sad:(
however,they are my mapping style...

Breeze wrote:

Red : Unrankable/error staff
Blue : Important things that I think you'd better fix
Black : Just suggestions

General

1. I feel you used too many custom soft-hitwhistle1, that sounds kinda chaotic i agree with you.changed.

Timing

1. I don't agree with the timing, I've got a timing
   BPM/Offset
   169/-354
   167.9/12430
   167.7/58160
   Try this one
   change timing.

Easy

1. 01:15:346 (1) - Use both custom clap and finish here sounds bad :<, I'd suggest you remove clap fixed.
2. 01:21:077 (2) - ^ fixed.

Normal

1. 01:15:346 (1) - Same as Easy fixed.
2. 01:21:077 (2) - ^ fixed.

Hard

1. 01:12:480 - Ah, yea, finish and clap issue i remove finish.
2. 01:15:346 (3) - ^ i remove clap.

Other than timing, rest looked fine

Breeze wrote:

No, the first timing section I post was -354 offset :<, not 354
And since you changed timing, there are many timing sections didn't right on tick, if they are early than the note/slider it suppose to change at first, then it's fine. Otherwise later than it is no no
Such as [Insane]
00:13:700 - Does this one suppose to effect 00:13:680 (4)? If so, it should snap at 00:13:680
00:13:790 - ^, should snap at 00:13:790
And many stuff like this, please check your timing section

Breeze wrote:

OK, bubbled

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Hard]

00:14:038 (6) - New combo due to jump.

Fix that tiny thing and I'll rank!

osuplayer111 wrote:

Good job.

Ranked~

hot493 wrote:

:o I have just played it and then unrank。

• offset 01034 || BPM 168,700 It is perfectly fine to have a note BEFORE the offset. The song technically starts at 1034ms, 00:00:679 (1) - this note being an anacrouse.
  offset 11411 || BPM 169,000
  offset 12440 || BPM 168,500
  offset 21366 || BPM 168,500
  offset 23875 || BPM 168,500
  offset 25670 || BPM 168,500
  offset 31370 || BPM 167,900
  offset 38860 || BPM 167,800
  offset 46041 || BPM 167,800
  offset 58160 || BPM 167,800
  offset 68902 || BPM 169,000
  offset 69647 || BPM 167,900

Agnes wrote:

Alright, did an emergancy bubble-check. Didn't find much aside from...

[Insane]
00:38:874 (5) - Just an unsnapped note. Resnap it.

...And it should be fine for a bubble.

1. 00:31:370 (5) - You're missing a finish at the start of the slider.
2. 00:34:228 (1) - ^

lolcubes wrote:

[Hard]

1. 00:31:370 (5) - You're missing a finish at the start of the slider.
2. 00:34:228 (1) - ^

Fix those and I (re)rank.