Heatherfield wrote:

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00:34:858 (7) - new combo? 改了

1. Lead in不用統一把...诶..不管了
2. 結束點也不統一一下嗎? >_>
3. 其實與其這樣特意的去用5%來降低spinner音量還不如之前用靜音轉圈.

1. 01:48:704 – Kiai完結的部分沒snap好,其實就差了1ms..

1. 01:09:474 (2,1) - 我始終都不建議在Easy裏面放1/2 click,這是我以前問了很多新手知道的,他們對1/2 click會產生恐懼..
2. 01:28:320 (1) - 我曾經試過spinner在Easy離note太近而被吐糟,建議移到01:28:448 –
3. 01:48:576 (1) - ^同上 還有這個spinner感覺略長了,有些新手轉得太久會很覺的悶.
4. 01:59:987 (1,2) – 我去…這個pattern真的大丈夫?對新手而言,疊的本身已經不好讀,而且還是要1/2 click.所以….

1. 00:10:243 (1) - 加finish?剛好這裏有一個accent point,加了效果應該不錯.
2. 01:37:422 (3) – 開頭加whistle?感覺好聽好多

1. 01:48:704 – Kiai完結的部分沒snap好,其實就差了1ms..

1. 00:25:884 (6,7) – 個人覺得把這2個notes分開會比較舒服,或者不和(5)- 疊..
2. 00:39:987 (2,3,1) – nazi一下o.o 只是針對音樂而提出的節奏意見,這裡用3/4會比較好?我看到你前面用了3/4比較多
3. 01:11:781 (5) – 這裏new combo或者前名的(4)- new combo?
4. 01:30:243 (1) -這個slider我修了一下..看合適不,其實就微調了一下= =後面的Spacing可能也要調整一下,如果改的話.
   

    372,236,90243,6,0,B|296:264|296:156|200:192,1,180,4|2

1. 01:14:602 (2) – 加clap 液 \:D/

1. 00:24:858 (x) – I’m quite worry about the break because other diff in this mapset didn’t have any kind of long break like this,I highly suggest to fix this.
2. 00:49:217 (1) – This slider is not moe >//< it was not appropriate for you,how about try this? \:D/
   
   Yo

   

   258,193,49217,6,0,B|337:193|326:251|405:250,1,160,4|0

3. 01:40:499 (5) – I would suggest to put a new combo here due to the vocal have started here again.

1. 01:18:961 (3) – How about add a whistle here?At the middle of the slider.
2. 01:37:422 (5) – Add a finish here?Because of the sudden accent point
3. 01:37:935 (6) – And add a whistle here?It just fit the music better or you can place this with a clap sound.

1. 其實我一直覺得這種BPM AR7就已經很足夠了 .__.

1. 01:48:704 – Kiai完結的部分沒snap好,其實就差了1ms..

1. 00:48:448 (4) – 這個(4)-我建議和(2)- 平衡或者拉開一點和(5)- 對稱.
2. 01:05:115 (1,2,3) – 真的沒問題? o.o 感覺突然放開間距不太好…(這是殺初見的排版阿…)
3. 01:35:115 (3) – 這個是特意的還是誤操作?感覺應該這slider應該是停在01:35:628 – 的阿..停在藍線有違和感呢.

1. 01:36:397 (1) – 順帶也加上Finish?