1. 00:26:832 (1) - 沒對到~ (從左數過來第2個小白點向上拉2格) 這樣? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/184324
   
2. 00:29:832 (1) - 刪掉 轉盤在00:30:063開始

1. 00:29:832 (1) - 刪掉 轉盤在00:30:063開始

1. 00:14:140 - 加個Note
   
2. 00:29:832 (1) - 刪掉改Note 轉盤在00:30:063開始
   
3. 01:12:524 (1,2,3,4) - 換種排法吧... 試試這樣? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/184311 (看得清楚嗎lol?)

1. 00:20:140 (4,5,6) - 不太好看
   
2. 00:29:832 (1) - 刪掉改Note 轉盤在00:30:063開始
   
3. 00:31:909 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 音量漸增落差可以大一點(20 50 80?)
   
4. 01:12:524 (1,2,3) - 換種排法>o< 這樣? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/184343
   
5. 01:19:447 (4) - 刪掉~ 然後在["01:19:448" "01:19:678" "01:19:909" "01:20:140" "01:20:371"] - 各加Note

• 00:31:909 (1) - 为啥不缩短一格跟着节奏呢 怕太难吗？
  00:51:986 (5) - 间距
  00:56:601 add a note?
  00:16:217 (3,5) - 调换顺序也许好点吗？
  01:06:294 (3,5) - ^

12BARRY21 wrote:

Request from my mod queue~

[Easy]

1. 00:26:832 (1) - 沒對到~ (從左數過來第2個小白點向上拉2格) 這樣? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/184324 OK
   
2. 00:29:832 (1) - 刪掉 轉盤在00:30:063開始

OK

[Normal]

1. 00:29:832 (1) - 刪掉 轉盤在00:30:063開始

OK

[Hard]

1. 00:14:140 - 加個Note N
   
2. 00:29:832 (1) - 刪掉改Note 轉盤在00:30:063開始N
   
3. 01:12:524 (1,2,3,4) - 換種排法吧... 試試這樣? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/184311 (看得清楚嗎lol?)

OK

[Insane]

1. 00:20:140 (4,5,6) - 不太好看 N
   
2. 00:29:832 (1) - 刪掉改Note 轉盤在00:30:063開始 N
   
3. 00:31:909 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 音量漸增落差可以大一點(20 50 80?) N
   
4. 01:12:524 (1,2,3) - 換種排法>o< 這樣? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/184343 N
   
5. 01:19:447 (4) - 刪掉~ 然後在["01:19:448" "01:19:678" "01:19:909" "01:20:140" "01:20:371"] - 各加Note

N

GOOD Map!! ~Star~
加油阿!!

Anshi wrote:

General

要试着将easy和normal还有hard的图的stack leniency改为最小值吗？ 0 0 会好看点 K



Normal

• 00:31:909 (1) - 为啥不缩短一格跟着节奏呢 怕太难吗？ 感觉必要不大
  00:51:986 (5) - 间距 好像没问题
  00:56:601 add a note? 加了好像有点难
  00:16:217 (3,5) - 调换顺序也许好点吗？ 好像没问题
  01:06:294 (3,5) - ^

^


其他难度都还不错...好得我不想改了...good luck

Leorda wrote:

Hello there

General
* I think this map is full of kiai time, please remove 1st kiai time K
* No tags? don't think any word should be in tag

Easy
00:20:832 (3) - The tail slider is touch the HP Bar, and it's included to new guidelines (not too important) K
00:26:832 (1) - Move 2nd sliderpoint to X:504 and Y:296. So it makes a perfect blanket combo(Nazi) K
00:31:909 (1) - This notes are too far from spinner. The beginner is difficult to reach this when the spinner is end. Try make it closer to spinnerK
00:57:627 (T) - Unsnapped inherited section, snap itK

Normal
00:28:678 (4) - The tail slider is touch the HP Bar, and it's included to new guidelines (not too important) K
00:31:909 (1) - You using short slider with 3 repeating slider, and it makes beginners are tough to tell when it's end of sliderfollow music
00:41:143 (T) - Unsnapped inherited section, snap it K
00:57:527 (T) - ^K
00:57:627 (T) - ^K

Hard
* 2nd kiai should end at 01:25:447, like other diff

00:14:140 (x) - Add note here for following vocal? K
00:41:143 (T) - Unsnapped inherited section, snap itK
00:57:527 (T) - ^K
00:57:627 (T) - ^K
01:25:447 (1) - New combo for avoiding some spinner bug K

Insane
00:32:831 (1) - Ugh, sudden slow slider.... N
00:41:142 (T) - Unsnapped inherited section, snap itK
00:48:063 (5) - Unsnapped tail slider K
00:57:626 (T) - Unsnapped inherited section, snap it K
01:25:447 (1) - New combo for avoiding some spinner bug K

Bye niiii

phoon wrote:

Hi ~ No_Gu

From yuineee & phoon's modding queue

It is a proposal altogether :3

Easy
>>00:09:294 (x) - remove greenline

Normal
fine!

Hard
>>00:28:909 (2) - It is a proposal

SPOILER

>>01:22:477 (2) - remove whistle
>>01:22:909 (2) - ^

Insane
HP Drain -1 ? Nope
>>00:16:909 (1) - remove NC
>>00:26:140 (1) - ^
>>00:26:371 (3) - add NC

good map! star!

DragonSparta wrote:

Hello~
MOD4MOD

Easy
00:16:678 (3) - Two grid up (Level 4) to equal the spacing K
01:11:601 (2,3) - Make this a smooth arc K

Normal
01:04:844 (2,3) - Overlapped with previous combo (5). That's just ugly No offense :3 lazy to change

Hard
00:01:217 (3,4,5) - Make this line straight ? K
00:03:294 (3) - This overlaps with other notes.N
00:38:832 (5) - ^^
01:22:448 (2) - Make this a mirror of (1)K

Insane
00:20:147 (4,5,6) - Kinda near to (3) :/ But I suppose it's okayK
__________________________________________________________
That's all
Overall, the diffs are smooth and easy

Nymph wrote:

Hi Nymph here and request from my queue.

General:
KIAI有点不同 easy normal hard3个难度的最后一个kiai结束的线差了1ms..手动snap一下 K
easy normal hard的重叠leniency设置非常低 有什么特殊理由么 没有的话请设置成默认 看着顺眼


Easy:
Hitsound
00:03:755 (5) - ……这hitsound听起来超诡异 感觉自己加的clap和MP3本身的鼓音没重合起来…………听起来跟爆音了似的应该是offset的问题。不太会测
00:05:601 (2) - ^……这也是 我不知道你有这感觉没有 我这听起来就像2个音 这种问题不再提啦^


Normal:
Beatmap design/suggestion
00:41:140 (1) - 往右一格？很nazi K

Hitsound
01:25:447 (1) - 这转盘没静音成功 虽然结尾绿线感觉也没问题但是就是没成功...还能听到声音 我手工snap了一下结尾那个线 结果就好了……可能是BUG或者什么嗎 反正手工snap一下结尾的绿线把 10%应该是能听到点声


Hard:
Hitsound
01:12:986 (2) - 感觉2个clap用在这也不错（我这纯没事找事了 无视我吧 K


Insane:
Issues
00:31:909 (1) - 加newcombo. 这是个BUG.


大概就这么多了 加油吧

176,232,1448,2,0,B|116:200|132:136|132:136,1,90,2|0

wmfchris wrote:

[General]
tag anime or something else? K
N:C2 沒用 因為沒N:C2的custom hitsound改了N:C1

[Insane]
00:01:448 (5) - 稍為改一下slider方向會把(2)包的更好

176,232,1448,2,0,B|116:200|132:136|132:136,1,90,2|0

00:03:525 (4,5,6) - [Nazi] down 1 grid lv4K
00:08:371 (2) - [Nazi] left 1 grid lv4K
01:12:525 (1,2,3) - (3)比(2)平會有點怪 可以這樣放 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/189011K
01:25:217 (3) - left 3 grids lv4K

很好 o.o

[Hard]
00:06:755 (5) - left 1 grid lv4 K
00:16:101 (2) - down 1 grid lv4, 要不然(2) (4)不在同一水平上很難K
00:49:678 (4,6) - (4) down 1 grid, (6) left 2 grids lv4K

[Normal]
.____.

sounding的手法很標準 實在沒有地方需要大改 於是check了spacing

• 
  Stack Leniency is 0.2 except Insane?
  0.7 is enough for all diffs I think.

• 
  Nothing to point out.

• 
  Oh nice diff.

1. 00:20:601 (4) - Move it to x:356, y:72. The flow becomes better and the formation looks better for me after fix.
2. 00:40:909 (8,9) - Use custom1-clap instead of whistle. Whistle is a bit noisy for me.
3. 00:58:448 (x) - Add a note? (Stack with (1)?)
4. 01:06:294 (3) - It's better to avoid stacking with (1).
5. 01:24:294 (x) - Add a note? Same reason as above.

1. 00:09:755 (1) - Move it to x:420, y:184? That looks better because current one touchs on (4).
2. 00:43:448 (2) - How about Ctrl + R? I think the flow will become better.
3. 00:58:448 (x) - Add a note? (Stack with (1)?)
4. 01:22:563 (2,3) - Yup, current 2-beats is fine. But imo it's better for playing to put a note at 01:22:448.
5. 01:24:294 (x) - Add a note? Same reason as above.

Suzully wrote:

Yes, here is my mod.

[General]

• 
  Stack Leniency is 0.2 except Insane?
  0.7 is enough for all diffs I think.

K

[Easy]

• 
  Nothing to point out.

[Normal]

• 
  Oh nice diff.

[Hard]

1. 00:20:601 (4) - Move it to x:356, y:72. The flow becomes better and the formation looks better for me after fix.N
2. 00:40:909 (8,9) - Use custom1-clap instead of whistle. Whistle is a bit noisy for me.Remove
3. 00:58:448 (x) - Add a note? (Stack with (1)?)I don't feel like following vocal here
4. 01:06:294 (3) - It's better to avoid stacking with (1).K
5. 01:24:294 (x) - Add a note? Same reason as above.

same as above

[Insane]

1. 00:09:755 (1) - Move it to x:420, y:184? That looks better because current one touchs on (4).K
2. 00:43:448 (2) - How about Ctrl + R? I think the flow will become better.K
3. 00:58:448 (x) - Add a note? (Stack with (1)?)N
4. 01:22:563 (2,3) - Yup, current 2-beats is fine. But imo it's better for playing to put a note at 01:22:448.K
5. 01:24:294 (x) - Add a note? Same reason as above.

[color=#004000]same as hardlor]

Now, this map got 8 stars in total.
You can ask MAT to mod

wcx19911123 wrote:

from my queue

[General]
TV Size的话，不弄个视频0.0?这视频是不是开头少了。。 前面间奏都是动画里面的。。每集都不一样0 0 要是被挑的话就再说吧。
tag多写点东西吧，比如动画角色名啊，CV名啊，动画制作公司啊，还有OP，opening（也可能是ED..）之类的词OP无误- -但是真心感觉角色名啥的没啥关系
我感觉kiai的clap和副歌的clap是不是反过来了。。没懂- -

[Skin]
我感觉hitcircle.png最好是用灰度图片。。自带彩色的话，跟combo color混在一起真心不好看 这个什么时候再去问问luka吧。。

[Easy]
AR+1 K
00:30:063 (1,1) - 这个有点远了。。 中心了。。
01:09:755 (4,1) - 这两个可以弄成包围啊，像这样01:10:217 (1,2) K

[Normal]
OD+1K
00:30:063 (1,1) - spinner后面别跳啊。。K

[Hard]
HD+1K
OD-1K
00:29:832 (1) - 我感觉这里换成circle，然后spinner 00:30:063开始好点k
00:58:678 (1,2,3) - 这里的spacing可以稍微大一点点，不然00:59:371 (3,1)的跳就感觉太突然了1.5
01:07:678 (2,3) - 这里可以包围更好点K
01:13:448 (3,4,1) - nice flowThx

[Insane]
00:20:140 (4,5,6) - 这里还是弄直点吧，看着很诡异。。K
00:29:832 (1) - 同HardK

好图

Strawberry wrote:

can't find out anything
u no~ strawberry star

1. Song Setup - tags - remove anime (If you ranked for entry into the genre ) ,op (Do not hit the two-words search )

1. 00:30:063 (1) - spinner start 00:29:832 ( Beginning of vocal follow )
2. 00:51:755 (2) - grid. x204,y256
3. 00:54:986 (1) - remove NC and 00:55:909 - add NC

1. 00:20:140 (2,3) - spacing too far a little (1.32x,1.26x) 2:x312,y260 x276,y196
2. 00:30:063 (1) - same easy
3. 00:42:063 (2,3,4) - make a clean triangle . 00:42:294 (3) - x76,y256
4. 00:52:217 (1) - grid x320,y312
5. 01:04:447 (2,3,4) - grid. 2:x104,y320 3:x156,y268 4:x232,y268
6. 01:21:755 (1) - one grid down. x312,y68

1. 00:20:140 (2) - spacing (1.15x) use DS1.0x is better ?
2. 00:44:832 (1) - add NC ?
3. 01:05:140 (7) - add NC and 01:05:601 - remove NC
4. 01:18:063 (1) - stack with 01:17:140 (8) - beginning slider is better ? (x276,y184)

1. 00:03:525 (4,5,6) - I think that I do not match BGM. try this http://puu.sh/aD7W
2. 01:05:140 (7) - one grid down. x404,y300
3. 01:05:140 (7) - add NC and 01:05:601 - remove NC

• 50P

1. 这种NC设置风格大丈夫？（新图我很少看，NC设置都比较传统向）
2. 下面举例
3. 00:07:217 (4,5,6,7,1) -
4. 00:16:909 (6,7,1) -
5. 00:26:140 (7,8,1) -
6. 还有很多地方，我不知道这样NC是否会被人说
7. 怎么这歌副歌那么长，kiai实际应该要用2/3…… 哎哟，但是rules又不行
8. 谱面上完成度很高，所以废话就不多说了

• hard

1. 上面提到过的NC问题
2. 00:07:678 (7,8,1) - 觉得这里还是要NC，囧
3. 00:18:755 (4,5,1) -
4. 不一一列举了
5. 谱面上也没什么好说的了

• normal

1. 没什么废话

• easy

1. ^

Suzully wrote:

You can ask MAT to mod

Suzully wrote:

Suzully wrote:

You can ask MAT to mod

Then I came back to recheck myself because I think this map is quite good enough to be ranked

...though I have checked again, everything looks fine and the mapset became much better!
that means...

Bubbled!

1. As your map have a skin you should be force the sliderborder if you want to preserve the skin, to make this only add this: SliderBorder : 255,255,255 after the combocolours in the .osu file http://puu.sh/cJHH (in all diffs sure)
2. I think in "anime" in the tags are needless because in the browser are a specifically section to search anime's maps, also "OP" is too short to put in the tags, you try to search OP in the browser? the result: http://puu.sh/cJJZ.

1. 00:28:217 (2) - Missing finish at the start? I think in this note with finish sound good.
2. 00:56:371 (2) - Try some like this if you wanna follow more the voice and track http://puu.sh/cJRZ
3. 01:22:217 - Same as 00:56:371 (2), in this case you should remove 1 and 2 put the slider here and a beat in 01:21:755
4. These last suggestion you can use them in Normal and the first in all diffs.

1. 00:40:909 (6) - Hmm this is the only overlap beat in the diff, now looks like http://puu.sh/cJYM, the previous slider creates an effect where this beat looks a bit hidden and 00:39:294 (4) pile up on (6), try to make 4 more curly like this http://puu.sh/cK1a to avoid the overlap and hidden note. This is unique in its class thence I have mentioned.

1. 00:45:755 (5) - Uhmm a bit weird jump, the before spacing is different and this jump is a bit sudden try to put new combo here and after remove the nc of 00:46:678 (1), furthermore in 00:45:755 the track change a little.
2. 00:58:448 - Put a note here stacked in 00:58:678 (1) so, you follow more the voice of the music. (I think in this sound nice 8)
3. 01:05:601 (1) - Remove new combo here please, is needless, I can't found the motive for this.
4. 01:24:294 - Same as 00:58:448

1. 00:58:448 - Same as Hard
2. 01:15:986 (5) - Begin the new combo here and don't in 01:16:217 (1), the jumpy time begin here also the voice change.
3. 01:22:909 (1) - Not in too necessary a new combo here, but ok anyway.
4. 01:24:294 - Again, same as Hard.

Kenezz wrote:

Heey o/
Sweet Song *w*
Kenezz's Bakamod

SPOILER

General

1. As your map have a skin you should be force the sliderborder if you want to preserve the skin, to make this only add this: SliderBorder : 255,255,255 after the combocolours in the .osu file http://puu.sh/cJHH (in all diffs sure)
2. I think in "anime" in the tags are needless because in the browser are a specifically section to search anime's maps, also "OP" is too short to put in the tags, you try to search OP in the browser? the result: http://puu.sh/cJJZ.

Easy

1. 00:28:217 (2) - Missing finish at the start? I think in this note with finish sound good. ._.I think it'll be a little noisy
2. 00:56:371 (2) - Try some like this if you wanna follow more the voice and track http://puu.sh/cJRZ no
3. 01:22:217 - Same as 00:56:371 (2), in this case you should remove 1 and 2 put the slider here and a beat in 01:21:755 ^
4. These last suggestion you can use them in Normal and the first in all diffs.no

Normal

1. 00:40:909 (6) - Hmm this is the only overlap beat in the diff, now looks like http://puu.sh/cJYM, the previous slider creates an effect where this beat looks a bit hidden and 00:39:294 (4) pile up on (6), try to make 4 more curly like this http://puu.sh/cK1a to avoid the overlap and hidden note. This is unique in its class thence I have mentioned.

Hard

1. 00:45:755 (5) - Uhmm a bit weird jump, the before spacing is different and this jump is a bit sudden try to put new combo here and after remove the nc of 00:46:678 (1), furthermore in 00:45:755 the track change a little.no
2. 00:58:448 - Put a note here stacked in 00:58:678 (1) so, you follow more the voice of the music. (I think in this sound nice 8)don't want to follow the voice
3. 01:05:601 (1) - Remove new combo here please, is needless, I can't found the motive for this.
4. 01:24:294 - Same as 00:58:448

same

50P

1. 00:58:448 - Same as Hardsame
2. 01:15:986 (5) - Begin the new combo here and don't in 01:16:217 (1), the jumpy time begin here also the voice change.My combo set follows instrument
3. 01:22:909 (1) - Not in too necessary a new combo here, but ok anyway..I didn't use NC here;-;
4. 01:24:294 - Again, same as Hard.same

It's All.
If you agree in any point fix it and when you submited, call me to rebbubble.
PS: not is necessary a red point in the lineal slider :3

Garven wrote:

Did some minor touch ups like adjusting for some overlaps and changed a spinner in Easy/Normal. Also changed .5x sliders to .75x to avoid tick rate 2 use.

Ranked!